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K-san - Akariakariakariakariakariakariakariakari Akkari~n [T

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xtrem3x
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xtrem3x
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martes, 08 de noviembre de 2016 at 07:43:27 a.m.

Artist: K-san
Title: Akariakariakariakariakariakariakariakari Akkari~n
Source: ゆるゆり
Tags: niconico douga Akaza Akari Yuruyuri Anime Akari-Pyon Presence Girl Bun Bullet -Sh1n1-
BPM: 126
Filesize: 1716kb
Play Time: 00:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (1.7 stars, 110 notes)
  2. Innerin~! (4.49 stars, 302 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.14 stars, 63 notes)
  4. Oni (2.96 stars, 230 notes)
  5. Sh1n1's Muzukashii (2.51 stars, 172 notes)
Download: K-san - Akariakariakariakariakariakariakariakari Akkari~n
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
1st Taiko Mapset by me

Muzukashii by -Sh1n1-

modders
-Sh1n1- (CTB (RIP)
Jerry (Taiko)
Genocide -> Patzar (Taiko)
alienflybot (CTB - RIP)
----
Hanjamon
Vulkin
Jonawaga
Volta
MuffetRock (Ozzy)
Volta

Ranked -w- ... and now ... *Searching other map to rank*
Last edited by xtrem3x , edited 39 times in total.
-Sh1n1-
3,404 posts
Joined September 2012
-Sh1n1-
GD
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: AkariAkariAkariAkariAkariAkariAkariAkari-Akkariiin.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 17559
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:AkariAkariAkariAkariAkariAkariAkariAkari-Akkariiin
TitleUnicode:AkariAkariAkariAkariAkariAkariAkariAkari-Akkariiin
Artist:K San
ArtistUnicode:K San
Creator:xtrem3x
Version:Sh1n1's Muzurin~!
Source:Yuru Yuri
Tags:Akaza Akari Yuruyuri Anime Akari-Pyon Presence Girl Bun Bullet
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:205821

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:1.40000000596046
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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Video,0,"AkariAkariAkariAkariAkariAkariAkariAkari-Akkariiin.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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xD My ID es -Sh1n1- no -Sn1n1- xDD
Mistake
por cierto cambiale el nombre porque yo le habia puesto muzurin (y) mañana te posteo el mod de ctb >.<
xtrem3x
1,786 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
xtrem3x
no me habia fijado en esa cosa por que lo escribi de rapido .... chale no se notan las "n" y las "h" ......
-Sh1n1-
3,404 posts
Joined September 2012
-Sh1n1-
Hi~~

[General]

  1. El orden de las dificultades es Cup-Salad-Platter-Rain
  2. La diff "Akarin~!" tiene al final un "uninherited point" : 00:47:083 - pero las demas diffs no asi que corrige eso
  3. Uncheck Widescreen Support y Letterbox during breaks
  4. Manten el "Circle Size" de platter a más en 4, porque ya no se usa lo de los circulos pequeños y es feo cuando juegas.
  5. Usa Soft y en el volumen le iría bien un 70%
  6. Trata de ser mas consistente en las diffs y usa más sliders.
  7. No se tú, pero yo creo que el kiai empieza en 00:17:559 - y termina en 00:32:321 -
[Cup-irin~!]

  1. HP -> 3 / CS -> 3 / AR -> 5 / OD -> 4 ( <- Si cambias lo anterior: "Slider velocity" -> 1.20 y "Slider Tick Rate" -> 2 )
  2. 00:17:083 (6,1) - muy dificil para una diff cup, trata de acercarlos un poco más.
  3. desde aquí 00:20:416 - hasta 00:21:131 - hay un sonido muy peculiar que no estas usando y que se vería bien so pones dos sliders
    desde 00:20:416 - hasta 00:20:655 - y otro desde 00:20:893 - hasta 00:21:131 -
  4. trata de poner mas ordenado tus hits, porque hay partes donde tienen el mismo sonido pero caen con diferente espacio y como
    te dije antes usa mas sliders, si te sirve de algo mira otros mapas y fijate como han mapeado para que tengas una idea.
  5. 00:16:131 (4,5,6) - trata de ponerlos como en la imagen
  6. 00:24:226 (2,3) - ^
  7. 00:28:988 (1) - cuadra mejor este slider (selecciona el slider -> Ctrl+Shift+R -> Origin-Selection Centre -> -6 luego le das Ctrl+G y lo volteas con Ctrl+H
    luego 00:28:036 (2,3,1) - lo dejas igual que la imagen
  8. 00:45:178 (6,7,8) - si lo pones algo así?
  9. 00:47:083 (1) - este spinner es muy cortito reemplazalo por dos hits en 1/1
  10. 00:08:036 - nuevo combo
  11. 00:38:512 - ^
  12. 00:40:416 - ^
  13. 00:46:131 - ^
[Saladin~!]

  1. HP -> 4 / CS -> 3 / AR -> 6 / OD -> 6 ( <- Si cambias lo anterior: "Slider velocity" -> 1.40 y "Slider Tick Rate" -> 2 )
  2. 00:04:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - no tiene ritmo y hasta cuando lo juegas es medio raro.
  3. 00:28:036 (24,25,26,27,28) - unrankeable, arregla es parte please
  4. 00:13:393 (8) - innesesario borralo
  5. 00:17:559 - nuevo combo
  6. 00:21:369 - ^
  7. 00:25:178 - ^
  8. 00:28:988 - ^
  9. 00:47:083 (1) - ese spin esta feo, te aconsejo que los cambies por hits.
[Platterin~!]

  1. Sobre todo en esta diff no eh visto casi nada de sliders ._. tienes que ser consistente.
  2. HP -> 6 / CS -> 4 / AR -> 8 / OD -> 8 ( <- Si cambias lo anterior: "Slider velocity" -> 1.80 y "Slider Tick Rate" -> 2 )
  3. 00:04:464 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - no tiene ritmo trata de hacerlo como en el principio: 00:02:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
  4. 00:10:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - fuera de ritmo ^, cuando los vayas a volver a colocar asegurate de que caigan bien, testea a cada rato.
  5. 00:32:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - esta parte la has hecho bien porque aca 00:34:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - lo haces tan fuera de ritmo u.u
  6. 00:40:893 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ :'(
  7. 00:47:083 (1) - ya sabes lo que pienso de este spinner :v
Bueno suerte en todo :3 y dejame ver si te hago una rain *-*/
xtrem3x
1,786 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
xtrem3x
All diffs modified...

Waiting for mods or bat mods XD
Jerry
osu! Alumni
1,153 posts
Joined December 2010
Jerry



M4M~


  • [General]
  1. Disable "Widescreen support" for all taiko difficulties

  2. 00:17:559 - until 00:32:321 - Kiai time?


  • [Important]
  1. I realized you used alot of "Big notes with same colours at end of stream" (xxX / ooO) patterns in your Oni and Inner Oni difficulties, do note that this is completely unrankable and you should refrain from using such patterns as it is not allowed according to the rules





  • [Kantanin~!]
  1. 00:05:416 (9) - change to do to add more variation to the pattern? .w.

  2. 00:17:559 - until 00:30:655 - I would highly suggest you fill the parts of sliders with 1/1 notes. The current pattern looks very boring .-.



  • [Fuutsurin~!]
  1. 00:13:512 (42) - This note is unnecessary as it makes this part too hard for a Futsuu, delete it?

  2. 00:28:273 - Delete this note, you need to be consistent with your patterns before such as 00:20:416 -

  3. 00:43:988 (42) - Same for this note, delete it. It's unnecessary because it makes it too hard for a Futsuu


  • [-Sh1n1-'s Muzukashiin~!]
    Good


  • [Onin~!]
  1. 00:08:750 (33) - change to kat to follow the high vocal pitch?

  2. 00:39:226 (197) - ^ same, change to kat?

  3. 00:09:940 (41) - This is unrankable, consider removing the Finish OR deleting 00:09:821 -

  4. 00:40:416 - ^ Same, unrankable. Consider removing the Finish OR deleting 00:40:297 -

  5. 00:47:559 - ^ Same, unrankable. Consider removing the Finish OR deleting 00:47:440 -

  6. 00:47:083 - This is unrankable as well, remove the Finish on this note

  7. 00:16:607 - Remove the Finish on this note, this is unrankable


  • [Innerin~!]
  1. 00:09:702 (42) - Remove this finish for this since this part of the music doesn't require any emphasis at all.

  2. 00:09:940 (44) - The Finish on this note should be removed because this pattern is unrankable. OR you can also remove 00:09:821 - as an alternative

  3. 00:10:536 - I suggest moving this to 00:10:774 - so that it smoothens out the flow? :3

  4. 00:16:845 - Same with the 2nd suggestion, remove the Finish on this note, it doesn't require any emphasis

  5. 00:17:083 - A big note at the end of a pattern of the same colour is unrankable, I suggest you delete 00:16:964 -

  6. 00:20:893 - ^ Same. unrankable. Delete 00:20:774 -?

  7. 00:24:702 - ^ Same. unrankable. Delete 00:24:583 -?

  8. 00:40:416 - ^ Same. unrankable. Delete 00:40:297 -?

  9. 00:33:036 - Change to don, so that it's the same with what you did at 00:02:559 -

  10. 00:41:012 - Move to 00:41:250 - to improve the flow?

  11. 00:45:654 - Add Finish here , so that it's the same with what you did at 00:15:178 -

  12. 00:47:559 - This is unrankable. Delete 00:47:440 -?

Well, that's all from me! Good luck~
Last edited by Jerry , edited 1 time in total.
xtrem3x
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xtrem3x
first M4M in process and later, modify diffs ... thanks for your mod -w-
PatZar
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PatZar
hi m4m [url=click here for link]https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/239475/start=30[/url]

[Akarin~!]
00:15:655 (13) - nc
00:17:559 (6) - nc
00:25:178 (12) - nc

sorry i can't mod this because too hard

[Innerin]
00:03:393 (7,8) - ctrl+ g
00:09:702 (42,43,44) - unrankable
00:16:845 (85,86,87) - unrankable
00:14:702 (71,72,73,74,75) - must same with 00:45:178 (271,272,273,274,275) -

tbh too many problem in this inner i can

i will mod this later when i get a free time so good luck!
xtrem3x
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xtrem3x
Modding

Jerry wrote:




M4M~


  • [General]
  1. Disable "Widescreen support" for all taiko difficulties << ok

  2. 00:17:559 - until 00:32:321 - Kiai time?
<< that is unnecessary because it is a very short song.


  • [Important]
  1. I realized you used alot of "Big notes at end of stream" (xxO / ooX) patterns in your Oni and Inner Oni difficulties, do note that this is completely unrankable and you should refrain from using such patterns as it is not allowed according to the rules





  • [Kantanin~!] = OK
  1. 00:05:416 (9) - change to do to add more variation to the pattern? .w.

  2. 00:17:559 - until 00:30:655 - I would highly suggest you fill the parts of sliders with 1/1 notes. The current pattern looks very boring .-.



  • [Fuutsurin~!] =OK
  1. 00:13:512 (42) - This note is unnecessary as it makes this part too hard for a Futsuu, delete it?

  2. 00:28:273 - Delete this note, you need to be consistent with your patterns before such as 00:20:416 -

  3. 00:43:988 (42) - Same for this note, delete it. It's unnecessary because it makes it too hard for a Futsuu


  • [-Sh1n1-'s Muzukashiin~!]
    Good


  • [Onin~!] ALL OK
  1. 00:08:750 (33) - change to kat to follow the high vocal pitch?

  2. 00:39:226 (197) - ^ same, change to kat? -- ok

  3. 00:09:940 (41) - This is unrankable, consider removing the Finish OR deleting 00:09:821 - <<< Delete

  4. 00:40:416 - ^ Same, unrankable. Consider removing the Finish OR deleting 00:40:297 -<<< Delete

  5. 00:47:559 - ^ Same, unrankable. Consider removing the Finish OR deleting 00:47:440 - <<< Delete

  6. 00:47:083 - This is unrankable as well, remove the Finish on this note -- ok

  7. 00:16:607 - Remove the Finish on this note, this is unrankable
-- ok


  • [Innerin~!] ALL OK
  1. 00:09:702 (42) - Remove this finish for this since this part of the music doesn't require any emphasis at all.

  2. 00:09:940 (44) - The Finish on this note should be removed because this pattern is unrankable. OR you can also remove 00:09:821 - as an alternative <<< Delete

  3. 00:10:536 - I suggest moving this to 00:10:774 - so that it smoothens out the flow? :3

  4. 00:16:845 - Same with the 2nd suggestion, remove the Finish on this note, it doesn't require any emphasis

  5. 00:17:083 - A big note at the end of a pattern of the same colour is unrankable, I suggest you delete 00:16:964 - <<< Delete

  6. 00:20:893 - ^ Same. unrankable. Delete 00:20:774 -?<<< Delete

  7. 00:24:702 - ^ Same. unrankable. Delete 00:24:583 -?<<< Delete

  8. 00:40:416 - ^ Same. unrankable. Delete 00:40:297 -?<<< Delete

  9. 00:33:036 - Change to don, so that it's the same with what you did at 00:02:559 -

  10. 00:41:012 - Move to 00:41:250 - to improve the flow?

  11. 00:45:654 - Add Finish here , so that it's the same with what you did at 00:15:178 -

  12. 00:47:559 - This is unrankable. Delete 00:47:440 -?

Well, that's all from me! Good luck~


Kantan: All (more notes)

Futsuu: All

Muzukashii: lol XD

Oni: Intact Finishes and delete notes and 00:16:607 finish removed

Inner: ALL OK
Thank for your mod and ..... a hashtag....

#Jerry4BAT ....
HabiHolic
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Hello from my lazy google queue

Sorry. I can't CTB, Taiko modding..

but here my star~
xtrem3x
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xtrem3x
well, thanks for the star -w-

if you want to make a GD feel free to doing XD
autofanboy
Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion
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autofanboy
Time to do this :D
Mod requested in AFB's CtB Modding Queue

[General]
  1. Untick Letterbox during Breaks, there has no breaks at all in your diffs.

[ Cup-irin~!]
  1. AR should always be the same as OD, which means you should increase OD to 5
  2. (Suggestion) Consider lowering CS to 3.5 or 4 in order to have some difference between Cup and Salad.
  3. 00:02:321 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part is so boring, highly recommended to change some of the notes into a 1/1 slider, or 1/1 reversed slider or something else.
  4. 00:09:940 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Boring again, change some of the patterns.
  5. 00:14:702 (2) - Remove the Whistle applied on the whole slider, it sounds weird here, and add whistle at 00:15:178 if you like.
  6. 00:15:655 (3) - NC here
  7. 00:15:655 (3,4,5,6) - (Suggestion) This part is okay if you change the previous circle-patterns, if not then change this part, at least.
  8. 00:28:036 (2,3) - These circles should change into the timeline like 00:20:416 (2,3) in order to keep consistency.
  9. 00:32:797 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again.
  10. 00:40:893 (1) - Remove NC
  11. 00:40:416 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - AAAAAA
  12. 00:44:226 (5) - NC

    This Cup is way too easy, consider increase the distances between notes in order to have a higher difficulty, and change most of the patterns, it gets pretty boring.

[ Saladin~!]
  1. Remove Widescreen Support, there has no storyboards.
  2. Increase AR and OD to 6.5 so that Salad works as the middle between Cup and Platter.
  3. Distances here are too low, I didn't even dashed once. Increase most of them.
  4. 00:03:512 (5) - Avoid using such straightly-pointed-up/down sliders, they give no movements and are too easy to get.
  5. 00:04:226 (1) - Don't stack this note with the previous slider, move to another position to have more movements.
  6. 00:06:131 (1) - ^
  7. 00:08:393 (2) - Stacked note with previous circle.
  8. 00:08:988 (5) - NC and move to x:160 to have even distance with (3,4).
  9. 00:09:226 (6,7,8) - If you applied the previous mod, change it to something like *this
  10. 00:11:131 (4) - Pointed-up slider, move the tail to a bit right or left.
  11. 00:11:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Boring part, change some of the circles into 1/2 sliders
  12. 00:14:703 (4,5,6,7,8) - I bet it is not that good to have 1/4 streams in Salad, unless it is in Kiai Time
  13. 00:16:369 (4) - Move to x:144 to have even distance with (3) and have a dashy effect to (5)
  14. 00:17:559 (1) - Stacked again with (4)
  15. 00:20:416 (5) - NC
  16. 00:20:416 (5,6,7) - In your cup, this part is filled with 2 1/2 slider, while in Salad here is just 3 circles, therefore you may consider to add a circle at 00:21:131
  17. 00:24:107 (5) - NC
  18. 00:24:107 (5) - Choose either one: 1. Move closer to (4) in order to have even distance; or 2. Move much farther to have dashy effect
  19. 00:25:178 (1) - A little bit stacked with the previous note, which means you should move much farther away from it
  20. 00:28:036 (5) - NC, the combo is too high
  21. 00:28:988 (1) - Stacked with the previous note
  22. 00:33:988 (5) - ^
  23. 00:35:416 (4,5,6) - UGGGGG
  24. 00:37:321 (4,5,6) - No......
  25. 00:39:464 (5) - NC
  26. 00:39:464 (5) - x:352 if you want even distance
  27. 00:39:702 (6,7,8) - Change it to *this if you applied previous mod
  28. 00:43:750 (7) - (Suggestion) Tilt the tail to a bit right
  29. 00:47:083 (5,6,7) - *example to have higher distance
  30. 00:47:321 (6) - Remove Finish
  31. 00:47:559 (7) - Remove Whistle and Clap

[ Platterin~!]
  1. 00:03:512 (6) - Tilt to the left.
  2. 00:08:988 (5) - NC
  3. 00:13:750 (10) - NC, combo is very high here
  4. 00:15:655 (18) - Wow man, NC here...
  5. 00:17:559 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Too easy here, change the pattern.
  6. 00:19:345 (11) - NC
  7. 00:20:655 - Add note here
  8. 00:21:131 - ^
  9. 00:21:726 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Remove all the NCs and apply NC at 00:23:155 (1).
  10. 00:21:369 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Too easy
  11. 00:25:178 (6) - NC, is that you forgot to NC them
  12. 00:26:964 (11) - NC
  13. 00:28:988 (20) - NC, Oh god
  14. 00:28:988 (20,21,22,23,24,25) - This part should not contain much HDash, and these dashes are too hard as a Platter.
  15. 00:32:797 (1) - Tilt to the left/right.
  16. 00:34:464 (7) - Stacked with (6)
  17. 00:37:797 (5) - Tilt to the left.
  18. 00:38:512 (1) - Stacked with (5), if you tilted (5) to the left, it is alright here
  19. 00:38:512 (1,2,3,4) - *example
  20. 00:39:464 (5) - NC
  21. 00:43:155 (6) - Stacked with (7)
  22. 00:43:274 (7) - NC
  23. 00:44:226 (11) - NC, I thought I am modding Taiko
  24. 00:45:178 (15) - NC
  25. 00:46:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Increase distances between them and change some circles into sliders

    NC issues are so serious in this map.

[ Akarin~!]
  1. I expected this to be a Rain, and secondly the difficulty spread should be gradual, which means an Overdose cannot be there after Platter. However why is CS 6? You should lower it to at least 4 or 5
  2. HP7 please, HP9 is not a Rain but a Deluge+ or Overdose+ level
  3. Remove Widescreen Support and Letterbox during Breaks

    Since now I think I can't mod this diff because this is supposed to be a Rain but the CS and HP is way too high. In additions to it, the distances between them are big as well. There is one solution, you can decide to map a Rain so that this diff can be kept, but if not, you better reduce the difficulty of this diff. Forgive me that I didn't mod this diff.

Good luck for rank!
-AFB
xtrem3x
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xtrem3x
Modding from alienflybot

alienflybot wrote:

Time to do this :D
Mod requested in AFB's CtB Modding Queue

[General]
  1. Untick Letterbox during Breaks, there has no breaks at all in your diffs.

[ Cup-irin~!]
  1. AR should always be the same as OD, which means you should increase OD to 5
  2. (Suggestion) Consider lowering CS to 3.5 or 4 in order to have some difference between Cup and Salad.
  3. 00:02:321 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part is so boring, highly recommended to change some of the notes into a 1/1 slider, or 1/1 reversed slider or something else.
  4. 00:09:940 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Boring again, change some of the patterns.
  5. 00:14:702 (2) - Remove the Whistle applied on the whole slider, it sounds weird here, and add whistle at 00:15:178 if you like.
  6. 00:15:655 (3) - NC here
  7. 00:15:655 (3,4,5,6) - (Suggestion) This part is okay if you change the previous circle-patterns, if not then change this part, at least.
  8. 00:28:036 (2,3) - These circles should change into the timeline like 00:20:416 (2,3) in order to keep consistency.
  9. 00:32:797 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again.
  10. 00:40:893 (1) - Remove NC
  11. 00:40:416 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - AAAAAA
  12. 00:44:226 (5) - NC

    This Cup is way too easy, consider increase the distances between notes in order to have a higher difficulty, and change most of the patterns, it gets pretty boring.

[ Saladin~!]
  1. Remove Widescreen Support, there has no storyboards.
  2. Increase AR and OD to 6.5 so that Salad works as the middle between Cup and Platter.
  3. Distances here are too low, I didn't even dashed once. Increase most of them.
  4. 00:03:512 (5) - Avoid using such straightly-pointed-up/down sliders, they give no movements and are too easy to get.
  5. 00:04:226 (1) - Don't stack this note with the previous slider, move to another position to have more movements.
  6. 00:06:131 (1) - ^
  7. 00:08:393 (2) - Stacked note with previous circle.
  8. 00:08:988 (5) - NC and move to x:160 to have even distance with (3,4).
  9. 00:09:226 (6,7,8) - If you applied the previous mod, change it to something like *this
  10. 00:11:131 (4) - Pointed-up slider, move the tail to a bit right or left.
  11. 00:11:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Boring part, change some of the circles into 1/2 sliders
  12. 00:14:703 (4,5,6,7,8) - I bet it is not that good to have 1/4 streams in Salad, unless it is in Kiai Time
  13. 00:16:369 (4) - Move to x:144 to have even distance with (3) and have a dashy effect to (5)
  14. 00:17:559 (1) - Stacked again with (4)
  15. 00:20:416 (5) - NC
  16. 00:20:416 (5,6,7) - In your cup, this part is filled with 2 1/2 slider, while in Salad here is just 3 circles, therefore you may consider to add a circle at 00:21:131
  17. 00:24:107 (5) - NC
  18. 00:24:107 (5) - Choose either one: 1. Move closer to (4) in order to have even distance; or 2. Move much farther to have dashy effect
  19. 00:25:178 (1) - A little bit stacked with the previous note, which means you should move much farther away from it
  20. 00:28:036 (5) - NC, the combo is too high
  21. 00:28:988 (1) - Stacked with the previous note
  22. 00:33:988 (5) - ^
  23. 00:35:416 (4,5,6) - UGGGGG
  24. 00:37:321 (4,5,6) - No......
  25. 00:39:464 (5) - NC
  26. 00:39:464 (5) - x:352 if you want even distance
  27. 00:39:702 (6,7,8) - Change it to *this if you applied previous mod
  28. 00:43:750 (7) - (Suggestion) Tilt the tail to a bit right
  29. 00:47:083 (5,6,7) - *example to have higher distance
  30. 00:47:321 (6) - Remove Finish
  31. 00:47:559 (7) - Remove Whistle and Clap

[ Platterin~!]
  1. 00:03:512 (6) - Tilt to the left.
  2. 00:08:988 (5) - NC
  3. 00:13:750 (10) - NC, combo is very high here
  4. 00:15:655 (18) - Wow man, NC here...
  5. 00:17:559 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Too easy here, change the pattern.
  6. 00:19:345 (11) - NC
  7. 00:20:655 - Add note here
  8. 00:21:131 - ^
  9. 00:21:726 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Remove all the NCs and apply NC at 00:23:155 (1).
  10. 00:21:369 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Too easy
  11. 00:25:178 (6) - NC, is that you forgot to NC them
  12. 00:26:964 (11) - NC
  13. 00:28:988 (20) - NC, Oh god
  14. 00:28:988 (20,21,22,23,24,25) - This part should not contain much HDash, and these dashes are too hard as a Platter.
  15. 00:32:797 (1) - Tilt to the left/right.
  16. 00:34:464 (7) - Stacked with (6)
  17. 00:37:797 (5) - Tilt to the left.
  18. 00:38:512 (1) - Stacked with (5), if you tilted (5) to the left, it is alright here
  19. 00:38:512 (1,2,3,4) - *example
  20. 00:39:464 (5) - NC
  21. 00:43:155 (6) - Stacked with (7)
  22. 00:43:274 (7) - NC
  23. 00:44:226 (11) - NC, I thought I am modding Taiko
  24. 00:45:178 (15) - NC
  25. 00:46:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Increase distances between them and change some circles into sliders

    NC issues are so serious in this map.

[ Akarin~!]
  1. I expected this to be a Rain, and secondly the difficulty spread should be gradual, which means an Overdose cannot be there after Platter. However why is CS 6? You should lower it to at least 4 or 5
  2. HP7 please, HP9 is not a Rain but a Deluge+ or Overdose+ level
  3. Remove Widescreen Support and Letterbox during Breaks

    Since now I think I can't mod this diff because this is supposed to be a Rain but the CS and HP is way too high. In additions to it, the distances between them are big as well. There is one solution, you can decide to map a Rain so that this diff can be kept, but if not, you better reduce the difficulty of this diff. Forgive me that I didn't mod this diff.

Good luck for rank!
-AFB

Almost all CTB Mod applied ... thanks for your modding and proceed to vote.

also ...Akarin~! change to Rainin~!
Nrver
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Nrver
What is that healthbar drain. It's so unforgiving.
xtrem3x
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Topic Starter
xtrem3x

sonicrider3 wrote:

What is that healthbar drain. It's so unforgiving.
HP: Lifebar (it is harder to level up)
Drain Time: time with notes or effects


(?)
Hanjamon
1,461 posts
Joined June 2012
Hanjamon
Es hora de que revivas esto y le des caña xD


  • d=Don
    D=Big Don
    k=Katsu
    K=Big Katsu
[General]

  • Ningun kiai? xD

    Añade uno en todas las diffs que empieze en 00:17:559 - y acabe en 00:32:797 -
[Kantan]

  • Haz esto, elimina la Futsuu (o renombrala a Muzukashii, ya que es lo que es en realidad esta diff, asi tendrias dos muzukashiis con mejor spread), renombra esta Kantan a Futsuu, a partir de la Futsuu crea una nueva diff con el nombre de Kantan sin eliminar las notas y ahora usa las sugerencias que te voy a dar

    00:03:512 (4,5) - 1/2 en kantan?! elimina estas notas, ademas necesita breaks D: ↓ te voy a seguir dando mas sugerencias para que la kantan este bien ↓
    00:05:416 (7,8) - lo mismo ^
    00:07:321 (10,11) - lo mismo ^
    00:08:036 (10) - seria mejor si eliminas este slider y añades una nota en 00:08:036 -
    00:10:417 (14) - elimina esta nota para dejar algo de break
    00:11:131 (15) - eliminala, no uses 1/2 en kantan
    00:11:369 (15) - elimina esta tambien asi dejas un pequeño break
    00:13:036 (18,19) - elimina estas dos notas, lo mismo que antes
    00:13:988 (19,20) - eliminalas
    00:14:940 (20,21) - ^ eliminalas
    00:17:083 (23) - eliminala, un pequeño break antes del kiai no viene mal
    00:18:036 (24) - eliminala
    00:19:940 (27) - ^ eliminala
    00:21:845 (30) - eliminala
    00:23:750 (33) - eliminala
    00:24:702 (34) - eliminala
    00:26:607 (37) - eliminala
    00:28:274 (40,41) - eliminalas
    00:29:464 (41) - eliminala
    00:32:797 - a partir de esta parte intenta hacerlo como te sugeri al principio, si hace falta usa copy&paste xD
[Futsuu]

  • Ya te dije lo que debes hacer arriba ^
[-Sh1n1-'s Muzukashii]

  • Overmappeastes mucho esta Muzukashii, en vez de Muzukashii hicistes una Oni facil asi que vamos a ver

    00:01:488 (6) - elimina esta nota, ya que no creo que sea una buena forma de empezar y esto es pattern de una Oni..
    00:03:393 (13) - ^ elimina
    00:04:464 (17) - elimina apenas estas dejando breaks
    00:05:298 (20) - elimina
    00:05:893 (22) - elimina
    00:06:369 (23) - elimina, como minimo breaks de 1/1 deberias dejar
    00:07:202 (26) - elimina misma razon que antes
    00:07:797 (28) - eliminala
    00:08:631 (30,31,33,35) - eliminalas, son patterns dificiles para una Muzu, asi de pasa dejaras algo de break
    00:11:012 (38) - elimina, misma razon que antes
    00:11:607 (40) - elimina
    00:12:083 (41,45) - eliminalas
    00:12:678 (43,45) - cambialas a d, dd dd sera mas facil
    00:13:512 (47) - eliminala, siempre viene bien un pequeño break antes de 1/4 en una muzukashii
    00:16:012 (57) - muevela a 00:16:131 - y cambiala a k, queda mejor imo
    00:17:559 - a partir de aqui podrias hacer algo como esto de forma repetitiva para que no sea tan dificil y queda mejor en mi opinion

    00:32:797 - a partir de aqui puedes basarte en las sugerencias que te di al principio
[Oni]

  • Deberias usar siempre sv 1.40 en Muzukashii, Oni y Inner Oni, sv 1.60 me resulta muy molesto, si alguien quiere mas sv que use HR

    00:03:988 (10) - eliminar? con esto dejas un pequeño break
    00:09:345 (36) - eliminala, la Oni y la Inner Oni son casi iguales en algunos aspectos, intenta hacer la Oni diferente (y facil) de la Inner
    00:13:155 (56,58) - elimina estas notas, como ya digo, para cosas dificiles esta la inner (?
    00:15:059 (66) - eliminala y cambia 00:15:178 (67) - a k
    00:16:012 (70,72) - eliminalas
    00:31:369 (154) - cambia esta a k
    00:34:464 (168) - elimina, misma razon que antes
    00:36:369 (176) - elimina, misma razon que antes
    00:39:821 (192) - elimina, misma razon que antes
    00:43:155 (206,212) - eliminalas, esta bastante dificil creo
    00:47:559 (231) - estas loco, quita ese finish o elimina 00:47:440 (230) - , ese finish hace que parezca una diff convertida (y es unrankeable) xD
[Inner Oni]

  • Igual que en la Oni, mejor cambia el sv a 1.40

    00:03:274 - añade un d aqui, sinceramente muchos dobletes no tienen sentido aqui..
    00:04:821 (15) - mueve esta nota a 00:04:940 - añade k en 00:05:416 - cambia 00:05:536 (19) - a k todo aqui quedaria (ddkdkkd)
    00:04:583 - añade un k aqui (kkd)
    00:05:893 (23,24) - cambialas a k (kkd) queda mejor
    00:07:797 (34) - cambialo a k (kkd) queda mejor
    00:08:750 (39) - cambialo a k
    00:09:345 (43,44) - control+g estas notas y cambia 00:09:226 (42) - a k (ddkkd), queda mucho mejor imo
    00:09:702 (45) - cambialo a k
    00:10:655 (48,49,50,51,52,53) - cambia estos tripletes a kkd, suenan mejor
    00:11:607 (54) - cambialo a k
    00:13:512 (67) - cambialo a k, queda mejor
    00:15:178 (77) - este finish es unrankeable por el momento.. puedes hacer dos cosas, o eliminar el finish de esta nota o cambiar 00:14:702 (73) - a d
    00:16:131 (82) - cambia esta nota a d y 00:16:488 (85) - a k (kdkdddkkd) suena mucho mejor
    00:16:845 (87) - cambiala a k
    00:20:416 (113,114) - control+g estas notas, queda mejor
    00:24:464 (141) - cambialo a k
    00:32:321 (197) - cambialo a k
    00:33:750 - añade una nota d aqui
    00:34:464 (209,210) - cambialas a k (kkd)
    00:35:297 (214) - mueve esta nota a 00:35:059 -
    00:35:773 (217) - mueve esta nota a 00:35:416 - , mueve ahora 00:35:654 (217) - en 00:35:774 - y mueve 00:36:012 - a 00:35:893 -
    00:36:964 - añade un k aqui (kkddk) queda mejor
    00:42:083 (252) - cambialo a k
    00:43:988 (265) - cambialo a k igual que antes
    00:45:654 (275) - ... unrankeable, elimina el finish porfavor xD
    00:46:607 (280) - cambialo a d y cambia 00:46:964 (283) - a k (kdkdddkkd) igual que antes
    00:47:321 (285) - cambialo a k

    Despues del mod veras que la Inner sigue algo mejor el ritmo
Esto es todo, con este mod las diffs deberian verse mucho mejor, sigue buscando mods y no dejes morir esto de nuevo, suerte ^^
xtrem3x
1,786 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
xtrem3x
RIP CTB
RIP MY MAPPING
and hello REMAP ._.
Vulkin
1,618 posts
Joined September 2014
Vulkin
ok
i suck at modding ;w;

-General-
Where the kiai points at

-Kantan-
00:07:559 (8) - move to 00:08:512 -
00:38:036 (8) - move to 00:38:988 -

-Futsuu-
00:17:083 (39,40) - Ctrl+G, the finisher at the latter sounds better for me
00:25:178 (60) - Add finisher
00:32:797 (1) - Add Finisher

-Sh1n1-'s Muzukashii-
Remove either 00:09:226 (42) - or 00:09:345 (43) - 5 note pattern on muzu too early doesnt look right imho

-Oni-
Nothing here

-Innerin~-
00:20:536 - add a k
00:24:345 - add a k

I just realized i could have typed all this mod on spanish but ok
Good luck on the map!! <3
Jonarwhal
1,227 posts
Joined November 2013
Jonarwhal
NM 4 NM
[General]
  1. 00:17:559 - / 00:30:893 - kiai
[Kantan]
  1. 00:25:178 (33,34,35,36,37) - you're being inconsistent with 00:17:559 (21,22,23,24,25) - here, imo it's unfair in Kantan for the player to play the same lyrics 2 opposite ways
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:29:226 (71) - remove
  2. 00:28:988 (70,71,72,73,74) - d k ddk, same reasoning as Kantan.
[Muzu/Oni]
  1. Nothing found
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:03:393 (7,8) - Ctrl+g to emphasize 00:03:512 - here, you consistently use k on stronger lyrics and I think that should include the "ma" 00:03:512 - here (repeats 00:33:869 (225,226) - here)
  2. 00:05:238 - you missed a lyric sound here (00:33:869 (225,226) - )
  3. 00:06:488 - ^ (00:33:869 (225,226) - )
I hope that helped. Your taiko set is nice. Good Luck~!!
xtrem3x
1,786 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
xtrem3x
Some points applied in 2 mods ... thanks and later make his petitions about M4M (if have some in pending)
-Sh1n1-
3,404 posts
Joined September 2012
-Sh1n1-
Click me!
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Thanks for your mod Vulkin~~
Volta
1,622 posts
Joined March 2014
Volta
[General]
00:02:321 - the first redline should be here if you don't map the intro drum, sounds better with nightcore too with the additional crash sound it gives
the kiai in muzukashii and oni can be adjusted for better spread. since innerin is long stream, i'd suggest to buff oni.

[Kantan]
need some 4/1 breaks.
00:30:893 - consider to replace the spinner with a note instead

00:10:893 - consider to delete this note too. is better to give a break after the finisher. sequence is too consecutive
00:12:321 - try move to 00:15:178 - i think it is too dense here
00:41:369 - same as 00:10:893
00:42:797 - delete, same reason as 00:12:321

[Futsuu]
2/1 break must be appear a bit more often.
00:10:416 - try move this to 00:08:512 - and add d at 00:09:226 - ? so the break will be after finisher.
00:06:607 - consider to delete this to give 2/1 break
00:17:083 - ^

try:
00:11:131 - move to 00:12:083 -
00:13:036 - delete
00:14:940 - delete
00:15:893 - add d
so you'll have similar structure with first sequence?

all above points can also be applied in the section after kiai

00:24:702 - consider to delete this for consistency with 00:20:893 -
00:27:083 - try to change to k,
00:28:274 - change to d and move to 00:27:321 - for more consistent structure

[Sh1n1's Muzukashii]
00:08:393 - move to 00:08:750 - ? the break is less awkward this way imo
00:38:869 - same as above

00:31:131 (117,118) - consider to delete these to give longer break after the kiai. futsuu is just spinner after all
and change ddk pattern into ddd or kkk, that would be more wise.

[Oni]
as said in general, try to make the kiai denser, maybe something like this:


00:12:678 - delete this and 00:13:393 - ? currently it looks too similar with innerin
00:43:155 - and 00:43:869 - same as ^

[Innerin]
00:05:536 (20,21) - swapping these notes can reflect the vocal in a way better imo
00:08:274 - probably can add d

00:05:655 (21) - umm..didn't hear 1/8..

try:
00:31:131 - change to k?
00:31:369 - change to d
00:31:607 - move to
this way could represent the drum better.

00:36:012 (228,229) - same as 00:05:536
00:38:750 - add d


Good luck!
xtrem3x
1,786 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
xtrem3x

Volta wrote:

[General]
00:02:321 - the first redline should be here if you don't map the intro drum, sounds better with nightcore too with the additional crash sound it gives
the kiai in muzukashii and oni can be adjusted for better spread. since innerin is long stream, i'd suggest to buff oni. <<< correct.

[Kantan]
need some 4/1 breaks.
00:30:893 - consider to replace the spinner with a note instead <<< well, is possible.

00:10:893 - consider to delete this note too. is better to give a break after the finisher. sequence is too consecutive <<< I took me a while to understand that you mentioned this point and is good
00:12:321 - try move to 00:15:178 - i think it is too dense here << have a better idea .-. ... considering above point.
00:41:369 - same as 00:10:893 <<< same
00:42:797 - delete, same reason as 00:12:321 <<< same


[Futsuu]
2/1 break must be appear a bit more often.
00:10:416 - try move this to 00:08:512 - and add d at 00:09:226 - ? so the break will be after finisher. <<< see below
00:06:607 - consider to delete this to give 2/1 break <<< I like it -w-
00:17:083 - ^ <<< ^

try:
00:11:131 - move to 00:12:083 - ok
00:13:036 - delete
00:14:940 - delete
00:15:893 - add d
so you'll have similar structure with first sequence? <<< ^ all good

all above points can also be applied in the section after kiai

00:24:702 - consider to delete this for consistency with 00:20:893 - <<< is possible ... I need more density in this part but I need keep my spread .-.
00:27:083 - try to change to k, <<< good
00:28:274 - change to d and move to 00:27:321 - for more consistent structure <<<< applying above points is good -w-


[Oni]
as said in general, try to make the kiai denser, maybe something like this:


00:12:678 - delete this and 00:13:393 - ? currently it looks too similar with innerin
00:43:155 - and 00:43:869 - same as ^

all is correct ... with a variable in kiai -w-

[Innerin]
00:05:536 (20,21) - swapping these notes can reflect the vocal in a way better imo <<< good
00:08:274 - probably can add d <<< I had my doubts about this part but it's good.
00:05:655 (21) - umm..didn't hear 1/8.. <<< eh?

try:
00:31:131 - change to k? <<< ok
00:31:369 - change to d <<< ok
00:31:607 - move to this way could represent the drum better. <<< to where? ... to 00:31:488- ?

00:36:012 (228,229) - same as 00:05:536 <<< same
00:38:750 - add d <<< same


Good luck!
Thanks Flying Pan ... and sorry for my delay but work is too heavy ._. ... and -Sh1n1- with much ausence XD

waiting for -Sn1n1- (yeah. this error is epic XD)
-Sh1n1-
3,404 posts
Joined September 2012
-Sh1n1-

Volta wrote:

[General]

[Sh1n1's Muzukashii]
00:08:393 - move to 00:08:750 - ? the break is less awkward this way imo
00:38:869 - same as above

00:31:131 (117,118) - consider to delete these to give longer break after the kiai. futsuu is just spinner after all
and change ddk pattern into ddd or kkk, that would be more wise.

Good luck!
All fixed, thanks for the mod~~

click me~~
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Volta
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Volta
recheck, no kd.

[Innerin]
00:28:213 - i mean the 1/8 triplet in this isn't justified because no sound support it, hear with slower playback 25%. just delete this note.
00:20:892 - possibly forgot to add finisher?
xtrem3x
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Topic Starter
xtrem3x

Volta wrote:

recheck, no kd.

[Innerin]
00:28:213 - i mean the 1/8 triplet in this isn't justified because no sound support it, hear with slower playback 25%. just delete this note.
00:20:892 - possibly forgot to add finisher?
Fixed -w-
Volta
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Volta
looks fine.

Bubblerin~
xtrem3x
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xtrem3x
thanks Pan -w- /
OzzyOzrock
5,185 posts
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OzzyOzrock
Hola, soy un random.

[General]
  1. Creo que deberias hacer el intento de mapear el segundo loop mas diferente (no incluye los streams de Inner, los que si cambiaste!). No necesariamente mas dificil, pero el problema es que al jugarlo se siente muy flojo ver todo otravez, aunque la cancion se repita literalmente. Otra vez, no se tiene que hace mas dificil ni hay que cambiar ritmos, pero variarle un poco.
[Innerin~!]
  1. 00:02:321 (1,2,3,4) - D kkd? Te permite mapear el empiezo con un D, y queda bien con el "iiya ya".
  2. 00:20:893 (120) - Creo que estos finishers van en contra del ritmo de la cancion. Si los usas para darle un poco de emphasis a el "-riin~!" pues creo que seria mejor mapear el "akarin" completamente :P
  3. 00:24:344 - Aqui falta una nota que hace el teclado. Igual existe mi comentario sobre el K
  4. 00:28:750 (179) - Y aqui ni le veo real sentido :p
  5. 00:32:797 - Igual que la primera sugerencia.
  6. 00:47:559 (295) - Creo que K le queda mejor como nota final
[Oni]
  1. Porque la cancion es muy simple, recomenadria HP 6 y OD 6, siendo que lo corto que es y lo bajo que es el BPM, no hay que hacerlo muy facil.
  2. 00:02:321 (1) y 00:32:797 (160) - D? Empieza la cancion bien y si aplicas el cambio de Inner, lo haria consistente.
  3. 00:17:083 (72) - K? Para estar consistente con el Inner, y tambien porque una nota sola to tiene mucho de exitante.
  4. 00:28:750 (138) - Para evitar que sea tan constante esta seccion, diria que mejor borres esta nota.
[Sh1n1's Muzukashii]
  1. HP 7 por razones relacionadas a las reglas de HP.
  2. 00:17:083 (56) - D? KYUUN~
[Futsuu]
  1. HP 8, por las mismas razones. Menos notas = mas HP.
  2. 00:06:606 (12) y 00:37:082 (12) - d? Hay muchos k aqui sin razon.
  3. 00:30:893 (1) - Mueve este spinner a que acabe en 00:31:844, para hacer un break falso ya que no hay un verdadero break.
[Kantan]
  1. HP 9 aqui. 7 aun es muy facil para pasar sin hacer nada.
  2. 00:16:607 (19) - Mueve esta norta a 00:10:892 - para poder hacer un break en ese lugar. Es mas importante tener un break antes del kiai que uno aqui.
  3. 00:11:368 - Tambien deberias poner una nota aqui.
  4. 00:24:226 (31) - Y puedes borrar esta para hacer un break despues de algo medio dificil.
  5. 00:30:893 (43) - D? No es TAN cruel :p
  6. 00:41:368 - Los camios anteriores se aplicarian aqui, pero ajustada para que puedas tener ese final.
:)
xtrem3x
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xtrem3x
Mis cambios están aplicados, esperaré a que -Sh1n1- aparezca y mencione sus cambios para editar este post y subir todo junto.
-Sh1n1-
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-Sh1n1-

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Hola, soy un random. :O mis mapas necesitan un random~~

[Sh1n1's Muzukashii]
  1. HP 7 por razones relacionadas a las reglas de HP. ojala xtrem3x te haga caso en los consejos del HP, porque yo estoy de acuerdo contigo
  2. 00:17:083 (56) - D? KYUUN~ tienes toda la razon de agregarle un finish ahi pero seria muy repetitivo con 00:17:559 (57) - y preferi hacerle otro tipo de enfasis poniendole K, algo asi como hice en 00:24:701 (89,90) -, espero te guste~~ :3
:)
Gracias, all fixed

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xtrem3x
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xtrem3x

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Hola, soy un random. <<< y yo soy alguien sin suerte XD

[General]
  1. Creo que deberias hacer el intento de mapear el segundo loop mas diferente (no incluye los streams de Inner, los que si cambiaste!). No necesariamente mas dificil, pero el problema es que al jugarlo se siente muy flojo ver todo otravez, aunque la cancion se repita literalmente. Otra vez, no se tiene que hace mas dificil ni hay que cambiar ritmos, pero variarle un poco.
Lo pensé bastante pero todos mis intentos de hacerlos diferentes en la 2da sección fallaron, creo que lo intentaré de nuevo.


[Innerin~!]
  1. 00:02:321 (1,2,3,4) - D kkd? Te permite mapear el empiezo con un D, y queda bien con el "iiya ya". <<< iie iie .. pero está bueno XD
  2. 00:20:893 (120) - Creo que estos finishers van en contra del ritmo de la cancion. Si los usas para darle un poco de emphasis a el "-riin~!" pues creo que seria mejor mapear el "akarin" completamente :P <<< solo lo hice para diferenciar un poco de tanto stream, lo quitaré
  3. 00:24:344 - Aqui falta una nota que hace el teclado. Igual existe mi comentario sobre el K << lo 1ro podría intentarlo, a decir verdad ni lo noté XD
  4. 00:28:750 (179) - Y aqui ni le veo real sentido :p <<< contando con los puntos anteriores es cierto
  5. 00:32:797 - Igual que la primera sugerencia. <<< bien
  6. 00:47:559 (295) - Creo que K le queda mejor como nota final <<< diferenciado de las otras diffs? .. bueno XD
[Oni]
  1. Porque la cancion es muy simple, recomenadria HP 6 y OD 6, siendo que lo corto que es y lo bajo que es el BPM, no hay que hacerlo muy facil. <<< contando que no he movido esos parámetros desde que subí este mapa por 1ra vez supongo que es necesario reajustar esto...
  2. 00:02:321 (1) y 00:32:797 (160) - D? Empieza la cancion bien y si aplicas el cambio de Inner, lo haria consistente. <<< ese cymbal me tenía sin cuidado.
  3. 00:17:083 (72) - K? Para estar consistente con el Inner, y tambien porque una nota sola to tiene mucho de exitante. <<< no recuerdo quien me dijo que era con D estas notas pero bueno, ok.
  4. 00:28:750 (138) - Para evitar que sea tan constante esta seccion, diria que mejor borres esta nota. <<< es extraño por que sigo el vocal en esta parte, lo intentaré.
[Futsuu]
  1. HP 8, por las mismas razones. Menos notas = mas HP.
  2. 00:06:606 (12) y 00:37:082 (12) - d? Hay muchos k aqui sin razon <<< de hecho es mas por el vocal, aunque si tiene una tonada baja un poco dificil de detectar, así que cambiado..
  3. 00:30:893 (1) - Mueve este spinner a que acabe en 00:31:844, para hacer un break falso ya que no hay un verdadero break. <<< está curioso .-.
[Kantan]
  1. HP 9 aqui. 7 aun es muy facil para pasar sin hacer nada.
  2. 00:16:607 (19) - Mueve esta norta a 00:10:892 - para poder hacer un break en ese lugar. Es mas importante tener un break antes del kiai que uno aqui. <<< Suena muy hueco pero a ver si funciona.
  3. 00:11:368 - Tambien deberias poner una nota aqui. <<< bien
  4. 00:24:226 (31) - Y puedes borrar esta para hacer un break despues de algo medio dificil. <<< tardé un poco en entender el por que de esta nota pero bueno, cambiado.
  5. 00:30:893 (43) - D? No es TAN cruel :p <<< podría intentarlo
  6. 00:41:368 - Los camios anteriores se aplicarian aqui, pero ajustada para que puedas tener ese final. <<< igual bien ...
:)
ya estas muffet, ahora a esperar -w-
OzzyOzrock
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OzzyOzrock
Actualmente, es correcto el titulo?

En niconico, el video esta titulado あかりアカリあカリアかりアカりアかリあかリあカり＼ｱｯｶﾘ～ﾝ／, lo que no tiene cierta cantidad de 'iii' y el '-' que usas. Tambien tiene los \ /.

Nada mas quiero estar claro, talvez hay otra razon.
xtrem3x
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xtrem3x
el titulo lo copié tal como aparece en el video de nicovideo.jp pero el romanizado si fue en base a uno de Youtube...

Igual llegando a casa confirmo eso

EDIT: en la sección Romanised Title no me deja poner algo como \Akkarin-n/ ... aparece pero con las diagonales / --- / ... no se si sea valido así o que se omitan y solo aparezca Akkarin-n

EDIT (EN) : Summoning Kwan or Alacat or some Japanese User .. I need help with this ...
\Akkari-n/ <<< not allowed
/Akkari-n/ <<< my result in Romanised title
Akkarin-n <<< my suggest
MBmasher
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MBmasher
Hey there... for the metadata, use the official website: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm16793934

The English title is Akariakariakariakariakariakariakariakari ＼Akarin~／A solution for the backslash could be to simply remove the slashes.

Although if you want a romanised version of the Japanese title, it is "Akariakariakariakariakariakariakariakari ＼Akkari~n／"

Also, it should either be Ksan or K-san since in the username, there is no space.

Source should be ゆるゆり which is Yuru Yuri in Japanese.

Just leaving my thoughts. Please correct me if I am wrong.
xtrem3x
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source ... oops! XD

all is correct but romanised title section is very conflictive with slashes .-. .... then is possible without them ,.... Source fixed - Romanised artist fixed - Romanised title fixed

Muffet, la sección de romanised no deja que ponga la diagonal inversa así que sería mejor sin ellas .-.
OzzyOzrock
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OzzyOzrock
No que pusiste una 'k' extra?
xtrem3x
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Kwan ya contestó al menos, así que todo el metadata está aplicado... (Excepto las barras el akkari-n por que el romanised title no deja ponerlas)



EDIT:



bueno Muffet, supongo que con esto ya no tienes dudas al respecto.
OzzyOzrock
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Al fin! Para estar seguro (ya que falle el examen), voy a darte una burbuja, y Volta puede hacerlo qualify en 24 horas.

Re-Bubbled!
Volta
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Qualified!
xtrem3x
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xtrem3x
thanks pan -w-)/
Surono
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Surono wrote:

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Rosemarie
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Why it doesn't have the 'on and on' and 'mojipittan' as a tag ;w;..?
( Can someone explain it to me? )
Cosmolade
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Cosmolade
Yay \>w</
¡¡Felicidades oniichan!!
!
-Sh1n1-
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Gratz bro~~
Charlotte
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Gratz Akari
xtrem3x
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Charlotte wrote:

Gratz Akari
oh my presence ~w~ !!
[Bau]
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Felicidades tío xtrem lo amo mucho a usted y a su mapa uwu
CSLM
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CSLM
Late uwu
Gratz~ :33
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