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Sushi Killer - Zora [Osu|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
Nerova Riuz GX
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年8月28日 at 下午 11:12:53

Artist: Sushi Killer
Title: Zora
Tags: dnb mashup cool tight arronchu1207 Raiden Kyubey 寿司 キラー ゾーラ すし
BPM: 177
Filesize: 9098kb
Play Time: 03:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Chu's Advanced (2.16 stars, 303 notes)
  2. Hard (3.3 stars, 462 notes)
  3. It's my pleasure to meet you. (5.03 stars, 637 notes)
  4. Kyubey's Insane (4.04 stars, 609 notes)
  5. Normal (1.7 stars, 235 notes)
  6. Raiden's Muzukashii (2.7 stars, 642 notes)
  7. Raiden's Oni (3.92 stars, 934 notes)
Download: Sushi Killer - Zora
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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We have traveled all the way through our city, and you're the only one I want to stay with.
Your hands are exalted, telling me we're going to end our journey.

"Where should we go," you said with a big smile, "...for our last stop?"

I hold your hand tightly. When I'm with you, there's no place I'd rather be.

"Zora."


This story is started by you, and it will never end...
For my dear.





Song list of this mashup
Anamanaguchi - Another Winter
Anamanaguchi - Bosozoku GF
Anamanaguchi - Prom Night
Anamanaguchi - Sting Operation
Anamanaguchi - Densmore

Bitshifter - Hexadecimal Genome
Bitshifter - Magmadiver
Bruno Mars - Treasure (Mecha8bit Remix)

Chibi-Tech - Love is Insecurable (DJ Bouche's Secured Infatuation Mix)
Chibi-Tech - Moe Moe Kyunstep Part 1
Chibi-Tech - Pharamone OVERDOSAGE

Infinity Shred (Starscream) - Galeforce

Jusmi - Reborn

Kairo Kingdom - Don't Shake (Pegboard Nerds Remix)

Lindsay Lowend - Basement Dweller Overture

Maxo - CHALKTOPIA ~CHIPMIX~
Mizuki - Holy Bleep

NNNNNNNNNN - lesfluersdumal

Parkinson White - Sub Zero
Petebro (Peter Berkman) - Time Moves On / OK128

Sabrepulse ft. Knife City - First Crush
Shirobon - I Need You
Shirobon ft. Radix - Cyber Party
Shirobon - I Need You
Sushi Killer - Faito (unreleased)

Trey Frey - Dreaming

Unicorn Kid - Dream Catcher

Virtual Riot - Full Clip

YMCK - Tetrominon






Hey, my best friend
I hope you can see this
I'm really sad after that, because I know you'll never come back
I'll never hear your voice again
but I know, you love music, absolutely.
You called me Nerova, it's a name you gave me. I still love this name.
Your name's first letter is A, so I always write A in capital in my name when I'm mapping.
You don't have an osu! account, so I lend you mine
My skills are much stronger than you, but you don't mind
you always feel happy, especially when you're playing music games with me.
We both love Sushi Killer, when we heard this song he made.
It's a nice song, and it's always your favourite.
We mapped the song together, just you and me.
now you left the map for me, and also, your last dream
I know there's one thing I can do for you
I promise, I'll rank it, to complete that big dream you had before
And make the whole world know that we can make good maps together
In my heart, you're always the best mapper......
I'm sorry, we can't be the best friend forever,
but there's something you have to know
I'll remember the first date we met, the first time we talk
I'll remember the songs we have heard together
I still miss you. I love you, my friend.
arronchu1207
OuO
Pituophis
SUSHI KILLER :D
This needs to be completed! I hope there will at least be a normal since I am still a nub.
Topic Starter
Nerova Riuz GX

Pituophis wrote:

SUSHI KILLER :D
This needs to be completed! I hope there will at least be a normal since I am still a nub.
Yeah I will finish it
normal diff is still in progress
but i'm not good at mapping so it may takes a long time to rank
thank you
MiniBomb
Respone "MiniBomb's Modding Queue"

Hi there , I've completed your beatmap request
here's the result

General
  • I recommend add more hitsounds than just drum
    Fix as much compose warnings as you can
    Reduce the amount of kiai time in all diff
Hard
  • Re-snap 00:42:869 (2) , 00:43:886 (4)
Chu's Insane
  • Replace the circles (from 01:27:277 (3) and 02:54:056 (3) ) to slider
    02:00:666 (1) - Increase the gap between the circles
VisioN
  • Reduce the gap between objects
That's basicly all... for now! ;)
..
P/S : Good song choice :) :)
Topic Starter
Nerova Riuz GX
Sorry but I don't have enough time to reply those mods with full concentration
Because a big exam is coming, and it is very important for me
But I will reply as fast as I can

Edit: Oh I have about 3 hours free time now YAY
Topic Starter
Nerova Riuz GX

UPDATED!
I need to say it first that my English is not good at all
So I can't explain what I'm thinking completely


MiniBomb wrote:

General
  • I recommend add more hitsounds than just drum
    Fix as much compose warnings as you can
    Reduce the amount of kiai time in all diff
    In hitsounds, I use custom hitsounds in my diffs, but Chu didn't
    and about kiai time......i'll try to reduce them in my future updates
Hard
  • Re-snap 00:42:869 (2) , 00:43:886 (4)
    fixed!
VisioN
  • Reduce the gap between objects
    I understand those "gaps" become a problem in your opinion
    but I want them to be a feature of this diff
    so I just change some of the parts and wait for further mod
That's basicly all... for now! ;)
..
P/S : Good song choice :) :)
Thanks, and don't forget to follow Sushi Killer!
Ciyus Miapah
hi from MQ

Vision:
looks your combo didnt consistant with big beats, at overall you need to keep some combo in downbeat especially in kiai time (and this thing needs some fix patterning)
00:25:412 - in this timeline its clearly has strong beats there (same like 00:25:751 - )
01:06:090 (6,7) - looks this jump too sudden and have hard flow, consider reduce this circle 01:06:090 (6) - distance
01:07:616 (5) - make this 1/2 circle pattern, then NC 01:07:785 - ?
01:09:141 (7) - need to NC here (need consistency for your first pattern no matter what was next)
01:13:887 (6,7,8,9) - honestly for what this sliders appear? consider use 1/4 or use circle only for this (but you too much use this so whatever lol)
01:18:124 (4) - this slider have 1/4 pattern sound, why you mapped 1/8 slider?
01:32:870 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this circle jump pattern looks too sudden because that one has overlap thing (i didnt see this pattern in your previous pattern, but idk)
01:40:836 (3,4) - y no triplet? and that jump looks too forced
01:43:039 (2,3) - ._. ( need clickable thing in 01:43:209 - , 01:43:378 - and 01:43:463 -. Consider change your pattern it looks weird)
02:31:853 (5) - you must NC this (pattern difference is very spotted here)
02:46:260 (1,2,3) - this pattern so hard, consider make that thing clearly visible
02:48:124 (1,2,3) - again? (02:48:802 - hear this sound, it's totally strong upbeat you skipped :<, so you should move 02:48:887 (4) - to 02:48:802 - )
02:59:650 (4,5,6,7) - 1/4 pattern is stronger than 1/3 pattern here
03:00:327 (8) - need NC here instead of 03:00:836 (1) -
03:01:005 (2,3) - y no triplet?

at major problems, im not sure about this map (especially at solid patterning in every beats)
you need to talk to BN or whatever to check your map, idk but its my suggestion. and looks like the 1/8 pattern is hard to read, im sure of that

good luck for your map!
Topic Starter
Nerova Riuz GX
UPDATED!

Fort wrote:

hi from MQ
Thanks for accepting my map

Vision:
looks your combo didnt consistant with big beats, at overall you need to keep some combo in downbeat especially in kiai time (and this thing needs some fix patterning)
00:25:412 - in this timeline its clearly has strong beats there (same like 00:25:751 - )
I fixed 00:25:412 , but I don't want to add anything on 00:25:751 because I think that's unnecessary in that part to make it become soft and relax

01:06:090 (6,7) - looks this jump too sudden and have hard flow, consider reduce this circle 01:06:090 (6) - distance
fixed

01:07:616 (5) - make this 1/2 circle pattern, then NC 01:07:785 - ?
fixed

01:09:141 (7) - need to NC here (need consistency for your first pattern no matter what was next)
fixed

01:13:887 (6,7,8,9) - honestly for what this sliders appear? consider use 1/4 or use circle only for this (but you too much use this so whatever lol)
fixed. i just want to stress those "special sounds" (whining?) at the beginning lol

01:18:124 (4) - this slider have 1/4 pattern sound, why you mapped 1/8 slider?
change it to 1/4. i mapped 1/8 because the previous note was 1/8

01:32:870 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this circle jump pattern looks too sudden because that one has overlap thing (i didnt see this pattern in your previous pattern, but idk)
fixed. that's my fault lol

01:40:836 (3,4) - y no triplet? and that jump looks too forced
yeah triplet is a better choice. thanks

01:43:039 (2,3) - ._. ( need clickable thing in 01:43:209 - , 01:43:378 - and 01:43:463 -. Consider change your pattern it looks weird)
fixed......? maybe this pattern will be better......i hope so

02:31:853 (5) - you must NC this (pattern difference is very spotted here)
I have no idea with this part...... is it better to replace them with some double notes?

02:46:260 (1,2,3) - this pattern so hard, consider make that thing clearly visible
This is intentional, and I'll keep it as possible as I can

02:48:124 (1,2,3) - again? (02:48:802 - hear this sound, it's totally strong upbeat you skipped :<, so you should move 02:48:887 (4) - to 02:48:802 - )
the same as 01:43:039

02:59:650 (4,5,6,7) - 1/4 pattern is stronger than 1/3 pattern here
i change it into two triplets. fixed?

03:00:327 (8) - need NC here instead of 03:00:836 (1) -
because of the previous change, I only replace 03:00:836 (1)

03:01:005 (2,3) - y no triplet?
triplet is better, thx

at major problems, im not sure about this map (especially at solid patterning in every beats)
you need to talk to BN or whatever to check your map, idk but its my suggestion. and looks like the 1/8 pattern is hard to read, im sure of that
i'll do as possible as i can

good luck for your map!
thanks.
Anxient
hi! from my modding queue~
Hard

attack on newcombo
00:02:361 (3) - this part doesn't have a beat. Maybe it does, but for hard just follow noticeable beats. move 00:02:616 -
00:05:073 (9) - move to 00:05:327 -
00:13:463 - add HC?
00:36:599 - missing HC?
00:42:022 - ^
00:50:158 (8,8) - place a NC on these notes.
01:14:395 (1) - continue combo
01:14:565 (2) - NC
01:22:022 (1) - continue combo
01:22:700 (3) - NC
02:15:074 (2) - try to shift this a bit more to the left. I recommend x=456 y=144
02:25:073 - missing HC
02:43:718 (1) - continue combo
02:41:175 (1) - ^
02:41:345 (2) - NC
02:44:057 (3) - NC
02:48:802 (1) - continue combo
02:49:480 (3) - NC
02:52:023 (1) - continue combo
02:52:192 (2) - NC
03:03:039 (7) - NC
03:03:887 (1) - continue combo
03:04:395 (3) - NC

Chu's Insane

01:23:887 (2) - ctrl+g
01:33:548 (1) - pull a bit lower. my suggestion would be x=284 y=248
01:41:005 (3) - move to 01:40:921 - extend slider 01:41:175 -
02:49:141 (1) - why NC?
02:49:480 (3) - NC
03:00:327 (2) - is this supposed to be a blanket? move to x=396 y=272
03:14:565 (1) - why nc?

Vision

00:07:107 (1) - try to keep it all inside the grid
00:08:011 (2,3) - ctrl g?
00:25:751 - missing HC?
00:36:599 - add HC
00:36:768 (1) - no beat lands here. delete
00:39:311 - add HC
00:47:277 (4) - erase repeat slider add HC here 00:47:616 -
00:52:700 (3) - change to HC-Slider
01:15:921 (1) - the red tick sliderpoint could be adjusted so that it doesn't curve too much. looks ugly
01:33:208 (7) - NC
01:33:548 (11) - NC
01:49:819 (9) - NC for endpoint :D
02:08:972 (3) - NC
02:09:480 (5) - NC
02:19:650 (6) - NC
02:19:989 (1) - continue
02:22:361 (7) - NC
02:22:531 (8) - continue

Welp that's it for me! good luck~
Topic Starter
Nerova Riuz GX
UPDATED!

Anxient wrote:

hi! from my modding queue~
Thanks for your mod!

Hard

attack on newcombo
00:02:361 (3) - this part doesn't have a beat. Maybe it does, but for hard just follow noticeable beats. move 00:02:616 -
thank you for your notice :P
but it's actually on 1/3 so it should be put on 00:02:587


00:05:073 (9) - move to 00:05:327 -
^

00:13:463 - add HC?
fixed on 00:13:435

00:36:599 - missing HC?
00:42:022 - ^
Nope. i think the sound here is not strong enough to put a circle

00:50:158 (8,8) - place a NC on these notes.
good! fixed.

01:14:395 (1) - continue combo
01:14:565 (2) - NC
Yeah I change their combo
but I add NC on 01:12:531 because I hate two numbers (for example, 10) appear in the same circle


01:22:022 (1) - continue combo
01:22:700 (3) - NC
^
I do that again on 01:21:344


02:15:074 (2) - try to shift this a bit more to the left. I recommend x=456 y=144
I prefer x=464 y=144


02:25:073 - missing HC
I change 02:24:904 into a slider

02:43:718 (1) - continue combo
02:41:175 (1) - ^
02:41:345 (2) - NC
02:44:057 (3) - NC
fixed

02:48:802 (1) - continue combo
02:49:480 (3) - NC
fixed, but I add NC on 02:48:124

02:52:023 (1) - continue combo
02:52:192 (2) - NC
fixed

03:03:039 (7) - NC
03:03:887 (1) - continue combo
03:04:395 (3) - NC
fixed.


Vision

00:07:107 (1) - try to keep it all inside the grid
fixed

00:08:011 (2,3) - ctrl g?
I change them into another way

00:25:751 - missing HC?
I won't add anything here

00:36:599 - add HC
^

00:36:768 (1) - no beat lands here. delete
fixed

00:39:311 - add HC
i will not add more points before 00:44:734 ,(except pattern change)

00:47:277 (4) - erase repeat slider add HC here 00:47:616 -
fixed

00:52:700 (3) - change to HC-Slider
good idea, thanks

01:15:921 (1) - the red tick sliderpoint could be adjusted so that it doesn't curve too much. looks ugly
Oh, that's my fault
I miss that slider when I'm checking my map, thanks


01:33:208 (7) - NC
01:33:548 (11) - NC
01:49:819 (9) - NC for endpoint :D
02:08:972 (3) - NC
02:09:480 (5) - NC
02:19:650 (6) - NC
02:19:989 (1) - continue
02:22:361 (7) - NC
02:22:531 (8) - continue
I fix all of those NC problem

Welp that's it for me! good luck~
Thanks for combo mods
They're really useful to me
Loughje
General
Do different combo colors.
Maybe some more tags that are relevant?
There is the video that you could use if you felt like it.
Definitely a pretty well made map, couldn't find much to change about it.
Chu's Normal
01:10:158 (1) - Seems a bit far from the next slider.
01:42:192 (2,3) - Have the slider end where 3 starts.
Hard
00:07:785 (7) - Delete this.
00:31:853 (1,3,5) - Delete these.
01:15:751 (5) - Id move this out from under the slider.
02:12:531 (3) - ^
02:34:310 (5) - Delete this to match the song better.
VisioN
00:16:486 (3) - Delete this circle.
00:22:361 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Even these out.
00:32:870 (6,7) - Delete these.
01:29:650 (7) - Could add a stream here.
02:08:463 (1,1,1) - Delete these and not don't make them different combos.
Chu's Insane
00:02:616 - Put a circle here.
01:40:158 (4,5,6) - Why are these here?
01:43:209 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Sounds a little off beat.
Definitely put circles at the beginning to match the song like 'Hard' does.

Hopefully this is a little helpful! :D
Topic Starter
Nerova Riuz GX
UPDATED!
I think I need Google translation service to read some of the parts instead of using a dictionary
that will be faster


jloughman14 wrote:

General
Do different combo colors.
OK

Maybe some more tags that are relevant?
IDK. This problem bothers me for a long time, and I still cannot find a good way to solve it.
There's a song list of this mashup, but there will be too much tags if I add them all. Any idea?


There is the video that you could use if you felt like it.
Nope, it's too fancy, and it is not important too.
This is not a TV size song, so i don't have to add an unimportant video and waste your harddisk space.


Definitely a pretty well made map, couldn't find much to change about it.
Thanks, i'll do my best

Hard
00:07:785 (7) - Delete this.
fixed.

00:31:853 (1,3,5) - Delete these.
I know why you want me to delete this, but I want to keep them......
so I solve this into another way, just like what I did in 00:26:090 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:36:938 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:42:361 (1,2,3,4) -


01:15:751 (5) - Id move this out from under the slider.
I move it to the head of 01:15:921 (6) -

02:12:531 (3) - ^
fixed

02:34:310 (5) - Delete this to match the song better.
fixed. nice suggestion

VisioN
00:16:486 (3) - Delete this circle.
nope because I like how it plays /runs, some doubles.

00:22:361 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Even these out.
Now it's close enough to what you said

00:32:870 (6,7) - Delete these.
Seriously, I won't do that
This is a continuous pattern, I will not delete them to keep their consistency


01:29:650 (7) - Could add a stream here.
i won't change the whole slider into a stream, because that's unnecessary
but I add a triple there. it's a really nice suggestion.


02:08:463 (1,1,1) - Delete these and not don't make them different combos.
Same situation, I won't delete this
but I make them in the same combo

Hopefully this is a little helpful! :D
yeah they are really helpful
Specifically the stream in VisioN, and those correction in Hard
Thanks
Loughje

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

IDK. This problem bothers me for a long time, and I still cannot find a good way to solve it.
There's a song list of this mashup, but there will be too much tags if I add them all. Any idea?
Perhaps only use a few of those tags, not a huge amount but at least 7-8 tag's could help.
arronchu1207
MiniBomb
Replace the circles (from 01:27:277 (3) and 02:54:056 (3) ) to slider
02:00:666 (1) - Increase the gap between the circles

Fixed all

Anxient
01:23:887 (2) - ctrl+g
01:33:548 (1) - pull a bit lower. my suggestion would be x=284 y=248
01:41:005 (3) - move to 01:40:921 - extend slider 01:41:175 -
02:49:141 (1) - why NC?
02:49:480 (3) - NC
03:00:327 (2) - is this supposed to be a blanket? move to x=396 y=272
03:14:565 (1) - why nc?

Fixed all

jloughman14
N
01:10:158 (1) - Seems a bit far from the next slider.
01:42:192 (2,3) - Have the slider end where 3 starts.
Fixed all

I
00:02:616 - Put a circle here. no
01:40:158 (4,5,6) - Why are these here?
01:43:209 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Sounds a little off beat.
Definitely put circles at the beginning to match the song like 'Hard' does.
I want to make the beginning easier ,cuz it's not intense

Other, fixed

Thank you all :) !
Topic Starter
Nerova Riuz GX
UPDATED!

Chu's diffs are already uploaded.
change a little bit of offset and combo colour.


But I still not knowing how to deal with the tags problem OMG

OKAY I add some new tags depend on the soundcloud
HERE'S THE LINK
mrturtle99
Hi from my modding queue~
Chu's Normal
00:21:761 (1,1) - seeing as this is the lowest difficulty in the mapset, I would hesitate to include a slider immediately 1 beat after a spinner, so maybe extend the spinner 1 beat and make the slider just the 2nd and 3rd points, or come up with another pattern
00:30:829 (5,6) - I would try to avoid stacking HC's under sliders in easy/normal, as the slider kind of hides the HC, so consider changing up the pattern a little bit
00:42:863 (6,1) - ^
00:55:575 (2,3,4) - I think this blanket looks better if you lower 00:56:253 (3) - by one grid mark (y:248)
01:05:066 (1,1) - same thing as I mentioned first, slider immediately 1 beat after a spinner
01:49:812 (3) - not sure about using 3 HS on 1 HC, consider using just one HS per note
02:19:643 (8,1) - I think this blanket looks better if you move 02:19:982 (1) - over 1 grid unit (x:240)
02:31:846 (1,1) - more slider after spinner
03:11:507 (5) - if you move to 03:11:676 - it sounds more in line with the vocal-ish stuff in the music, if that is the rhythm that the HC's are following
Hard
00:40:490 (4,5) - might want to move 00:40:998 (5) - to x:196 so it is directly over the curve in the slider for a better looking blanket
01:09:134 (2,3) - with this blanket try moving 01:09:304 (3) - over 2 grid units (x:48) as I feel the blanket looks better this way
01:15:236 (3,4) - not sure if this is supposed to be a blanket, but if it is, please fix it (I like x:396 y:120)
01:15:914 (6,7) - try moving 01:16:422 (7) - to x:160 y:196 so it is in the middle of the slider curve
02:35:914 (2,3) - if you are trying to blanket this, move 02:36:084 (3) - to x:464 so the HC is in the middle of the slider curve
02:42:185 (4) - you might want to move this to x:112 y:272 for a better blanket with 02:42:015 (3) -
02:42:694 (6,7) - same thing as with 01:15:914 (6,7) -
02:57:439 (9) - try moving this over 2 grid units (x:320) so the slider curve is in line with 02:57:270 (8) -
Chu's Insane
02:27:100 (4) - I would recommend putting a NC here as there is a NC every 3 beats in the pattern 02:25:066 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
Topic Starter
Nerova Riuz GX
UPDATED!

mrturtle99 wrote:

Hi from my modding queue~
Thank you for accepting my map

Hard
00:40:490 (4,5) - might want to move 00:40:998 (5) - to x:196 so it is directly over the curve in the slider for a better looking blanket
fixed. nice suggestion, I didn't mention it before lol

01:09:134 (2,3) - with this blanket try moving 01:09:304 (3) - over 2 grid units (x:48) as I feel the blanket looks better this way
wow. fixed.

01:15:236 (3,4) - not sure if this is supposed to be a blanket, but if it is, please fix it (I like x:396 y:120)
COOL

01:15:914 (6,7) - try moving 01:16:422 (7) - to x:160 y:196 so it is in the middle of the slider curve
AWESOME

02:35:914 (2,3) - if you are trying to blanket this, move 02:36:084 (3) - to x:464 so the HC is in the middle of the slider curve
GREAT

02:42:185 (4) - you might want to move this to x:112 y:272 for a better blanket with 02:42:015 (3) -
Not really, but I move 02:42:015 (3) -

02:42:694 (6,7) - same thing as with 01:15:914 (6,7) -
NICE

02:57:439 (9) - try moving this over 2 grid units (x:320) so the slider curve is in line with 02:57:270 (8) -
PERFECT
Wow that's a great mention to me with a lot of blanket fixed
Appreciate it!!!!!
qxqd_1993
小新人前來膜拜視HARD如Normal的大神_(:з」∠)_

HARD:
00:05:320(1,2)&00:13:371(1,2) Shall we blanket them?【這些真的不用blanket么……逼死處女座系列】
00:17:609(1,2,3,4,5) I guess this combo does not tune, Maybe Fix slider 5?【我有一種樓主是打算在這裡做一個過渡的感覺?但是好像兩邊的調子都對不上?我想著Circle 3 可以留空拍或者Slider 5需要做一點微調】
00:28:117(5) & 00:28:795(1,4) i have another idea that to NC at First point, Change Slider at second point into stream, Change Circle 4 into slider link to 5 and NC this new Slider【我有個想法就是把00:28:117(5)給New一個Combo然後把00:28:795(1)的combo消掉並且轉成連打,再把00:28:795(4,5)改成一個滑條然後再這裡New一個Combo】

VisioN:
00:05:744(2,3,4,5) try make Sampleset better here【總覺得音效的設置不夠好,讓人覺得節奏比較混亂】
00:23:032 A better transition than Hard【這裡的處理比HARD要好得多,順利地轉移到了新的主旋律上】
00:50:024(1,2,3,4) redo this stream【把這個連打做出弧線好不好?】
01:05:575 I love this stream【這個連打不但打出了美觀和自己的節奏,而且和曲子的配合也毫不遜色,簡直是整個譜子里最好的演繹】
01:12:100 Circle is your lie【圈6是你的謊言_(:з」∠)_】
01:15:236 Another Nice Combo【又是一個精彩的Combo】
01:21:846 I am puzzled again with this combo【從曲子上講Slider 2似乎是不太值得回來的……而且Circle 3也感覺不到表達出了什麽……和後面 02:35:405 地方感覺起來根本不能比……】
02:08:456 Nice Circles again【這里的演繹也很有感覺】
02:43:710 Stream does not fit, try something else【感覺這裡的連打即使破壞了音樂本體原有的連貫性也沒有凸顯出自己的節奏,++不爽】
02:58:965(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) Redo these Sliders with arcs?【這裡用Sliders的確是一個非常不錯的選擇,但是如果做點微調,增加這裡的連貫性感覺會更好?】
03:09:685(5) A terrible feeling slider【這個Slider真的感覺好奇怪,因為它在一個新音節開始的地方中止了,是不是可以考慮和這里的4、下組的1組合拆成Slider+Circle+Slider的結構?】



OTHERS:
I did everything I AM ABLE TO as a beginner【我想就我現在的水平來講我已經盡力了,如果有什麽不對的地放給您帶來麻煩的話希望能不計前嫌地幫助我,謝謝_(:з」∠)_】
All personal opinion above【所以上面都是些《一己之見》】
Should i take care about guest Diff?【要我管那些Guest Diff么?私信我的話我還會再躺尸回來的……】
Topic Starter
Nerova Riuz GX
UPDATED!
本串第一個中文mod就是你啦

qxqd_1993 wrote:

小新人前來膜拜視HARD如Normal的大神_(:з」∠)_
那個Normal根本是標準的Normal啊qwq
皮皮的Normal標準是2.25星以下 但是這個2.30 qwq
還有其實這裡都中文通不必介意


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HARD:
00:05:320(1,2)&00:13:371(1,2) Shall we blanket them?【這些真的不用blanket么……逼死處女座系列】
不了,在這裡Blanket不是個在Hard的好選擇,但是我調整了一點點Circle的位置

00:17:609(1,2,3,4,5) I guess this combo does not tune, Maybe Fix slider 5?【我有一種樓主是打算在這裡做一個過渡的感覺?但是好像兩邊的調子都對不上?我想著Circle 3 可以留空拍或者Slider 5需要做一點微調】
因為沒有放滿所有音,所以不是很想留空拍,因為那樣會......很空虛(?) 不過我把4換成了來回,5換成HC,這樣應該會好點?

00:28:117(5) & 00:28:795(1,4) i have another idea that to NC at First point, Change Slider at second point into stream, Change Circle 4 into slider link to 5 and NC this new Slider【我有個想法就是把00:28:117(5)給New一個Combo然後把00:28:795(1)的combo消掉並且轉成連打,再把00:28:795(4,5)改成一個滑條然後再這裡New一個Combo】
前面這段就我認為應該是要比較簡單、比較放鬆點的,所以出現連打並不是個好選擇

VisioN:
00:05:744(2,3,4,5) try make Sampleset better here【總覺得音效的設置不夠好,讓人覺得節奏比較混亂】
這裡原先並沒有任何的Sampleset出現,可能是因為Hit太大聲的原因......我改小聲點
而且這是個mashup,加越多會越亂,只能盡量控制下不要壓過去


00:23:032 A better transition than Hard【這裡的處理比HARD要好得多,順利地轉移到了新的主旋律上】
謝謝鼓勵

00:50:024(1,2,3,4) redo this stream【把這個連打做出弧線好不好?】
呃這事實上不是個連打,但弧線是個好主意

01:05:575 I love this stream【這個連打不但打出了美觀和自己的節奏,而且和曲子的配合也毫不遜色,簡直是整個譜子里最好的演繹】
謝謝誇獎

01:12:100 Circle is your lie【圈6是你的謊言_(:з」∠)_】
這不就是一個經典補位的概念嗎www

01:15:236 Another Nice Combo【又是一個精彩的Combo】
有人在抱怨那裏不該出現1/8的啊囧

01:21:846 I am puzzled again with this combo【從曲子上講Slider 2似乎是不太值得回來的……而且Circle 3也感覺不到表達出了什麽……和後面 02:35:405 地方感覺起來根本不能比……】
我取消了來回,補上了一個HC。

02:08:456 Nice Circles again【這里的演繹也很有感覺】
+1

02:43:710 Stream does not fit, try something else【感覺這裡的連打即使破壞了音樂本體原有的連貫性也沒有凸顯出自己的節奏,++不爽】
不錯的提醒。 我把2去掉,成了HC+三連

02:58:965(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) Redo these Sliders with arcs?【這裡用Sliders的確是一個非常不錯的選擇,但是如果做點微調,增加這裡的連貫性感覺會更好?】
我有點難想像你連貫性的概念,所以就自己處理了一番,也確實有好了點

03:09:685(5) A terrible feeling slider【這個Slider真的感覺好奇怪,因為它在一個新音節開始的地方中止了,是不是可以考慮和這里的4、下組的1組合拆成Slider+Circle+Slider的結構?】
媽呀這根本最佳留言了這
我搞了半小時都無解的問題你一句話就好了


OTHERS:
I did everything I AM ABLE TO as a beginner【我想就我現在的水平來講我已經盡力了,如果有什麽不對的地放給您帶來麻煩的話希望能不計前嫌地幫助我,謝謝_(:з」∠)_】
就我個人來說我覺得這塊沒有新手這東西,只有有沒有理解的差別
雖然你現在達不到可以PASS甚至是FC的技術,但是因為如此你的意見更為特別,反而具有參考性
不管怎麼說我覺得你可以繼續保持

All personal opinion above【所以上面都是些《一己之見》】
Should i take care about guest Diff?【要我管那些Guest Diff么?私信我的話我還會再躺尸回來的……】
如果你要躺屍回來的話我會歡迎你的OwO
另外Guest Diff要不要碰就屬於你的自由意志了,我也不好要求你,只是我無法另外再多給你Kudosu便是
還有 arronchu1207 也是中文通www
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