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Ikimono Gakari - Blue Bird [OsuMania]

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N i c o_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014년 7월 17일 목요일 at 오전 12:44:28

Artist: Ikimono Gakari
Title: Blue Bird
Source: Naruto Shippuden
Tags: Naruto Pop'n_opening_3
BPM: 152
Filesize: 5476kb
Play Time: 01:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard - 7Key (2.71 stars, 675 notes)
  2. Insane - 7Key (4.18 stars, 1038 notes)
  3. Normal - 7Key (2 stars, 434 notes)
Download: Ikimono Gakari - Blue Bird
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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バット奴ら一ヶ月に近くバブル要請を受けていない。一体何をするのか
Bruce
Hello.Mod by request.Column:1 2 3 4 5 6 7
[General]
First Suggest you rename your Diffs:
Easy-->Normal
Normal-->Hyper.

Easy N icon
And Normal H icon is little strange

[Easy]
00:14:013 (14013|3) - Move to 1.If a right-hand space user play this map.It will feel a little comfortale.

00:18:553 (18553|3) - Move to 2.Already push Space right now.So here Move to 2

00:20:132 (20132|1) - Move to 6.This key set is too hard for Easy/Normal

00:25:066 (25066|5) - The Long Note should be start at here.Not 00:25:263 (25263|4) - So delete this

00:25:855 (25855|1) - Change to Hold.End at 00:26:447 -

00:26:250 (26250|2,26250|6) - It seems you catch vocal here.But not completely.recommend you delete these

00:32:566 (32566|5) - Move to 00:32:763 -

00:37:697 (37697|3,37697|0) - Delete these.In 01:18:750 (78750|1) - my opinion here needn't use 4Notes to express heavy beat.And it is too hard for Easy/Normal

00:49:144 - ~00:50:328 - At least change to 2notes.

00:52:993 (52993|5) - Sorry..But i can't stand this note means

00:57:829 (57829|2,58026|2) - Delete these.Haven't any meaning and Add the map's diffcult

01:02:565 - ~01:02:960 - At least change to 2 Notes

01:18:750 (78750|1) - Move to 5

Finally at the end.I can't believe in the Easy here has 1/4 stairs

01:30:789 - And what is this... :o


Normal and Another will come when i have spare time.Good Luck~
ArcherLove
hi hi ~

mod click ~
collumn : |1|~|7|

[General]
add tags: pop'n opening 3 http://puu.sh/9NEGO/91cf541f4a.png



[Easy]
Re-name this diff to normal :)
hp=7 OD =7


00:10:066 (10066|3) - move to 7 ?
00:10:461 (10461|6,10658|4) - change collumn to 6-4 (6 and 4)
00:32:566 (32566|5) - move to 7?
01:18:553 (78553|1) - move to 6 or 5 ?
01:19:934 (79934|3) - move to 2 ?
01:19:934 (79934|3,90789|6,90888|5,90987|4,91086|3,91184|2,91283|1,91382|0) - considering changing this into normal note :)

[Normal]
Re-name this diff to hard :) Or Hyper
HP = 8 OD = 7

00:01:579 (1579|0,1579|2) - change collumn to : 4-6 ? ( 4 and 6)
01:13:223 ~ 01:14:210 - so empty ... add some note !
01:30:691 (90691|1) - move to 4
01:31:382 (91382|4,91382|0) - change to long note please :3

[Another]
Re-name this diff to Insane :D (or no.. if you Change the "normal” Diff name to Hyper.)

00:10:066 (10066|4) - move to 2 ?
00:11:053 (11053|3) - move to 6 ?
00:45:493 (45493|3) - move to 7 ?
00:49:539 (49539|2,49539|5,49539|0,49737|3,49737|6,49737|1,49737|4,49934|1,49934|3,49934|6,49934|4,50132|4,50132|1,50132|6,50132|3) - hmm.... this kind of note it unrankable, I mean 7K all key press ... maximum = 6K all key press... it's up to you to delete which note ~
01:17:270 (77270|6) - move to 6 ?

Very Nice mapset :)

がんばって!
Good luck !
Topic Starter
N i c o_old

Simple_Star wrote:

Hello.Mod by request.Column:1 2 3 4 5 6 7
[General]
First Suggest you rename your Diffs:
Easy-->Normal
Normal-->Hyper.

OK! However, i changed Normal to Hard.

Easy N icon
And Normal H icon is little strange

I think so~

[Easy]
00:14:013 (14013|3) - Move to 1.If a right-hand space user play this map.It will feel a little comfortale.

OK!

00:18:553 (18553|3) - Move to 2.Already push Space right now.So here Move to 2

OK!

00:20:132 (20132|1) - Move to 6.This key set is too hard for Easy/Normal

OK!

00:25:066 (25066|5) - The Long Note should be start at here.Not 00:25:263 (25263|4) - So delete this

No, the note is keysounded. you should click it and check the sounds.

00:25:855 (25855|1) - Change to Hold.End at 00:26:447 -

i added LN. but not deleted.

00:26:250 (26250|2,26250|6) - It seems you catch vocal here.But not completely.recommend you delete these

Not vocal, this is drum sound.

00:32:566 (32566|5) - Move to 00:32:763 -

OK!

00:37:697 (37697|3,37697|0) - Delete these.

I deleted 0 column.

In 01:18:750 (78750|1) - my opinion here needn't use 4Notes to express heavy beat.And it is too hard for Easy/Normal I changed to column.

I changed it to 5 column.

00:49:144 - ~00:50:328 - At least change to 2notes.

The 3 notes are have each different sounds. i don't want to delete.

00:52:993 (52993|5) - Sorry..But i can't stand this note means

its keysounded.

00:57:829 (57829|2,58026|2) - Delete these.Haven't any meaning and Add the map's diffcult

I changed 57829/2 note to 5 column.

01:02:565 - ~01:02:960 - At least change to 2 Notes

Here also has each different keysounded.

01:18:750 (78750|1) - Move to 5

OK!

Finally at the end.I can't believe in the Easy here has 1/4 stairs

01:30:789 - And what is this... :o

I know this final part is so hard for Easy/Normal. but maybe i need some example pattern to accept and change pattern. sorry.

Normal and Another will come when i have spare time.Good Luck~

Sorry to refuse some of mod suggestion.. I feel so sorry.. but your mod was so helpful! Thank you :)
Topic Starter
N i c o_old

ArcherLove wrote:

hi hi ~

mod click ~
collumn : |1|~|7|

[General]
add tags: pop'n opening 3 http://puu.sh/9NEGO/91cf541f4a.png



How did you know it?! :D

[Easy]
Re-name this diff to normal :)
hp=7 OD =7


OK!

00:10:066 (10066|3) - move to 7 ?

Sorry T.T

00:10:461 (10461|6,10658|4) - change collumn to 6-4 (6 and 4)

OK!

00:32:566 (32566|5) - move to 7?

OK!

01:18:553 (78553|1) - move to 6 or 5 ?

6!

01:19:934 (79934|3) - move to 2 ?

Sorry T.T

01:19:934 (79934|3,90789|6,90888|5,90987|4,91086|3,91184|2,91283|1,91382|0) - considering changing this into normal note :)

I want to change if i have some great pattern idea :)

[Normal]
Re-name this diff to hard :) Or Hyper
HP = 8 OD = 7

Hard!

00:01:579 (1579|0,1579|2) - change collumn to : 4-6 ? ( 4 and 6)

Sorry T.T

01:13:223 ~ 01:14:210 - so empty ... add some note !

I added with some drum sound!

01:30:691 (90691|1) - move to 4

I moved to 3!

01:31:382 (91382|4,91382|0) - change to long note please :3

Sorry T.T its not comfotable to play..

[Another]
Re-name this diff to Insane :D (or no.. if you Change the "normal” Diff name to Hyper.)

Insane!

00:10:066 (10066|4) - move to 2 ?

Sorry T.T

00:11:053 (11053|3) - move to 6 ?

OK!

00:45:493 (45493|3) - move to 7 ?

Sorry T.T

00:49:539 (49539|2,49539|5,49539|0,49737|3,49737|6,49737|1,49737|4,49934|1,49934|3,49934|6,49934|4,50132|4,50132|1,50132|6,50132|3) - hmm.... this kind of note it unrankable, I mean 7K all key press ... maximum = 6K all key press... it's up to you to delete which note ~

I changed note pattern.. i think now is okay~

01:17:270 (77270|6) - move to 6 ?

OK!

Very Nice mapset :)

がんばって!
Good luck !

Thanks to help my map! but i feel so sorry to refuse your some of mod suggestion, however. it was so helpful! Thank you :)
Arzenvald
yo, seems like you already got 2 helpful mods, and i hope i able to point out and mod some errors..

[General]
i like your mapping style.. :3 you can make the pattern and the keysound more precise, but so far, i like this
but as i and richardfeder said before, things you consider to fix is the keysound format file and the Background
its recommended to use 1024x768 image resolution

[Insane]
00:13:224 (13224|6,13322|5,13421|4,13520|3,13618|0,13618|2,13717|1,13816|5,13816|0) - i can't hear 6 instruments playing at the same time, except only the piano itself, so perhaps you want to re map them, like :


00:14:013 (14013|0) - move to 3 or 4

http://www... noodles is too hard from 01:19:934 (79934|0) - until 01:23:191 (83191|0) -
you need more mods for this pattern, even though it's fun... ><
my advice is don't layering the longnotes, without a clear sounded instruments.

01:28:717 (88717|3) - move to 3

[Hard]

00:25:855 (25855|6,25954|4,26053|2) - ctrl+h for hand balance

00:45:197 (45197|4,45296|6,45395|4,45493|6,45592|4,45691|6) - drilling while holding a note with right hand is too much, try

01:31:381 (91381|4,91381|0,91382|5,91382|3) - in the ending, perhaps you want to add longnote, like on Insane diff

[Normal]

00:50:724 (50724|2,50724|0,50921|1,50921|3,51118|4,51118|2,51316|3,51316|5) -

00:52:105 (52105|2,52895|0,53487|2,54671|3,54868|6,55066|0,55263|2,56053|3,56447|6,56645|5,57039|6,57829|3,58026|5,58224|0,58421|2,59211|4,59803|3) - longnote patterns following the vocal, which its very hard for normal (even more, Hard doesn't have the same longnotes which make hard is easier than normal), also it has no keysound, consider to remove them all...
OR
try to make pattern like on this part : 01:04:737 (64737|0,65131|4,65526|5,66118|0,66513|6,66711|4,66908|0) - by following the harmonica

01:30:789 (90789|6,90888|5,90986|4,91086|3,91184|2,91283|1,91382|0) - change them into circles instead, it won't affect the keysound


----------------------

hope it's helping.. good luck!
yoshilove
わからないところがあれば、PMください~

column : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7


ねこねこ Mod
[Normal]
00:58:322 (58322|6) - remove 消したほうがいいかもしれない。 ノーマルにしてはやりにくく また、音がない?
01:02:763 - Add note to 4 and 7です! ドラム音あります
01:22:697 (82697|6,82796|5,82895|4,82993|3,83092|2,83191|1,83289|0) -
この階段なんですが難しすぎるとおもうのです。消すことをお勧めしますが Keysoundどうしたらいいんだろ。

01:23:486 ~ ここからLN2本になってますが 1本のほうがいいかもしれないです。
ハードレベルだと思います。


・・・見てから気がつきました このノーマルはすでにハードにしているんですね。

Rankedのルール上簡単なDiffが必要なので、ノーマルとして作ってみてください!!

[Hard]
01:01:776 - add note to 4
01:01:974 (61974|3) - move to 5
01:01:973 - add note to 3
01:02:763 - add note to 4, 7
01:03:157 - add note to 5

[Insane]
00:46:974 (46974|3,46974|1) -
00:47:763 ~ ちょっとLNがボーカルなのか、入り方がよくわからない・・・。ので こうしてみては? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1765239
00:50:328 - add note to 2, 6
00:52:105 (52105|4) - LNの終点がずれています end to 00:52:894
00:52:993 (52993|0) - LNの始点がずれています start to 00:52:894

00:56:250 (56250|3) - remove ~?00:55:657 こことは違って弱い音なので、
00:56:447 (56447|6) - move to 4 押しやすくするために
00:56:645 (56645|3) - move to 5

01:20:328 - Unrankable LNの終点はいいんだけど 始点が7つ同時押しになっていてはいけないのです。
(More than 6 notes simultaneously is not allowed.)
なので
ちょっと空間が! ってなりますが
ここから 01:20:328 徐々に音が重なっていくので こんな感じでどうでしょう。
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1765255

  • (use 1/6) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1765270
    01:31:381 (91381|6) - LN end 01:36:513
    01:31:382 (91382|2) - LN end 01:36:578
    01:31:381 (91381|1) - LN end 01:36:644
    01:31:382 (91382|0) - LN end 01:36:710

meow
OMEGAffection
Hi~~~~
Mod by request. Column:1 2 3 4 5 6 7

[Insane]
00:25:362 (25362|3) - これを消して
00:25:461 (25461|1) - add a note
00:25:559 (25559|5) - ^ 強い音を同時押しにすると演奏感がでます

00:25:757 (25757|3) - これも同じく消します
00:25:855 (25855|1) - add a note
00:25:954 (25954|5) - ^
00:26:053 (26053|3) - 流れを崩さないためにこのnoteも削除します

このような形 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1765342
または https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1765345 にしてみてはどうでしょう

00:39:572 (39572|4) - 取っていない音があります。前のLNを単発にし、noteを追加しましょう https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1765355

00:45:000 (45000|0) - LNの間でtrillは凄くやりにくいです。https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1765362 このような形で気持よくできたほうがいいと思います。

00:50:131 (50131|0) - 音がノート数に負けています。減らしましょう。ノートを1つにして
00:50:329 (50329|3) - にyoshiloveさんのようにノーツを追加が良いです。

01:23:092 (83092|6) - と 01:23:191 (83191|4) - は削除

01:29:605 (89605|5) - ノートを1つ消して、move to 1 or 2 or 3
01:29:999 (89999|0) - と 01:30:395 (90395|0) - は音はあるかもしれないが、プレイしていて必要ないと感じました。

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1765399 このような形はどうでしょう?

よくわからないところがあったらまた聞いて下さい。
Topic Starter
N i c o_old

ajeemaniz wrote:

yo, seems like you already got 2 helpful mods, and i hope i able to point out and mod some errors..

[General]
i like your mapping style.. :3 you can make the pattern and the keysound more precise, but so far, i like this
but as i and richardfeder said before, things you consider to fix is the keysound format file and the Background
its recommended to use 1024x768 image resolution

I will change it :) Thank you!

[Insane]
00:13:224 (13224|6,13322|5,13421|4,13520|3,13618|0,13618|2,13717|1,13816|5,13816|0) - i can't hear 6 instruments playing at the same time, except only the piano itself, so perhaps you want to re map them, like :


Well, actually this is mp3 keysounded problem.

i can change it smoothly by changing mp3 keysounded to wav or something. Thank you!

00:14:013 (14013|0) - move to 3 or 4

OK!

http://www... noodles is too hard from 01:19:934 (79934|0) - until 01:23:191 (83191|0) -
you need more mods for this pattern, even though it's fun... ><
my advice is don't layering the longnotes, without a clear sounded instruments.

I considering that changing this pattern.. Thanks to advice it!

01:28:717 (88717|3) - move to 3

OK!

[Hard]

00:25:855 (25855|6,25954|4,26053|2) - ctrl+h for hand balance

OK!

00:45:197 (45197|4,45296|6,45395|4,45493|6,45592|4,45691|6) - drilling while holding a note with right hand is too much, try

OK!

01:31:381 (91381|4,91381|0,91382|5,91382|3) - in the ending, perhaps you want to add longnote, like on Insane diff

OK!

[Normal]

00:50:724 (50724|2,50724|0,50921|1,50921|3,51118|4,51118|2,51316|3,51316|5) -

OK!

00:52:105 (52105|2,52895|0,53487|2,54671|3,54868|6,55066|0,55263|2,56053|3,56447|6,56645|5,57039|6,57829|3,58026|5,58224|0,58421|2,59211|4,59803|3) - longnote patterns following the vocal, which its very hard for normal (even more, Hard doesn't have the same longnotes which make hard is easier than normal), also it has no keysound, consider to remove them all...
OR
try to make pattern like on this part : 01:04:737 (64737|0,65131|4,65526|5,66118|0,66513|6,66711|4,66908|0) - by following the harmonica

I remaked LN density to easily :3 Thank you!

01:30:789 (90789|6,90888|5,90986|4,91086|3,91184|2,91283|1,91382|0) - change them into circles instead, it won't affect the keysound


Thank you!

----------------------

hope it's helping.. good luck!

Great! It was so helpful for my map! you pointed many things even not only pattern.. thank you!
Topic Starter
N i c o_old

yoshilove wrote:

わからないところがあれば、PMください~

column : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7


ねこねこ Mod
[Normal]
00:58:322 (58322|6) - remove 消したほうがいいかもしれない。 ノーマルにしてはやりにくく また、音がない?
01:02:763 - Add note to 4 and 7です! ドラム音あります
01:22:697 (82697|6,82796|5,82895|4,82993|3,83092|2,83191|1,83289|0) -
この階段なんですが難しすぎるとおもうのです。消すことをお勧めしますが Keysoundどうしたらいいんだろ。

01:23:486 ~ ここからLN2本になってますが 1本のほうがいいかもしれないです。
ハードレベルだと思います。


・・・見てから気がつきました このノーマルはすでにハードにしているんですね。

Rankedのルール上簡単なDiffが必要なので、ノーマルとして作ってみてください!!

ありがとうございます!頑張ります!

[Hard]
01:01:776 - add note to 4

OK!

01:01:974 (61974|3) - move to 5

OK!

01:01:973 - add note to 3

Sorry T.T

01:02:763 - add note to 4, 7

OK!

01:03:157 - add note to 5

入れてみようかな。。思っていたが適切なKeysoundがないのですね。。Sorry T.T

[Insane]
00:46:974 (46974|3,46974|1) -
00:47:763 ~ ちょっとLNがボーカルなのか、入り方がよくわからない・・・。ので こうしてみては? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1765239

まず、Vocal Soundはありません。ベースとドラム·サウンドで構成されている部分です。続きを含ま見れば分かると思います。Sorry T.T

00:50:328 - add note to 2, 6

OK!

00:52:105 (52105|4) - LNの終点がずれています end to 00:52:894

OK!

00:52:993 (52993|0) - LNの始点がずれています start to 00:52:894

OK!

00:56:250 (56250|3) - remove ~?00:55:657 こことは違って弱い音なので、

確かに以前の3ノートよりも音は弱いです。が、実際に音が弱く聞こえる理由は流音キーのサウンドが既に調整されているからです。Sorry T.T

00:56:447 (56447|6) - move to 4 押しやすくするために

この部分から修正した場合、何かおかしくなってしまいますね。。Sorry T.T

00:56:645 (56645|3) - move to 5 ^ Sorry T.T

01:20:328 - Unrankable LNの終点はいいんだけど 始点が7つ同時押しになっていてはいけないのです。
(More than 6 notes simultaneously is not allowed.)
なので
ちょっと空間が! ってなりますが
ここから 01:20:328 徐々に音が重なっていくので こんな感じでどうでしょう。
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1765255

Adviceありがとうございます!一応個人的にはこの部分に関してのAdviceを最大限集めて見て決定を下すべき部分だと思います

  • (use 1/6) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1765270
    01:31:381 (91381|6) - LN end 01:36:513
    01:31:382 (91382|2) - LN end 01:36:578
    01:31:381 (91381|1) - LN end 01:36:644
    01:31:382 (91382|0) - LN end 01:36:710

ALL OK!

meow

やはり日本語で作業したほうが確実に楽だと感じてしまいました。wwww良いアドバイス本当にありがとうございます! ^ ^
Topic Starter
N i c o_old

OmegaJack wrote:

Hi~~~~
Mod by request. Column:1 2 3 4 5 6 7

[Insane]
00:25:362 (25362|3) - これを消して
00:25:461 (25461|1) - add a note
00:25:559 (25559|5) - ^ 強い音を同時押しにすると演奏感がでます

00:25:757 (25757|3) - これも同じく消します
00:25:855 (25855|1) - add a note
00:25:954 (25954|5) - ^
00:26:053 (26053|3) - 流れを崩さないためにこのnoteも削除します

このような形 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1765342
または https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1765345 にしてみてはどうでしょう

いAdviceありがとうございます!確かにこのようにされたパターンが打撃感が良いと思いますが、シンクとKeysoundが合わないですね。。
もちろん、パターンは重要な部分だと思いますが、Rankedのためなら、優先的に、基本的な構成であるシンクのような部分が間違っていれば失格となってしまいます。。Sorry T.T

00:39:572 (39572|4) - 取っていない音があります。前のLNを単発にし、noteを追加しましょう https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1765355

OK!

00:45:000 (45000|0) - LNの間でtrillは凄くやりにくいです。https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1765362 このような形で気持よくできたほうがいいと思います。

OK!

00:50:131 (50131|0) - 音がノート数に負けています。減らしましょう。ノートを1つにして

確かに音が比較的弱い部分であるが、既にKeysoundによって調節されている部分なので、クリアすると、音がなくなってしまう。。Sorry T.T

00:50:329 (50329|3) - にyoshiloveさんのようにノーツを追加が良いです。

OK!

01:23:092 (83092|6) - と 01:23:191 (83191|4) - は削除

ピアノの音に埋もれてはいるが、ドラム·サウンドの役割を果たしています。。 Sorry T.T

01:29:605 (89605|5) - ノートを1つ消して、move to 1 or 2 or 3

確かに、無意味なKeysound調整だと思います。。OK!

3!

01:29:999 (89999|0) - と 01:30:395 (90395|0) - は音はあるかもしれないが、プレイしていて必要ないと感じました。

ドラムのサウンドを持っているKeysoundたちです。消す代わりに提供してくださっScreenshotに合わせて調節してみました。

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1765399 このような形はどうでしょう?

よくわからないところがあったらまた聞いて下さい。

良いAdvice本当にありがとうございます!多くの助けになったと思います。まだまだ下手なMapだと思うけどきっといつかRanked Mapに会ってみましょう!オメガさんのトップランクにも期待している。 :D
richardfeder
Just a quick check though. Hi~~~
Mod are just suggestion, overall it's your choice to make the decision plz remember this if you prefer your way then don't hesitate to refuse any mod that you don't like!

General: What's wrong with the bottom of your BG? >,<
mp3 format for keysound is not recommend, would better use wav instead
Normal
If you want to make this mapset ranked then make Normal slightly easier overall. Now it's 2.09 star and it is required to be under 2.00 star eg. 01:30:691 - ending is obviously harder than Normal in general so make that part easier would help this out.

00:25:855 (25855|1) - move left by one column

00:26:842 - pattern from here seems to be a little bit random and unorganized. I highly recommend you to redo the pattern from here to 00:37:697 -. Try to put notes in the order of pitch(it would be easy to do so since you already keysounded them) or something else

00:52:105 (52105|2,52500|1,52894|0,53289|1) - avoid putting a note right beside a LN especially in the easiest diff. that's quite hard and not very handy. You can check this on your own (also some similar pattern like 00:57:828 (57828|3,58026|2,58026|1) - )

Hard
00:06:907 - just a suggestion >,< https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1766844

00:16:184 (16184|4,16382|6) - move left by one column

00:17:171 (17171|2) - use a LN instead?(stop at 00:17:566 - )

00:50:329 (50329|3,50329|5) - this kind of instrument is not recommend to map as LN... I think normal notes are fine.
I would do this:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1766912 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1766918

00:58:322 (58322|6) - move to central column and
00:57:829 (57829|3,58026|4,58224|5) - move right by one column

01:22:697 (82697|6,82796|5,82895|4,82993|3,83092|2,83191|1) - so evil lel
I can't mod Insane since I am not good at o2jam style notechart/LN x.x
Sorry!
And good luck~~
Topic Starter
N i c o_old

richardfeder wrote:

Just a quick check though. Hi~~~
Mod are just suggestion, overall it's your choice to make the decision plz remember this if you prefer your way then don't hesitate to refuse any mod that you don't like!

General: What's wrong with the bottom of your BG? >,<

I changed to other size!

mp3 format for keysound is not recommend, would better use wav instead

b..but... i can't upload because it become too big size map....

Normal
If you want to make this mapset ranked then make Normal slightly easier overall. Now it's 2.09 star and it is required to be under 2.00 star eg. 01:30:691 - ending is obviously harder than Normal in general so make that part easier would help this out.

I tried to change it myself! but i don't know its better than before :( at least, i guess star rating was down!

00:25:855 (25855|1) - move left by one column

OK!

00:26:842 - pattern from here seems to be a little bit random and unorganized. I highly recommend you to redo the pattern from here to 00:37:697 -. Try to put notes in the order of pitch(it would be easy to do so since you already keysounded them) or something else

actually, i don't know what should i do. its basic difficult and maybe don't need various pattern. its only my opinon. but i changed~

00:52:105 (52105|2,52500|1,52894|0,53289|1) - avoid putting a note right beside a LN especially in the easiest diff. that's quite hard and not very handy. You can check this on your own (also some similar pattern like 00:57:828 (57828|3,58026|2,58026|1) - )

i don't want to change it since the part is not affect to star rating much. Sorry T.T

Hard
00:06:907 - just a suggestion >,< https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1766844

OK!

00:16:184 (16184|4,16382|6) - move left by one column

OK!

00:17:171 (17171|2) - use a LN instead?(stop at 00:17:566 - )

OK!

00:50:329 (50329|3,50329|5) - this kind of instrument is not recommend to map as LN... I think normal notes are fine.
I would do this:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1766912 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1766918

OK!

00:58:322 (58322|6) - move to central column and

OK!

00:57:829 (57829|3,58026|4,58224|5) - move right by one column

OK!

01:22:697 (82697|6,82796|5,82895|4,82993|3,83092|2,83191|1) - so evil lel

hahaha evil :P i consider it too since you pointed it. thank you :)
I can't mod Insane since I am not good at o2jam style notechart/LN x.x
Sorry!
And good luck~~
Thank you! Star rating pro yeeeeeee :) it was so helpful! Thanks to help my map and mod~
HOST_old
IRC MOD<3
01:23 N i c o: hello.. can i ask a mod to you if you don't mind?
01:24 HOST: noproblem<3
01:24 N i c o: Thank you <33333
01:24 N i c o: fisrt, can you test play my map?
01:24 N i c o: or... no... actually dont have to?
01:24 *N i c o is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/448502 Ikimono Gakari - Blue Bird]
01:24 N i c o: this is my map <3
01:25 HOST: ok wait
01:26 HOST: dl complete and i'll re PM to u when i playing that map <3
01:26 N i c o: ok~~
01:38 *HOST is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/448501 Ikimono Gakari - Blue Bird]
01:38 N i c o: ohoh
01:40 N i c o: what do you think so?
01:40 N i c o: hmmm
01:42 HOST: hmm
01:43 N i c o: asdasd
01:43 HOST: i think have to remove 00:26:447 SV
01:43 N i c o: its annoying to play?
01:44 HOST: i think that's not required SV
01:44 N i c o: indeed..
01:44 N i c o: i will consider it
01:45 N i c o: :D
01:45 HOST: thx <3
01:45 N i c o: by the way
01:45 HOST: yup
01:45 N i c o: can you post it on forum??
01:45 N i c o: japan is am 01:45 and so sleepy <33
01:45 N i c o: i want to sleep~
01:46 HOST: korea also 01:45am <3
01:46 HOST: ok

+ if you add SV, add 00:26:842 ~ end 00:39:473 x0.75
Bobbias
No kudosu plz.

[Insane]

00:50:131 (50131|1,50131|5) - remove? these are quieter, and a different sound than 00:49:736 (49736|5,49736|6,49736|0,49736|1,49934|1,49934|6,49934|0,49934|5) - so shouldn't be the same pattern.

Good luck, I hope you find better modders than me lol orz. It's a fun map.
Topic Starter
N i c o_old

HOST wrote:

IRC MOD<3
01:23 N i c o: hello.. can i ask a mod to you if you don't mind?
01:24 HOST: noproblem<3
01:24 N i c o: Thank you <33333
01:24 N i c o: fisrt, can you test play my map?
01:24 N i c o: or... no... actually dont have to?
01:24 *N i c o is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/448502 Ikimono Gakari - Blue Bird]
01:24 N i c o: this is my map <3
01:25 HOST: ok wait
01:26 HOST: dl complete and i'll re PM to u when i playing that map <3
01:26 N i c o: ok~~
01:38 *HOST is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/448501 Ikimono Gakari - Blue Bird]
01:38 N i c o: ohoh
01:40 N i c o: what do you think so?
01:40 N i c o: hmmm
01:42 HOST: hmm
01:43 N i c o: asdasd
01:43 HOST: i think have to remove 00:26:447 SV
01:43 N i c o: its annoying to play?
01:44 HOST: i think that's not required SV
01:44 N i c o: indeed..
01:44 N i c o: i will consider it
01:45 N i c o: :D
01:45 HOST: thx <3
01:45 N i c o: by the way
01:45 HOST: yup
01:45 N i c o: can you post it on forum??
01:45 N i c o: japan is am 01:45 and so sleepy <33
01:45 N i c o: i want to sleep~
01:46 HOST: korea also 01:45am <3
01:46 HOST: ok

+ if you add SV, add 00:26:842 ~ end 00:39:473 x0.75

I deleted SV part on Normal, Hard diff. however, i want to keep SV part at least Insane diff.

and i don't want to add x0.75 sv since the part is composed by normal patterns.

Thanks to help my map!
Topic Starter
N i c o_old

Bobbias wrote:

No kudosu plz.

[Insane]

00:50:131 (50131|1,50131|5) - remove? these are quieter, and a different sound than 00:49:736 (49736|5,49736|6,49736|0,49736|1,49934|1,49934|6,49934|0,49934|5) - so shouldn't be the same pattern.

Good luck, I hope you find better modders than me lol orz. It's a fun map.
Finally, I decided tol delete the part since many modders were pointed this part before.

Thanks to make me that i make sure to delete it.

and can i give a kudosu to you since you helped my map? i think its a kind of manner.

Thank you!
Marirose
Nice song&map,here's the star :)
Jole
[Insane]

First of all there's this 01:20:328 (80328|4) -


Also I think these 00:13:224 (13224|6) - 01:22:500 (82500|0) - 01:30:789 (90789|0) - should be the same. Maybe change the one at the start

That's all I have to say. It's a nice map - I like it a lot
Topic Starter
N i c o_old

Jole wrote:

[Insane]

First of all there's this 01:20:328 (80328|4) - OK!


Also I think these 00:13:224 (13224|6) - 01:22:500 (82500|0) - 01:30:789 (90789|0) - should be the same. Maybe change the one at the start

Yes, the parts are not same. no wonder, it's mean increasing difficulty. Sorry T.T

That's all I have to say. It's a nice map - I like it a lot
Thanks to appreciate my map :)
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