1. Oni (6,89 stars, 2584 notes)

This box is huge

WARNING
250 BPM!
play at your own risk
for approval

~ Information ~
Title: Deaf-mutes
Circle: KINZOK ON
Artist: moro
Album: GENSOU HARDSOUND #006
Genre: Speedcore
Release: Comiket 80

Original game: Touhou 11 ~ Subterranean Animism
Original song: Hartmann's Youkai Girl / ハルトマンの妖怪少女

~ Modders ~
mliencheng
IMMoRTalS
Nwolf
Dainesl
H i M E
Hanjamon
Nwolf (recheck)
Tasha
_Gezo_
SKSalt
OnosakiHito
_Gezo_ #1
Nwolf #2
qoot8123

~ Testplayers ~
TimmyAkmed
Backfire
Nashmun
Ekoro

~ Special Thanks ~
Everybody who supported me during the ranking process (especially Nwolf, Dainesl, Backfire, _Gezo_ and OnosakiHito)
You, for playing! even if you can't clear it

mliencheng wrote:

Such bpm

Taiko

00:33:000(267,268) ctrl+G changed
01:45:960 (827,828) ctrl+G changed
02:28:920 k leaving as d to emphazise the two k after
02:36:600 k ^

04:46:200 the stream starting here is too scary It fits the song, not gonna change it



Good map though

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

Oni

Reduce some finish in Kiai time no, it fits the song and I like them *runs*

00:31:680 (252) - d pitch goes higher here + plays better
00:38:400 (332) - d ^
00:45:120 (411) - d ^
01:16:680 (648) - d i'm following the light sound here so k
01:19:560 (663,664) - Ctrl+G no, because of pitch
01:20:400 (669,670,671) - d same sound so no
01:22:320 (679) - d ^
01:32:160 (732) - d ^
01:33:120 (737) - delete there is a sound here
01:34:560 (746) - add d added
01:35:880 (754) - D same sound so no
01:36:240 (757) - d ^
01:36:360 (758) - D ^
01:36:600 (759) - k pitch is lower than next note so no
01:37:080 (762,764) - d it's the same as 01:36:120 (757,758,759) -
01:40:440 (783) - d nah it's fine imo
02:10:080 (1113) - add d added
02:23:520 (1203) - k I think it's okay with d
02:28:800 (1239) - k ^
02:31:200 (1255) - k changed
02:31:800 (1260) - k changed
02:36:480 (1294) - k it's fine imo
02:48:480 (1405) - k changed
02:56:520 (1490,1491,1492,1493,1494,1495,1496) - oh god 1/6 250 BPM and? it fits the song
03:34:800 (1803) - k it's already a k lol
04:01:800 (1951) - k changed
04:46:200 (2252) - oh god that Flow lol
05:09:240 (2500) - delete deleted

Good Luck ~

Nwolf wrote:

woof from queue :3 TWC5 finals tiebreaker gogo lol

[Only deaf existing here]

00:00:120 - Change volume to 25% because you almost can't hear the song (if you get to hit the notes :>) changed to 50%
00:07:740 - Volume to 40% 60%
00:15:420 - Volume to 55% 70%
00:16:800 (131,132) - Trade those follow the high notes more? yep, changed
00:29:820 - everybody ded no
00:31:200 (246) - No cymbals in the music here, no finisher D: oh yea you're right
00:33:300 (271) - kat? I want to give some variation here
00:36:660 (311) - don?? changed
00:40:020 (351) - kat??? it's fine imo
00:43:380 (391) - don???? changed
00:46:740 (430) - kat????? it's fine imo
00:50:100 (470) - don?????? changed
00:50:520 (475) - Cymbals in the music, finisher : D added
00:53:460 (510) - kat??????? it's fine imo
00:56:820 (550) - don???????? changed
00:57:540 - add don for the weird... wobble (?) and 00:57:600 (559) - change to kat I didn't put any notes before for this sound, so no + d sounds better
01:36:600 (760,761,762) - K k K like the next one pitch is lower at the two d
01:44:160 (807) - No cymbals in the music here, no finisher D: removed
01:46:260 (832) - Kat!
01:49:620 (872) - Don!!
01:52:980 (912) - Kat!!!
01:55:920 (947) - cymbals in the music, finisher : D
01:56:340 (952) - Don!!!!
01:59:700 (991) - Kat!!!!!
02:03:060 (1031) - Don!!!!!!
02:06:420 (1071) - Kat!!!!!!!
02:09:780 (1111) - Don!!!!!!!!
same as first kiai
02:10:920 - Volume 40%, SV 0.7, is easier to read whanged volume but not SV
02:11:040 (1119,1120,1121,1122,1123,1124) - Move all left by 1/2 and add a note (preferred: Kat) where the last note currently is it's fine imo, it follows the music
02:16:380 - Volume 50%, SV 0.85, is not as unexpected changed volume, not SV
02:18:420 - Volume 40%, SV 0.7 same
02:24:060 - Volume 50%, SV 0.85 same
02:25:980 - Volume 75%? 100% is okay here since the music is loud
02:28:560 (1239,1240) - Like it more when these are kats Like it more when these are dons *runs*
02:36:240 (1294,1295) - ^ ^
02:56:520 (1492,1493,1494,1495,1496,1497) - Everybody who didn't die yet will die, rip in pieces lol it fits the song
03:38:760 (1825) - Make small kat for consistency with earlier? no there is a sound here
04:45:900 (2251) - Delete so the player thinks "okay shitty 1/6 I SS'd you and the map is almost over nothing can happen anymore OH SHIT STREAM AAAAAAAAAH *ded*" no, fits the song
05:19:260 (2551,2552) - 1/8 pls for the full fun *runs far far far far far away* lol pls
05:30:840 (2610,2611,2612,2613,2614,2615) - Full 1/6? Would probably be easier to play lol no, the trill sound ends before




I SURVIVED AND I AM STILL inSANE

1. 01:04:920 (591,592,593,594,595) - Consider altering finisher structure for better emphasis of cymbals; atm you only have two cymbals emphasised out of five; whereas you have both cymbals emphasised at 01:08:760 (610,611,612,613,614) - although that may just be flow purposes; and if you do think that the extra finishers (wherever you place them) fit but have bad flow, consider changing the pattern to accommodate, e.g. if you have 01:05:160 (593) - added as a cymbal but you think the flow is bad, perhaps make the less emphasised cymbals be dons (that would also fit with the small noise in the background that you've mapped as dons like every single other time)
2. 01:16:440 (647) - I can't hear anything here that suggests having a kat; if anything the noise that played on 01:16:200 (645,646) - is most apparent, so this would probably sound better as a don (also, again, d k K is nice buildup stuff, juicy but irrelevant to this mod lol)
3. 01:20:280 (668,669,670,671,672) - see 01:04:920
4. 01:24:600 (692) - not sure why this is a big don instead of a big kat; sure, the low noise is prominent but cymbal-wise it sounds pretty much the same as 01:24:360 (690) - and if anything it seems to be MORE emphasised and high pitched than this, so why is it not following cymbal structure as you normally follow it?
5. 01:35:640 (753,754,755,756,757,758,759) - Again, consider making the normal kats be normal dons for better flow and emphasis of the big kats? kinda similar to 01:04:920 again but a different pattern
6. 02:39:480 - Maybe lower the volume of the notes here since the song gets quieter for a brief period of time? maybe like 75% will do lol
7. 02:44:760 (1366) - why no finisher here? the notes get louder and this just seems like the very loudest of this part
8. 02:56:520 (1491,1492,1493,1494,1495,1496,1497) - 1/6 too OP why have this in a near-restless map which can easily tire all but like the top 100 out EASILY? It's like a huge spike occurred in this one Kiai (the other two Kiais are in themselves difficulty spikes of awkward proportions but still) ;_; I know I said at the top you don't want to make this any easier but even if this was only 1/4 the map would only be 0.01* easier; heck, having 1/4 would just make this section as hard as the rest in this Kiai instead of the "miss here" section. I know Nwolf mentioned it before but it needs mentioning again; it's not that it's hard (which it definitely is, even if it was mapped to 1/4), it's just extremely unexpected since it's like the first 1/6 in the entire map
9. 03:03:600 - and 03:03:840 - I'm surprised you didn't map these seeing as how they're rather clear notes in the song; heck, maybe this is the first bit of "mercy" you show in a non-calm part of the map
10. 03:11:640 (1677,1678,1679,1680) - AT LEAST THIS 1/6 IS SEPARATE AND THERE'S ONLY 4 NOTES OK (this is meant to link with 02:56:520, by the way)
11. 03:19:320 (1711,1712,1713,1714,1715) - this is kind of ambiguous on which snap to map it on; but seeing as you put 1/4 instead of 1/6 I'm not gonna complain ;_; at least it's relatively merciful ;_;
12. 04:13:560 (2000) - this note is relatively emphasised in this section and it's like one of the only ones by comparison to the other notes around it, so perhaps make this a big kat (also lol 2,000th note irrelevant or is it)
13. 04:38:280 (2158) - Not sure why this is a slider; there's really no reason for it to be mapped so passively imo; either a 1/4 triplet or some other decent-sounding adaption will be fine
14. 04:45:720 (2246,2247,2248,2249,2250,2251) - AGAIN AT LEAST THE 1/6 IS EASY HERE (again links with 02:56:520 lel)

Dainesl wrote:

help me mod req of a map that I CAN'T PASS GODDAMMIT SAYAKA BAKA D:

this might not be helpful btw, just saying beforehand

Oni

1. 01:04:920 (591,592,593,594,595) - Consider altering finisher structure for better emphasis of cymbals; atm you only have two cymbals emphasised out of five; whereas you have both cymbals emphasised at 01:08:760 (610,611,612,613,614) - although that may just be flow purposes; and if you do think that the extra finishers (wherever you place them) fit but have bad flow, consider changing the pattern to accommodate, e.g. if you have 01:05:160 (593) - added as a cymbal but you think the flow is bad, perhaps make the less emphasised cymbals be dons (that would also fit with the small noise in the background that you've mapped as dons like every single other time) well I only emphasized 2 finishers to emphasize the main beat
2. 01:16:440 (647) - I can't hear anything here that suggests having a kat; if anything the noise that played on 01:16:200 (645,646) - is most apparent, so this would probably sound better as a don (also, again, d k K is nice buildup stuff, juicy but irrelevant to this mod lol) changed to d k d
3. 01:20:280 (668,669,670,671,672) - see 01:04:920 same
4. 01:24:600 (692) - not sure why this is a big don instead of a big kat; sure, the low noise is prominent but cymbal-wise it sounds pretty much the same as 01:24:360 (690) - and if anything it seems to be MORE emphasised and high pitched than this, so why is it not following cymbal structure as you normally follow it? changed to K
5. 01:35:640 (753,754,755,756,757,758,759) - Again, consider making the normal kats be normal dons for better flow and emphasis of the big kats? kinda similar to 01:04:920 again but a different pattern same
6. 02:39:480 - Maybe lower the volume of the notes here since the song gets quieter for a brief period of time? maybe like 75% will do lol I don't think it's really needed lol
7. 02:44:760 (1366) - why no finisher here? the notes get louder and this just seems like the very loudest of this part changed
8. 02:56:520 (1491,1492,1493,1494,1495,1496,1497) - 1/6 too OP why have this in a near-restless map which can easily tire all but like the top 100 out EASILY? It's like a huge spike occurred in this one Kiai (the other two Kiais are in themselves difficulty spikes of awkward proportions but still) ;_; I know I said at the top you don't want to make this any easier but even if this was only 1/4 the map would only be 0.01* easier; heck, having 1/4 would just make this section as hard as the rest in this Kiai instead of the "miss here" section. I know Nwolf mentioned it before but it needs mentioning again; it's not that it's hard (which it definitely is, even if it was mapped to 1/4), it's just extremely unexpected since it's like the first 1/6 in the entire map no, as explained via PM
9. 03:03:600 - and 03:03:840 - I'm surprised you didn't map these seeing as how they're rather clear notes in the song; heck, maybe this is the first bit of "mercy" you show in a non-calm part of the map no, I'm just following the beat
10. 03:11:640 (1677,1678,1679,1680) - AT LEAST THIS 1/6 IS SEPARATE AND THERE'S ONLY 4 NOTES OK (this is meant to link with 02:56:520, by the way) I won't remove it
11. 03:19:320 (1711,1712,1713,1714,1715) - this is kind of ambiguous on which snap to map it on; but seeing as you put 1/4 instead of 1/6 I'm not gonna complain ;_; at least it's relatively merciful ;_; well I thought a full kats 7-notes 1/6 might be a bit tiring
12. 04:13:560 (2000) - this note is relatively emphasised in this section and it's like one of the only ones by comparison to the other notes around it, so perhaps make this a big kat (also lol 2,000th note irrelevant or is it) added finisher
13. 04:38:280 (2158) - Not sure why this is a slider; there's really no reason for it to be mapped so passively imo; either a 1/4 triplet or some other decent-sounding adaption will be fine it sounds cool with a slider
14. 04:45:720 (2246,2247,2248,2249,2250,2251) - AGAIN AT LEAST THE 1/6 IS EASY HERE (again links with 02:56:520 lel) no I won't remove it

the deathstream is fine, btw, I thought that it was badly flowing but then I checked it and it appears to be A-OK lol

sorry if the mod isn't helpful but good luck for Approval anyways~

-S o r a- wrote:

Hi~M4M
omg this crazy song >w<

Oni
02:11:040 - d changed
02:11:520 - k changed
02:11:640 - move 02:11:820 there is a note here
02:15:960 (1153) - k changed
02:23:640 (1205) - ^ changed
02:28:920 (1241) - ^ changed
02:36:600 (1296) - ^ changed
02:39:000 - ^ changed
02:47:040 (1392) - ^ changed
02:50:760 (1429) - ^ changed
04:18:120 (2016) - d I prefer to keep k here
04:28:200 (2066) - ^ same not as 04:27:960 (2065) - so no
04:28:680 (2068) - k changed
05:08:280 (2493) - ^ nah, it's the same sound as previous notes
05:15:960 (2532) - ^ I think it's okay with d too

and the....really crazy song =w=
good luck

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

• All okay

• 
  01:11:040 (622) - change to k, sounds better
  01:38:880 (774) - change to k?
  03:22:800 (1734) - change to d? i think sounds better
  04:21:240 (2030) - add finish, if you hear with 25% speed and with 0% volume in hitsounds you will notice sounds more loud
  04:27:720 (2064) - change to d? i think sounds better
  05:15:360 (2528) - change to k? sounds good imo
  05:23:760 (2573) - change to k?
  05:30:240 (2605) - change to k?

i can't find nothing more, sorry for the short mod, is a good and a hard map xD anyway good luck Sayaka, take a star ^^/

Hanjamon wrote:

Hi Sayaka~ mod as you requested

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

[General]

• All okay

[OP ONI]

• 
  01:11:040 (622) - change to k, sounds better nah, it's okay imo
  01:38:880 (774) - change to k? nope, it's the same sound as before
  03:22:800 (1734) - change to d? i think sounds better nah, it doesn't represent the sound imo
  04:21:240 (2030) - add finish, if you hear with 25% speed and with 0% volume in hitsounds you will notice sounds more loud yep, added
  04:27:720 (2064) - change to d? i think sounds better nah, k is fine imo
  05:15:360 (2528) - change to k? sounds good imo I don't think the very little pitch change needs a k
  05:23:760 (2573) - change to k? changed
  05:30:240 (2605) - change to k? it's fine with d imo

i can't find nothing more, sorry for the short mod, is a good and a hard map xD anyway good luck Sayaka, take a star ^^/

LZD wrote:

the begining of the map feels a bit ankward with those x4 patterns, for the rest <3

Sayaka- wrote:

blame the song *runs*

_Gezo_ wrote:

Le stream m'a tuer #justbonefirthings
[Oni]
Pourquoi tick rate 3 ? .-. jesépa, changé
Baisse légèrement le volume du début stp, un peu fort je trouve. Baisse-le ? (Augmentation progressive souhaitée) j'pense que c'est ok comme ca
01:12:120 (618,619,620,621) - ^ changé
(Y'a d'autres parts mais flemme de les mettre, je te laisse juger)

00:44:160 (394) - Le son étant semblable à 00:44:040 (393) - je me demande si tu peux changer pour avoir ddk k K. c'est pourri a jouer, je laisse comme ca
01:36:600 (751,752,753,754,755,756) - Les deux triplets de notes ont une "mélodie" similaire, unifie-les changé
02:12:720 (1114) - k | 02:13:320 (1119) - k | 02:20:400 (1166) - k | Essaie ces trois trucs là et dis moi ce que t'en penses. Je pense que ça suit un peu plus la mélodie si on considère les hauteurs. changé en k la première et troisième note
02:44:880 (1352,1353,1354,1355) - Fais plutôt K ddk, histoire de mieux suivre la musique (la manière actuelle est assez... bizarre) no, je veux suivre le son long ici

y'a beaucoup de répétition donc y'a des chances que le peu que j'ai puisse se répercuter sur d'autres morceaux, le gros stream t'as copié sur bonefir non j'ai mappé ca avant bonefir , j'ai eu du mal à capter le rythme car y'a beaucoup de bruit donc c'est pour ça que mon mod est court, j'arrive pas du tout à capter ;_;

si t'avais mis hp5 je t'aurais tué c'était hp6 à la base loul