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Momochikun
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 29 Desember 2014 at 19:20:10

Artist: u's
Title: Donna Toki mo Zutto (TV Size)
Source: ラブライブ! School idol project
Tags: Love Live! 2nd Season ending sunrise Muse Takada Kyou Mori Shintarou Hata Aki Opening Honoka Kosaka Emi Nitta Eri Ayase Yoshinjo Nanjou Kotori Minami Aya Uchida Umi Sonoda Suzuko Mimori Rin Hoshizora Riho Iida Maki Nishikino Pile Nozomi Tojo Aina Kusuda Hanayo Koizumi Yurika Kubo Niko Yazawa Sora Tokui
BPM: 165
Filesize: 13220kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,53 stars, 93 notes)
  2. Hard (3,15 stars, 230 notes)
  3. Normal (1,94 stars, 141 notes)
Download: u's - Donna Toki mo Zutto (TV Size)
Download: u's - Donna Toki mo Zutto (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#23 ラブライブ! 2 ED
gretay
how about these? if you don't like i can search for the other 1 2
Ujimatsu Chiya
Oh... where is BG!!!

Here :3

(1)
http://puu.sh/9bILY/0ea375bdf1.jpg

(2)
http://puu.sh/9bIMr/0f87c73da4.jpg


may I create Insane diff this map?
Topic Starter
Momochikun
Thanks Kibiya ! used your BG <3
as for the diff, i don't want to add additional diff anymore. sorry ><
but vicho so lazy orz
Ujimatsu Chiya
Lazy Vicho <3

ok. I hope to rank this ~ :)
No_Gu
i like this >3<
jonathanlfj
oot im so late

[General]
your bg is really disproportionate...try this one:
video: http://puu.sh/ci6iY.avi

[Easy]
00:33:352 (1) - there is a transition phrase at 00:33:716, so its better if you break this up into a circle and then a slider starting at 00:33:716
00:38:080 (2) - this slider can look a little better on the curve
00:48:080 - should have a note here (you don't have to follow that thing with the full measure after spinner, since the bpm is relatively low)
01:07:898 (2) - due to the vocal emphasis the NC should start here, you can remove NC on 01:09:352 (1)
01:18:807 (3,4) - map this one like 01:24:625 (3,4)? Feels more true to the music

[Normal]
hmm looking at the difficulty curve, you might want to get this to go around 2.1 in star rating so there won't be a *spread* problem. One way to do this is to use more circles in replacement of sliders, the circle-slider ratio is really extreme right now lol
00:40:261 (2) - i think it plays better if you followed the vocals here and put the slider at 00:40:080, and then add a note at 00:40:989
00:54:080 (4,5,6) - try this rhythm instead, feels more fitting with the music imo: 01:06:989 (6) - use a repeat slider here to cover the vocals at 01:07:352
01:18:625 (1) - again, due to the way emphasis works here you should use a circle then a 1/2 slider at 01:18:807

[Hard]
00:15:170 (2) - spacing change intentional?
00:29:716 (3) - hmm you are skipping a strong vocal sound at 00:29:898, i would recommend using 1/2 here to cover for it
00:39:534 (1,2,3) - try a triangle placement here
01:00:443 (2) - NC should be here instead of 01:00:080 (1)
01:03:170 (2,3) - ctrl+g here for a more interesting flow?
01:04:625 (2,3) - oh the blanket please make it look better
01:18:443 (3) - use soft clap on the slider end, it doesn't sound too good with the default normal

well thats all for now, feel free to ask for a recheck when you get enough mods and stuff
Sonnyc
[Easy]
00:08:989 (1) - Personally Finish doesn't seem to fit well.
00:34:807 (2) - This is the only note that is in the upbeat around this part. 00:36:261 - 00:37:716 - 00:39:170 - are all empty. So I think placing that note at 00:34:443 will be more natural.
00:50:080 (2) - I really felt this part somewhat awkward. After comparing with 01:01:716 (2) which was relatively fine, I've figured out that 00:49:352 is following only the vocal and 01:00:989 is following both the vocal and the instrument. Since your rhythm selections are focused on instruments at this difficulty, can you consider altering 00:49:352 (1) to a single note at 00:49:534? Sorry for not coming up with a better solution.

[Normal]
00:29:352 (4,5) - I think merging in to one 1/1 slider would be better.. The beat at 00:29:534 feels a little redundant.
00:39:352 (6) - Imo this note feels a little overmapped.

[Hard]
00:15:170 (2) - Is this a mini-jump? I think it would be neater if the distance is maintained..
00:31:898 (4) - Mind placing at (512,352)? That way would look better because you can make a nice distance with 00:31:352 (2).
01:09:170 (3) - It seems you wanted to follow the violin(?) sound at 01:09:170 by adding a whistle, but how do you think of replacing to a single note at 01:09:352 to emphasize the vocal better?
Topic Starter
Momochikun
Fixed all stuffs from the mods xD
@Sonnyc : idk for that stuffs on Easy, i want to follow the vocal but also make the rhythm more easy. I'd leave like that for now
Sakaue Nachi
nice :3
Little
Hi.

[General]
  1. Sunrise appears twice in tags.
[Easy]
  1. 00:48:080 (1,2) - Distance seems too big here.
  2. 00:16:261 (1) - I think it will play smoother to align this with (3), like this: http://puu.sh/d0Z4K/1270ba4d5b.jpg (x:313|y:240)
[Normal]
  1. The HP drain really doesn't need to be so low. I think 3 or 3.5 will be fine, to fit the spread between Easy and Hard.
  2. 00:44:625 (4) - I think it would be better to have this more vertical to flow smoother from (2,3): http://puu.sh/d0X1Z/87f424b719.jpg
  3. 01:00:080 (3,4) - Current placement feels a bit awkward to me, since (2) gives leftward momentum, but in a very straight upward line, making the flow really stiff. I recommend this instead: http://puu.sh/d0Zo8/0704e2f168.jpg
  4. 01:22:807 (4) - Sampleset -> Auto
[Hard]
  1. 00:11:170 (3,4) - Maybe choose placement that can have a nice little jump to (1), current one feels not smooth: http://puu.sh/d0ZMT/66083dc529.jpg or http://puu.sh/d0ZFZ/266c086161.jpg
  2. 00:21:170 (2,3) - I think this rhythm will be better: http://puu.sh/d0ZRQ/983ba09e31.jpg
Topic Starter
Momochikun
Thanks for modding ! fixed everything on Easy and Normal.
I keep the stuffs on Hard since they fine just how they are imo ><
Updated :3
Sky Trias
Yooo o/

Request dari #Indonesian :D


  • [Hard]
  1. 00:10:261 - Memang mau dibikin jeda atau gimana ? Coba tambahin not deh ? Taruh di tempat 00:10:443 (1)
  2. 00:12:989 (4) - Ctrl+G?
  3. 00:21:989 (5) - Ada yang janggal disini .. Hitsound ??
  4. 00:29:716 (3) - Slider ini sampai di 00:29:898 .. 00:30:080 disini tambahin not ?? Kira kira begini (saran)
  5. 00:39:170 (4,5,6) - Stream ?
  6. 00:41:716 (3) - Coba pindahin ke X:392 Y:148
  7. 00:48:443 (2) - Jadiin Slider sampai 00:48:625 ??
  8. 01:00:261 - tambahin not ?
  9. 01:19:170 (3) - Hapus ?
Sekian dari saya .. Kurang lebihnya mohon dimaafkan :o
Semoga Ranked ;)
Ichigaki

Mod Requested via #indonesian



Little mod
20:36 Ichigaki: mod irc boleh ga?
20:36 Momochikun: map yg mana ?
20:36 Ichigaki: idol
20:37 Ichigaki: tak ada insane?
20:37 Momochikun: terserah juga sih.. bknnya situ yg repot ya ntar ? xD
20:37 Momochikun: tak ada
20:37 Ichigaki: tumben, padahal di yuri pake insane
20:38 *Ichigaki is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/429196 u's - Donna Toki mo Zutto (TV Size) [Easy]]
20:38 Momochikun: lg males aja bikin Insane xD
20:38 Ichigaki: gap abis spinner 00:08:989 (1) - ke slider berikutnya ko lama banget?
20:38 Ichigaki: 'jauh'
20:39 Momochikun: gap min nya buat easy emg 1 full measure o.o
20:39 Momochikun: lbih deket unrankable
20:39 Ichigaki: o.o
20:40 Ichigaki: maksudnya?
20:40 Momochikun: dari spinner ke object berikutnya di easy diff minimal jaraknya 1 downbeat
20:40 Ichigaki: 'lebih deket unrankable'
20:41 Momochikun: klo lebih deket dari 1 downbeat jadi unrankable
20:41 Ichigaki: oalah
20:41 Ichigaki: 01:14:443 - ini ngapain ada kiai?
20:41 Ichigaki: sekejap pula .w.
20:42 Ichigaki: 01:16:261 (2,1) - blanketnya kurang enak ini
20:42 Momochikun: kiai reset.. gpp kok
20:42 Momochikun: hmm k
20:42 Ichigaki: cuma buat sparklingnya?
20:42 Ichigaki: kirain ga boleh .w.
20:42 Momochikun: yoi yoi
20:42 Ichigaki: gg Momo
20:43 Ichigaki: ga ada yang aneh di Easynya
20:43 Ichigaki: cuma itu aja lol
20:43 Momochikun: lmao xD
20:43 Momochikun: sip
20:43 Ichigaki: stack leniencynya
20:43 Ichigaki: cek AiMod
20:44 Momochikun: oh iy.. yg easy sm normal tak naikin 1, hardnya tetep
20:44 *Ichigaki is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/522526 u's - Donna Toki mo Zutto (TV Size) [Normal]]
20:44 Ichigaki: apa CSnya ga sekalian 3,5 aja?
20:45 Momochikun: hmm ok
20:46 Ichigaki: 00:11:534 - 00:12:989 - entah kenapa kurang cocok
20:46 Momochikun: maksudnya ?
20:46 Ichigaki: terutama dibagian yang ga kena note sama sekali, 00:12:443 -
20:47 Momochikun: imo fine kok, itu ikut drum kan
20:47 Ichigaki: iya juga sih
20:47 Ichigaki: 00:21:716 (7,1,2) - blanketnya kurang bagus
20:48 Momochikun: jauh itu lol
20:49 Ichigaki: 00:25:352 (1,2,3) - lumayan susah nih kayanya
20:49 Ichigaki: apalagi stack itu
20:49 Ichigaki: pasti cukup banyak yang bingung disity
20:49 Ichigaki: *disitu
20:50 Momochikun: ok unstacked
20:51 Ichigaki: 00:52:261 (1,2) - ikut vocal kan? harusnya 00:52:807 (2) - ini jadi reverse sampai 00:53:170 -
20:52 Ichigaki: 00:54:080 (4) - kurang cocok jadi reverse slider, yang pertama ikut drum trus selanjutnya ikut apalah itu namanya >.>
20:52 Momochikun: iy jg sih
20:53 Ichigaki: 00:52:261 - 00:54:625 - remap aja
20:53 Ichigaki: >.>
20:53 Momochikun: itu cocok kok, ikut instrumen
20:53 Ichigaki: huehue
20:54 Ichigaki: 00:55:352 - aneh kalo kosong, masalahnya kamu juga ikut 00:54:989 -
20:54 Ichigaki: 00:54:989 - yang end slider
20:55 Momochikun: yg ini emg disengaja kosong, takut ntar 1/2 rhythm nya kepanjangan xD
20:55 Ichigaki: xD
20:56 Ichigaki: 01:05:534 (3,4) - kurang cocok buat stack
20:57 Ichigaki: 01:06:443 (5) - NC
20:58 Momochikun: knp kok ngga cocok ? ._.
20:58 Ichigaki: umm, nggak ikut apa-apa kalo di stack, gitu
20:58 Ichigaki: vocalnya aja mindah gitu
20:59 Ichigaki: rest is fine
21:00 Momochikun: k
21:00 *Ichigaki is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/429087 u's - Donna Toki mo Zutto (TV Size) [Hard]]
21:00 Ichigaki: 00:07:352 (3) - imo ga ada apa-apa disana
21:01 Momochikun: ada guitar pitch kok xD
21:01 Ichigaki: oh iya baru denger
21:01 Ichigaki: xD
21:02 Ichigaki: 00:19:716 (3,4) - nice anti jump >.<
21:03 Momochikun: it's stack not anti jump lmao
21:03 Ichigaki: aahahaha
21:03 Ichigaki: ga tau nama-nama sih aku >.>
21:03 Ichigaki: sial, malah jadi salah
21:04 Ichigaki: 00:53:170 (3) - x:256 y:232 ?
21:04 Momochikun: lol salah kn biasa, semua jg prnah mengalami masa itu xD
21:04 Momochikun: k
21:04 Ichigaki: 01:00:443 (1,2) - not well stacked
21:04 Ichigaki: fak, blanket
21:05 Ichigaki: TAT)
21:06 Ichigaki: udah sih
21:06 Ichigaki: >.<
21:06 Momochikun: fixed
21:06 Momochikun: thx, post aja log nya :3
21:06 Ichigaki: walah cuma segitu modnya ;-;)v
21:06 Ichigaki: pengen coba buat insanenya
21:06 Ichigaki: ahaha
21:07 Momochikun: lol
21:08 Ichigaki: emang boleh kalo misal beneran?

Good luck, sekedar mengingatkan ternyata banyak spacing di Hard yang terlalu tiba-tiba dan kurang enak, gitu >w<)v
happy623
this song <3
rEdo
[General]
You're missing a normal-hitnormal.wav file in your folder while using custom hitsounds exclusively. My custom hitnormal blends a lot with all the hitsounds you've put there, so I guess you either need to add a normal-hitnormal of your choice to the folder or delete them all manually by using an another hitsound. The places where this occurs (on all the difficulties) are 00:48:080­, 00:58:989 and such.
[Easy]
01:16:443 (2) - Rotate it by 3° clockwise for a nice blanket with 01:17:352 (1)­.
[Normal]
00:47:898 (1) - This could be move a little bit to the left, so it forms a nicer triangle with (4,5).
[Hard]
00:29:716 (3) - Something like this fits the rhythm somewhat better I guess. I mean, you're generally following the lyrics.
00:51:534 (2,3,4) - Somewhat irregular spacing, the distance between (2,3) and (3,4) is not the same.
01:25:170 (4) - New combo here?

Nothing much that I could find here. Good luck!
Topic Starter
Momochikun
Fixed all stuffs except the first thing on Hard..
Thanks a lot o/

edit :

pkk wrote:

Summoned by free ticket aaaaaaaa

General
  1. cool stuff

Easy
  1. 00:16:625 (2) - you can move this to x 228 y 207 to make a triangle with the slider heads/circle k
  2. 01:25:170 (4) - just a placement suggestion:
i'd like to keep the current

Normal
  1. HP3-->HP3.5/HP4
    Easy is HP2, Normal is HP3 and Hard is HP5.5 so you can increase the normal HP to balance the difficulty spread.
  2. 00:49:352 (1,2) - try switching NC so the NC is on the strong beat. keeping o.o
  3. 01:05:534 (3,4) - looks better if you just stack it

Hard
  1. OD6-->OD6.5/OD7
    Apparently having OD closer to AR is better since it's easier to read or something, but I think OD6 is a bit low for a map of this difficulty. 6.5 is nice, but 7 is also good.
  2. 00:22:807 (2) - this might look nicer if you increase spacing and curve the end towards 00:22:443 (1) - more:
    I just think that it's too close to the previous object.
  3. 00:27:534 (4) - move the end to x 175 y 228 if you want a better blanket here. Also check your other blankets such as 00:40:989 (1) - , 01:15:898 (1) - , etc sorry i'm really bad at blanket lollll
  4. 00:49:534 (2) - NC feels better here instead of on previous circle. The slider head lands on the strong finish sound in the music, and you can use NC to emphasize it o/ hmm i like it there o.o
  5. 00:50:625 (5,1) - imo jump should be between these two objects, not 00:50:261 (4,5) - . Try moving 00:50:261 (4) - to around x 439 y 267 and 00:50:625 (5) - to around x 338 y 361. This way you'll get a jump between 00:50:625 (5,1) - to emphasize the downbeat.
    [spoilerbox][/]this was on purpose
  6. 01:09:170 (3) - , 01:09:534 (4) - try ctrl+G, it might flow better. At the very least, consider ctrl+g on 01:09:170 (3) - since 01:08:443 (1,2) - is going in a counter clockwise direction.
  7. 01:12:261 (5) - are you sure you want 3/4 here? 1/2 slider with circle is nice since it catches the drum beats at 01:12:443 - and 01:12:534 - . 3/4 might be hard to read because of your spacing (for example 00:28:625 (2,3) - has different spacing), so you can try reducing spacing or change the rhythm like I suggested. ya i'm sure xD

Nice mapset! Have fun mapping and happy holidays~~**~*~*~*
Everything else is fixed, thanks :3
pkk
Summoned by free ticket aaaaaaaa

General
  1. cool stuff

Easy
  1. 00:16:625 (2) - you can move this to x 228 y 207 to make a triangle with the slider heads/circle
  2. 01:25:170 (4) - just a placement suggestion:

Normal
  1. HP3-->HP3.5/HP4
    Easy is HP2, Normal is HP3 and Hard is HP5.5 so you can increase the normal HP to balance the difficulty spread.
  2. 00:49:352 (1,2) - try switching NC so the NC is on the strong beat.
  3. 01:05:534 (3,4) - looks better if you just stack it

Hard
  1. OD6-->OD6.5/OD7
    Apparently having OD closer to AR is better since it's easier to read or something, but I think OD6 is a bit low for a map of this difficulty. 6.5 is nice, but 7 is also good.
  2. 00:22:807 (2) - this might look nicer if you increase spacing and curve the end towards 00:22:443 (1) - more:
    I just think that it's too close to the previous object.
  3. 00:27:534 (4) - move the end to x 175 y 228 if you want a better blanket here. Also check your other blankets such as 00:40:989 (1) - , 01:15:898 (1) - , etc
  4. 00:49:534 (2) - NC feels better here instead of on previous circle. The slider head lands on the strong finish sound in the music, and you can use NC to emphasize it o/
  5. 00:50:625 (5,1) - imo jump should be between these two objects, not 00:50:261 (4,5) - . Try moving 00:50:261 (4) - to around x 439 y 267 and 00:50:625 (5) - to around x 338 y 361. This way you'll get a jump between 00:50:625 (5,1) - to emphasize the downbeat.
  6. 01:09:170 (3) - , 01:09:534 (4) - try ctrl+G, it might flow better. At the very least, consider ctrl+g on 01:09:170 (3) - since 01:08:443 (1,2) - is going in a counter clockwise direction.
  7. 01:12:261 (5) - are you sure you want 3/4 here? 1/2 slider with circle is nice since it catches the drum beats at 01:12:443 - and 01:12:534 - . 3/4 might be hard to read because of your spacing (for example 00:28:625 (2,3) - has different spacing), so you can try reducing spacing or change the rhythm like I suggested.

Nice mapset! Have fun mapping and happy holidays~~**~*~*~*
jonathanlfj
The normal-sliderslide is not used, you should remove it

The correct Japanese form title is どんなときもずっと(TVサイズ), the English one is correct as (TV Size)
source: http://www.lovelive-anime.jp/release.html


I am fine with the map, let me know after you finish applying all mods

no kd

EDIT: alright Bubbled, good luck!
Tari
COOL!


[General]

  1. Try +90 video offset, I find it syncs better with the mp3, tell me if you agree.
  2. 2nd phase isn't needed, just keep source as ラブライブ! School idol project
  3. Uncheck Widescreen support in Hard, its inconsistent with other diffs.

[Easy]

  1. 00:34:807 (3) - Strong, yelling vocals here. I guess finish sounds nice here. Personally I think it fits really well.
  2. 00:48:080 (1) - Ah, really I would totally let this go, but I would rather be safe and sorry and give the full 4 measures of recovery time here. Best to remove the note here.
[Normal]

  1. 00:34:807 (3) - Same as easy, the finish sounds nice. (start)
  2. 00:36:080 (5) - ^ at end of slider.
  3. 00:37:352 (3) - ^ end.
  4. 00:38:989 (5) - ^ end

[Hard]

  1. 00:34:807 (4) - Finish at start.
  2. 00:36:080 (3) - ^ Reverse.
  3. 00:37:352 (3) - ^ Reverse.
  4. 00:39:170 (4) - ^
  5. 01:24:625 (1,2) - Stack them like you did at 01:18:807 (1,2) - ?

Great mapset, tell me when ~
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