1. Hard (2.74 stars, 518 notes)
2. Normal (1.56 stars, 249 notes)

pishifat wrote:

bpm = 138
offset = 230
time signature = 3/4

it'll sound a 1/2 beat off until the drums come in at 00:26:319 because the guitar line is kind of weird. that and the 3/4 timing were probably the reasons why you were confused

1. HD = 2/3, 5 is too much for a begginer
2. AR= 3
3. OD = 2
4. the hitsound doesnt matches with the song, try fix it
5. 00:08:056(5) the sliders end should ended at 00:08:925
6. 00:49:795(5) blanket this better to the (4)
7. 00:56:316 a long sliders is better than a a spinner
8. 02:00229(5) blanket this better
9. i assume that the song ends at 03:57:621 so you should disable the kiai after that part

1. HP=6
2. one part of the vocal starts at 00:09:143, so i think that the circle should move 1/4 backwards
3. 00:18:925(6) blanket this better
4. 00:20:447 ^
5. 00:25:447 ^
6. 00:35:229 NC
7. 01:02:186 remove NC
8. 01:18:273 insert break time here
9. ugly overlap at 01:36:534(3,5)
   other same mistakes around the diffs

samplefish wrote:

hi, here for m4m!

[General]
update tags on easy, from the hard done
update countdown, widescreen sup, letterbox on easy done

[Easy]
ar5 seems a little fast, try ar4? fixed
hitsounds need a bit of work. try judging what volume is good for which parts, like turning it down at the beginning where its not that loud. up to 00:25:882 (7) - should use less volume. 100% volume is generally not used.fixed!
also, the claps seem a little out of place at the beginning, i would change it. yeah you're right. claps removed
02:55:012 (1,6) - the kiai between these shouldnt be a kiai imo i think it's fine. i chose to put kiai on the most eargasmic parts of the song.. i'll consider it

00:10:664 (1,2) - better blanketing, slider 1st point 100x 96y looks good i think, .93x instead of 1x distance isnt that noticeable when playing
but it would be off the grid if i were to change it
00:10:664 (1,3) - could stack the slider heads done
00:19:795 (1,2,3,4) - this part is similar to 00:19:795 (1,2,3,4) - i would use the same rhythm for consistency this part is similar to waah?
00:20:664 (2,3) - i wouldnt do this in an easy yeah i was thinking that too but where would i put it i don't want to mess up the whole flow of the map because of one hit note..
00:36:751 (4,5) - blanket, use the approach circles for guidance, from http://puu.sh/9Evkh/c5641f2304.jpg to http://puu.sh/9Evml/687de14c1e.jpg fixed
00:42:838 (4,5) - stack better fixed
00:44:143 (6,1) - stack better fixed
00:48:490 (4,5,6) - try something like http://puu.sh/9EvsR/a0ceeeeac6.jpg cool
01:01:099 (5,1) - stack better fixed
01:04:143 (2,3) - better blanket like http://puu.sh/9Evzh/89699e23f6.jpg eeh..
01:08:056 (1,2) - better blanket fixed
01:10:664 (4,5) - i would make 4 straighter so i can have a perfect blanket with 5 so the slider heads do not touch agreed
01:13:273 (6,7) - can blanket these added blanket
01:23:708 (3,4) - i wouldnt have these overlap, but its not too bad. the top right feels so empty that's why i overlapped them
01:31:534 (1,2) - better blanket yay for blankets. fixed
01:32:838 (2,3) - maybe curve the 3 so it looks better curved
01:52:403 (1,2,3) - try something like this http://puu.sh/9EvM8/cd6e92cf25.jpg, you can also move the 123 down a bit so 3 slider head goes with 01:51:099 (6) - nice i like it c:
02:23:273 (7,2) - can stack these stacked
02:57:621 (5,6) - distance? oh right distanced
03:04:795 (7) - midpoint 419x 249y to blanket better with 03:04:577 (6) - fixed
03:25:012 (6) - maybe a bit high fixed
03:47:186 (1,2) - blanket meh
03:53:708 (2,3) - i would take out overlap

seems like youre not finish mapping the end of the kiai? if thats where you intend to end it, i urge you to map until the end!

[Hard]
02:24:795 (5) - you should read this regarding having slider ends on big white ticks. http://puu.sh/9CTLe/fd809d0744.png im not going to point all these out, they are completely rankable, so its up to you if you want to make your map better or not. keeping it
01:00:012 (1,2) - there are a lot of these beats in the song, i think having the jump from these beats 01:47:186 (4,5) - is best, jumps on the other beats dont make much sense imo i'll think about changing it
the combos in the song could use some work. for instance, this one 03:41:969 (1) - is quite long, try NC at 03:44:577 (7) - take out NC 03:45:447 (1) - and NC at 03:47:186 (9) - i think this makes more sense. please fix up the NCs! NCs fixed thank you!

00:08:056 (7,1) - hard to read, because at 00:08:925 (1) - he does not start singing, only drawing his breath. i would map the part in between these two
i took out the notes and left the sliders instead.
00:09:795 (3,4) - there are a lot of these blankets, consider making them look nicer? the blankets look fine to me ; ;
00:13:490 (2,3) - same as 00:08:056 (7,1) - genius fixed
00:15:664 (3,5) - try to not have overlap, even small ones alright fixed
00:25:882 (3,1) - add a note between these two, it really feels like somethign was missing when i played it added note
00:39:795 (7,8) - stack better fixed
00:41:099 (3,4) - stack better fixed
00:47:186 (1,2) - i would make 2 same angle as 1 allrighty
00:49:360 (6) - would use 1x distnce for this, current distance is confusing how??
01:25:012 (2,3) - blanket fixed
01:57:621 (1,2) - blanket i don't see anything wrong here
01:59:360 (4) - make this a copy of 01:58:925 (3) - done
02:14:360 (5,6) - take out this jump, make the jump from 02:14:577 (6,7) - instead. did both
03:20:229 (2) - try moving this a little more down so you can stack the end with 03:20:882 (4) - wooh fixed
03:26:099 (11) - equal distance from 10 and 1 would look nicer imo

again, i encourage you to map the rest of the song!

very nice map, with a little bit of polishing i think it will be good to go!

good luck!!

_Stan wrote:

Hi m4m

[Easy]
00:08:056 (5) - slider is ok but do you think that the sound a little weird? not really
00:10:664 (1,3) - overlap nope
00:42:838 (4,5) - this is EZ so change it, do not overlap got it
00:49:795 (5,6) - blanket done
00:53:708 (3,4) - ^ done
01:01:099 (5,1) - overlap no
01:08:056 (1,2) - you can blanket these more nicely okay
03:15:773 - why stop the kiai time then start again rapidly? nope. kiai 1 and kiai 2 are both the most eargasmic parts of the song
03:58:056 - not finish? cancel the kiai time done


[Whispering Love]
00:19:795 (2,3) - blanket done
00:35:229 (8,9,10) - ^ nope
00:51:316 (4,5,6) - ^ no
00:57:621 (1,2,3,4) - DS no they're jumps
01:01:534 (6,7) - ^ nupe
02:08:708 (2,3) - blanket done
02:22:403 (3,4,5) - up the DS again, jumps
02:29:143 (6) - change color done
02:31:969 (14) - ^ no
03:05:447 (1,3) - overlap ew, no
03:53:708 (3,4,5,6) - blanket maybe..

good luck~

Celizavia wrote:

M4M

GENERAL

- The timing preview (yellow line) should at 00:55:882 done
-remove the kiai at 03:15:882, it wasnt the chorus kiai removed on easy
- make the kiai consistent i removed the two kiai's that don't fit if that's what you mean

Easy

1. HD = 2/3, 5 is too much for a begginer noobs get wrecked fixed
2. AR= 3 done
3. OD = 2 done
4. the hitsound doesnt matches with the song, try fix it
5. 00:08:056(5) the sliders end should ended at 00:08:925 nah i like it it suits the music
6. 00:49:795(5) blanket this better to the (4) fixed
7. 00:56:316 a long sliders is better than a a spinner nope
8. 02:00229(5) blanket this better
9. i assume that the song ends at 03:57:621 so you should disable the kiai after that part

yeah fixed

Whispering Love

1. HP=6 i think 7's okay
2. one part of the vocal starts at 00:09:143, so i think that the circle should move 1/4 backwards deleted circles
3. 00:18:925(6) blanket this better done
4. 00:20:447 ^ done
5. 00:25:447 ^ done
6. 00:35:229 NC got it
7. 01:02:186 remove NC okay
8. 01:18:273 insert break time here okay
9. ugly overlap at 01:36:534(3,5)
   other same mistakes around the diffs

keeping it

thats all thanks^^

1. Please check AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) some objects out of screen, please fix that and object are not allowed to touch the HP bar (e.g. this one 01:57:621 (1,2) - )
2. Please change the extention of BG from .png to .jpg to reduce the size of .osz, I already convert one feel free to use http://puu.sh/9FVGQ/399ccc2551.jpg
3. I think you should enable Widescreen Support, since the BG dimension is widescreen
4. You also need a custom combo colors to make your map more beautiful, you can use mine

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 246,128,180
   Combo2 : 255,255,255
   Combo3 : 186,231,235
   Combo4 : 159,154,208

   Or you can find It on your own
5. Delete Nell from Tags because It's already on Artist name
6. Since Escaping Gravity is an album name, you should put It on Tags instead on Source, because the rules say so
7. I think your Offset is a bit to fast, maybe you should asking help for timing
8. Your easiest diff must be named Normal instead of Easy to complete the Diff spread criteria (at least Normal and Hard) you can also read the ranking criteria to make sure

1. 00:08:708 - Add a circle there? I hear the harp or guitar sound there
2. 00:09:143 (9) - New Combo? the singer begin to sing a new lyric there
3. 00:13:925 - Add a circle there?
4. 00:28:056 (5) - Maybe you should move that circle to x:220 y:328 to prevent overlap, then move this 00:28:273 (6) - to x:208 y:244, like this http://puu.sh/9FWnq/dfe670c01f.jpg
5. 00:39:360 (6) - Move that to x:472 y:248 the move them 00:39:795 (7,8) - to x:392 y:328 to make them neater, like this http://puu.sh/9FWNR/5c31e25000.jpg
6. 00:42:621 (6) - I think that one better to be blanket like this http://puu.sh/9FWUt/c81b5aa983.jpg then 00:43:273 (7) - that one will better look like this http://puu.sh/9FX49/a0c1ce8c97.jpg
7. 00:50:664 (3) - Make It a bit curve? http://puu.sh/9FXeY/bb251bf195.jpg
8. 00:57:186 (4) - Move this to x:80 y:88 then move this 00:57:621 (1) - to x:213 y:176 then move 00:57:838 (2) - to x:284 y:216 then move 00:58:056 (3) - to x:300 y:296, so It'll look neater, like this http://puu.sh/9FXzw/b7d44e8301.jpg
9. 00:58:490 (5,6) - I think that one is a bad flow, maybe you can Ctrl+J this 00:58:490 (5) - http://puu.sh/9FXGx/f5b42909cc.jpg
10. 01:03:490 (4,6) - I think that one is a bad overlap, you can make (4) a perfect stack under slider (6)'s body or you can move (4) a bit farther like this to make a jump http://puu.sh/9FXUA/140e87b768.jpg
11. 01:07:621 (8,1,2,3) - Maybe the rhythm will be better like this http://puu.sh/9FY4g/a26d1c3731.jpg
12. 01:13:164 (2) - Delete thta? I think there's no need to be a note there
13. 01:21:099 (6) - NC? since after a long a break and also a new rhythm so I thing It should be NC, then delete this NC 01:22:403 (1) -
14. 01:24:143 (5) - Move this to x:400 y:216 to prevent overlap with this 01:23:056 (3) -
15. 01:30:229 (8) - You should spread It more to make a better blanket, like this http://puu.sh/9FYHi/8ed6029126.jpg
16. 01:34:795 (9) - Move up a bit to prevent overlap
17. 01:36:099 (3,5) - That overlap is also not good, how about make them like this? http://puu.sh/9FZ8n/f3b5ab34c9.jpg
18. 01:41:316 (6,7) - Make them like this? http://puu.sh/9FZh3/def79d7af0.jpg to prevent overlap
19. 02:01:425 (2) - Delete? then add circle here 02:02:295 -
20. 02:08:708 (2) - Spread It more for better blanket with this 02:09:360 (3) -
21. 02:27:621 (3) - Move up a bit to prevent overlap
22. 02:32:838 (4) - Move It a bit to left to prevent overlap
23. 02:33:925 - Pull the break time to the right until big white tick, before http://puu.sh/9FZCS/bc57414eae.jpg after http://puu.sh/9FZE8/c1456e288c.jpg It'll affect when we play
24. How about add a spinner here 02:53:273 - I geuss It's lack of spinner, start from 02:53:273 - end on 02:54:795 -
25. 02:55:664 (3,6) - Bad overlap, maybe you should move this 02:56:534 (6) - to x:264 y:180
26. 03:00:229 (1) - Spread It more for better blanket, then stack this 03:00:012 (10) - on 03:00:229 (1) - (1)'s head, like this http://puu.sh/9G03u/3c3057f87e.jpg
27. 03:10:664 (1,2) - Out of screen and can be blanket better
28. 03:15:882 (1,2) - Move them a bit down to prevent overlap
29. 03:19:795 (1,2) - Move them a bit up to prevent overlap
30. 03:21:099 (5,6) - Not looking so good, maybe you should move up (6) a bit
31. 03:33:708 (2) - Better stack It perfectly under 03:32:838 (9) - (9)'s body, like this http://puu.sh/9G0oH/4fcadc11f7.jpg
32. 03:39:795 (7,8,9,10) - How about make them like this? http://puu.sh/9G0Aj/9669483cd5.jpg It's look neater
33. 03:41:316 (11,1) - The shape of (11) can be better like this http://puu.sh/9G0Im/6e08dae3ca.jpg
34. 03:54:143 (7,8) - Move them to x:96 y:292
35. How about you map the last part after kiai time untill here 04:18:490 - ? It's bit weird since he still singing and the song also not fading away

Mako Sakata wrote:

Helloooo

[General]

1. Please check AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) some objects out of screen, please fix that and object are not allowed to touch the HP bar (e.g. this one 01:57:621 (1,2) - ) alright ffixed
2. Please change the extention of BG from .png to .jpg to reduce the size of .osz, I already convert one feel free to use http://puu.sh/9FVGQ/399ccc2551.jpg
3. I think you should enable Widescreen Support, since the BG dimension is widescreen didn't think of that alright
4. You also need a custom combo colors to make your map more beautiful, you can use mine

   [Colours][color=#FF0000] i thought i had custom combo colors already[/color]
   Combo1 : 246,128,180
   Combo2 : 255,255,255
   Combo3 : 186,231,235
   Combo4 : 159,154,208

   Or you can find It on your own i thought i had custom combo colors already..
5. Delete Nell from Tags because It's already on Artist name done
6. Since Escaping Gravity is an album name, you should put It on Tags instead on Source, because the rules say so done
7. I think your Offset is a bit to fast, maybe you should asking help for timing
8. Your easiest diff must be named Normal instead of Easy to complete the Diff spread criteria (at least Normal and Hard) you can also read the ranking criteria to make sure

done

[Whispering Love]

1. 00:08:708 - Add a circle there? I hear the harp or guitar sound there added
2. 00:09:143 (9) - New Combo? the singer begin to sing a new lyric there added combo
3. 00:13:925 - Add a circle there? done c:
4. 00:28:056 (5) - Maybe you should move that circle to x:220 y:328 to prevent overlap, then move this 00:28:273 (6) - to x:208 y:244, like this http://puu.sh/9FWnq/dfe670c01f.jpg oh cool! fixed
5. 00:39:360 (6) - Move that to x:472 y:248 the move them 00:39:795 (7,8) - to x:392 y:328 to make them neater, like this http://puu.sh/9FWNR/5c31e25000.jpg fixed in previous update but thanks
6. 00:42:621 (6) - I think that one better to be blanket like this http://puu.sh/9FWUt/c81b5aa983.jpg then 00:43:273 (7) - that one will better look like this http://puu.sh/9FX49/a0c1ce8c97.jpg oh you're right! fixed
7. 00:50:664 (3) - Make It a bit curve? http://puu.sh/9FXeY/bb251bf195.jpg eeh nope. not my style
8. 00:57:186 (4) - Move this to x:80 y:88 then move this 00:57:621 (1) - to x:213 y:176 then move 00:57:838 (2) - to x:284 y:216 then move 00:58:056 (3) - to x:300 y:296, so It'll look neater, like this http://puu.sh/9FXzw/b7d44e8301.jpg
9. 00:58:490 (5,6) - I think that one is a bad flow, maybe you can Ctrl+J this 00:58:490 (5) - http://puu.sh/9FXGx/f5b42909cc.jpg
10. 01:03:490 (4,6) - I think that one is a bad overlap, you can make (4) a perfect stack under slider (6)'s body or you can move (4) a bit farther like this to make a jump http://puu.sh/9FXUA/140e87b768.jpg
11. 01:07:621 (8,1,2,3) - Maybe the rhythm will be better like this http://puu.sh/9FY4g/a26d1c3731.jpg
12. 01:13:164 (2) - Delete thta? I think there's no need to be a note there
13. 01:21:099 (6) - NC? since after a long a break and also a new rhythm so I thing It should be NC, then delete this NC 01:22:403 (1) - fixed in previous update
14. 01:24:143 (5) - Move this to x:400 y:216 to prevent overlap with this 01:23:056 (3) - done
15. 01:30:229 (8) - You should spread It more to make a better blanket, like this http://puu.sh/9FYHi/8ed6029126.jpg done
16. 01:34:795 (9) - Move up a bit to prevent overlap i like the overlap here
17. 01:36:099 (3,5) - That overlap is also not good, how about make them like this? http://puu.sh/9FZ8n/f3b5ab34c9.jpg nice fixed
18. 01:41:316 (6,7) - Make them like this? http://puu.sh/9FZh3/def79d7af0.jpg to prevent overlap fixed
19. 02:01:425 (2) - Delete? then add circle here 02:02:295 - deleted
20. 02:08:708 (2) - Spread It more for better blanket with this 02:09:360 (3) - nope it's a duplicate of 1
21. 02:27:621 (3) - Move up a bit to prevent overlap nope
22. 02:32:838 (4) - Move It a bit to left to prevent overlap done
23. 02:33:925 - Pull the break time to the right until big white tick, before http://puu.sh/9FZCS/bc57414eae.jpg after http://puu.sh/9FZE8/c1456e288c.jpg It'll affect when we play cool done
24. How about add a spinner here 02:53:273 - I geuss It's lack of spinner, start from 02:53:273 - end on 02:54:795 - added
25. 02:55:664 (3,6) - Bad overlap, maybe you should move this 02:56:534 (6) - to x:264 y:180 done
26. 03:00:229 (1) - Spread It more for better blanket, then stack this 03:00:012 (10) - on 03:00:229 (1) - (1)'s head, like this http://puu.sh/9G03u/3c3057f87e.jpg done c:
27. 03:10:664 (1,2) - Out of screen and can be blanket better fixed in previous update
28. 03:15:882 (1,2) - Move them a bit down to prevent overlap
29. 03:19:795 (1,2) - Move them a bit up to prevent overlap
30. 03:21:099 (5,6) - Not looking so good, maybe you should move up (6) a bit fixed in previous update
31. 03:33:708 (2) - Better stack It perfectly under 03:32:838 (9) - (9)'s body, like this http://puu.sh/9G0oH/4fcadc11f7.jpg fixed
32. 03:39:795 (7,8,9,10) - How about make them like this? http://puu.sh/9G0Aj/9669483cd5.jpg It's look neater awesome done
33. 03:41:316 (11,1) - The shape of (11) can be better like this http://puu.sh/9G0Im/6e08dae3ca.jpg fixed. kind of..
34. 03:54:143 (7,8) - Move them to x:96 y:292 fixed
35. How about you map the last part after kiai time untill here 04:18:490 - ? It's bit weird since he still singing and the song also not fading away but that part is unmapped?

thanks so much for your mod! it really improved my mapset ^^
[]
For now that's all, maybe I'll take a look on your Normal tonight or tomorrow morning
Your map is good and flowing nicely, but the NC and hitsounding still have to be improveeed, good luck~

Kasuga wrote:

Hello

From my modding queue

[Easy]
I have nothing to say here....

[Whispering Love]
- Too many offscreen object. Check AiMod for details and consider fixing it thanks fixed
- 00:09:143 (8) - Put new combo here fixed in previous update
- 01:30:229 (8,9) - Blanket it properly fixed in previous update
- 02:33:708 - Try to reduce the break. It's too long, try to make it less than 15 seconds the break is fine
- 03:57:621 - Suggestion. Try to add more note until 04:28:925 - nope the map ends here

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

hi~ m4m here

[Whispering Love]
00:07:838 (6,7) - try to change it into a note + 1/2 slider + note, just like this one

SPOILER

00:09:143 - NC

00:09:143 (7,8,9) - move note 9 to 00:09:143 -

00:14:360 (1,2,3) - ^

00:14:360 (1) - remove NC

00:13:056 (1,2) - please change this like 00:16:969 (1,2,3) -

00:25:447 (2) - slider‘s tail and 00:25:882 (3,4) - maybe you can heard a drum, right? please change the additions into drum and add claps

SPOILER

also change is up to you, just like 00:36:099 (3) - and others

00:34:577 (7,1) - it's not a good idea to get a break here imo, try to change into a note + 1/2slider? i think it will be better

00:49:360 (6) - move to 00:49:577 -

01:18:056 (5) - a reverse slider seems suit for here. from 01:17:838 - to 01:18:273 - , maybe you can know my means ;w;

02:33:708 (6) - ^ also dont forget add a note here 02:34:143 -

01:57:621 (1) - 03:10:664 (1) - unrankable because they are out of range

03:10:664 (1,2) - blanket

03:40:664 (10) - NC

03:41:969 (1) - remove NC

[Easy]
01:53:708 (3,4) - check the DS

02:34:143 - add a note with whistle

00:08:056 (5) - reverse at 00:08:490 -

the drum hitsound suggestion same as Whispering Love

nothing else

good luck~!

truonant wrote:

Hello~ from my Mod Queue

General
Your background image is in png format, I would recommend using a JPG because you can still achieve the same quality while decreasing the file size: DL LINK
I like what you did with the hitsounds during the beginning portion of Whispering Love, please continue to add the rest of the hitsounds I think they were removed?
Sorry, I started my mod 2 days ago, updated and then finished the rest today, so it may seem a bit confusing and messy since some of it might already be fixed within your previous update

Easy Normal - briefly looked at it
With all of the ½ tick notes, your Easy plays like a Normal. I would highly recommend changing to Normal.
Change HP drain to 3 for Easy, otherwise leave it at 4 if you plan to change this to Normal Since you changed it to Normal, fix your HP, AR, and OD
02:55:012 – no kiai section?
00:08:056 (5) – I recommend pulling it back http://puu.sh/9HJgG/3d81d7b3ff.jpg because it sounds weird with the slider hitsound on the blue tick

Insane
03:57:621 – Not mapping after this?There’s potential to end it here: 04:19:658 -

Combo placement

SPOILER

00:06:751 (4) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/9HJTj/698f1df229.jpg
00:09:143 (8) –NC
00:13:056 (1) – remove NC
There are some sections where you have jumps. I would suggest incorporating some patterns to enhance readability/flow or you could just leave it. It’s up to you.
00:57:621 (1,2,3,4) – ^
01:00:012 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ play around with pattern to see what works. Example : Here’s a possible suggestion: star pattern - http://puu.sh/9HKCK/ccb7ce4957.jpg
01:01:534 (6,7,8,1,2) - ^
01:28:925 (4,5,6,7) – ^
02:06:751 (8,9,10,11,12) – ^
02:25:230 (6,7,8,9) – ^
03:10:012 (7) – stack on slider end

Aesthetics[spoilerbox]
00:24:360 (6) – better blanket - http://puu.sh/9HJY1/46548a033f.jpg
00:25:447 (2) – better blanket - http://puu.sh/9HK36/f6086e26e5.jpg
00:26:316 (1,3) – These aren’t quite parallel
00:36:099 (3) - move left a bit so that (1) and (2:head) are parallel with (2:tail) and (3:head)
01:30:229 (8) – you can blanket bow sliders like this - http://puu.sh/9HL7G/19de1232c6.jpg
01:33:490 (6,7,8,9) - Looked neater? http://puu.sh/9HLcW/c189953f5f.jpg
01:35:664 (2) – blanket
01:40:012 (3) – blanket
01:41:316 (6) – blanket
01:52:621 (2,3) – I think it’ll look better parallel
01:58:273 (2) – stack slider tail on 01:57:621 (1) – slider tail
02:04:143 (3) –blanket
02:08:708 (2) – blanket
02:20:447 (6) – slider bow blanket
03:00:229 (1) – slider bow blanket
03:17:186 (3) – blanket
03:21:751 (6) – move up a bit
03:32:186 (8) – blanket
03:37:403 (2) – blanket
03:41:316 (11) - A better way to make this type of slider (make it on a larger grid first and then rotate) -http://puu.sh/9HLJU/5cb1f3c0f6.jpg

Good luck with your map. I hope my mod was helpful.

neonat wrote:

Genral

Tags for Whispering Love: korean indie love sb escaping gravity
Tags for Normal: korean indie love sb escaping gravity

^ you have 1 additional space in the tags for Normal, remove it to make the tags consistent for both difficulties alright thanks

Normal

00:08:056 (5) - this is off-rhythm, try and change the rhythm: fixed

SPOILER

00:21:969 (4,5) - this part feels very weird, mostly because it's really nothing much here to map, but changing the beat might help i think it's fine. keeping it till further notice

SPOILER

00:47:186 (3) - NC here nc'd
00:59:360 (3,4) - they aren't parallel to each other fixed
02:34:143 - shift the break line to this timing i can't ._.
02:57:621 (5) - the bend at the end of the slider isn't really clear, looks awkward alright got rid of it
03:47:186 (1,2) - blanket better
03:48:490 (2,3) - spacing too close, should be constant like 03:49:795 (3,4,5)

Whispering Love

00:09:143 (1) - this slider goes over the important beat at 00:09:360 and 00:09:795 (2) also goes over the important beat at 00:10:012 - you should shift them such that 00:10:447 (3) starts at 00:09:143 and 00:09:143 (1) moves to 00:09:360 and 00:09:795 (2) to 00:10:012 no thanks

SPOILER

00:14:360 (1,2,3) - same as above ^

SPOILER

00:33:490 (4,5) - blanket could be better fixed
00:41:969 (5,6) - blanket these 2 did that in previous update
01:01:534 (6,8) - maybe don't let them overlap okay
01:02:186 (8,2,3) - equal spacing between them spacin nope
01:03:490 (4,5) - blanket mhm
01:18:490 - break line place it here done
01:33:490 (6,7) - blanket them okay
01:40:012 (3,4) - blanket nicely ^
02:08:708 (2,3) - blanket perfectly ^
02:14:577 (6) - if you want to have a jump/bigger spacing between objects, it should be done here with this note, not with 02:14:795 (7) makes sense alright
02:17:186 (3,4) - blanket perfectly okay
02:18:490 (1,2) - they are not parallel with each other fixed
02:20:447 (6,1) - blanket properly looks proper to me
03:10:229 (1) - this NC isn't needed removed
03:32:186 (8,9) - like most of the supposed blankets, it's not perfect uh huh right .-.

SPOILER

03:38:056 (3,5) - not stacked perfectly fixed
03:43:273 (3,5) - ^ that's as perfect as i can get it
03:52:403 (3,5) - stack them done



Good Luck

-Famous- wrote:

M4M request from my Queue

Normal

1. Stack 00:24:577 (6) with 00:21:969 (4)? didn't see that thanks.
2. 00:32:621 (4) - that circle is a little bit weird. Maybe move it more higher? fixed
3. Try to make 00:52:403 (1) more parallel with 00:51:099 (5). done
4. 00:53:708 (3,4) - blanket fixed
5. Move 03:36:751 (1,2) one box right. (DS)

don't know what you mean but i made some changes anyway

Hard

1. Stack 00:34:577 (7) with 00:33:056 (3)? Then move 00:34:360 (6) to x:104 ; y:192. done
2. Stack 01:24:795 (1) with 01:22:838 (2). done
3. 02:05:447 (6) add NC here or 02:06:751 (8) here?

Gaia wrote:

M4M via my queue

[General]
03:58:093 - Weird place to end the song.. hmm maybe..

[Normal]
00:05:447 (1) - first note but no hitsounds ehh there are no hitsounds in the beginning
00:09:360 (6) - curve other way? nope
00:28:056 (4) - a little right so perfect triangle done
00:35:229 (1,2,3) - Isn't evenly spread out, maybe point the slider right a lil? http://puu.sh/a2Bqf/5235bd15a1.jpg mmh sure
00:38:056 (5,6) - I'm sure you can do this sliderbow betterbetter how?
00:46:316 (9) - suggestion but maybe curve this to match 00:47:186 (1) - ? nope
00:56:316 (1) - Not sure but might be a lil too short it's fine
01:23:708 (3,4) - overlap (bow this?) nope
01:58:925 (4) - down more to match with previous 3 nope
02:22:403 (5,6,7) - doesn't look perfect i think it's fine
02:25:012 (2) - stack on (5,7) of ^

[Hard]
I think your whistles are places kinda randomly s: hardly lol
00:32:838 (2,7) - stack yes that is a stack
00:44:577 (2) - right more to improve flow nope
00:52:403 (7,8) - try this maybe http://puu.sh/a2CHy/ff41911aaa.jpg looks good added
01:15:882 (1,2) - match these? nope
01:22:838 (2,1) - stack with what it's just a note
01:45:664 (1,6) - ^ stacked
02:05:447 (6) - NC added in previous update
02:23:708 (1,2,3) - odd triangle fixed thanks
02:24:360 (4,7) - stack on end of slider yup
02:27:621 (3) - 02:29:360 (2,4) - stack mebe?
03:00:229 (1) - 03:02:186 (5) - ^
03:33:490 (1,2,3) - doesn't look perfect i have my reasons for making it that way
03:38:708 (4) - stack end on 03:36:751 (1) - mmkay
03:44:360 (6) - point upwards more why i think it's fine
03:45:882 (4,5,6) - not perf fixed thanks
03:53:056 (4) - right more, match with the next 4 notes cool
03:53:708 (5,6) - align them

Hope I helped~ GL from now (:

Don wrote:

This map is in an unmoddable state. Change the tempo to 92, 4/4 and set the slider speed to 2.4. Send me a forum PM or contact me in game once it's fixed. Notes should be snapped to 1/6.

Kibbleru wrote:

irc mod?

SPOILER

19:50 Kibbleru: b my frand
19:50 Kibbleru: ty
19:51 chaee: what lol
19:51 chaee: sure
19:51 Kibbleru: yay o/
19:51 chaee: o.o
19:51 Kibbleru: owo
19:52 chaee: you're modding my map owo
19:52 chaee: hrmff
19:53 Kibbleru: oh no juts taking a look lol
19:54 Kibbleru: if you want some critisismg
19:54 chaee: oh ahah. okeh :d
19:54 Kibbleru: critisism
19:54 Kibbleru: wtf
19:54 Kibbleru: critisism?
19:54 Kibbleru: is that how u spell it?
19:54 Kibbleru: i noticed that you're missing alot of sounds
19:54 chaee: criticism
19:55 Kibbleru: 00:09:360 -
19:55 Kibbleru: there
19:55 Kibbleru: how 2 fking english
19:55 Kibbleru: k
19:55 Kibbleru: yeah
19:55 Kibbleru: like here
19:55 Kibbleru: 00:09:360 -
19:55 Kibbleru: so a long white tick
19:55 Kibbleru: is called a downbeat
19:55 Kibbleru: usually the downbeat is a really strong note
19:55 Kibbleru: so its not a good idea to leave it unmapped
19:56 chaee: for which diff?
19:56 *Kibbleru is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/424621 Nell - Perfect [Hard]]
19:56 Kibbleru: is this french lol?
19:56 chaee: OH!
19:57 Kibbleru: actually hang on
19:57 chaee: the fat tick
19:57 chaee: i see now
19:57 Kibbleru: wait hang on
19:57 Kibbleru: im questioning ur offset a bit
19:57 Kibbleru: nvm its correct
19:58 Kibbleru: 00:13:056 (1,2,3) - so this part
19:58 Kibbleru: im confused why you decided to leave out 00:12:838 - and 00:13:708 - 00:14:143 -
19:58 Kibbleru: like
19:58 Kibbleru: i don't see a particular reason why you would want to do that o-o
19:58 Kibbleru: they're all the same in intensity
19:59 Kibbleru: none of them seem to stand out more
19:59 Kibbleru: yet you only mapped some and left some out
19:59 chaee: i didn't want to overmap
19:59 chaee: i guess
19:59 chaee: hmm..
19:59 Kibbleru: lol
19:59 Kibbleru: okay
19:59 Kibbleru: overmap
20:00 Kibbleru: i thikn ur getting the definition wrong here lol
20:00 Kibbleru: overmapping refers to placing an object when there is no actual musical beat to support it
20:00 Kibbleru: 00:14:577 - and again ur missing some stuff here too
20:00 Kibbleru: 00:15:229 - ^
20:01 chaee: probably yeah. i wanted to make it simple and clean because that's my preference for hards
20:01 chaee: the downbeat
20:01 chaee: got it
20:01 Kibbleru: 00:14:360 - if you want to follow vocal line for here i have a rhythm suggestion http://puu.sh/a7mGl/a27f82564c.png
20:01 Kibbleru: maybe but i don't see a reason why you would want to simplify it that much
20:01 Kibbleru: this song isnt in danger of being too hard lol
20:02 Kibbleru: 138 bpm xP definitely not
20:02 Kibbleru: 00:36:751 (1) - weird spacing here lol
20:02 Kibbleru: gotta be careful of these
20:03 Kibbleru: essentially, the main issue here is rhythm
20:03 Kibbleru: placement is no problem for u it seems
20:03 Kibbleru: one thing to beware of is placing your jumps
20:04 Kibbleru: however
20:04 Kibbleru: yes jumps are nice
20:04 Kibbleru: but make sure they make sense
20:04 chaee: very nice
20:04 Kibbleru: such as for emphasis
20:04 Kibbleru: 01:17:621 (4) - why not turn this into a 1/2 slider so you can map out this drum thing? 01:17:838 -
20:05 chaee: good idea
20:05 Kibbleru: like this is a well placed jump 01:41:969 (8) -
20:05 Kibbleru: gj on that
20:06 chaee: 02:12:403 (2) - 1/2 slider here too?
20:06 Kibbleru: yep it fits
20:06 Kibbleru: oh right
20:06 Kibbleru: something else is NC consistency
20:06 Kibbleru: do you have a specific pattern for ur NCing?
20:07 Kibbleru: if not let me recommend something
20:07 Kibbleru: just put your new comboes on ever downbeat or every 2 downbeats
20:07 Kibbleru: which is again another important reason to map out the downbeats
20:08 Kibbleru: but every 1 or 2 downbeats NC pattern is easy and it works well
20:10 chaee: i get what you're saying. aah.. should have read music theory wiki before i stared this ._.
20:10 Kibbleru: LOL
20:10 Kibbleru: 03:45:446 (2,3) -
20:11 Kibbleru: btw wtf is this haha
20:11 Kibbleru: either i made some changes by accident
20:11 chaee: what is that
20:11 Kibbleru: or u have 2 sliders playing at the same time lmao
20:12 chaee: D:
20:12 chaee: fixing i don't know what happened there
20:12 Kibbleru: i suppose this 03:45:447 (3) - was suppose to start here? 03:44:795 -
20:12 Kibbleru: just drag it over on the timeline
20:13 chaee: yup done
20:13 Kibbleru: btw u should finish the song ._.
20:14 Kibbleru: i highly recommend
20:14 chaee: lol.. 5 people have told me that already
20:15 Kibbleru: no
20:15 Kibbleru: ik what ur thinking
20:15 Kibbleru: "too lazy to map the rest"
20:15 Kibbleru: don't
20:15 chaee: laazy
20:15 Kibbleru: dont
20:15 Kibbleru: NO
20:15 Kibbleru: askfjhsakfsa
20:15 Kibbleru: if ur gunna map something
20:15 chaee: yup
20:15 Kibbleru: map it to the endd
20:15 Kibbleru: THE ENDDD
20:15 Kibbleru: ASLKFJHSALKFJAS
20:15 chaee: even if it kills me eh?
20:15 Kibbleru: trust me ive had similar experiences with my first ranked map
20:15 Kibbleru: yess
20:15 Kibbleru: u must die to complete it
20:16 chaee: shouldn't mapped a tv size instead lol
20:16 Kibbleru: should've?
20:16 Kibbleru: fuck tv sizes i got 3 full versions ranked b4 mapping a single tv size
20:17 chaee: ahaha i noticed
20:18 chaee: i dont't think i'll ever map a tv size :d
20:19 Kibbleru: yay proud of u /
20:19 Kibbleru: wtf
20:19 Kibbleru: yo
20:19 Kibbleru: combo colour inconsistencies lol
20:20 Kibbleru: also lower the HP and OD of ur normal diff a bit lol
20:20 chaee: i-i know.. i don't have a pattern that i follow when i combo just combo to the music
20:20 chaee: i try anyway
20:20 Kibbleru: HP and OD should be like AR-1 or 2
20:20 Kibbleru: yeah
20:20 Kibbleru: but
20:21 Kibbleru: every downbeat often follows the music
20:21 Kibbleru: so
20:21 Kibbleru: q:
20:21 Kibbleru: does this count as mod? gunna post log kds pls

CrazyrabbitKGE wrote:

The song sounds very nice
I'm just gonna point out that normal diff doesn't seem to be following the music properly so it might be boring for some people, and for hard difficulty...
03:31:643 (1,2) - that.

jinhang_ang wrote:

From my queue.

First of all, I don't understand why you have changes in the uninherited timing points between diffs. All songs have only 1 bpm (and it's double, or half).

I have no idea what your getting at here, but all songs don't have only one bpm bro. Most songs chyeah, but not all.


update:

OH SHIT DAMN NOW I GET WHAT YOU'RE SAYING. Could've worded it better, shit...chaee you dense motherfucker

Normal

Well...I don't know if my hearing is that bad or I have rubbish music sense or whatever, I don't see what you are mapping to, so of course I can't mod in this way. Maybe I'll come back again after you tell me what are you mapping to. Plus, BPM 92 in Hard looks nice. It fits so why use 132 on Normal? I don't catch that.

mapping to lyrics is noobie shit And yeah i forgot to check the bpm for both diffs ooops, thanks

Hard

1. 00:25:447 (5) - Object end isn't snapped. AIMod told you that Just pull it back to the previous white tick.

2. 02:06:099 (2,3,4) - Use 02:06:099 (2) as a blanket of 02:06:751 (3) and place 02:06:969 (4) on the tail of 02:06:099 (2) .

3. If you don't want to change No. 2, 02:06:751 (3,6) - the blanket should be fixed.

4. 03:52:403 (1,2) - Blanket please.

I'm done mostly pattern issues in Hard, and about Normal...ask for a recheck if you want