ExUsagi wrote:
t's somehow not fair.. orz
tell me that again. when your finished watching Yuno's o!m life. lolol.
[6K Intermediate]
00:11:885 (11885|0) - dont know what should this be following.
00:11:885 (11885|0,12275|2,12859|1) - delete these sv or rework! some of them i dont know what are you following.
00:17:924 (17924|3) - make this a lns instead and delete 00:18:314 (18314|0) - it sounds more fitting.
00:25:132 (25132|1,25522|3) - delete your mapping the silence.
00:32:145 (32145|0) - move this instead to 00:32:340 can here is a loud sound.
00:36:041 (36041|2) - move this note to 5thth column for more symmetrical pattern .
00:39:743 (39743|4) - add note
00:41:301 (41301|2) - add note
00:45:976 (45976|4) - add note at 2nd column
00:49:678 (49678|3) - change into ln
00:50:457 you ignored 1/4?? you mapped them in the whole kiai.
00:50:652 (50652|5,50652|3,51041|1,51041|3,51431|3,51431|4,51820|1,51820|5,52210|5,52210|3,52600|4,52600|1,52989|4,52989|3,53379|5,53379|3) - you mapped 1/1 double notes. and yet in the start of the kiai time you use single notes. which has the same sound. fix this. if i were a BAT i wouldnt rank in this state.
00:54:743 (54743|0) - can add another note cause of the drum
00:53:379 (53379|3) - nove to 4th column for the pattern.
01:05:749 (65749|4) - delete this it has no sound the stream starts at 01:05:846 (65846|3) -
[6K Harder]
00:00:976 (976|1,1366|3,1756|1) - what are you following baka? the piano sound you are following here cant be heard cause of the vocal so fix.
00:04:093 (4093|0,4483|5,4872|0) - ^
00:10:717 (10717|3) - move to 6th column for pattern. also you need to add a note at 00:10:522 baka!
00:28:541 (28541|4) - you can change this into an ln if you want to follow the drum more.
00:30:782 (30782|3,31171|4) - move 1 column right. and then move 00:31:366 (31366|5) - 5th column for more enjoyable pattern!
00:32:145 (32145|1) - delete this and then 00:31:950 (31950|2) - make this an ln for more suitable sound.
00:34:872 (34872|2,34872|3) - this sound isnt really loud as 00:34:483 (34483|0,34483|1,34678|5,34678|4) - for the drums so i suggest you to delete of them.
00:35:652 (35652|2,35652|3) - ^
00:38:769 (38769|1,38769|3) - ^
00:39:548 (39548|3,39548|2) - can map 1/4 here baka
00:50:262 (50262|1,50262|5) - in intermediate diff you followed the 1/4 now in the HARDER diff you didnt? omg turtle please.
00:56:691 (56691|1,56691|5) - ^
00:59:807 (59807|3) - ^
[6K Insanity]
00:19:288 (19288|1,19288|4) - i know this is the insanity diff but, mapping double in such silent sound. tho you can map the 1/4 until 00:19:483 (19483|0) - .
00:20:846 (20846|2) - ^
00:27:080 (27080|0) - ^
00:31:950 (31950|2) - you can make this an ln for following the drum more.
00:34:483 (34483|4,34483|5,34483|3) - what is this triples purpose? if you didnt even triple at 00:33:704 (33704|2,33704|3) - which has the very same osund?
00:50:457 (50457|1,50457|4) - you can hear those 1/4 right.
you have problems on your doubles in the kiai. for example. (This part) up to (This part) you mapped 1/1 doubles and then (this part ) to ( this part ) you used o,oo,o,o,oo,ooo,o if you could fixed this the kiai will be more precise.
[6K Burst]
00:39:743 (39743|1) - move to 1st column.
00:41:106 (41106|3) - delete this it isnt consistent to you past 1/4 anymore AND IT HAS THE SAME SOUND.
00:44:028 (44028|3) - ^
00:47:340 (47340|3) - ^
00:53:574 (53574|3) - ^
00:56:496 (56496|5,56496|3,56496|1,56496|0) - this is a little too much maybe?
wont touch burst further more.
bye hentai turtle