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Girls' Generation - Day by Day

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Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on samedi 24 mars 2018 at 10:35:12

Artist: Girls' Generation
Title: Day by Day
Source: Beethoven Virus
Tags: kpop ost snsd Love Burning Melody oh! uws UnitedWeSin
BPM: 101
Filesize: 5633kb
Play Time: 03:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2,44 stars, 308 notes)
  2. Normal (1,65 stars, 255 notes)
  3. UWS's Insane (3,07 stars, 493 notes)
Download: Girls' Generation - Day by Day
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#6th Beatmap!
Simple&Relax song. One more kpop! Thanks to UnitedWeSin for GD!

Enjoy guys!
Last edited by Yuji Tokaji , edited 46 times in total.
Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji

Changelog:

  1. 24/02/2014 - Mapset has been submitted.
  2. Normal finished, Hard WorkInProgress.
  3. Added "uws" in tags box.
  4. 25/02/2014 - Updated.
  5. Hard finished. I'll add some Histounds later.
  6. Removed LetterBox&Widescreen from both difficulties.
  7. Title has been changed.
  8. Hard&Normal, ready to mod!
  9. 26/02/2014 - Updated.
  10. 2/3 breaks has been removed.
  11. Guest difficulty will be finish soon.
  12. 27/02/2014 - Background changed.
  13. UWS'Insane uploaded.
  14. 28/02/2014 - Move to PENDING! Ready to mod!
  15. Beuchi'IRC mod fixed.
  16. 01/03/2014 - Kibbleru's mod fixed.
  17. sheela901's mod fixed.
  18. 06/09/2014 - Back to WIP!
  19. Sonnyc's mod fixed.
  20. Sharlo's mod fixed.
  21. Romanised name added.
  22. 06/09/2014 - Re-Move to PENDING!
  23. UWS'diff updated!
  24. Normal's diff re-make some parts.
  25. 15/09/2014 - Chaoslitz's mod fixed.
  26. 19/09/2014 - Leorda's mod fixed.
  27. 22/02/2018 - Revived... holy sh$t - 4years...
  28. 24/02/2018 - Tomoka Rin's mod fixed.
  29. 25/02/2018 - LisaBestGirl's mod fixed.
Last edited by Yuji Tokaji , edited 22 times in total.
Lusy_old
69 posts
Joined January 2013
Lusy_old
Hi ^^..
Well i am just thinking that the real title of this song is "Day By Day" a.k.a (or) Love Burning Melody.
But you type "Thinking Only Of Good Things". So, which one is the true title?? well.. good luck~
Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji

Lusy wrote:

Hi ^^..
Well i am just thinking that the real title of this song is "Day By Day" a.k.a (or) Love Burning Melody.
But you type "Thinking Only Of Good Things". So, which one is the true title?? well.. good luck~
Hi, I also find that there are several titles available. I hesitated before putting it. Anyways, I replaced it by one (Day by Day).
Also, thank you for this star! =3
Lusy_old
69 posts
Joined January 2013
Lusy_old
hehehe.. :) Your welcome, Fighting !! ^^
oSONEo Forever
11 posts
Joined March 2013
oSONEo Forever
can't change the background
i think use SNSD is better
Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji

oSONEo Forever wrote:

can't change the background
i think use SNSD is better
I guess the actual background is nice.
We must not forget that this music comes from the Korean drama.
If you can find me a SNSD background with the maximum accepted size, I'd love to change it.

EDIT : Background changed.
Norman
Norman
:3
Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji

Norman wrote:

:3
=3
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,846 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
M4M from ur queue o-o?


[UWS's Insane]
00:28:442 (4,5) - um fix blanket o-o?
00:37:501 (2,3) - ^
00:33:640 (2,3) - stack?
00:42:105 (2) - maybe if you ctrl g this, there would be better DS (and maybe flow)
01:06:164 (3,4) - i wouldn't overlap this
01:20:867 (1) - i think it should end 01:21:164 , would make slightly more sense
01:30:372 (1,2) - not parallel, if its intentional, i think you should make them even more nonparallel. or else fix it o-o
01:43:739 (2) - ctrl g for better flow i think
02:29:481 (3) - ^
02:01:412 (5) - ^ this could work but you'll have to reposition some stuff, or maybe the jump is fine for insane
02:33:640 (2) - ^ (optional)
02:40:917 (2) - ^ (optional as well)
02:18:491 (5,1) - i really like this overlap... just had to point that out lmao xD
03:13:739 (1,2) - why not stack? :?:
03:28:887 (3,6) - ^

Really well mapped!

[Hard]
00:24:432 (1) - ctrl g? to flow better into (3)
00:49:382 (4,5) - not too sure about this overlap :/
00:54:432 (2,4,1) - space out more evenly (2) overlaps (1) more than it overlaps (4)
SPOILER
00:58:293 (7) - would maybe be better if you ctrl + h
01:01:263 (3,1) - why the jump o-o?
01:07:798 (1,2) - overlap more or space out more
01:21:164 (1,2,3) - space out a bit, they're touching
01:56:214 (5,6) - ^
01:26:214 (1,3) - try to overlap the ends?
do NOT copy and paste sections.
03:18:194 (1,3) - this overlap looks kind of bad

[Normal]
00:45:224 (4,2) - space out? they touch
01:11:065 (4,1) - bad overlap
03:20:570 (4,1) - ^
01:22:055 (1,2,3) - these are evenly spaced out visually but not rhythmically (on the timeline), this will confuse people. i think
02:22:055 (7,1) - blanket as well?
its pretty good, just the copy and pasting stuff
flow could use a bit of improvement too
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
Hey. M4M request from your queue.

[Normal]
00:25:026 (2) - Try to flip it vertically. It'll make a blanket with 00:24:432 (1) .
00:43:145 (1) - Remove the new combo, and add a new combo to 00:44:036 (2) ? Since 00:44:036 (2) has a new beat.
01:09:580 (3) - This nazi but, move it to x:183 y:63. It'll be more at the center.
01:12:550 (1) - Make something else.
01:17:303 (4) - Move it to x:189 y:178, and move 01:17:897 (1) to x:269 y:39.
01:22:055 (1,2,3) - The distance aren't right. Maybe stack 01:23:838 (3) with 01:23:244 (2) .
01:58:887 (1) - At the tail of the slider, add a clap, and remove the clap that was add to 01:59:778 (2) .
02:01:857 (5) - This is nazi. Stack it with the tail of 02:00:075 (3) .
02:32:749 (7) - This is not right. The distance between this and the next note is too far.
02:42:848 (1) - Same as 01:12:550 (1) , make something else.
02:47:600 (4,1) - The same pattern as the one before.
02:54:136 (3) - Stack it with 02:53:542 (2) .
03:30:076 (2) - Put this note between the two slider to make a blanket, but it'll affect the distance snap.

[Hard]
00:26:511 (4,5) - Personally, it's not a good pattern. Try to make 00:26:808 (5) a curve slider.
00:27:402 (6,7) - ^
00:35:719 (5) - Move it to x:180 y:115. If you move it, stack 00:35:422 (4) on the head the slider.
00:38:095 (1) - Try to make this slider:
SPOILER
00:51:461 (1) - The tail is overlap. Maybe move 00:51:164 (6) to x:309 y:36.
01:04:828 (3) - Make a perfect stack with the tail of 01:03:640 (1) .
01:08:689 (2) - Try this:
SPOILER
If so, move 01:09:283 (3) to x:356 y:248.
01:12:550 (1,2,3) - Make another pattern. They're overlap.
01:23:244 (1) - Remove the new combo here, and add it to 01:24:729 (2) . 01:24:729 (2) debut a new beat.
01:34:828 (2) - Switch the head by doing Ctrl+G?
02:21:461 (6) - Move it to x:203 y:349, but the distance between this and the previous note will be far.
02:35:125 (3) - Make a perfect stack.
02:38:986 (2) - Try to make the same thing as 01:08:689 (2) .
02:42:848 (1,2,3) - Make another pattern. They're overlap.
02:53:542 (1) - Remove the new combo, and add it to 02:55:026 (2) .
02:55:026 (2) - Ctrl+G?
03:24:135 (2) - Move it to x:171 y:193, so it could be in the center between those two sliders.
-This difficulty have a lot of little overlap. There're some that I didn't mention, so try to find them and try to fix them.

[Insane]
01:05:867 (2) - Move it to x:252 y:144, and move 01:06:164 (3) to x:377 y:205.
01:14:927 (1) - Move it to x:213 y:184?

I think that's it. Good Luck on ranking this map.
Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji

Kibbleru wrote:

M4M from ur queue o-o? Sure, lemme mod yours in few days brah!

[Hard]
00:24:432 (1) - ctrl g? to flow better into (3) Sure, fix'd
00:49:382 (4,5) - not too sure about this overlap :/ I like it, don't change.
00:54:432 (2,4,1) - space out more evenly (2) overlaps (1) more than it overlaps (4)
SPOILER
00:58:293 (7) - would maybe be better if you ctrl + h fixed
01:01:263 (3,1) - why the jump o-o? Why not ? =o
01:07:798 (1,2) - overlap more or space out more fixed
01:21:164 (1,2,3) - space out a bit, they're touching fixed
01:56:214 (5,6) - ^
01:26:214 (1,3) - try to overlap the ends? fixed
do NOT copy and paste sections. The tone and the words are exactly the same in the two verses!
That's why I decided to copy / paste the same pattern.
03:18:194 (1,3) - this overlap looks kind of bad Changed.

[Normal]
00:45:224 (4,2) - space out? they touch fixed
01:11:065 (4,1) - bad overlap fixed
03:20:570 (4,1) - ^ fixed
01:22:055 (1,2,3) - these are evenly spaced out visually but not rhythmically (on the timeline), this will confuse people. i think fixed
02:22:055 (7,1) - blanket as well? fixed
its pretty good, just the copy and pasting stuff
flow could use a bit of improvement too
Thanks for your helps! =3

sheela901 wrote:

Hey. M4M request from your queue. Ofc, your map has been added in MQ.

[Normal]
00:25:026 (2) - Try to flip it vertically. It'll make a blanket with 00:24:432 (1) . fixed
00:43:145 (1) - Remove the new combo, and add a new combo to 00:44:036 (2) ? Since 00:44:036 (2) has a new beat. fixed
01:09:580 (3) - This nazi but, move it to x:183 y:63. It'll be more at the center. fixed
01:12:550 (1) - Make something else. fixed
01:17:303 (4) - Move it to x:189 y:178, and move 01:17:897 (1) to x:269 y:39. fixed
01:22:055 (1,2,3) - The distance aren't right. Maybe stack 01:23:838 (3) with 01:23:244 (2) . fixed
01:58:887 (1) - At the tail of the slider, add a clap, and remove the clap that was add to 01:59:778 (2) . fixed
02:01:857 (5) - This is nazi. Stack it with the tail of 02:00:075 (3) . fixed
02:32:749 (7) - This is not right. The distance between this and the next note is too far. fixed
02:42:848 (1) - Same as 01:12:550 (1) , make something else. fixed
02:47:600 (4,1) - The same pattern as the one before. fixed
02:54:136 (3) - Stack it with 02:53:542 (2) . fixed
03:30:076 (2) - Put this note between the two slider to make a blanket, but it'll affect the distance snap. fixed

[Hard]
00:26:511 (4,5) - Personally, it's not a good pattern. Try to make 00:26:808 (5) a curve slider. fixed
00:27:402 (6,7) - ^ fixed
00:35:719 (5) - Move it to x:180 y:115. If you move it, stack 00:35:422 (4) on the head the slider. fixed
00:38:095 (1) - Try to make this slider: Not that, but I change.
SPOILER
00:51:461 (1) - The tail is overlap. Maybe move 00:51:164 (6) to x:309 y:36. fixed
01:04:828 (3) - Make a perfect stack with the tail of 01:03:640 (1) . fixed
01:08:689 (2) - Try this: fixed
SPOILER
If so, move 01:09:283 (3) to x:356 y:248.
01:12:550 (1,2,3) - Make another pattern. They're overlap. I like this overlap =(
01:23:244 (1) - Remove the new combo here, and add it to 01:24:729 (2) . 01:24:729 (2) debut a new beat. fixed
01:34:828 (2) - Switch the head by doing Ctrl+G? fixed
02:21:461 (6) - Move it to x:203 y:349, but the distance between this and the previous note will be far. fixed
02:35:125 (3) - Make a perfect stack. fixed
02:38:986 (2) - Try to make the same thing as 01:08:689 (2) . fixed
02:42:848 (1,2,3) - Make another pattern. They're overlap. Like that
02:53:542 (1) - Remove the new combo, and add it to 02:55:026 (2) . fixed
02:55:026 (2) - Ctrl+G? fixed
03:24:135 (2) - Move it to x:171 y:193, so it could be in the center between those two sliders. fixed
-This difficulty have a lot of little overlap. There're some that I didn't mention, so try to find them and try to fix them. Dude, I don't understand, Some overlap are quite nice when they are well placed.

I think that's it. Good Luck on ranking this map. Thanks brah!
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Normal:

00:42:105 (4) - Don't you think 3/4 rhythm will be too complicated for beginners to hit??
00:48:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Drag 1/2 back, and add a note at 00:48:491 then adjust hitsounds. The rhythm feels bad here.
00:54:729 (2,4) - I think there will be a chance to be confused with late appearing reverse due to 300.
01:09:580 (3) - I think it's too hard to go over the previous note as a Normal.
01:26:214 (3,1) - No for hidden reverse. Move (3) to (232,340).
01:35:719 (3,1) - I don't got a suggestion here, but hope you can fix as above.
02:30:966 (4) - NC as 01:00:669 (1).
02:32:749 (4,1) - This close distance will be confusing.
03:06:611 (1) - Remove NC
03:39:580 (8) - sv changes aren't usually nice in easier difficulties, especially like this notable change. Hope you can remove the 0.5x please.

Hard:

00:44:630 (4) - This slider being overlapped with 00:43:739 (2,3) makes it hard to read them.
00:57:996 (6,7) - I'm too sad to see a hidden reverse. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1380841
01:32:451 (7) - The tick is ignoring beats, which sounds quite important. Consider giving a reverse? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1380844
01:56:511 (6,2) - Make these a perfect symmetry.
02:14:927 (4) - Copy paste mod.
02:28:590 (7) - ^
03:02:748 (7) - ^
03:16:412 (2) - This slider didn't seemed to follow any. Replace a single note at 03:16:709?
03:18:194 (1) - Divide to note-1/2 slider?
03:19:382 (3) - ^?
03:20:273 - I think here needs a note.
03:39:877 (5) - Well this speed down isn't really expected if you hear the song. I'd rather not do as harsh as 0.5x.

UWS's Insane:

00:29:778 (1) - Strongly recommend to start from 00:29:630. Ignoring the lyric is so sad
00:48:788 (1) - Start 1/4 earlier?
01:03:046 (1) - (280,48) is better in flow imo. Check the spacing of each head of the sliders.
01:15:372 (2) - (44,272) for flow? Ignore if this looks messy.
01:25:323 (4,5) - I think the rhythm is quite awkward that a long vocal starts at 01:25:620, but a slider ends there. Replacing the rhythm with a 1/4 slider-note would sound better imo. Two sliders in a row from 01:25:026 (3) would give the feeling of "by" of the lyric, and 01:25:619 (5,6) the altered rhythm here will sound along with "day".
01:34:828 (4,5) - 02:55:620 (4,5) - 03:05:125 (4,5) - 03:05:125 (4,5) - Same suggestion as above.
03:32:154 (6) - Imo this is way too high..

Good luck!
Sharlo
667 posts
Joined May 2012
Sharlo
Hi M4M

[General]
Tags in all diffs is conflict.
[Normal]
00:50:867 (5) - Ctrl+G
01:32:154 (5) - ^
02:14:333 (2) - ^
02:21:164 (6) - ^
[Hard]
00:32:154 (6) - Bend to the right wil better for flow
00:43:145 (1) - should stack this or move more far away from 00:42:550 (5) -
01:25:620 (3,4) - Ctrl+G
01:35:719 (4,5) - ^
01:45:521 (1) - Change to a circle on 01:45:818 -
02:18:491 (2) - Ctr;+G
02:30:075 (8) - ^
03:06:016 (4,5) - ^

The flow seems bad. And too easy for a hard diff.
Copy and Paste is not good imo.
[Insane]
00:35:422 (3) - Move the tail of slider to x:160 y:144 to keep a nice compose.
01:31:263 (3) - I think 2.86x is a bit jump cuz I feel like there is no stress in music here.
01:54:135 (1,2) - I will stack them if I were you. Because I can't get 1/4 with this compose.
02:25:471 (2) - Move the tail of slider to x:200 y:12 will blanket better if you want.
02:47:006 (3) - ^ but x:284 y:28
02:51:758 (2) - Sampleset -> Normal on the head
02:54:729 (1) - Finish
03:21:758 (3,4) - change them to a slider?

Nice diff.
UnitedWeSin
891 posts
Joined July 2012
UnitedWeSin
Sorry to be late.

Kibbleru

Kibbleru wrote:

M4M from ur queue o-o?
[UWS's Insane]
00:28:442 (4,5) - um fix blanket o-o?
kk

00:37:501 (2,3) - ^
k

00:33:640 (2,3) - stack?
changed a bit

00:42:105 (2) - maybe if you ctrl g this, there would be better DS (and maybe flow)
I was trying for a pull back and release kind of thing orz. Maybe it didn't work, I'll leave for now.

01:06:164 (3,4) - i wouldn't overlap this
I'm pretty fond of this placement ;w; I'd like to leave it.

01:20:867 (1) - i think it should end 01:21:164 , would make slightly more sense
I wanted to follow the hold of the vocals here.

01:30:372 (1,2) - not parallel, if its intentional, i think you should make them even more nonparallel. or else fix it o-o
fixed

01:43:739 (2) - ctrl g for better flow i think
I don't agree, to me the change in direction is more effect/comfortable.

02:29:481 (3) - ^
I wanted all the sliders to flow downwards so the player moves to the right rather than up and down.

02:01:412 (5) - ^ this could work but you'll have to reposition some stuff, or maybe the jump is fine for insane
Here I wanted the player to pull the cursor back since I felt it fit with the snap in her voice.

02:33:640 (2) - ^ (optional)
Breaks flow imo since the sliders follow a general direction of flow in the down-right direction.

02:40:917 (2) - ^ (optional as well)
The idea there was to have all the sliders 1-3 have a similar movement and then break it into the next combo in an attempt to fit with vocals here.

02:18:491 (5,1) - i really like this overlap... just had to point that out lmao xD
<33

03:13:739 (1,2) - why not stack? :?:
Stacking is pretty dull to me, I'd prefer a gradual movement to the right. I think it's way more interesting. :)

03:28:887 (3,6) - ^
I felt this placement was more interesting and perhaps better flow from the 5.

Really well mapped!
Thanks! \:D/

sheela901

sheela901 wrote:

[Insane]
01:05:867 (2) - Move it to x:252 y:144, and move 01:06:164 (3) to x:377 y:205.
imo the current placement is more interesting :/

01:14:927 (1) - Move it to x:213 y:184?
fixed a bit

Sonny

Sonnyc wrote:

UWS's Insane:

00:29:778 (1) - Strongly recommend to start from 00:29:630. Ignoring the lyric is so sad
I don't think it's such a good idea since the entire combo before it was following instruments. It would be really jarring to switch to vocals 1/4 before the downbeat.

00:48:788 (1) - Start 1/4 earlier?
I'd prefer to follow the downbeat here. ;w;

01:03:046 (1) - (280,48) is better in flow imo. Check the spacing of each head of the sliders.
fixed \:D/ kept my blanket though

01:15:372 (2) - (44,272) for flow? Ignore if this looks messy.
tried to improve flow here

01:25:323 (4,5) - I think the rhythm is quite awkward that a long vocal starts at 01:25:620, but a slider ends there. Replacing the rhythm with a 1/4 slider-note would sound better imo. Two sliders in a row from 01:25:026 (3) would give the feeling of "by" of the lyric, and 01:25:619 (5,6) the altered rhythm here will sound along with "day".
I thought about that. I'll definitely keep it in mind, but I found this rhythm to be really enjoyable if you consider the fluxes on the music, whereas two 1/4 sliders in a row at 01:25:026 doesn't fit anything in the music. Clicking at 01:25:471 is great imo.

01:34:828 (4,5) - 02:55:620 (4,5) - 03:05:125 (4,5) - 03:05:125 (4,5) - Same suggestion as above.
Thanks will keep in mind.

03:32:154 (6) - Imo this is way too high..
k changed it

Good luck!

Sharlo

Sharlo wrote:

[Insane]
00:35:422 (3) - Move the tail of slider to x:160 y:144 to keep a nice compose.
kk

01:31:263 (3) - I think 2.86x is a bit jump cuz I feel like there is no stress in music here.
ok

01:54:135 (1,2) - I will stack them if I were you. Because I can't get 1/4 with this compose.
Not sure I really feel it fits better if they aren't stacked. It's standard 1/4 spacing up to this point.

02:25:471 (2) - Move the tail of slider to x:200 y:12 will blanket better if you want.
just rotated a bit

02:47:006 (3) - ^ but x:284 y:28
fixed \o/

02:51:758 (2) - Sampleset -> Normal on the head
fixed!

02:54:729 (1) - Finish
omg wut

03:21:758 (3,4) - change them to a slider?
ok lets try

Nice diff.
\o/

Thank you guys so much for the mods. :)
http://puu.sh/7hbLJ.rar
Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji

Sonnyc wrote:

Normal:

00:42:105 (4) - Don't you think 3/4 rhythm will be too complicated for beginners to hit?? fixed
00:48:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Drag 1/2 back, and add a note at 00:48:491 then adjust hitsounds. The rhythm feels bad here. fixed
00:54:729 (2,4) - I think there will be a chance to be confused with late appearing reverse due to 300. fixed
01:09:580 (3) - I think it's too hard to go over the previous note as a Normal. fixed
01:26:214 (3,1) - No for hidden reverse. Move (3) to (232,340). fixed
01:35:719 (3,1) - I don't got a suggestion here, but hope you can fix as above. fixed
02:30:966 (4) - NC as 01:00:669 (1). fixed
02:32:749 (4,1) - This close distance will be confusing. fixed
03:06:611 (1) - Remove NC fixed
03:39:580 (8) - sv changes aren't usually nice in easier difficulties, especially like this notable change. Hope you can remove the 0.5x please. fixed

Hard:

00:44:630 (4) - This slider being overlapped with 00:43:739 (2,3) makes it hard to read them. fixed
00:57:996 (6,7) - I'm too sad to see a hidden reverse. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1380841 fixed
01:32:451 (7) - The tick is ignoring beats, which sounds quite important. Consider giving a reverse? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1380844 fixed
01:56:511 (6,2) - Make these a perfect symmetry. fixed
02:14:927 (4) - Copy paste mod. fixed
02:28:590 (7) - ^ fixed
03:02:748 (7) - ^ fixed
03:16:412 (2) - This slider didn't seemed to follow any. Replace a single note at 03:16:709? fixed
03:18:194 (1) - Divide to note-1/2 slider? fixed
03:19:382 (3) - ^? fixed
03:20:273 - I think here needs a note. fixed
03:39:877 (5) - Well this speed down isn't really expected if you hear the song. I'd rather not do as harsh as 0.5x. fixed


Sharlo wrote:

Hi M4M

[General]
Tags in all diffs is conflict.
fixed
[Normal]
00:50:867 (5) - Ctrl+G fixed
01:32:154 (5) - ^ fixed
02:14:333 (2) - ^ fixed
02:21:164 (6) - ^ fixed
[Hard]
00:32:154 (6) - Bend to the right wil better for flow fixed
00:43:145 (1) - should stack this or move more far away from 00:42:550 (5) - fixed
01:25:620 (3,4) - Ctrl+G fixed
01:35:719 (4,5) - ^ fixed
01:45:521 (1) - Change to a circle on 01:45:818 - fixed
02:18:491 (2) - Ctr;+G fixed
02:30:075 (8) - ^ fixed
03:06:016 (4,5) - ^ fixed

The flow seems bad. And too easy for a hard diff.
Copy and Paste is not good imo. remake some parts, indeed
[Insane]
00:35:422 (3) - Move the tail of slider to x:160 y:144 to keep a nice compose. fixed
01:31:263 (3) - I think 2.86x is a bit jump cuz I feel like there is no stress in music here. fixed
01:54:135 (1,2) - I will stack them if I were you. Because I can't get 1/4 with this compose. fixed
02:25:471 (2) - Move the tail of slider to x:200 y:12 will blanket better if you want. fixed
02:47:006 (3) - ^ but x:284 y:28 fixed
02:51:758 (2) - Sampleset -> Normal on the head fixed
02:54:729 (1) - Finish fixed
03:21:758 (3,4) - change them to a slider? fixed

Nice diff.
Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
2,325 posts
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Chaoslitz
NM from my queue

[Normal]
  1. 00:43:145 (5) - It needs a further with previous notes
    Example: http://puu.sh/bzTAP/af1cf3c7cd.jpg
  2. 00:47:006 (3,4) - Stacked with 00:46:115 (2)
  3. 01:02:451 (4,1) - Distance too far away
  4. 02:02:154 (6,8) - Stacked
  5. 02:22:055 (6,1) - Overlap not completely
  6. 02:28:590 (2) - Not parallel
  7. 02:41:065 (6,7) - Try a better blanket

[Hard]
  1. 00:31:263 (5,6) - Stacked
  2. 00:44:630 (4) - ^
    Suggest: http://puu.sh/bzU2G/0f1d342290.jpg
  3. 00:52:947 (5,1) - Not stacked completely
  4. 01:44:630 (4,1) - ^
  5. 02:38:095 (1,4) - Use a same slider?

Good luck~
Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji

Chaoslitz wrote:

NM from my queue

[Normal]
  1. 00:43:145 (5) - It needs a further with previous notes
    Example: http://puu.sh/bzTAP/af1cf3c7cd.jpg yup, fixed
  2. 00:47:006 (3,4) - Stacked with 00:46:115 (2) nope, thats good atm
  3. 01:02:451 (4,1) - Distance too far away fixed
  4. 02:02:154 (6,8) - Stacked ^
  5. 02:22:055 (6,1) - Overlap not completely nice eyes
  6. 02:28:590 (2) - Not parallel fixed
  7. 02:41:065 (6,7) - Try a better blanket changed!

[Hard]
  1. 00:31:263 (5,6) - Stacked fixed
  2. 00:44:630 (4) - ^ ^
    Suggest: http://puu.sh/bzU2G/0f1d342290.jpg
  3. 00:52:947 (5,1) - Not stacked completely ^
  4. 01:44:630 (4,1) - ^ fixed
  5. 02:38:095 (1,4) - Use a same slider? changed

Good luck~
Thank you so much!
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Yo

[General]
* For Normal and Hard diff, the clap hitsound isn't consistent and that's makeshitsound goes ruining the comfortable of players. Please make it consistent through the song
* The white combo color is too flashy for kiai. Please change it to another color if possible

[Normal]
01:09:580 (3) - Sliderbdy is overlapped by head slider that makes beginners unable to see this. Please move further away from previous one
01:26:808 (1) - Spacing too close from previous one
01:36:313 (1) - ^
02:20:867 (4) - Can you move down a bit? I don't like being overlapped by circle
03:41:362 (1) - This spinner were too short and makes unable to clear for beginners. Please extend it as possible or replace it with slider

[Hard]
00:26:808 (5) - Move further away from previous one? I don't like being overlapped like that
00:57:996 (6,7) - People would confuse of this because they don't know which one is a head slider. Please separate them and move further away together
02:26:511 (2) - I don't think sudden jump here would be fit here...
03:39:877 (5) - New combo for 0,5x slider. Otherwsie, people would be confuse if this a normal slider or not

Good luck
Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji

Leorda wrote:

Yo

[General]
* For Normal and Hard diff, the clap hitsound isn't consistent and that's makeshitsound goes ruining the comfortable of players. Please make it consistent through the song i'll fix this later
* The white combo color is too flashy for kiai. Please change it to another color if possible fixed! green color now

[Normal]
01:09:580 (3) - Sliderbdy is overlapped by head slider that makes beginners unable to see this. Please move further away from previous one fixed
01:26:808 (1) - Spacing too close from previous one fixed
01:36:313 (1) - ^ ^
02:20:867 (4) - Can you move down a bit? I don't like being overlapped by circle fixed
03:41:362 (1) - This spinner were too short and makes unable to clear for beginners. Please extend it as possible or replace it with slider fixed

[Hard]
00:26:808 (5) - Move further away from previous one? I don't like being overlapped like that fixed
00:57:996 (6,7) - People would confuse of this because they don't know which one is a head slider. Please separate them and move further away together fixed
02:26:511 (2) - I don't think sudden jump here would be fit here... fixed
03:39:877 (5) - New combo for 0,5x slider. Otherwsie, people would be confuse if this a normal slider or not fixed

Good luck
Thank you!
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Secretpipe
Why nobody mod UWS diff ?:(
Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Ptet qu'ils pensent que sa diff est parfaite xD
Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Revived, I hope it will be ranked. ~
Tomoka Rin
Former osu! Champion: OWC#1
378 posts
Joined June 2009
Tomoka Rin
NM request from https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/6510677

[General]

Offset may be 22636

Artist : 소녀시대
Romanised Artist : Girls' Generation

Title : 좋은 일만 생각하기
Romaniset Title : Day by Day

[Normal]

02:13:131 (8) - remove the slider then put a note here, to follow the music.

02:31:249 (5) - remove the reverse but keep the slider here, fill up the place.

[UWS's Insane]

00:33:788 - add a note to follow the rhythm.

01:09:283 - how about add a note here ? i think it's smoother for play.

03:39:580 (6) - I think it's not good for read, maybe can try to move the slider up or down.
Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji

Tomoka Rin wrote:

NM request from https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/6510677

[General]

Offset may be 22636

Artist : 소녀시대
Romanised Artist : Girls' Generation

Title : 좋은 일만 생각하기
Romaniset Title : Day by Day

-> all fixed. Thanks!

[Normal]

02:13:131 (8) - remove the slider then put a note here, to follow the music. -> ok, changed!

02:31:249 (5) - remove the reverse but keep the slider here, fill up the place. -> ^

[UWS's Insane]

00:33:788 - add a note to follow the rhythm.

01:09:283 - how about add a note here ? i think it's smoother for play.

03:39:580 (6) - I think it's not good for read, maybe can try to move the slider up or down.
LisaBestGirl
LisaBestGirl
From my queqe

UWS's Insane

00:51:164 (1) - bad slidershape,normal slider is gonna looks better
00:59:778 (1,2,3,4) - i would ctrl + g these jumps
02:18:491 (5,6,1) - that overlapping hurt my eyes
03:38:244 (3,4,5,6) - here the same ^

Diff is good but only that ovelapping looks bad sometimes

Hard

00:25:606 (3,4) - move that circle on end of the slider that gonna looks better
01:03:626 (1,2) - that sliders ouch make better sliders:)
Make CS 3.5 CS 3.0 is too big
and nerf that hp drain becuase hp7 in hard and insane don't look good

Normal

i can't say anything wrong about this diff i like this

map is so good only that overlapping!
UnitedWeSin
891 posts
Joined July 2012
UnitedWeSin
Modz

Tomoka Rin wrote:

NM request from https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/6510677


[UWS's Insane]

00:33:788 - add a note to follow the rhythm.
Sure I changed it up lemme know if it's worse.

01:09:283 - how about add a note here ? i think it's smoother for play.
Not sure there may be better to follow just vocals in the slower bit.

03:39:580 (6) - I think it's not good for read, maybe can try to move the slider up or down.
It's the same rhythm as before, I like the pattern tbh. :(

LisaBestGirl wrote:

From my queqe

UWS's Insane

00:51:164 (1) - bad slidershape,normal slider is gonna looks better
Sure I changed it.
00:59:778 (1,2,3,4) - i would ctrl + g these jumps
Ok lets try.
02:18:491 (5,6,1) - that overlapping hurt my eyes
03:38:244 (3,4,5,6) - here the same ^
Not sure on these I think they're fine tbh. Overlaps when done purposefully are quite subjective.

Thanks very much for modding. :) I changed the kiai rhythm too maybe it's better. This includes changes from previous mods. I'm sorry the general setting might not match your diffs please change if so.
http://puu.sh/zuS0f/4eb8c6735e.zip
Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji

LisaBestGirl wrote:

From my queqe

UWS's Insane

00:51:164 (1) - bad slidershape,normal slider is gonna looks better
00:59:778 (1,2,3,4) - i would ctrl + g these jumps
02:18:491 (5,6,1) - that overlapping hurt my eyes
03:38:244 (3,4,5,6) - here the same ^

Diff is good but only that ovelapping looks bad sometimes

Hard

00:25:606 (3,4) - move that circle on end of the slider that gonna looks better -> Ok, fixed! thanks ^^
01:03:626 (1,2) - that sliders ouch make better sliders:) -> ^
Make CS 3.5 CS 3.0 is too big -> ^
and nerf that hp drain becuase hp7 in hard and insane don't look good -> ^

Normal

i can't say anything wrong about this diff i like this

map is so good only that overlapping!
Thanks for modding dude!

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Modz

Tomoka Rin wrote:

NM request from https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/6510677


[UWS's Insane]

00:33:788 - add a note to follow the rhythm.
Sure I changed it up lemme know if it's worse.

01:09:283 - how about add a note here ? i think it's smoother for play.
Not sure there may be better to follow just vocals in the slower bit.

03:39:580 (6) - I think it's not good for read, maybe can try to move the slider up or down.
It's the same rhythm as before, I like the pattern tbh. :(

LisaBestGirl wrote:

From my queqe

UWS's Insane

00:51:164 (1) - bad slidershape,normal slider is gonna looks better
Sure I changed it.
00:59:778 (1,2,3,4) - i would ctrl + g these jumps
Ok lets try.
02:18:491 (5,6,1) - that overlapping hurt my eyes
03:38:244 (3,4,5,6) - here the same ^
Not sure on these I think they're fine tbh. Overlaps when done purposefully are quite subjective.

Thanks very much for modding. :) I changed the kiai rhythm too maybe it's better. This includes changes from previous mods. I'm sorry the general setting might not match your diffs please change if so. -> I will. Thanks bro.
http://puu.sh/zuS0f/4eb8c6735e.zip
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