Just another Raiku post![Easy]
00:55:237 (4) - Move the slider down one level on grid level 3 to keep the spacing consistent on that combo (
http://puu.sh/6ZCcF.jpg).
01:10:348 (3) - Similarly here, grid level 3, right 1 space down one space (
http://puu.sh/6ZCfh.jpg).
01:11:237 (4,2) - Slider 4's tail is overlapping slider 2's head. I suggest this as an alternative as it also flows into 3 in the pink combo (
http://puu.sh/6ZCka.jpg).
01:14:792 (3,4,5) - Move 3,4 and 5 up one space on grid level 3 to be consistent with my suggestion for slider 2's tail end (
http://puu.sh/6ZCmN.jpg).
[Normal]
00:14:347 (1,3) - 1 and 3 are overlapping, I feet you should blanket 1 and 2 like so to avoid this (
http://puu.sh/6ZCvG.jpg).
00:25:013 (1,2,3) - Move these sliders right 1 and down 2 on grid level 3 to make the start of slider 1 stack with 3 of the last combo. Looks neater and you avoid an overlap (
http://puu.sh/6ZCBZ.jpg).
00:29:458 (2) - Move down and to the left a touch to avoid an overlap with 1 (
http://puu.sh/6ZCFR.jpg).
00:37:903 (2,3) - I suggest giving 2 a sharper curve to give a blanket effect with 1. This would mean moving 3 up a tad to become in line with the exit of slider 2 which would promote flow (
http://puu.sh/6ZCLa.jpg).
00:47:236 (1,2) - Blanket 1 and 2 a little neater, maybe something like this (
http://puu.sh/6ZCQ5.jpg).
01:01:903 (4,5,1) - This trio of notes look a lot neater in my opinion if pieced together like this (
http://puu.sh/6ZCYD.jpg).
[Hard]
00:00:569 (1) - I would suggest placing this in line with slider 4 and also with the exit facing the direction of your 2nd note (
http://puu.sh/6ZD1P.jpg).
00:04:125 (1) - Same here.
00:13:903 (1) - Sounds more in time if it were placed like this in my opinion (
http://puu.sh/6ZDa3.jpg).
00:16:347 (4) - The tail of the slider is overlapping the body, here is my suggestion (
http://puu.sh/6ZDbU.jpg).
00:17:903 (4) - I feel it would flow better if you moved this slider up to meet in line with the triplets such as this (
http://puu.sh/6ZDdt.jpg).
00:27:236 (5) - Move 5 to the right a touch to be in line with 6, 7 and 8 (
http://puu.sh/6ZDho.jpg). Then move 5, 6, 7 and 8 to the right 2 spaces on grid level 3 to be in line with 4's tail (
http://puu.sh/6ZDjA.jpg).
00:34:792 (7,8) - 7 overlaps 8. I suggest this alternative (
http://puu.sh/6ZDmT.jpg).
00:37:236 (5,6) - Have 5's start stack on 6's start (
http://puu.sh/6ZDq0.jpg).
00:54:792 (2,3,4) - 3's tail is overlapping 5's head. A suggestion would be to move 2,3 and 4 down a touch (
http://puu.sh/6ZDsX.jpg).
01:22:347 - I would move 1 back a little to flow into the next note. Also 5 and 2 are overlapping. Also try and line up slider 5 with slider 1 and 4 using precise grid level like I have. Here is my final suggestion for the final combo (
http://puu.sh/6ZDB3.jpg).
Great map and fun to mod, good luck!