1. Extra (5.01 stars, 797 notes)
2. Hard (3.32 stars, 431 notes)
3. Insane (4.79 stars, 664 notes)
4. Rakuen's Normal (1.87 stars, 196 notes)

kuroanchan wrote:

[Hard]

AR -1 owok
to good

[Another]

i can't mod this mod ;_; ;w;okay

[Insane]

suggestion
01:02:033 (4,5) - you can make stream here. This is fine x)
01:14:033 (1,2,3,4) - make it cross jump. isn't it already a cross jump?...
01:18:533 (5) - x:432 , y:320 I did this on purpose :p dun wanna stack them up
01:18:867 (6) - x:260 , y:312^
02:10:033 (7) - NC
02:10:533 (1) - remove NC
02:25:367 (1) - should be end at 02:25:700 Added a note instead!
02:28:033 (1) - x:316 , y:168 Did this on purpose :p

i think thats all good luck~ :3

Mira-san's Normal

Normal is too hard, but you already know that. try SV = 1,00
If you want your map to be ranked, you should have a easy difficulty

Hard

Insane

Another

good diff
(cant find anything, sorry)

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Hey :3

m4m type thing

Another

• Yeah, so I can't play this very well. Spaced streams will be the death of me... ;w;
  I'll try give some suggestions:

1. 00:45:033 (1) - I think it would be pretty cool to use a lower slider velocity for this slider, since it would match the sound effect (screech or whatever) and the motionless vibe it kind of gives off. I'm a real sucker for this technique, and it will flow nicely into the following slider where the heavy beat resumes. If you do this, I suggest you add a NC on the next slider, as to differentiate between slider speeds.
2. 01:38:033 (1) - Yes! This is what I'm talking about. So much potential in this song. However, this particular slider would work much better it weren't so vertical, in my opinion. Actually, the shape is kinda weird for this sound in the song. I would imagine it being more curved. So I suggest you rework it a little and also rotate it few degrees anti-clockwise to give it some swing. I would give you some suggestions as to some potential slider shapes, however let's be honest, I'm terrible at it :
3. 02:32:200 (1) - This is a random place to have a new combo xD Remove it and place the NC on each of the following white ticks in the stream to signify the down beat.

Insane

1. 00:13:200 (5,2) - This could use a nicer blanket. Slider middle point to x:256 y:220, and the end point to x:184 y:148
2. 00:34:033 (2,1) - Here too.
3. 00:42:367 (6) - I think this note is too close to the previous slider. It's a bit confusing since there is a 1/1 gap, but it is almost the same distance as
4. 00:41:700 (4,5) which is 1/2. You can fix this by making a more obvious anti-jump, or by moving it away further.
5. 01:00:867 (5) - Stacking this on the slider should be fine.
6. 01:20:033 (5) - NC here instead of the next note on the red tick. For new measure.
7. 02:29:200 - Add a note here. You're following the lyric right?
8. 03:20:700 - Make the end of of the spinner 5% volume like you did in [Another]

Hard

1. 00:27:700 - Add a note here because the 1/1 gap between the sliders on either side feels a bit awkward. Especially since you've built up the circular flow with the current positioning.
2. 00:36:700 (1) - I'm not sure if this was intentional or not, but I don't think this is meant to be snapped on 1/3. 1/4 works fine for me.
3. 01:04:533 (2,4) - Unnecessary overlap imo
4. 03:00:533 (2,1) - Is this even possible with hidden? Probably try to avoid complete overlap by a slider. You can maintain the sane sort of flow you tried to generate by placing 03:01:033 (1) - somewhere here 02:59:867 (4). Use normal spacing for it and blanket.
5. 03:01:950 - Add a note here to form a triplet instead of having this as a repeat slider. The triplet is quite significant imo and should be mapped.
6. 03:20:700 - 5% vol

Nice high-end spread Well, as you know, if you want to rank this you'll have to cater for the less experienced players by adding an easier diff. Otherwise that's all I've got to say. Good luck!

Bonch0 wrote:

Hi~ from my Queue

Mira-san's Normal

Normal is too hard, but you already know that. try SV = 1,00
If you want your map to be ranked, you should have a easy difficulty

Hard

[*]00:27:700 - add a note
00:37:367 (1) - remove NC
stack 01:05:200 (4) with the end of this slider 01:04:533 (2)
01:32:867 add a note
01:35:367 (3) - remove NC
01:39:700 (1) - remove NC
01:40:700 (3) - remove NC
stack 02:00:700 (5) with 02:00:367 (3)
stack 02:00:033 (1) with 02:01:200 (1)
stack 02:02:200 (5) with 02:02:533 (1)
02:02:533 (1) and 02:03:033 (2) are overlapping but in a bad way beautiful overlap to me x)
02:04:867 (1) - remove NC
stack 02:48:533 (2) with 02:49:033 (4)

Insane

00:51:867 (1) - remove NC
00:52:033 (1) - remove NC
stack 01:00:867 (5) with 01:01:033 (6)
01:13:200 (1) - remove NC
stack 01:18:200 (3) with 01:18:533 (5)
stack 01:18:367 (4) with 01:18:867 (6)
01:37:200 (1) - remove NC
01:37:367 (2) - NC
01:37:700 (3) - remove NC
01:38:033 (1) - NC
01:42:033 - 01:43:950 I would add some triple streams on this part
01:57:033 (1) - remove NC
01:57:200 (2) - NC
02:24:033 (3) - NC
stack 02:27:367 (2) with 02:28:033 (1)

Another

good diff
(cant find anything, sorry)

good luck~

1. There's a tag conflict with Mira-san's Normal. Make sure to include the tag hatsune miku on Normal or remove it from all difficulties.
2. You should add Mira-san to the tags as she made a guest difficulty. Some other appropriate tags to add are dnb and drum and bass to allow players to more easily find this map if DnB is something that interests them.
3. Uncheck Widescreen Support on all difficulties because you don't have a storyboard. You can uncheck Letterbox during breaks as well if you would like.
4. Try playing around with hitsound volume changes to give more emphasis to dynamical changes in the music. For example, using 70% volume between 02:12:033 and 02:22:533 fits well because of how comparably soft this part plays to the rest of the map.

1. 00:36:700 (1) - Not sure why i'm hearing a clap on the blue tick at 00:37:117 for this slider, it doesn't really fit with anything. I would remove it. (You'll hear it clearly if you listen on slow playback)
2. 00:37:033 - Unneeded green line. Make sure to either delete or make use of it.
3. 01:08:700 (1) - Remove NC, I don't see why this note needs its own combo.
4. 01:11:700 (1) - Remove NC. This combo feels unnecessarily short.
5. 01:19:200 - Add a note here and on 01:19:867. It's kind of strange how you leave gaps in your rhythm here and but didn't for 01:09:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6) which is a very similar sounding part.
6. 01:19:367 (1) - If you follow the previous suggestion, it would be best to remove NC on this note because of how it would fit into the combo.
7. 01:19:367 (1,1) - I would unstack these notes because of how recently you used a stack for a 1/2 rhythm at 01:18:533 (2,3) it might throw some players off and they may instinctively click too early because they were expecting the stack to be 1/2 even though it's actually 1/1.
8. 01:48:700 (3) - This needs a NC to indicate the SV has changed to 0.75x.

1. 00:51:700 (1) - Remove NC so the previous combo isn't needlessly short.
2. 00:52:033 (3) - NC to fix ^
3. 01:00:867 (5) - I would just stack this note on 01:01:033 (6) to avoid misreading for 1/4 because of how you used similar overlapping for 01:00:533 (2,3,4).
4. 01:11:367 (3,1,2) - This is really confusing to play because you use bigger spacing between the objects that are 1/4 apart than the ones that are 1/2 apart. I would reduce the spacing between 01:11:700 (1,2) to make it easier to read.
   Example

   
5. 01:13:200 (7) - Uh was this a mistake? I'm hearing a clap on this blue tick at 01:13:783 even though it doesn't emphasize anything in the music. I would remove it.
6. 01:33:700 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This slider pattern is extremely difficult to read, especially with how you're stacking 1/4 sliders after you spaced them out for 01:28:033 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1). I would consider it unrankable referring to this as you'll notice that a bunch of slider-heads are completely buried. I highly recommend you rework it to make the pattern easier to understand.
7. 01:48:700 (5) - NC to indicate the SV has changed to 0.75x
8. 02:28:033 (1,2,3) - This combo starts on a significant vocal so it feels kind of strange to leave 02:28:533 empty. A rhythm like this would fit the vocals better, try it out:
   Example

   
9. 03:09:867 (4) - Please move this closer 03:09:533 (3). It's very hard to read the 1/4 with how you spaced it.
10. 03:15:367 (1,2,3,4) - I think it would be more fun to play if you gradually increased the spacing between these jumps or just used bigger spacing in general to make the end of the map as exciting as possible.

1. 00:16:867 (6) - The use of a reverse slider here doesn't fit because there isn't actually a beat in the music where the slider is reversing, so it just feels awkward to play a reverse when there isn't a sound that justifies it. A 1/1 slider would play much better. Another option would be use 2 circles spaced 1/1 apart to accentuate the the skipped beat:
   Example

   
   
   
2. 00:45:367 (2) - NC to indicate the SV has changed back to 1.00x.
3. 00:42:367 (2) - Give this more spacing from 00:42:033 (1) because of how you use the same spacing for 00:41:867 (3,1) which are closer together on the timeline. Having the same spacing might throw players off.
4. 00:49:700 (2) - With grid snap off, move the tail anchor of this slider 2 grids to the right for a perfect stack on the head of 00:49:033 (3).
5. 01:04:033 (1) - A finish on the head to go along with the whistle sounds really good here~
6. 01:07:867 (5) - This slider is right up against the life bar of the default skin so I would imagine it might be overlapped by some player's custom skins. I would move it down a bit just to be safe.
7. 01:12:700 (3) - Eh I don't particularly like the use of a reverse slider here because of how it skips over the snare sound (i think that's what it is) on 01:12:783. Perhaps you would prefer using a 1/4 and 1/2 slider to get that emphasis on the snare instead?
   Example

   
8. 01:13:617 (4) - If you listen in slow playback, this note isn't actually hitting to any sound the BGM. I would recommend deleting it and using a different rhythm here to avoid making it look like this note is just trying to emulate a drum hit. You can make use of the light snare on 01:13:283 and try something like this:
   Example

   
9. 01:14:367 (8) - Change this to a 1/2 slider and a circle. I'm generally not too picky about ending sliders on downbeats but in this case it would feel much nicer to play if you could get some clickable feedback on the strong downbeat because of how powerful the sound is in the music as well as the fact that it just feels strange to have kiai starting at the end of a slider rather than on a circle or the beginning of a slider. Also add a whistle and finish to the circle, sounds soooo good.
10. 01:17:867 (3,4) - Unstack these to stay consistent with your patterning. Since this is like the only time you decided to have a stack like this in the entire difficulty it feels strange to play because of how it interrupts flow with how fast-moving the kiai plays.
11. 01:53:867 (1) - The spacing here is a bit decieving because of how there's 1/2 between 01:53:867 (1,2) and 1/4 between 01:54:033 (2,3) and the spacing between all three objects looks close to be the same. I would make more space between 01:53:867 (1,2) to avoid players accidentally reading it as 1/4
12. 02:20:033 - The SV changes between here and 02:22:041 all appear very unnecessary and unwarranted because there are no pacing changes in the music to justify them. The only SV change in this section of the map that's really justified is 02:22:700 because of how you can notice the tone in the music gets more ominous here. I highly recommended deleting all those green lines to keep the SV at 0.5x for this section, not only because of the reason I just mentioned but also this.
13. 02:32:117 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The spacing of this stream looks inconsistent. I can't tell whether or not you were looking to accelerate the stream or use a static distance snap. I would clean up the spacing between the notes in this stream because the spacing appears to change randomly at some parts.
14. 02:33:367 (3) - NC here because of the kiai start. Also a finish to go along with the whistle sounds amazing.
15. 02:44:033 (1) - Finish on head as well. (If you used these finish suggestions, it would be a good idea to apply them to Hard and Insane as well)~
    
    Yeah this difficulty is definitely my favorite of the set, lot's of creative patterns!

Trust wrote:

hi, mod as requested~

oh nice sakuzyo

Red: Unrankable
Blue: Highly recommended/very questionable
Black: Suggestion

[General]

1. There's a tag conflict with Mira-san's Normal. Make sure to include the tag hatsune miku on Normal or remove it from all difficulties.
2. You should add Mira-san to the tags as she made a guest difficulty. Some other appropriate tags to add are dnb and drum and bass to allow players to more easily find this map if DnB is something that interests them.
3. Uncheck Widescreen Support on all difficulties because you don't have a storyboard. You can uncheck Letterbox during breaks as well if you would like.
4. Try playing around with hitsound volume changes to give more emphasis to dynamical changes in the music. For example, using 70% volume between 02:12:033 and 02:22:533 fits well because of how comparably soft this part plays to the rest of the map.

[Hard]

HP +2. I don't understand why the HP on this diff is lower than Normal. HP6 fits the spread much better.

1. 00:36:700 (1) - Not sure why i'm hearing a clap on the blue tick at 00:37:117 for this slider, it doesn't really fit with anything. I would remove it. (You'll hear it clearly if you listen on slow playback)
2. 00:37:033 - Unneeded green line. Make sure to either delete or make use of it.
3. 01:08:700 (1) - Remove NC, I don't see why this note needs its own combo.
4. 01:11:700 (1) - Remove NC. This combo feels unnecessarily short.
5. 01:19:200 - Add a note here and on 01:19:867. It's kind of strange how you leave gaps in your rhythm here and but didn't for 01:09:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6) which is a very similar sounding part.
6. 01:19:367 (1) - If you follow the previous suggestion, it would be best to remove NC on this note because of how it would fit into the combo.
7. 01:19:367 (1,1) - I would unstack these notes because of how recently you used a stack for a 1/2 rhythm at 01:18:533 (2,3) it might throw some players off and they may instinctively click too early because they were expecting the stack to be 1/2 even though it's actually 1/1.
8. 01:48:700 (3) - This needs a NC to indicate the SV has changed to 0.75x.

[Insane]

1. 00:51:700 (1) - Remove NC so the previous combo isn't needlessly short.
2. 00:52:033 (3) - NC to fix ^
3. 01:00:867 (5) - I would just stack this note on 01:01:033 (6) to avoid misreading for 1/4 because of how you used similar overlapping for 01:00:533 (2,3,4).
4. 01:11:367 (3,1,2) - This is really confusing to play because you use bigger spacing between the objects that are 1/4 apart than the ones that are 1/2 apart. I would reduce the spacing between 01:11:700 (1,2) to make it easier to read.
   Example

   
5. 01:13:200 (7) - Uh was this a mistake? I'm hearing a clap on this blue tick at 01:13:783 even though it doesn't emphasize anything in the music. I would remove it.
6. 01:33:700 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This slider pattern is extremely difficult to read, especially with how you're stacking 1/4 sliders after you spaced them out for 01:28:033 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1). I would consider it unrankable referring to this as you'll notice that a bunch of slider-heads are completely buried. I highly recommend you rework it to make the pattern easier to understand. omg finaly someone stat it out \:D/ , nobody said this in the previous mod so i was like... "even myself feel strange but u guys like it ? o.o weird tho nvm..."
7. 01:48:700 (5) - NC to indicate the SV has changed to 0.75x
8. 02:28:033 (1,2,3) - This combo starts on a significant vocal so it feels kind of strange to leave 02:28:533 empty. A rhythm like this would fit the vocals better, try it out:
   Example

   
9. 03:09:867 (4) - Please move this closer 03:09:533 (3). It's very hard to read the 1/4 with how you spaced it.
10. 03:15:367 (1,2,3,4) - I think it would be more fun to play if you gradually increased the spacing between these jumps or just used bigger spacing in general to make the end of the map as exciting as possible.

[Another]

This diff is actually pretty nice, quite a challenge too! My combo wasn't great but decent accuracy I suppose: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1305118

1. 00:16:867 (6) - The use of a reverse slider here doesn't fit because there isn't actually a beat in the music where the slider is reversing, so it just feels awkward to play a reverse when there isn't a sound that justifies it. A 1/1 slider would play much better. Another option would be use 2 circles spaced 1/1 apart to accentuate the the skipped beat:
   Example

   
   
   
2. 00:45:367 (2) - NC to indicate the SV has changed back to 1.00x.
3. 00:42:367 (2) - Give this more spacing from 00:42:033 (1) because of how you use the same spacing for 00:41:867 (3,1) which are closer together on the timeline. Having the same spacing might throw players off.
4. 00:49:700 (2) - With grid snap off, move the tail anchor of this slider 2 grids to the right for a perfect stack on the head of 00:49:033 (3).
5. 01:04:033 (1) - A finish on the head to go along with the whistle sounds really good here~
6. 01:07:867 (5) - This slider is right up against the life bar of the default skin so I would imagine it might be overlapped by some player's custom skins. I would move it down a bit just to be safe.
7. 01:12:700 (3) - Eh I don't particularly like the use of a reverse slider here because of how it skips over the snare sound (i think that's what it is) on 01:12:783. Perhaps you would prefer using a 1/4 and 1/2 slider to get that emphasis on the snare instead?
   Example

   
8. 01:13:617 (4) - If you listen in slow playback, this note isn't actually hitting to any sound the BGM. I would recommend deleting it and using a different rhythm here to avoid making it look like this note is just trying to emulate a drum hit. You can make use of the light snare on 01:13:283 and try something like this:
   Example

   
9. 01:14:367 (8) - Change this to a 1/2 slider and a circle. I'm generally not too picky about ending sliders on downbeats but in this case it would feel much nicer to play if you could get some clickable feedback on the strong downbeat because of how powerful the sound is in the music as well as the fact that it just feels strange to have kiai starting at the end of a slider rather than on a circle or the beginning of a slider. Also add a whistle and finish to the circle, sounds soooo good.
10. 01:17:867 (3,4) - Unstack these to stay consistent with your patterning. Since this is like the only time you decided to have a stack like this in the entire difficulty it feels strange to play because of how it interrupts flow with how fast-moving the kiai plays.
11. 01:53:867 (1) - The spacing here is a bit decieving because of how there's 1/2 between 01:53:867 (1,2) and 1/4 between 01:54:033 (2,3) and the spacing between all three objects looks close to be the same. I would make more space between 01:53:867 (1,2) to avoid players accidentally reading it as 1/4
12. 02:20:033 - The SV changes between here and 02:22:041 all appear very unnecessary and unwarranted because there are no pacing changes in the music to justify them. The only SV change in this section of the map that's really justified is 02:22:700 because of how you can notice the tone in the music gets more ominous here. I highly recommended deleting all those green lines to keep the SV at 0.5x for this section, not only because of the reason I just mentioned but also this.
13. 02:32:117 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The spacing of this stream looks inconsistent. I can't tell whether or not you were looking to accelerate the stream or use a static distance snap. I would clean up the spacing between the notes in this stream because the spacing appears to change randomly at some parts. yup was accelerating it, tho it really look messy ._. i will change it
14. 02:33:367 (3) - NC here because of the kiai start. Also a finish to go along with the whistle sounds amazing.
15. 02:44:033 (1) - Finish on head as well. (If you used these finish suggestions, it would be a good idea to apply them to Hard and Insane as well)~
    
    Yeah this difficulty is definitely my favorite of the set, lot's of creative patterns!

If I was unclear about any of my suggestions or if you don't quite understand what I was trying to say, please don't hesitate to ask me about it!
Best of luck with this~

kuroanchan wrote:

[Mira-san's Normal]

to hard for normal indeed.
try DS at 1.00~1.02 ~mmmm id rather not or idk. soon.
HP -1, AP -2, OD -1 ~okay
but it have good beat ~thanks (?) I wish you could give feedback on positioning though. My works need fixing.

Bonch0 wrote:

Hi~ from my Queue

Mira-san's Normal

Normal is too hard, but you already know that. try SV = 1,00
If you want your map to be ranked, you should have a easy difficulty

I'm sorry. ;w; I'm not used to making Normal diffs. :v

Trust wrote:

hi, mod as requested~

[General]

1. You should add Mira-san to the tags as she he made a guest....

Lapis Aoki wrote:

#3 Ok I guess I need to start modding it I guess..
[General]
-Normal is so hard. D: Try to make it a little bit easier. c:
[Mira-san's Normal]
01:20:700 -Note. ~it sounds empty :v
01:33:367 -The slider is in the wrong timing. ~wat
01:44:033 -^ ~^

GL ~ !

ffstar0716 wrote:

yo random mod lel

[Insane]
01:00:867 (5,6) - you did in on purpose? ._. yar lol
01:25:200 (4) - x:332 y:176 will be better?
01:44:033 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i don't think all of the circle follow the rhythm, quite hard to get a beat like that. maybe consider this http://puu.sh/764cR.jpg
nice diff

[Hard]
01:07:200 (2,3) - ctrl+G and the slider Ctrl+G again
01:06:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - actually why you suddenly map the beat not the vocal? the beginning of the chorus was follow the vocal and suddenly change to the background beat ._. changed
01:14:700 (1) - then here follow back the vocal ._. kinda weird when playing
02:26:200 (3) - remove reverse
02:26:700 (4) - move to 02:26:533 -
02:27:200 - add a circle
02:36:033 - suggestion :3 http://puu.sh/765wR.jpg
this diff is ok, there are some notes i don't think is quite good like 02:49:867 (2,3) - but overall it's ok

[Another]
good, i like challenging map :3
but again, too much note follow the background beat make it a little bit overmapped imo intent to map following bg xP




good job AI lel and good luck ^^ yay \o/

Sharlo wrote:

like this song very much <3
看得懂中文是吗

Mira-san wrote:

_AI

You may remove my Normal diff. It needs a lot of fixing. Better stick to the one that has lesser problems.

Foreverends wrote:

AWESOME \:D/

-Neipezi wrote:

hihi owo/

[General]
- artist "sakuzyo feat. Hatsune Miku" change (sakuzyo feat. 初音 ミク) IMO'w';;

[Rakuen's Normal]
00:24:033 (5) - NC add
00:47:533 (4) - 00:47:700 - circle to change?
01:17:367 (5) - NC add?
01:30:700 (4) - ^
02:31:700 - 02:32:033 - go here to break time?
03:02:700 (6) - NC add

[Hard]
00:53:200 - add the whistle tail
00:58:700 (1) - add the finish head
03:01:033 (3) - clap add
03:01:533 (5) - add whistle on the head. add to clap tail
03:15:867 (4) - whistle add
01:02:117 (4,5) - all whistle add?

[Insane]
00:53:367 (2) - finish add?
01:44:033 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - distance
02:05:200 (1,2) - NC chance?
02:05:367 (2,1,1,3) - add finish on the head?
02:09:367 (1) - add the finish and whistle tail?
02:09:700 (4) - whistle add?
02:10:533 (3) - add whistle on the head
02:10:783 (1) - finish add

[Extra]
this... funny!!
nice diff

but, you must add the Easy difficulty

1. 01:01:033 (6) - Move this down so that it matches 00:59:700 (5).
2. 01:05:533 (1) - Ctrl+G? Doing this will make this a little bit more readable and flow a little more.
3. 01:44:033 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This is really inconsistent with what you have been doing earlier. Please make the beat placement more similar to 01:39:033 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2). I almost failed at this part since it was barely readable and the jump from 01:45:950 (2,1) is so huge.

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