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Mitani Tomoyo - Toki no Kaidan

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RatedNC17
397 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
RatedNC17
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, January 07, 2014 at 5:52:52 PM

Artist: Mitani Tomoyo
Title: Toki no Kaidan
Source: .hack//Link
Tags: opening psp ost OST stairway stairs way of time tasogare no kishidan twilight knights
BPM: 130
Filesize: 14972kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.59 stars, 43 notes)
  2. Insane (4.97 stars, 255 notes)
  3. Neiji's Hard (4.85 stars, 198 notes)
  4. Normal (2.53 stars, 74 notes)
Download: Mitani Tomoyo - Toki no Kaidan
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Been listening to this song for about a week and decided... I'LL MAP IT
Looking to have someone make a hard diff. If you're interested PM me
Thanks goes to these nice people
SPOILER
l1mi, Pishifat, Laturn, Feverie, Aqo, captin1, Tsukuyomi, and -Kirito
Special Thanks to Aqo for timing help, captin1 for offset help, Laturn for Metadata Help and Neiji for GD (Thanks guys <3)
Last edited by RatedNC17 , edited 19 times in total.
l1mi
335 posts
Joined July 2011
l1mi
Insane difficulty

00:05:809 (1) - It will feel better to play if you put the first note in a horizontal position to the first slider do to how the slider is curved. (subjective opinnion)
The distance spacing on this note is 0,6, sliders 0,9-1 just to change to 0,8 later in the same color combo.

I suggest you use distance spacing 0,9 because it look better later too. The edges on the single notes cross the edge of the slider slightly if you use any lower.



00:11:118 (4) - Again the note cross the sliders edge a bit.

00:17:121 (2) - Same thing with these sliders, their edges cross each other, some space and 0,9 makes them look better.


About the storyboard. It might be because of the high brightness of my monitor but my eyes get quite strained watching this. Might want to consider tuning it down a bit.


The easy and normal diff was cool, cant think of anything there. All the maps was easy to read and makes sense. Not much of a mod but thats my thought while playing your map.
RatedNC17
397 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
RatedNC17
SPOILER

l1mi wrote:

Insane difficulty

00:05:809 (1) - It will feel better to play if you put the first note in a horizontal position to the first slider do to how the slider is curved. (subjective opinnion)
The distance spacing on this note is 0,6, sliders 0,9-1 just to change to 0,8 later in the same color combo. alright

I suggest you use distance spacing 0,9 because it look better later too. The edges on the single notes cross the edge of the slider slightly if you use any lower.



00:11:118 (4) - Again the note cross the sliders edge a bit. fixed

00:17:121 (2) - Same thing with these sliders, their edges cross each other, some space and 0,9 makes them look better. fixed


About the storyboard. It might be because of the high brightness of my monitor but my eyes get quite strained watching this. Might want to consider tuning it down a bit.


The easy and normal diff was cool, cant think of anything there. All the maps was easy to read and makes sense. Not much of a mod but thats my thought while playing your map. :)

Thanks for the mod :D
pishifat
osu! Paragon
3,812 posts
Joined August 2013
pishifat
this will be my first time modding, so if i screw something up majorly with the timestamps or something, sorry :P

overall things:

- slider tick rate seems too fast. for the insane difficulty it's not a big deal, but there's unnecessarily high combos for the other difficulties considering the amount of notes (should just be set to 1).

- BPM is off by a tiny bit. it's noticeable near the end of the song and definitely needs some changing.

- i don't know much about storyboards, but this one was pretty distracting on the easy and normal difficulties due to their not matching with the ingame beats. on insane it matches with the notes so it's fine. this may be acceptable though, as "i don't know much about storyboards." it also lasts for 17 seconds after the final note, which is a painful wait. i'd consider starting the transition to the "thanks for playing" right after the last note hits


easy

00:30:049 (1,2) - on easier maps i've noticed that it's better to avoid overlapping notes. new players often can't read stuff like that very well

00:57:752 (3) - same thing^

01:12:527 (3) - ^

01:01:445 (1) - slider shape is unappealing and repeats many times. the best thing i can say is to make something less... abnormal i guess. i won't list all the instances of it


normal

00:11:003 (2) - another odd slider shape. doesn't look good :/

00:14:350 (3) - should be placed a half tick earlier and lengthened accordingly

00:29:356 (1) - i'd consider putting that a little higher up. it's pretty low and would be out of place to inexperienced players


insane

00:53:596 (1,2,3) - make it so that these notes are countable without just seeing the approach circles. players who don't have low opacity skins can't see the numbers, so they'd have no easy way of judging how many notes there are. just space them out a bit - enough to tell that there's multiple notes.
example:


01:08:371 (1,2,3) - same thing^
RatedNC17
397 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
RatedNC17
SPOILER

pishifat wrote:

this will be my first time modding, so if i screw something up majorly with the timestamps or something, sorry :P

overall things:

- slider tick rate seems too fast. for the insane difficulty it's not a big deal, but there's unnecessarily high combos for the other difficulties considering the amount of notes (should just be set to 1). alright

- BPM is off by a tiny bit. it's noticeable near the end of the song and definitely needs some changing. trying to get that looked at

- i don't know much about storyboards, but this one was pretty distracting on the easy and normal difficulties due to their not matching with the ingame beats. on insane it matches with the notes so it's fine. this may be acceptable though, as "i don't know much about storyboards." it also lasts for 17 seconds after the final note, which is a painful wait. i'd consider starting the transition to the "thanks for playing" right after the last note hits will look at that


easy

00:30:049 (1,2) - on easier maps i've noticed that it's better to avoid overlapping notes. new players often can't read stuff like that very well alright

00:57:752 (3) - same thing^

01:12:527 (3) - ^

01:01:445 (1) - slider shape is unappealing and repeats many times. the best thing i can say is to make something less... abnormal i guess. i won't list all the instances of it i'll consider it


normal

00:11:003 (2) - another odd slider shape. doesn't look good :/ i'll consider it

00:14:350 (3) - should be placed a half tick earlier and lengthened accordingly alright

00:29:356 (1) - i'd consider putting that a little higher up. it's pretty low and would be out of place to inexperienced players moved this up a bit


insane

00:53:596 (1,2,3) - make it so that these notes are countable without just seeing the approach circles. players who don't have low opacity skins can't see the numbers, so they'd have no easy way of judging how many notes there are. just space them out a bit - enough to tell that there's multiple notes.
example:


01:08:371 (1,2,3) - same thing^ i think i'll keep it that way it is

Thanks for the help :D
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn
Should be just .hack//LINK for the source.. without the : in the middle. (Also, you may want to use Link instead of LINK? I'm not entirely sure on this one. The logo and everything uses lower-cases)

Artist: 三谷 朋世
Romanised Artist: Mitani Tomoyo

Title: 時の階段
Romanised Title: Toki no Kaidan (Literally means Stairs/Stairway/Staircase of Time)

I believe you should use Toki no Kaidan as the title because on the back of the CD (Track 13) | http://www.rpgfan.com/soundtracks/hack- ... kcover.jpg and http://www.hack.channel.or.jp/link/popup_ost.html | it is listed as "時の階段." There isn't an official name for an English title to the track since the game and song has only been available in Japan so far, meaning all translations are just made up and not from an official source. (yes, even VGMDB is wrong in this case for translating something they shouldn't have)

You can still add stuff like Stairs/Stairway of Time to the tags if you want (Since there isn't an official translation, it could be either Stairs or Stairway). Also consider adding 黄昏の騎士団 Tasogare no Kishidan Twilight Knights to the tags as it is part of the title in the manga the game is based off of.

Don't really think this is KD worthy.. Was just looking through some songs when I came across this. Good luck.

Also.. that SB is blinding.. like really overboard. could use some serious toning down XD
RatedNC17
397 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
RatedNC17

Lanturn wrote:

Should be just .hack//LINK for the source.. without the : in the middle. (Also, you may want to use Link instead of LINK? I'm not entirely sure on this one. The logo and everything uses lower-cases)

Artist: 三谷 朋世
Romanised Artist: Mitani Tomoyo

Title: 時の階段
Romanised Title: Toki no Kaidan (Literally means Stairs/Stairway/Staircase of Time)

I believe you should use Toki no Kaidan as the title because on the back of the CD (Track 13) | http://www.rpgfan.com/soundtracks/hack- ... kcover.jpg and http://www.hack.channel.or.jp/link/popup_ost.html | it is listed as "時の階段." There isn't an official name for an English title to the track since the game and song has only been available in Japan so far, meaning all translations are just made up and not from an official source. (yes, even VGMDB is wrong in this case for translating something they shouldn't have)

You can still add stuff like Stairs/Stairway of Time to the tags if you want (Since there isn't an official translation, it could be either Stairs or Stairway). Also consider adding 黄昏の騎士団 Tasogare no Kishidan Twilight Knights to the tags as it is part of the title in the manga the game is based off of.

Don't really think this is KD worthy.. Was just looking through some songs when I came across this. Good luck. All of this applied. Thanks so much :)

Also.. that SB is blinding.. like really overboard. could use some serious toning down XD hmmm 3rd suggestion. alright i'll tone it down
BigWilly
214 posts
Joined October 2013
BigWilly
[Easy] Quick response from my Modding queue, thanks for using

There are lots of Awkward gaps in this Difficulty. Try Filling them in! (unless they are still WIP)

01:01:493 (1,1) - Try Making these Sliders Look a bit more elegant
01:16:262 (1,1) - ^

[Normal]
00:09:800 (2) - ^
00:44:416 (1,2,3) - Try Moving these Closer together so the hitcircle looks 'Squashed'


Good Luck!
RatedNC17
397 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
RatedNC17

Feverie wrote:

[Easy] Quick response from my Modding queue, thanks for using

There are lots of Awkward gaps in this Difficulty. Try Filling them in! (unless they are still WIP)

01:01:493 (1,1) - Try Making these Sliders Look a bit more elegant changed them
01:16:262 (1,1) - ^ changed them

[Normal]
00:09:800 (2) - ^ changed
00:44:416 (1,2,3) - Try Moving these Closer together so the hitcircle looks 'Squashed' ok


Good Luck!
Thanks for the mod :)
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,607 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1
hi

try offset 575 (+5), it's very close as is, but this might just be a bit more solid

good luck!
Kinomi
1,229 posts
Joined August 2012
Kinomi
Hi~hi~from my queue
reply to m4m req

General
for rank,you need a hard
your map need further work,so i will give you some suggestions

Easy
in easy and normal,open the distance snap,make sure objects have same spacing
00:37:031 (1) - for example,this one,have a spacing
SPOILER
it is a terrible jump in easy,which is too hard for newbie.
you should choose a general spacing ad resnap all the objects
01:01:493 (1) - avoid overlap in easy,it is hard to understand for newbie
01:03:339 (1,1) - when doing a blanket,turn off the grid snap,ctrl + left click to add anchor
SPOILER
01:12:570 (3,1) - avoid stack in easy

though there are many other problems i think you should fix the spacing first.

Normal
same problems as easy fix the spacing plz
learn more pretty arrangement from ranked map is a good way to improve your map
00:54:113 (2,3,4) - these 3 looks ugly,avoid too long sliders,you can replace them by repeat sliders,or cut them,use other rhythm
00:13:498 (2,3) - this is ugly too..sth like this will be better i think
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Insane
take care of spacing,though you needn't follow distance snap any more in insane you should take care of spacing,too
SPOILER
SPOILER
00:22:267 (1,2) - avoid meaningless overlap like this
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arrangement is boring..learn to put some jump and interesting arrangement from ranked map is what you can do

actually your map is far from a ranked one..so there is a big change and improvement waiting for you
I think the main problem you need to solve is some basal arrangement problems
It's hard to point out all the problems in your map in English..if you like,you can ask me for some pattern suggestions or other questions about mapping in-game.

good luck
Neiji Razuiya
235 posts
Joined October 2012
Neiji Razuiya
yout GD request :D


SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Stairway to Time.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 53365
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 499,6042,35705,54041,68811,83578
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Toki no Kaidan
TitleUnicode:時の階段
Artist:Mitani Tomoyo
ArtistUnicode:三谷 朋世
Creator:RatedNC17
Version:Neiji's Hard
Source:.hack//Link
Tags:opening psp ost OST stairway stairs way of time tasogare no kishidan twilight knights
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"hack link.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Combo4 : 0,255,255

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-Neipezi
2,266 posts
Joined October 2011
-Neipezi
hi:3/

[General]
- not good storyboard. add videos instead. :arrow: Download(old video quality is not good.)
- background of better quality Download
-Timing error
  • 00:54:108 - Kiai isn't snapped
    01:08:762 - kiai'end isn't snapped
    01:08:877 - Kiai isn't snapped
    01:23:646 - Kiai'end isn't snapped
[Easy]
- slider tick rate -1 (1 is enough)
00:22:728 (1) - 1/1 after changing slides, 00:24:113 - add a circle ((1) the time is not good for the slide.)
00:32:882 - circle add (giter sound)
01:14:421 (2) - blanket also really off
00:54:113 (1,2) - the gap is too far
01:08:882 (1,2) - ^
01:18:113 (1) - NC remove

[Normal]
- slider tick rate -1 (easy and the same)
00:17:882 (3) - whistle add?
00:27:805 (3,1) - the gap is too far
01:00:113 - 01:01:036 - circle add (combo continues)
01:13:959 (2,1) - the gap is too far

[Neiji's Hard]
00:00:575 (1,1) - delete, not good. difficulty does not exist in other notes.
00:07:959 (1) - circle change
00:15:228 (2) - 1/2 slide changes (not good :( )
00:15:921 (4) - delete. not stream
00:17:536 (3) - ^
00:41:767 (4) - x352 y276 move (linear arrangement)
00:47:421 - circle add? (combo continues)
00:47:651 (6) - 1/2 slide change? (vocal)
00:48:113 (1) - go to 00:48:113 and then 1/2 changes (vocal)
01:03:344 (2,3,4,5) - cause confusion in play.
01:07:036 (3,1) - part change (vocal)
01:10:728 (2,1) - ^ (1) slide NC remove
01:12:113 (1,2) - NC change
01:13:267 (1) - NC remove
01:13:959 (1,2,3) - cause confusion in play. needs to be changed.
01:15:459 (5) - 01:15:228 - move?
01:15:805 (1,2) - NC change
01:16:959 (1,1) - NC remove
01:18:113 (2) - NC add
01:19:613 (1) - this slider 01:19:844 - to fit.
01:20:651 (1,1,1) - NC remove

[Insane]
00:12:344 (7) - move right one space
00:19:036 (1) - whistle remove
00:27:228 (4) - x360 y192 move (play hard)
00:32:421 - 00:32:882 - circle add (combo continues)
00:50:882 (1) - clap add?
00:54:113 (3) - NC add
01:08:882 (3) - ^

GL:3
Neiji Razuiya
235 posts
Joined October 2012
Neiji Razuiya
fix~
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Stairway to Time.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 53365
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 499,6042,35705,54041,68811,83578
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Toki no Kaidan
TitleUnicode:時の階段
Artist:Mitani Tomoyo
ArtistUnicode:三谷 朋世
Creator:RatedNC17
Version:Neiji's Hard
Source:.hack//Link
Tags:opening psp ost OST stairway stairs way of time tasogare no kishidan twilight knights
BeatmapID:350150
BeatmapSetID:138450

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"hack link.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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RatedNC17
397 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
RatedNC17
SPOILER

-Kirito wrote:

hi:3/

[General]
- not good storyboard. add videos instead. :arrow: Download(old video quality is not good.)
- background of better quality Download
-Timing error
  • 00:54:108 - Kiai isn't snapped
    01:08:762 - kiai'end isn't snapped
    01:08:877 - Kiai isn't snapped
    01:23:646 - Kiai'end isn't snapped
[Easy]
- slider tick rate -1 (1 is enough)
00:22:728 (1) - 1/1 after changing slides, 00:24:113 - add a circle ((1) the time is not good for the slide.)
00:32:882 - circle add (giter sound)
01:14:421 (2) - blanket also really off
00:54:113 (1,2) - the gap is too far
01:08:882 (1,2) - ^
01:18:113 (1) - NC remove

[Normal]
- slider tick rate -1 (easy and the same)
00:17:882 (3) - whistle add?
00:27:805 (3,1) - the gap is too far
01:00:113 - 01:01:036 - circle add (combo continues)
01:13:959 (2,1) - the gap is too far

[Neiji's Hard]
00:00:575 (1,1) - delete, not good. difficulty does not exist in other notes.
00:07:959 (1) - circle change
00:15:228 (2) - 1/2 slide changes (not good :( )
00:15:921 (4) - delete. not stream
00:17:536 (3) - ^
00:41:767 (4) - x352 y276 move (linear arrangement)
00:47:421 - circle add? (combo continues)
00:47:651 (6) - 1/2 slide change? (vocal)
00:48:113 (1) - go to 00:48:113 and then 1/2 changes (vocal)
01:03:344 (2,3,4,5) - cause confusion in play.
01:07:036 (3,1) - part change (vocal)
01:10:728 (2,1) - ^ (1) slide NC remove
01:12:113 (1,2) - NC change
01:13:267 (1) - NC remove
01:13:959 (1,2,3) - cause confusion in play. needs to be changed.
01:15:459 (5) - 01:15:228 - move?
01:15:805 (1,2) - NC change
01:16:959 (1,1) - NC remove
01:18:113 (2) - NC add
01:19:613 (1) - this slider 01:19:844 - to fit.
01:20:651 (1,1,1) - NC remove

[Insane]
00:12:344 (7) - move right one space
00:19:036 (1) - whistle remove
00:27:228 (4) - x360 y192 move (play hard)
00:32:421 - 00:32:882 - circle add (combo continues)
00:50:882 (1) - clap add?
00:54:113 (3) - NC add
01:08:882 (3) - ^

GL:3

Only thing i didn't add was the video since i don't really like it and also was laggy as hell. I did remove the storyboard except for the black fade and the end text
Kibbleru
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Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
m4m from ur queue

[General]

[Easy]

00:07:959 (2) - i think this should be half a beat behind in the timeline
00:11:651 (2) - same case here
00:15:344 (2) - ^

00:32:882 (3) - move this down a bit so it forms a line with 00:31:959 (2) and the start of 00:33:344 (1)

00:33:344 (1) - awkward overlapping

00:39:805 (1,2,1) - sometimes it's weird when things just barely overlap

00:57:805 (3) - new players might get confused by this pattern
01:12:575 (3) - ^

01:01:498 (1,1) - these don't look symmetrical try copying one then press ctrl + h then j
01:16:267 (1,2) - same time applies here

01:14:421 (2) - fix this beatblanket


[Normal]

00:07:267 (2) - move this back half a beat
00:11:651 (3) - ^

00:11:651 (3) - awkward overlap

01:00:113 (3) - this isn't perfectly parallel with 00:59:190 (2)

01:02:882 (2) - move this down slightly so it looks like a straight line with 01:01:498 (1) and 01:03:113 (3)


[Neiji's Hard]

more curves
and add hitsounds

00:11:190 (3,1) - overlap
00:26:421 (1) - slightly awkward overlap
01:15:805 (1) - ^

00:26:421 (1) - double click to make a red slider point and use that for sharp angles

00:54:805 (1,2,3) - make these straighter
01:12:575 (2,3,4) - straighten these up a little more
00:34:498 (1,2,3) - ^

00:56:190 (2) - make this into a straight line thing: http://gyazo.com/108e84c66b690ca714e5af239d5e2b51
01:10:728 (1) - make this similar to ^ http://gyazo.com/d09b96b0093b90cae1456cd9e20792bc

01:14:190 (8) - if you were trying to make a sharp angle here, just double click to make a red slider point for angles

00:24:805 (2) - move this down so its at the same level as the start of 00:25:036 (3)

00:38:421 (4) - move this to the right a bit so its directly above 00:38:190 (3)

00:48:575 (3) - this doesn't really fit the pattern imo. change the shape up a bit so its more linear maybe

00:58:728 (5) - using a curve here might fit better
01:13:267 (5) - ^slight curve

01:23:421 (5,6) - move these so they form a square with 01:22:959 (4) this picture probably isn't perfect but you get the idea http://gyazo.com/df0aa37744c1691ff9d2975e010f7e88

tip: double click allows you to make red slider points for making sharp angles


[Insane]

The difficulty isn't very high considering it to be Insane. You may want to change the difficulty to like.. "Hard+" maybe

00:09:575 (1) - moving this down to the same level as the start 00:09:805 (2) may look better

00:14:190 (3) - fix this beatblanket
00:13:498 (2) - ^

00:17:882 (3) - this isn't parallel with 00:17:190 (2)
00:22:728 (2) - same case here

00:18:575 (4) - this doesn't look perfectly adjacent to 00:17:882 (3) or 00:17:190 (2)

00:36:113 (2,3) - i think you can probably overlap these

00:36:575 (5,1,2) - move these to the same vertical level as 00:35:882 (1,2)

(OPTIONAL)- you can probably curve your ministreams a little
00:58:613 (6,7,8,9) <--- What i mean by ministream

00:50:190 (2) - move this to the left a little; http://gyazo.com/b6fe829eff7c194ab5b05de237f2ad21
Last edited by Kibbleru , edited 1 time in total.
IadzXenon
47 posts
Joined September 2013
IadzXenon
Hello M4M Request...
Let's begin!

[Easy]
- 00:07:959(2) Remove the whistle please, downbeat here, don't let to be loud...
- 01:11:190(1) Add whistle, upbeat here...
- 00:18:575(1) ~ 00:18:690(1) Too close with spinner, just 1/2 beat, the spinner must be start on 00:18:805. Moreover to follow "te" vocal...
- 00:22:728(1) Abridge slider to 00:23:651 please, it doesn't fit the music, then I suggest to add note in 00:24:113...
- 00:27:344(1) Again, remove whistle please downbeat here...
- 00:48:575(1) Add finnish, music stop suddenly here...
- 00:55:959(2) Add clap here to keep consistency with 00:54:112(1)
- 01:03:344(1) I see this, you copy-paste from 01:01:498 then flip verticaly (Ctrl+J). It's a wrong way to mirrored them, you can see there's looks oblique. To fix this press Ctrl+J>Ctrl+H>Ctrl+G (flip vertically, flip horizontally, and reverse selection). Also remove combo here. Too much new combo make player easier to gain HP...
- 01:05:190(1) Remove new combo also...
- 01:18:113(2) Same reason as 01:03:344(1)...

[Normal]
- 00:16:036(5) Remove the whistle please, avoid cymbal sound in downbeat...
- 00:24:113(4) Same reason as above...
- 00:27:344(2) - ^
- 00:29:190 Add note here please to follow the piano...
- 00:30:575(2) Cymbal here remove the whistle...
- 00:42:805(4) Extend the slider to 00:43:959 please, doesn't fit the music and also too keep consistency with 00:35:421...
- 00:44:421 ~ 00:48:344 For what you use whistle in this part? Since you not use it in Easy diff...
- 00:48:575(1) Same reason as Easy diff...
- 01:15:344 Add note here to flow rythm?
- 01:18:113(4) Extend slider to 01:19:498 please, doesn't fit with music...

[Neiji's Hard]
Generally, I can clarify this mapset is boringable because no hitsound inserted. Note that modders is hardly to mod a map without set hitsound. And don't forget to keep consistency with other diff...
- 00:08:190 , 00:08:421 , 00:08:651 Add note here to follow the piano...
- 00:11:651 Abridge slider to 00:13:267 don't skip "ki" vocal here it's not fit the music. Then replace 00:13:498 with circle...
- 01:14:190 Slider should start in 01:14:421 don't skip "ra" vocal here, and don't forget to abridge that. Then replace 01:14:190 with circle...

[Insane]
- 00:22:267 Remove the whistle, sounds loud here...
- 00:24:575 I disagree place slider here, the slider is too long since no other slider as long as here. How if replace with circle also in 00:25:036 and 00:25:498 to follow the piano instead?
- 00:25:959 Remove whistle please, downbeat here...
- 00:29:651 - ^
- 00:33:344 - ^
- 00:35:190 - ^

That's I found, good luck...
Neiji Razuiya
235 posts
Joined October 2012
Neiji Razuiya
i will check later
sorry for not added hitsound o.o
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