OstrichSupreme wrote:

Hello! If you want to m4m, here's my map! http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/168588


Normal

00:49:531 (6) - new combo - I think it goes better with the vocals the way I have it
00:50:007 (1) - remove new combo - ^
01:00:960 (1) - new combo - ^
01:01:436 (2) - remove new combo - ^
01:16:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - whole part needs 1 or more new combos
01:35:007 (1) - this sounds much better when shortened in half, and reverse arrow!
01:46:674 - to 01:59:412 - would flow better with notes, this break seems unnecessary, one after is good - I'll see what other people say about it.
02:20:960 (6) - new combo
02:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5) - blanket feels a little off, needs some fine tuning
02:35:959 (6) - new combo

No real timing errors, just maybe add another kiai time in the mid area of song, and use a larger grid.

Hard

00:28:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Space a bit better (larger grid recommended) - Sorry, I don't see what's wrong with this
00:44:055 (1,2,3,4,5) - overlap better - What?
01:05:245 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Space a bit better ( ^ )
01:22:150 (1,2,3,4) - overlap them OR space them further apart
01:45:007 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:46:674 - to 01:59:412 - would flow better with notes, this break seems unnecessary, one after is good - Will see what others think.
01:59:531 (1) - because it's a harder difficulty, I think your should make this into to spinners, one that starts at 01:59:531 (1) - , and ends at 02:00:007 -
then add another that picks up after that one - I like it
02:45:959 (1,2,3,4) - space or overlap better

Good luck with your map!

KillerGecko wrote:

From Gecko's Modding Queue!

Green = fixed
Red = no change
Blue = my comments

Normal:
S ranked it on first try so it's fairly readable, but I am a hard rank player so I may not be a good judge on how it reads to normal players.
01:16:674 (1,3) The 3 being under the 1 is a bit hard to hit for normal difficulty. Would suggest moving 3. Only compliant I have about the Normal - I will change this if someone else mentions it

Hard:
Considering I could play through it the first time without missing to many notes I think that speaks for a well made initial map. With that said:
00:41:674 (1) Clap hit sounds on this slider go with the rest of the section.
01:00:960 (1) Finish hit sound here. - I think the finish sounds better 1 beat after this.
01:23:102 (4) This slider doesn't look to good, and threw me off with how it looked in comparison to the rest of the sliders. I would consider changing it. - Changed the shape of the slider slightly.
01:46:317 (4) Exactly at this point on the slider, the ball stutters and jitters breaking the smoothness. I would suggest just smoothing this little kink out so the ball doesn't suddenly spazz out. - I think i fixed it.
01:59:536 This is completely personal, but I hate back to back spinners because when you first play through its hard to know that its coming. It follows the song the way it is, so its completely a style choice.

Sorry if I couldn't be helpful on normal Difficult , good luck with map!

[ Raphael ] wrote:

Hi~! from M4M~

Green = fixed
Red = No change
Blue = My comments

[General]
Good song! how to used grid4? (View→Grid level→4)

[Normal]

• 00:11:436 (3,3) - overlap. maybe it is better :3
  00:17:150 (3) - same like 00:16:198 (1) - - I don't see it
  00:22:150 (3) - Ctrl + J for better flow
  00:22:863 (1) - end on 00:24:293 -
  00:32:864 (3,4) - bad overlap - Will change if someone else mentions it.
  00:39:293 (2,3) - remove that it overlap lightly
  00:56:674 (3) - move to (320,64) for better flow - I think what I have looks better. Will change if mentioned again.
  00:57:626 (1,2,3) - i think this patter is a little awkward - Made it more symmetrical.
  01:08:579 (1) - end on 01:10:007 -
  01:16:674 (1,3) - this patter is too confuse. try another pattern
  01:22:150 (1) - move to 01:22:388 - and add circle on 01:22:150 - (Suggestion) - Sorry I'm going to keep what I have.
  01:35:007 (1,2) - remove that it overlap lightly
  01:36:674 (4) - distance
  01:46:674 - add circle
  02:13:817 (3) - NC for follow rhythm
  02:22:864 (4) - remove this, and add circle on 02:22:864 - and 02:23:579 (1) - start on 02:23:341 - , end on 02:24:769 - (Suggestion)
  02:25:959 (2,3,4) - remove that it overlap lightly
  02:30:721 (1) - start on 02:30:960 -
  02:32:864 (1,3) - try another pattern
  
  [Hard]
  
  • 00:12:150 (2,4) - better blanket
    00:21:436 (1) - same like 00:22:150 (4) -
    00:24:531 (1) - reduce some curve
    00:33:341 (6) - Ctrl + J and Ctrl + G. maybe this flow is good for playing
    00:53:341 - add circle
    01:05:245 (1,4) - overlap
    01:20:960 (7,8) - better blanket
    01:21:674 (8,2) - bad overlap
    02:16:198 (5) - NC
    02:34:055 (3) - make to straight slider

Wafu wrote:

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended to fix
Black - Suggestion

[General]

Convert the background to .jpg file. - Fixed
Find 192kbps mp3 to increase quality to maximum rankable. - Fixed
Use kiai on 01:16:674 - Fixed
Remove Girls' Generation from tags. It's useless to have it both in tags and artist. - Fixed

[Normal]

00:24:531 (1) - This is really fast for newbie players. You cannot place slider when there is 1/2 space in normal map. Maybe fix it by moving slider on 00:22:626 and end on 00:23:817 - Fixed
00:25:722 (2) - Move this circle on 148;185 to be in center of 00:26:198 (3) and to stack it with 00:28:579 (1) - Sorry I don't understand.
00:33:817 (4) - Avoid overlaps on Normal please. -
00:44:055 (1) - Remake this slider to sliders and circles. I don't see any reason for using spinner here.[/color] - Fixed
00:54:770 (3) - Move on 243;334 for better flow. - Fixed
01:10:245 (1) - Same as I said on 00:24:531 (1)
01:11:912 (4) - End on 01:12:388. There is no sense to make it longer. You always followed vocal on this slider, but now you follow music, this is just only one place where you've used this style, so it's bullshit if you don't use it frequently. - Fixed
01:37:626 (1) - Same as 00:44:055 (1) - Fixed
02:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5) - You changed snap, but following notes and sliders use again original snap, probably change it.[/color] - Fixed

[Hard] - Ok yeah I agree with you, I was getting lazy. I am going to redo a lot of the map. I still have a lot to learn. Thank you for your suggestions!

02:47:626 (1) - End on 02:51:436 to be consistent with Normal diff
00:40:841 (6) - End on 00:41:198 and add circle on 00:41:436. It follows music imo better.
Well.. this difficulty simply pisses me off. I don't know why are you so lazy, but you just took half of map and copied it, that's totally not good.
I don't know how to mod it because there is so much things to fix so I would be really long time here so I just can give you general suggestions:

1. Less copypasta
2. Don't use unnecessary spinners
3. No overmapping
4. Don't use one pattern million times in a map
5. 01:45:960 (4) No, such sliders are definitely not cool

Good luck. You have a lot to learn so keep working hard and read suggestions above. I hope your next maps will follow them~