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Topic Starter
cirnocon
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
RandF
From my queue~
basic indication, here

[General]
  1. First, you should check AI-Mod(Ctrl+Shift+A). AI-Mod tells you basic and vital mistakes in your mapset
    AI-Mod
    1. "Object isn't snapped!" "Object's end is not snapped!"
      notes is not on the timeline. if you change BPM or offset after mapping, for example, you must fix all note's time positions.
    2. "Kiai time is toggled on less than 15 second."
      it's OK to ignore this
    3. "this combo is very long. Consider splitting it up."
      Combos should be kept under approximately 20 objects, and even lower than that the lower the difficulty is supposed to be.
      Generally, Combos for normal-diff are kept less than 7~8 combo
  2. BPM 220 (some part 110). about bpm and offset, I recommend to check this map once
  3. BG: I recommend to resize 1366*768 or 1024*768 according to Ranking Criteria
  4. applause.wav: you must remove unnecessary files from mapset
  5. remove "touhou", "halozy" from tags
  6. tags suggetion:
    nanahira
    Beloved Tomboyish Girl
  7. Combocolors are too similar. it's difficult to distinguish them
[Normal]
  1. for normal(easiest diff in your mapset), you should conform DS(Distance spacing) as far as possible. I recommend to set Distance Snap constantly
  2. for normal(easiest diff in your mapset), you should not change SV(Slider Velocity).
[TRIPLE ICE CREAM!!!]
  1. increase HD(HP Drain Rate). very unbalanced difficulty
Let's try~ ;)
~Good Luck~
Topic Starter
cirnocon
Fixed.
As for BPM and offset, i think it should be okay for this beatmap.
Thx for modding. :)
Bara-
M4M Thingie
0:35:333 BPM 110
1:05:878 BPM 220
2:39:696 BPM 110
3:20:059 BPM 220

You HAVE to use this. I might be wrong about Offset, but this is proper timing. Your timing was very off.

[General]
Check AIMod, to see any errors,[Ctrl] + [Shft] + [A]
Remove Cirno from tags, it is already in the song.

[Normal]

HP - 4 (Good)
CS - 3-4 (People prefer 3 for Easy/Normal diffs)
OD - 4 (Highten it a bit)
AR - 4 (Lower it a bit)
Don't make much use of 1/4

Set DS (DistanceSnap) to 1.0 [Alt] + [MouseScroll]

00:40:723 (3) - Make this note
00:45:059 (4) - ^^
00:49:124 (4) - Move to the right, but don't use sudden 1/2. It is better to begin this one at 00:48:853 - and end at 00:49:395-
00:52:647 (3) - Make it to a Slider, which is 2 beats long
00:58:067 (3) - Move this to 00:58:203
01:03:758 - Add Break here
01:09:585 (4) - Wut? Don't use 1/4. Make it a 1/1 slider
01:12:431 (4,5,6,7,8) - Make it into 1/2 slider. and for (8) ^^
01:16:496 (4) - DON'T EVER use 1/8 in diffs below Extra, make it into a 1/2 slider
01:17:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This overlaps a lot, change it. Oh, and (1) is WAY too FAR away from the previous one.
01:18:935 (1,3) - NEVER USE SUCH 1/8 SLIDERS, THEY ARE 6 Beats. Make it 6 1/2 sliders or 3 1/1 sliders,for both
01:27:742 (5) - Add note
01:29:904 (7,8,9,10,11) - Overlap
01:34:328 (5) - Remove, too fast for normal
01:36:402 (3,4) - 01:44:904 (1,2) - ^^
01:36:402 (3) - NC (New Combo)
01:49:950 (1) - Overlap
01:52:508 (4) - 01:54:374 (1) - 01:56:033 (1) - 01:57:830 (4,5) - 02:00:319 (1) - All too fast --> Remove
01:27:742 (5) - Add note
02:11:315 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Too Hard for Normal diff
02:17:606 (8) - Too fast
02:20:025 (1,2) - ^^
02:28:735 (4) - ^^
02:30:947 (1) - A 9 Sec Spinner, that is way to long, Spinners should be around .5/3 seconds, unless music serves it
03:09:063 (6) - Overlap
03:26:608 (1) - Too fast
03:28:750 (3) - ^^
03:31:792 (3) - Horrible overlap, sorry
Well, you get it with those 1/4 - 1/8 reversing sliders, don't do this. I won't add them now, because then the mod will be 200+ lines ;)
03:49:488 (1) - Too far
04:13:059 (1) - Overlap
04:30:925 (1) - This slider has such an High-Speed, you can't follow it.


[TRIPLE ICE CREAM]
Sure you can clear this??

It has countless errors, sorry. Prepare

00:37:471 (4) - Unrankable Slider
00:39:639 (5) - ^^
00:41:807 (4) - ^^
00:46:143 (2) - ^^
00:52:783 (8,9) - ^^
01:01:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You can't see how to do this
01:18:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,3,4) - 1/8 Streams are Semi-Unrankable. Streams with DS higher than 1.0 are awful. Streams above DS 2.0 are impossible. REMOVE!
01:28:107 (4) - Unrankable
01:30:803 (7) - Invisible
01:34:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What?
01:36:402 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - HIgh Speed Streams, IMPOSSIBLE
01:40:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Looks Good, but since it is such an high speed, IMPOSSIBLE
01:44:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why 1-3-2-4-6-5, make it 1-2-5-6-4-3 to make it possible, it you understand me
01:45:112 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - Playable, if they have no reverses
01:47:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This is litterally IMPOSSIBLE
01:49:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^^
01:57:969 (6,7,8,9) - ^^
02:00:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,1,2,3,4,5) - ^^^
02:17:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^^
02:20:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ^^
02:28:735 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^^
02:58:223 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Do a NC whenever there were 4 notes, so it would look like 1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4 etc.
03:26:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is IMPOSSIBLE
03:42:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - ^^
03:59:787 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - Too Difficult to read
04:00:963 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Too fast
04:22:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - IMPOSSIBLE
04:26:589 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Those 1's on the top and bottom, make this IMPOSSIBLE
04:30:927 (3) - NC
04:30:927 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - What The Hell
04:35:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Even More WHAT THE HELL IS THIS?? You are using 1/4 on 440 BPM, with Sliders Jumps. I have never seen anything which is as unrankable as this, and 04:38:612 (1,2) - Are the worst. Why using 2x Speed, and 4x BPM??
04:41:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - Finally, the last IMPOSSIBLE comment
04:48:236 (1,2) - Never mind my comment above this one, this is impossible, because of the short time between the notes, and the location


Finally, Done

I LOVE this map, because it is so Unrankable. Maybe remove the Triple Ice Cream diff, and add it as an extra thing on the forum page. It is cool to see AUTO play it ;)
ARTPHONEY
i very like this map :D
Topic Starter
cirnocon
@baraatje123: Normal competely updated, and for extra diff., i will finish this later.
@-Man: Thx~
Topic Starter
cirnocon
Now Extra diff updated.
neonat
General

Countdowns are different, make them the same
Normal: 0
TRIPLE ICE CREAM!!!: 1

Normal has 1 more inherited (red) timing point than TRIPLE ICE CREAM!!! which is unrankable because all difficulties must have identical timing points

The timings are off, unfortunately, I cannot really comment or suggest anything when the timings wouldn't be right

TRIPLE ICE CREAM!!!

00:54:790 (1) - this slider starts on nothing, the beat only starts at 00:54:926
01:44:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern has to change, unless you are telling me you can hit this perfectly 10 times in a row
03:59:839 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - this is not a playable pattern as well
04:25:407 (7) - not aligned properly

This difficulty is just spammed filled with 1/8 streams with little or no regard of whether it fits to the main rhythm of the song. Patterns are also mainly just use for looks and art, and not about flow or good structure with the song.

I thought this would have been an attempt to have it ranked, which was why I thought you posted in the queue, but unfortunately I can't really see it as a wholehearted attempt. Sorry, but I see this as something you are trying to troll people with.

You can always have streams in the Extra difficulty, but it has to make sense and fit the song, you can't have the song fit to your rhythm, it has to be the other way round. It's the sad truth, but you have to limit yourself to the song, and not go overboard. Hopefully the end product of this would certainly not look like what it is currently, and I wish you all the best.
Neta
from my modding queue

first this need Easy and Hard diff

the Extra diff is almost unrankable..

I'll check this later if you fix some big problems about Ranking Criteria
Topic Starter
cirnocon
@neonat: Thx for modding :)
Feith
hi....hi....
I'm from mod req here !
I know this map is completely insane but i'll try not to comlain about this insanity :)
okay, here's my result

GENERAL
  1. don't let the object ouside the grid, it's bad for standard screen size. :!:
  2. remove cirno tag
  3. it's too difficult to see the object because the combo colour is nearly the same as the background
  4. Check AiMod, please!

Normal
  • use a distance snap for high jumps and make it little harder
  1. 01:18:926 (1) - too easy ! change it to long reverse slider.
  2. 01:23:290 (3) - u do the same mistake twice! please use 2 long reverse slider or a couple of circles
  3. 01:36:381 (3) - if you still want to use this pattern, please cut it until 01:38:017 and make it longer, use circles for the rest
  4. 01:38:836 (4) - same from above, cut it until 01:40:267 , make it longer, use circles for the rest
  5. 01:44:836 (1) - same from above, cut it until 01:46:676 , make it longer, ^
  6. 01:47:563 (2) - same from above, cut it until 01:49:131 , make it longer, ^
  7. 01:51:926 (2) - delete!
  8. 01:57:381 (3) - move it to 01:57:517
  9. 02:00:381 (1) - use 20% of the volume, disturbing !
  10. 02:20:017 (1) - make it long slider
  11. 02:22:063 (2) - take start from 02:22:199 and ended at 02:23:904, make it longer slider
  12. 02:24:245 (1) - take start from 02:24:381 ,make it longer
  13. 02:28:745 (4) - end at 02:30:381 ,make it longer and add a couple of circles for the rest
  14. 03:26:566 (1) - take start from 03:26:702, make it longer
  15. 03:28:748 (2) - make it longer -_-
  16. 03:42:930 (1) - end at 03:44:559 , make it longer
  17. 03:45:111 (2) - end at 03:46:680 , make it longer
  18. 03:47:361 - add a circle or somethin'(make a new combo)
  19. 03:47:976 (4) - move to 03:49:150 for better timing
  20. 03:59:976 (3) - move to 04:00:088 ^
  21. 04:00:930 (3) - end at 04:01:475 , make it longer
  22. 04:01:611 (4) - end at 04:02:430 , make it longer
  23. 04:01:611 (4) - out from the grid
  24. 04:30:925 (1) - make it the same like 04:26:566 (1)
  25. 04:34:202 (2) - delete !

    This diff is easy for CtB to reach 15+ million, but very hard to Taiko becuse too much long "staggering" sliders

TRIPLE ICE CREAM!!!
  • AR:9 ?
  1. 00:37:471 (4) - can u make a beautiful pattern than a half circle pattern ?
  2. 00:39:653 (5) - ^
  3. 00:41:835 (4) - ^
  4. 00:46:199 (2) - ctrl+g to make it more beautiful, maybe.
  5. 00:52:744 (8) - can u make a better pattern ?
  6. 01:02:835 (9,1) - the same time !
  7. 01:05:938 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - begin at 01:05:904
  8. 01:15:551 (6) - end at 01:15:790 may better
  9. 01:18:176 (11,12) - make it at 01:18:211
  10. 01:18:926 (1) - delete !
  11. 01:25:540 (17) - maybe this reverse slider is better at the 16th combo ?
  12. 01:28:063 (4) - can u make a beatiful pattern ?
  13. 01:35:836 (2) - move it to 01:35:870
  14. 02:15:313 (9,10) - start at 02:15:279, this is too sudden but it sync with the song
  15. 02:15:654 (1) - start at 02:15:799
  16. 02:16:199 (2) - start at 02:16:199
  17. 02:16:745 (3) - start at 02:16:745
  18. 02:17:290 (4) - start at 02:17:290
  19. 02:17:801 (1) - delete !
  20. 02:17:870 (2) - make it new combo if u do ^
  21. 02:18:313 (8) - new combo ?
  22. 03:51:384 (4,5,6,) - move to 03:51:248
  23. 03:51:589 (7) - move to 03:51:521
  24. 04:06:759 (16,17) - move to 04:06:793
  25. 04:19:475 (1) - no new combo ?
  26. 04:44:907 (2) - move to 04:44:873
  27. 04:45:452 (3) - move to 04:45:384

Don't forget the volume percentage
It seem that this diff is imposible to play, but I like it
Topic Starter
cirnocon
Hi Feith~

Feith wrote:

hi....hi....
I'm from mod req here !
I know this map is completely insane but i'll try not to comlain about this insanity :)
okay, here's my result

GENERAL
  1. don't let the object ouside the grid, it's bad for standard screen size. :!: Okay, i will find out later.
  2. remove cirno tag Okay
  3. it's too difficult to see the object because the combo colour is nearly the same as the background i wll try to fix this issue.
  4. Check AiMod, please! Except Khai and stack leniency(TRIPLE ICE CREAM! only), another issues has fixed.

Normal
  • use a distance snap for high jumps and make it little harder
  1. 01:18:926 (1) - too easy ! change it to long reverse slider. Change
  2. 01:23:290 (3) - u do the same mistake twice! please use 2 long reverse slider or a couple of circles ^
  3. 01:36:381 (3) - if you still want to use this pattern, please cut it until 01:38:017 and make it longer, use circles for the rest ^
  4. 01:38:836 (4) - same from above, cut it until 01:40:267 , make it longer, use circles for the rest ^
  5. 01:44:836 (1) - same from above, cut it until 01:46:676 , make it longer, ^ ^
  6. 01:47:563 (2) - same from above, cut it until 01:49:131 , make it longer, ^ ^
  7. 01:51:926 (2) - delete! Fixed
  8. 01:57:381 (3) - move it to 01:57:517 Fixed
  9. 02:00:381 (1) - use 20% of the volume, disturbing ! Fixed
  10. 02:20:017 (1) - make it long slider Fixed
  11. 02:22:063 (2) - take start from 02:22:199 and ended at 02:23:904, make it longer slider Fixed
  12. 02:24:245 (1) - take start from 02:24:381 ,make it longer Fixed
  13. 02:28:745 (4) - end at 02:30:381 ,make it longer and add a couple of circles for the rest Fixed
  14. 03:26:566 (1) - take start from 03:26:702, make it longer Fixed
  15. 03:28:748 (2) - make it longer -_- Fixed
  16. 03:42:930 (1) - end at 03:44:559 , make it longer Fixed
  17. 03:45:111 (2) - end at 03:46:680 , make it longer Fixed
  18. 03:47:361 - add a circle or somethin'(make a new combo) Fixed
  19. 03:47:976 (4) - move to 03:49:150 for better timing No. It quite suits.
  20. 03:59:976 (3) - move to 04:00:088 ^ ^
  21. 04:00:930 (3) - end at 04:01:475 , make it longerFixed.
  22. 04:01:611 (4) - end at 04:02:430 , make it longer Fixed.
  23. 04:01:611 (4) - out from the grid It doesn't out of grid.
  24. 04:30:925 (1) - make it the same like 04:26:566 (1) Fixed.
  25. 04:34:202 (2) - delete ! No point that i should delete this.

    This diff is easy for CtB to reach 15+ million, but very hard to Taiko becuse too much long "staggering" sliders

TRIPLE ICE CREAM!!!
  • AR:9 ?
  1. 00:37:471 (4) - can u make a beautiful pattern than a half circle pattern ? Fixed
  2. 00:39:653 (5) - ^ Fixed
  3. 00:41:835 (4) - ^ Fixed
  4. 00:46:199 (2) - ctrl+g to make it more beautiful, maybe. Okay, fixed
  5. 00:52:744 (8) - can u make a better pattern ? Okay, now i have made a bette pattern.
  6. 01:02:835 (9,1) - the same time ! Fixed
  7. 01:05:938 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - begin at 01:05:904 Fixed
  8. 01:15:551 (6) - end at 01:15:790 may better i have change this slider timing but not using yours. Sorry.
  9. 01:18:176 (11,12) - make it at 01:18:211 Changed
  10. 01:18:926 (1) - delete ! No. It has follow the rhythm.
  11. 01:25:540 (17) - maybe this reverse slider is better at the 16th combo ? No, it doesn't. @@
  12. 01:28:063 (4) - can u make a beatiful pattern ? For example?
  13. 01:35:836 (2) - move it to 01:35:870 No. This circle follows the vocal.
  14. 02:15:313 (9,10) - start at 02:15:279, this is too sudden but it sync with the song Fixed
  15. 02:15:654 (1) - start at 02:15:799 Fixed
  16. 02:16:199 (2) - start at 02:16:199 Fixed
  17. 02:16:745 (3) - start at 02:16:745 Fixed
  18. 02:17:290 (4) - start at 02:17:290 Fixed
  19. 02:17:801 (1) - delete ! No, but i will consider if there is some issue or reasons. :)
  20. 02:17:870 (2) - make it new combo if u do ^ Same as above
  21. 02:18:313 (8) - new combo ? No, there is no point making this as new combo.
  22. 03:51:384 (4,5,6,) - move to 03:51:248 No point that these circles have to move at other timing.
  23. 03:51:589 (7) - move to 03:51:521 Same as above.
  24. 04:06:759 (16,17) - move to 04:06:793 Moved.
  25. 04:19:475 (1) - no new combo ? Okay.
  26. 04:44:907 (2) - move to 04:44:873 No. i think it should be okay.
  27. 04:45:452 (3) - move to 04:45:384 Same as above.

Don't forget the volume percentage I try to adjust. :)
It seem that this diff is imposible to play, but I like it Thanks.~ :)
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