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ClariS - Don't cry

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年11月24日 at 11:59:24

Artist: ClariS
Title: Don't cry
Source: nexus
Tags: Fionana yukinohara LoliSora
BPM: 123
Filesize: 10460kb
Play Time: 03:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Fionana's Normal (2.8 stars, 212 notes)
  2. Hard (4.9 stars, 475 notes)
Download: ClariS - Don't cry
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal done by Fionana
Stroyboard done by yukinohara
Orign from JoJo's Graveyarded Beatmap
Last edited by Rewrite , edited 5 times in total.
yukinohara
72 posts
Joined November 2010
yukinohara
Skin WIP...
SB的歌词部分Rewrite说的要自己做...
Last edited by yukinohara , edited 3 times in total.
Quilt
1,476 posts
Joined May 2010
Quilt
awesome SB lol
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Quilt wrote:

awesome SB lol
> <long time no see~thank you concern!
AlexaBM
755 posts
Joined March 2013
AlexaBM
hi~ m4m
[Fionana's Normal]
00:37:533 (7) - i usually dislike sliders with big reverses, try to put 2 sliders here
00:56:069 (2,3) - would be better if you will put them separately
01:03:874 (2,4) - do a better blanket
02:09:240 (3,5) - ^
03:04:850 (5,2) - bad overlap
03:10:703 (2,3) - would be better if you will put them separately

[Hard]
AR +1?
00:24:850 (1,1) - these circles are too near from each other and it can confuse the player
00:40:216 (3,4) - bad overlap
00:42:899 (9,1) - ^
00:49:240 (6) - NC here and remove it 00:49:728 (1) - here
00:51:191 (9) - NC
00:56:801 (7) - ^
01:00:948 (1) - ^
01:20:459 (7) - ^
01:36:069 (6) - ^
01:40:703 (8) - ^
01:48:752 (10) - ^ or somewhere here
01:59:484 (6) - ^
01:59:484 (6) - ^
02:17:045 (7) - ^
02:40:459 (7) - ^
02:44:118 (1) - ^
02:48:264 (8) - ^
02:55:581 (5) - ^
02:58:020 (1) - i already told you about such sliders..
03:01:191 (6,1) - bad overlap
good luck~
kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
kamisamaaa
IRC
2013-11-25 13:11 Rewrite: 神大人~
2013-11-25 13:11 kamisamaaa: ...
2013-11-25 13:12 kamisamaaa: 先给你举例子音效？
2013-11-25 13:12 Rewrite: 嗯嗯
2013-11-25 13:12 kamisamaaa: 01:34:118 (1) -
2013-11-25 13:12 kamisamaaa: 你看这个
2013-11-25 13:12 kamisamaaa: 01:18:508 (1) -
2013-11-25 13:12 kamisamaaa: 和这个
2013-11-25 13:12 kamisamaaa: 完全一样
2013-11-25 13:13 kamisamaaa: kiai开始你加了finish 感觉激烈起来了 后面那个完全可以一样加啊
2013-11-25 13:13 Rewrite: 哦！！！是哦
2013-11-25 13:13 kamisamaaa: 很多这种
2013-11-25 13:13 kamisamaaa: 建议你把音效都去掉
2013-11-25 13:14 kamisamaaa: 然后把歌曲仔细分段
2013-11-25 13:14 Rewrite: 嗯嗯 没问题 remap下音效
2013-11-25 13:14 kamisamaaa: 吧相同的节奏都找出来 然后统一好
2013-11-25 13:14 kamisamaaa: 还有像开头那里的很多whistle
2013-11-25 13:14 kamisamaaa: 都没明白是根据啥用的额
2013-11-25 13:14 Rewrite: T T
2013-11-25 13:15 Rewrite: 其实最主要是因为我都找不到适合这首歌曲的音效
2013-11-25 13:15 Rewrite: 超级音痴
2013-11-25 13:15 kamisamaaa: 不不 默认的其实就行额
2013-11-25 13:15 kamisamaaa: 就是音量调节好
2013-11-25 13:15 Rewrite: OK！
2013-11-25 13:15 kamisamaaa: 音效不一定要和歌曲一个感觉 稍微差一小点 但是节奏感体现出来就很好
2013-11-25 13:15 Rewrite: 到时候重新下一遍
2013-11-25 13:16 kamisamaaa: 就是你单独听音效 感觉响的时候都很有节奏感就是好的
2013-11-25 13:16 kamisamaaa: 还有一个问题是滑条
2013-11-25 13:16 kamisamaaa: 02:58:020 (1) -
2013-11-25 13:16 kamisamaaa: 像这个
2013-11-25 13:16 Rewrite: 嗯？
2013-11-25 13:16 kamisamaaa: 为啥要用这种奇怪的形状
2013-11-25 13:16 kamisamaaa: 普通的三点滑条不好么
2013-11-25 13:16 kamisamaaa: 挖煤的包住
2013-11-25 13:16 kamisamaaa: 完美
2013-11-25 13:17 Rewrite: 这个啊 其实这个我是想包住02:57:777 (14) -
2013-11-25 13:17 kamisamaaa: 你这个看着怪怪的 那些微小的曲折感觉完全没用额
2013-11-25 13:17 kamisamaaa: 是啊 用三点滑条
2013-11-25 13:17 kamisamaaa: 包的很圆润
2013-11-25 13:17 Rewrite: 哈哈 主要是前面都是这样的。。。
2013-11-25 13:17 kamisamaaa: 尽量使用三点滑条
2013-11-25 13:17 Rewrite: 感觉玩着好腻啊。。
2013-11-25 13:17 kamisamaaa: 嗯
2013-11-25 13:17 kamisamaaa: 。。
2013-11-25 13:18 kamisamaaa: 但是确实三点最好看
2013-11-25 13:18 kamisamaaa: 你这个看着很难受额
2013-11-25 13:18 Rewrite: 啊！！！！！
2013-11-25 13:18 Rewrite: 神大人你有强迫症！
2013-11-25 13:18 Rewrite: 我指的
2013-11-25 13:18 Rewrite: 知道
2013-11-25 13:18 kamisamaaa: 。。。
2013-11-25 13:18 kamisamaaa: 不不
2013-11-25 13:18 kamisamaaa: 开始我跟你一样喜欢乱搞，，，
2013-11-25 13:18 kamisamaaa: 呗他们喷了无数次
2013-11-25 13:18 kamisamaaa: 终于发现三点滑条的美妙了。。。
2013-11-25 13:18 Rewrite: 其实我也挺喜欢tinkle的
2013-11-25 13:19 Rewrite: ~wwww
2013-11-25 13:19 kamisamaaa: 我因为乱拉滑条各种被喷=L=
2013-11-25 13:19 Rewrite: 确实 那种看起来很润
2013-11-25 13:19 Rewrite: 很顺
2013-11-25 13:19 kamisamaaa: 是啊
2013-11-25 13:19 kamisamaaa: 然后NC你自己重下一下
2013-11-25 13:19 kamisamaaa: 尽量长白线加NC
2013-11-25 13:19 kamisamaaa: 每个combo短一些
2013-11-25 13:20 kamisamaaa: 我看你有的都17了。。。
2013-11-25 13:20 kamisamaaa: 尽量不要超过10
2013-11-25 13:20 Rewrite: 呼呼 NC留给别人改的~自己懒得看> <
2013-11-25 13:20 kamisamaaa: ...
2013-11-25 13:20 kamisamaaa: 03:07:045 (2,3) -
2013-11-25 13:20 kamisamaaa: 这里感觉flow不对
2013-11-25 13:21 kamisamaaa: 感觉1 2应该放在4 5的位置
2013-11-25 13:21 Rewrite: 23 么？
2013-11-25 13:21 kamisamaaa: 2放到5 3放到4感觉玩起来舒服点
2013-11-25 13:21 kamisamaaa: 然后再这么转方向
2013-11-25 13:21 kamisamaaa: 很多地方flow不对
2013-11-25 13:22 kamisamaaa: 哦 还有很重要一点
2013-11-25 13:22 kamisamaaa: 你是要做hard还是insane啊
2013-11-25 13:22 Rewrite: hard
2013-11-25 13:22 Rewrite: O.O
2013-11-25 13:22 Rewrite: 4.9哦
2013-11-25 13:22 kamisamaaa: hard难度最好基本使用DS
2013-11-25 13:22 Rewrite: 嘛~没关系！
2013-11-25 13:22 kamisamaaa: 你这个感觉note都太分离
2013-11-25 13:23 kamisamaaa: 没有整体感
2013-11-25 13:23 kamisamaaa: 感觉大多位置都是随便放的
2013-11-25 13:23 Rewrite: 我会给他们说这是我的style Ov<
2013-11-25 13:23 kamisamaaa: 但是看着就觉得很差额
2013-11-25 13:23 kamisamaaa: 感觉就是没联系
2013-11-25 13:23 Rewrite: 嗯嗯 确实 我的排列是很随机的
2013-11-25 13:24 Rewrite: 因为我不喜欢跟着别人一样用一样的梗
2013-11-25 13:24 kamisamaaa: 这样现在基本不太行。。。
2013-11-25 13:24 Rewrite: 只要玩着舒服不都是好图么> <?
2013-11-25 13:24 kamisamaaa: 不是要用和人家一样的梗
2013-11-25 13:24 kamisamaaa: 是感觉没梗
2013-11-25 13:24 kamisamaaa: 感觉你这个note放这里也行 放哪里也行
2013-11-25 13:25 Rewrite: 就是没梗~！
2013-11-25 13:25 kamisamaaa: 01:19:240 (4,5) -
2013-11-25 13:25 kamisamaaa: 像这种 4 到5就很别扭
2013-11-25 13:26 Rewrite: 玩着呢？
2013-11-25 13:26 kamisamaaa: 我能打 但是觉得不舒服
2013-11-25 13:26 kamisamaaa: 这个BPM不快 基本就算是对角放都能打 但是玩着很不流畅
2013-11-25 13:26 kamisamaaa: 打完一边就不想再玩了
2013-11-25 13:27 kamisamaaa: 01:46:557 (4,5) -
2013-11-25 13:27 kamisamaaa: 像这种 都是flow很差额
2013-11-25 13:27 kamisamaaa: 01:48:996 (11,12) -
2013-11-25 13:27 kamisamaaa: 基本上到处都是
2013-11-25 13:28 kamisamaaa: 用那些常见的基本梗主要就是为了图能很好的连成一片整体 并且很流畅的玩
2013-11-25 13:28 Rewrite: 很久没做了，嘛 这回当练习
2013-11-25 13:29 kamisamaaa: 嗯
2013-11-25 13:29 Rewrite: 下张再改进下
2013-11-25 13:29 kamisamaaa: 看出来你很久没做了
2013-11-25 13:29 kamisamaaa: 那这个准备弃了？
2013-11-25 13:29 Rewrite: 这张好好搞基一下Ov<
2013-11-25 13:29 kamisamaaa: 不过你SB做的好赞！
2013-11-25 13:29 Rewrite: 不是我做的。。。
2013-11-25 13:29 kamisamaaa: ...
2013-11-25 13:30 kamisamaaa: 这个图基本是要全部remap的。。。
2013-11-25 13:30 kamisamaaa: 你自己看看额。。也可以再找几个人帮你看看
2013-11-25 13:31 kamisamaaa: 因为我毕竟也是新手=L=
2013-11-25 13:31 Rewrite: 啊。。。Orz 哎 好吧
2013-11-25 13:31 kamisamaaa: 我的看法不一定准确
2013-11-25 13:31 Rewrite: 嗯嗯 ok
2013-11-25 13:31 kamisamaaa: 基本上都是最近fycho还有01大大教我的
2013-11-25 13:31 kamisamaaa: ~
2013-11-25 13:31 kamisamaaa: 那你努力吧~我准备去上课了
2013-11-25 13:32 Rewrite: OK 到时候也好好拜访下他们
2013-11-25 13:32 Rewrite: 感谢啦
2013-11-25 13:32 kamisamaaa: 没事额
2013-11-25 13:32 Rewrite: 算IRC么？
2013-11-25 13:32 Rewrite: 这样你可以拿KD
2013-11-25 13:32 kamisamaaa: 0.0
2013-11-25 13:32 kamisamaaa: 应该算吧
2013-11-25 13:32 kamisamaaa: 好~我去回个帖
2013-11-25 13:32 Rewrite: 你截下来放我那里面
2013-11-25 13:32 Rewrite: ok
2013-11-25 13:32 kamisamaaa: 我喜欢骗KD~
2013-11-25 13:33 Rewrite: 2333
RatedNC17
397 posts
Joined May 2010
RatedNC17
Hello m4m :D

[General]
Really loving this storyboard. this is something i see as a SB showcase

[Hard]
01:25:825 (3) - move to x:264 y:192 looks neater
01:37:533 (12) - x:56 y:280 ^
01:10:459 (7,1) make 7 the nc

[Fionana's Normal]
No claps? :(
02:00:947 (2) - x:240 y:240 looks neater
02:01:435 (3) - x:336 y:168 ^
02:11:191 (6) - x:304 y:80 ^
03:18:020 (2) - x:424 y:120 ^
still suggest adding those claps

Hope this helps :)
-Teina-
529 posts
Joined October 2013
-Teina-
第1次幫人mod 有些可能不合理 請原諒 m4m~
抱歉 SB 完全不識 但感覺很勵害!
[Fionana's Normal]
我不識mod normal>_<

[Hard]
SPOILER
02:21:679 - 這個slider可以在這裡完結
02:21:923 - ^完結後可以在這裡加個圈
03:13:630 - 至 03:20:947 - 重心出現於右下 (當然是可以 但打上來感覺有點奇怪)
01:20:338 - 這裡有個音 看看可否能加入去
02:51:801 - ^
01:20:703 - 音在這裡完結
01:24:118 - 這裡完音 可以將01:23:874 - 減小1/4拍 (如果跟鼓音的話應該短點比較易讀)
01:24:362 - ^
01:24:850 - ^
02:58:020 - 可否拆散? 例如02:58:508 -(完結slider) 02:58:752 -(加上圈) 02:58:996 -(加上silder)
Last edited by -Teina- , edited 3 times in total.
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
TatsumiAlicekawa
M4M~ :oops:
[Fionana's Normal]
00:16:801 - 这里添一个note
00:18:752 (4) - 这个滑条在00:19:240完结更好

不知道是不是因为觉得吵而没有在重音处加音效？
SB很清新的感觉 :)

[Hard]
感觉没什么挑的地方了
00:29:728 - 四个note间距相等比较漂亮一些
01:09:606 (5) - 这里remove
01:18:874 (2) - ^
MeraMiPoP_old
155 posts
Joined October 2013
MeraMiPoP_old
normal:
00:40:459 (2,3) - ds差了0.05x (?)
this diff looks pretty nice 就这样吧

hard:
00:33:630 (4,5) - 往这边转过来一点flow好一点吧 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1125805
00:34:362 (6) - 第二个点移到中间 x354 y268左右
00:37:533 (6) - 这个往这边转一下 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1125806
00:39:240 (1) - 我觉得这样会比较适合歌词那个调子 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1125807
00:57:533 (8) - new combo
01:00:948 (7) - ^
01:17:411 (3) - 感觉这里加一个比较带感那 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1125809
01:34:118 (1) - 这边这样转过来o.o http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1125811 因为感觉有些失去平衡
02:28:264 (2) - 一般不都是这样的www http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1125812
02:48:264 (8) - newcombo
03:21:191 (6,7) - 这里加两个比较好玩ww http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1125813
hoshisorakiseki
300 posts
Joined January 2012
hoshisorakiseki
from mapper群
StoryBoard
点我展开
-->感觉要打开epilepsy警告
很好看啊，只是用16:9看上去有点黑边感觉不太好而已。能够改到支持宽屏就更好了。
一个全屏黑屏的部分代码（blank.png为480x270，为了符合rc将这个放大两倍了）：
Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"sb\blank.png",-161,-20
 F,2,-1000,0,0,1
 V,0,-1000,14600,2,2
 F,2,14100,14600,1,0
难度：Normal
点我展开
-->打开Taiko模式看了一下，全是红色鼓点。估计是没用whistle和clap吧
replay（为了省时间+DT了）
00:17:289 (2,3) - 看上去好像没包好吧

听说现在的bat挺注重blanket的，有不少像上面的感觉都没包好。不过改不改也感觉没所谓了
难度：Hard
点我展开
01:46:313 (3,4) - 这样一看，是不是感觉没包好？

03:03:142 (2,4,5) - 跟上面的差不多
感觉找不到什么问题，看来我还是要多看图才行
最后祝早日rank
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
首先，

SB做的太好了吧，這樣會讓我不知所措耶= '' =

Fionana's Normal
打開吧
第一副歌前沒有加finish，加上去吧...
大概知道用意，但之後還是會有人請大大加上去的

00:18:752 (3) - 這個滑條紅線結束最好

00:31:191 - 從這裡開始往後推2個白線+clap，要不然整首歌太多地方要加clap的地方太占版面

00:34:606 (4) - 這個地方要不要找另外的音效感覺比較好，把響指的聲音弄出來加在折返點和尾巴

00:56:557 (3) - 不太適合跌在一起，分開來比較好
02:30:216 (3) - 音很不明顯，看要不要換掉
02:32:411 (6) - 貌似有finish...
03:04:850 (5) - 尾巴漏掉finish了


Hard
打開吧
00:31:679 (1) - 頭+finish??
00:47:289 (1) - 和Normal一樣的問題，第一副歌前的finish加上去吧
01:02:899 (1) - ^
01:14:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這裡要不要改這樣看看...
245,358,74606,5,2,0:0:0:0:
287,230,74850,1,2,0:0:0:0:
109,354,75094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,263,75338,1,2,0:0:0:0:
70,225,75581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,148,75825,1,2,0:0:0:0:
245,358,76069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,263,76313,1,2,0:0:0:0:
01:25:825 (3) - 移到x262 y208
01:26:313 (5) - 頭+finish
01:34:118 (1) - ^
01:41:923 (1) - ^
01:49:728 (1) - ^
01:51:679 (1) - ^
01:59:484 (6) - ^
02:07:289 (1) - ^
02:15:094 (2) - ^
02:19:972 (3) - ^，去掉whistle
02:20:947 (5) - 尾巴+finish
02:34:606 (2) - +Finish
02:40:459 (7,10,13) - ^，全部都是
02:42:411 (1) - 頭+Finish
02:50:216 (1) - ^
02:51:191 (3,6) - 這兩個疊在一起會混淆喔
02:58:020 (1) - 頭+finish
03:05:825 (1) - ^
03:13:630 (1) - ^

Hard和Normal感覺音效的配置不太一樣...
Normal基本上目的是看出來了...
Hard加一下音效
yukinohara
72 posts
Joined November 2010
yukinohara
感觉要打开epilepsy警告
很好看啊，只是用16:9看上去有点黑边感觉不太好而已。能够改到支持宽屏就更好了。
一个全屏黑屏的部分代码（blank.png为480x270，为了符合rc将这个放大两倍了）
>>警告之后会用SB补上，内置的警告太丑不想用。采纳。

>>修改成宽屏支持的话要重做所有SBS，这图已经是一年前的了，所以现在不考虑宽屏支持（即使现在支持宽屏，也存在支持问题，比如SB组件完全在4:3范围之外就不会被显示）。忽略。

>>没想明白为何要添加黑屏的代码。目前SB使用的黑屏大多是用小图拉伸的，和code里写的原理一样。如果想表达的是减去1的SB load的话，一般等rank前才会添加，因为提前添加再保存文件可能会造成代码消失。忽略。
这段代码可以让BG不被显示，从而减去1的SB load:
Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"<BG>",320,240

感谢Mod。
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia
Hi! Try M4M :D

[Fionana's Normal]

add more hitsounds plz

00:43:386 (7) - remove NC
00:43:874 (1) - NC
00:58:996 (1) - curve like this?
SPOILER
01:24:362 (8) - like this?

01:33:142 (1) - remove NC
01:34:118 (2) - NC
01:37:045 (5) - like this?
SPOILER
01:50:703 (7) - like this?
SPOILER
02:02:411 (4) - curve
02:11:191 (6) - curve like 02:12:167 (7) -
02:14:606 (1) - remove NC
02:15:094 (2) - NC
02:42:411 (5) - ^


[Hard]

add more hitsounds plz

00:23:874 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - like this?

00:37:533 (6) - curve like 00:38:020 (7) -
00:47:777 (2) - curve like 00:47:289 (1) -
00:54:362 (1) - remove NC
00:54:850 (3) - NC
00:49:728 (1) - remove NC
00:51:191 (14) - NC
00:59:484 (2,3) - like this?

01:00:703 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - like this?

01:04:606 (1) - remove NC
01:04:850 (3) - NC
01:11:923 (4,5) - so far...how about move 01:11:923 (4) - to (216|108) ?
01:13:142 (2) - Ctrl + g?
01:14:118 (5,6) - change to slider?
01:14:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1) - like this?
SPOILER


and 01:17:533 (1) - remove NC

01:25:338 (1) - remove NC
01:26:313 (5) - NC
01:28:264 (1) - remove NC
01:29:972 (10) - NC
01:32:167 (1) - remove NC
01:58:508 (1) - ^
01:59:484 (6) - NC
02:01:435 (1) - remove NC
02:03:386 (12) - NC
02:14:606 (1) - remove NC
02:15:094 (2) - NC
02:18:020 (9) - curve like 02:18:508 (10) -
02:22:045 (1) - reduce sound?
02:34:362 (1) - remove NC
02:34:606 (2) - NC
02:35:581 (4) - like this?
SPOILER
02:38:020 (1) - remove NC
02:38:264 (2) - NC
02:48:264 (8) - NC?
02:53:386 (1) - remove NC
02:53:874 (2) - NC
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Topic Starter
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Ty guys, I'll quickly mod yours!
yuugeki1234
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yuugeki1234
Nice SB :D!
Quilt
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Quilt
im so sad... why were you banned....
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