1. Dancing (4.84 stars, 542 notes)
2. Sleeping (2.29 stars, 220 notes)
3. Walking (4.09 stars, 338 notes)

Damori wrote:

My mod:
easy: fine
normal: fine
hard: perfect ;____;

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kd pls ;_;

bmin11 wrote:

[Dancing]
00:21:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Just a heads up that this is not perfectly covering the flower due to 00:22:753 (6,1) - this overlap I actually wasn't planing this since I mapped this without the bg, but stil, I'm fixing it =p
00:58:033 (1) - I'm getting a mix feeling with this jump. It could come as boring if this wasn't a jump, but on the other hand, seems a bit of a stretch considering how well 01:01:873 (1) - this played out. This came to me as a bigger issue for 02:57:073 (1) - this part as I always ended up misreading it (this was the only part I couldn't read for reason I don't even know). Needless to say, this is just another heads up.
Other then that, all looks great. Loving those jumps. I removed the jump here 00:58:033 (1) - since is the first chorus, so players get used to the song. 02:57:073 (1) - About this one, I want to keep it so is the same as the next chorus, still if someone else complains Ill see what can I do ^^


[Walking]
01:10:033 (2) - This is really REALLY minor, but I don't think overlapping it like this is necessary. Same for later parts as well.
Actually, I just don't get why you switched over from 1.2x -> 1.1x Possibly a minor overlook? oops, fixed that @.@
03:17:953 (1) - Move this back by 1/2 and add a circle after the slider http://puu.sh/5eU6J.jpg Done~
That's all I could find. Awesome diff.

[Sleeping]
Teach me how to make these sliders please. I think this is the first time someone compliments my sliders, yay!


As expected from you, already a polished diff. Looking forward to seeing this ranked.

darkguydari wrote:

Espero que sirva de algo

General:

Advertencia para epilépticos ya que tiene SB con destellos. oops, ok~


Dancing:

02:53:473 (2,3) - No sé si fue a propósito, pero las alturas son disparejas. hehe, no fué a propósito, grax~

Walking:

01:13:393 (2,3) - Se están tocando, había uno parecido pero ese sí estaba más separado. --> 02:06:193 (2,3) - como éste. Fixed
01:58:513 (2,3) - Estos dos también, creo que está mejor si mueves el slider 1 cuadrito hacia arriba. ok
02:22:753 (1) - Se oye mejor con un finish. sip *O*
02:46:753 (2) - Moverlo un cuadrito a la izquierda, para que no se toquen. Fixed
03:19:393 (4,1) - Se tocan Fixed~

Sleeping:

02:03:073 (4) - Si le pones un finish, creo que se oye bien. Este lo dejo igual, no me gusta el finish ahí
02:22:753 (1) - ^ ok~

Fatfan Kolek wrote:

Sleeping
00:11:713 (1,2,3,4) - 00:14:593 Mmh, don't know if necessary, but you can make a better square out of it. :p At the moment it looks like this: Fixed ~

Look here

01:05:473 (4,1) - 01:06:913 That blanket can be better. ^^ Done
01:50:593 (4) I wouldn't set the circle this way. Set it to the bottom left. Maybe like this: Was trying to make a dimond pattern

Example

02:18:433 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:22:273 Uhm, don't know if its just me, but I think the square doesn't fit that much here. :s I think a pattern like this 00:19:393 (1,2,3,4) - 00:22:273 fits here a bit more. I want a square here, so it kinda match Walking diff
03:01:153 (1,2) - 03:03:553 Compared to your other sliders, the (2) is too near to (1). The blanket can also be a bit better. :p Actually the spacing between the slider end of 1 and slider start of 2 is correct. Made blanket better

Walking
00:50:113 (1,2) - 00:50:593 I wouldn't stack the notes here. New player could have problems with that, because of your previous stacks. Was trying to follow the guitar, also is alright for normal, especially because are 1/1 notes
03:14:593 (2,3) - 03:15:553 These notes are too near at the top. Especially (2). Moved down a bit

Dancing
01:11:233 (1) That slider is a bit too curvy in my opinion. Is the same as 01:11:713 (2) - , but I'll make them both less curvy
03:07:633 (1,2,3,4) - 03:08:353 I don't like the order of these notes. Maybe change (2) and (1)? I wanna keep the jump from 2 to 3

Nice storyboard by the way.
Good luck~ :3

deejaydray wrote:

Hello there!
I'm here because your friend, Dariano, asked me if I can take a look at your awesome map. So, here we go ^^

Sleeping:

00:23:233 (1,2) - these 2 sliders look a bit ugly like this :c maybe make them straight-horizontal? actually I dont want them to be totally horizontal
00:39:073 - I would add a circle here
00:40:033 - ^ same
00:41:473 - ^ same
00:42:433 (1) - this slider would look better if you added some curve Done
00:44:833 - add circle
00:45:793 - ^ same
00:47:713 - ^ same
(won't repeat the same observations for chorus)
01:31:873 - ^ same
01:33:793 - ^ same
02:47:713 - you should add a circle here in order to keep the same style like at 02:43:873
I really tried adding those notes, but I didnt like how it ended up

Walking:

00:40:513 (5) - I would make this slider in the same style as the slider at 00:38:593 (1)
00:55:393 - add a new circle?
00:59:233 - ^ same
01:03:073 - ^ same
01:06:913 - ^ same
(won't repeat the same observations for chorus)
02:53:953 (3) - I would replace this slider with a circle Did something else
all done

Dancing:

General question: Why did you place so many circles one over another? o.o I would try to change the position of some of them Trying to follow the guitar, so the cursor moves like with rhythm, sorry that you didnt understand it
01:07:873 (1,2,3) - aren't these circles too close to each other? It's an anti-jump
01:12:193 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - so many circles... maybe you should change some of them into sliders Would kill the effect I want
01:39:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice, I like this chain! ^^
02:10:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - again only circles... add some sliders Same

Well, I think that's all ^^ Hope you will get it ranked as soon as possible! :3

P.S: I love T. Swift <3 I've created a beatmap for "I knew you were trouble", but it didn't work well so I deleted it :c Anyway, if you have time and if you want, please check my map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/130953 It is similar to some of Taylor's songs, so you might like it

Lust wrote:

hello m4m owo

1. lyrics\chorus5-2.png is being used? if not remove it \o/ oops, done
2. There are no tags, consider adding some!I wonder... what should I add? T_T

[Sleeping]

1. 00:57:313 (4,5,1) - When I was a newer player I found this type of linear pattern to be awkward and hard to play. Perhaps you should add a curve I really don't see a problem here, maybe was just you
2. 02:08:833 (1) - Newer players aren't going expect more than one repeat, even I nowadays have trouble anticipating this. It'll avoid players frustration if you split it up. ok, changed
3. 03:19:873 (5,2) - (2)'s slider end is not quite stacking up (5). Move 03:21:793 (2) - to 147:82 Fixed

Nice and clean ~
[Walking]

1. 00:21:553 (1) - Starting something on a redtick without anything before it is awkward and hard to hear/read at times. I would suggest move the entire pattern to start at 00:21:313 -. It'll sound better and make a nice effect with the upcoming pattern too! ok
2. 00:25:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I always found quick 1/2 stacks disorientating when I was new. It made me fumble up my fingers. Instead why don't you try repeating 1/2 sliders here? This is not a very dificult Normal diff, and I want a bit of variety so doesnt turn out boring
3. 01:54:433 (1,1) - This is a bit confusing. The hitburst hides the upcoming circle so it will be harder to read Fixed this in both chorus

Didn't agree with the rest, sorry
[Dancing]

1. 00:11:713 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - Just keep this all one combo color, its weird to look at plus gives a slight boost to the hp drain kinda following the guitar with the combos here, and like I said in other mods, I will not change combos unless is really important, so it doesnt mess up the SB and combo color match
2. 01:10:273 (3) - isn't quite stacked with 01:09:313 (1) - 's slider end. Move it to 344:290 Done

About blanket suggestions, I did only the ones that felt relevant to me. ><
Lovely set! Good luck~