1. Hiding Snow (4.22 stars, 205 notes)
2. Lonely Snow (2.71 stars, 142 notes)
3. NoHitter's Blizzard (4.89 stars, 431 notes)
4. White Snow (0.99 stars, 79 notes)
5. Yearning Snow (4.53 stars, 267 notes)

Foxxer wrote:

BPM: 140
Offset: 608

BPM: 146
Offset: 53323

1. Use AR8. AR9 is unfitting for this difficulty considering the speed and density.
2. 01:24:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You should really keep these streams evenly spaced with the ones before
3. 01:55:789 (1) - This is unrankable because the repeat is hidden by 01:55:687 (5) on old default skin
4. 01:59:077 (1) - Same as above
5. 02:06:269 (2,3) - This 1/4 jump does not play very well, so either make it evenly spaced or delete (3).
6. 02:06:885 - Streams of this high spacing do not fit this difficulty or song and don't play very well at all. Please use the same stream spacing as your previous streams instead to keep it consistent and make the spread nice.
7. 02:08:324 (6,7) - Same thing as before about the 1/4 jump
8. 02:08:529 - Same thing as before about really high stream spacing
9. 02:10:481 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
10. 02:13:255 - ^
11. 02:15:105 (7,8,9) - ^
12. 02:21:680 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^
13. 02:24:967 (8,9,10,11,12) - ^
14. 02:26:611 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^
15. 02:28:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as before with the 1/4 jumps
16. You should really try to lay back on the circles and use more slider patterns and other not-so-bland techniques. There is a nice forum that will help you, I suggest reading through all of it. 61

Quiz-chan wrote:

Hi~ from my queue

[General]
Some things in AIMod, didn't look closely. Better look what AIMod wants...

[White Snow]
00:33:203 (1) - Might be considered a nazi suggestion: imperfect blanket, please adjust it.
00:59:899 (9) - What about adding a NC here?
01:13:050 (4) - ^
01:22:913 (3) - ^
01:27:844 - Wo-wo-woah, hold on a second: a long break with just a spinner that is kinda long, too, and which has a normal Finish hitsound? No way. {And your suggestion?}
02:05:652 (4) - New combooo
02:08:940 (7) - ^

[Lonely Snow]
01:06:474 (5) - New combo.
01:08:940 (1) - Remove new combo and set it on following (3) instead.
01:31:132 - same problem about that break etc.
01:39:762 (1) - Finish hitsound!! Sounds soo wrong!

[Yearning Snow]
01:31:132 - Again: break and spinner. Why did you even do it this way??
02:05:652 - This part is rather overmapped; the streams don't fit any instrumental part or any sound or the vocals or whatnot. {There is an instrument there, which also occurs at 02:08}

Good luck with this!
Nice map, BTW!

Makar wrote:

Just some general pointers for Yearning Snow (I like the song so I gave it a play test)

1. Use AR8. AR9 is unfitting for this difficulty considering the speed and density.
2. 01:24:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You should really keep these streams evenly spaced with the ones before {The tune is different from the streams before, though.}
3. 01:55:789 (1) - This is unrankable because the repeat is hidden by 01:55:687 (5) on old default skin
4. 01:59:077 (1) - Same as above
5. 02:06:269 (2,3) - This 1/4 jump does not play very well, so either make it evenly spaced or delete (3).
6. 02:06:885 - Streams of this high spacing do not fit this difficulty or song and don't play very well at all. Please use the same stream spacing as your previous streams instead to keep it consistent and make the spread nice.
7. 02:08:324 (6,7) - Same thing as before about the 1/4 jump
8. 02:08:529 - Same thing as before about really high stream spacing
9. 02:10:481 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
10. 02:13:255 - ^
11. 02:15:105 (7,8,9) - ^
12. 02:21:680 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^
13. 02:24:967 (8,9,10,11,12) - ^
14. 02:26:611 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^
15. 02:28:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as before with the 1/4 jumps
16. You should really try to lay back on the circles and use more slider patterns and other not-so-bland techniques. There is a nice forum that will help you, I suggest reading through all of it. http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/61

Good luck,

1. 00:58:666 (7) - Stack on (6)'s tail?
2. 01:21:063 (14) - Bend of 30° degrees clockwise?
3. 01:25:789 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - Move down a bit, like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/796536 That (1) slider right under hp-bar is annoying
4. 02:25:584 (1,2,3) - Too near, try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/796539

1. 01:10:173 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/796545 ?
2. 01:22:913 (1,2,3,4) - Linear sliders are so baaaad ;_;
3. 02:30:310 (5,6,7,8) - ^

1. 02:12:228 (1,2) - Better :3 -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/796548
2. 02:16:954 (4) - Some grids down, in line with (3) please :>

Leader wrote:

Hello, M4M from my Modding Queue

[Yearning Snow]

1. 00:58:666 (7) - Stack on (6)'s tail? {No, why?}
2. 01:21:063 (14) - Bend of 30° degrees clockwise? {Made my personal changes, bending it so it flows to the next stream better}
3. 01:25:789 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - Move down a bit, like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/796536 That (1) slider right under hp-bar is annoying {Define "annoying", it's not exactly blocking, sooo...}
4. 02:25:584 (1,2,3) - Too near, try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/796539

[Lonely Snow]

1. 01:10:173 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/796545 ? {Meh why not}
2. 01:22:913 (1,2,3,4) - Linear sliders are so baaaad ;_; {k}
3. 02:30:310 (5,6,7,8) - ^ {These ones weren't made completely randomly, so no for this one}

[White Snow]

1. 02:12:228 (1,2) - Better :3 -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/796548 {Doesn't flow well from previous beats, I feel}
2. 02:16:954 (4) - Some grids down, in line with (3) please :> {It's blanketing 2}

Relaxing song ~ good luck \:D/

neonat wrote:

m4m, some suggestions~

Yearning Snow

00:34:905 (3) - how about repeating at 00:35:756 instead of 00:36:181 and repeat until 00:37:438
01:01:337 - add a note
From 01:04:830 to 01:06:474 (1) - maybe you could fill this with lead up notes, something like this:

SPOILER

01:14:488 - add a note
01:16:337 (1) - end at 01:17:570 - ? maybe add another spinner as well from 01:17:981 to 01:19:214 {Just made it one long spinner. A tad dickish considering the next streams, but players can probably handle it.}
01:54:762 - add a note
01:54:967 - ^
01:55:173 - ^
01:58:050 - 01:58:460 - add circle and slider

SPOILER

02:01:543 - add a note
02:01:954 - ^
02:02:159 - ^
02:02:262 - ^


Lonely Snow

02:01:954 - add a note


White Snow

01:09:762 (1) - end slider at 01:10:173
01:10:995 (2) - start at 01:10:584 and end at 01:11:817 {Interesting, but I think I'll keep it that way since the way I made the sliders, it would be hard to get 2 different length sliders to be symmetrical.

1. I personally against the very-yellow combo colour on this map. Atleast make it darker/lighter/less saturated?
2. 01:39:762 (1) - Why? This spinner is placed in the middle of the break and just feels...weird.

1. 01:22:913 (3) - Why don't you place this more to the center?
2. 02:18:392 - Add note here?
3. 02:18:803 (1,2) - Spacing too low.
4. 02:28:255 (2) - Split into 2 hitcircles?
   I strongly feel this diff still needs more mods, although this is just my opinion.

1. 00:29:354 (4,5) - Spacing?

1. Nothing.

inverness wrote:

Mod for mod request

Guide

Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

General

1. I personally against the very-yellow combo colour on this map. Atleast make it darker/lighter/less saturated? {I'm going by the Red-White-Black-Yellow theme, so I'm going to have to say no for this.}
2. 01:39:762 (1) - Why? This spinner is placed in the middle of the break and just feels...weird. {I guess so. Mapped it out on the harder difficulties.}

White Snow

1. 01:22:913 (3) - Why don't you place this more to the center? {Spacing}
2. 02:18:392 - Add note here? {I want to map it more to the vocals for this difficulty.}
3. 02:18:803 (1,2) - Spacing too low.
4. 02:28:255 (2) - Split into 2 hitcircles?
   I strongly feel this diff still needs more mods, although this is just my opinion.

Lonely Snow

1. 00:29:354 (4,5) - Spacing?

Yearning Snow

1. Nothing.

I don't think there's a lot to point out from me, maybe because I just think everything almost fits to the place. But personally, there's a lot of things here that can be improved. Good luck!
Starred.

Zero__wind wrote:

Oh I love this series of songs ＊
m4m from my queue

General
The diff spread is weird. It neither don't look like an NHI spread (H too easy) or an ENH spread (Hard too hard)
So consider to make White Snow and Lonely Snow both harder, to catch up with Yearning Snow

Yearning Snow
01:11:200 (6) - whistle at reverse ?
01:19:830 (2) - maybe use soft for this stream part and decorate it with some whistles ? {Changed to soft, but I prefer claps.}
01:57:022 (2) - whistle on head ?
maybe remove 02:10:481 (3) - and rearrange the following notes
02:16:954 (3) - this seems to touch the HP bar a bit consider to change it like this http://puu.sh/3cHc8.jpg {It's not touching, and I like the 02:15:310 (1,2,3) slider pattern.}
02:23:734 (5) - reverse once less and add a note ?
02:31:132 (1) - this seems to be too shor. I remembered that Auto must be capable to spin a spinner and get at least 2000 bonus score, if under, then the spinners is too short. So consider to remove 02:30:721 (5,6,7,8) - or even remove the whole red combo set and start the spinner earlierv {It was changed to minimum 1000, which this fulfills}
no other critical stuff found

Lonely Snow
00:55:789 (4) - maybe make its head a bit upper than 00:55:173 (3) - and it would looks better {Not sure why it would, but tweaked it a little in my way}
01:16:337 (1) - if this is following the vocal, then you'd better end it at 01:18:187 - or 01:18:392 - and make its end soft {The end of the spinner follows the beat because it's louder, and starts the idea of the next notes all following the beat.}
02:29:488 (3) - maybe change its direction a bit to make it point at 02:30:104 (4,5) -

White Snow
sv is a bit too high for a easiest diff
the map itself is alright

Good luck

Wolfn wrote:

Mod4mod from #modreqs! \o/

[White Snow]
01:22:913 (3) - perhaps bend and center with the previous sliders? OCD thing I guess.
02:04:419 (3) - too many reverse sliders with more than one bounce could be confusing on an easier difficulty? Perhaps something to consider.
02:22:091 (3) - contradicting what I just said, perhaps this would be good as a double reverse slider to cover the four parts in the vocals, killing the slider in front of it? I believe this would be fine since there is a good amount of time afterwards for recovery. Reverse on 1.5 beats: http://puu.sh/3d7y8.jpg {I would prefer to keep the 1/1 beat pattern}
02:41:712 (1) - end of spinner isn't snapped

[Lonely Snow]
Kind of n... okay very nazi, but I dislike that 01:22:913 (1,2) are barely touching whereas 01:23:324 (2,3,4) are not.
02:13:666 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - oooh, I like this!
02:24:145 (5) - a think a reverse on this slider would be called for.
02:41:712 (1) - unsnapped spinner end again {it keeps hapening}

[Yearning Snow]
01:03:187 (1) - I would prefer more time after the spinner. Perhaps back it up and use another note to stay consistant with the song? i.e. http://puu.sh/3d7VZ
02:31:132 (1) - likewise, I don't like the reaction time available after this spinner... perhaps the previous stream could break into sliders?{I feel it gives a challenge, so I'm keeping them for now.
00:34:905 (3) - not snapped! D:
02:35:675 (3) - ^
02:41:712 (1) - ^

I was never too hyped for these trailers, but this one was easily my favorite. Good luck!
Edit because I didn't know how to get those wonderful difficulty headers lol

OEvil wrote:

Hi Hi M4M From #modreqs

[General]

[Lonely Snow]

1. Spinner Length
   - 02:41:712 (1) - This spinner is 8181 ms long, which is longer than 7500 ms; it may get tiring to play. {Tt's the last thing in the map anyway}
   
2. Spinner New Combo
   - 01:19:625 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner {??? That's automatically done}.
   
3. Edits:
   - CS -1

[White Snow]

1. Spinner Length
   - 02:41:712 (1) - This spinner is 8181 ms long, which is longer than 7500 ms; it may get tiring to play.
   
2. Edits:
   - 02:08:940 (1) - Make it like this: http://puu.sh/3iyeZ.jpg Don't say why cuz it follow vocal {The bend doesn't look good.}

[Yearning Snow]

1. Snapping
   Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
   - 00:36:235 - snap to 00:36:181 {I have no idea why that's even there}
   
2. Edits:
   - CS -1
   
3. Spinner Length
   - 02:31:132 (1) - This spinner is 616 ms long, which is shorter than 750 ms; check that it gets at least 1000 on auto. {It does.}
   - 02:41:712 (1) - This spinner is 8181 ms long, which is longer than 7500 ms; it may get tiring to play.

Because my mod sucks i have shorted a star

• Beatmap Creator is still 'JInxyjem' . add it to Tags and put 'Jinxy' in the Beatmap Creator instead

• AR-1?
  idk but the sv is a bit too fast starting from 00:53:324 - to 02:31:954 - , since the velocity gap is kinda big for easiest diff, though this is only opinion
  
  00:29:809 (5) - nc
  00:29:809 (5) - ^
  00:55:789 (4) - prefer if you copy the shape of 00:54:556 (2) - , and if you want you can make symmetry pattern, so it can be a match with 00:57:844 (2,3,4) -
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:19:625 (1) - add finish at slider's head? to accent the song
  01:21:269 (2) - ^
  01:22:913 (3) - delete claps at first reverse arrow and slider's tail? too much claps imo
  01:59:077 (3,1) - distance? i think this can be quite confusing
  02:04:419 (3) - add whistle at slider's reverse arrow? you add one at 02:03:597 (2) -
  02:15:310 (2) - add finish? if you follow, add finish at 02:16:954 (4) - slider's head
  02:25:378 (1) - add finish at slider's head? same like 02:18:803 (1,2,3,4) -
  02:25:378 (1) - kinda monotone imo
  02:28:666 (3) - nc
  02:35:675 (3) - end this at 02:37:468 - ? fits the vocal better, i think

• 00:22:908 (5) - nc
  00:29:809 (5) - ^
  00:31:501 (6) - why not follow 00:29:809 (5) - shape? since it's quite similiar with 00:22:908 (5,6) -
  00:34:905 (3) - nc?
  01:07:913 (3) - remove whistle at slider's end and add it to 01:08:940 (4) - instead?
  01:10:584 (3) - remove whistle at slider's end and add it to slider's head?
  01:13:050 (5) - nc
  01:13:050 (5) - add whistle at slider's head? like your previous hitsound pattern
  01:19:625 (1) - add finish at slider's head? to accent the song
  01:21:269 (3) - ^
  01:22:091 (4) - add finish at slider's tail? kinda match the song
  01:22:913 (1) - add finish at slider's head? kinda match the song
  01:24:556 (5) - nc
  01:27:844 (1) - add finish instead of clap
  02:02:365 (1,2,3) - only suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:04:419 (5) - nc
  02:15:310 (5) - ^
  02:22:913 (3) - add clap at slider's reverse arrow? since you add one at 02:21:269 (5) -
  02:30:310 (5) - nc
  02:33:770 (1,2) - swap nc?
  02:35:675 (2) - end this at 02:37:468 - ? fits the vocal better, i think

• OD-1? HP-1? this is only opinion since i'm not a good player =w=
  01:52:502 - kinda weird when the slider's velocity is quite slow despite the song is actually a bit energetic at this part
  
  00:24:575 (5) - nc
  00:29:809 (5) - ^
  00:34:905 (3) - add whiste at slider's head and 00:37:438 (4) - like your previous hitsound pattern?
  00:34:905 (3) - nc?
  00:56:200 (2) - add clap at slider's head? kinda empty without it imo
  00:59:488 (3) - add clap too? same reason as above
  01:02:776 (9) - 376|228?
  01:07:707 (7) - nc
  01:09:351 (9) - add claps at slider's head and reverse arrow? so it can be a match with 01:07:707 (7) - and 01:10:995 (5,6) -
  01:12:228 (7) - add clap at slider's reverse arrow?
  01:13:050 (1) - add finish at slider's head, kinda match the song, i think
  01:19:625 (1) - add finish
  01:21:063 (14) - add finish at slider's tail to accent the song
  01:49:317 (1) - only suggestion about rhythm
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:02:981 (4,4) - nc them? kinda attractive with the colorful circles lol /runs
  02:06:680 - 02:09:967 - 02:13:255 - add finish, like your previous diff
  02:10:481 (3) - nc, then remove nc 02:10:584 (1) - for consistent combo pattern in streams
  02:13:871 (3) - nc, like 02:07:296 (1) -
  02:16:954 (3) - add finish at slider's reverse arrow? like your previous combo pattern
  02:23:734 (5) - nc
  02:27:022 (8) - add finish instead of clap?
  02:35:675 (3) - end this a 02:37:468 - ? fits the vocal better, i think

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

hi~ from queue :3 noob modder coming through. mostly suggestions


[General]

• Beatmap Creator is still 'JInxyjem' . add it to Tags and put 'Jinxy' in the Beatmap Creator instead

[White Snow]

• AR-1?
  idk but the sv is a bit too fast starting from 00:53:324 - to 02:31:954 - , since the velocity gap is kinda big for easiest diff, though this is only opinion {The first slider + The small build up before it should allow new players to notice the change imo}
  
  00:29:809 (5) - nc {NC is for when she starts another line of singing}
  00:29:809 (5) - ^ {It's the same beat?}
  00:55:789 (4) - prefer if you copy the shape of 00:54:556 (2) - , and if you want you can make symmetry pattern, so it can be a match with 00:57:844 (2,3,4) - {Doesn't really play well, but changed the slider shape because the other one did look kinda bad
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:19:625 (1) - add finish at slider's head? to accent the song
  01:21:269 (2) - ^
  01:22:913 (3) - delete claps at first reverse arrow and slider's tail? too much claps imo
  01:59:077 (3,1) - distance? i think this can be quite confusing {Seems ok at AR3 I feel}
  02:04:419 (3) - add whistle at slider's reverse arrow? you add one at 02:03:597 (2) -
  02:15:310 (2) - add finish? if you follow, add finish at 02:16:954 (4) - slider's head
  02:25:378 (1) - add finish at slider's head? same like 02:18:803 (1,2,3,4) -
  02:25:378 (1) - kinda monotone imo {I assume you mean the combo after that. Added a few finishes.}
  02:28:666 (3) - nc
  02:35:675 (3) - end this at 02:37:468 - ? fits the vocal better, i think {I would, but then it won't be snapped.}

[Lonely Snow]

• 00:22:908 (5) - nc
  00:29:809 (5) - ^
  00:31:501 (6) - why not follow 00:29:809 (5) - shape? since it's quite similiar with 00:22:908 (5,6) -
  00:34:905 (3) - nc?
  01:07:913 (3) - remove whistle at slider's end and add it to 01:08:940 (4) - instead?
  01:10:584 (3) - remove whistle at slider's end and add it to slider's head?
  01:13:050 (5) - nc
  01:13:050 (5) - add whistle at slider's head? like your previous hitsound pattern
  01:19:625 (1) - add finish at slider's head? to accent the song
  01:21:269 (3) - ^
  01:22:091 (4) - add finish at slider's tail? kinda match the song
  01:22:913 (1) - add finish at slider's head? kinda match the song
  01:24:556 (5) - nc
  01:27:844 (1) - add finish instead of clap
  02:02:365 (1,2,3) - only suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:04:419 (5) - nc
  02:15:310 (5) - ^
  02:22:913 (3) - add clap at slider's reverse arrow? since you add one at 02:21:269 (5) -
  02:30:310 (5) - nc
  02:33:770 (1,2) - swap nc?
  02:35:675 (2) - end this at 02:37:468 - ? fits the vocal better, i think {I would, but then it won't be snapped.}

[Yearning Snow]

• OD-1? HP-1? this is only opinion since i'm not a good player =w=
  01:52:502 - kinda weird when the slider's velocity is quite slow despite the song is actually a bit energetic at this part {Not really, it sounds heavy with build up to the kiai, so I slowed it here.}
  
  00:24:575 (5) - nc
  00:29:809 (5) - ^
  00:34:905 (3) - add whiste at slider's head and 00:37:438 (4) - like your previous hitsound pattern?
  00:34:905 (3) - nc?
  00:56:200 (2) - add clap at slider's head? kinda empty without it imo
  00:59:488 (3) - add clap too? same reason as above
  01:02:776 (9) - 376|228?
  01:07:707 (7) - nc
  01:09:351 (9) - add claps at slider's head and reverse arrow? so it can be a match with 01:07:707 (7) - and 01:10:995 (5,6) - {Added on head only}
  01:12:228 (7) - add clap at slider's reverse arrow?
  01:13:050 (1) - add finish at slider's head, kinda match the song, i think
  01:19:625 (1) - add finish
  01:21:063 (14) - add finish at slider's tail to accent the song
  01:49:317 (1) - only suggestion about rhythm {I don't understand the image?}
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:02:981 (4,4) - nc them? kinda attractive with the colorful circles lol /runs
  02:06:680 - 02:09:967 - 02:13:255 - add finish, like your previous diff
  02:10:481 (3) - nc, then remove nc 02:10:584 (1) - for consistent combo pattern in streams
  02:13:871 (3) - nc, like 02:07:296 (1) -
  02:16:954 (3) - add finish at slider's reverse arrow? like your previous combo pattern {The sound for this one is slightly different from the other 2}
  02:23:734 (5) - nc
  02:27:022 (8) - add finish instead of clap?
  02:35:675 (3) - end this a 02:37:468 - ? fits the vocal better, i think

nice song

good luck~

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello o3o Random mod!

[White Snow]

1. OD -1

00:53:324 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:10:995 (2) - Add clap on the tail.
01:14:693 (3) - Add clap on the head.
02:04:419 (3) - Remove clap on the head and tail, just keep it on the reverse.

Looks okay.

[Lonely Snow]

1. OD - 1

1. Increase the DS a bit, I dislike how your objects are practically touching each other. {Did for the first part of the song where it's more obvious}

01:06:474 (1) - Change whistle on the head to a finish. {Changed to claps instead}
01:14:488 (3) - Move to 01:14:702,and remove 01:15:515 (4) -
02:05:652 (1) - Add finish on the head.
02:15:721 (6) - NC
02:33:770 (2) - Remove whistle no the head.

[Hiding Snow]
00:33:203 (1) - A straight slider staying on the same angle would look better. {Made it less bendy}
01:06:474 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:13:050 (1) - ^
01:22:502 (1) - ^ {Used claps for these 3, to standardize with the other difficulties}
01:48:187 (7) - NC
02:05:652 (1) - Add finish on the head.
02:15:721 (5) - NC

[Yearning Snow]
00:33:203 (1) - Add whistle to the tail.
01:01:132 (6) - NC
01:06:474 (1) - Add finish.
01:48:993 - Spinner starts too early imo, you should add 01:48:187 (7,8,9) - here as well to match her rising vocals. Spinner can start at 01:49:830 instead. {Changed it to be like Hiding}
02:10:481 (3,1,2,3,4) - Stream doesn't really fit here :S

[NoHitter's Blizzard]
01:57:639 (6) - NC?

I like this diff the most ^^

RWBY FTW! xD
Hope this helps~!

HeShu wrote:

Hello from in game m4m request !

[General]

I don't even understand this problem, but yeah, it does exist :/

error box in AiMod

[White Snow]

00:55:789 Move it like in picture to blanket the previous circle and align it with the next slider http://puu.sh/4xind.jpg
00:59:077 New combo here and not after {It's standardized to the long white ticks}
01:07:707: Make the head aligned with the tail of the previous slider
01:28:050 to 01:52:502 Even though it's easy and there is a spinner insine, it's a super long break. I advice you to map it {The song itself has a "break" of sorts where the action stops, so there should be a break here.}
02:04:419 Align it with the tail of the previous slider {The small difference lets the player curve, instead of doing a sharp 90 degree turn}
02:37:985 Put it somewhere else so the flow would be respected. Actually it's too much on the bottom >_< {Adjusted previous slider instead}

[Lonely Snow]

00:57:433 Align the slider tail with the incoming circles {They look ok to me}
01:03:187 This is not right here, move it elsewhere {Define "not right"}
01:27:022 Make it point the tail toward next object {The slider is made so if the player carries on curving his movement, he will reach (2) exactly}
01:28:050 to 01:52:502 Even though it's easy and there is a spinner insine, it's a super long break. I advice you to map it
02:08:940 Don't put a new combo here. The music justify a long combo {She's clearly singing a new line, though.}

[Hiding Snow]

01:28:050 to 01:52:502 Fix it please {Fix... what?}
You have also 18 occurence of bad snapping, but the map is good

[Yearning Snow]

You have also 26 occurence of bad snapping, It's bothering :/
01:19:830 There is claps in your stream that aren't good to ear. Change the sound (drum clap) or remove them
01:28:050 to 01:52:502 Same as before {??????? That's a spinner??????}

Very good map

[NoHitter's Blizzard]

Too much streams and they are too long. Only super pro can pass them without breaking combo
You have also 68 occurence of bad snapping, It's too much

01:28:050 to 01:52:502 Totaly break the map rythm now
Else it's good

Good luck !

1. for some slider on the beginning part like 00:28:029 (1) - , 00:29:809 (3) - , or 00:24:575 (1) - , actually i prefer if you make it a bit more smooth like 00:26:287 (4,5) - or 00:32:352 (2,5) - , maybe because i feel most of the smooth curved slider plays better so i guess it's preferable if you put the curved slider on the same shape for the beginning part. From what i see currently, some slider have a bit too curved and some is not which is a bit awkward imo, like 00:22:908 (3,4,1) - (dunno if you did it intentional or not lol)
2. fix some pattern to more refined like 00:25:851 (3,4) - or 00:33:628 (4,5) - ? They're feels a bit off of track because you put it not exactly into the flow track