This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, August 03, 2013 at 8:35:52 PM

Artist: Nomizu Iori
Title: Black + White (TV Size)
Source: Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai kara Kuru Sou Desu yo?
Tags: momochi dakedekaane xinely hinsvar kuro usagi bunny girl asuka you izayoi adaption novel opening
BPM: 192
Filesize: 21667kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:

1. Dekaane's Normal (4.22 stars, 118 notes)
2. Easy (2.73 stars, 85 notes)
3. Hinely's Hard (4.94 stars, 220 notes)
4. Mochi (5 stars, 252 notes)

Download: Nomizu Iori - Black + White (TV Size)
Download: Nomizu Iori - Black + White (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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hi~ from my queue
m4m time!

[General]

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1. Please change artist name.
   
   　
2. you should make red line in 00:11:479 - cuz downbeat.

[Chi's Hard]

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1. HP&OD+1
   　
2. 00:19:135 - add note?
   　
3. 00:40:229 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - spacing and rhythm is very bad. try this rhythm.
   
   　
4. 00:45:229 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - not fit song. try this
   
   　
5. 00:49:292 (4,5,1) - bad spacing
   　
6. 00:51:167 (4,1,2) - not fit.. remove (4),(1) and 00:51:323 (2) - move to 00:51:167 -
   　
7. 00:52:573 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - difficult timing.

[Easy]

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1. 00:19:604 (2,1) - lol, spinner start is 00:19:995 - better.

good luck~

Timing check~

Offset: around 11465~11470

Posting here to claim Normal as requested, wait for it.

Also doing a quick tiny mod as only Hard is finished.

[General]
Taking SNB's timing suggestion, the offset should be 11470, change please.
The dimensions of the BG must be 800x600 or 1024x768.
Remove "Anime" and "Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai kara Kuru Sou Desu yo ?" from tags, the first will be put as genre if this gets ranked, the second you already have it as source.
Tiny Edit: The source should be "Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai kara Kuru Sou Desu yo?", just delete the space between "yo" and the question mark

[Easy]

Increase the Approach Rate by 1, plays better with high BPM.
00:13:979 - How about trying this, matches better with the music

00:19:604 (2) - Delete this, begin the spinner in 00:19:917 and finishing in 00:22:104, if you do, add a circle in 00:22:729.
00:30:229 - How about trying this


[Chi's Hard]
I don't want to be rude, but you should increase the Slider Velocity at least to 1.4-1.5 or reduce the Distance Spacing you use between the notes, this will make more enjoyable the map, it's too hard to play having all those jumps with >2.0x spacing @_@, this looks more as an Insane, but still has rhythm flaws, I'll be pointing here.
Decrease the AR by 1 when you do what I said above.
Only rhythm, you should fix all of them. Some combo colors could change
00:13:979 - Try this, fits better

00:33:042 (4) - Move this to 00:33:198
00:35:229 - Do this rhythm

00:38:510 (2,4,6) - Remove these, there's no sound in the music to follow.
00:40:776 (3) - Delete this
00:40:932 (2) - Move this to 00:41:010
00:45:307 (2,3) - Delete this, don't overmap x,x
00:45:776 (2,3) - ^
01:03:979 (1,2,3,4) - This part is really messed up, there's no need to use if 1/4 beat ticks here, do this, if you listen carefully, it matches better.

01:07:573 (8) - Same as above, also follow the combo suggestions here.

01:09:213 - Put a circle here and delete 01:09:370 (4,5), the drums are not hitting there.
01:10:073 (7) - Delete this and put a circle in 01:10:229
01:10:463 - Add a circle here and delete 01:10:620 (1,2)
01:13:510 - Do this.

01:21:557 (1) - Finish this spinner in 01:22:729
01:23:042 (1,2,3) - There's no drumroll or a guitar riff, there's no need to do this @_@, do what I suggest

01:25:698 (3) - Either stack or place it more spaced, an antijump like this is not good.

That's all, good luck.

DakeDekaane wrote:

Posting here to claim Normal as requested, wait for it.

Also doing a quick tiny mod as only Hard is finished.

[General]
Taking SNB's timing suggestion, the offset should be 11470, change please.
The dimensions of the BG must be 800x600 or 1024x768.
Remove "Anime" and "Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai kara Kuru Sou Desu yo ?" from tags, the first will be put as genre if this gets ranked, the second you already have it as source.
Tiny Edit: The source should be "Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai kara Kuru Sou Desu yo?", just delete the space between "yo" and the question mark

[Easy]

Increase the Approach Rate by 1, plays better with high BPM.
00:13:979 - How about trying this, matches better with the music

00:19:604 (2) - Delete this, begin the spinner in 00:19:917 and finishing in 00:22:104, if you do, add a circle in 00:22:729.
00:30:229 - How about trying this


[Chi's Hard]
I don't want to be rude, but you should increase the Slider Velocity at least to 1.4-1.5 or reduce the Distance Spacing you use between the notes, this will make more enjoyable the map, it's too hard to play having all those jumps with >2.0x spacing @_@, this looks more as an Insane, but still has rhythm flaws, I'll be pointing here.
Decrease the AR by 1 when you do what I said above.
Only rhythm, you should fix all of them. Some combo colors could change
00:13:979 - Try this, fits better

00:33:042 (4) - Move this to 00:33:198
00:35:229 - Do this rhythm

00:38:510 (2,4,6) - Remove these, there's no sound in the music to follow.
00:40:776 (3) - Delete this
00:40:932 (2) - Move this to 00:41:010
00:45:307 (2,3) - Delete this, don't overmap x,x
00:45:776 (2,3) - ^
01:03:979 (1,2,3,4) - This part is really messed up, there's no need to use if 1/4 beat ticks here, do this, if you listen carefully, it matches better.

01:07:573 (8) - Same as above, also follow the combo suggestions here.

01:09:213 - Put a circle here and delete 01:09:370 (4,5), the drums are not hitting there.
01:10:073 (7) - Delete this and put a circle in 01:10:229
01:10:463 - Add a circle here and delete 01:10:620 (1,2)
01:13:510 - Do this.

01:21:557 (1) - Finish this spinner in 01:22:729
01:23:042 (1,2,3) - There's no drumroll or a guitar riff, there's no need to do this @_@, do what I suggest

01:25:698 (3) - Either stack or place it more spaced, an antijump like this is not good.

That's all, good luck.

FIXED
Tq for mod..
I'll wait for ur normal

General:


Chi hard:


Easy:


call me back when u finish your map i check it again :3

Thx for mod. ^^ i'll finish my map this weekend

*.* more of her voice ... i love her songs thank you sooooo much and a really nice beatmap

from moddin queue

[General]

1. Inconsistency in combo colours
2. Folder size exceeds limit of 10 MB. Find a more compressed video.
3. Unsnapped green timing sections literally everywhere

[Hard]

00:42:720 (4) unsnapped slider's end

[Easy]

Why would you request mods for a song you didn't even finish mapping half of one difficulty for?? The only completed one is the guest diff, finish at least one before requesting mods plz...

That's it for me, good luck with your map

SuperMoutarde wrote:

from moddin queue

[General]

1. Inconsistency in combo colours
2. Folder size exceeds limit of 10 MB. Find a more compressed video.
3. Unsnapped green timing sections literally everywhere

[Hard]

00:42:720 (4) unsnapped slider's end

[Easy]

Why would you request mods for a song you didn't even finish mapping half of one difficulty for?? The only completed one is the guest diff, finish at least one before requesting mods plz...

That's it for me, good luck with your map

All Fixed,
and that Hard is not GD, is mine --''
Whatever, i'll change the name

M4M~ :3

[Hard]

More like an Insane.. acctually, this IS an insane. Its not hard enough to fit as an Insane for this song, but it is def too hard
for a Hard diff. Concider remapping it to either Hard or Insane. I will point out what I find is too hard for this difficulty.

First, The spacing seems to be too big. I reeally recommend to use distance snap on Hard difficulties. Probably 1,2 for this Velocity.
Speaking of Velocity. The velocity is too slow. This really kills the potential of this map .__. Maybe like 1,40 - 1,60 is what I would use.
There are some Jumps that are reeeeally nonsense to me. I'm not the best at finding places for jumps, I usually place them not correctly either
but this is placed so wrong even for me. I'm not trying to be ugly to you, if I come across like that, I'm sorry.
The jumps for example from 00:44:595 to 00:47:407 play really hard for this Difficculty.

Next is Hitsounding. Why not use normal sound stamples and a custom snare drum as clap? Thats all on hitsounding. :3

00:18:970 (6,7) - Sounds like a slider to me.
00:18:970 (6) - add NC
00:19:282 (1) - Remove NC
00:40:688 (2,3,4) - Anti-Jump plays weird here :/
00:57:407 (1) - remove one reverse arrow and place 00:57:798 (2) on 00:57:720 and make 00:57:720 (2) a 1/1 slider.
01:06:157 (4) - It says '1,2,3'. Remove it or place it on the head of 01:06:313 (1)
01:08:657 (1) - ^
01:10:220 (1) - Make a 1/1 slider. plays better
01:21:626 (1) - This really ends late. 1/2 to the next note is hard to hit. Shorten it to 01:22:720.

[Normal]

Nothing~ :3

00:23:188 (2,3) - U used a lot of these. Well, I recmmend to change 60% of them to a slider to make this diff easier.
01:05:845 (3,1,1) - Not sure about the combo colors :c I would either remove 01:06:157 (1) or 01:06:470 (1)
01:15:845 (3,1,1) - ^

[Easy]

Nothing~ 'w'

00:33:032 (1) - Uh well, if you want to keep this diff easy then you should remove one reverse because
this reeeally confuses. I was like WTF when i found out that you can have multiple reverse on a slider.

Thats it on this diff :3 You can contakt me if you want me to mod this diff when its done~

Good luck~

Easy

00:11:157 Add a circle
00:34:282 Maybe a new silder?
01:10:220 (2) is overlapping with (3)
01:18:345 till 01:20:845 i miss curvy sliders

Dekaane's Normal

It has a different tick rate maybe you do 1 by this diff or you do 2 by Easy

00:25:688 (2) maybe a slider till 00:25:845 i mean, its normal diff not Hard


Mochi

00:18:970 (6) is overlapping with 00:18:188 (2)
00:46:888 (5) is overlapping with (2)


Well, good luck :3

Thx for mod

hi your from Momochi's Modding n m4m queue
M4M

[Easy]
00:12:720 (2) - finishi remove
00:18:970 (2) - Slide head finishi add?
00:30:220 (2) - all finishi add
01:23:970 (1,1) - So do not want to try? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/596049
01:25:376 (1) - NC remove

[Dekaane's normal]
00:40:220 (6) - Ctrl+J? Fixed-position
01:05:220 (1) - NC remove?
01:08:970 (1) - Add the finish to repeat, To finish the tail section deleted
01:10:220 (2) - ^
01:11:470 (3) - ^
01:16:157 (1) - NC remove?
01:25:688 (1) - ^

[Mochi]
00:47:798 (3) - reomve Odd bits
00:54:282 (1) - NC remove?
00:58:188 - Circle where you want to add?
01:01:001 (1) - 01:01:157 - move (The fixed length of the spinner)

Seems to be fine if you add the Insane difficulty.
Good luck to you~

-Kirito wrote:

hi your from Momochi's Modding n m4m queue
M4M

[Easy]
00:12:720 (2) - finishi remove
00:18:970 (2) - Slide head finishi add?
00:30:220 (2) - all finishi add
01:23:970 (1,1) - So do not want to try? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/596049
01:25:376 (1) - NC remove

[Dekaane's normal]
00:40:220 (6) - Ctrl+J? Fixed-position
01:05:220 (1) - NC remove?
01:08:970 (1) - Add the finish to repeat, To finish the tail section deleted
01:10:220 (2) - ^
01:11:470 (3) - ^
01:16:157 (1) - NC remove?
01:25:688 (1) - ^

[Mochi]
00:47:798 (3) - reomve Odd bits
00:54:282 (1) - NC remove?
00:58:188 - Circle where you want to add?
01:01:001 (1) - 01:01:157 - move (The fixed length of the spinner)

Seems to be fine if you add the Insane difficulty.
Good luck to you~

I fixed some of hitsounds problem.. tq

Hi from M4M ~

general :

disable "letter box during break"
add "DakeDekaane" as tag

Easy :

00:16:470 (6) - New combo here and remove new combo here 00:17:720 (1) - I think it's better, it's follow the keyboard sound
00:49:907 (1) - remove new combo here and add new combo here ? 00:49:595 (4) - (for vocal)
00:47:407 (1) - add finish at slider end for cymbal sound ?
00:52:720 (3) - ^
00:58:345 (2) - ^ end of slider
01:19:595 (1) - remove new combo here and add new combo here ? 01:18:345 (3) - (for vocal)

Normal :

00:22:720 (1) - remove finish at slider end ?
01:08:970 (1) - adjust blanket on this circle 01:08:657 (6) -
01:10:220 (2) - adjust blanket on this slider 01:08:970 (1) -
01:11:470 (3) - adjust blanket on this slider 01:10:220 (2) -
01:12:563 (4) - add new combo ? (for vocal)


Mochi :

00:18:970 (6) - I think it's better if this circle is on this one 00:18:188 (2) -

that all I can find good luck ~

Kin wrote:

Hi from M4M ~

general :

disable "letter box during break"
add "DakeDekaane" as tag

Easy :

00:16:470 (6) - New combo here and remove new combo here 00:17:720 (1) - I think it's better, it's follow the keyboard sound .k
00:49:907 (1) - remove new combo here and add new combo here ? 00:49:595 (4) - (for vocal) k
00:47:407 (1) - add finish at slider end for cymbal sound ? k
00:52:720 (3) - ^ idk ?
00:58:345 (2) - ^ end of slider fail here.
01:19:595 (1) - remove new combo here and add new combo here ? 01:18:345 (3) - (for vocal) k

Normal :

00:22:720 (1) - remove finish at slider end ? k
01:08:970 (1) - adjust blanket on this circle 01:08:657 (6) - i don't know what do u mean
01:10:220 (2) - adjust blanket on this slider 01:08:970 (1) - - - - -
01:11:470 (3) - adjust blanket on this slider 01:10:220 (2) - -- - - -
01:12:563 (4) - add new combo ? (for vocal) k


Mochi :

00:18:970 (6) - I think it's better if this circle is on this one 00:18:188 (2) -

that all I can find good luck ~

Fix some of that.. thx for mod

Hi. Check your upload plz, I failed in downloading >o<;

Hi, M4M

General---
The pure white combo color is not a good idea. Some say it can be blinding with Kiai time. I suggest you change it.
I recommend the preview point be at 01:03:657 for all diffs
Kiai time is not the same for all diffs - in Dekaane's the 2nd one ends later.

Easy---
01:13:501 (6) - i think this should be just 1 circle instead of really short slider

Dekaane's Normal---
00:19:751 (3) - make this another short slider like (2)
01:25:688 (1) - is new combo really needed?

Mochi
In general the stacks look weird.. are they all stack on the same grid point?

Nothing major to mod... just suggestions.. good map, good luck

Hi there, I came to bring an updated version of my diff ( http://puu.sh/1XaOJ ), fixed some combos and hitsounds :v don't kd this, also correct the tags, it's DakeDekaane, not just Dekaane :c
As for the kiai, I think I'll better keep what I have, it's not obligatory to have the same kiai, as I'm a guest mapper.

Don't need to do nothing with the last modpost in my diff, as I corrected both things.

Kin wrote:

Hi from M4M ~

Normal :

01:08:970 (1) - adjust blanket on this circle 01:08:657 (6) - /*My intention is not a blanket there
01:10:220 (2) - adjust blanket on this slider 01:08:970 (1) - /*^
01:11:470 (3) - adjust blanket on this slider 01:10:220 (2) - /*^

Thanks for modding, I'll be appearing more frequently o/

I'll update it soon, my connection sucks

Edit : UPDATED

Idk what the problem is, but I cant use no-vid download >w<

Easy:

-- Unsnapped green line 01:23:032

00:18:970 (3) - Just a single circle. Then, start 00:19:595 (1) at 00:19:282
00:37:720 (1) - Distance~ Change to something like this? : http://puu.sh/1Xp9C
01:01:001 (1) - Start at 01:01:157 to follow lyrics

Dekaane's normal:

-- Why not Dekanne's Normal?

00:30:220 (6) - NC?
00:40:220 (6) - ^?
01:07:720 (4) - To emphasize whistles, NC
01:17:720 (4) - ^? Not sure here though

Mochi:

00:19:595 (2) - Delete this. Instead, add one at 00:19:907. This fits the song better, imo
00:31:626 (6) - 1 Grid up
00:33:032 (4) - Moving this beat to 00:33:188 will be better
00:41:626, 00:41:704 - Add notes. 1/4 will fit here
00:47:720 (2) - Idk your intentions here.. Delete 00:47:720 (2,3), and pull 00:47:877 (4) by 1/2. This fits the song. Well, you should adjust the distance then.
00:50:220 (3,4,5) - Two 1/1 slider fits in this part. http://puu.sh/1Xptz
00:52:798 (2) - Delete, kinda felt overmapped
00:59:282 (5) - Reduce 1/2
00:59:907 - Add a note
01:13:970 (5) - NC
01:14:907 (7) - Break this to 3 notes. At least making 01:15:220 - as a note should be important imo
01:25:688 (3) - NC?

Hey m4m from my queue!

Sorry for the long delay! D: I hope you can understand it.

[General]

I think you have to remove the TV Size.
I don't know, but i would use Grid Size 4.

[Easy]

00:11:157 (1) - Add a circle with finish.
00:11:470 (2,3) - Add clap at both slider-ends.
00:15:376 (5) - I think a newbie has big problems with that, since its 1/2
00:23:032 (2) - Make this straight under 1.
01:08:970 (1) - Reverse this, and make a kickslider, to replace the next slider, since it'll look better then.
01:13:501 (6) - Ok, this will be very confusing for a new player xDD

Note: I suggest you use some more straight patterns. I always do that in easy / normal, because you are so restricted with the distance snap and stuff.
Also you should avoid 1/2 beats (of course, sometimes you have to do it) Btw: Do you really need so many ticks?

[Normal]

Hey Dekaane! ! xDD

00:12:407 (2) - http://puu.sh/1XTb7
00:13:970 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - In this part, the flow could be better (like .. you know xD ask me ingame so i can show you ^^)
00:26:470 (4,5) - Put 5 on the red tick? Since it sounds much better. Also it's a guest diff, and it is allowed to be a little harder, isn't it?
00:28:970 (4,5) - ^ (if you want, change it everywhere)
00:36:157 (3,4) - Well this looks a bit weird. Let 4 look a bit different.
01:15:063 (5) - Add a circle xD

Note: Like the beat, have a look at the patterns

[Mochi]

00:11:313 - Add a circle XD soo bad *q* xDD
00:13:970 (1,2,3) - Looks a bit too straight imo, http://puu.sh/1XTmp (this doesn't look better LOL)
00:25:063 - add a circle
00:50:220 (3,4) - avoid patterns like this D:
00:57:095 (7,1) - Why no real stream?

Note: I like it, but you have to go through the circles. Also watch out when you use the triplets, sometimes they sound offset.. kind of.. -confused-

Good luck! love the song > star

Irreversible wrote:

[Normal]

Hey Dekaane! ! xDD /*Hi Irre :3

00:12:407 (2) - http://puu.sh/1XTb7 /*Done, arranged in a nice way.
00:13:970 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - In this part, the flow could be better (like .. you know xD ask me ingame so i can show you ^^) /*I'll keep as I have now, I'll talk with you in-game for change this.
00:26:470 (4,5) - Put 5 on the red tick? Since it sounds much better. Also it's a guest diff, and it is allowed to be a little harder, isn't it? /*I'm following drums here :c
00:28:970 (4,5) - ^ (if you want, change it everywhere) /*^
00:36:157 (3,4) - Well this looks a bit weird. Let 4 look a bit different. /*Arranged a bit that part, I think it's better now.
01:15:063 (5) - Add a circle xD /*It would be a bit hard for a Normal imo

Note: Like the beat, have a look at the patterns

Edit: Oops, I forgot this, sorry

Sonnyc wrote:

Dekaane's normal:

01:17:720 (4) - ^? Not sure here though /*It's on the same phrase that the ones before, everything else changed.

Thanks /o/ Update here: http://puu.sh/1Y4yG

[General]

[Easy]
00:13:970 (4) - NC
00:44:907 (1) - NC move to 00:45:220 (2) -
00:47:407 (1) - NC move to 00:48:032 (2) -
00:49:595 (1) - NC move to 00:50:220 (3) -
00:51:470 (1) - delete NC
00:53:970 (1) - NC move to 00:52:720 (3) -
00:55:220 (3) - NC

[Normal]
00:31:782 (1) - NC move to 00:30:220 (6) - ?
00:41:782 (1) - ^?
01:25:688 (1) - delete NC

[Mochi]
If this diff is Insane, that you should have a Hard or it will be unrankable
00:27:407 (1) - delete NC
00:29:282 (1) - ^
00:30:220 (3) - NC
01:13:970 (5) - ^

rhythm is good. Good luck!

Omg D: There are so many unsnapped green lines.. i try to fix them ;:__; i'll send you the insane soon

[Mochi]
I think AR9 more fit for this ddifficulty.
00:11:938 (4,3) - stack start (4) and end (3)
00:12:876 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - stack all notes 00:13:657 (3,4) - make ctrl+g
00:13:188 (4) - NC here
00:13:813 (4) - move to 00:13:501 (2) -
00:18:970 (6,1,2) - make another pattern. It more fit music [00:23:032 (1) - move to 00:22:876
00:22:720 - add circle
00:23:501 (2,3,4,1) - move sliders on white tick
00:25:532 (4) - move to 00:25:376
00:28:032 (1) - ^
00:28:657 (2,1) - these sliders are not fit music
00:31:157 (3) - copy this slider and paste as 00:30:220 (1)
00:30:688 (2) - end not snap! and make more symmetry like this00:31:626 (4,5) - just 5 circles stream
00:33:032 (4) - remove this
00:35:532 (2) - ^
00:38:032 (1) - like this ^
00:38:657 (2,3) - not snap end sliders
00:41:626 (6,1) - just 5 circles stream
01:06:157 (1) - put at center
About new combo
Correct new combo should start at big white ticks so i recomend you use NC each 2 big white ticks.

[Normal]
00:31:782 (1) - i think it shoul be start at 00:31:626
00:41:782 (1) - ^
00:59:907 - add note

[Easy]
00:22:720 (1,2) - i think more better make 1 slider (00:22:720 - 00:23:188) more fit music and easyery to play
00:23:657 - and add here note for more easy play
00:25:220 (1) - ^
00:27:720 (1) - ^
00:31:782 (3) - slider 00:31:626 - 00:32:720
00:33:032 (1) - start at 00:33:188
00:35:220 (3) - like 00:22:720 (1,2)
00:37:720 (1) - ^
00:45:220 (2) - NC here
00:50:220 (3) - ^
00:51:470 (1) - remove NC
00:52:720 (3) - NC
00:53:970 (1) - remove NC
00:55:220 (5) - NC

wow!! I love this song!

please give me a chance to make a taiko map for this ><!



~after neary 2days~

I guess it has been refused.. ?
sorry to disturb~

Okay here is the video! Enjoy!
http://www.sendspace.com/file/78n3yp

BeatofIke wrote:

Okay here is the video! Enjoy!
http://www.sendspace.com/file/78n3yp

Arigatou.. >.<

Added video.. xD
Edit : Ups.. double post --

Hellzero wrote:

[Normal]
00:31:782 (1) - i think it shoul be start at 00:31:626 /*I'm following guitar there, and it will sound off if I begin that in a red tick
00:41:782 (1) - ^ /*^
00:59:907 - add note /*I'm following vocals there

Thanks for taking your time, also Momochikun please update my diff awa http://puu.sh/207wD

Hi ~

M4M? I've posted in your modding queue a few minutes ago
I've already mod your map, so take all the time you need xD

Here's the mod:

General:
I love this song! And nice mapset too. There are very few mistakes, the majority about distance snap. I've tried to suggest you my best, so I hope this mod will be useful

Easy:
00:33:032 (1,3) - overlap.. I don't know if it's rankable or not O:
00:42:720 (1) - unsymmetrical, try this: http://puu.sh/20iMD
00:44:595 (3) - ther is an error in the distance snap, move it at x:40 y:232
00:49:595 (1) - ^ , move it at x:284 y:308
00:50:220 (3) - ^ , move it at x:124 y:260
00:51:470 (5) - ^ , move it at x:268 y:44
01:00:220 (5,6) - I think it's difficult for a beginner to understand the timing, I recommend you to do a slider, it's easier

Dekaane's Normal:
00:24:907 (6) - move this at x:396 y:348
00:36:157 (3) - I think it's too close to the slider, maybe move it at x:48 y:104, it's better imo
00:46:157 (5) - it ends too soon, maybe let it finish at 00:46:782
00:56:157 (6) - ^
01:13:188 (3) - this is too close to the slider too, maybe move it at x:20 y:92

Hinely's Hard:
00:28:970 (1,2) - overlap, move 1 two grids left
00:32:720 (4,5) - distance error, move them 1 grid down
01:09:438 (2) - overlap with the other circles, try to move it in another part with the 2, who cares of the distance snap xD an example: http://puu.sh/20j6w
01:16:938 (2) - I think it's better external the sliders than internal, move it at x:360 y:188

Mochi:
00:13:188 (4,5,6,7,8) - you can make a star, the right positions of the circles are 4 x:256 y:240 - 5 x:275 y:85 - 6 x:163 y:195 - 7 x:320 y:173 - 8 x:176 y:103
00:19:126 (4,5) - unsymmetrical, move 4 at x:160 y:108
00:27:407 (1,2) - distance error, move them at x:280 y:136
00:28:032 (6) - ^ , move it at x:268 y:340
00:34:907 (5) - ^ , move it at x:336 y:232
00:36:470 (1) - ^ , move it at x:312 y:92
00:50:220 (3) - 1 grid right to overlap it perfectly with the previous slider
01:06:157 (1) - it's too far from the next slider, consider make it closer to the slider

In the end, I love your map! Hope it will be ranked soon ~

Lehon wrote:

Hinely's Hard:
00:28:970 (1,2) - overlap, move 1 two grids left Did it another way.
00:32:720 (4,5) - distance error, move them 1 grid down I'm sure enough this is okay...
01:09:438 (2) - overlap with the other circles, try to move it in another part with the 2, who cares of the distance snap xD an example: http://puu.sh/20j6w Also fixed this the other way.

Thanks before~

http://puu.sh/20lix (Yes, .rar.)

Hi~ From PM and mod in 9/2/2013

[General]

1. Offset is too large,11462 is a good choice.
2. If you not want to add video in this mapset,plz select letterbox.
3. Add a red line in 00:11:149 - ,BPM 192.because of easy diff.
4. TAG add DakeDekaane and Hinely(If the hard diff is he maked)

[Easy]

1. If you want to put objects in 00:11:157 - ，you must be fixed offset in 00:11:157 - later.
2. HP+1 OD+1
   
   
   Useless Green line
   
3. 00:18:970 -
4. 00:30:220 -
5. 00:57:720 -
   
   
   
   Rhythm
   
6. 00:15:220 (5) - Rhythm is weird.
   
7. 00:27:720 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm is weird
   
8. 01:13:501 (6) - Consider to remove this slider,the rhythm is not suit in this diff
   
   
   
   Sound Effect
   
9. Fine.

[Dekaane's Normal]

• Useless Green line

1. 00:42:095 -
2. 00:42:407 -
   
   
   Rhythm
   
3. 00:59:126 (3) - Rhythm is weird.
   in 00:58:970 -
   
   
   
   Sound Effect
   
4. Fine.

[Mochi]

1. HP+1 OD+2
   
   Useless Green line
   
2. Fine
   
   
   Rhythm
   
3. 00:11:470 (2) - The space is not well,it should be placed in 44|276.
4. 00:15:532 (6) - Rhythm is weird,plz refer to this example
   
5. 00:19:282 (1) - Rhythm is weird,1/8 is well.
   
6. 00:23:032 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Rhythm is weird!weird!weird!If you want to flow
   
   vocal,the rhythm is example1.If you want to flow the rhythm,plz see example2.
   
   example1

   
   
   
   example2

   
7. 00:33:032 (4) - This circle is useless in rhythm.
8. 00:35:532 (2) - The same as 00:33:032 (4) - .
9. 00:36:001 (4) - Weird rhythm..,Romove it is a good choice.
10. 00:38:032 (1) - Plz listen the music,the rhythm is weird!,it's a 2 accent beat.I don't mention this problem in other
    
    diff.
11. 00:47:720 (2,3,4) - Rhythm is wrong.
    
12. 00:51:157 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Rhythm is wrong.plz flow the music to make some new objects.
    
    
    I recomend you use 3 circle in this time
    
13. 01:06:001 - It's not should be block.
14. 01:08:813 - The same as 01:06:001 -
15. 01:09:595 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Rhythm is wrong.
16. 01:25:688 (3) - NC
    
    Sound Effect
    
17. 01:25:688 (3) - Finish.

GL.

Thanks both for modding, Mochi, I beg you, update please q_q code is here: http://puu.sh/20BOj

Rotte wrote:

1. TAG add DakeDekaane and Hinely(If the hard diff is he maked)

"Hinely" is a portmanteau of me and Xinely's name; enough said lol

EDIT: Update the map please .-.

Updated..

Hi, from the Queue!

Hard

00:19:907 - Spinner should start here, just add a circle here then 00:19:751 -
01:07:720 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Shouldnt happen distance wise, start a new distance a larger one at the 2nd NC to improve the spacing and to make it more readable
01:11:157 (5) - Feels too much, remove it

Insane

00:25:532 (1) - Circle should be here 00:25:688 - soundwise
00:33:032 (4) - Circle should be here 00:33:188 - soundwise
00:47:407 (1,2) - Reverse NC, so it goes with the vocal
01:06:313 (2) - Slider feels wrong here, doesnt fit the music at all
01:08:657 (1,2) - Reverse Nc, so it actually fits and its also better for stanza
01:10:063 (1) - Also is so wrong, the sound of it overall, the slider is just not fitting
01:13:970 (5) - Nc for new vocal
01:18:345 - That slowdown doesnt fit one bit and is too sudden to see it, remove it

GL

BounceBabe wrote:

Hard

00:19:907 - Spinner should start here, just add a circle here then 00:19:751 - Done.
01:07:720 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Shouldnt happen distance wise, start a new distance a larger one at the 2nd NC to improve the spacing and to make it more readable Nope; this is already readable as is, and I think there's no need to change it.
01:11:157 (5) - Feels too much, remove it That one follows the music on the background.

Thanks for modding~

http://puu.sh/23lk6

I only mod Hard cuz I'm a little tired


Nothing else I can say :3!
Nice song, Nice map, I hope in rank of this map.

Star~

Good luck~

from PM
General
I think you put NC at downbeat better. this NC pattern seems confusing and not consistency
Easy
Placement
00:46:782(2,3,1) like this? it's more beautiful
00:36:157(4,5,6) make symmeterical?
Rhythm
beginning slider & note at red line seems a bit difficult, you can try to follow the music not vocal.
00:15:376(5) a bit weird and difficult for newbie.
01:12:563(4,5) delete (5) and add a reverse better
Hit Sonud
I think you missed some finishes, you can follow it in Normal diff.
00:30:220(2) add finish at head
01:18:970(2)^

Dekaane's Normal
Placement
00:39:595(5) make a blanket?
00:54:595(4) to follow the flow, maybe Ctrl+G better.
Rhythm
00:32:876(1) delete this note? it's a bit difficult for expectation.
01:04:438(2,3) a bit weird for me, maybe this will follow the music more better.

Hinely's Hard
Placement
00:14:595(3) this jump seems not beautiful and good for music, maybe like this?
Rhythm
00:30:220 unnecessary green line
00:31:157(1) it's a bug? too short and weird.
01:25:688(1) too fast for Hard, maybe ×1.50 better
Hit Sonud
00:17:095(2)~ I don't think it's good to put a Normal whistle.

Mochi
Placement
00:11:157(1) to put away? it's too close with (2)
01:03:657(4) Ctrl+G?
01:13:188(1,2,3) put a jump like this? it's more fun imo
Rhythm
there are some blank in this map, for Insane you can put more notes better.
00:47:407(8) maybe avoid blank better.

good luck & star
and if you could, please mod my map thanks.

kajiyatta wrote:

Dekaane's Normal
Placement
00:39:595(5) make a blanket? /*Done

SPOILER

00:54:595(4) to follow the flow, maybe Ctrl+G better. /*Done
Rhythm
00:32:876(1) delete this note? it's a bit difficult for expectation. /*If I do that it will be empty and the next object is offbeat, making it a bit difficult to read, also that circle is for drums.
01:04:438(2,3) a bit weird for me, maybe this will follow the music more better. /*Although I'm following vocals there, it sounds better, done

SPOILER

Thanks for modding :3, update is here~ http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=20Ua6ypy

kajiyatta wrote:

Hinely's Hard
Rhythm
00:30:220 unnecessary green line ...Can't see why it is unnecessary.
00:31:157(1) it's a bug? too short and weird. Nope. 0.5x and follows the music.
01:25:688(1) too fast for Hard, maybe ×1.50 better Done.
Hit Sonud
00:17:095(2)~ I don't think it's good to put a Normal whistle. Added an S:C2 inherited timing point at 00:16:470.

Thanks for modding~

http://puu.sh/24YCR

as you posted after my queue was closed , i just suggest some HS mod and skip Easy diff

[Normal]

• 
  - 00:46:157 (5) - clap on start and delete whistle
  - 00:48:188 (2) - ^ on end ^
  - 00:50:688 (2) - ^
  - 00:52:407 (4) - clap
  - 00:56:157 (6) - you know here
  - 00:59:595 (1) - clap
  - 01:01:157 (1) - finish spinner by 01:02:720 - here is better
  - 01:08:970 (1,2,3) - clap on end

[Hinely's Hard]

• 
  - 00:15:063 (1) - finish?
  - 00:30:688 (5) - ^ on start
  - 00:40:688 (2) - ^ and delete whistle
  - 00:45:532 (3) - why clap here?
  - 00:49:282 (4) - add whistle on start
  - 00:59:595 (6) - NC?
  - 01:00:688 (8) - finish on start
  - 01:09:438 (2) - finish?
  - 01:12:563 (1) - ^ on repeat
  - 01:19:595 (3) - ^ on end
  - 01:24:438 (2) - ^ on start
  - 01:25:688 (1) - SB on this part looks really odd try other pattern

[Mochi]

• 
  - 00:16:001 (7,8) - ctrl G only Timing
  - 00:40:688 (2) - finish
  - 00:50:220 (3) - clap on end
  - 00:54:282 (1) - clap on start
  - 00:56:782 (3) - ^
  - 00:57:095 (1) - clap
  - 00:58:345 (2) - ^ on start
  - 00:59:282 (2) - ^ on end
  - 01:00:220 (6) - finish on end
  - 01:07:095 (5) - clap on end
  - 01:09:438 (4) - soft finish
  - 01:10:688 (9) - ^
  - 01:11:626 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/257rQ try this rhythm
  - 01:12:563 (6,1) - need finish
  - 01:13:970 (5) - clap on end
  - 01:18:345 (1) - ^
  - 01:18:970 (3) - ^
  - 01:20:220 (3) - finish on start ( and delete whistle )

that's all GL

HelloSCV wrote:

[Hinely's Hard]

• 
  - 00:30:688 (5) - ^ on start ...Why should I? There's clearly no need for that there.
  - 00:45:532 (3) - why clap here? Removed.
  - 00:49:282 (4) - add whistle on start Done.
  - 01:09:438 (2) - finish? No need for that there.
  - 01:12:563 (1) - ^ on repeat ^
  - 01:24:438 (2) - ^ on start ^
  - 01:25:688 (1) - SB on this part looks really odd try other pattern I see no problems there, to be honest...

Thanks for modding~

http://puu.sh/25wE6

HelloSCV wrote:

[Normal]

• 
  - 01:01:157 (1) - finish spinner by 01:02:720 - here is better /*The spinner is following vocals, so the end is fine

that's all GL

Everything else was done, thanks /o/
Update http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KZBhvjKZ

Hi, some suggestions

[General]

[Easy]

[Deekane's Normal]


[Hinely's Hard]

[Mochi]
Pointed major things. Good luck!

Updated !

for kajiyatta, i'll mod ur map ASAP. i;m in the middle of final exam >.<