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Sakura Spin
Kiyro
Marcin
eLtigreXXx
Sekai-nyan
Royston
Roxas
cirno-
HelloSCV
masamune11
phaZ
PROGUY
Konei
Breeze
BounceBabe
Static Noise Bird
ThoomyyxD
TrigonometrY
goodbye
Colin Hou
xxheroxx
rezoons
KiyoshiX101
Entreal
- t e n n y a -
popner
mancusojuanmattos
LKs
xxheroxx

Sakura Spin wrote:

Insane

01:17:206 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) Too early for a stream, it doesn't fit the song.
01:31:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) Questionable... should think of something to change this into... but it's fine if you keep it.
02:00:994 (2) Change this slider into 3 notes, it'll look better.

Overall, it looks good

Kiyro wrote:

[General]
SHITSONGSHITSONGSHITSONGSHITSONGSHITSONGSHITSONGSHITSONGSHITSONGSHITSONGSHITSONGSHITSONGSHITSONG I LOVE YOU TOO FODNFODNFOD

[Normal]
Od-1 Random ma ok
00:31:751 (1) - Why new combo. Remove it, bitch. lel
00:45:206 (1) - ^ LOLNOPE
00:52:479 (1) - Fai meglio 'sta merda :c LOLNOPE
01:26:660 (1) - Dritto o al limite curvo ma non a zig zag, se mi hai capito bene, sennò fottiti. LOLNOPE
01:33:206 (1) - RANDOM NC EVERYWHERE. Toglila :c MACOSA, INIZIA IL KIAI, MICA LA TOLGO LA NC.
02:08:027 (1) - Add a madonna here. Done <3
[Hard]
00:29:751 (2) - FA CAGARE. Fallo curvo, 3points senza punti rossi, vabbè hai capito insomma. W gli slider tondi.
00:53:388 (2) - New combo qui e non su 00:53:933 (1) k
00:58:660 (2,3) - Mettici i reverse nabbo :c CHE REVERSE, DOVE.
01:01:570 (2,3) - ^
01:15:024 (1) - Togli la nc. Arf.
01:26:660 (1,2,1) - CHE ANTIJUMP DEL CAZZO, fai normale D: Ma l'antijump non era un'altra cosa? E comunque non lo cambio </3
01:39:024 (1) - Non mi piaceh. Fallo diverso, ma non ti dico come perché non ho voglia di provare rofl Ma è bellissimo :'C
02:00:115 (1) - MUORI TU E LE TUE NEW COMBO. LEVALA. MA COSA LEVO CHE C'E' UN CAMBIO DI BPM.
02:00:994 (1) - ^ loldone

[Insane]
00:03:024 (1,2) - Tondi e non quadrati. Nope.
01:31:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - PERCHE' HAI STACCATO 'STO STREAM. Perchè c'è un punto in cui c'è una pausa fg.
01:36:115 (1) - Slider di merda, fallo meglio, il punto rosso più in basso D: E' BELLISSIMO NON ROMPERE.

GIVE ME KEBAB KUDOSU BITCH.

Marcin wrote:

^rofl
[General]
Spotted on normal I don't know what it means but it seems to be a good thing lol
Last Red line is wrongly timed, move it about 55 ms forward It keeps sounding a bit off but it's better than now
[Normal]
00:04:479 (1,2) - those sliders are missing clap on slider tick, please consider adding it.I don't know how to add it I will add them of course
01:18:660 (1,2,3,4) - I was excepting here pattern like this:

Fixed, not a big difference
01:26:297 - I feel like there is missing a note here. Fixed
01:26:660 (1) - Is it necessary to use red point ? it looks almost the same with grey Using the same shape is a bit monothone...
Great diff, shooting kudosu because of it ~~ Thank you :3
[Hard]
00:03:024 (4,5,6) - This part looks bad, consider remapping / moving / doing whatever with it
00:03:570 (5) - Add clap on slider tick Fixed the whole pattern
00:14:660 (1) - NC?
00:17:570 (5) - ^?
00:20:479 (1) - ^ ? (you can ignore it if you want, and other NC's, they're just my feeling) I don't think they are really necessary
00:27:024 (1,2) - Strange spacing I don't know how to fix it ;_;
00:57:933 - 01:09:933 - There is clearly clap in music, how about setting normal sample set every clap here? It sounds awesome!
01:39:570 (2) - Unrankable, you are not allowed to put hit circle under slider path. Whops, I totally forgot about it
[Insane]
00:13:751 - It's obviously missing circle here. Yep
00:03:570 (2) - Clap on slider tick :3 *Cough Cough*
00:14:842 (1) - NC ? It's an unique pattern :C
00:20:842 (1) - ^? Same
00:32:115 (1,2,3,4) - I would more enjoy stream here than sliders as stream... I hate 1/3 sreams, they are only confusing, sorry!
01:02:660 (5) - NC? Yeah
01:05:933 (5) - ^? Derp

Great music, and great slider-art 2 kudosus. Thank you very much for 2 kds *_* I appreciate it! I'll m4m your map as soon as possible. Also, very useful modding
Could you m4m my map? http://osu.ppy.sh/s/56683 thanks ~~

eLtigreXXx wrote:

[Insane]

00:01:570 (1) finish ?
02:08:082 audio 15 %


[Normal]

00:21:933 finish ?
00:23:388 clap ?
00:21:933 - finish ?

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:35:024, ends on 00:40:842
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:33:206, ends on 01:39:024

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:35:024, ends on 00:41:570
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:33:206, ends on 01:39:024

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:35:024, ends on 00:41:570
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:33:206, ends on 01:39:024

nice

1. Why there is no tag or source? maybe add something so people can find your map easily~
2. I think i suggest you to add a soft-sliderslide.wav >< it's so annoying atm~

1. 00:04:479 (1) - I think it'll be better if you did it like this? http://puu.sh/1xlZa dont forget to fix the spacing afte that~
2. 00:10:297 (1) - i'll be better if you added a finish on start~
3. 00:19:024 (1) - remove finish and add whistle instead~
4. 00:21:933 (3) - ^
5. 00:38:660 (1,1) - remove those nc i dont think they follow anything, so it's useless~
6. 00:42:297 (1) - I think 2 combo's are way too short, so maybe you should remove this nc~
7. 00:53:933 (1,1) - ^
8. 01:23:024 (1) - remove clap and add a finish instead~

1. 00:04:479 (1) - finish on the start sounds much better~

1. 00:14:660 (7) - NC because it went too long ><
2. 00:16:115 (1) - finish at the start~
3. 00:56:842 (1) - remove this nc it's seems useless to me ~
4. 01:44:842 (1) - instead of adding whistle maybe you should switch it with a finish~

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Hi :3 Mod4mod~

Red = Must Fix
Black = Suggestion

General:

1. Why there is no tag or source? maybe add something so people can find your map easily~ I tried to do something lulz
2. I think i suggest you to add a soft-sliderslide.wav >< it's so annoying atm~

Yep, I don't know how to do it but yep lol

Normal:

1. 00:04:479 (1) - I think it'll be better if you did it like this? http://puu.sh/1xlZa dont forget to fix the spacing afte that~ I can't fix :/
2. 00:10:297 (1) - i'll be better if you added a finish on start~ Not really needed
3. 00:19:024 (1) - remove finish and add whistle instead~ It sounds much better lol
4. 00:21:933 (3) - ^
5. 00:38:660 (1,1) - remove those nc i dont think they follow anything, so it's useless~ :C
6. 00:42:297 (1) - I think 2 combo's are way too short, so maybe you should remove this nc~ Neh
7. 00:53:933 (1,1) - ^ Yep
8. 01:23:024 (1) - remove clap and add a finish instead~ There are no reasons for doing it D:

Hard:

1. 00:04:479 (1) - finish on the start sounds much better~ Same as normal

Nothing much great work :3 but still it's lacks of finish sounds so you must check it again~ Thank you :3


Insane:

1. 00:14:660 (7) - NC because it went too long >< Yes
2. 00:16:115 (1) - finish at the start~ Derp
3. 00:56:842 (1) - remove this nc it's seems useless to me ~ I like it D:
4. 01:44:842 (1) - instead of adding whistle maybe you should switch it with a finish~ Yep

That's all i found :3 good luck with your map~ Thank you!

Royston wrote:

Hi, M4M from your queue.

[General]
Woah, funky sliders! I like them Thank you!
02:04:675 (1) - End it 1/4 earlier? Not needed imo
01:27:388 (1) - Finish on slider start? Done

[Normal]
01:26:660 (1,2) - Swap NC's? Yep
01:38:297 (3) - Finish on slider end? Yep


[Hard]
00:40:842 (1) - I feel like the velocity slowdown is a little excessive here. Maybe use 0.75x instead? No pls
00:52:479 (1) - ^
01:09:388 (4) - Add clap? Since the beat doesn't actually change until 01:09:933 I think it sounds bad on piano
01:39:024 (1) - Finish on slider start? Nah
01:44:842 (1) - Reduce slider length by 1/4? If you listen to it at a slow playback rate you can hear the note ending early Added a repeat since there are two notes

[Insane]
Consider using the normal sampleset for some of the streams, to give them a heavier feel? Neh
01:32:660 (10) - Delete? To fit better with the bass in the background Yes
01:37:570 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders are a bit weird. It's difficult to tell, but I actually think it's a 1/4 rhythm rather than 1/3. Or maybe the first slider is 1/3 and the others aren't idk. Mess around with it and see what fits better for you I think they are ok

Overall really nice map. Good job! Thank you!

Roxas wrote:

Rnadmo mdo pls.

[General]

01:21:570 - Uno sparo di kiai in tutte le diff? Ci sta.
02:04:675 - Volume graduato a scendere su questo spinner Appena ne ho voglia lo fixo, ora ne ho per il cazzo <3

[Normalll]

00:48:115 - Aggiungi un clap Fatto lol

Per il resto è fottutamente perfetta, hai ottenuto simmetrie rispettando il distance snap di 1.0 e non è semplice lol Grazie mille :3

[Hardddd]

00:21:933 (1) - boh uno uistol Ma non c'entra niente lì in mezzo D:
00:29:206 - 00:29:751 - 00:31:206 - Pure qua i finish nabbone:3 Fatto <3
00:53:388 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Sto pattern l'hai fatto proprio a tirare via cambialo per favore fa cagare ((((((((( O cambia anche quelle cosine che fanno diventare il pattern un merdaio Cos'hai contro questo pattern. Ho cambiato solo uno slider alla fine che faceva cagare a spruzzo lol

[Insane]

00:05:933 (1,3) - Non snappato correttamente bielloh Ficsed
00:13:206 (1) - Aggiustalo nella parte sinistra del "bernoccolo" c'è uno spigolo, fallo più curvo roflflfl Mi manda il pattern a puttane D:
00:13:751 (2) - Spostalo in x:219 y:177 così da stackarlo correttamente con 8 e quell'altro beat dopo Fatto
00:21:206 (5,6) - ctrl+g? ovviamente riposizionando correttamente l'hitsounds, e se vuoi magari un altro ctrl+g sul (5) dopo :3 Ma così flowwa bene dai xD
00:56:842 (1) - Bah, NC lo toglierei La tolgo perchè sei il secondo che me lo dice lol
00:58:297 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Troppe NC, come sai i katu e i geki (si chiamavano così?) nelle NC tolgono più vita se sbagliati, visto che hai messo un HPdrain 8 (che io abbasserei a 7, come ci abbasserei OD) Tolte le NC. HP e OD li tengo a 8 dato che è una Insane, suvvia D:
01:07:024 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Uguale... Io farei combo fino a 4 Done
01:11:933 (2) - Mettilo dov'è il (4) Mi smerda il flow
01:23:024 (1,3) - Personalmente non mi piacciono Vanno bene così penso lol
01:57:933 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - In fondo ci può stare dai, rofl No.

Good job ricchione <33333333333333 Grazie troiona <33333333333333333333

cirno- wrote:

Normal
00:21:206 (2, 4) - Add clap In that point the song is lower, so no
00:19:024 (1,3) - remove claps No :C
Seemed like you had a whistle pattern thing goin on, so why not:
01:24:479 (1) - add whistle
01:29:569 (2) - ^
01:33:933 (2) - ^
01:38:297 (3) - ^
That's all I got for this diff. Placement is good and I think it plays out very well. Good Normal. Thank you! I won't change hitsounds btw...

Hard
00:56:660 (4) - Consider deleting Yes
02:01:049 (2) - Not sure if this is exactly how you want it, but I think it would look better if it was more symmetrical. Nope, I wanted to make a random slider

Insane
I love this <3 Thank you :3
02:01:049 (2) - I think you should try to make something more creative and genius :3 I'll think about it, thank you!

Take a star. I hope it's ranked! Insane is fun. I hope it too, and thanks for modding and star!

HelloSCV wrote:

From your queue~
M4M right?

SPOILER

Normal
00:29:751 (2) - finish on start and remove finish on repeat
00:32:115 (1) - finish
00:38:660 (1) - delete NC
00:40:115 (1) - ^
00:53:933 (1) - ^
00:56:842 (1) - ^
01:23:024 (1) - ^
01:28:842 (1) - ^
01:30:297 (3) - NC
01:31:751 (1) - delte NC
01:34:660 (1) - ^
01:37:569 (1) - ^

Hard
00:29:206 (1) - finish
00:29:751 (2) - ^ on start and end
00:32:115 (3) - ^ on start
00:33:570 (1) - ^
01:09:388 (4) - reduce 1 repeat
01:38:297 (3) - delete finish
01:39:024 (1) - add finish on start
01:44:842 (1) - remove slider and add a note here with finish

Insane
00:29:206 (2) - add finish on end
00:31:206 (5) - finish
00:52:479 (1) - remove slider's whistle and just add on start
01:32:387 (8) - remove this note and 01:32:479 (9) - rearrange DS?
01:38:297 (3) - remove finish instead, 01:39:024 (1) - add finish on start
01:44:115 (1) - NC
01:50:660 (1) - add finish on start
01:55:751 (1) - reduce repeat little?
02:00:170 (1) - add whistle on start and end

great song! good luck for rank!! I didn't fix any hitsound because I think they are ok. I fixed some NC ,though. Thank you a lot!

1. No tags are kinda sad to look at - consider gathering some information about this song and stuff to add something what could help to find this song.

1. As for the reason that the Sliderslide just sounds really noisy, you should consider to add a blank soft Sliderslider to get rid of the noisy sound during Sliders.

1. In fact, your slidertick clap sound is really a fully different from the normal claps you use. Either custom your clap to have the same as the slidertick or change your slidertick into the default clap you use.

1. I miss some whistleing in this diff, in following of that the diff gets a lack of good hitsounding which could be easily changed. How is it about trying to use a whistle every forth white tick?
2. Your clap rhythm is on the wrong way - You should not be setting claps on the downbeat, but on the following beat and then every second one - but your current clap rhythm is meeh.
3. 00:29:751 (2) - Uhm, considering that this pretty much sounds like the same tone played before; you should be setting a finish for the start - also to emphasize this strong sound at all.
4. 00:35:024 (1) - Finish on start to emphasize the strong vocal and downbeat.
5. 00:37:933 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Oh gawd, eight circles in a row are really tiering to play for beginners and also difficult. You should switch some of these circles to Sliders to make it more friendly for beginners.
6. 00:40:842 (1) - Remove this whistle from Sliderbody and set the whistle only for start; as the Sliderwhistle sounds really noisy here.
7. 00:43:751 (3) - The overlaping with 1 looks really ugly, I really recommend to stack this with 1's start or to move it elsewhere to get rid of the overlap.
8. 00:45:206 (1) - Remove Sliderwhistle from Slider and add it on start - it's just that I dont think it's fitting - I assume you didn't want to have it.
9. 00:52:479 (1) - Same thing as above here.
10. 01:20:115 (5) - ^
11. 01:41:933 (3) - Err, looks really ugly with 1, so just copy paste 1 for a much more pleasing look. You'll see
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:59:388 (7) - Move a bit right and down for a better look :3 I'd actually not be saying this but I guess you were supposed to have it like below
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 02:04:565 (3) - To have a nicer difference from the notes before, give this Normal finish - you will notice that this sound is much stronger than the two which was played before.
14. Ehh, hitsounding is kinda mess here. Patterns are nice and mostly neat ^^ Flow could get some improvement - some of the patterns I didn't point out could need some tweaking :> Nice work otherwise ~

1. 00:10:297 (1,2,3,4) - The voice is singing here pretty high - to emphasize this, as these Sliders feel empty, you should try whistles for the start of those Sliders - that would be pretty nice.
2. 00:47:024 (2,3,4) - I don't think you should have jumps for this - you didnt have them on the other part similar to this and also this is a hard difficulty - you dont have to jump with every Slider ^^
3. 00:52:479 (1) - Sliderbody whistle sounds really noisy - remove it and add whistle to the start.
4. 01:15:024 (5) - Same as above.
5. 01:27:024 (2,1) - Argh!!! Dont' antijump this D: It plays really odd and confusing - and the NC doesnt really help to read this - so please just space it normal.
6. 01:31:024 (2) - Uhh, looks really ugly again - just copy paste 1 - will look much better.
7. 02:01:049 (2) - Firstly, also if I know it will be single, add a NC to have these Slider's sounds; cause we know it plays during all strong parts, in the same combo and second Normal finish for the same reason as explained in Normal.
8. Like in Normal; hitsounding is messy, patterns flow nice and are neatly created. Just repair hitsounding, add more whistles and you get the trick :>

1. 00:09:479 - Uh, I do know that there is no actual sound, but would you mind to add a note here? Flow gets much better with this stack transformed into a triple.
2. 00:11:206 - I just whondered why here is no note? It breaks flow and here is deffinitly tone to map :3
3. 00:18:660 (6) - Argh, don't do this :< It breaks the great pattern you had before, either make it circles or move the pattern down so that you can add another Slider with the same angle just like the others.
4. 00:28:660 (1) - This is a kinda random shape - doesnt look good or has an unity with other Sliders, so I'd recommend to just shape it regular.
5. 00:48:115 (1,2,3,4) - Uhh, these 4 would flow much better if you made the shape smoother; just try to adjust them like below
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:52:479 (1) - Hehe, remove this Sliderbody's whistle :> Sounds noisy ~
7. 00:56:115 (3) - Ehm, this flows bad, because of it's exactly same road as 1 has. Just use CTRL + G, it will fix it in a nice flowing way ~
8. 00:56:660 (4) - And if you followed suggestion above, use CTRL + J on this circle to keep spacing and flow :3
9. 01:01:933 (3,4) - These overlaps are ugly :< Just space them out to get rid of this, got firstly irretated by this and yeah, if you look this doesn't really look good at all.
10. 01:04:115 (1) - Really, really nazi, but this isn't straight on the line. Rotating it by 1° - that's why it's nazi lol - would fix this.
11. 01:04:660 (2) - How about using CTRL + G to have a more interesting flow here - I say this because I think that this flow really odd here.
12. 01:09:206 (7) - Uh, this circle looks really random placed... I'd like it to be part of your previous pattern you know, just having it into the line of zick zack notes would help flow and placement a lot.
13. 01:13:570 (3) - Hmm, tested this many times so how about CTRL + G to vary flow here and have pattern more interesting. For the circle 4, just move it down the same way circle 2 is.
14. 01:29:570 (3) - Meh, shape looks random, well, having the same shape as 1 would surely have a better transition and smoother gameplay - also look would improve as the shapes had more unity :3
15. 01:39:024 (1) - Add finish to start as it feels currently a bit powerless without hitsound.
16. 01:41:570 (4) - Really recommend CTRL + G at this play to have a much smoother flow and a better transition from 3 to 4 here :3
17. 01:59:388 (9) - Why not having a jump for the strong part and including this circle into the pattern by stacking this with the previous 3? Really fits the song and improves pattern imo.
18. 02:01:049 (2) - Same suggestion for the Slider's end as in Normal in Hard :3
19. Uff, in general pattern are nicely done ~ Well, I'd like to have more work on good flow and Slider pattern transition as it partly feels pretty odd at moments. For hitsounding is the same thing present as on other diffs :3