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Mani Svavarsson, Mark Valenti - The Mine Song

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Topic Starter
Qiyana
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on May 4, 2017 at 10:23:08 PM

Artist: Mani Svavarsson, Mark Valenti
Title: The Mine Song
Source: LazyTown
Tags: Stingy We are number one lazy town walter85
BPM: 180
Filesize: 1224kb
Play Time: 00:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.5 stars, 66 notes)
  2. Hard (2.84 stars, 139 notes)
  3. Normal (1.78 stars, 76 notes)
  4. walter85's Insane (3.18 stars, 145 notes)
Download: Mani Svavarsson, Mark Valenti - The Mine Song
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This circle is mine
and this triagonal slider.




Easy by me
Normal by me
Hard by me
walter85's Insane by. well you guessed it walter85


ready for mods but not for ranking
Topic Starter
Qiyana
First
gronek08
Hi, from queue
Easy
  1. 00:05:811 (1) - The reverse arrow feels kinda odd. I would replace it with 00:07:144 (2,3)
  2. 00:16:477 (1) - ^
  3. 00:27:144 (1) - ^
  4. 00:39:144 (1) - ^. Here you may also try 2 beat reverse slider and a circle (unless it's too hard for 1,5*, dunno)
Normal
  1. 00:16:477 (1) - I have the same problem here, as in easy.
  2. 00:24:977 (2) - Shouldn't this start 1/2 beat later?
  3. 00:39:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't know what are the rules for normal diffs, but imo ignoring strong sounds on white ticks is not a good idea xD
Hard
  1. 00:24:977 (2) - Imo there is no sound at all when this slider starts
  2. 00:27:644 (2,2) - Try changing those to circle + 1/2 slider
  3. 00:36:978 (2) - Strong sound on white tick. Replace with circle + 1/2 slider?
  4. 00:47:643 (2) - ^
Also firetruck this circle after spinner in insane, already got my hand off keybord xD
Good luck!
_Crow

gronek08 wrote:

Also firetruck this circle after spinner in insane, already got my hand off keybord xD
kek
Wikozo

Easy

  1. instead of this slider 00:17:810 (2) you can do slider like this 00:16:477 (1)
  2. instead of this slider 00:40:477 (2) you do slider like this 00:39:144 (1)
  3. on 00:46:811 you can add circle

Normal

  • the best normal in world

Hard

  1. 00:08:311 (4) - this circle is not really visible

walter85's Insane

  • sorry, i don't see anything wrong in this diff

Sorry for bad mod, but this map is very good. Good luck ;)
Topic Starter
Qiyana
gronek08

gronek08 wrote:

Hi, from queue
  • Easy
  1. 00:05:811 (1) - The reverse arrow feels kinda odd. I would replace it with 00:07:144 (2,3) I don't think so
  2. 00:16:477 (1) - ^ I still don't agree
  3. 00:27:144 (1) - ^ ^
  4. 00:39:144 (1) - ^. Here you may also try 2 beat reverse slider and a circle (unless it's too hard for 1,5*, dunno) ^
  • Normal
  1. 00:16:477 (1) - I have the same problem here, as in easy. I have the same response here, as in easy.
  2. 00:24:977 (2) - Shouldn't this start 1/2 beat later? no, where would slider 1 go then?
  3. 00:39:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't know what are the rules for normal diffs, but imo ignoring strong sounds on white ticks is not a good idea xD it's not in the rules. and still no.
  • Hard
  1. 00:24:977 (2) - Imo there is no sound at all when this slider starts imo, there is
  2. 00:27:644 (2,2) - Try changing those to circle + 1/2 slider almost no sound there.
  3. 00:36:978 (2) - Strong sound on white tick. Replace with circle + 1/2 slider? is sound but yolo
  4. 00:47:643 (2) - ^ ^
Also firetruck this circle after spinner in insane, already got my hand off keybord xD No changes no kudos.
Good luck!

Wikozo

Wikozo wrote:

Easy

  1. instead of this slider 00:17:810 (2) you can do slider like this 00:16:477 (1) Wouldn't fit in
  2. instead of this slider 00:40:477 (2) you do slider like this 00:39:144 (1) Wouldn't fit in
  3. on 00:46:811 you can add circle done

Hard

  1. 00:08:311 (4) - this circle is not really visible not fixed.

Sorry for bad mod, but this map is very good. Good luck ;)

didn't give kudos to gronek08 bc didn't find anything.
ReFaller
It's Lazy Town, lol i guess when i watched this last time...
Topic Starter
Qiyana

ReFaller wrote:

It's Lazy Town, lol i guess when i watched this last time...
plz mod :v
JeZag
this mod is mine mod.

EASY
nothing major to see here.
00:05:811 (1) - i would remove the whistle on that middle repeat, it feels off
00:16:477 (1) - well cause this is copy paste from prev, same as above
00:20:811 (7,2) - im not 100% sure, but this might be a problem due to the head of 00:22:477 (2) being covered. check with higher up ppl if this is goin for ranked
00:22:477 (2) - extra points if u can get the body of this to blanket head of 00:21:811 (1)
00:25:144 (4) - same with this and head of 00:24:477 (3)
00:29:811 (1) - same with this and head of 00:28:477 (2)
00:32:477 (3,1) - this is probably ok, but its deceptive because the DS isnt right even tho the "break" isnt toooo long for an easy.
00:39:144 (1) - you know the drill
00:45:144 (2) - same with this (just check it and pointing it out)
00:47:811 (5) - same here
00:47:811 (5,1) - if you can avoid a tiny overlap just avoid it

NORMAL
00:01:144 (2) - the middle one should be clickable so try this rhythm:

00:05:811 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - besides minor polarity issue, nothing wrong here. this is a better rhythm to play imo:

00:19:811 (5) - same here as to 00:01:144 (2)
00:34:477 (2) - ^
00:39:644 (2,3) - polarity issue, can be fixed by making this a slider instead (just as in 00:05:811 (1) this section)

HARD
this diff seems a tad bit overmapped for such a simple song. if you ever decide to scrap and rework, i'd recommend making this play simply and using larger DS (sorta like making this play like an oldmap for an oldsong)
00:04:477 (4,5) - this "blanket" can look better
00:07:144 (1,2) - this can look pro if done right
00:08:477 (1,2,1) - unless you purposely messed up these blankets, fix em
00:13:144 (7) - you can and should try to fix this blanket
00:16:477 (1) - off blanket
00:25:810 (4) - i know this is copy paste but this should DEFINITELY be just a hitcircle, not slider
00:26:144 (5) - and this should not exist.
00:27:644 (2,2) - these dont belong here anymore
00:30:311 (2) - this should probably be a longer 1/1 slider, not a 1/2 slider
00:31:811 (4) - just for consistency, make a click on the red tick not white.
00:48:143 (3,4,5) - copy paste doesnt accurately do this change in rhythm justice

INSANE
wow, this diff actually seems goofy. pretty good.

good luck for ranked if going for that!
Dr Sensei-Hugo
Hello there, mod from M4M queue!

walter85's Insane

00:13:811 (1) - Fix blanket?
00:33:700 (2,1) - Maybe do a bit better?
00:36:366 (4,1) - ^
00:40:366 (5,1) - ^
00:41:700 (5,1) - ^

Hard
00:04:144 (3) - 00:04:811 (5) - Fix blankets with these
00:08:477 (1,2,1) - Fix blanket
00:09:811 (2) - Move this a bit so that the previous object's head or end is at the center
00:11:477 (2,3) - Fix blanket
00:12:811 (6,7) - ^
00:14:811 (3,1) - ^
00:16:477 (1,2) - ^
00:18:644 (4,1) - ^
00:25:810 (4,5) - ^ (Wow lots of bad blankets)
00:31:144 (2,4) - ^

Normal

00:06:811 (3,4) - Fix blanket
00:13:811 (1,2) - ^
00:47:144 (1,2) - ^

Easy

I suggest you make this diff even easier (Looks more like normal than easy). Also, I suggest you remake some of the parts in your map because you have literally copypasted them.

I hope this mod helped you. :)

See you again and good luck with your map!
_Crow

DrSensei-Hugo wrote:

walter85's Insane

00:13:811 (1) - Fix blanket? done
00:33:700 (2,1) - Maybe do a bit better? it's fine like this imo
00:36:366 (4,1) - ^ ^
00:40:366 (5,1) - ^ ^
00:41:700 (5,1) - ^ ^
changed the cs a bit too

update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Mine.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 311
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 21811,57144
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 6
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:The Mine Song
TitleUnicode:The Mine Song
Artist:Mani Svavarsson, Mark Valenti
ArtistUnicode:Máni Svavarsson, Mark Valenti
Creator:Dyl-Byl
Version:walter85's Insane
Source:LazyTown
Tags:Stingy We are number one lazy town walter85
BeatmapID:1284632
BeatmapSetID:605652

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.8
OverallDifficulty:7.2
ApproachRate:8.2
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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