Hey there ! M4M
00:33:159 (1,2) - Can you make them closer ? The vocals start on (2) so it doesn't really need high spacing. The pattern would be much more interesting if speed increase when they start. Same goes for 00:38:676 (1,2) - etc
00:41:090 (6,1) - Swap NCs
00:45:400 (3,1) - Stack them to make them less sudden ? Rn it's kinda annoying because of fast AR.
00:47:642 (3,4,1,2) - Rhythm issue. You don't seem to follow vocals that much so I advise making 00:48:159 - clickable. If you really want to map them then you should think about extending/repeating 00:47:987 (4) - .
01:05:228 (4,1) - Stack them for consistency ? Makes much more sense with what you did at the beginning + it gives more emphasis to (1). Same for 01:16:263 (2,1) -
01:22:987 - I expected this sound to be clickable because of the previous pattern. Consider using an 1/2 slider or 2 circles. It can also bring more emphasis to the downbeat.
01:30:056 (2,6) - Why are downbeat unclickable when every others are clickable ? It's an unconsistency that you should fix, especially for 01:30:056 (2) - because you can avoid it.
01:40:400 (5,4) - You seem to space claps more so why are they that close from the previous object ?
01:43:849 (1,2,1,2,3) - You can't use high spacing for everything or nothing will feel special. Reduce the spacing of 1 or 2 objects depending of what you want to emphasize exactly (here, I guess claps) :/
01:47:297 (6,7) - Why are you suddenly using 2 more kicksliders ?
02:11:780 (1) - Is there anything that justifies that spacing increase and a direction change ?
03:18:676 (1) - CTRL+G ? flow nicer. btw
http://puu.sh/txeC4/23d340a139.jpg03:31:780 (3,4,5,6,1) - 5 circles in a row might be too dense compared to what the song provides.
03:34:193 (1,2,1,2) - same issue as earlier. Nothing is emphasized if everything is high-spaced. I can understand you're trying to describe vocals with that flow but it doesn't represent what you're actually mapping.
03:52:642 (5) - Move it a bit to the bottom ? The flow is a bit jerky rn.
04:12:469 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Nice pattern !
04:19:366 (1,2) - Stack them ? That high spaced doesn't really fit since they sound the same and the kiai finishes here.
04:56:952 - Add a slider for consistency ? It sounds a bit like a bad idea but in fact it plays really well !
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7136416 (don't pay attention to placement, just rhythm).
Overall the flow is really good, structure is decent too, but you should work a bit on rhythm/consistency because sometimes it emphasizes nothing and feels out of place.
Good luck !