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Void - SEPIA (void's Balearic Reimix)

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Ametrin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018年9月14日 at 21:53:20

Artist: Void
Title: SEPIA (void's Balearic Reimix)
Tags: Diverse system Hello, BMS SHIKI link to you?
BPM: 165
Filesize: 5841kb
Play Time: 04:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Faded Utopia (4.92 stars, 1267 notes)
  2. gary00737's Normal (1.67 stars, 306 notes)
  3. Hard (0.75 stars, 6 notes)
Download: Void - SEPIA (void's Balearic Reimix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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normal - by gary00737
hard - wip
light insane - need gd orz
insane - me

那么是谁这么幸运要做个5分钟的hard呢
我怎么觉得会是我 日
Warpyc
Late mod from queue

  • General

    First off amazing storyboard, great job!

    I would turn on epilepsy warning because it has a fair share of flashes in the kiai time that could warrant it

    song / draintime isn't 5 minutes so if you want to rank it you will need a full set or edit the mp3 to an appropriate time

    Edit: After going through hell and searching like a madman I've finally managed to get a hold of the song here's the lossless .flac file and the 192kpbs .mp3 file <-- click

    also the artist is SHIKI not Void, since SHIKI made the original and Void remixed it

    You would preferably need a better mp3, 128kbs is rankable but this sounds bad even for that bitrate so if possible I'd search for a new higher quality one

  • Faded Utopia

    00:09:101 (1,2,3) - make this a repeat slider to be consistent with 00:02:041 (1) -

    00:28:879 (1,2) - This sounds like it could be mapped as a stream there's definitely drums there to support it

    00:30:657 (1,2,3,4) - Really short spacing between these two feels pretty awkward

    00:33:101 (8,9) - might as well make this a triple

    01:04:879 (1) - NC feels pretty unnecessary here
    01:11:990 (1) - ^

    01:12:435 (1) - There isn't a 1/3 beat in the song here

    01:20:212 (4,5,1) - ctrl+g is feels a bit better imo

    01:26:990 (2) - This slider totally ignores the heavy drum beat at 01:27:101 - I'd consider either making it a 1/4 slider or a double

    02:08:435 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Looks awesome!

    02:24:324 (2) - slider starts on unimportant sound and ends on drum just make it a note on 02:24:435 - instead

    02:27:324 (2,3,4) - I dont think this fits the guitar rhythm very well, I'd make it like http://puu.sh/uyme8/089e107e8b.jpg or http://puu.sh/uymhr/44ebac8c69.jpg because right now 02:27:546 (3) - starts at an unimportant beat and ends at the guitar sounds which is very awkward
    02:34:435 (3,4,5) - ^
    02:41:546 (3,4,1) - ^

    03:18:101 (3,1) - This just feels very awkward I'd change it so it flows a tad bit better

    03:20:879 (1,2,3,4) - Why so low spacing?

    04:10:657 (13) - I would probably NC this since big spacing increase

    04:13:990 (4,5,6,1) - even spacing between these feels a bit odd since 04:14:212 (5) - is a lot quieter than 04:13:990 (4,6) - also 04:14:657 (1) - is a strong beat and should have quite a bit higher spacing

    04:19:101 - missing a note? There's a pretty big drum sound that I would definitely map if I were you, also very hard to hit streams that start on a blue tick
    04:20:879 - ^
    04:22:657 - ^
    04:24:435 - ^
    04:26:212 - ^
    and the rest in that section

    04:39:324 (1,2,3) - same as start of map

    Nice map I really like the smooth streams
Topic Starter
Ametrin

Warpyc wrote:

Late mod from queue

  • General

    First off amazing storyboard, great job!

    I would turn on epilepsy warning because it has a fair share of flashes in the kiai time that could warrant it

    song / draintime isn't 5 minutes so if you want to rank it you will need a full set or edit the mp3 to an appropriate time that's why i became lazy ;w;

    Edit: After going through hell and searching like a madman I've finally managed to get a hold of the song here's the lossless .flac file and the 192kpbs .mp3 file <-- click

    also the artist is SHIKI not Void, since SHIKI made the original and Void remixed it i'll ask BN which is right

    You would preferably need a better mp3, 128kbs is rankable but this sounds bad even for that bitrate so if possible I'd search for a new higher quality one



  • Faded Utopia

    00:09:101 (1,2,3) - make this a repeat slider to be consistent with 00:02:041 (1) -


    00:28:879 (1,2) - This sounds like it could be mapped as a stream there's definitely drums there to support it I don't want to put a stream after the spinner

    00:30:657 (1,2,3,4) - Really short spacing between these two feels pretty awkward


    00:33:101 (8,9) - might as well make this a triple


    01:04:879 (1) - NC feels pretty unnecessary here

    01:11:990 (1) - ^


    01:12:435 (1) - There isn't a 1/3 beat in the song here make some difference here :3

    01:20:212 (4,5,1) - ctrl+g is feels a bit better imo


    01:26:990 (2) - This slider totally ignores the heavy drum beat at 01:27:101 - I'd consider either making it a 1/4 slider or a double make different rhythm to emphasize the ending

    02:08:435 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Looks awesome! :3

    02:24:324 (2) - slider starts on unimportant sound and ends on drum just make it a note on 02:24:435 - instead


    02:27:324 (2,3,4) - I dont think this fits the guitar rhythm very well, I'd make it like http://puu.sh/uyme8/089e107e8b.jpg or http://puu.sh/uymhr/44ebac8c69.jpg because right now 02:27:546 (3) - starts at an unimportant beat and ends at the guitar sounds which is very awkward
    02:34:435 (3,4,5) - ^
    02:41:546 (3,4,1) - ^ all fixed

    03:18:101 (3,1) - This just feels very awkward I'd change it so it flows a tad bit better A weird stream to show the incoming hard part?

    03:20:879 (1,2,3,4) - Why so low spacing?


    04:10:657 (13) - I would probably NC this since big spacing increase


    04:13:990 (4,5,6,1) - even spacing between these feels a bit odd since 04:14:212 (5) - is a lot quieter than 04:13:990 (4,6) - also 04:14:657 (1) - is a strong beat and should have quite a bit higher spacing


    04:19:101 - missing a note? There's a pretty big drum sound that I would definitely map if I were you, also very hard to hit streams that start on a blue tick
    04:20:879 - ^
    04:22:657 - ^
    04:24:435 - ^
    04:26:212 - ^
    and the rest in that section not follow the beat, just keep the same as 02:52:879 (1) - part

    04:39:324 (1,2,3) - same as start of map


    Nice map I really like the smooth streams
thank you!
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