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M4M from my q
Thanks for modding Winteright
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If you want to just do one diff, you need to make sure the drain time is over 5 minutes. Right now, it is just short of that
Consider custom combo colors
00:00:371 (1,2,3) - make equal distance?
00:05:705 (1,2,3) - Make same distances as 00:00:371 (1,2,3) - since same sound and intensity
00:16:705 (3) - Make two circles so it matches 00:11:370 (3,4) -
00:18:705 (5,8) - NC
00:20:370 (1) - sliders with 3 repeating sliders aren't very common in extra maps, consider making 4 circles instead
00:22:037 (6) - NC
00:22:954 (11) - Start this on big white tick, since that's where the sound actually begins
00:23:287 (12,13,14) - Emphasis is on the slider ends for these, so I would consider moving them 1/4 beat ahead in timeline
00:25:704 (9) - NC
Just for good measure, you should really never have any combo over 12-ish, unless they're all super connected together, like in a stacked stream. Otherwise, try NCing everytime you see a big white tick, or you want to emphasize something, like 00:27:704 (4) - here
00:28:454 (10,11,12,13) - Same as above with emphasis being on slider end
00:49:037 (4,5) - Spacing makes it very unpredictable. Since it is 1/1, place farther apart so you can tell
00:52:037 (5) - Always NC SV change
00:54:370 (4,5) - There's a guitar strum that you could map to in between these
01:25:704 (7,8,9) - Why is this a triple? It should be a 1/2 jump according to 01:24:370 (1,2) - here. In fact, it's even more emphasized, so you should make it an even bigger distance jump
01:30:370 (4,5,6) - Too circular of motion is kinda boring, especially with short distance jumps and during kiai
01:32:704 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - These jumps are sort of overmap. Even in you wanted to make all of these jumps, there are no spacing changes that indicate anything reflective of the music. Emphasized beats = higher distance jump, change in pitch direction (up and down musical scale) = change in jump direction/flow
01:36:954 (1,2,3,4) - four note streams are hard to read. Add a note before 1, there's a drum beat there anyways if you listen closely
01:40:871 (4,5) - There's a snare sound that you should map to in between these
01:43:370 (3,4) - Spacing is non reflective of timing
01:48:704 (3,4) - ^
01:54:037 (3,4) - This is even worse because the spacing gets smaller as the timing gets larger. That's a huge no no, especially in normal, non jumpy parts like this
01:56:370 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Tons of drumrolls and guitar riffs that you could map streams to, just a suggestion
01:57:787 (1) - End this either a 1/4 beat earlier or a 1/4 beat later
01:59:370 (2,3) - Not going to point out any more after this, but you should definitely check these spacing issues for readability
02:08:037 (5) - There's a sound on the big white tick in the middle of this slider that you should definitely do
02:10:037 (3,4) - This is an example of good spacing that you did
02:17:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - Imo these should be switched, as in it should go circle-slider-circle-slider-circle-slider instead of slider-circle-slider-circle-slider-circle. This is because right now, your slider ends are emphasized with the bass kick, while the cymbals aren't emphasized enough with just a circle. It''s called "odd-beat" in music if you want to search it up
02:29:704 (1,2) - Move these closer together so you can tell that there are only 1/4 beat in between these, otherwise it looks exactly like 02:28:704 (14,15) - these, which are 1/2 apart
02:52:870 (7) - The whole stream section starting here makes no sense. I get that there are guitar riffs in this section, but your streams and kicksliders don't do anything to help map to that. They seem to be just randomly placed according to your own whims without regards to the music.
The majority of this is just repeated issues as well. It's not a bad first map, but it is still quite a long ways away from ranked. I would use this as practice, map a lot of other maps and get lots of experience from getting mods and modding other maps, and if you still want to go for ranked, you should remap this entire map.
Consider custom combo colors
00:00:371 (1,2,3) - make equal distance?
00:05:705 (1,2,3) - Make same distances as 00:00:371 (1,2,3) - since same sound and intensity
00:16:705 (3) - Make two circles so it matches 00:11:370 (3,4) -
00:18:705 (5,8) - NC
00:20:370 (1) - sliders with 3 repeating sliders aren't very common in extra maps, consider making 4 circles instead
00:22:037 (6) - NC
00:22:954 (11) - Start this on big white tick, since that's where the sound actually begins
00:23:287 (12,13,14) - Emphasis is on the slider ends for these, so I would consider moving them 1/4 beat ahead in timeline
00:25:704 (9) - NC
Just for good measure, you should really never have any combo over 12-ish, unless they're all super connected together, like in a stacked stream. Otherwise, try NCing everytime you see a big white tick, or you want to emphasize something, like 00:27:704 (4) - here
00:28:454 (10,11,12,13) - Same as above with emphasis being on slider end
00:49:037 (4,5) - Spacing makes it very unpredictable. Since it is 1/1, place farther apart so you can tell
00:52:037 (5) - Always NC SV change
00:54:370 (4,5) - There's a guitar strum that you could map to in between these
01:25:704 (7,8,9) - Why is this a triple? It should be a 1/2 jump according to 01:24:370 (1,2) - here. In fact, it's even more emphasized, so you should make it an even bigger distance jump
01:30:370 (4,5,6) - Too circular of motion is kinda boring, especially with short distance jumps and during kiai
01:32:704 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - These jumps are sort of overmap. Even in you wanted to make all of these jumps, there are no spacing changes that indicate anything reflective of the music. Emphasized beats = higher distance jump, change in pitch direction (up and down musical scale) = change in jump direction/flow
01:36:954 (1,2,3,4) - four note streams are hard to read. Add a note before 1, there's a drum beat there anyways if you listen closely
01:40:871 (4,5) - There's a snare sound that you should map to in between these
01:43:370 (3,4) - Spacing is non reflective of timing
01:48:704 (3,4) - ^
01:54:037 (3,4) - This is even worse because the spacing gets smaller as the timing gets larger. That's a huge no no, especially in normal, non jumpy parts like this
01:56:370 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Tons of drumrolls and guitar riffs that you could map streams to, just a suggestion
01:57:787 (1) - End this either a 1/4 beat earlier or a 1/4 beat later
01:59:370 (2,3) - Not going to point out any more after this, but you should definitely check these spacing issues for readability
02:08:037 (5) - There's a sound on the big white tick in the middle of this slider that you should definitely do
02:10:037 (3,4) - This is an example of good spacing that you did
02:17:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - Imo these should be switched, as in it should go circle-slider-circle-slider-circle-slider instead of slider-circle-slider-circle-slider-circle. This is because right now, your slider ends are emphasized with the bass kick, while the cymbals aren't emphasized enough with just a circle. It''s called "odd-beat" in music if you want to search it up
02:29:704 (1,2) - Move these closer together so you can tell that there are only 1/4 beat in between these, otherwise it looks exactly like 02:28:704 (14,15) - these, which are 1/2 apart
02:52:870 (7) - The whole stream section starting here makes no sense. I get that there are guitar riffs in this section, but your streams and kicksliders don't do anything to help map to that. They seem to be just randomly placed according to your own whims without regards to the music.
The majority of this is just repeated issues as well. It's not a bad first map, but it is still quite a long ways away from ranked. I would use this as practice, map a lot of other maps and get lots of experience from getting mods and modding other maps, and if you still want to go for ranked, you should remap this entire map.
Thanks for modding Winteright
Topic Starter
Thanks you too for mod!Kami-senpai wrote:
M4M from my q
If you want to just do one diff, you need to make sure the drain time is over 5 minutes. Right now, it is just short of that
Consider custom combo colors
00:00:371 (1,2,3) - make equal distance? fixed
00:05:705 (1,2,3) - Make same distances as 00:00:371 (1,2,3) - since same sound and intensity fixed
00:16:705 (3) - Make two circles so it matches 00:11:370 (3,4) - fixed
00:18:705 (5,8) - NC fixed
00:20:370 (1) - sliders with 3 repeating sliders aren't very common in extra maps, consider making 4 circles instead fixed
00:22:037 (6) - NC fixed
00:22:954 (11) - Start this on big white tick, since that's where the sound actually begins there i hear a drum, that's why i set there a slider with fast repeating
00:23:287 (12,13,14) - Emphasis is on the slider ends for these, so I would consider moving them 1/4 beat ahead in timeline i think this doesn't make sense
00:25:704 (9) - NC fixed
Just for good measure, you should really never have any combo over 12-ish, unless they're all super connected together, like in a stacked stream. Otherwise, try NCing everytime you see a big white tick, or you want to emphasize something, like 00:27:704 (4) - here fixed, i remembered your advice
00:28:454 (10,11,12,13) - Same as above with emphasis being on slider end answer i asked - it doesn't make sence
00:49:037 (4,5) - Spacing makes it very unpredictable. Since it is 1/1, place farther apart so you can tell fixed
00:52:037 (5) - Always NC SV change fixed
00:54:370 (4,5) - There's a guitar strum that you could map to in between these fixed, in this part with guitar strum every circle (3) after slider have a triple
01:25:704 (7,8,9) - Why is this a triple? It should be a 1/2 jump according to 01:24:370 (1,2) - here. cause i hear a faster drum, i think it goes well with triple
In fact, it's even more emphasized, so you should make it an even bigger distance jump nah, there's a triple, so i see no reason to do it
01:30:370 (4,5,6) - Too circular of motion is kinda boring, especially with short distance jumps and during kiai fixed
01:32:704 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - These jumps are sort of overmap. Even in you wanted to make all of these jumps, there are no spacing changes that indicate anything reflective of the music. Emphasized beats = higher distance jump, change in pitch direction (up and down musical scale) = change in jump direction/flow fixed
01:36:954 (1,2,3,4) - four note streams are hard to read. Add a note before 1, there's a drum beat there anyways if you listen closely fixed, thanks
01:40:871 (4,5) - There's a snare sound that you should map to in between these fixed to loud snare
01:43:370 (3,4) - Spacing is non reflective of timing idk what are you talking about, but i take for granted
01:48:704 (3,4) - ^ fixed
01:54:037 (3,4) - This is even worse because the spacing gets smaller as the timing gets larger. That's a huge no no, especially in normal, non jumpy parts like this fixed
01:56:370 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Tons of drumrolls and guitar riffs that you could map streams to, just a suggestion i think that's good part with snare, so i will not change
01:57:787 (1) - End this either a 1/4 beat earlier or a 1/4 beat later fixed, i think
01:59:370 (2,3) - Not going to point out any more after this, but you should definitely check these spacing issues for readability fixed
02:08:037 (5) - There's a sound on the big white tick in the middle of this slider that you should definitely do idk how set a sound in a middle of slider, but thanks
02:10:037 (3,4) - This is an example of good spacing that you did thanks
02:17:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - Imo these should be switched, as in it should go circle-slider-circle-slider-circle-slider instead of slider-circle-slider-circle-slider-circle. This is because right now, your slider ends are emphasized with the bass kick, while the cymbals aren't emphasized enough with just a circle. It''s called "odd-beat" in music if you want to search it up fixed, huge thanks
02:29:704 (1,2) - Move these closer together so you can tell that there are only 1/4 beat in between these, otherwise it looks exactly like 02:28:704 (14,15) - these, which are 1/2 apart fixed a little bit
02:52:870 (7) - The whole stream section starting here makes no sense. I get that there are guitar riffs in this section, but your streams and kicksliders don't do anything to help map to that. They seem to be just randomly placed according to your own whims without regards to the music. i set slider with fast repeating and stream to prepare for a bit of the ultimate part, i'm sorry you feel that way
The majority of this is just repeated issues as well. It's not a bad first map, but it is still quite a long ways away from ranked. I would use this as practice, map a lot of other maps and get lots of experience from getting mods and modding other maps, and if you still want to go for ranked, you should remap this entire map. thanks for advice, i'll do my best
Thanks for modding Winteright
NM from my queue o/
- 3 breaks at the beggining : You should make low SV slider-art
- 00:21:704 (2,3,4,5,1) - Do alittle stream with this it looks better than a simple stack
- 00:46:037 (2,3,4) - What sound does it represents ?
- 00:48:704 (2,3,4) - ^
- 01:20:704 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - These jumps are too much spaced
- 01:31:537 (7,8,9,10,11) - These jumps are a little bit too spaced
- 02:05:037 (4) - Start a new combo here
- 02:20:454 - 02:21:704 - Map something here
- 02:53:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These kicksliders are too much spaced, the sounds in the music are close
- 03:43:370 - Move the 7 close to the slider, the 8 to the 9, the 9 to the eleven and make a wide angle with 8,9,10 and come back to the next slider (11 and 9 place)
- 03:52:537 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Too much spaced and hard to read for average players and looks bad
- 03:55:204 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Too much spaced and looks bad
- 03:57:870 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - ^
- 04:03:370 (3,4,5,6,7) - Too much spaced
- 04:12:370 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - You can make a long stream with this
- 05:08:954 (1) - 10 seconds spinner, use a long slider like at the end of caramel heaven, long spinners are tiring
- 10 seconds of the audio are silence, remove them
Topic Starter
Thanks for mod!Gokateigo wrote:
NM from my queue o/
- 3 breaks at the beggining : You should make low SV slider-art
- 00:21:704 (2,3,4,5,1) - Do alittle stream with this it looks better than a simple stack fixed to pattern with 1 slider and 2 circle
- 00:46:037 (2,3,4) - What sound does it represents ? idk what you think about it
- 00:48:704 (2,3,4) - ^ fixed
- 01:20:704 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - These jumps are too much spaced fixed, jumps removed
- 01:31:537 (7,8,9,10,11) - These jumps are a little bit too spaced fixed, jumps removed
- 02:05:037 (4) - Start a new combo here fixed
- 02:20:454 - 02:21:704 - Map something here i see no reason to do it, cause slider-art on the guitar riffs will look out of place
- 02:53:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These kicksliders are too much spaced, the sounds in the music are close fixed
- 03:43:370 - Move the 7 close to the slider, the 8 to the 9, the 9 to the eleven and make a wide angle with 8,9,10 and come back to the next slider (11 and 9 place) fixed, i think
- 03:52:537 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Too much spaced and hard to read for average players and looks bad fixed, jumps removed
- 03:55:204 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Too much spaced and looks bad fixed, jumps removed
- 03:57:870 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - ^ fixed, jumps removed
- 04:03:370 (3,4,5,6,7) - Too much spaced fixed
- 04:12:370 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - You can make a long stream with this why not?
- 05:08:954 (1) - 10 seconds spinner, use a long slider like at the end of caramel heaven, long spinners are tiring fixed to pattern with 2 slider on tick
- 10 seconds of the audio are silence, remove them late to cut mp3, cause all notes will spaced
hi, as promised on my queue
first general thing i noticed is that u are not new comboing every big white tick and u should be doing that otherwise it will not be consistent and ull get like up to 15 combos, moving on to the details now:
-00:00:371 (1,2) - can u add more spacing for these ones, felt awkward to have this pattern 00:11:038 (1,2,3,4) - a bit jumpy and not that one
same goes for 00:05:705 (1,2,3) -
-00:20:704 (2) - stack tail on 00:20:205 (4) - http://puu.sh/tJxSW/5a92be81a6.jpg
-00:21:870 - triplet ignored intentionally?
-00:22:704 (3) - this one needs more spacing then this 00:22:870 (4) - and btw what is this spacing 00:22:870 (4,5) - ??? having an insane jump like that on a 1/4 snap lol
-00:25:704 (1,2,3,4,5) - same here the distance between that stream and the kicksliders is unexpectable, you cant do that since player will think theres a at least a 1/2 gap between them, its okey to have that spacing between 2 kicksliders, but having them between a complete stacked stream and a kickslider is a big no
-00:27:204 - i can hear another missed triplet
-00:32:537 - ^
-00:38:870 (7,1) - same about this one its totally unexpected i mean why didnt u stack 00:38:870 (7) - on the stream as well?
-00:46:537 - why is this note ignored? undermapping feels rly weird so u better avoid that, same with the triplets i mentionned
-00:53:204 (7,8) - should try this pattern better for these 2 http://puu.sh/tJyyg/a4bd59c0f8.jpg as to give some more spacing to the imortant claps and cymbal
-00:58:704 (14) - instead of stacking, dont u think making it a jump should work better since its obviously the loudest sound in this part, so maybe should try this http://puu.sh/tJyDw/50a2de423c.jpg
-01:03:620 (1) - start this slider at 01:03:537 - and remove 01:03:537 (9) - ofc
-01:08:870 - another missing note
-01:11:037 (9,10,11,12) - why spacing here suddenly descreased a LOT to the point that it is overlapping?
-01:15:204 (6) - new combo for sv change
-01:20:204 (6) - ^
-01:28:370 (8) - just do sth like this http://puu.sh/tJyXa/0a33733148.jpg, avoiding that cymbal feels pretty weird
-01:31:037 (6) - nc
-01:38:704 (6,7) - u cant do this, not with this spacing, do this instead http://puu.sh/tJz19/b6387cc6ec.jpg
-01:40:371 (2,3) - ctrl+g for rythm and adjust their placements
-01:41:037 - note
-01:44:037 (6,7) - another spacing paradox pls fix
-01:51:370 (4,5) - ctrl+g for following guitar
-02:17:537 (11,2,4,5) - concerning all these sliders, their tails are those which need to be clicckable lul
-02:41:370 - put another circle there stacked on 02:41:454 (4) -
-02:42:037 - ye
-04:20:870 (9,10) - ctrl+g
-04:29:537 (5) - nc
should focus on spcaing,rythms and emphasis more then anything on this map,i didnt mention other things like structure and the usage of sliders since i think the others are more important in general
first general thing i noticed is that u are not new comboing every big white tick and u should be doing that otherwise it will not be consistent and ull get like up to 15 combos, moving on to the details now:
-00:00:371 (1,2) - can u add more spacing for these ones, felt awkward to have this pattern 00:11:038 (1,2,3,4) - a bit jumpy and not that one
same goes for 00:05:705 (1,2,3) -
-00:20:704 (2) - stack tail on 00:20:205 (4) - http://puu.sh/tJxSW/5a92be81a6.jpg
-00:21:870 - triplet ignored intentionally?
-00:22:704 (3) - this one needs more spacing then this 00:22:870 (4) - and btw what is this spacing 00:22:870 (4,5) - ??? having an insane jump like that on a 1/4 snap lol
-00:25:704 (1,2,3,4,5) - same here the distance between that stream and the kicksliders is unexpectable, you cant do that since player will think theres a at least a 1/2 gap between them, its okey to have that spacing between 2 kicksliders, but having them between a complete stacked stream and a kickslider is a big no
-00:27:204 - i can hear another missed triplet
-00:32:537 - ^
-00:38:870 (7,1) - same about this one its totally unexpected i mean why didnt u stack 00:38:870 (7) - on the stream as well?
-00:46:537 - why is this note ignored? undermapping feels rly weird so u better avoid that, same with the triplets i mentionned
-00:53:204 (7,8) - should try this pattern better for these 2 http://puu.sh/tJyyg/a4bd59c0f8.jpg as to give some more spacing to the imortant claps and cymbal
-00:58:704 (14) - instead of stacking, dont u think making it a jump should work better since its obviously the loudest sound in this part, so maybe should try this http://puu.sh/tJyDw/50a2de423c.jpg
-01:03:620 (1) - start this slider at 01:03:537 - and remove 01:03:537 (9) - ofc
-01:08:870 - another missing note
-01:11:037 (9,10,11,12) - why spacing here suddenly descreased a LOT to the point that it is overlapping?
-01:15:204 (6) - new combo for sv change
-01:20:204 (6) - ^
-01:28:370 (8) - just do sth like this http://puu.sh/tJyXa/0a33733148.jpg, avoiding that cymbal feels pretty weird
-01:31:037 (6) - nc
-01:38:704 (6,7) - u cant do this, not with this spacing, do this instead http://puu.sh/tJz19/b6387cc6ec.jpg
-01:40:371 (2,3) - ctrl+g for rythm and adjust their placements
-01:41:037 - note
-01:44:037 (6,7) - another spacing paradox pls fix
-01:51:370 (4,5) - ctrl+g for following guitar
-02:17:537 (11,2,4,5) - concerning all these sliders, their tails are those which need to be clicckable lul
-02:41:370 - put another circle there stacked on 02:41:454 (4) -
-02:42:037 - ye
-04:20:870 (9,10) - ctrl+g
-04:29:537 (5) - nc
should focus on spcaing,rythms and emphasis more then anything on this map,i didnt mention other things like structure and the usage of sliders since i think the others are more important in general
Topic Starter
Thanks for mod! I'll do my bestHB24 wrote:
hi, as promised on my queue
first general thing i noticed is that u are not new comboing every big white tick and u should be doing that otherwise it will not be consistent and ull get like up to 15 combos i'm working on it, thank you for comment
moving on to the details now:
-00:00:371 (1,2) - can u add more spacing for these ones, felt awkward to have this pattern fixed, reduce slider velocity on 1.20x
-00:11:038 (1,2,3,4) - a bit jumpy and not that one fixed, i think
same goes for 00:05:705 (1,2,3) - yep, another one
-00:20:704 (2) - stack tail on 00:20:205 (4) - http://puu.sh/tJxSW/5a92be81a6.jpg added
-00:21:870 - triplet ignored intentionally? slightly changed the distance of circles, cause idk
-00:22:704 (3) - this one needs more spacing then this 00:22:870 (4) - and btw what is this spacing 00:22:870 (4,5) - ??? having an insane jump like that on a 1/4 snap lol fixed, reduce the distance
-00:25:704 (1,2,3,4,5) - same here the distance between that stream and the kicksliders is unexpectable, you cant do that since player will think theres a at least a 1/2 gap between them, its okey to have that spacing between 2 kicksliders, but having them between a complete stacked stream and a kickslider is a big no fixed, reduce the distant and cut sliders (5,6)
-00:27:204 - i can hear another missed triplet i see no reason to set there triplet, i think a good well with this result
-00:32:537 - ^ fixed to slider+2 circle
-00:38:870 (7,1) - same about this one its totally unexpected i mean why didnt u stack fixed, stream removed 00:38:870 (7) - on the stream as well? if i placed to stream which make after post the answer most players feeling a disorientation
-00:46:537 - why is this note ignored? undermapping feels rly weird so u better avoid that, same with the triplets i mentionned for the symmetry, cause this section duration a 20 sec and non-stop pushing by fingers on your keyboard are tiring
-00:53:204 (7,8) - should try this pattern better for these 2 http://puu.sh/tJyyg/a4bd59c0f8.jpg as to give some more spacing to the imortant claps and cymbal added, thanks
-00:58:704 (14) - instead of stacking, dont u think making it a jump should work better since its obviously the loudest sound in this part, so maybe should try this http://puu.sh/tJyDw/50a2de423c.jpg added, thanks
-01:03:620 (1) - start this slider at 01:03:537 - and remove 01:03:537 (9) - ofc fixed
-01:08:870 - another missing note fixed
-01:11:037 (9,10,11,12) - why spacing here suddenly descreased a LOT to the point that it is overlapping? fixed, thanks
-01:15:204 (6) - new combo for sv change fixed
-01:20:204 (6) - ^ fixed
-01:28:370 (8) - just do sth like this http://puu.sh/tJyXa/0a33733148.jpg, avoiding that cymbal feels pretty weird added, thanks
-01:31:037 (6) - nc fixed
-01:38:704 (6,7) - u cant do this, not with this spacing, do this instead http://puu.sh/tJz19/b6387cc6ec.jpg added, thanks
-01:40:371 (2,3) - ctrl+g for rythm and adjust their placements fixed, i hope that should help
-01:41:037 - note fixed
-01:44:037 (6,7) - another spacing paradox pls fix fixed, thanks
-01:51:370 (4,5) - ctrl+g for following guitar fixed, huge thanks
-02:17:537 (11,2,4,5) - concerning all these sliders, their tails are those which need to be clicckable lul fixed, to me for a long time the idea comes to change anything
-02:41:370 - put another circle there stacked on 02:41:454 (4) - added, thanks
-02:42:037 - ye fixed
-04:20:870 (9,10) - ctrl+g fixed
-04:29:537 (5) - nc fixed
should focus on spcaing,rythms and emphasis more then anything on this map,i didnt mention other things like structure and the usage of sliders since i think the others are more important in general HUUUGE thanks to advice
Hey it's me and my M4M, from my mod queue :3
In general flow and rhythm were the issues I noticed the most. It was kinda hard to play because you often switched the instrument you mapped, therefore making the map less predictable and hard to play.
00:19:037 (3) - You mapped all sliders straight just made this one curved for no reason :3
00:19:705 (1,2,3,4) - Here you should map the same 1 slider 2 circles combo you did on the part before because the music doesn't change up until 00:20:370 (1) -
00:26:370 (7,8) - A slider would fit better here imo :3
02:33:204 (5) - 02:34:370 (11) - I think you forgot to delete a note there
00:24:704 (5) - This slider is not snapped and ends on a red point which is both weird.
00:31:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This slider doesn't fit the music. The way you mapped it, with the more spaced stuff at the end, doesn't make sense.
00:30:787 (9) - 00:31:620 (7) - The two Inherited Points are not snapped (maybe there're more)
00:45:537 (1) - Some of your slider end on a red point, they shouldn't
02:16:537 (8,9,10) - If you put these half a beat later they would fit better
02:59:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - The jumps you mapped didn't fit the music. You hit-sounded the parts where jumps were appropriate so try to make these 02:59:536 (6) - 03:00:036 (3) - 03:00:536 (8) - 03:01:037 (4) - 03:01:704 (2) - the new jumps otherwise the jumps won't make sense.
03:40:204 (6) - Too many slider points
General thing if you compare 03:54:870 (1,5) - you/I can see that you have used two difffrent sliders, try to map the same sliders for the same thing just by copy pasting them so one wouldn't be "sharper" than another.
05:11:370 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1) - Pretty sure 0,2 SV is not allowed xD
Well that's it for now, if you have any questions feel free to ask :3
In general flow and rhythm were the issues I noticed the most. It was kinda hard to play because you often switched the instrument you mapped, therefore making the map less predictable and hard to play.
00:19:037 (3) - You mapped all sliders straight just made this one curved for no reason :3
00:19:705 (1,2,3,4) - Here you should map the same 1 slider 2 circles combo you did on the part before because the music doesn't change up until 00:20:370 (1) -
00:26:370 (7,8) - A slider would fit better here imo :3
02:33:204 (5) - 02:34:370 (11) - I think you forgot to delete a note there
00:24:704 (5) - This slider is not snapped and ends on a red point which is both weird.
00:31:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This slider doesn't fit the music. The way you mapped it, with the more spaced stuff at the end, doesn't make sense.
00:30:787 (9) - 00:31:620 (7) - The two Inherited Points are not snapped (maybe there're more)
00:45:537 (1) - Some of your slider end on a red point, they shouldn't
02:16:537 (8,9,10) - If you put these half a beat later they would fit better
02:59:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - The jumps you mapped didn't fit the music. You hit-sounded the parts where jumps were appropriate so try to make these 02:59:536 (6) - 03:00:036 (3) - 03:00:536 (8) - 03:01:037 (4) - 03:01:704 (2) - the new jumps otherwise the jumps won't make sense.
03:40:204 (6) - Too many slider points
General thing if you compare 03:54:870 (1,5) - you/I can see that you have used two difffrent sliders, try to map the same sliders for the same thing just by copy pasting them so one wouldn't be "sharper" than another.
05:11:370 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1) - Pretty sure 0,2 SV is not allowed xD
Well that's it for now, if you have any questions feel free to ask :3
Topic Starter
thank you for mod! it's very helpful.Lumario wrote:
Hey it's me and my M4M, from my mod queue :3
In general flow and rhythm were the issues I noticed the most. It was kinda hard to play because you often switched the instrument you mapped, therefore making the map less predictable and hard to play. ok, i will try to remedy the situation, thanks you for comment
00:19:037 (3) - You mapped all sliders straight just made this one curved for no reason :3 fixed
00:19:705 (1,2,3,4) - Here you should map the same 1 slider 2 circles combo you did on the part before because the music doesn't change up until 00:20:370 (1) - fixed, i forgot about this part
00:26:370 (7,8) - A slider would fit better here imo :3 fixed, stream remove
02:33:204 (5) - 02:34:370 (11) - I think you forgot to delete a note there
00:24:704 (5) - This slider is not snapped and ends on a red point which is both weird. thank god..
00:31:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This slider doesn't fit the music. The way you mapped it, with the more spaced stuff at the end, doesn't make sense. i'll remove it, thanks
00:30:787 (9) - 00:31:620 (7) - The two Inherited Points are not snapped (maybe there're more) fixed, thanks
00:45:537 (1) - Some of your slider end on a red point, they shouldn't
02:16:537 (8,9,10) - If you put these half a beat later they would fit better
02:59:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - The jumps you mapped didn't fit the music. You hit-sounded the parts where jumps were appropriate so try to make these 02:59:536 (6) - 03:00:036 (3) - 03:00:536 (8) - 03:01:037 (4) - 03:01:704 (2) - the new jumps otherwise the jumps won't make sense. fixed, stream remove
03:40:204 (6) - Too many slider points fixed
General thing if you compare 03:54:870 (1,5) - you/I can see that you have used two difffrent sliders, try to map the same sliders for the same thing just by copy pasting them so one wouldn't be "sharper" than another. fixed
05:11:370 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1) - Pretty sure 0,2 SV is not allowed xD thanks
Well that's it for now, if you have any questions feel free to ask :3
Extra Stage
00:00:704 (3) - personally i dont like these 45 degree angled sliders but its ok, just everyone thinks is ugly
00:21:037 (3,4) - really large spacing, seems out of place. reduce.
00:27:204 (2,3) - really small spacing when music is same, increase.
00:38:704 (6,1) - ugly overlap, change place of 1 or 6
00:41:204 (1,1,1) - un NC these sliders, makes players think its 1/3
00:42:204 (6,7,8) - all have same sound and should have same emphasis, but 6 and 7 are way too close together.
00:44:370 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - move this pattern like this for neatness http://i.imgur.com/DxXfg0g.png
00:46:537 no note here?
00:49:204 ^????????
00:53:870 ^??? wtf
00:56:537 ^....
00:59:204 ^ ok
01:04:704 (3) - change to slider because there is sound on red tick after
01:05:037 (4) - ^
01:07:537 this no note issue is appearing a lot.
im done modding for now, gl on ranking
00:21:037 (3,4) - really large spacing, seems out of place. reduce.
00:27:204 (2,3) - really small spacing when music is same, increase.
00:38:704 (6,1) - ugly overlap, change place of 1 or 6
00:41:204 (1,1,1) - un NC these sliders, makes players think its 1/3
00:42:204 (6,7,8) - all have same sound and should have same emphasis, but 6 and 7 are way too close together.
00:44:370 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - move this pattern like this for neatness http://i.imgur.com/DxXfg0g.png
00:46:537 no note here?
00:49:204 ^????????
00:53:870 ^??? wtf
00:56:537 ^....
00:59:204 ^ ok
01:04:704 (3) - change to slider because there is sound on red tick after
01:05:037 (4) - ^
01:07:537 this no note issue is appearing a lot.
im done modding for now, gl on ranking
Topic Starter
thanks for mod! gl tooZel wrote:
00:00:704 (3) - personally i dont like these 45 degree angled sliders but its ok, just everyone thinks is ugly fixed
00:21:037 (3,4) - really large spacing, seems out of place. reduce. fixed on small distance
00:27:204 (2,3) - really small spacing when music is same, increase. fixed
00:38:704 (6,1) - ugly overlap, change place of 1 or 6 fixed
00:41:204 (1,1,1) - un NC these sliders, makes players think its 1/3 fixed, nc set so that looks per 2 sliders (1,2,1,2)
00:42:204 (6,7,8) - all have same sound and should have same emphasis, but 6 and 7 are way too close together. fixed
00:44:370 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - move this pattern like this for neatness http://i.imgur.com/DxXfg0g.png fixed, i think
00:46:537 no note here? fixed
00:49:204 ^???????? fixed
00:53:870 ^??? wtf fixed, thanks
00:56:537 ^.... ^
00:59:204 ^ ok ^
01:04:704 (3) - change to slider because there is sound on red tick after added
01:05:037 (4) - ^ denied, cause there circle (2,3,4) is a interactive, based on music
01:07:537 this no note issue is appearing a lot. now there notes are not overlap
im done modding for now, gl on ranking
Hi. From Usamin's STD modding queue
Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
00:21:537 - 00:33:537 - green sections unsnappedTitle = [Fall of Fall ~ The Door Into Summer]. is do not need romanised title
[Extra Stage]00:21:954 - 00:27:287 - there is a sound that can't be ignored. i want you to add note here. if you want to feel the feeling of single beat(1/2), add 1/4 slider00:29:704 (3,5) - I worry about overlap00:31:537 (6) - please add new combo to point of difference distance snap00:32:204 (1,3) - feel so bad overlap. it's not beautiful.00:38:870 (7,1) - umm... delete 00:38:870 (7) - and pull up 00:38:954 (1,2,3,4) - these00:41:370 (1) - is do not need new combo01:14:870 (5) - replace stack again01:16:037 (5) - please same as 00:31:537 (6) - 01:20:204 (1) - 01:31:037 (1) - 02:36:370 (1) - 04:29:537 (1) - Please do not use half-speed sliders mixing with normal speed sliders. it must be clearly recognizable, it should not interfere with game-play.
02:08:037 (1) - 01:36:704 - add note here02:06:037 (9) - new combo02:53:620 (12,1) - it's a bad. 02:54:120 (2) - it's a bad too. in this part repeat 4 times instead of 3 times
like this03:05:287 (8,1) - 03:08:954 (8,9) - 03:23:787 (4,5) - 03:24:953 (6,7) - 03:51:704 (7,8) - 04:06:870 (6,1) - 04:18:954 (7,1) - 04:56:704 (5,6) - 04:57:204 (11,12) - 04:57:454 (14,1) - is too far03:35:037 (9) - new combo03:39:204 (2,3,4) - it is so hard to reading. make a stack or new combo to everywhere03:39:454 (4,5) - Unrankable issue. slider's repeat and end point is unsnapped03:49:037 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - is 1/304:24:370 (1,1,1) - it's hard to reading. make a jump04:48:204 (7,8,9,10,11) - is same as 00:38:870 (7,1) - is not fit this music. most music should not fit on the blue line.04:25:704 (1) - Unrankable issue. slider's end point is unsnapped05:08:704 (1) - please make this slider silent. is not fit this part. 05:11:370 (1) - ~ compared to that this part is fine. 05:11:037 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - please make it a little different. It's too boring.
02:08:037 (1) - 01:36:704 - add note here02:06:037 (9) - new combo02:53:620 (12,1) - it's a bad. 02:54:120 (2) - it's a bad too. in this part repeat 4 times instead of 3 times
like this03:05:287 (8,1) - 03:08:954 (8,9) - 03:23:787 (4,5) - 03:24:953 (6,7) - 03:51:704 (7,8) - 04:06:870 (6,1) - 04:18:954 (7,1) - 04:56:704 (5,6) - 04:57:204 (11,12) - 04:57:454 (14,1) - is too far03:35:037 (9) - new combo03:39:204 (2,3,4) - it is so hard to reading. make a stack or new combo to everywhere03:39:454 (4,5) - Unrankable issue. slider's repeat and end point is unsnapped03:49:037 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - is 1/304:24:370 (1,1,1) - it's hard to reading. make a jump04:48:204 (7,8,9,10,11) - is same as 00:38:870 (7,1) - is not fit this music. most music should not fit on the blue line.04:25:704 (1) - Unrankable issue. slider's end point is unsnapped05:08:704 (1) - please make this slider silent. is not fit this part. 05:11:370 (1) - ~ compared to that this part is fine. 05:11:037 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - please make it a little different. It's too boring.
Topic Starter
thanks for mod! gl on your kawaii mapAbe Nana wrote:
Hi. From Usamin's STD modding queue
Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]00:21:537 - 00:33:537 - green sections unsnapped fixedTitle = [Fall of Fall ~ The Door Into Summer]. is do not need romanised title fixed
[Extra Stage]00:21:954 - 00:27:287 - there is a sound that can't be ignored. i want you to add note here. if you want to feel the feeling of single beat(1/2), add 1/4 slider fixed, i think00:29:704 (3,5) - I worry about overlap fixed00:31:537 (6) - please add new combo to point of difference distance snap i'll remove stream, but thanks00:32:204 (1,3) - feel so bad overlap. it's not beautiful. fixed00:38:870 (7,1) - umm... delete 00:38:870 (7) - and pull up 00:38:954 (1,2,3,4) - these fixed00:41:370 (1) - is do not need new combo fixed01:14:870 (5) - replace stack again fixed01:16:037 (5) - please same as 00:31:537 (6) fixed01:20:204 (1) - 01:31:037 (1) - 02:36:370 (1) - 04:29:537 (1) - Please do not use half-speed sliders mixing with normal speed sliders. it must be clearly recognizable, it should not interfere with game-play. fixed, thanks
02:08:037 (1) - there i will not change, cause there heard a guitar long note, that slider a good well with them01:36:704 - add note here added02:06:037 (9) - new combo fixed02:53:620 (12,1) - it's a bad. 02:54:120 (2) - it's a bad too. in this part repeat 4 times instead of 3 times
like this fixed03:05:287 (8,1) - 03:08:954 (8,9) - 03:23:787 (4,5) - 03:24:953 (6,7) - 03:51:704 (7,8) - 04:06:870 (6,1) - 04:18:954 (7,1) - 04:56:704 (5,6) - 04:57:204 (11,12) - 04:57:454 (14,1) - is too far fixed, huge thanks03:35:037 (9) - new combo fixed03:39:204 (2,3,4) - it is so hard to reading. make a stack or new combo to everywhere03:39:454 (4,5) - Unrankable issue. slider's repeat and end point is unsnapped fixed03:49:037 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - is 1/3 fixed04:24:370 (1,1,1) - it's hard to reading. make a jump fixed04:48:204 (7,8,9,10,11) - is same as 00:38:870 (7,1) - is not fit this music. most music should not fit on the blue line. fixed, thanks04:25:704 (1) - Unrankable issue. slider's end point is unsnapped fixed05:08:704 (1) - please make this slider silent. is not fit this part. 05:11:370 (1) - ~ compared to that this part is fine. thanks05:11:037 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - please make it a little different. It's too boring. fixed a little different