1. Easy (1.41 stars, 85 notes)
2. Hard (3.01 stars, 224 notes)
3. Insane (4.03 stars, 291 notes)
4. Normal (1.84 stars, 137 notes)

IamKwaN wrote:

hao

Unicode Title: INVOKE -インヴォーク-（TV opening version）
Romanised Title: INVOKE (TV opening version)
Artist: T.M.Revolution
Source: 機動戦士ガンダムSEED

References:
http://media.vgm.io/albums/19/33391/333 ... 933239.jpg
http://www.tm-revolution.com/disco/archive/?ESCL-9090
http://www.sunrise-inc.co.jp/works/list ... hp?cid=153

good luck!

pife1 wrote:

Hi M4M I have to say this map is very well, I will give a star

General

The preview point should be the core song, I mean the preview should be KIAI time or the choir part
//well, if you watched this anime you will find that the start part is very impressive.

01:28:067 (1) - why the change of combo , this is the end of map
//i nc every /every two bar lines.

The next notes I suggest use finish
00:45:435 00:47:409 - 00:47:804 - 00:48:199 - 00:48:593 -
//hmm.. i add finish according to music.

Easy

00:17:014 (3) - in my opinion this note could be more large like in the normal
//both choices are okay.

00:25:304 - missing clap in the slidertick
00:55:304 - ^
00:59:646 (1) - ^
01:01:225 (2) - ^
01:28:067 (1) - ^
01:10:699 (3) - ^
01:15:436 (1,2) - ^
//custom hs in sliderticks are not necessary.

And this is everything sorry for don't be a large mod but in my opinion this is a good map with few fails

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
Inconsistence Widescreen Support on Hard.
//ok

Add "opening" to Tags.
//ok

Set custom combo color? I just suppose current one is default set, but not big problem.
//ok

Set the Preview Point at 00:50:172?
//well, if you watched this anime you will find that the start part is very impressive.

I'm bother in KIAI TIME since so similar placement and rhythm are repeated.
//i don't think similar rhythm is a issue in kiai part, since the rhythm in music does similar.

[Easy]
Hit Sound
Same as Insane.
[Normal]
Placement
00:33:001(4) Bent tnis slider to the next note, and it is to be symmetrical at 00:34:383.

SPOILER

//maybe current flow is better imo.

Rhythm
00:23:725 Remove kick better to follow the vocal since you already did it in this part Continuously. So keep the consistence.
//changed a bit.

00:54:909~01:02:014 I suppose it is a bit hard for Normal diff, put a break on this part?
01:10:699~01:17:804 ^
//this rhythm is common in Normal diff, i can even FL SS it in 1PC.

Hit Sound
same as Insane.

[Hard]
Placement
00:48:593(1,2,3) Replace these notes to be regular pattern, current way isn't good for me especially from (2) to (3).
//ok

Hit Sound
Same as Insane

[Insane]

Placement
00:21:356(7,1,2) nazi, you can make this blanket more beautiful.
00:33:001(1) Just bent a bit and this flow would be more nice.

SPOILER

//i don't agree.

00:38:527(3,4,1) I suppose this flow looks weird for playing, especially (4). Here is a just example, you don't have to copy this but I recommend that you should remap better.

SPOILER

//replaced.

Rhythm
00:23:330(1) I suppose two notes would be suitable than 1/2 to follow the vocal slider since the vocal hears clearly.
//ok

01:20:172(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) You can put a stream on here to follow the instrumental, this 1/2 note placing isn't suitable and easy for Insane.
//in fact it's an light insane, so this rhythm is ok.

Hit Sound
00:12:277(1) The first sound I suppose finish would be fine to be suitable for the song. So add finish at head.
//ok

00:31:225(1) ^
00:37:541(1) ^
00:47:804(3) ^
00:45:435(1) Add finish.
//these is unnecessary, i can't hear finish in music.

00:58:856(4) Add whistle at head.
01:14:646(4) ^
//ok

Good Luck.

StanDaMan809 wrote:

Hello! Here from my modding queue

Insane

1. 00:21:751 (1,2) - This movement is uncomfortable
   //it's very comfortable
   
2. 00:23:330 (1,2,3,4) - These sounds aren't similar enough to warrant the doubles
   //umm... let me think
   
3. 01:03:396 (2) - Move this note down, it makes the movement better
   //to emphasize - 01:03:593 (3) -
   
4. 01:04:383 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:20:173 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I find that the song supports a stream more on these parts, as that stream sound is very strong, but you don't have to change it.
   //yeah, both methods are okay.

Hard

1. 00:46:225 (3) - 00:46:620 (4) - If you make these repeating single sliders, it would go much better with the song
   //current rhythm is ok imo

Normal

1. I find this diff to be a bit undermapped. You can and should make it harder, that gap between Hard and Normal is a bit glaring.
   //mainly 1/2 gap in kiai part while mainly 1/1 in other parts, this gap is okay if we check Easy and Hard diff.
   
2. 00:24:712 (6) - 01:03:396 (4) - 01:19:185 (4) - A hitcircle would go well here.
   //?

Easy

1. Consider increasing the tickrate.
   //nope, 1 is common used.
   
2. Stick to a 1/1 beat snap divisor for EVERYTHING. The sliders that repeated on 1/2 beats ruined the rhythm.
   //nope, 1/2 maps the vocal.
   
3. 00:24:909 (1) - 00:31:225 (1) - Shorten these slider to the white beat before them.
   //nope.
   
4. 00:30:041 (2) - 00:36:356 (2) - 00:42:672 (2) - Shorten these sliders to half of their length. Consider adding hitcircles after them. Slider spam is tiring for a newbie.
   //nope, i do this on almost all my easy diffs.

Sorry for short mod, I don't really like the song.
Good luck!

_Yiiiii wrote:

M4M
玛德这vocal好猥琐
//呃

Insane

00:13:462 (7,1) - 00:15:041 (7,1) - 这种地方的间距虽说硬挑错也不能说不行，但是这种小间距对重音的强调一般都是和上一次移动不带停顿的时候才用，这里kick slider接小间距感觉像强行地似的，不太好，推荐把间距弄大。
//这个..因为是1/4gap呐，这种地方距离近还是远好像是看个人喜好的

00:13:462 (7,7) - 这俩是这一段里唯有的两个折两下的，建议与折一下的区分一下，比如说转90°什么的，至少看起来要不一样。
//嗯可以

00:27:672 (6) - 建议Ctrl+G
00:44:054 (2,3) - ^
//这两个感觉还好

00:47:804 (3) - 改成俩1/4滑条吧，否则后面副指起连打对这个难度有点不合适。
//哎呀，这个是故意弄出这种效果来的

01:06:258 (2,4) - 这个叠受了stack leniecy的影响，弄得不好看了，建议改个排列。
//干脆把堆叠系数改了

Hard

00:39:317 (1) - 中间那个重音还是跟一下的好，现在这样超别扭，既不对鼓点也不对vocal。
//不对这个跟了vocal的

00:48:593 (1,2) - 统一一下形状吧。
//可以

01:24:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这样大批量复制节奏打击感特别弱，推荐换一下花样。
//这个我觉得确实挺好的呀...换形状反而怪怪的

Normal

00:23:133 (3,4,5) - player:突然被糊一脸1/2，突然miss，突然死亡，突然删图。 啊，意思就是这是非kiai段唯一一坨1/2，不太好。
//因为这里的人声比较特别嘛..主歌里也是仅此一处的

01:00:238 (2,1) - 丑... 把01:01:225 (1) - 弄成上凸的吧，和之后一样。
//我觉得还好..

Easy

01:10:699 (3) - 要么弯的明显点，要么直，现在这样是要逼死强迫症的...
//这个不是问题..有的人全图都是这种滑条

Easy这么简单，我挑不出别的问题了...

gl~

1. 00:25:896 - 建议加个音效．毕竟本来00:25:501 - 更重，加个音效强调下会更舒服
   00:32:212 - ……后面还有
   
2. 00:47:014 (1,2) - 这里可以拆开1/1强调一下了，要进kiai的渐强．一个1/1滑条加上一个1/1折返滑条就可．毕竟你kiai里是有连续3个clickable这种东西的，这里先加点节奏也比较舒服
   
3. 01:04:383 - 即使为了变化节奏我也觉得这里要clickable

1. 00:13:067 (3,4,5) - 不知道这里你是为什么突然note赛爆．我听到最明显的是背景旋律，分别在00:12:277 - 00:12:672 - 00:13:067 - 三处有音，而00:13:462 - 没有，也就是说前两个是短音，你用了两个1/2滑条很好，最后一个长音，我觉得最好的跟法应该是1/1滑条．
   00:14:646 (3,4,5) - 这里也是．00:16:225 (3,4,5) - 这里可以keep，因为这小节变成4个音了．
   
2. 00:19:975 (4,1) - 虽说是大白线，但其实这里鼓也没啥区别，而且从人声感觉上来讲也是00:18:593 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 这样两小节是一句话，所以既然你前面00:19:185 (2,3) - 都是跟的vocal，这里突然变成00:19:975 (4,1) - 这个节奏就非常奇怪．建议vocal跟到底．00:26:291 (4) - 等处你也是这么处理的

1. 01:25:501 (5,6) - 01:27:080 (5,6) - 我觉得ds不该这么小啊

Pata-Mon wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:25:896 - 建议加个音效．毕竟本来00:25:501 - 更重，加个音效强调下会更舒服
   00:32:212 - ……后面还有
   //可以
   
2. 00:47:014 (1,2) - 这里可以拆开1/1强调一下了，要进kiai的渐强．一个1/1滑条加上一个1/1折返滑条就可．毕竟你kiai里是有连续3个clickable这种东西的，这里先加点节奏也比较舒服
   //现在这样已经有点渐进了呀，之前都没有圈的
   
3. 01:04:383 - 即使为了变化节奏我也觉得这里要clickable
   //因为如果那里弄成圈的话总觉得 - 01:04:580 - 少个东西

[Hard]

1. 00:13:067 (3,4,5) - 不知道这里你是为什么突然note赛爆．我听到最明显的是背景旋律，分别在00:12:277 - 00:12:672 - 00:13:067 - 三处有音，而00:13:462 - 没有，也就是说前两个是短音，你用了两个1/2滑条很好，最后一个长音，我觉得最好的跟法应该是1/1滑条．
   //说是这样说.. Hard里两个1/2的圈也不一定就代表两个音，这种节奏上的简化还是挺常见的... 我想跟的音跟insane里一样
   
   00:14:646 (3,4,5) - 这里也是．00:16:225 (3,4,5) - 这里可以keep，因为这小节变成4个音了．
   
2. 00:19:975 (4,1) - 虽说是大白线，但其实这里鼓也没啥区别，而且从人声感觉上来讲也是00:18:593 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 这样两小节是一句话，所以既然你前面00:19:185 (2,3) - 都是跟的vocal，这里突然变成00:19:975 (4,1) - 这个节奏就非常奇怪．建议vocal跟到底．00:26:291 (4) - 等处你也是这么处理的
   //好

[Insane]

1. 01:25:501 (5,6) - 01:27:080 (5,6) - 我觉得ds不该这么小啊
   //听起来 - 01:24:909 (1) - 01:25:699 (6) - 01:26:488 (1) - 01:27:277 (6) - 这几个音是一个强一个弱的..

这样吧，我图有个gd咕我好久，别的难度提前找过摸了，回头我找你要个单diff摸吧？
//好
GL~

1. whistle声音有点太吵了orz
2. 另外前11秒其实挺好听的 不做一下吗

1. 00:17:014 (3) - 虽说是easy可是这后面漏太多了吧，好歹拉个条糊过去？
2. 00:48:593 (2) - ^

• 没啥毛病

1. 00:17:014 (1,2,3) - 感觉挺不和谐的，换双折返试试？
2. 另外这个diff咚咚的声音有点乱

1. 00:37:935 - whistle？

-ClariS- wrote:

水水水
[General]

1. whistle声音有点太吵了orz
   //呃，我怎么感觉有点太小声...
   
2. 另外前11秒其实挺好听的 不做一下吗
   //是的，我找人帮我timing一下吧...

[Easy]

1. 00:17:014 (3) - 虽说是easy可是这后面漏太多了吧，好歹拉个条糊过去？
2. 00:48:593 (2) - ^
   //没事啦，这里没有主旋律
   

[Normal]

• 没啥毛病

[Hard]

1. 00:17:014 (1,2,3) - 感觉挺不和谐的，换双折返试试？
   //好像还好..
   
2. 另外这个diff咚咚的声音有点乱
   //嗯我从头检查一下

[Insane]

1. 00:37:935 - whistle？
   //呃..我再听听看..好像没听到有whistle

gl~

kunka wrote:

Hi~
General

1. Easy diffとNormal diffのODとHPのgapを感じるん。EasyはOD2,HP2 and Normal OD4にしない？ Hard diffとのバランスも良くなると思う。
   //yeah but this music's bpm is low, so i don't want to use high OD. will change Hard into OD5.
   
2. Comb colorはCustomでいこう！
   //it does custom ;w;

Insane

1. 前奏にnotes置いた方が良いと思います。但しBPM違うので、もし追加するのであれば一度きちんとProに見てもらったほうがいいです（私は自信がないｗ）一応見たけどこんな感じ http://puu.sh/tGPfS.png
   //thanks for timing! will map this part.
   
2. 00:43:856 (1) - これ強い音だからjumpしよう
   //ok
   
3. 00:59:646 (1) - なんで1/1？　00:59:843 - に音あるし01:00:041 - のvocalはclickしてるほうが気持ちいいぉ。なので、1/2sliderと1circleがbetter
   // - 00:59:843 -this sound is weak, and - 01:00:041 -this vocal is weak, too. i want to express the vocal is continued.
   
4. 01:01:027 (5) - から01:03:988 (5) - までなんか急に簡単になる感じ。結構、音あるからcircle追加してもいいと思います。次にあげる所にcircle足してみて下さい。01:01:126 - 01:01:916 - 01:02:705 - 01:03:889 -
   //but this part gives me a feeling of break in kiai part. so i want to keep

Hard

1. 00:17:014 (1,2,3) - 音の取り方が違うと思う。00:17:804 - はdown beatだからsliderのendにしてはいけないぉ。try this http://puu.sh/tGQSV.jpg　00:48:593 (1,2,3) - も同じ
   //ok
   
2. 00:23:725 (2,3) - vocal follow拾ってるならctrl+Gだと思う
   //hmm.. i DS in this diff.
   
3. 00:43:856 (1) - 00:45:435 (1) - 00:47:014 (1) - 00:48:593 (1) - この４つはjumpした方がいいと思います。強い音だし流れに躍動感が生まれます。
4. 01:05:962 (1) - ^
5. 01:21:751 (1) - ^
   //same

Normal

1. 00:17:014 (4) - 1/6拾っても問題ないと思うよ～　http://puu.sh/tGRvh.jpg
   //maybe too hard for a normal diff.
   
2. 01:25:699 (2,3) - 赤線に音あるし1/2 sliderでもいいと思う。01:27:277 (5,6) - 同じ
   //let me consider.

Easy

1. 00:24:909 (1) - 00:31:225 (1) - 00:37:541 (1) - 赤線で折り返しは不自然に感じます。白線統一の方がリズミカルになると思う。例えばココ 00:24:909 (1) - こんな感じとか→ http://puu.sh/tGSw5.jpg ココとか00:31:225 (1) - → http://puu.sh/tGSBA.jpg 変にリズム変えるより同じリズムが続いてるから白線取りをオススメ
   //to avoid missing of strong vocal.

頑張って～^^

给大佬摸图

[Easy]
00:18:593 (1,2) - 长度一样 复制粘贴如何

[Normal]
00:31:817 (2,3) - 包好
01:20:173 (1,2) - 这里看着有点别扭 要么都做成弧形 要么都用直的吧

[hard]
00:17:014 (1,2,3,4) - 全用单点？

lnsane没看出什么问题

给大佬摸图


Easy
00:18:593 (1,2) - 长度一样 复制粘贴如何
//呃，我没有这习惯

Normal
00:31:817 (2,3) - 包好
01:20:173 (1,2) - 这里看着有点别扭 要么都做成弧形 要么都用直的吧
//1/2滑条太短了，不喜欢弄成弧形；后面那个弄成弧形是为了flow

hard
00:17:014 (1,2,3,4) - 全用单点？
//全单点就有点太难了

lnsane没看出什么问题