Okay let's go
All of these are personal opinions, no mistakes found in maps.
That's it! The maps are great, hardly any mistakes. Some places are weird, but it's your map.
All of these are personal opinions, no mistakes found in maps.
SPOILER
General:
1) Lower volume of notes on every map, at least 60-80%
2) Maybe fill the very start of the song in Muzu/Oni/Inner? You can play cleverly with SV changes here and make it super cool.
3) The spin on the end is always coming super fast. Is it needed? It's absolutely NOT needed in Kantan/Futsuu.
4) Keep SV between 1.4 and 1.6
5) Start slowly speeding up notes from where your last kiai part begins. This way you will create an effective kiai part + your fast spin won't be such a surprise.
Kantan:
1) Too many d, sounds dull. Change some notes to k, any you like
2) The end of a slider on 01:02:822 is off the tick. Kantan allows only 1/1. 1/2 is only if needed
3) In general, 1/1 streams are pretty long. I know they're easy for you, but for newbies you need to add more space in-betwixt streams. Shorten them wherever you want. For example, delete note on 01:15:368.
4) Overall difficulty is high, approach rate is high, HP drain is too low. Fix that.
Futsuu:
1) High OD, high AR, low CS, fix that
2) Same slider that I mentioned in Kantan. Fix that. You can end it there ofc, but it just sound weird. End it sooner.
3) Construction on 00:36:368 is too hard for Futsuu. Simplify that by moving note on 00:36:572 to 00:36:640
4) 01:13:049 Remove that
5) 01:26:277 d
6) 01:20:549 DD? don't think so, one D is better
Muzukashii
1) Too long streams!
2) Everywhere where you have a KdKdK construction - remove the d's
3) 00:32:004 - 00:36:095 Why are you using 1/2 here? In the next stream, which is exactly like the first, you smartly play around with 1/2 and 1/3. Change that maybe? It's too dull right now. Also long. Very.
4) 00:48:368 and 00:48:913 Did you put these 1/4s just so they would be here? They sound completely out of place. The k makes it sound weird. Try ddd or kkk? Simple, but shows what you wanted to do.
5) 00:56:004 I hear 1/3 here. Would you like to try and mix it slightly?
6) 01:05:686 Uh, what? Remove that maybe? Sounds wrong and out of place.
Oni
1) Remember those parts where 1/2 and 1/3 mixes? Do the same here. It will look better.
2) 00:36:777 Change to kkd or remove the second note in the triplet
3) Starting from 00:58:186 to 01:00:368 Divide your ddddd streams with k. You have two options: ddddk d ddddk d... or ddddd k ddddd k...
4) 01:03:913 - 01:04:459 Don't mess with SV changes. Normalize these three rebels.
5) 01:05:686 Change to d/k or remove. Finish doesn't fit.
6) 01:15:640 Add some triplets. This feels dull for oni.
Inner Oni
1) 00:31:595 Remove
2) Everything I said about Oni applies here too, except #2 and 3.
3) 01:15:640 Overmapped part. Divide and glorify, looks dull with dkdkdk and kdddk everywhere.
1) Lower volume of notes on every map, at least 60-80%
2) Maybe fill the very start of the song in Muzu/Oni/Inner? You can play cleverly with SV changes here and make it super cool.
3) The spin on the end is always coming super fast. Is it needed? It's absolutely NOT needed in Kantan/Futsuu.
4) Keep SV between 1.4 and 1.6
5) Start slowly speeding up notes from where your last kiai part begins. This way you will create an effective kiai part + your fast spin won't be such a surprise.
Kantan:
1) Too many d, sounds dull. Change some notes to k, any you like
2) The end of a slider on 01:02:822 is off the tick. Kantan allows only 1/1. 1/2 is only if needed
3) In general, 1/1 streams are pretty long. I know they're easy for you, but for newbies you need to add more space in-betwixt streams. Shorten them wherever you want. For example, delete note on 01:15:368.
4) Overall difficulty is high, approach rate is high, HP drain is too low. Fix that.
Futsuu:
1) High OD, high AR, low CS, fix that
2) Same slider that I mentioned in Kantan. Fix that. You can end it there ofc, but it just sound weird. End it sooner.
3) Construction on 00:36:368 is too hard for Futsuu. Simplify that by moving note on 00:36:572 to 00:36:640
4) 01:13:049 Remove that
5) 01:26:277 d
6) 01:20:549 DD? don't think so, one D is better
Muzukashii
1) Too long streams!
2) Everywhere where you have a KdKdK construction - remove the d's
3) 00:32:004 - 00:36:095 Why are you using 1/2 here? In the next stream, which is exactly like the first, you smartly play around with 1/2 and 1/3. Change that maybe? It's too dull right now. Also long. Very.
4) 00:48:368 and 00:48:913 Did you put these 1/4s just so they would be here? They sound completely out of place. The k makes it sound weird. Try ddd or kkk? Simple, but shows what you wanted to do.
5) 00:56:004 I hear 1/3 here. Would you like to try and mix it slightly?
6) 01:05:686 Uh, what? Remove that maybe? Sounds wrong and out of place.
Oni
1) Remember those parts where 1/2 and 1/3 mixes? Do the same here. It will look better.
2) 00:36:777 Change to kkd or remove the second note in the triplet
3) Starting from 00:58:186 to 01:00:368 Divide your ddddd streams with k. You have two options: ddddk d ddddk d... or ddddd k ddddd k...
4) 01:03:913 - 01:04:459 Don't mess with SV changes. Normalize these three rebels.
5) 01:05:686 Change to d/k or remove. Finish doesn't fit.
6) 01:15:640 Add some triplets. This feels dull for oni.
Inner Oni
1) 00:31:595 Remove
2) Everything I said about Oni applies here too, except #2 and 3.
3) 01:15:640 Overmapped part. Divide and glorify, looks dull with dkdkdk and kdddk everywhere.
That's it! The maps are great, hardly any mistakes. Some places are weird, but it's your map.