M4M request for your Q
Normal:00:06:158 (4,1) - Don't you feel this overlap is kinda.. cheap? try to avoid it
00:25:217 (2) - Maybe 2 notes instead of a 1/2 slider? like you did on 00:12:687 (3,4) -
00:41:981 (2) - Seeing as the current direction guides the player too down for no reason, maybe rotate this a bit more so it flows better to the next slider
http://i.imgur.com/YlqRrZg.png00:44:099 (1) - Move to x:145 y:133 and then:
00:44:628 (2) - Move ti x:244 y:64
00:56:805 (3) - What with this 1.79x DS? There's no reason for this to be so distant when you has been keeping a constant DS
00:59:452 (3) - And this with 1.27 instead of your usual 1.20
01:04:570 (2) - Move your second anchor to x:420 y:184 so the DS ends at 1.20x closed.
01:39:334 (3,4) - Why not blanket?
Advanced:01:21:511 - Aren't ya missing a note here? seeing that you're mapping the voice, this is a small lyric part ends
01:25:040 - Shouldn't this be a 1/2 slider? especially when you mapped 01:23:805 (1,2,3) - this way
Very good diff
Hard:00:44:628 (3) - CTR G and move 00:44:981 (4) - a bit more to the right to create an oval jumpy flow? then you 00:45:687 (6) - blanket with 00:44:628 (3) -
Like this:
http://i.imgur.com/f9ZzfmD.png00:53:628 (3) - This sounds and intensity is the same as 00:55:040 (6) - yet the first example is a 2.25 DS jump and the second 3.17, even tho is the SAME sound, try to be a bit more consistent with the jumps. (I know with this DS you avoid the overlap with 00:54:511 (5) - but is still HUGE)
01:09:158 - Why are you ignoring this?
01:17:805 (4) - CTR G
Insane:AR + 0.5 (8 feels too slow for some of the patterns)
00:02:452 (3,4,5) -
This is 1/6, not 1/4, listen to the drum in slow mo, there are 4 audible drum hits.
00:03:158 (8,9,10) - Same here, this stream is 1/6, not 1/4
00:03:687 (2,3,4,5,6) - And this is even more harsh, because the stream is 1/6 but there's a catch, there's a small stop here 00:03:922 - , the rhythm is
http://i.imgur.com/jlSkCep.png on 1/6, try listening in slow motion.
00:04:040 - This should be an slider, it feels really underwhelming for a stream to end here when there's such a strong audible voice
00:04:570 (9,10) - Same, this is 1/6
00:45:687 (1) - NC?
01:05:452 (4) - CTR G
01:10:393 (4) - CTR G too
01:21:687 (6) - Half of the body is truly out of grid LOL, I would search for another place to put it, right now is kinda uncomfortable
01:25:217 - Don't ignore this!
01:33:511 (4) - Try CTR G? the current flow is.... kinda harsh on the player.
Fun diff and fun map
Miria a QT <3
Hope this was helpful,