Hi there, congratulations for being in qualification anyway but I still want to confirms something
First of all, I think offset is a little early than it should be
Would recomended this:
328 (+8)(fix it before you apply any mods then, because my mod used new offset, I believe it's more accurate and easier to check snaps)
[Eedow's HD]
00:52:912 - so there are some snap conflict (or unsnapped notes on here I believe)
http://puu.sh/r9FMr/96a2ef02bd.jpg1. Follow puxtu's snap
2. If you remain follow that rrr voice, there is another snap would fit it
Snap (1/16) patterns depend on you
00:52:912 -
00:53:059 -
00:53:122 -
00:53:249 -
00:53:333 -
00:53:460 -
00:55:608 (55608|2) - thinking about this hmm, kinda not fit the rhythm well enough, for that, move it to something like this
http://puu.sh/r9G9B/3f745c6d15.jpg would be very neat, it would fit the rhythm better than this fade hold (dubstep drr)
00:56:957 (56957|2) - same as this part, I don't know both parts are conflicted
00:58:305 (58305|2) -
00:59:653 (59653|2,59653|3) -
01:01:002 (61002|1,61002|3) -
01:02:350 (62350|3,62350|2) -
01:06:395 (66395|1,66395|3) -
(and the rest of them) (*)
00:59:148 (59148|1,59148|0,59316|0,59316|1) - would recomended to move one of them, suggestion: move 00:59:316 (59316|1) - to 3rd to present snare sound, 2 notes jacky here kinda weird in my opinion, also if you also argeed with it, move 00:59:485 (59485|2,59527|1) - to 21 for more balance
01:14:485 (74485|0,74990|2,74990|1,75496|3) - this one is very interested pattern but kinda not fit with this part, because the bass underground combined with instrument almost the same for 3 of them, but long notes usage are different, might to reconsider about this)
01:17:856 (77856|3,77856|2,78024|2,78024|3,78361|2,78361|3,78530|3,78530|2) - kinda weird to keep them like this, pitch is different on 01:18:530 -
01:28:979 (88979|1,89148|2,89190|1) - same as before
01:31:676 (91676|3,91676|0,91676|2,91844|1,91886|2,92013|3,92013|1) - might to reconsider this as well
01:32:013 (92013|1,92350|2,92350|1) - fix this along with that (*) I've mentioned
01:35:384 (95384|0) - wrong place. this instrument should be on 01:35:215 - and ends on 01:35:552 - along with that, add a note on 01:35:721 - for snare sound
01:42:799 (102799|3,102799|1,103136|2,103136|0,103136|1) - (*)
While the end is just fading away, you don't have to continue it, end the map on 01:58:979 - would be better
[puxtu's MX]
00:00:328 - to 00:21:901 - if this intro could follow pitch like Eedow's diff then it would be better
00:53:754 (53754|1,53797|0,53839|3,53881|2,53923|1,53965|0,54007|3,54049|2,54092|1) - kinda overdone, 1/8 on 00:53:754 - to 00:53:923 - would already enough, because the rest is unclear, the rest is 1/1 you can add a mini hold begins on 00:53:923 - to 00:54:260 - or just let it be blank
01:02:055 (62055|2) - this sound unclear, almost no sound at all
01:03:698 - add a note for cymbal sound, 2 notes like other are not enough
00:54:260 - 01:05:047 -
01:12:842 (72842|2) - same with this one too
01:12:842 (72842|2) - add a note on here for cymbal, if you argeed
01:26:620 - add one more note
01:32:392 (92392|3) - ghost note on here, no sound
01:36:058 - add a note for cymbal
01:37:406 - same
01:41:535 (101535|1) - ghost note, no sound here
01:45:622 (105622|2) - echo, never see you add this note on part have same sound like this
example: 01:45:622 (105622|2) -
01:46:297 (106297|3) - why clap sound is on here? remove
For that I would recomended to map the outro till 01:58:979 - just like HD's diff, keep it blank is such a waste
Critical_Star wrote:
as requested from Side
puxtu's MX
00:54:294 (54294|1,54336|0,54378|3) - i think these are ghost note or is just an echo sound, the clearer 1/8 sound start at 00:54:421 -
00:55:643 (55643|0,55685|2,55727|1) - and so on for all these similiar part^
01:14:814 (74814|3,74814|0,75319|2,75319|0) - can't really hear a clear sound here, i think remove this double note better
01:46:162 (106162|0,106204|1,106246|2,106289|3,106331|0,106373|1,106415|2,106457|3) - these actually are not 1/8 sound, is just having a short long sound here only, i don't think this would fit to the sound here, use 1/4 to empyhsize the kick sound better here
rest look fine, maybe only these concern
Take another looks at this please
puxtu wrote:
it's a dump map, ofcourse there will be a lot of ghost notes. That's the main idea
;D
dump or not, ghost notes never be allowed (some is fine but not a lot of them)
Please only add notes on where it had music, If not, better remain pending or graveyard, added a lot of ghost notes are just make it more weird
For me, dump maps would not really recomended, as they remain 50% of this map, something like HD's diff is good enough
Just personal, good luck then.