Fanteer wrote:

Hi
M4M

Kawaii
00:06:529 (1,2) - fix blanket readjusted slightly, I think
00:31:145 (1,2) - ^ Fixed (i think)
00:29:991 (2,3) - ^ it's the ending, I think it's fine, but I did readjust a bit
00:14:799 (2,3,4,5) - here it is possible to make a clean square no, but re adjusted a little
00:16:529 (3,4,5,6) - make them one spacings fixed
00:27:299 (2,3,4) - ^ again fixed
00:04:222 (3) - NC ok
00:17:683 (1,2) - remake no
00:11:529 (1) - remove NC it's a build up, the rise in vocals, so I'm keeping the nc
00:17:683 (1) - ^ same thing
00:26:145 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/qfDst/3d73b46157.jpg Do it in this way done
00:08:068 (1,2) - look bad sliders ikr, fixed

I would recommend you to use the entire area, not just the middle
http://puu.sh/qfCS4/7aa9e43890.jpg it's a hard diffuculty, you aren't gonna expect me using the whole area (as the song is mostly stacks anyways) and even so I think it looks fine


Good luck

Tatsuyu wrote:

mod

00:09:606 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent DS ok fix
00:11:529 (2,1) - Overlap I like the overlap, (it goes well with the rise in volume imo) but I did rearrange too make the overlap look better
00:14:799 (2,3,4,5) - Make this into a square adjusted a bit
00:16:529 (1,1,1,1,1) - All these NC aren't necessary Oh my mistake, forgot to fix those
00:17:299 (1,1) - Overlap fixed
00:24:029 (4,5,6) - Bit too spaced, bring closer together stacked
00:30:568 (3) - Could probably blanket this around 00:29:991 (2) - a little better hmm, it's the ending and the final three sliders fit together good, so no i'll keep it the way it is....
00:32:299 (3) - Consider adding two hitcircles after this and pushing the spinner back a bit to fit better with the music sure.

gl

BOUYAAA wrote:

abc

[japanese word that means cute]

00:00:760 (2) - missing that beat here is kinda gross since you don't extend anything elsewhere in the intro. 1/2 slider + circle or something like that weems more conssitent to me fixed

00:02:491 (3) - you mapped this slider offbeat but i see no real reason to do that here. You probably wanna make sure the strong sound on it's end 00:02:683 - is clickable to ensure your map's rythm stays intuitive and consistent. 00:07:106 (2) - 00:10:183 (4) - same here and everything similar think I fixed it

00:04:510 - there is a snare sound here i guess you can make that a stream if you want not a stream, but I did make it a stack

00:15:376 (5,1) - you use the same spacing on the 1/2 patterns here 00:14:799 (2,3,4,5) - even though this is 1/1 so this is not gonna work. Either stack or space 00:15:376 (5,1) - more Adjusted a little

00:31:145 (1,2) - blankets tbh k

00:33:068 (1) - idk if you wanna map that spinner to nothing if you slow the speed down to 25 and listen carefully u can hear the cymbal ending
gl!!!

1. gotta put DS snap on for easy/normal diffs needs to be a consistent ds (unrankable atm)
2. 00:04:991 (1,1) - needs a full 4/4 measure recovery time for spinners in easy, might be best to just make this a small break for the vocals instead (unrankable atm)
3. 00:23:452 (1) - remove NC
4. 00:24:991 (1) - NC
5. 00:31:722 (2) - several potential finishes for this combo, but I'd go with the finish on 00:31:145 (1) - instead if you only want 1 bc its on the downbeat and the start of the cymbals, same for kawaii
6. 00:33:068 (1) - make it end at the same time as Kawaii diff

1. 00:04:414 (2,3,4,5,6) - could either hitsound 6 or hitsound 2,3,4,5 here to make 6 stand out here since it doenst have those drums
2. 00:06:529 (1) - could add a (low volume) finish on head for the cymbals here, same for easy
3. 00:06:529 (1,2) - gonna get pointed out eventually so : blankets can be improved a bit in this diff imo, dunno how you blanket but I'd just use the approach circle of (2) here as a guidance like
   
4. 00:11:914 (1) - no need for a finish here like you did in easy
5. 00:27:683 (4) - would emphasize (4) here aswell like you did with the similar parts, maybe increase ds or stack (2,3)
6. 00:29:606 (3) - also apply the HS on easy for consistency

Wishkey wrote:

Heyo!

mod in return for the star

Easy

1. gotta put DS snap on for easy/normal diffs needs to be a consistent ds (unrankable atm) Looked in ai mod and fixed ds problems
2. 00:04:991 (1,1) - needs a full 4/4 measure recovery time for spinners in easy, might be best to just make this a small break for the vocals instead (unrankable atm) left as small break
3. 00:23:452 (1) - remove NC k
4. 00:24:991 (1) - NC k
5. 00:31:722 (2) - several potential finishes for this combo, but I'd go with the finish on 00:31:145 (1) - instead if you only want 1 bc its on the downbeat and the start of the cymbals, same for kawaii Fixed
6. 00:33:068 (1) - make it end at the same time as Kawaii diff

Fixed


Kawaii

1. 00:04:414 (2,3,4,5,6) - could either hitsound 6 or hitsound 2,3,4,5 here to make 6 stand out here since it doenst have those drums done
2. 00:06:529 (1) - could add a (low volume) finish on head for the cymbals here, same for easy done
3. 00:06:529 (1,2) - gonna get pointed out eventually so : blankets can be improved a bit in this diff imo, dunno how you blanket but I'd just use the approach circle of (2) here as a guidance like
   
   I think i fixed it?
4. 00:11:914 (1) - no need for a finish here like you did in easy ok
5. 00:27:683 (4) - would emphasize (4) here aswell like you did with the similar parts, maybe increase ds or stack (2,3) done
6. 00:29:606 (3) - also apply the HS on easy for consistency

done

gl with the map man!

Shiratoi wrote:

m4m from your q

[General]
underhitsounded
take out countdown
disable widescreen thing

[Normal]
distance spacing is a must for normal fix
tick rate is kind of high imo oh, okay I lowered it
00:03:452 (1) - curve other way have better flow imo
00:04:414 (2) - delete and make 00:04:606 (3) - a 1/1 slider starting 00:04:414 -
00:04:991 (1) - delete not really any need for spinner no music except for the lalala thing but the spinner doesn't fit it
00:02:683 (2,1) - kind of bad waves
00:07:683 (3,1) - fix blanket
00:08:068 (1) - would take out repeat and add 1/1 slider since the current rhythm feels off then just delete 00:09:029 (2) -
finish mapping kek

[Easy]
hahaha under normal
ok
whatever
continuing mod
no 1/2 notes in easy pls its more toward normal not easy okay I removed all of them
00:04:222 (5) - end 00:04:414 - k
00:04:991 (1,1) - not enough break time for easy ok
00:07:299 (2,1) - fix blanket done
00:11:145 (1,1) - bad flow theres a break between the two sliders, so no i'm not gonna change.
00:25:760 (4,1) - blanket k
00:27:299 (3,1) - no overlap in easy fixed
00:28:837 (2,3) - another bad flow I think I fixed it?
00:31:145 (1) - curve slider adjusted a bit
00:32:683 (4,5) - overlap

ok

[Kawaii]
00:00:376 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5713424 done
00:01:145 (3,4,5,6) - the placement doesn't really fit the music imo separate adjusted a bit
00:02:491 (3,4,5,6,7) - this plays funny instead of linear jumps change it up a bit maybe like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5713453 Adjusted a bit
00:04:414 (2,3,4,5,6) - long stream just make triplet and add a note hmm, no I think it's good. Especially for a kawaii diff
00:04:991 (1) - I'm sure you can map the lalala part nah, i'm good.
00:07:683 (5,1) - random big spacing for kind of quiet part Adjusted a bit
00:08:068 (1,2) - if you want to keep the big spacing then make this equal to it adjusted
00:07:106 (2,3,4) - equal spacing okay
00:09:991 (3,4) - don't really like this stack its like you ran out of ideas didn't take out the stack, but fixed a lot here.
00:10:183 (4,5) - don't end the sliders on the white tick start them there think I fixed it
00:12:683 (1) - triplet + 1/2 slider the vocalist says a lot of words here, I wanna keep the diff fresh and clean, the only real triplets I put will be at kaia times
00:14:222 (1) - unnecessary repeat just change 1/2 slider + note k
00:14:799 - maybe 1/1 slider here The beats are too strong, I'm keeping it as a square.
00:15:568 - note here it's supposed to be a small break after the square so the player doesn't get overwhelmed, if someone else notices this then i'll add it
00:18:645 - this part is more difficult than the kiai I made this part kiai
00:20:376 (1,2,3) - separate confusing since there was a triple before hand ok fixed
00:23:452 (1,2,3) - ^ same thing
00:28:645 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - you can do better instead of making it go straight up aww, I liked it but I guess your right
00:30:760 (4,5,6,7) - separate the stream since you had a lot of triplets beforehand so it might be confusing to read it's the ending and I think it's fine
00:34:222 - spinner ends here same with easy

Cl9n wrote:

M4M

General
Offset sounds like its on 384
Never use 100% volume

Easy

Distance Snap for easy diffs must be 1x
18645,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0 is not needed since there's no difference between the previous and upcoming inherited point
Slider Velocity is too fast. Change it to like .8 or .9
00:04:799 - place note here
6529,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1 does not need to have kiai mode on
00:14:606 (2) - ends on red tick
00:23:068 - place note here
00:27:683 - ^
00:30:760 - ^
00:31:914 (2) - starts on red tick
00:32:683 (1) - spinner too long. reduce it to 00:33:452

Normal

00:02:683 (2) - too curvy k
00:08:068 (1) - fix blanket k
00:09:606 (1) - too curvy k
00:06:529 (1) - doesnt look smooth. Clean it up more k
00:11:145 (1) - ^ and too curvy k
00:12:683 (1) - blanket (2) k
00:14:799 (2) - remove and have 00:14:991 (3) - start there k
00:21:145 (3) - not smooth and too curvy k
00:21:914 (1) - reduce to 00:22:106 then place a slider at 00:22:299 nope, if you listen to the beat and not the vocals then you'll know why that slider is there
00:26:529 (1) - blanket (1) adjusted slightly
00:33:068 (1) - spinner too long. reduce it to 00:33:452 if you slow down the speed you can hear the cymbal still ending

Kawaii

00:00:376 (1) - fix blanket k
00:18:068 (1) - too curvy adjusted a bit, but honestly I like the curve
00:18:645 (2,3) - remove (overmapping) if you slow down the speed you can hear a drum beat
00:33:068 (1) - spinner too long. reduce it to 00:33:452 same thing

Have fun!

1Computer wrote:

NM from my queue~
this is cute

SPOILER

[Easy]

1. Isn't the slider tick rate a little... too much? Set it to 1 pls. ]well the extra slider tick rate was to make up for the slow sv and low difficulty of the map, I lowered it to 2 if you were concerned.
2. 00:08:068 (1,2) - Blanket is off here. Nope.
3. 00:14:222 (1) - Well this is kinda weird. Keep your sliders simple. You can make the same shape with less weird intersections: khttps://a.pomf.cat/xvjuwa.png (not exactly what you had, but I'm sure you can mess around with it yourself.)

[Normal]

1. 00:07:683 (3,1) - I don't like this overlap. Blanket it instead.
2. 00:12:683 (1) - lmao

[Kawaii]

1. 00:02:876 (5,6,7,8) - The 8 might be a bit confusing for a 3*. ok
2. 00:29:991 (2,3) - Fix this blanket. it's already a perfect blanket, but if someone else says this I will fix it a bit
3. 00:31:145 (1,2) - ^ same thing

Cassu2 wrote:

Aight here's a mod by request, don't expect anything spectacular

Kawaii

1. 00:03:260 (8) - inconsistent spacing compared to the earlier notes in the combo k
2. 00:06:529 why is there a one tick long kiai time here? remove k
3. 00:12:683 (1,3) - I assume these are mapped to the instrument (synth) but imo they could be 1/2 sliders (plus note) mapped to the lyrics. The first slider has the "na" of "hanabi" on the red tick, and the second slider has the "ro" of "kurokami" on the red tick. I personally think these should be mapped it was mapped to the instrument
4. 00:14:414 why isn't there a triple here? You said earlier that the beats are strong enough to warrant those notes, why is an obvious triple left out? k
5. 00:15:568 put a note here, the sound here is the same you mapped on the earlier combo I find the note not good enough, I mean there definatly is a beat there but imo the beat is calling for like a 1/3 slider or something, like it doesn't stop simoutanously, hopefully that made sense.
6. 00:27:299 (2,3,4) - this looks boring, I think jumps that go either straight up&down or sideways (x y) make for a very uninspiring mapping. Tbh I have the same complaint on this 00:14:799 (3,4,5,6) - but at least that's a full square - you should try to map them in a more interesting way nope. It's good enough for me kappa, but seriously I like how they are placed, I may change it later if I hear more complaints
7. 00:18:068 (1) - not a perfect blanket, turn off grid snap when adjusting these sliders. Use the approach circle of the note you're blanketing as a reference point to your blanket, as someone else pointed out earlier I tried to do that but it didn't work out how I wanted, will fix.
8. 00:29:991 (2) - same as above k
9. 00:31:145 (1) - same here k
10. 00:34:799 stretch the spinner here, I can still hear the cymbal at this tick

no, it isn't loud enough.

Decent set, though the slow stuff really isn't my thing when mapping :^) Good luck!

1. Inconsistency in Countdown: In this hint, if you decided to leave the countdown on the Kawaii and Normal difficulties, consider setting for the East too. o: I'd rather go for removing this option since it's pretty awkward to play.
2. Inconsistency in tags: For rankable purposes, the information you add on tags should be consistent on all difficulties since it makes easier to way to look at your beatmap in the forum list. For this, make sure that the Kawaii difficulty has "Kawaii Cute Cat Neko" over the tag field.
3. Unused hitsounds: if you're not using any of the following hitsounds on the map, please consider to remove them because it's unrankable to have unused files in the beatmap's folder:
   Unused Hitsound List

   1. normal-hitclap4.wav
   2. normal-hitwhistle4.wav
   3. soft-hitclap4.wav
   4. soft-hitfinish2.wav
   5. soft-hitfinish4.wav
   6. soft-hitnormal5.wav
   7. soft-sliderslide2.wav
   8. soft-sliderslide4.wav
   9. soft-sliderslide5.wav
4. What about setting combo color for the hitobjects in general? It's only a suggestion but it plays very boring to have the default hitsounds in this mapset when you can come out with creative ideas for the combo colors. What about these?
   Colors

   
   Code

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 255,149,98
   Combo2 : 64,0,0

   In case you decide to apply them, please copy and paste the code of the above box and paste it on the field of color over the .osu file.

1. The approach rate is rather high compared to the standard way to place the AR. According to the wiki, it would be way better if you reduced it until 5 or even lower since this difficulty plays odd with the current approach rate.
2. Spacing should be consistent through the notes: If you're aiming this to be a normal, please make sure the distance of all note are the same. A pro-tip to fix this is to setup a standard Distance Snap by pressing the key "Y" to not violate this rule. Some of the inconsistencies are listed below this box. Make sure to check them up and fix the spacing among them respectively:
   
   ^

   1. 00:07:683 (3,1) -
   2. 00:08:068 (1,2) -
   3. 00:12:683 (1,2) -
   4. 00:30:760 (4,1) -
   It's likely there are more that aren't listed there. Please consider to check the distance snap among the objects carefully.
3. Flows and Transitions: This hint is very important because it belongs to the way beginner will approach to play this difficulty. Hence, we should be careful at making such as overlaps or stacks while mapping because it can become very difficult for them to read those objects due to the transition isn't clear and might turn uneven for them. Here I pointed out some examples of what you could do to avoid these awkward flows:
   
   1. 00:00:376 (1,2,3,4,5) - what you have - what it could be. While it's not a bad flow the oine you have, I think the motion of the beginning is rather weird to play. Instead of making this linear motion, we can try out a different style of note-placement to give players the idea of variation without altering the rhythm.
   2. 00:10:376 (3,4,5,1) - what you have - what it could be. As I already said, not a bad flow but I think we can go for different note-placement to give different transitions to this difficulty.
   3. 00:28:068 (1,2,3,4,1) - Actually I just wanted to highlight how these flow. Really nice design of this pattern!

1. First and the foremost, we should keep in mind this the highest difficulty of the set so we shouldn't allow notes to be overmapped since there's currently a big gap from the Normal to this difficulty. A spread that really doesn't take account to how the difficulties are supposed to be labeled according to the grade of difficult. Thus, to fix this, I suggest to avoid overusing triplets in the kiai pattern to keep consistency in the way they transit to each pattern. This means to remove 00:21:049 (5) - 00:24:126 (5) - 00:24:510 (8) - 00:29:126 (7) - 00:30:856 (5) - For further assistance, try to put the Playback Rate to 50% to listen to the main spots where a triplet truly deserves to be there.
2. 00:32:683 (4) - Add new combo here to keep consistency in the way you managed the combo every new stanza over this difficulty.
3. 00:00:760 (2) - What about doing Ctrl + G here to avoid the weird flow? As it is now, it doesn't make an intuitive motion because the jump seems unfitting to the segment in matter.

That should be all for this tiny check! Call me if you didn't understand something that I stated above. Will be mroe than happy to assist you with this! For now, best of luck! ╰(◡‿◡✿╰)

Lilyanna wrote:

Nazi mod from modreqs

advanced
00:01:914 (1,2) - make them look same like a mirror No, I think it looks fine.
00:07:683 (3,1) - blanket well be better okay
00:09:606 (1,4) - kinda overlaps yea
00:12:683 (1,2) - blanket for more appealing pattern Alright
00:16:529 (3,4) - ^ I think it's alright but if I get more complaints then I will fix
00:31:145 (1,2) - ^ Ok, I think I fixed it.
it should be easy to go through the map and polish things
Good luck

Tsuchimikado wrote:

Hiya~! M4M woohoo.

[Kawaii]
I would use a bigger grid size, just you can get more accuracy with object placement and such (for aesthetics purposes). hmm I think it's alright

00:19:799

Instead of this...

Try this...

I was mapping to the instruments, not the vocals

00:22:876
Same here same thing

00:24:222
I'd make remove the circle after (5) and make (5) a slider same thing

[Advanced]
"Advanced" seems a little misleading for this difficulty (based on your difficulty settings). I would raise the AR by at least 2 and the Overall Difficulty by at least 1 if you were to call it "Advanced." The star rating is advanced.

Based on the star rating of the song and it's place in the mapset, I'm going to assume it's supposed to be a [Normal] and mod it accordingly.

00:07:299
Move (2) to x:96 y:256 k

00:07:683
Fix the blanket so that it's not off. Change the grid size so you can move the points to do so. I fixed it a little, I think.

Make it look like this...

Instead of this...

00:16:792
Fix the blanket here too ok, I just fixed it by making it in a different place


I get way too picky with Easy difficulties because I'm bad at mapping them and have no idea what I should point out and what I shouldn't so I'll say "it looks good to me!"

1. This is only for the Easy difficulty, but occasionally the DS between certain objects changes for no real reason. Consistency is key for lower difficulties! 00:10:376 (4,1) - this is just one example, they're easy to spot out though.
2. The mapset in its entirety would greatly benefit (in my opinion) changing the flow and making a bunch of fun blankets. The current shapes of sliders are very firm and rigid, so playing around with more curves and shapes might make for a better experience for a new player. This isn't saying that you should remap it all, just maybe think about having some fun with the shapes and changing the flow of things!
3. I'll provide an example or two of questionable flow in each mod, but take them with a grain of salt. Just an idea of how you could improve further.

1. 00:14:222 (1) - Maybe shorten this into a 3/4 slider and make it a repeater? That way you'd be covering all the vocals!
2. Flow examples: 00:10:376 (4,1) -

1. Maybe consider restructuring your NCs in the beginning to look something similar to this? I find the NC for one note 00:03:452 (1) - to be sorta strange
2. 00:00:760 (2,3) - I would personally stack the 3 on top of the 2 here. Reason being I think that it might be easier for a new player to read the two stacked single notes instead of reacting to a circle and then another circle stacked on a slider
3. 00:03:452 (1,1) - Imo the spacing on these is kinda big and could be nerfed
4. 00:10:760 (4,5) - Consider stacking these for the same reason as I stated above
5. 00:13:260 (2,3,4,5) - ^ Maybe the 2 on 3 and 4 on 5
6. 00:24:991 (1,2,3,1,2) - I find the inconsistency between these kinda strange, they're both following the same noise so why not stick to one
7. 00:30:376 (2,3) - Stack (if you disagreed with the earlier ones then don't worry about it :p)
   
8. Flow examples: 00:18:068 (2,1) - 00:13:837 (5,1) -

1. 00:04:414 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is overmapped, remove the 5 so it's a circle, triple, then circle.
2. 00:09:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe change this part to something like this so that you can make a nice pattern and also have consistency in hitsounding.
3. 00:14:606 (2,3,4,5) - This might be hard to read? Not sure, it's your call
4. Flow wasn't too bad in this diff, nothing stood out to me as much as in the other difficulties.. but seriously, more curved and interesting slider shapes will save your life heh

-Sh1n1- wrote:

STD Mod

M4M

Easy

1. 00:06:529 - 100% of volume? do you want to destroy my ears? 80% should be enough ok.
2. 00:12:299 (2,1) - avoid stack on easy diffs pls, take a look at 00:21:529 (5,1) - too ok
3. about distances, I strongly recommend you to press G in editor and select tiny grid size, then you can turn on Distance Snap to keep a proper distance between each object, take a look at 00:02:683 (2) -, distance with previous slider is around 1.20x and the distance with the next slider is 1.03x, unrankable. okay I fixed the ds and the grid snap is now tiny, thanks!
4. 00:19:606 (2) - doesn't have sense, you should make simple sliders at easy 'cause it'll be too hard for newbies, same to 00:17:299 (1) - ok
5. 00:29:606 (1,1) - transition could be a bit complicated for newcomers, they might think that such slider starts on the tail, antiflow detected.

Advanced

1. same as Easy about distances, 00:03:452 (1,1) - this kind of distances are unrankable, use Distance snap at lower diffs please. ok
2. 00:11:145 (1) - ugly slider, furthermore antiflow with 00:11:722 (2) - ok
3. 00:15:760 (1) - avoid notes here, there will be problems with the HP Bar of some skins. unrankable again ok
4. 00:16:145 (2) - rather than slider, U can use make double notes here to enphasize claps okay, good idea.
5. 00:18:068 (2,1) - remenber, use the same distance through the whole diff, it's supposed to be like normal right?

alright

Good Luck~~

Logic Agent wrote:

Hi! From your queue~

These mods might be quite short as I'm not the best modder and also the song is well.. like 30 seconds long. But I will try to provide as much feedback as I can!

[General]

1. This is only for the Easy difficulty, but occasionally the DS between certain objects changes for no real reason. Consistency is key for lower difficulties! 00:10:376 (4,1) - this is just one example, they're easy to spot out though.
2. The mapset in its entirety would greatly benefit (in my opinion) changing the flow and making a bunch of fun blankets. The current shapes of sliders are very firm and rigid, so playing around with more curves and shapes might make for a better experience for a new player. This isn't saying that you should remap it all, just maybe think about having some fun with the shapes and changing the flow of things!
3. I'll provide an example or two of questionable flow in each mod, but take them with a grain of salt. Just an idea of how you could improve further.

[Easy]

1. 00:14:222 (1) - Maybe shorten this into a 3/4 slider and make it a repeater? That way you'd be covering all the vocals! way too hard for an easy, if I did that. IMO
2. Flow examples: 00:10:376 (4,1) -

[Advanced]

1. Maybe consider restructuring your NCs in the beginning to look something similar to this? I find the NC for one note 00:03:452 (1) - to be sorta strange Alright done.
2. 00:00:760 (2,3) - I would personally stack the 3 on top of the 2 here. Reason being I think that it might be easier for a new player to read the two stacked single notes instead of reacting to a circle and then another circle stacked on a slider I would personaly do that too!
3. 00:03:452 (1,1) - Imo the spacing on these is kinda big and could be nerfed ok
4. 00:10:760 (4,5) - Consider stacking these for the same reason as I stated above alright
5. 00:13:260 (2,3,4,5) - ^ Maybe the 2 on 3 and 4 on 5 nah it'll mess with my blanket
6. 00:24:991 (1,2,3,1,2) - I find the inconsistency between these kinda strange, they're both following the same noise so why not stick to one didn't stick to one but I ctrl + G
7. 00:30:376 (2,3) - Stack (if you disagreed with the earlier ones then don't worry about it :p) I disagree.
   
8. Flow examples: 00:18:068 (2,1) - 00:13:837 (5,1) -

[Kawaii]

1. 00:04:414 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is overmapped, remove the 5 so it's a circle, triple, then circle. slow down your speed, not overmapped at all.
2. 00:09:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe change this part to something like this so that you can make a nice pattern and also have consistency in hitsounding. the link didn't work ;O I'll keep it the way it is for now tho.
3. 00:14:606 (2,3,4,5) - This might be hard to read? Not sure, it's your call Easy read, I don't think it would be hard for people.
4. Flow wasn't too bad in this diff, nothing stood out to me as much as in the other difficulties.. but seriously, more curved and interesting slider shapes will save your life heh

Overall not too bad! Cute fun lil set

General

Why are the hitsounds set to S:C1 when there are no custom hitsounds in the mapset? Consider either adding some custom hitsound samples, or changing the hitsound sample set back to default!

- When it comes to NC's, for the Easy, NC every 2nd measure (every 2nd big white tick), and don't focus on the patterns, since it throws the newbie players off a lot more than it helps :3 (Example of an NC that's odd, is 00:08:068 (1) - in the Easy, since it's 1 measure after the previous NC, while the NEXT NC is 2 measures later. So yeah, try to do some NC reworks to the EASY diff, poke me if you need some help with this

Easy

Advanced

Kawaii

Spork Lover wrote:

Lil' M4M from #modreqs :3 (Keep in mind that I'm applying for BN, so there'll be a lot of ranking criteria related stuff in this post)
ermahgerd nekos

Color coding:

Color coding

Unrankable if unchanged
Normal Suggestion/Comment
Strong Suggestion

General

- Why are the hitsounds set to S:C1 when there are no custom hitsounds in the mapset? Consider either adding some custom hitsound samples, or changing the hitsound sample set back to default!

- On all difficulties, there's an inherited point at 00:00:376 - , which is 1x SV, consider removing that inherited point and changing the volume on the timing point to 60% instead, since 1x SV is the default SV for the timing point as well, making the inherited point pretty much unnecessary.

- There's no preview point, consider adding one at 00:18:741 - (blue tick before chorus is common to do) (Applies to all diffs!)

- A very common background size is 1366x768, which I assume you could try to find instead of 1228x767 which you're using atm :3

- The spread is a little weird. The gaps seem surprisingly large considering the "Kawaii" diff almost plays like a light insane, while the gap is also pretty big between the Advanced and Easy. You could, if you want, create a normal difficulty that goes between the Advanced and Easy, so the spread is a little better.

- - When it comes to NC's, for the Easy, NC every 2nd measure (every 2nd big white tick), and don't focus on the patterns, since it throws the newbie players off a lot more than it helps :3 (Example of an NC that's odd, is 00:08:068 (1) - in the Easy, since it's 1 measure after the previous NC, while the NEXT NC is 2 measures later. So yeah, try to do some NC reworks to the EASY diff, poke me if you need some help with this

Easy

Overall, I feel that there are some aesthetics that need a few remaps, which are hard to mod away without changing the entire map in the process :3 I'll mention a few of these issues below:
00:15:760 (2,3,1) - Here you'd be able to benefit very well from doing something like a "Copy-pastey" type of pattern, where you copy-paste the first slider (2) and rotate it 120 degrees to form (3), and then copy paste THAT slider, and rotate THAT 120 degrees to form a triangular pattern or something similar. Keep in mind that this is (obviously), not the only thing you can do, there are many options, but try to have aesthetics and pattern in mind when adding notes and sliders
00:00:376 (1,2,1,2) - The angles seem very random; While they play fine, they aren't aesthetically pleasing to look at, so consider making a certain blankety type pattern or something completely different; whatever floats yer boat.

^ These subjective ideas are things that could be applied to other patterns as well by self-modding your map. Look at every pattern, and as soon as you find something you don't like, discard the pattern and rework it.
Also, keep in mind that all three diffs could easily benefit from some extra thoughtout patterns as well, so try to apply this mindset to all diffs to the best of your ability

I must say though, that the map rhythmically is very straight forward, and doesn't seem to have that many issues, if any; so when the patterning is on point, you have yourself a very nice Easy diff :3
Poke me if you want some ideas for rhythm/aesthetics

Advanced

The main problem in this difficulty is the fact that everything (except stacks) needs the same DS (An idea is 1,3x) (apart from a few exceptions which don't really seem to apply to this song, due to it being so short) The reason for this is that it's an Advanced difficulty. You start doing stuff like jumps on a Hard diff. So yeah, fix every DS inconsistency you can find

Apart from that, here's some suggestions:
00:04:414 (3,1) - Here there's a rhythmical problem. From 3, the music is prolonged untill 00:04:702 - , so consider a long slider from 00:04:414 - to 00:04:702 - and then a single tap on 00:04:799 - .
00:12:683 (1,2,3,4,5) - Example of a place where the DS is inconsistent (goes from 1,3x to 1,45x)

The rest of my rhythmical ideas are purely subjective, and you'll probably change a few things from fixing the DS, so I won't go too much into that .

Kawaii

00:03:452 (1,2) - I feel that these should be 1/1 single taps (Aka ONLY the slider starts) due to the music doing small "break" sections.
00:14:222 (1,2,3,4,5) - I find it a little odd that you switch to the vocals so suddenly (And add a break after it), when it seems that you were following the music up untill 00:11:529 (2) -. Consider doing a few adjustments.
00:31:145 (1) - Single tap thing again (Could be stacked on 00:31:722 (2) - 's slider start).

I hope my suggestions helped you out, good luck with your map

VenixPL wrote:

Mod for my queue!
[ General]

Add custom hitsounds
Add 極黒のブリュンヒルデ source

[ Easy]

00:17:299 (1) - change this slider shape to: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5739314

ok
[ Advanced]

00:06:529 - disable kiai done
00:06:626 - set 60% hitsound volume

got it
[ Kawaii]

00:02:299 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - improve this pattern I think I fixed it
00:04:414 (2,3,4,5,6) - move to down nah
00:06:626 - change hitsound volume to 60% ok
00:09:991 (3,4) - make next circle of jump, not double I adjusted it a bit
00:20:664 (2,3) - move this to: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5739392 nope.
Set OD7

Pikastar wrote:

[General]

All of your objects in higher difficulty are grid snapped at size 1(largest), try reducing grid size (view->grid level->3~4), it allows you to place object more precisely. it's not requirement, but it sometimes helps



Normal and Easy diff does not have source (極黒のブリュンヒルデ) Fixed


[Normal]

00:28:645 (2) - move this 2 big grids right to make it look like a natural curve imo ok

[Kawaii]

00:24:895 (10) - finish moved to next (1). Done


00:31:145 (1,2) - this and
00:21:145 (5,6) - this has some weird spacing (x0.8?) from previous note, they need to be either seperated far away or very close to eachother for it to make sense IMO

1. you need a metadata confirmation, Artist is obviously wrong.
2. offset -7 ~ -9
3. You have to change your hitsounding. There are like only 5% objects are hitsounded in Easy and Advanced, and lots of hitsounds are overused in Hard.

1. AR6 on easy, you gotta be kidding me
2. an overall problem on NCs: they are not only inconstant, but also too dense. High NC density can raise up the recovering speed from hitting objects, so for the balancing you should raise the HP or reduce NCs. Of course, personally I'll just reduce them. (this should applied to all diffs tbh)
3. 00:04:222 (2,1) - You're now making an Easy diff under 156 BPM, which means objects in 1/2 is not recommended here. I'd rather change them into a single 3/2 slider.
4. 00:28:068 (1) - it becomes quite weird when you tried to go with vocal all along the map. the beat placement skips too much details, and those can be better represented in some other ways. (for example, I'll just shorten the slider to 00:28:837 - and add one more circle to the gap.) only a simple kink is still not enough.
5. 00:31:145 (1,2,3,4) - this one is a fatal one, even if the song is in low BPM. You suddenly raise the difficulty, that's not a good idea for players at this level. Also, there are three slider ends which are not even necessary here (00:31:529 - 00:32:106 - 00:32:491 - ), the map can still be well-played if those beats are removed. If I were you I would just replace 00:31:145 (1,2,3) - with a 3/2 reverse for simplifying the beats.
6. 00:33:068 (1) - why is this spinner longer than those in other diffs?

1. your spread might got some problem. there's a gap of skill requirements between Easy and Advanced.
2. only this diff got an entirely different combo colour set.
3. should better check all of your distance snaps. some snaps looks weird, like 00:15:760 (1,2,3,4) - 00:22:683 (2,3,1) -
4. 00:01:914 (1,2) - your note density goes down all of a sudden. there's not enough differences for you to do that, to be honest.
5. 00:07:491 - a drum got skipped.
6. 00:07:683 - still, the note density suddenly goes up from here. any reason for that?
7. 00:08:645 - I can't understand why this vocal was ignored when some less important places got covered, like 00:07:876 - .
8. 00:11:145 (1) - as a downbeat, I was expecting a direction change here, but it still goes to the same direction.
9. 00:13:260 (2,3,4,5) - This pattern is way too dense. though there's a lot of 1/2 vocal here, you still have some other choices like 1/2 reverses and sliders.
10. 00:14:222 (6) - After the previous pattern, this slider has a huge problem. It might fit in Easy, but not here cuz the 1/2 vocals haven't stopped. that skipped some details, and also makes density drop suddenly. btw this place deserves an NC.
11. 00:17:299 (1,2) - Personally I'll make them into a 1/1 reverse slider and leave a short break on 00:18:452 - for players.
12. 00:27:299 (2) - I'll change this into two 1/2 sliders to keep the consistency with 00:25:760 (2,3) - .
13. 00:29:606 (1,2,3,4) - those circles make this pattern kinda awkward under that long vocal. imo you should remove/adjust some of them and leave some blank. (but not 00:30:760 (4) - because of those 1/4 hihats)
14. 00:32:299 (3) - unlike 00:31:145 (1,2) - , there's nothing worth to be represented on its slider end. maybe you should change it into a simple circle. imo that can make 00:32:683 (1) - be emphasized more.

1. Too repetitive. After the kiai starts, you tried to focus on the background samples ONLY, which makes the map extremely repetitive. If possible, making some changes for vocal is a good idea. (for example, add a note on 00:22:202 -, or start a slider at 00:23:068 - ...etc.)
2. Lack of varieties. There are only simple triples for the 1/4, but you can do much more than that.
   
   examples

   
   first two can be done on triples, and the last two can be done on vocals (like 00:28:068 (1,2) - )
3. 00:29:606 - If I were you I would start the long slider here.
4. 00:31:049 - this place deserves a note too.

Sinnoh wrote:

M4M, mostly distance/spacing

Kawaii

00:02:299 (2,3,4,5) - This combo here has slightly inconsistent spacing, use smaller grid ok I think I fixed it

00:08:837 (3) - Same ok

00:16:529 (3,4,5) - Same ok

00:20:664 (2,3) - Optional - Difficult to do with the prior combo, would suggest a fast slider for this + other similar combos like 00:23:741 (2) no

00:21:722 (6) - Move further away from (5), or move (5) instead. ok

Was confused with a couple of the double notes
00:23:741 (2,3) -
00:25:760 (3,4) - Both are two notes stacked but have different note timings, distance space this a touch no, I don't think so.

00:27:299 (2) - Move this further away from (1), goes from slow to fast with similar spacing. Use smaller grid for this. ok

00:29:029 (6) & 00:32:683 (1) - Same as 25.760 no

I'd suggest going through the map on a grid snap 1 size smaller and just re-snapping everything, should make distances more consistent. I'll think about it, but for now I like the way it is

Hard

00:04:029 (2) - I really think a note should be here there already is a note there

00:11:914 (3,4) - Could replace both of these with circles at 00:11:914 (3,4) - nah

00:15:760 (1,2,3) - This combo makes me want to rush the next two long sliders. Suggesting to make 00:15:760 (1) longer and remove 00:16:145 (2). that would get rid of the claps I already have.

00:17:106 (5) - Put on the right side of the slider ok

00:31:722 (2) - Too far, again, would suggest to go through the map with smaller distance snap and recheck everything. uh, so rip blanket? It's far away because I wan't a good blanket

For Easy, spinner should to be further away from last slider, noobies need more time to react to it.

Could potentially add a couple more tags, look at similar maps to get ideas.

GL with ranking!

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

quick.

[waht]

1. you need a metadata confirmation, Artist is obviously wrong. ok
2. offset -7 ~ -9 nope
3. You have to change your hitsounding. There are like only 5% objects are hitsounded in Easy and Advanced, and lots of hitsounds are overused in Hard.

[easy]

1. AR6 on easy, you gotta be kidding me okoko
2. an overall problem on NCs: they are not only inconstant, but also too dense. High NC density can raise up the recovering speed from hitting objects, so for the balancing you should raise the HP or reduce NCs. Of course, personally I'll just reduce them. (this should applied to all diffs tbh)
3. 00:04:222 (2,1) - You're now making an Easy diff under 156 BPM, which means objects in 1/2 is not recommended here. I'd rather change them into a single 3/2 slider.
4. 00:28:068 (1) - it becomes quite weird when you tried to go with vocal all along the map. the beat placement skips too much details, and those can be better represented in some other ways. (for example, I'll just shorten the slider to 00:28:837 - and add one more circle to the gap.) only a simple kink is still not enough.
5. 00:31:145 (1,2,3,4) - this one is a fatal one, even if the song is in low BPM. You suddenly raise the difficulty, that's not a good idea for players at this level. Also, there are three slider ends which are not even necessary here (00:31:529 - 00:32:106 - 00:32:491 - ), the map can still be well-played if those beats are removed. If I were you I would just replace 00:31:145 (1,2,3) - with a 3/2 reverse for simplifying the beats.
6. 00:33:068 (1) - why is this spinner longer than those in other diffs?

[advanced]

1. your spread might got some problem. there's a gap of skill requirements between Easy and Advanced.
2. only this diff got an entirely different combo colour set.
3. should better check all of your distance snaps. some snaps looks weird, like 00:15:760 (1,2,3,4) - 00:22:683 (2,3,1) -
4. 00:01:914 (1,2) - your note density goes down all of a sudden. there's not enough differences for you to do that, to be honest.
5. 00:07:491 - a drum got skipped.
6. 00:07:683 - still, the note density suddenly goes up from here. any reason for that?
7. 00:08:645 - I can't understand why this vocal was ignored when some less important places got covered, like 00:07:876 - .
8. 00:11:145 (1) - as a downbeat, I was expecting a direction change here, but it still goes to the same direction.
9. 00:13:260 (2,3,4,5) - This pattern is way too dense. though there's a lot of 1/2 vocal here, you still have some other choices like 1/2 reverses and sliders.
10. 00:14:222 (6) - After the previous pattern, this slider has a huge problem. It might fit in Easy, but not here cuz the 1/2 vocals haven't stopped. that skipped some details, and also makes density drop suddenly. btw this place deserves an NC.
11. 00:17:299 (1,2) - Personally I'll make them into a 1/1 reverse slider and leave a short break on 00:18:452 - for players.
12. 00:27:299 (2) - I'll change this into two 1/2 sliders to keep the consistency with 00:25:760 (2,3) - .
13. 00:29:606 (1,2,3,4) - those circles make this pattern kinda awkward under that long vocal. imo you should remove/adjust some of them and leave some blank. (but not 00:30:760 (4) - because of those 1/4 hihats)
14. 00:32:299 (3) - unlike 00:31:145 (1,2) - , there's nothing worth to be represented on its slider end. maybe you should change it into a simple circle. imo that can make 00:32:683 (1) - be emphasized more.

[hard]
I'd rather give some suggestions for this.

1. Too repetitive. After the kiai starts, you tried to focus on the background samples ONLY, which makes the map extremely repetitive. If possible, making some changes for vocal is a good idea. (for example, add a note on 00:22:202 -, or start a slider at 00:23:068 - ...etc.)
2. Lack of varieties. There are only simple triples for the 1/4, but you can do much more than that.
   
   examples

   
   first two can be done on triples, and the last two can be done on vocals (like 00:28:068 (1,2) - )
3. 00:29:606 - If I were you I would start the long slider here.
4. 00:31:049 - this place deserves a note too.

[]
it can be better.

1. Alright so, many things to edit on your diffs. The easy have so many blankets errors.
2. About the skin : Skin is nice, but in the file of the map, everything is not necessary.
   You can remove : comboburst-5 and comboburst-6 because, the Hard has 163x. ~117 for the easy and ~140 for the normal.
   A comboburst is at 30x - 60x - 100x and 150x (ect..) so your map dosn't need those comboburst (comboburst-5 and comboburst-6)
   Also, all the "ranking-C-small, blablabla" aren't necessary. The skin is only aviable on your map, and not in the beatmap selector.
3. Timing looks kida good.
4. I don't think that so many sliderticks are neccessary in the easy, imo, maybe you can fix it. (imo don't forget)
5. Well, now, let's do this mod.

1. Like I said at "General", I don't think this diff needs so much sliderticks, imo.
2. 00:00:376 : Blanket. You can fix it, this is not perfect, and it will looks better with a good blanket.
3. 00:09:011 : Small blanket.
4. 00:11:914 : Blanket. You can fix it, this is not perfect, and it will looks better with a good blanket.
5. 00:25:760 : Do a blanket with it
6. rest looks good

1. Nothing to say about it. Just a few things.
2. 00:20:376 : Remove NC.
3. 00:32:683 : ^
4. other looks good

1. Like the previous diff, looks nice.
2. 00:18:068 : fix this flow, I think it will better with a better flow.
3. 00:32:683 : Remove NC, and then place the circles like this > http://puu.sh/qnlSr/c2032dde6e.jpg
4. Rest is correct

Imakuri wrote:

from PM

[General]

1. Alright so, many things to edit on your diffs. The easy have so many blankets errors.
2. About the skin : Skin is nice, but in the file of the map, everything is not necessary.
   You can remove : comboburst-5 and comboburst-6 because, the Hard has 163x. ~117 for the easy and ~140 for the normal.
   A comboburst is at 30x - 60x - 100x and 150x (ect..) so your map dosn't need those comboburst (comboburst-5 and comboburst-6)
   Also, all the "ranking-C-small, blablabla" aren't necessary. The skin is only aviable on your map, and not in the beatmap selector.
3. Timing looks kida good.
4. I don't think that so many sliderticks are neccessary in the easy, imo, maybe you can fix it. (imo don't forget)
5. Well, now, let's do this mod.

[Easy]

1. Like I said at "General", I don't think this diff needs so much sliderticks, imo.
2. 00:00:376 : Blanket. You can fix it, this is not perfect, and it will looks better with a good blanket.
3. 00:09:011 : Small blanket.
4. 00:11:914 : Blanket. You can fix it, this is not perfect, and it will looks better with a good blanket.
5. 00:25:760 : Do a blanket with it no
6. rest looks good

[Advanced]

1. Nothing to say about it. Just a few things.
2. 00:20:376 : Remove NC.
3. 00:32:683 : ^
4. other looks good

[Cute (I don't like japanese word like it sorry)]

1. Like the previous diff, looks nice.
2. 00:18:068 : fix this flow, I think it will better with a better flow.
3. 00:32:683 : Remove NC, and then place the circles like this > http://puu.sh/qnlSr/c2032dde6e.jpg removed nc, but didn't place circles the way you showed me
4. Rest is correct

gl for rank

1. make your slider tick rate consistent
2. set custom combo colors
3. use more hitsounds, it seems you seldom use hitsounds
4. remove neko from the tags, it's the artist

1. your hp and od should be lower, like 1 or 2
2. make DS consistent everywhere, check aimod
3. 00:04:222 (6) - end this 00:04:799 - here
4. 00:08:068 (3) - since you follow the lyrics, end this slider 00:08:645 - here, and arrange it like this: http://puu.sh/qnvQ1/13c2a44ced.jpg
5. 00:11:145 (1,2) - ds error not picked up by Aimod
6. 00:14:222 - same error as 00:08:068 (3) - here, fix it like this: http://puu.sh/qnvXO/74a3834848.jpg
7. 00:27:299 (4) - overlap is ugly, and fix DS
8. 00:28:068 (1) - NC
9. 00:29:606 (9) - why do you end this 00:30:183 - here?
10. 00:32:683 (2) - for a strong finish: http://puu.sh/qnw3H/00e47871f1.jpg

1. it doesn't make sense to map an advanced and an easy without having a normal in between, this difficulty feels like a huge difficulty jump from Easy
2. make your CS higher, like between 3.5 and 3.8
3. 00:01:145 (4) - remove NC
4. 00:09:029 (2,3) - auto stack these, it looks better imo
5. 00:08:068 (1) - blanket this to 00:09:222 (3) - this
6. 00:13:452 (3,4,5,6,7) - 1/2 slider spam, doing this subtracts from the rhythm, maybe use this rhythm: http://puu.sh/qnwL6/93d5aae69b.jpg
7. 00:26:145 (3,1) - fix blanket?
8. 00:29:606 (1) - the slider points are so strange here, a normal curve would be better, and there's no reason to end it 00:30:183 - here, the white tick sounds better
9. 00:32:299 (3) - just a circle sounds more structured here

1. 00:00:376 (1,2) - fix blanket
2. 00:06:529 (1) - this slider is telling the player to "follow the lyrics", but the pattern follows the instruments until00:06:529 (1) - here
3. 00:21:049 - don't ignore this strong lyric
4. 00:22:683 (3,4,5,1) - fix blanket if it is
5. 00:25:376 (2,1) - overlap looks bad
6. 00:30:568 (2,1) - ^
7. 00:31:145 (1,3) - ^

Jonawaga wrote:

#modreqs4#modreqs

[general]

1. make your slider tick rate consistent ok
2. set custom combo colors
3. use more hitsounds, it seems you seldom use hitsounds ok
4. remove neko from the tags, it's the artist

ok
[easy]

1. your hp and od should be lower, like 1 or 2
2. make DS consistent everywhere, check aimod
3. 00:04:222 (6) - end this 00:04:799 - here
4. 00:08:068 (3) - since you follow the lyrics, end this slider 00:08:645 - here, and arrange it like this: http://puu.sh/qnvQ1/13c2a44ced.jpg no.
5. 00:11:145 (1,2) - ds error not picked up by Aimod
6. 00:14:222 - same error as 00:08:068 (3) - here, fix it like this: http://puu.sh/qnvXO/74a3834848.jpg
7. 00:27:299 (4) - overlap is ugly, and fix DS
8. 00:28:068 (1) - NC
9. 00:29:606 (9) - why do you end this 00:30:183 - here?
10. 00:32:683 (2) - for a strong finish: http://puu.sh/qnw3H/00e47871f1.jpg

[advanced]

1. it doesn't make sense to map an advanced and an easy without having a normal in between, this difficulty feels like a huge difficulty jump from Easy
2. make your CS higher, like between 3.5 and 3.8
3. 00:01:145 (4) - remove NC
4. 00:09:029 (2,3) - auto stack these, it looks better imo
5. 00:08:068 (1) - blanket this to 00:09:222 (3) - this
6. 00:13:452 (3,4,5,6,7) - 1/2 slider spam, doing this subtracts from the rhythm, maybe use this rhythm: http://puu.sh/qnwL6/93d5aae69b.jpg
7. 00:26:145 (3,1) - fix blanket?
8. 00:29:606 (1) - the slider points are so strange here, a normal curve would be better, and there's no reason to end it 00:30:183 - here, the white tick sounds better
9. 00:32:299 (3) - just a circle sounds more structured here

[hawaii]
[list][*]00:00:376 (1,2) - fix blanket
[*]00:06:529 (1) - this slider is telling the player to "follow the lyrics", but the pattern follows the instruments until00:06:529 (1) - here thanks for the story! Very nice facts about my map No but seriously it's fine.
[*]00:21:049 - don't ignore this strong lyric
[*]00:22:683 (3,4,5,1) - fix blanket if it is no, not a blanket
[*]00:25:376 (2,1) - overlap looks bad
[*]00:30:568 (2,1) - ^ [color=#80FF00]won't effect gameply]
Good Luck~ :3

october wrote:

m4m from #modreqs
00:30:568 - ending kiai here sounds like a good idea, could be just me yup, your right

Kawaii

00:04:991 - mapping this would be good since the song is really short, a single note on every "Lala" and a triple on the "watashi wa" or 3 single taps and a slider. sure
00:20:376 (1,2,3) - to make it consistant, try making (3) into a slider? or just ignore it as it could ruin the flow of the map, up to you.
00:12:683 (3) - end the slider on the red tick and place a note where the slider originally end it, the song has 2 claps so it sounds reasonable to do this(add two clap hs to the two notes)

00:15:376 - 00:15:568 - could be mapped too, unless you decided to only map vocals.
00:21:145 (6) - instead of ending a slider on a major vocal, try starting a slider here? or reverse the slider
00:33:068 - 5 note stream here?

Normal

00:05:183 - single tap stack on top of a slider instead of leaving it empty?

00:30:760 (2) - start the NC here instead of 00:31:145 (1) - ok
00:26:529 (1) - ending a slider on a major vocal feels off
00:14:222 (5) - NC ok

1. 00:01:145 (2,3) - Fix flow.
2. 00:02:683 (4,5) - Improve flow.
3. 00:07:299 (2,3) - Try to fix the curve in the middle on those 2 sliders.
4. 00:08:068 (3,4) - Fix blanket.
5. 00:11:145 (1,2) - ^.
6. 00:13:452 (4,1) - Really weird change of flow.
7. 00:27:299 (4,6) - Overlaps ARE NOT permitted on easy diffs.
8. 00:28:068 (6,9) - ^.
9. 00:29:606 (9,1) - Fix flow.

1. 00:07:683 (3) - Singletap please.
2. 00:08:452 (2) - Here the vocal mantains it self so try to add a slider.
3. 00:08:068 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
4. 00:18:837 (1,2) - Fix flow.
5. 00:20:760 (4,5) - ^.
6. 00:23:068 (3,1) - Fix blanket.
7. 00:23:452 (1,2) - Fix flow.
8. 00:28:068 (1,1) - Try to evade this overlap.

1. 00:00:376 (1,2) - Make a better flow.
2. 00:01:337 (4,5,6) - Unnecesary triplet.
3. 00:02:299 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really weird pattern.
4. 00:03:837 (2,1) - Really weird change of flow.
5. 00:06:337 (5) - Missing note.
6. 00:08:068 (1,2) - Really weird change of flow.
7. 00:08:837 (3,4) - Improve flow.
8. 00:09:606 (1,2,3,4) - Really weird pattern.
9. 00:10:376 (5,6) - Fix flow.
10. 00:12:491 (2) - Extra note
11. 00:12:491 (2,1) - Fix flow.
12. 00:13:452 (3,4) - ^.
13. 00:16:145 (2) - Ctrl+J.
14. 00:17:299 (1,2) - Weird flow.
15. 00:19:510 (3) - Extra note.
16. 00:19:799 (5,6,7,1) - Weird change of flow.
17. 00:21:914 (1,2) - Fix flow.
18. 00:23:356 (5) - Extra note
19. 00:26:529 (1,2) - Weird change of flow.
20. 00:28:068 (1,2) - Fix flow.
21. 00:28:741 (4) - Extra note.
22. 00:29:222 (7,8,9,1) - Weird change of flow.
23. 00:31:145 (1,2) - Fix flow.
24. 00:31:722 (2,3) - Fix blanket

Weriko wrote:

Some Irc mod

22:22 Weriko: okay
22:22 Weriko: kawaii diff seems alright
22:22 Whirl: Thanks!
22:22 Weriko: maybe just this overlap 00:04:414 (2,3,4,5,6) -
22:23 Whirl: I meant that to be a quality pattern, but your right it looks a little weird uwu I"ll fix
22:23 Weriko: :p
22:25 Weriko: okay
22:25 Weriko: at normal diff
22:25 Weriko: ar might be too low?
22:25 Weriko: or maybe im not used to low ar ;-;
22:25 Weriko: but it feels a bit stacked
22:26 Weriko: not sure why if spacing is well too
22:27 Weriko: 00:01:914 (1) - maybe change this slider for something like this?
22:27 Weriko: like this
22:27 Weriko: 00:00:760 (2,3) -
22:29 Weriko: and easy seems well too
22:30 Whirl: ok
22:30 Whirl: sorry
22:30 Whirl: was afk
22:30 Weriko: :p
22:31 Whirl: ar is a little too low, raised it
22:31 Weriko: okay :p
22:31 Whirl: is the normal well spaced?
22:31 Weriko: yeah
22:32 Whirl: okay
22:32 Whirl: so is that the end of the mod?
22:32 Weriko: i guess
22:32 Weriko: your song is already good :p
22:32 Weriko: map
22:32 Whirl: wow, thanks!
22:32 Whirl: yea I already had like 20 mods
22:33 Weriko: :3
22:35 Weriko: okay, good luck! :p



Good Luck!!!! :p

-Bumblebee- wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs :3

Easy

1. 00:03:452 (5,6) - improve a bit this blanket
2. 00:08:068 (3,4) - same
3. 00:11:145 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:29:606 (9) - you can also extend this till the white tick. It depends on what kind of beat are you following, so it's up to you ^^ Folloowing vocals

Normal

1. 00:01:914 (6) - NC here (New Combo)
2. 00:11:145 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - the map is too focused on the middle, try to use the whole screen ok i'll remember for next time, but as it is now it's still rankable (which is what i'm aiming for) but i'll know for next time!
3. 00:14:222 (1,2) - maybe add a clap at the end of 1 and at number 2?

Kawaii

1. 00:20:664 (2) - seems overmapped :/ slow down speed and remove notes to hear the beats
2. 00:23:741 (2) - same ^

Last diff seems good, nice ^^

Gus wrote:

hi m4m from #modreqs hit me w halcyon

[Kawaii]
00:16:145 (2) - curve this slider for better angle into the next notes, blanket #3 Done
00:20:664 (2,3) - make this double into a short slider, plays better coming right off #1 no, it would mess with consistansy and it doesn't look good
00:23:741 (2,3) - ^, however maybe changing one and keeping the other is better for variation
^ I hear the beats for these two, but don't think a double plays well at this level I think it's okay

[Normal]
00:04:414 (3) - for some reason this slider sounds better to me if you put it on the blue tick and repeat it once (back n forth slider) nah, It sounds good
00:27:299 (4,5,1) - feels and looks a little better like this imo

SPOILER

and rip ds? Nah I think it's good the way it is
00:32:299 (4,5) - these might play better as a note on white tick stacked with a back and forth no

[Easy]
00:28:068 (6) - NC for consistency perhaps? ok

All I could find, map looks solid

1. Add more Combo colours? (Like brown and yellow) reference from the brown cat and cat's necklace

lazyboy007 wrote:

OH MY GOD that skin O_o

Hey from modding queue for NM ^^ Sorry for being a little late

Easy:

00:08:068 (3,4) - blanket this a little better imo ok
00:25:760 (2) - curve less and ctrl+g +h + j looks better curved it less, but not ctrl+j+g+h or whatever

Normal:

00:09:606 (1,2) - blanket? idk maybe ctrl+g +h +j the slider olk
00:29:606 (1) - weird shape Took this into consideration for a bit, but then a lot of people like it so it's stayingc

Kawaii:

Some sliders are too long otherwise nice diff aww thanks!

Good luck going for ranked ~

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

hi
just a noob modder passing by

[General]

1. Add more Combo colours? (Like brown and yellow) reference from the brown cat and cat's necklace

nah red and pink is good enough for me

[Easy]
00:01:914 (3) - move little bit up? for better flow
00:02:683 (4,5) - too close and also NC at slider (4)
00:02:683 (4,5,6) - this pattern looks weird imo ~,slider (5) looks close with slider (3) and the movement looks to narrow.maybe try to unblanket them?
00:08:068 (3) - move little bit down? it looks better imo
00:13:452 (4) - swap to slidertail so it make consistent and conformity with previous slider
00:15:376 (2,3) - ds
00:16:529 (4) - why finish here? (it looks unnecessary)
00:17:299 (5) - make the slider neater
00:18:837 (1) - it would be great if u add finish here
00:21:914 (1) - whistle
00:28:068 (1,2,4) - finish (i hear cymbal here)
00:28:068 (1,4) - overlap
00:29:606 (4) - the slider end looks odd imo,maybe ended it to the next tick
00:31:145 (1) - finish on head,tail,and also sliderend (cymbal emphatize)\

the hitsound an empty lot i suggest u add more hitsound

[Kawaii]
00:05:760 (4) - this slider seems not suit with rhythm imo maybe 2 1/2 sliders wouold be better
00:08:452 (2,3,4) - i'm not sure whay u following here,if u want emphatize to vocal so make it clickable here and add long (1/1) slider at here 00:08:645 like this pattern 00:14:222 (1,2,3)
00:11:914 (1) - remnove nc (it looks unnecessary)
00:14:222 (1) - ^
00:18:068 (1) - ^

for the hitsound issues same as easy ~

GL! in ranked ~

• 
  section pass/fail textures (there are no breaks)
  All of the hit300 textures (not practical for the game in general, if you wish to keep them make them very small)
  Every texture related to out of play menus (menu-back, mod/options buttons, star etc)
  The skip buttons (theres nothing to skip)
  playfield (obsolete for at least 2 years)

• 00:00:376 (1,2) -
  00:07:683 (5,1,2,3,4) -
  00:11:914 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
  00:17:683 (2,3) - this is unrankable
  00:25:376 (2,3,4,5,1) -
  00:31:145 (1,2,3,4) -

MisterDinner wrote:

lol wtf is this song, it sounds like a really good cover of something



The timing is off by 2 deciseconds, the offset is 356 instead of 376, yeah theres a little tick on the Canadian counter there now because i read that you dont prioritize timing as much as aesthetics (I dont actually know if thats from me lol). The timing is literally everything, if its off by 2 deciseconds like it is right now it makes it insanely more unplayable. timing isn't off what I did was take a mp3 from a ranked map (the same song) and put the same bpm and offset, maybe your universal offset was off when you played it?

The skin isnt good, it looks like a skin from 2010, there are also tons of elements that are in here for no reason, these should all be removed thats the point, the skin looks old because it's neko related and the song is neko related :/

• 
  section pass/fail textures (there are no breaks)
  All of the hit300 textures (not practical for the game in general, if you wish to keep them make them very small)
  Every texture related to out of play menus (menu-back, mod/options buttons, star etc)
  The skip buttons (theres nothing to skip)
  playfield (obsolete for at least 2 years)

I dont know anything about ctb, its the only mode i dont play, so i cant say anything about the skinning for that.
Replace the 50/100 textures with these (right click -> save, im not insulting your intelligence or anything some people dont know thats all


I SSed/fced the first 2 diffs hddthr easily but i couldnt get more than a C on kawaii. again like I said it's probably you played the map with your universal offset, I know it's timed correctly. And also the whole map is meant to be a light insane thats why the diff name is 'kawaii' hence it being the hardest diff

[easy]
00:06:529 (1,1) - wtf? it took me a few tries to realize it was the map's fault. oh how did I not notice that? Sorry :/

[tbh all the problems are in the kawaii diff]
To start, the kawaii diff looks really, really messy, as if you rushed it, please dont tell me you rushed a 30 second diff -_- actually do if you did actually it's not rushed, I don't map by [/color] flow has got to be my least priority, I just wan't my map to look nice for starters, but at the end I will adjust patterns for a more flowy look
It just isnt very fun to play currently, and it doesnt look good.
Make the hitsounding more complex so the taiko version is also 3 stars (its 2.72 currently, if you need help, hitsounding isnt my thing, try contacting someone more experienced) ok
Things that dont look right in their current formation

• 00:00:376 (1,2) - ok
  00:07:683 (5,1,2,3,4) - ok
  00:11:914 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - nah it's a curve flow
  00:17:683 (2,3) - this is unrankable don't think it was unrankable, but I switched the sliders around to make it more readable
  00:25:376 (2,3,4,5,1) - sure
  00:31:145 (1,2,3,4) - sure

I suggest more symmetrical patterns, but not like an andrea map, the style youre going for right now is fit for a hyper fast map like 168 - 401 no sorry I don't map symetrical patterns :/ It's insanely old looking imo

Take a look at this, its super helpful for learning aesthetics and playable/rankable patterns, because jump patterns are what make a map look good and play good, i sucked ass until recently but all of a sudden my friends who have been playing a years worth of crap maps from me are praising me because i read this stuff (also some help from another mapper) (this is starting to sound like one of those free money system ads lol) this is the map theyre praising btw, scroll down to see the first impressions box.
There also shouldnt be patterns of 1/4 that contain more than 3 notes in a 3 star diff, save that for 4 stars. what? I'm sorry but 1/4 triples are used in A LOT of light insanes also known as 3.5*, thats how I mapped it to be used as a light insane, thats why the mapping looks hard but the cs is 3 and ar 7.5 to make it easier. and yes I've read that forum before but I decide to map like this 'looks first, sounds second, flow third'

00:28:452 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - inconsistent spacing oh ok

I guess thats it, its just the kawaii diff that has problems.

also (again), this slider guide is very very very very veryveryveryveryveryveryveryvery old, but still mildly valid, just in case you need it at some point (keep in mind back then i dont think they had the 3 joint bends we can do now.)

Greetings from Toronto.
This took me like 2 hours, but im feeling good knowing youll get something out of it im sure.

General

1. BPM / Offset: They both look good.
2. Folder: CTB specific skinning, although you don't have any gamemode for ctb? Unsure about this :3
3. Metadata: Seems alright
4. AiMod: Nothing serious!

Easy

Blanket

Normal

Kawaii

Other than a little brushing up on your hard difficulty I think this is a really solid mapset, best of luck in ranking!

-Space- wrote:

M4M, we talked ingame ! ^^

General

1. BPM / Offset: They both look good.
2. Folder: CTB specific skinning, although you don't have any gamemode for ctb? Unsure about this :3
3. Metadata: Seems alright
4. AiMod: Nothing serious!

Easy

00:01:914 (4) - NC here for a consistency with other difficulties.

00:08:068 (3) - Blanket isn't correct at the start of the slider to the approach point of the circle.

Blanket

00:26:529 (3,1) - Overlap here, I would space it out a little more. (:

Normal

00:09:606 (1,2) - Make this curve less extreme in order to get the blanket consistently around the approach circle.

00:24:222 (2) - I think it'd flow better if you moved it further to the right so the sliderend from the previous one works better with it.

00:29:606 (1) - Personally not a fan of the sharp curve on this slider, kind of looks like an outdated type of slider shape.

Kawaii

00:04:414 (2,3,4,5,6) - Instead of the stack, I would have it /slowly/ go to the right as a trail.

00:10:183 (4,5) - I would remove this random stack, it kind of kills the flow you had going . :3

00:18:645 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Feels a little diff spikey, could remove some streamy elements with 1/4 sliders and such?

00:19:799 (5,6,7,1) - Perhaps you could make this a blanket too would add nice aesthetic flow to it. (:

00:22:683 (3) - Make this curve more subtle to amplify a blanket.

00:26:529 (1,2,3,4) - Anti jump? Looks like it would easily throw players randomly.

00:29:606 (1) - Make the beginning and the end curves symmetrical?

00:30:760 (3,4,5,6,1) - Make sure to keep the spacing here consistent it looks a touch messy otherwise.

00:31:145 (1,2) - ( I would just stack these instead.)

Other than a little brushing up on your hard difficulty I think this is a really solid mapset, best of luck in ranking!

1. 00:33:068 (1) - spinner is not necessary. change to note

1. 00:01:914 (4) - turn 10 degrees and make more pretty slider like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5847086 this
2. 00:29:606 (1) - cut the slider at 00:30:760 - here

• 
  You must use the same distance in this diff. for example) 00:10:183 (2) -

1. 00:08:068 (1) - I almost don't blanket mod but It's too strange so yeah.
2. 00:13:837 (4) - head clap
3. 00:16:529 (4) - tail clap
4. 00:17:299 (1) - all finish? It's my taste but high recommend

1. 00:04:799 - add a note

Beomsan wrote:

from my queue.
cute song xD

[General]

1. 00:33:068 (1) - spinner is not necessary. change to note

no, it works as a spinner and i'd like to have at least ONE spinner

[Easy]

1. 00:01:914 (4) - turn 10 degrees and make more pretty slider like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5847086 this I think it's okay
2. 00:29:606 (1) - cut the slider at 00:30:760 - here

ok

[Normal]

• 
  You must use the same distance in this diff. for example) 00:10:183 (2) - ok

1. 00:08:068 (1) - I almost don't blanket mod but It's too strange so yeah. ok fixed
2. 00:13:837 (4) - head clap sure
3. 00:16:529 (4) - tail clap yea
4. 00:17:299 (1) - all finish? It's my taste but high recommend

sounds great! thanks!

[Kawaii]

1. 00:04:799 - add a note

ok

lol gl with this lol

Zyl wrote:

#modreqs

Easy

1. 00:01:145 (2,3) - Fix flow.
2. 00:02:683 (4,5) - Improve flow.
3. 00:07:299 (2,3) - Try to fix the curve in the middle on those 2 sliders.
4. 00:08:068 (3,4) - Fix blanket.
5. 00:11:145 (1,2) - ^.
6. 00:13:452 (4,1) - Really weird change of flow.
7. 00:27:299 (4,6) - Overlaps ARE NOT permitted on easy diffs.
8. 00:28:068 (6,9) - ^.
9. 00:29:606 (9,1) - Fix flow.

Normal

1. 00:07:683 (3) - Singletap please.
2. 00:08:452 (2) - Here the vocal mantains it self so try to add a slider.
3. 00:08:068 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
4. 00:18:837 (1,2) - Fix flow.
5. 00:20:760 (4,5) - ^.
6. 00:23:068 (3,1) - Fix blanket.
7. 00:23:452 (1,2) - Fix flow.
8. 00:28:068 (1,1) - Try to evade this overlap.

Hard

1. 00:00:376 (1,2) - Make a better flow.
2. 00:01:337 (4,5,6) - Unnecesary triplet.
3. 00:02:299 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really weird pattern.
4. 00:03:837 (2,1) - Really weird change of flow.
5. 00:06:337 (5) - Missing note.
6. 00:08:068 (1,2) - Really weird change of flow.
7. 00:08:837 (3,4) - Improve flow.
8. 00:09:606 (1,2,3,4) - Really weird pattern.
9. 00:10:376 (5,6) - Fix flow.
10. 00:12:491 (2) - Extra note
11. 00:12:491 (2,1) - Fix flow.
12. 00:13:452 (3,4) - ^.
13. 00:16:145 (2) - Ctrl+J.
14. 00:17:299 (1,2) - Weird flow.
15. 00:19:510 (3) - Extra note.
16. 00:19:799 (5,6,7,1) - Weird change of flow.
17. 00:21:914 (1,2) - Fix flow.
18. 00:23:356 (5) - Extra note
19. 00:26:529 (1,2) - Weird change of flow.
20. 00:28:068 (1,2) - Fix flow.
21. 00:28:741 (4) - Extra note.
22. 00:29:222 (7,8,9,1) - Weird change of flow.
23. 00:31:145 (1,2) - Fix flow.
24. 00:31:722 (2,3) - Fix blanket

Try to put the grid off while mapping .

general

easy

normal

kawaii

-Dave Strider- wrote:

m4m

general

AImod says your tags are different between diffs, make sure u fix that
also, the hitsounding is really inconsistent between diffs and is kinda random but im not that good at hitsounding so idk how to elaborate more ;-;

easy

-00:01:529 (3) - make sure this is lined up with 00:01:145 (2) better (try x=236 y=160)
-00:16:529 (4) - why is there a clap here?
-00:09:222 (4) - i would add a clap here
-00:12:299 (2) - ^
-00:15:376 (2) - ^
-00:24:222 (4) - ^ (the end of it)
-00:27:683 (5) - ^

normal

-talked about this in game bt the main issue is the flow, ill try to suggest how to fix it here
-00:00:760 (2,3) - should be directly above 00:00:376 (1) instead of crooked imo
-00:01:914 (1,2) - should be under 00:01:529 (5) (like this)
-00:04:991 (1) - imo this is way too close to the end of 00:04:799 (4) and 00:06:529 (1) , for new players it might be not enough time to react
-i'd replace 00:07:683 (3) with a single note, i think it sounds better
-you can blanket 00:10:183 (2) with 00:09:606 (1) (like so)
-tbh you can replace 00:10:376 (3,4,5) with something like this, it sounds better with the song
-move 00:12:299 (4) further down (x=266 y=301)
-blanket 00:13:260 (2) with 00:12:683 (1)
-00:16:145 (2,3,4) - placement is awkward

kawaii

-i think you should make the cs smaller since its an insane diff (like cs 4 or 5 would do)
-00:20:183 (6,7) this is really crooked, straighten these so it lines up with 00:20:376 (1)
-00:29:414 (8,9) - remove these, they dont go with the song at all imo

good luck! :p

CookieKivi wrote:

m4m~

ez

00:01:145 (2) - blanket please~
00:08:068 (3) - place it like this http://puu.sh/qIdy0.jpg
00:09:222 (4) - blanket
00:15:376 (2) - 136 128 ?
00:22:683 (2) - right after the end of 00:21:914 (1) - would look better example
00:32:683 (2) - maybe just a circle?

nm

pls turn ds on - thats all. ovo

hd (kawaii)

turn down the hitsound volume a bit, its too loud uwu

00:01:145 (3) - 256 144 would make a better flow~
00:04:414 (2,3,4,5,6) - fix distance with ds~
00:16:145 (2) - weird flow
00:16:529 (3,4,5,6) - try to create some different jump patterns like in my map - if you are too lazy example
00:18:068 (3) - try to avoid overlap
00:19:510 (3,4) - underlap thoose with sliderend
00:20:664 (2,3) - ^
00:23:741 (2,3) - ^ - it just looks.. muuch better~



gl! :3

Hobbes2 wrote:

m4m

[general]

check ai mod for some stuff

[easy]

00:00:376 (1,2) - the placement of these notes is meh because you can't really blanket them because it would look weird, but how it is now doesn't look great either

00:01:914 (4) - NC, 00:03:452 (6) - NC (or something, this combo is too long)

00:09:606 (5) - NCing every other downbeat would probably fit as you'd have combos that are like 4-5 notes long, which is good for an easy

00:08:068 (3) - This shape is ugly to me, smooth the curve out some IMO

00:28:068 (1) - are both the head and tail supposed to have finish?

[Normal]

the AR is way too high, something like 4 is probably more appropriate

00:04:991 (1,1) - not enough recovery time after the spinner, for a normal it should be at least 2 beats

00:13:452 (3,3) - this overlap is not very good

00:12:683 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - these claps sound so random, what are they supposed to be for? maybe whistles instead would fit

00:29:606 (1) - this shape would probably be better if it was symmetrical

00:30:760 (1) - remove NC, 00:31:145 (2) - NC

[kawaii]

ar 8? i think

00:04:414 (2,3,4,5,6) - make this symmetrical by copy pasting 00:04:414 (2,3) - and rotating it

00:04:222 (1) - I dont think this NC is necessary

00:05:183 (1,2,3) - why the spacing variance? These sounds are all the same level pretty much, nothing to emphasize

00:14:222 (5) - NC for consistency

fun diff!

good luck

Whirl wrote:

it's been a month since this has been uploaded, very happy with the progress, keep up the good work mods!

Ascendance wrote:

Thanks! Applied most suggestions.