LiSA - Rising Hope -TV ver.- · forum

lolia

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2016-06-15T11:20:53+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016. 9. 27 화 at 오전 12:01:14

Artist: LiSA
Title: Rising Hope -TV ver.-
Source: 魔法科高校の劣等生
Tags: Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei The Irregular at Magic High School opening HabiHolic
BPM: 190
Filesize: 10977kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

Extra (5.37 stars, 390 notes)
Habi's Insane (4.57 stars, 339 notes)
Hard (2.64 stars, 228 notes)
Hopeless (6.17 stars, 434 notes)
Light Insane (3.75 stars, 303 notes)
Normal (1.74 stars, 132 notes)

Download: LiSA - Rising Hope -TV ver.-
Download: LiSA - Rising Hope -TV ver.- (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal - me
Hard - me
Light Insane - me
Insane - HabiHolic
Extra - me
Hopeless - me

Last edited by lolia 2016-09-26T15:02:02+00:00, edited 44 times in total.

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Taeyang 2016-06-16T10:38:06+00:00

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18:54 Karia: 태양님
18:54 Taeyang: 네[
18:55 Karia: 잠시 맵텟 가능할까요..
18:55 Karia: 찍고있는데 퀄리티가 너무 의심돼서 ㅁㄴㅇㄹ
18:55 Taeyang: 넹
18:56 *Karia is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1003264 LiSA - Rising Hope -TV ver.-]
18:56 Karia: 일단 곡은 이겁니다 하악
18:56 Karia: 키아이쪽 DS 너무 높인거같은데
18:56 Karia: 느낀점좀 말해주세요 ㅋㅋ
19:05 Karia: 여기서 해야겠네요
19:06 Karia: 첫 연타 간격이 너무 넓나요?
19:06 Taeyang: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5400981
19:06 Taeyang: 저렇게 준비 단계 찍어주면 플레이어들 잘침
19:07 Taeyang: 연타도
19:07 Taeyang: 00:13:721 (5,1) - 요거 흐름이 별로 안좋아서 그래염
19:08 Karia: 음.. 단순한 왔다갔다인데
19:08 Karia: 많이 어색한가요 ㅂㄷㅂㄷ
19:08 Taeyang: 왔다 갔다까진 좋은데
19:08 Karia: 반대로 찍었어야했나..
19:08 Taeyang: 00:13:878 (1,2,3) - 여기선 왼쪽으로 흐름이 꺽어져서
19:08 Taeyang: 흐름이 변하니깐 갑자기 치기힘들...
19:09 Karia: 저긴 좀 많이 손봐야할꺼같네요 ㅋㅋ
19:09 Taeyang: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5400995
19:09 Taeyang: 대충 이런게하면 될껄요
19:09 Karia: 1/3은 바로앞의 슬라 간격을 넓힌건가요?
19:09 Taeyang: 카리아님 느낌 살리자면
19:09 Taeyang: 슬라변속 1.5 쓴거예요
19:10 Karia: 오..
19:10 Taeyang: 흐름 이상하네
19:10 Taeyang: 다시 찎어드림
19:10 Taeyang: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5401000
19:10 Taeyang: 00:13:721 (5,3) - 동시에 이거 꼬리랑 스택해보세요
19:11 Karia: 무슨 꼬리요??
19:11 Taeyang: 00:14:984 (3) - 
19:11 Taeyang: 이거영
19:12 Karia: 아마 저 저기서 5를 더 멀리 잡을꺼같아서
19:12 Karia: 불가능할듯.. ㅋㅋ
19:14 Karia: 아, 된거같은데
19:14 Karia: 저기 4를 밑으로 말고 왼쪽으로 옮겨도 별 무리 없을꺼같죠??
19:14 Taeyang: 넹
19:14 Taeyang: 지그재그가
19:14 Taeyang: 더 편하긴한데
19:15 Taeyang: 해봐야알듯
19:15 Taeyang: 키아이는
19:15 Taeyang: 오히려 키아이가 더 쉬웠네요
19:15 Karia: 엑..
19:15 Taeyang: 바로 리트라이 해서 보셧는진 모르겠지만
19:15 Taeyang: 첫플에서 하나도 안틀렸엇고
19:16 Taeyang: 00:01:563 (1,1,2,3,4) - 여기 이렇게 숏슬 하나 추가 고려
19:16 Taeyang: 00:01:563 - 
19:17 Taeyang: 팅깅
19:17 Taeyang: 엑.. 부터
19:17 Taeyang: 메시지 못받았어영
19:17 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/puFON/55cc533903.jpg
19:17 Taeyang: 00:01:563 (1,1,2,3,4) - 
19:17 Taeyang: 암튼 여기 
19:17 Karia: ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
19:17 Taeyang: 00:01:563 - 숏슬 추가하셔도됨
19:18 Taeyang: 00:04:247 (2) - 이거
19:18 Taeyang: 00:03:931 (1) - 여기스택
19:19 Taeyang: 00:06:615 (6,1) - 이건 더 붙이셔야함
19:19 Taeyang: 00:06:457 (5,6) - 아님 여길 점프 띄우시거나
19:20 Taeyang: 젠장
19:20 Taeyang: 또틩김
19:20 Karia: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
19:20 Taeyang: 메시지
19:20 Karia: 반초가 이상한가..
19:20 Taeyang: 잘 받으셧나요
19:20 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/puFV7/8e94c1b9c5.jpg
19:20 Karia: 두번째부터 하나도 안왔네요 ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
19:21 Taeyang: 00:06:773 (1,2,3) - 여기도 머리스택 말고 꼬리스택 하는방법 있는데
19:21 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/puFX4/d823ca0a96.jpg
19:21 Taeyang: 제기준 리딩상으론 저게 더편해서요
19:21 Taeyang: 고려해보세요
19:22 Taeyang: 젠장
19:22 Taeyang: 왜팅기지
19:22 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/puG0b/1649019c75.jpg
19:22 Karia: 두번씩 오네.. ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
19:22 Taeyang: 00:08:194 (2,3) - 컨쥐 하셔도 괜찮으심
19:23 Taeyang: 00:08:194 (2,3,4) - 아님 이거 3개 컨쥐하셔서
19:23 Taeyang: 00:08:194 (2) - 여기음 강조하셔도 괜찮으
19:24 Karia: 저기가 DS는 같게 주고싶어서 그냥 방향 바꾸는식으로 강조해줬는데
19:24 Karia: 일단 단타 간격은 다 일정하게 주고싶어요 ㅋㅋ
19:24 Taeyang: 넴 ㅋㅅㅋ
19:25 Karia: 1/6 배치는 더 고민해봐야할듯..
19:25 Taeyang: 배치 아까 그 스샷드린 배치는
19:25 Karia: 쓰기 정말 어렵네요 ㅁㄴㅇㄹ
19:25 Taeyang: 그냥 예시로 막 박은거고
19:25 Taeyang: 앞에 슬라변속 줘서 긴장감을 만들어주라는뜻
19:26 Taeyang: 점프로 해도되지만 음악에 맞지 않고
19:26 Taeyang: 그게 힘들다면 그냥 간격 줄이거나 서클-슬라 로 박으셔도 되영
19:26 Karia: 1/6을요?
19:26 Taeyang: 네
19:27 Karia: 서클-슬라는 정말 괜찮을듯..
19:27 Karia: 슬라라 부담도 적고
19:27 Karia: 하악 천재신듯
19:29 Taeyang: 슬라 서클 로해도되네요
19:29 Taeyang: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5401082
19:29 Taeyang: 참고로 1/6 리듬에서 서클 슬라는 양타로 많이 치고
19:29 Taeyang: 슬라 서클은 단타로 많이침...
19:30 Taeyang:  왜그런진 모르겠는데 텟클 해보면 대부분 그렇다는...
19:30 Karia: 서클 슬라 양타는 알겠는데
19:30 Karia: 슬라 서클 단타는 의외네요 ㅋㅋ
19:30 Taeyang: 00:54:457 (3) - http://puu.sh/puGih/1e116f1f08.jpg 2랑 직선
19:31 Karia: 넵
19:31 Taeyang: 끝
19:32 Karia: 00:18:773 (1,2,3,4,1) - 혹시 이 패턴
19:32 Karia: 이상하진 않았나요 ㅋㅋ
19:32 Taeyang: 괜춘해영
19:33 Taeyang: 5.5성이상 엑라는 써줘도 괜찮
19:33 Karia: 다행이네요 ㅋㅋ
19:33 Karia: 감사합니다 하악
19:33 Karia: 그리고 그 전에, 유루유리 컴필
19:34 Karia: 시간나실때 포스트 올려주세요 ㅋㅋ
19:34 Taeyang: ㅇㅅㅇ?
19:34 Taeyang: 유루유리 컴필이 뭐였죠
19:34 Karia: 쿠도스 2 타이밍때 올리셔도 되고..
19:34 *Karia is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/970416 Various Artists - YuruYuri Songs Compilation]
19:34 Taeyang: 그떄 저장을 안했던거같
19:34 Karia: 그럼 로그는 제가 올리죠 ㅋㅋ
19:35 Karia: 하,, 과제 언제하지..
19:35 Taeyang: 시작이
19:36 Taeyang: 엘리트매퍼님  으로시작하는
19:36 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/puGwb/165a6ef122.png
19:36 Taeyang: 이건가요

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,074 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-06-20T12:32:16+00:00

[Light Insane]
*00:41:036 (5) - 슬라 머리를 00:39:615 (1) - 의 꼬리에 스택하는게 어떨까요?? 지금은 00:40:405 (3) - 과 너무 착 달라붙은 느낌이 들어요..
*00:52:878 (3,4,1) - 흐름이 좀 묘했습니다.. (4,1)의 흐름은 매우 좋은데 (3,4)가 동선이 애매한 면이 있어서..

[Extra]
*00:56:510 (4) - 엑스트라이니만큼 00:56:826 - 를 서클로 놓았으면 더 좋았을 것 같아요. 그리고 개인적으로 리버스 슬라이더가 들어가면 좋을 곳은 00:56:194 - 같아요

[Hopeless]
*00:45:931 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 여기를 3/3/2로 끊으셨는데 저는 좀 의아했어요. 앞에는 살짝 들리는 기타? 소리 때문에 그리 크게 어색하진 않았는데.. 음 차라리 보컬을 따라가보시는게 어떨까요
*00:58:799 - 여기에도 소리 들리는데 ㅠㅠㅠ 가장 높은 난이도이니 메꾸는 것도 고려해보면 좋을 것 같아요
*01:29:510 (1,2,3,4) - 음에 따라 슬라이더 방향을 정한 건 같은데 약간 지저분한 느낌..? 지금도 좋지만 느낌을 살리면서 더 깨끗하게 만들수도 있을거같아요

솔직히 이거 모딩 필요없을거같은데..

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2016-06-21T04:03:45+00:00

Dailycare wrote:
[Light Insane]
*00:41:036 (5) - 슬라 머리를 00:39:615 (1) - 의 꼬리에 스택하는게 어떨까요?? 지금은 00:40:405 (3) - 과 너무 착 달라붙은 느낌이 들어요.. 살짝 더 넓게 했습니다.

[Hopeless]
*00:58:799 - 여기에도 소리 들리는데 ㅠㅠㅠ 가장 높은 난이도이니 메꾸는 것도 고려해보면 좋을 것 같아요 들리긴 하는데 잘 안들리기도 하고.. 무엇보다 여기를 살리면 00:58:878 (2) - 이 슬라가 죽어버려서... 일단은 이상태로 유지하고 싶습니다.

솔직히 이거 모딩 필요없을거같은데.. :^)

지운것들은 고쳤습니다.
모딩 감사합니다!

Electoz

Beatmap Nominator

1,895 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-06-22T06:42:53+00:00

Hi again

[Normal]

00:32:036 (1) - Add clap? Becuase I heard the drum here too and also it's more like you're emphasizing the drum with 00:32:036 (1,2,3,4) so 00:32:036 (1) would be stand out if it doesn't have a clap like the others.
00:44:668 (1,2) - How about using either the same rhythm from 00:47:194 (1,2) or this? Because changing 00:45:299 (2) into sth else would make vocal on 00:45:931 (3,4) become more stand out, just like 00:48:457 (3,4) .
01:23:194 (2) - A 1/1 slider instead? Because the sound on 01:23:510 shouldn't be missed.
01:18:773 (1) - Not sure if I get this right but you NC'd this because you want to distinguish 01:18:773 (1,2) from 01:20:036 (1,2,3,4) which has a different rhythm right? Just my preference but I rather prefer an NC on 01:21:299 (3) instead of 01:18:773 (1) because the rhythm hasn't changed at the point of 01:18:773 (1) yet. So the another NC on 01:21:299 (3) would emphasize a different rhythm nicely.

[Hard]

00:05:826 (3) - Use a 1/2 slider instead? Idk why you skipped the sound on 00:05:984 which is the same sound as 00:06:142 (4,5) .
00:27:931 - Missing clap cuz I saw Normal has it, also applies to Light Insane.
00:30:457 (3,2) - a pixel overlap but doesn't really matter I guess
00:45:615 - Add whistle? I think the sound on this beat is prominent enough to put one.
00:49:089 (1) - Ctrl+G this? Because the sliderball actually ends up on the right side, so it's a bit uncomfortable to play with 00:49:721 (1) .

Didn't find anything else in Light Insane.
Good luck~

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2016-06-22T07:41:10+00:00

Electoz wrote:
Hi again

[Normal]

00:44:668 (1,2) - How about using either the same rhythm from 00:47:194 (1,2) or this? Because changing 00:45:299 (2) into sth else would make vocal on 00:45:931 (3,4) become more stand out, just like 00:48:457 (3,4) . I just wanted to give same rhythm for short breaktime like Hard diff in this part.
01:18:773 (1) - Not sure if I get this right but you NC'd this because you want to distinguish 01:18:773 (1,2) from 01:20:036 (1,2,3,4) which has a different rhythm right? Just my preference but I rather prefer an NC on 01:21:299 (3) instead of 01:18:773 (1) because the rhythm hasn't changed at the point of 01:18:773 (1) yet. So the another NC on 01:21:299 (3) would emphasize a different rhythm nicely. lol, this is just my mistake. Removed NC instead
[Hard]

00:45:615 - Add whistle? I think the sound on this beat is prominent enough to put one. I want to follow my hitsound pattern!
00:49:089 (1) - Ctrl+G this? Because the sliderball actually ends up on the right side, so it's a bit uncomfortable to play with 00:49:721 (1). Imo, this isn't uncomfortable cuz players would not move their cursor following sliderball. Just stop and clicking!
Didn't find anything else in Light Insane.
Good luck~

Deleted = Fixed
Thanks for modding!

lit120

3,272 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2016-06-22T08:46:34+00:00

let's see...

[ok this diff is way to hopel--- ok no lol xd]

00:14:668 (2) - 00:15:299 (4) - it'll be fine for ctrl + g on it =w=
00:20:668 (9,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - about this umm... =w=
01:20:036 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 01:21:299 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i totally want to laugh so hard for seeing this =w=
01:29:510 (1,2,3,4) - try to make the spacing a bit further on the ending part. could be really nice to see that

[wait, can i have more xtra guns?]

01:29:510 (1,2,3,4) - saem reason like from the highest diff lol

[hey, carry that insane for me pls? it's light, so it's ez 4 u to carry it]

00:35:194 (2) - u better make this one away due to its downbeat

nothing much. seems ok for me lel

GL!

Sonnyc

7,761 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2016-06-22T09:42:40+00:00

[Extra]
00:08:668 (1,2,3) - (2)는 1/4 드럼이 있지만, (1)은 그냥 임의로 늘린 1/4 슬라이더입니다. 명백한 음악상 박자 차이가 존재하는 시점에서 둘다 1/4를 쓰고, 5% 무음만으로 두 박자의 차이를 내는건 모자라다고 봅니다. (1)을 노트로 바꾸는 것을 권장합니다.
00:33:615 (3) - 1/2 고려해주세요.
[hpls]
00:02:826 (1) - ~~우리나라에도 S를 이렇게 만드는 사람이 있다니!~~
00:19:010 (4,1) - 이 패턴에서 1/4 점프는 조금 이질적인 느낌이었습니다. 차라리 00:18:773 (1,2,3,4,1)를 조금씩 간격 늘리는 식으로 하는건 어떨까요?
00:33:615 (3) - 앞의 (1,2)랑은 느낌이 다른데, 1/2 슬라이더로 처리해보실 의향이 있으신가요?
00:52:247 ~ 00:54:615 - 패턴이나 음악은 점점 고조되는데, 힛사가 그걸 못따라가네요. 볼륨이 너무 작아요. 전 난이도 공통.
00:57:457 (2) - 10도 회전해서 이런식으로 (1)번 슬라이더와 평행스러운 느낌 주는게 어떨까요? 지금은 너무 임의스러운 배치 같아요. http://puu.sh/pBGkU/b1571262e6.jpg
00:58:878 (2) - 박자 구별 뉴콤해주세요.

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2016-06-22T10:46:40+00:00

lit120 wrote:
let's see...

[ok this diff is way to hopel--- ok no lol xd]
00:14:668 (2) - 00:15:299 (4) - it'll be fine for ctrl + g on it =w= But I want small DS in here!
00:20:668 (9,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - about this umm... =w= my another present =w=
01:20:036 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 01:21:299 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i totally want to laugh so hard for seeing this =w= lol, #10000 player passed this pattern with no miss when I got testplay ww
01:29:510 (1,2,3,4) - try to make the spacing a bit further on the ending part. could be really nice to see that B-but isn't here too silent to do it?!
[wait, can i have more xtra guns?]
01:29:510 (1,2,3,4) - saem reason like from the highest diff lol Same lol
nothing much. seems ok for me lel
GL!

Sonnyc wrote:
[Extra]
00:33:615 (3) - 1/2 고려해주세요. 전 3/4이 제일 나은거같네요..

[hpls]
00:02:826 (1) - ~~우리나라에도 S를 이렇게 만드는 사람이 있다니!~~ ~~ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ~~
00:19:010 (4,1) - 이 패턴에서 1/4 점프는 조금 이질적인 느낌이었습니다. 차라리 00:18:773 (1,2,3,4,1)를 조금씩 간격 늘리는 식으로 하는건 어떨까요? 음.. 점점 늘리는건 좀 안어울리는거같아서 그냥 (4,1)은 붙이고 거리만 조금 더 줬습니다.
00:33:615 (3) - 앞의 (1,2)랑은 느낌이 다른데, 1/2 슬라이더로 처리해보실 의향이 있으신가요? 여기 1/4 세 개는 음악만을 위한 거라 괜찮을꺼라 생각해요.
00:57:457 (2) - 10도 회전해서 이런식으로 (1)번 슬라이더와 평행스러운 느낌 주는게 어떨까요? 지금은 너무 임의스러운 배치 같아요. http://puu.sh/pBGkU/b1571262e6.jpg 바로 앞의 1/4 슬라를 이 슬라 앞부분의 모양을 가져온 후 살짝 교차되는 느낌으로 찍었는데 좀 이상한가보네요... ~~전 만족스러운데..~~

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Wyatt

31 posts

Joined November 2015

Wyatt 2016-06-23T06:31:56+00:00

SPOILER

Hopeless

Looks good. I'm not expirenced enough with 6*+ so I can't say a whole lot.

00:21:536 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This looks great.

Extra

00:22:878 (2,1) - This jump might be too far for a stream jump.

01:05:194 (2,3) - I don't think this need to overlap.

Light insane

00:49:405 (2,1) - - I don't think this needs to overlap. You could flip it so the 1 starts higher and the 2 is lower.

Hard

00:13:878 (3) - This could be to many bounces for a hard diff.

00:22:721 (4) - Same here.

00:49:089 (1) - Again here. This one is probably okay just because the next note is right underneath.

Other than that this diff looks finished.

Normal

00:41:510 (4) - This overlaps a lot for a normal difficulty.

00:44:668 (1,2) - I'm not sure why its such a long pause.

Normal looks good as well.

You are clearly an experienced mapper and there is not a lot I could help with. I hope what I have pointed out could be helpful to you.

Sonnyc

7,761 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2016-06-23T06:33:51+00:00

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AQc20umjcQM

닉네임 보고 식겁

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2016-06-23T06:52:11+00:00

저럴수가 ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

ncuh

185 posts

Joined July 2013

ncuh 2016-06-23T07:13:42+00:00

NM request from my queue

Light Insane

00:09:299 (1) - dat kiai ^_^(just saying)
00:02:905 (1) - http://i.imgur.com/YDspxUd.png
00:09:931 (3,4,5,1) - not sure about that flow is good
01:09:852 - I am newbie. Why did u off kiai there and on it there 01:09:931 ? Or it's just an mistake?

Hard
ar7
===
Sorry, I can't say smth more about you mapset, cuz your style(at least on that map) fully corresponds to my ideas of mapping

So if I'm going to write about everything that I do not like, it will be a completely different map

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2016-06-23T08:24:39+00:00

Wyatt wrote:
Hopeless
Looks good. I'm not expirenced enough with 6*+ so I can't say a whole lot.
00:21:536 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This looks great. \:D/

Extra
00:22:878 (2,1) - This jump might be too far for a stream jump. Acceptable DS in Extra imo
01:05:194 (2,3) - I don't think this need to overlap. Just my taste lol

Hard
00:13:878 (3) - This could be to many bounces for a hard diff.
00:22:721 (4) - Same here.
00:49:089 (1) - Again here. This one is probably okay just because the next note is right underneath.
// Above sliders are for easy playing in 2.6* diff. So they are fine imo.

Other than that this diff looks finished.

Normal
00:41:510 (4) - This overlaps a lot for a normal difficulty. Then I should remap this diff! orz
00:44:668 (1,2) - I'm not sure why its such a long pause. I wanted to make same rhythm as Hard diff. But maybe I should fix this if more modders say about this..
Normal looks good as well.

You are clearly an experienced mapper and there is not a lot I could help with. I hope what I have pointed out could be helpful to you.

M1k0 wrote:
NM request from my queue

[Light Insane]
00:09:299 (1) - dat kiai ^_^(just saying) =w=
00:02:905 (1) - http://i.imgur.com/YDspxUd.png That would be disqualifiable issue imo. w
00:09:931 (3,4,5,1) - not sure about that flow is good It was fine when I played this diff.
01:09:852 - I am newbie. Why did u off kiai there and on it there 01:09:931 ? Or it's just an mistake? It's for KIAI fountain effect!

[Hard]
ar7 Lower than 7 is better for this diff imo. But I'm not sure about this AR. So I'll reconsider this if other modders notice AR.
===
Sorry, I can't say smth more about you mapset, cuz your style(at least on that map) fully corresponds to my ideas of mapping So if I'm going to write about everything that I do not like, it will be a completely different map lol, ok

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Thanks for moddings!

Korey

141 posts

Joined August 2013

Korey 2016-06-24T06:37:17+00:00

from #modreqs

Hopeless

00:03:931 (1) - doesnt play too bad but doesnt make much sense to me, id just remove the slider or you could make the previous slider end wher that one does. i dont here anything that calls for a new note at 00:03:931 (1) -
00:06:615 (6,7) - you stack these normally otherwise some might mistake for a tripple
00:18:142 (1,2,1,2) - i dont see why you are pairing these
00:20:668 (9,1) - 3x ds is a lot and feels to hard for this section. i dont think this pattern fits as its a lot harder then the rest of the map
00:32:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is better than 00:20:668 (9,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - but its so much easier for not enough reason so you should either make the first pattern easier or the second one harder
00:33:931 (1,2) - use circles instead
00:35:826 - should start a note here
00:38:352 - ^
00:40:878 - the slider should start here instead
00:41:984 - your missing over this sound, change up 00:41:510 (1,2,3) -
00:41:826 (3,1) - more spacing
00:47:510 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this doesnt fit the song, nothing is suggest the map to pair the notes and makes it harder for no reason
00:48:457 (1,2,1) - this should be a separate pattern
00:49:089 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - not a fan, maybe try something like http://puu.sh/pE3Uq/5b872b0c20.jpg
00:54:773 (1) - maybe a slider here so you get a break from the jumps? because 00:54:773 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesnt feel like a change of pace if your still tapping the same
01:17:115 (6,7,8,1) - this will just stuff up the player
01:29:510 (1,2,3,4) - use circles instead and make the jumps larger

ok just doing that diff, hope my mod helped

Spiraler

152 posts

Joined November 2014

Spiraler 2016-06-24T06:50:16+00:00

From my queue.
This map is too good already, not giving me much to work with here.

Extra

01:13:563 (6) - I think this circle is in such a position that it is hard to read

Hard

So overall this diff just felt completely devoid of jumps. I understand it's a low hard, but I think it could use just some small jumps to break from the same DS throughout.

00:20:510 (1) - this part I found a little boring to just play repeat sliders for 2 measures
00:08:984 (2,1) - you only stack with a full beat in between one other time this map, be careful with this as it could be hard for someone who plays these lower diffs to read

Sorry, that's all I can really find, and I saw someone above me modded Hopeless so I decided not to since it's above my play level anyway. Good luck with rank!

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2016-06-25T03:01:53+00:00

ikorza wrote:
from #modreqs

Hopeless

00:03:931 (1) - doesnt play too bad but doesnt make much sense to me, id just remove the slider or you could make the previous slider end wher that one does. i dont here anything that calls for a new note at 00:03:931 (1) - Listen the music again.
00:06:615 (6,7) - you stack these normally otherwise some might mistake for a tripple nah, I don't understand why misreading happends here. The two approchcircles are here obviously. Moreover, perfect stack is ugly in this 1/6 snap cuz of stack leniency.
00:18:142 (1,2,1,2) - i dont see why you are pairing these for separate patterns
00:20:668 (9,1) - 3x ds is a lot and feels to hard for this section. i dont think this pattern fits as its a lot harder then the rest of the map it's fine cuz I incresed DS more and more in this jump section.
00:32:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is better than 00:20:668 (9,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - but its so much easier for not enough reason so you should either make the first pattern easier or the second one harder well, it's fine imo cuz the tone of music is not same.
00:33:931 (1,2) - use circles instead I prefer mine.
00:35:826 - should start a note here
00:38:352 - ^
00:40:878 - the slider should start here instead
// Keep above suggestins cuz I followed music, not vocal mainly.
00:41:984 - your missing over this sound, change up 00:41:510 (1,2,3) - same as above
00:41:826 (3,1) - more spacing Current DS is better for reading
00:47:510 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this doesnt fit the song, nothing is suggest the map to pair the notes and makes it harder for no reason Listen the music after delete these notes.
00:48:457 (1,2,1) - this should be a separate pattern Already separated...
00:49:089 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - not a fan, maybe try something like http://puu.sh/pE3Uq/5b872b0c20.jpg I prefer current pattern.
00:54:773 (1) - maybe a slider here so you get a break from the jumps? because 00:54:773 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesnt feel like a change of pace if your still tapping the same It's for emphasizing silent piano part by using lower DS.
01:17:115 (6,7,8,1) - this will just stuff up the player Why...? Here way not any problem when I watched testplay.
01:29:510 (1,2,3,4) - use circles instead and make the jumps larger I don't want large jump in this last part.

ok just doing that diff, hope my mod helped

Spiral527 wrote:
From my queue.
This map is too good already, not giving me much to work with here.

[Extra]
01:13:563 (6) - I think this circle is in such a position that it is hard to read it's fine

[Hard]
So overall this diff just felt completely devoid of jumps. I understand it's a low hard, but I think it could use just some small jumps to break from the same DS throughout.
00:20:510 (1) - this part I found a little boring to just play repeat sliders for 2 measures Surely this part should be boring to us, but this would demand a concentration to Hard players cuz these 1/4 repeat sliders lead to slider-break.

Sorry, that's all I can really find, and I saw someone above me modded Hopeless so I decided not to since it's above my play level anyway. Good luck with rank!

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HabiHolic

5,410 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2016-06-25T03:27:26+00:00

Insane

Habi's Insane

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lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2016-06-25T03:33:53+00:00

Updated!

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,108 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2016-07-05T20:23:23+00:00

from my queue yay

[Hopeless]

plz i can barely see the notes = =
00:27:773 (3,4,5) - i dont heard a triplet sound here tho, try this instead?
00:30:142 (3,1) - stack? or not lol
01:15:931 (6) - NC to emhpasized the vocal seems good here
01:24:773 (5) - NC
01:29:510 (1) - try this?, to consist with 01:29:826 (3,4) - lol

[Extra]

01:09:457 (6) - NC?
01:19:405 (3) - ctrl + g would flow better, and make the slider straight? there was a node lol

plz im suck at modding this kinda map =w=

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2016-07-08T05:31:56+00:00

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
from my queue yay

[Hopeless]
plz i can barely see the notes = = but there are manyyyy notes = =
00:30:142 (3,1) - stack? or not lol :pp
01:29:510 (1) - try this?, to consist with 01:29:826 (3,4) - lol B-But current shape has better visual flow!
[Extra]
01:19:405 (3) - ctrl + g would flow better, and make the slider straight? there was a node lol Fixed the shape, but I wanted to break flow to down about 'Ctrl g' ww
plz im suck at modding this kinda map =w=

Deleted = Fixed
Thanks for modding!

Ongaku

607 posts

Joined January 2014

Ongaku 2016-07-18T04:29:46+00:00

ahem, the NM request.

[General]

I recommend you change the AR of your Hard to 7 so it'll be more comfortable to read at this kind of BPM and move your Light Insane's AR to 8.5 or at least 8.3. Other than that, everything else looks good, the hitsounding and spread looks fine. Nice. Onto the mod.

[Hopeless]

- 00:18:457 (1,2) - Using ctrl+g on these notes will make it more readable, from what I've tried. Plays fine, but a tad hard to read after 00:17:826 (4) - .

- 00:29:431 (8) - Transitioning to 00:29:510 (1) - is gonna be a lot harder because of how the note is placed there, so I suggest you fix it.

- 00:30:142 (3,1) - I understand the stacking you're aiming for, but in this case, it would be better to stack 00:30:773 (1) - under 00:30:142 (3) - .

- 00:30:142 (3,4) - The transition from 00:30:142 (3) - to 00:30:457 (4) - feels too awkward to play, I recommend you ctrl+g 00:30:457 (4) - , or rearrange the slider.

- 00:51:615 (1,2) - This pattern feels out of place, I'd recommend rearranging it.
- Something like: https://gyazo.com/e3b52833de36a509931abc96beb79902

[Extra]

- 00:12:457 (3,4,5,6) - The pattern is a little too hard to read with the current stack leniency, so i recommend you move 00:12:773 (5,6) - downwards a little bit.
- Something like this: https://gyazo.com/3a85d76bc9340b9a0c4d2a746a6b3fe7 ?

- 01:06:457 (2,3,1) - You kind of abused the overlapping a little bit here, can you organize it a tad bit?
- Something like this would be a bit cleaner: https://gyazo.com/a1161bd82df4d4c6198b709cb116f930

[Habi's Insane]

- 00:09:299 (1,1) - Uhh... two NCs? Remove 00:09:615 (1) - 's NC please.

- 00:41:826 (5) - Make this slider a 3/4 instead? I think it'll work well.

- 00:46:247 (2,3) - Feels vocally wrong, since 00:46:721 (3) - lands on a emphasis point in the vocals. Rather than having 00:46:247 (2) - be a 1/1 slider, split it into two 1/2 sliders and remove 00:46:721 (3) - .

- 01:04:878 (1) - Even though its the same rhythmically as 01:02:352 (1,2) - , its different. I suggest you do the same to 01:04:878 (1) - as you did with 01:02:352 (1,2) - .

- 01:24:142 (3) - This slider feels out of place because it lands on a vocal emphasis point. I suggest you make it into two separate circle notes.

[Light Insane]

- 00:04:563 (1) - Skips a white tick, I really don't think you should do that because you also missed a slight beat there.

- 00:16:563 (4) - Instead of having a slider, why not make it two separate notes? You can have the circle note 00:16:721 - overlap 00:16:878 - to indicate the drum kicks.

[Conclusion]

A really well thought out map and mapset. You have creative patterns that I will respect, but there are some overlaps that went a little bit over board. Other than that, you and Habi did great. Good luck on this set. \o

Asfand

241 posts

Joined November 2013

Asfand 2016-07-18T06:42:55+00:00

Hi fra min kø.

[Hopeless]

00:12:773 (5,6,1) - The 6 to 1 transition doesn't make sense and comes too suddenly because of how its curved. I suggest just swapping the slider shapes of 5 and 6 (like have 5 curve up to 6 and 6 curve down to 1) http://puu.sh/q5vTb/10e5ee4199.jpg
01:19:405 (4) - I would suggest ctrl+g this for the flowy feel to follow the vocal (as its calm here before it breaks off at 01:20:036 (1) - )

[Light Insane]

01:14:984 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about making this a triangle flow wheel thing to compliment with this pattern you made here 01:16:247 (1,2,3,4) - . You might have to make the triangle a bit neater then, unlike my image. http://puu.sh/q5wqm/d5beae72bb.jpg

I looked over extra also and it looks fine

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2016-07-19T05:17:20+00:00

Ongaku wrote:
ahem, the NM request.

[General]

I recommend you change the AR of your Hard to 7 so it'll be more comfortable to read at this kind of BPM and move your Light Insane's AR to 8.5 or at least 8.3. Other than that, everything else looks good, the hitsounding and spread looks fine. Nice. Onto the mod. Fixed the ARs

[Hopeless]

- 00:18:457 (1,2) - Using ctrl+g on these notes will make it more readable, from what I've tried. Plays fine, but a tad hard to read after 00:17:826 (4) - . I want to keep this for now. The pattern is fine cuz this overlap pattern is also used in Insane diff sometimes. Most of all, I don't want that circular(?) flow in this pattern lol

- 00:30:142 (3,4) - The transition from 00:30:142 (3) - to 00:30:457 (4) - feels too awkward to play, I recommend you ctrl+g 00:30:457 (4) - , or rearrange the slider. I'll consider this if some modders notice again. This flow was fine when I played this short part.

[Extra]

- 01:06:457 (2,3,1) - You kind of abused the overlapping a little bit here, can you organize it a tad bit?
- Something like this would be a bit cleaner: https://gyazo.com/a1161bd82df4d4c6198b709cb116f930 For my aesthetic sense, I want to keep current overlap. w

[Conclusion]

A really well thought out map and mapset. You have creative patterns that I will respect, but there are some overlaps that went a little bit over board. Other than that, you and Habi did great. Good luck on this set. \o

regN wrote:
Hi fra min kø.

[Hopeless]
00:12:773 (5,6,1) - The 6 to 1 transition doesn't make sense and comes too suddenly because of how its curved. I suggest just swapping the slider shapes of 5 and 6 (like have 5 curve up to 6 and 6 curve down to 1) http://puu.sh/q5vTb/10e5ee4199.jpg imo, that curve is fine cuz players don't need to follow those 1/4 sliders perfectly. The shape is also my taste.
01:19:405 (4) - I would suggest ctrl+g this for the flowy feel to follow the vocal (as its calm here before it breaks off at 01:20:036 (1) - ) Hmm, I understand what you mean. But current pattern is better for flow imo.
[Light Insane]
01:14:984 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about making this a triangle flow wheel thing to compliment with this pattern you made here 01:16:247 (1,2,3,4) - . You might have to make the triangle a bit neater then, unlike my image. http://puu.sh/q5wqm/d5beae72bb.jpg Your patterns is also good. But the pattern is hard to read in Light Insane imo
I looked over extra also and it looks fine

Deleted = Fixed
Thanks for moddings!

Kalibe

2,060 posts

Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2016-07-27T13:11:12+00:00

LiSAaaaaaaa

General*

- Nothing here i think~

[Normal]

- How about using OD 3.5 instead of 3.8? Fits better when you have also 3.5 HP
* 00:55:563 (1) - Hmm, can u change S:C1 -> S:C99 and add whistles on 00:55:563 (1) - end and 00:56:352 (2) - for emphasis? That might be concern in all diffs.

[Hard]

- 00:08:668 (1) - Tbh this NC is not really needed, since SV jump 0.9 -> 1.0 is not a big deal imo.
- 00:10:405 (4,1) - How about removing 00:10:405 (4) - this and moving here 00:10:563 (1) - with extending in 00:10:878 - here? That downbeat doesn't to be clickable duh. http://puu.sh/qgbOp/4282b0ed04.jpg
- 00:35:984 (1,1) - Maybe just stack these ends?

[Light Insane]

- 00:58:247 - Prefer to map this tick, cuz vocal here sounds strong and maybe stack it on 00:58:405 (1) - end? Plays fine.
* 01:14:194 (2,4) - They aren't the same curved.. structure looks kinda messy here tho.
- 01:22:247 (4,2) - Just stack ends? Feels weird without stacking it.

[Habi's Insane]

* 00:04:247 - Only this diff didn't mapped that part, so how about adding a little break here? Also here 00:06:615 - after this 1/4s ?
- 00:09:615 (1) - I don't really get it why this slider have a NC, removing it will be more consistent since it makes 1,2,3 pattern better visually.
- 00:17:194 (1,2) - 00:47:668 (2,3) - Fix those manual stacks lol.
- 00:26:984 (1,3) - 00:52:721 (3,5) - More stacks to fix~
* 00:32:036 (1,2,3,4,5) - The stream plays really weird tho cuz 00:32:115 (2) - is barely inaudiable. Consider to change pattern then.
- 00:54:142 (2,3) - Switch Whistles into Claps on end, since i really hear more claps sounds than whistle ones :\
- 01:04:405 (4) - Missing finish on end.
- 01:10:247 (2) - 01:14:668 (5) - ^ on heads~

[Extra]

- 00:08:668 (1,2) - Tbh i would rather switch those NCs, since ppl can interpret it 00:08:826 (2) - as a 1/2 imo.
- 00:25:721 (1,3) - You can make this blanket better ;w;w;
* 01:05:194 (2,3) - That overlap kinda bug me here :\ // How about moving 01:05:510 (3) - around 311/135 to avoid it?

I'm not really expirenced with 6 star diffs, so i'll skip that diff. That's all, cool mapset and awesome song. Good luck!

UndeadCapulet

1,100 posts

Joined April 2013

UndeadCapulet 2016-07-27T21:19:07+00:00

PANIC QUEUE MOD #4:

Hopeless

idk about that diff name ww

00:11:510 (6,7) - tbh kick sliders here would be nice
00:13:721 (5) - here too, a kick would be great, even w/ an sv increase :3
00:55:563 (6) - idk i think continuing the circle spam is better, this slows things down too much imo
01:16:563 (3) - NC?
For the 01:20:036 (1) - to 01:23:510 (1) - part, you should use 1/8 sliders instead of the 1/4

cool diff

---

Extra

00:20:510 (7,8,9) - probably fit this with the upcoming pattern since it's the same sound; something like this maybe
00:55:563 (6) - same as hopeless diff i guess, or maybe instead use more sliders during the slow part since this is a lower diff
01:22:563 (1,2) - Feel like these should probably be circles as well, it's weird how much easier it is than the pattern right before it.

---

Habi's Insane

00:48:773 (6) - Really think you should start the 1/3 stream some other way, this is a really weak rhythm imo

---

Hard

00:13:089 - weird to skip this downbeat when you mapped it like 00:10:563 (1) - earlier

---

Normal

01:19:405 (4) - Maybe break this into circles so the upcoming sliderspam is more powerful.

---

Kagetsu

796 posts

Joined March 2015

Kagetsu 2016-07-29T23:28:58+00:00

chloe map aaaa

[Hopeless]

00:02:826 (1) - i'd say the voice ends on 00:03:773 - so i would end the slider on the red tick
00:43:878 (4,5,1) - i was expecting a larger spacing due the music change :'(
00:58:089 (2) - i really disagree with this 3/4 slider, there's literally nothing on the blue tick, while in the red there are voice and a super strong drum o.o
01:11:905 (4) - there isn't 1/4 sound, sounds out of place imo
01:20:036 - i don't really get the point of using 1/4 silenced sliders, the music is clearly 1/2 ... i know that a 1/4 slider plays exactly the same as a circle but i think it doesn't represent the music for this specific case
nice

uh... not much more to say, i think it's already ready for being ranked lol

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2016-07-31T14:02:28+00:00

Kalibe wrote:
LiSAaaaaaaa

General*

- Nothing here i think~

[Normal]

- How about using OD 3.5 instead of 3.8? Fits better when you have also 3.5 HP Keep for now cuz OD is higher than HP in Hard diff.
* 00:55:563 (1) - Hmm, can u change S:C1 -> S:C99 and add whistles on 00:55:563 (1) - end and 00:56:352 (2) - for emphasis? That might be concern in all diffs. A bit weird to me.

[Hard]

- 00:08:668 (1) - Tbh this NC is not really needed, since SV jump 0.9 -> 1.0 is not a big deal imo. This NC is for vocal lol
- 00:10:405 (4,1) - How about removing 00:10:405 (4) - this and moving here 00:10:563 (1) - with extending in 00:10:878 - here? That downbeat doesn't to be clickable duh. http://puu.sh/qgbOp/4282b0ed04.jpg I didn't want to ignore drum on downbeat.

[Light Insane]

- 00:58:247 - Prefer to map this tick, cuz vocal here sounds strong and maybe stack it on 00:58:405 (1) - end? Plays fine. The vocal is not too strong at here imo
* 01:14:194 (2,4) - They aren't the same curved.. structure looks kinda messy here tho. Eh,, they are same shape sliders.
- 01:22:247 (4,2) - Just stack ends? Feels weird without stacking it. This was fine when I played

[Extra]

- 00:08:668 (1,2) - Tbh i would rather switch those NCs, since ppl can interpret it 00:08:826 (2) - as a 1/2 imo. This is also for vocal, but I'll consider this more orz
- 00:25:721 (1,3) - You can make this blanket better ;w;w; But this is already perfect blanket to me ;w;

I'm not really expirenced with 6 star diffs, so i'll skip that diff. That's all, cool mapset and awesome song. Good luck!

UndeadCapulet wrote:
PANIC QUEUE MOD #4:
Hopeless
idk about that diff name ww :pp
00:11:510 (6,7) - tbh kick sliders here would be nice I don't want 1/4 slider more. But I'll consider about (7) which is the strongest beat
01:16:563 (3) - NC? Deleted prev NC
For the 01:20:036 (1) - to 01:23:510 (1) - part, you should use 1/8 sliders instead of the 1/4 1/4 is best to me. (I can't use 1/8 well yet orz)
cool diff

---
Extra
00:20:510 (7,8,9) - probably fit this with the upcoming pattern since it's the same sound; something like this maybe That is also nice, but idk how I map pattern here orz
00:55:563 (6) - same as hopeless diff i guess, or maybe instead use more sliders during the slow part since this is a lower diff In this diff, slider is better imo
01:22:563 (1,2) - Feel like these should probably be circles as well, it's weird how much easier it is than the pattern right before it. Current rhythm is better cuz I reduced circles from 01:21:299 - here.

Kagetsu wrote:
chloe map aaaa

[Hopeless]
00:02:826 (1) - i'd say the voice ends on 00:03:773 - so i would end the slider on the red tick Want to keep cuz this doesn't follow the vocal
01:11:905 (4) - there isn't 1/4 sound, sounds out of place imo Here's vocal which is 'Ku'
01:20:036 - i don't really get the point of using 1/4 silenced sliders, the music is clearly 1/2 ... i know that a 1/4 slider plays exactly the same as a circle but i think it doesn't represent the music for this specific case I wanted to emphasize all clap sounds cuz I thought here is 'KIAI of KIAI'.
nice
uh... not much more to say, i think it's already ready for being ranked lol

Deleted = Fixed!
Thanks for moddings!!

HabiHolic

5,410 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2016-08-03T02:53:00+00:00

SPOILER

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lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2016-08-09T07:16:01+00:00

Updated

Net0

Beatmap Nominator

1,273 posts

Joined October 2014

Net0 2016-08-24T03:05:36+00:00

Hey just a short suggestion for Hopeless:

This sliders are all going down-up 00:14:352 (1,2,3,4) - and on the next combo you will start with a up-down 00:15:615 (1) -

Suggestion: It could improve the vocal of this part if you ctrol+g this sliders: 00:14:668 (2) - 00:15:299 (4) - and 00:15:615 (1) - . Like that all higher vocal sounds will have the same movement, and also it helps the person with the next pattern that will use the same idea 00:16:878 (1,2,3,4) -

It will look like this:

SPOILER

Good luck with your map. Really like this one \o/

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2016-08-24T03:22:44+00:00

@Net0 : fixed, thanks!

Gloria Guard

2,274 posts

Joined May 2011

Gloria Guard 2016-08-25T05:41:35+00:00

조흔 맵이당

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2016-08-25T08:44:23+00:00

감사합니다 :]

Kagetsu

796 posts

Joined March 2015

Kagetsu 2016-08-25T13:51:45+00:00

no kds xd

[Normal]

I strongly recommend to add a spinner in this diff. mainly because of scores being all the same. 00:06:773 - seems to be a good place to add it, if you ask me.
00:14:352 - i didn't like that much the rhythm around this section, the strongest beat is on the last reverse of the slider, which isn't the best way to represent the music... also, i think 00:14:668 (1) - is not really following the most prominent beats of the music.
suggestion
00:45:299 - wouldn't be bad to reduce a bit the object density, to represent how quiet the music is on this section
00:55:563 (1) - same as 00:14:352 - the rhythm is kinda confusing since it isn't really clear on what is following.

[Hard]

00:09:931 (2,3,4,1) - tbh i would have followed the synth, just a personal thought tho
00:22:721 (4) - the number of repeats seems to be kinda random, it might cause sliderbreaks... also, i think that having 00:23:036 - as a clickable beat is a better option, it follows the music in a better way
suggestion
00:35:194 (2,3) - stacking really kills the emphasis on 00:35:352 - ):
00:55:563 (1,2,3) - following the voice looks like a better choice, the music isn't really THAT intense
suggestion
01:16:563 - the finish doesn't sound that good for me for some reason... uhh is this intentional? xd

[Light Insane]

00:01:721 (1,2) - tbh i would just use circles... 1/4 sliders are like just too much for a diff like this
00:41:826 (2,1) - the sv change isn't that intuitive when the music hasn't really changed... it looks odd when even sections like 00:44:668 - have more SV

[Habi's Insane]

i think the normal-hitnormal doesn't fit that good for the kiai, using the whistle like karia did sounds much better to me
00:49:194 (1,2,3,4,5) - might be kind of difficult to read, since they look visually similar to a 1/4 stream
01:09:694 (4) - sounds overmapped xd

[Hopeless]

00:02:826 (1) - i still think it should end on the red tick zzzz also, both sliderticks and sliderslide are kinda "muted" which is unrankable but w/e

lolia

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Topic Starter

lolia 2016-08-25T15:20:56+00:00

Kagetsu wrote:
no kds xd

[Normal]
I strongly recommend to add a spinner in this diff. mainly because of scores being all the same. 00:06:773 - seems to be a good place to add it, if you ask me. Added like Hard diff.
[Hard]
00:09:931 (2,3,4,1) - tbh i would have followed the synth, just a personal thought tho idk, I couldn't ignore this drum beat lol
01:16:563 - the finish doesn't sound that good for me for some reason... uhh is this intentional? xd cuz here's a cymbal sound xd
[Light Insane]
00:41:826 (2,1) - the sv change isn't that intuitive when the music hasn't really changed... it looks odd when even sections like 00:44:668 - have more SV The unintuitive sv change is because this diff is Light Insane that has some restrictions. And the music change is obvious to me.. orz
[Hopeless]
00:02:826 (1) - i still think it should end on the red tick zzzz also, both sliderticks and sliderslide are kinda "muted" which is unrankable but w/e imo, blue this is best cuz this low sv is following the background sound. And about muted sounds, slidertick is 5% volume with a default hitsound which isn't muted sound like sliderslide. This wasn't an issue when I used it like this map >> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/391953

Deleted = Fixed
Extra : Replaced jump patterns at the last of KIAI.

Thanks for modding!

HabiHolic

5,410 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2016-08-28T12:30:20+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Song_Rising Hope.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59352
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 46878
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:Rising Hope -TV ver.-
TitleUnicode:Rising Hope -TV ver.-
Artist:LiSA
ArtistUnicode:LiSA
Creator:Karia
Version:Habi's Insane
Source:魔法科高校の劣等生
Tags:Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei The Irregular at Magic High School opening HabiHolic
BeatmapID:1011472
BeatmapSetID:469164

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2.1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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140,56,75142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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480,200,78773,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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lolia

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lolia 2016-08-28T12:59:08+00:00

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Kagetsu

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Kagetsu 2016-08-28T13:54:05+00:00

fine to me

lolia

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lolia 2016-08-28T13:56:09+00:00

<3 xD

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2016-09-25T12:13:03+00:00

~~I'll mod that once I take a break from studying today. Really cool maps, I like how it can be difficult without these forced PP-jumps~~

I haven't seen this anime, but rising hope lets me think of "hopeful" rather than "hopeless"... maybe change the diffname? up2u though

Hopeless
00:02:826 (1,1,2) - The stack from 1 and 2 destroy the blanket here. 00:03:931 (1,2) - Take these two and adjust it accordingly.
00:20:510 (1) - Add a NC here to follow the pattern?
00:20:668 (3,1,2,1,2) - I think until here, the movement is fine but it gets heavily interrupted 00:21:536 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - with this.. I can't really give you a suggestion because it will break the whole pattern, but I really think 00:22:168 (1,2) - the the circles here should be higher than the last pattern, not go back to the bottom again.
00:39:615 (1) - I think if you made the bulb at the begin a bit bigger it will look better.

I really like that map, I feel like you've caught the intensitiy really good.

Extra

00:20:668 (9) - Why isn't this a slider like the others? It doesn't really make sense with the rest and creates an awkward break.
00:49:089 (1,2,1,2) - For some reason I think that this is more difficult than the pattern in Hopeless. Maybe 2 1/3 repeaters?
01:17:115 (6,7) - In order not to ignore the downbeat, this rhythm should be CTRL + G. It also will fit better with the vocals.

Habi's Insane

00:49:089 (7) - Add NC to emphasize 1/3?

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lolia

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lolia 2016-09-26T15:10:46+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
~~I'll mod that once I take a break from studying today. Really cool maps, I like how it can be difficult without these forced PP-jumps~~

I haven't seen this anime, but rising hope lets me think of "hopeful" rather than "hopeless"... maybe change the diffname? up2u though
I thought 'Hopeless' can express the difficulty of diff itself. If the diffname cannot express it enough, I'll change it.

Hopeless

I really like that map, I feel like you've caught the intensitiy really good. xP

Extra

00:49:089 (1,2,1,2) - For some reason I think that this is more difficult than the pattern in Hopeless. Maybe 2 1/3 repeaters?
The triangle 1/3s in the highest diff were hard to testplayer around #2000. But this pattern was not hard to me, so issue of pattern is fine imo

Habi's Insane

00:49:089 (7) - Add NC to emphasize 1/3? Seems she forgot the NC at the lastest modding

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