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UNISON SQUARE GARDEN - Dareka ga Wasurete Iru kamo Shirenai

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Winnie
1,343 posts
Joined November 2013
Winnie
Here from Modding Team


[General]
Ahhh gosh that mp3 quality kills me, as well as the left side of my ear only hearing part of the song. Damn they really done goofed this time Unison
Spike from normal to hard might ask you to make an advanced diff. The spacing in hard is pretty large in some areas that made the SR spike.

[Aki's Insane]
This is only me, really does fit more to end it on the red tick vocals. Sure I hear the sound does also end on white but the extended slider kinda just throws me off more than benefit that distant sound in the music
00:22:869 (6) - Whistle on tail, you had them at 00:22:257 (4,5,6) - on the same sound, would only make sense here
00:26:339 (6) - Soft sampleset on this note sounds kinda bland, I can't really hear anything besides the drum in the BG and tbh it's covering up too much of the soft sampleset sound
01:14:706 (1) - This spacing is too close, compared to the previous gaps in spacing here 01:13:686 (1,2,3) - or give it more time to be hit, I would just move (3) more to the right and you should be golden
01:23:890 (1,2) - Could be NC somehow to make readers tell this is coming up, but doesn't really cause problems
Diff is fine

[Light Insane]
00:06:542 (1) - NC could be nice to show that jump off
01:03:889 (5) - Better to not end on a downbeat, would be beter to have to notes then a slider up to that point
01:04:705 (8,3) - You can also match this rhythm but that's up to you
01:06:950 (1,2) - Ctrl+G Rhythm here is better
01:20:828 (3,4) - Blanket can be slightly better
01:29:399 (2,3,4,50) - Flow here plays very strangely
01:33:277 (1) - Again downbeat rhythm isn't as great
01:35:726 (3,4) - Blanket here can be adjusted as well
01:36:542 (1,2) - Nice downbeat rhythm should be like this :)

[Hard]
00:13:481 (1) - Spacing is quite large on this jump 2.0 is the ideal jump here
00:45:930 (5,1) - I feel spacing should be same here before you switch at 00:46:746 (2,3) -
01:10:624 (1) - Spacing is pretty large here
01:11:440 (4,5) - Spacing can be the same idk why it's changed by .2 here
01:12:052 (6) - Downbeat on white tick again feels bad
01:21:848 (1) - Spacing too far
01:22:664 (3,4) - Such a big gap
01:27:562 (2) - Can even out spacing
01:35:930 (7,8) - Same as ^
01:38:991 (7,8,1) - Kinda hidden and might be hard for beginners to read this, may was to change it up a bit

[Normal]
00:06:134 (3) - Can move a little more left for 1.0 spacing
00:17:971 (3) - This doesn't fit well imo since the white downbeat isn't being utilized especially on a normal, only another thing you can try but you can keep yours if you want http://puu.sh/pvpHV/60afe6a026.jpg
00:28:175 (3) - Spacing a little short, can move a little further
00:41:236 (3) - Spacing a little off
00:43:277 (2) - Little too far
00:55:726 - You have to map this out for it to feel great here as well as NC 00:55:930 (6) -

[Easy]
00:42:052 (5) - Spacing a little too short
01:12:256 (1) - Spacing can be fixed here
01:28:583 (3) - Same as ^

Everything is good to go, you can ask a BN to check this up for you. They'll make the rest of the corrections for me. Push them it'll be ranked soon. Not a half ass mod either this is literally what is best to help adjust the map ;)
-NanoRIPE-
2,018 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-

Naxess wrote:

NM From Queue

So many NM requests aaaa - :o

[ Hard]
SPOILER
I don't want to be that guy who points out blankets and acts as if it's the whole mod so I'm just going to pile them all up here instead:
(some are really off, others are like a few pixels off)
00:17:358 (2,3) - 00:18:175 (4,5) - 00:23:889 (4,5) - ok too lazy to pile them all up lol - i'm sorry ;w; i'm bad at blankts but i will do my best to fix it ~

Now for actual *cough* rhythm *cough* mod, here we go - :|

00:25:726 - Ah, for once I actually thought the beats were hitsounds, but well it sort of breaks here. Try placing some object here as well.
The illusion of thinking beats are hitsounds is actually a really good sign for the rhythm.
I understand 00:25:522 (3) - might cover vocal, but I still think the drums should be prioritized. - hmm okay ~

^ 00:29:195 - Plus this gets repetitive unless the pattern changes, which could be done here.
I mean I think the map has enough of these anyway lol - okay ~ *since the pattern looks boring imo~


00:29:807 - So wait are we covering vocals instead of drums? -
This is even a downbeat (It'll help with rhythm for the next measure if it's added, and allow for NC)... - okay fixed ;w; ~

00:30:624 - Hm, maybe I should stop pointing these out. I'll give in to following vocals I guess... - yeah,i think vocal should be prioritizied here ~

*cough* *cough* wait wat 00:31:032 - 00:31:236 - weren't we following vocals? and so the confusion begins ;w; - okay fixed ~ follow vocal here ;w;
^
00:31:440 - Both vocal and drums have an impact here, and it's even a downbeat, yet it's mapped as a sliderend. - okay ~
^
I'd suggest mapping this part like this: 00:30:828 - for reference - nope ~ i will use my own pattern ~


00:47:766 - Going all out vocal I see... but I mean you could've made 00:47:562 - a 1/2 slider to at least have an object on the downbeat xD
Feels really strange since chord changes at 00:47:766 - , where both guitar and drum have strong impacts. - okay ~ add 1/2 slider ~

01:04:705 - So this is really strange imo. You've definitely proved that you're following vocals, yet a strong vocal impact here isn't even clickable, but the pitch change at 01:04:909 - is. Now wait, don't get me wrong; I'm not telling you to change it.
I was just wondering whether or not pitch changes in vocals are considered stronger than their impacts. An explanation would be appreciated, as this seems intentional due to consistency with 01:07:971 (2,3) - . okay ~ fixed ~

01:12:256 - Oooook ok, let me get this straight. Here are impacts, both from vocal, guitar and drums *dramatic pause* but it's a sliderend. - fixed ~
^ 01:17:154 - fixed ~
If there's a reason for this, I'd like to hear it because I'm getting really confused xD

01:25:113 - shouldn't this part look like this? - okay ~ used it ~


01:38:379 - Another downbeat with a slidertail. Usually downbeats are louder and have more layers of percussion compared to other beats, which is the case for this example, which is also why I think it'd be really strange to lift your finger on this specific . - hmm how about a 1/2 slider and add circles ~ like
01:32:664 (1,2,3) ?
Woa this difficulty is really consistent, even what I usually consider rhythmical faults are consistent, which is why it's confusing me so much.

[ Light Insane]
SPOILER
00:23:889 - Can't hear a sound here after removing the note. - i think for cosistentcy ~

00:30:624 - Following vocals again I see, very well. - fixed ;w;
^
00:31:440 - In that case, shouldn't this be mapped like this for better emphasization? - hmm okay ~


00:36:950 - This feels a bit weak to be a circle imo. - ok add 1/2 slider ~
^
00:37:766 - Should probably be a circle for better emphasization of vocals. - ok ~
^
I'm sure this'd work better: 00:36:950 - for reference


00:44:093 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel these should all be moved up a half and that 00:44:093 - should be a circle, like this:

because I don't see why higher pitched and stronger vocals like 00:44:501 - and 00:44:909 - should be sliderends.

Well, I'll stop pointing out missed emphasizations, since your answer will likely be the same for all of them.
Just try to not end sliders and stuff on strong downbeats, feels really strange imo. 01:07:358 - for example - sorry ;w; my english is bad so I replied that I could ~ and thanks for your suggestion ~ honestly idk what is downbeat or whatever ;w; because i'm newbie on modding ;w;

01:20:828 (3,4) - Might want to check blankets in this difficulty as well. - okay ~

01:38:787 (4,5,6,1) - Feel like the stream can be directed better from the (4) sort of like this, will improve the flow of the jump: - okay ~

(Look at how Akitoshi did it, for example)

Also remember to NC the downbeats you change, if you change any. - okay ;w; ~

I guess the rest looks alright.
You've got a really developed mapping style, but I feel like the fundamentals of rhythm and blanketing are lacking. - Thanks ~ for the suggestion ~

[ General]
SPOILER
Turn off widescreen support for all difficulties, it's only used by storyboards. - lol i'm forget to disable widescreen support on light insane diff :o Thanks ~ has reminded me ~

The rest looks fine.

Good luck!

Kocari wrote:

Here from Modding Team


[General]
Ahhh gosh that mp3 quality kills me, as well as the left side of my ear only hearing part of the song. Damn they really done goofed this time Unison
Spike from normal to hard might ask you to make an advanced diff. The spacing in hard is pretty large in some areas that made the SR spike. - nope ~ ii think its enough ~ because i can die if added advanced diff :o


[Light Insane]
00:06:542 (1) - NC could be nice to show that jump off - ok ~
01:03:889 (5) - Better to not end on a downbeat, would be beter to have to notes then a slider up to that point - okay ~
01:04:705 (8,3) - You can also match this rhythm but that's up to you - keep
01:06:950 (1,2) - Ctrl+G Rhythm here is better - i'm remap this section ~
01:20:828 (3,4) - Blanket can be slightly better - fixed?
01:29:399 (2,3,4,50) - Flow here plays very strangely - i'm follow vocal here ~
01:33:277 (1) - Again downbeat rhythm isn't as great - sorry ;w;
01:35:726 (3,4) - Blanket here can be adjusted as well - fixed?
01:36:542 (1,2) - Nice downbeat rhythm should be like this :) - Thanks ~

[Hard]
00:13:481 (1) - Spacing is quite large on this jump 2.0 is the ideal jump here - too far imo,i think 1,8x is fine ~
00:45:930 (5,1) - I feel spacing should be same here before you switch at 00:46:746 (2,3) - fixed ~
01:10:624 (1) - Spacing is pretty large here - okay reduced
01:11:440 (4,5) - Spacing can be the same idk why it's changed by .2 here - i'm remap this section ~
01:12:052 (6) - Downbeat on white tick again feels bad - aiready fixed ~
01:21:848 (1) - Spacing too far - reduced ~
01:22:664 (3,4) - Such a big gap - ok reduced ~
01:27:562 (2) - Can even out spacing - nope ~
01:35:930 (7,8) - Same as ^ - okay ~
01:38:991 (7,8,1) - Kinda hidden and might be hard for beginners to read this, may was to change it up a bit -aiready fixed ~

[Normal]
00:06:134 (3) - Can move a little more left for 1.0 spacing - nope
00:17:971 (3) - This doesn't fit well imo since the white downbeat isn't being utilized especially on a normal, only another thing you can try but you can keep yours if you want - used it ~ http://puu.sh/pvpHV/60afe6a026.jpg
00:28:175 (3) - Spacing a little short, can move a little further - okay ~
00:41:236 (3) - Spacing a little off - fixed
00:43:277 (2) - Little too far - fixed ~
00:55:726 - You have to map this out for it to feel great here as well as NC 00:55:930 (6) - okay ~

[Easy]
00:42:052 (5) - Spacing a little too short - fixed ~
01:12:256 (1) - Spacing can be fixed here - fixed ~
01:28:583 (3) - Same as ^ - i think its fine imo ~

Everything is good to go, you can ask a BN to check this up for you. They'll make the rest of the corrections for me. Push them it'll be ranked soon. Not a half ass mod either this is literally what is best to help adjust the map ;) - hmm okay ~ i will ask BN later ~
Thanks for mod ~ both of you!!! ~ really helpful ;w;
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi

Kaifin wrote:

Aki's Insane

  1. 00:19:808 (7,8,1) - fix end of stream shape (you can see how its off by the highlighted notes hopefully) well look at whole 00:19:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - and it will looks actually fine xd
  2. 00:21:237 (4,4) - fix stack, its just slightly off not rly
  3. 00:24:910 (1,6) - this one is also like a pixel off restack it and you'll see can't avoid it when it comes to sliders :v

Naxess wrote:

[ Dat Boi's Insane]
SPOILER
akito shit waddup :((

here come ur mod (even though you didn't ask for one and the NM request was specifically only light insane and hard xd)

01:19:808 (4,5) - hey akitoshit, switch their places for consistency with 01:05:727 (1,2,3,4,5) - variation

01:24:093 - quite unexpected, this was. change it, you should. like this, how about? nej it looks lack of sth

01:24:093 - miss tick, you say. try, I say.

01:24:297 - dis be clickable. Requires emphasization, you see. as I said before, for less difficult for 01:23:890 (1) -

01:15:114 (1) - Is this NC really necessary? Refer to 00:19:604 (5) - .

I feel like the two kiais are inconsistent, but that's fine, since this is insane.
...wait this is insane? Aki didn't map a normal? *mind blown*
But anyway, here are the two kiais lined up, in case you feel like something is worth changing:













From this I can, for example, see that there's a combo inconsistency at 01:13:685 - , when compared to 01:25:113 - .
Here, choose one:
  1. 01:25:113 - Make clickable, NC nop
  2. 01:13:685 - Remove NC, 01:13:889 - Add NC
If you really wanted to, you could even make each parallel measure the same color, so it's easier to recognize which measure you're on.
But well, it's not necessary, up to you.

Now if you don't mind, I'm going to resume drowning in my modding queue...

Kocari wrote:

[Aki's Insane]
This is only me, really does fit more to end it on the red tick vocals. Sure I hear the sound does also end on white but the extended slider kinda just throws me off more than benefit that distant sound in the music
00:22:869 (6) - Whistle on tail, you had them at 00:22:257 (4,5,6) - on the same sound, would only make sense here
00:26:339 (6) - Soft sampleset on this note sounds kinda bland, I can't really hear anything besides the drum in the BG and tbh it's covering up too much of the soft sampleset sound it may bland to ppl but this one was more fitting compared to Normal sampleset imo
01:14:706 (1) - This spacing is too close, compared to the previous gaps in spacing here 01:13:686 (1,2,3) - or give it more time to be hit, I would just move (3) more to the right and you should be golden
01:23:890 (1,2) - Could be NC somehow to make readers tell this is coming up, but doesn't really cause problems let me hear more opinions about this one, non-NC'd one actually can read as well at least for me ;3
Diff is fine
No reply = fixed. thank you!

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[General]
AudioFilename: 08 Darekaga wasure teru kamo shirenai bokura ni daijina 001 no koto.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62460
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 20011
DistanceSpacing: 1.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Dareka ga Wasure Teru Kamo Shirenai Bokura ni Daijina 001 no Koto (D.A mix)
TitleUnicode:誰かが忘れているかもしれない僕らに大事な001のこと (D.A mix)
Artist:UNISON SQUARE GARDEN
ArtistUnicode:ユニゾン・スクエア・ガーデン
Creator:-NanoRIPE-
Version:Aki's Insane
Source:
Tags:DUGOUT ACCIDENT Akitoshi cut version
BeatmapID:988323
BeatmapSetID:445845

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:8.2
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zosanfc
152 posts
Joined November 2014
zosanfc
Hi. short M4M
[Easy]
- 00:26:542 (1) - blanket
- 00:40:828 (3) - move to x:172 y:92 ?
- 00:43:685 (2) - flip horizontally
[Normal]
- 00:30:215 (2,3) - blanket
- 00:34:705 (3,4) - ^
- 00:50:624 (3,4) - ^
- 01:08:991 (1,2) - ^
- 01:10:624 (4) - flip horizontally
[Hard]
- 00:11:848 (1) - rotate 10 °
- 00:48:175 (2,3) - blanket
- 01:22:664 (3,4) - i think these sliders too far
- 01:38:175 (4) - NC
[Light Insane]
- 00:03:685 (1,1) - overlap
- 00:20:419 (2) - NC
- 00:33:481 (1,2,3) - these sliders isn't fine, fix it
- 01:39:195 (1) - remove NC
[Aki's Insane]
- 00:06:950 (1) - compact it to 00:07:154 or remove the break time
- 00:50:931 (7) - remove overlap
- 01:39:196 (1) - remove NC?
Good luck dude!
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi

zosanfc wrote:

[Aki's Insane]
- 00:06:950 (1) - compact it to 00:07:154 or remove the break time nop that slider was for vocals.
- 00:50:931 (7) - remove overlap how this one becomes an overlap?
- 01:39:196 (1) - remove NC?
Good luck dude!
@NanoRIPE- would you mind to remove my NC on 01:39:196 (1) - ? Lazy to post code for just one NC xd

Thanks for your check!
-NanoRIPE-
2,018 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-

Akitoshi wrote:

@NanoRIPE- would you mind to remove my NC on 01:39:196 (1) - ? Lazy to post code for just one NC xd
okay ;w; ~

zosanfc wrote:

Hi. short M4M
[Easy]
- 00:26:542 (1) - blanket - it is aiready blanket,isn't?
- 00:40:828 (3) - move to x:172 y:92 ? - fixed :3
- 00:43:685 (2) - flip horizontally - nope ~
[Normal]
- 00:30:215 (2,3) - blanket - ?
- 00:34:705 (3,4) - ^ - hmm i think its aiready blanket ~
- 00:50:624 (3,4) - ^ - if i blanket ~ it will ruin the pattern ~
- 01:08:991 (1,2) - ^ - ^
- 01:10:624 (4) - flip horizontally - nope ~
[Hard]
- 00:11:848 (1) - rotate 10 ° - nope ~
- 00:48:175 (2,3) - blanket - nope ~
- 01:22:664 (3,4) - i think these sliders too far - jump ~
- 01:38:175 (4) - NC - okay ~
[Light Insane]
- 00:03:685 (1,1) - overlap - ?
- 00:20:419 (2) - NC - nope ~
- 00:33:481 (1,2,3) - these sliders isn't fine, fix it - hmm i will waiting other opinion about these slider ~
- 01:39:195 (1) - remove NC - okay ~
Good luck dude!

Thanks for your mod!! ~ i will mod your map asap ~
Et0iliS
59 posts
Joined March 2013
Et0iliS
hi! M4M

sorry im late :P

[Easy]
  1. 00:14:297 (2,3) - fix blenket
  2. 01:29:399 (4,1) - ^

    [Normal]
  3. 00:11:848 (3,4) - fix blenket

    [Hard]
  4. 00:22:664 (6,1,2) - Click!
  5. 01:02:460 (1,2,3,4) - i think it is hard to move xD
  6. 01:07:971 (2,3) - fix blenket

    [Light Insane]
  7. 00:22:052 (7,8,1,2) - Click! maybe?
  8. 00:42:256 (3,1) - stack

    [Aki's Insane]
    NICE!

for reference only! really a nice map and can not found more mistakes :o , GOOD LUCK!
-NanoRIPE-
2,018 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-

Snow-- wrote:

hi! M4M

sorry im late :P

[Easy]
  1. 00:14:297 (2,3) - fix blenket
  2. 01:29:399 (4,1) - ^

    [Normal]
  3. 00:11:848 (3,4) - fix blenket - i thinm its fine imo

    [Hard]
  4. 00:22:664 (6,1,2) - Click!
  5. 01:02:460 (1,2,3,4) - i think it is hard to move xD - hmm not really ~ i'm use DS here ~
  6. 01:07:971 (2,3) - fix blenket

    [Light Insane]
  7. 00:22:052 (7,8,1,2) - Click! maybe? - nope ~
  8. 00:42:256 (3,1) - stack

    [Aki's Insane]
    NICE!

for reference only! really a nice map and can not found more mistakes :o , GOOD LUCK!
No reply = fixed..

Thanks for your mod!!!
micchi_chi
764 posts
Joined July 2013
micchi_chi
Oy M4M from my modding Q

waduh pake bahasa apa neh xD
bahasa Inggris aja yak, lebih nyaman -w-

Red : unrankable (or might be unrankable) issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

[Easy]
  1. One DS problem, lol
  2. 00:27:358 (2,3) - Lupakan bahasa inggris xD bagian ini sebenernya lebih cocok pake tiga 1/1 slider daripada dua 1/1 reverse slider kayak ini soalnya vocalnya beda. Kalo pake tiga 1/1 slider, vocalnya bisa dipisahin tuh antara houshitemo (ato apalah, ga denger xD), soshitemo, sama doushitemo.
  3. 01:12:664 (2,3,4) - Kalo mau sih lebih cocok circle dulu baru slider kayak gini http://puu.sh/pzcFe/9a7b086b37.jpg lebih pas aja gitu sama vocal dan background soundnya...
  4. 01:39:399 (1) - Spinnernya dipanjangin deh sampe sini 01:44:093 soalnya masih ada suara sedikit sampe sekitar situ.
  5. Kurang dikit modnya :v ulang lagi ah, lebih nazi kali ini -w-
  6. 00:32:256 (5) - Pindahin ke kanan dikit biar flownya agak sedikit lebih halus. http://puu.sh/pzcQo/ac7165abc7.jpg
  7. 00:33:073 (1,2,3) - Gimana kalo rhythmnya kayak gini http://puu.sh/pzcTC/50581a80f5.jpg -w- bakal lebih cocok tuh sama vocal yang "wow wow wow" Saran lebih lanjut (kalo di apply), ganti rhythm ini 00:34:705 (3,4) - jadi dua 1/1 slider ato satu 1/1 slider + dua circle biar reverse slidernya ga dobel. Jadi begini deh keseluruhannya http://puu.sh/pzd0d/f03ce06733.jpg . http://puu.sh/pzd2U/64cda48838.jpg usulan posisi kalo butuh, dan kalo di apply xD
  8. 00:48:583 (4,1) - Blanket pls
  9. 00:46:134 (1,2) - Gimana kalo circle dulu baru slider? Soalnya vocalnya yang big baru mulai di tick ke dua, jadi kalo slidernya dimulai dari tick pertama seolah - olah kayak gak pas gitu :/ Oh iya, tambahan usulan, mungkin normal-sliderticknya bisa diganti kayak suara normal-hitwhistle jadi buat yang suaranya cuman di support sama slider tick kayak ini 00:46:542 tetep bisa kena hitsound. Tpi kalo mau dinamainnya normal-slidertick2 yak (pake 2) biar yang pake custom 1 tetep suara slidertick biasa. Terus bisa juga dibikin lagi normal-slidertick3 yang suaranya sama kayak normal-hitclap buat support suara kayak 01:04:501
  10. 01:01:032 (3,4) - Blanket?
  11. 01:12:256 (1,2,3,4) - Patternnya agak gak enak diliat yak >.< mungkin bisa dibikin lebih rapi lagi kayak... http://puu.sh/pzdrU/d22494d580.jpg di blanket yaa, ane males xD btw, ini mod kalo suggestion yang atas ^ ga di apply yak.
  12. Sisanya oke :D

[Normal]
  1. Widih, agak jauh yak ke Hardnya .-. bagusnya sebenernya kalo bintangnya sekitar 2.0 ato 2.1 gitu...
  2. 00:32:664 (5) - Gak pake 1/2 reverse slider aja? .-. drumnya lumayan kenceng loh
  3. 00:33:481 (1,2) - Suggestionnya masih sama kayak Easy, lebih cocok pake 1/1 reverse slider -w-
  4. 00:36:134 Kayaknya disini drumnya lebih kenceng yak? (iya ga sih? :v) coba tambahin circle deh. Suggestion buat posisi kalo susah : http://puu.sh/pzdJQ/af54fb0ae3.jpg masih perlu DS yang lain sih >~<
  5. 01:02:256 kasih note buat support streamnya
  6. 01:07:358 (5) - Pindahin ke kiri dikit biar flownya gak terlalu tajem sama biar ga overlap sama 01:06:542 (3) - http://puu.sh/pzdTN/0064cda060.jpg Tapi emang agak susah sih soalnya bentuk (5) nya lurus .-. mungkin dilengkungin aja terus diatur lagi posisinya bakal lebih bagus lagi http://puu.sh/pzdYt/dbff15da30.jpg
  7. 01:09:399 (2,4) - Coba badan slidernya di blanket deh jadi antara luarnya (2) sama dalemnya (4) bisa sejajar http://puu.sh/pze3p/039d597494.jpg bakal keliatan lebih rapi
  8. 01:26:338 (3) - (3) nya jangan terlalu melesek biar flownya bisa tetep lurus, sejajarin sama arah lengkungan (2) sama (1) http://puu.sh/pze8Q/3c848fd3d2.jpg
  9. 01:29:399 (1) - NC-ing nya ga salah nih? .-.
  10. good

[Hard]
  1. 00:02:052 (1,1) - blanketnya kurang bagus nih >.< kalo misalnya pake slidertail susah, kasih aja circle biar approach circlenya bisa bantu buat ngeblanket. http://puu.sh/pzehf/20aede93c8.jpg sempurnain yaa
  2. Wew, spacingnya jauh yak...
  3. 00:46:032 kasih circle disini, ada suara triplet soalnya.
  4. 00:45:317 (4) - Terus kayaknya 1/2 reverse slider bakal lebih cocok disini...
  5. 00:56:950 (4) - Agak off deh kayaknya.... suara drum yang di ignore lebih gede daripada vocalnya, jadi mendingan map drumnya aja sebenernya. http://puu.sh/pzetd/61d75de0ba.jpg ato gini http://puu.sh/pzetS/ae23c07c94.jpg
  6. 00:57:562 (1) - Off juga .-. coba rhythm kayak gini deh http://puu.sh/pzewH/6047471c98.jpg Atau mungkin rhythm bagian ini sama bagian atas bisa dirombak lagi jadi kayak gini http://puu.sh/pzezt/d282a543bb.jpg bakal lebih cocok deh kayaknya.
  7. ^ masih kasus yang sama, atau bahkan bisa dirombak lebih jauh lagi, dari sini 00:56:134 http://puu.sh/pzeF3/1ac8ab63b7.jpg berpola sih sebenernya rhythmnya...
  8. 01:01:542 Gede banget tripletnya >~< sayang banget kalo ga di map....
  9. 01:02:460 (1,2,3) - Mendingan pake rhythm yang lurus lurus aja deh xD jaga biar notenya tetep di white tick http://puu.sh/pzeOd/19f2d9a3c6.jpg
  10. 01:23:073 (4,5,6) - waw :v linear flow kayak gini agak susah di hit loh xD
  11. 01:28:583 (5,6,1,2,3) - Mungkin bagian ini biar ga sama terus bisa di map ngikutin vocalnya (?)

[Light Insane]
  1. 00:26:542 (1) - coba di ctrl+g, 00:26:950 (2) - ini juga, flownya bakal lebih enak sama jumpnya lebih mantep.
  2. 00:35:317 (7) - di split laa jadi 1/2 slider sama circle biar drumnya kedapetan hitsound.
  3. 00:56:338 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - perbaikin lagi deh, rhythmnya off, coba pake rhythm kayak suggestion di Hard ^ tpi dibikin agak jumpy aja gitu. http://puu.sh/pzf6F/4e75d58270.jpg
  4. 01:00:419 (6) - mendingan pake circle aja deh xD gak cocok pake slider...
  5. 01:06:950 (4) - ikutin vocalnya aja http://puu.sh/pzfaL/50d65eddaa.jpg
  6. 01:11:236 (3) - buat Hard keatas, usahain jangan ignore suara - suara walaupun yang kecil - kecil gitu. Jadi itu drumnya tolong di map yak xD
  7. 01:12:868 (2,3,4) - terbalik nih :v harusnya circle dulu baru slider, lebih cocok sama vocalnya. 01:13:685 (5,6,7) - yang ini juga sama. 01:14:501 (8) - terus mendingan ini pake circle aja kalo yang sebelom - sebelomnya di apply biar lebih konsisten. Jadinya begini akhirnya http://puu.sh/pzfiJ/d04d05114c.jpg
  8. Sebenernya udah cukup layak disebut Insane sih daripada Light Insane soalnya rhythmnya udh cukup complex sama jumpnya juga udh jauh - jauh. Mungkin kalo mau, ini disebut Insane aja, ntar guestmapnya dikasih custom name... tapi terserah sih...

Overall bagus sih, tapi placementnya masih agak kurang rapi aja, blanketnya masih banyak yang off, kalo bisa di cek lagi yak :3

Good luck~!!!
-NanoRIPE-
2,018 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Oy M4M from my modding Q

waduh pake bahasa apa neh xD
bahasa Inggris aja yak, lebih nyaman -w-

Red : unrankable (or might be unrankable) issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

[Easy]
  1. One DS problem, lol - saya check di Aimod nggk ada masalah deh ;w;
  2. 00:27:358 (2,3) - Lupakan bahasa inggris xD bagian ini sebenernya lebih cocok pake tiga 1/1 slider daripada dua 1/1 reverse slider kayak ini soalnya vocalnya beda. Kalo pake tiga 1/1 slider, vocalnya bisa dipisahin tuh antara houshitemo (ato apalah, ga denger xD), soshitemo, sama doushitemo. - hmm bener juga ya ~
  3. 01:12:664 (2,3,4) - Kalo mau sih lebih cocok circle dulu baru slider kayak gini http://puu.sh/pzcFe/9a7b086b37.jpg lebih pas aja gitu sama vocal dan background soundnya... - ok!
  4. 01:39:399 (1) - Spinnernya dipanjangin deh sampe sini 01:44:093 soalnya masih ada suara sedikit sampe sekitar situ. - lah saya ikut Aki's Insane ~.kalau saya panjangin nanti end timenya nggk konsisten ;w;
  5. Kurang dikit modnya :v ulang lagi ah, lebih nazi kali ini -w- - waduh ok ;w;
  6. 00:32:256 (5) - Pindahin ke kanan dikit biar flownya agak sedikit lebih halus. http://puu.sh/pzcQo/ac7165abc7.jpg - ok ~
  7. 00:33:073 (1,2,3) - Gimana kalo rhythmnya kayak gini http://puu.sh/pzcTC/50581a80f5.jpg -w- bakal lebih cocok tuh sama vocal yang "wow wow wow" Saran lebih lanjut (kalo di apply), ganti rhythm ini 00:34:705 (3,4) - jadi dua 1/1 slider ato satu 1/1 slider + dua circle biar reverse slidernya ga dobel. Jadi begini deh keseluruhannya http://puu.sh/pzd0d/f03ce06733.jpg . http://puu.sh/pzd2U/64cda48838.jpg usulan posisi kalo butuh, dan kalo di apply xD - ok deh kayak gitu aja XD
  8. 00:48:583 (4,1) - Blanket pls - ok ~ blanketnya lebih halus lagi ~
  9. 00:46:134 (1,2) - Gimana kalo circle dulu baru slider? Soalnya vocalnya yang big baru mulai di tick ke dua, jadi kalo slidernya dimulai dari tick pertama seolah - olah kayak gak pas gitu :/ Oh iya, tambahan usulan, mungkin normal-sliderticknya bisa diganti kayak suara normal-hitwhistle jadi buat yang suaranya cuman di support sama slider tick kayak ini 00:46:542 tetep bisa kena hitsound. Tpi kalo mau dinamainnya normal-slidertick2 yak (pake 2) biar yang pake custom 1 tetep suara slidertick biasa. Terus bisa juga dibikin lagi normal-slidertick3 yang suaranya sama kayak normal-hitclap buat support suara kayak 01:04:501 - hmm ok deh tambah circle lalu slider setelahnya tapi kalau soal hitsoundnya tetap deh ~ menurutku yg ini udah bagus ~
  10. 01:01:032 (3,4) - Blanket? - udah ;w;
  11. 01:12:256 (1,2,3,4) - Patternnya agak gak enak diliat yak >.< mungkin bisa dibikin lebih rapi lagi kayak... http://puu.sh/pzdrU/d22494d580.jpg di blanket yaa, ane males xD btw, ini mod kalo suggestion yang atas ^ ga di apply yak. - lah kan saya apply ;w; sebelumnya ~
  12. Sisanya oke :D

[Normal]
  1. Widih, agak jauh yak ke Hardnya .-. bagusnya sebenernya kalo bintangnya sekitar 2.0 ato 2.1 gitu... - sebenarnya sebelumnya hampir 2.0 cuma karena beberapa sebab jadi harus hapus beberapa note dan turun star ;w;
  2. 00:32:664 (5) - Gak pake 1/2 reverse slider aja? .-. drumnya lumayan kenceng loh - saya prefer ke vocal ~ jadi keep aja deh ~
  3. 00:33:481 (1,2) - Suggestionnya masih sama kayak Easy, lebih cocok pake 1/1 reverse slider -w- - hmm sebenarnya sih nggk mau karena membuat patternnya berantakan tapi kalau dipikir2 bener juga ~ jadi di fixed
  4. 00:36:134 Kayaknya disini drumnya lebih kenceng yak? (iya ga sih? :v) coba tambahin circle deh. Suggestion buat posisi kalo susah : http://puu.sh/pzdJQ/af54fb0ae3.jpg masih perlu DS yang lain sih >~< - nggk deh ~ soalnya terlalu susah untuk slow part disini ~
  5. 01:02:256 kasih note buat support streamnya - kayaknya nggk deh ~ karena inikan part baru masuk kiai time ~ jadi kalau di tambah kayak rada kaget gitu ~
  6. 01:07:358 (5) - Pindahin ke kiri dikit biar flownya gak terlalu tajem sama biar ga overlap sama 01:06:542 (3) - http://puu.sh/pzdTN/0064cda060.jpg Tapi emang agak susah sih soalnya bentuk (5) nya lurus .-. mungkin dilengkungin aja terus diatur lagi posisinya bakal lebih bagus lagi http://puu.sh/pzdYt/dbff15da30.jpg - ok ;w;
  7. 01:09:399 (2,4) - Coba badan slidernya di blanket deh jadi antara luarnya (2) sama dalemnya (4) bisa sejajar http://puu.sh/pze3p/039d597494.jpg bakal keliatan lebih rapi - fixed ~ *semoga ini lebih rapi ;w;
  8. 01:26:338 (3) - (3) nya jangan terlalu melesek biar flownya bisa tetep lurus, sejajarin sama arah lengkungan (2) sama (1) - ok! http://puu.sh/pze8Q/3c848fd3d2.jpg
  9. 01:29:399 (1) - NC-ing nya ga salah nih? .-. - waduh kelupaan ;w; - fixed ~
  10. good

[Hard]
  1. 00:02:052 (1,1) - blanketnya kurang bagus nih >.< kalo misalnya pake slidertail susah, kasih aja circle biar approach circlenya bisa bantu buat ngeblanket. http://puu.sh/pzehf/20aede93c8.jpg sempurnain yaa - ok! ~
  2. Wew, spacingnya jauh yak... - iya ;w; ~
  3. 00:46:032 kasih circle disini, ada suara triplet soalnya. - waduh bener juga nggk sadar ;w; ~
  4. 00:45:317 (4) - Terus kayaknya 1/2 reverse slider bakal lebih cocok disini... - ok!
  5. 00:56:950 (4) - Agak off deh kayaknya.... suara drum yang di ignore lebih gede daripada vocalnya, jadi mendingan map drumnya aja sebenernya. http://puu.sh/pzetd/61d75de0ba.jpg ato gini http://puu.sh/pzetS/ae23c07c94.jpg - hmm baiklah~
  6. 00:57:562 (1) - Off juga .-. coba rhythm kayak gini deh http://puu.sh/pzewH/6047471c98.jpg Atau mungkin rhythm bagian ini sama bagian atas bisa dirombak lagi jadi kayak gini http://puu.sh/pzezt/d282a543bb.jpg bakal lebih cocok deh kayaknya. ok!
  7. ^ masih kasus yang sama, atau bahkan bisa dirombak lebih jauh lagi, dari sini 00:56:134 http://puu.sh/pzeF3/1ac8ab63b7.jpg berpola sih sebenernya rhythmnya... - hmmm saya masih pikir2 kalau pakai polanya kak ~ soalnya ada beberapa note yang tdk cocok di downbeat ~ jadi saya pakai polanya saya dulu ~ tapi saya dah perbaiki kok beberapa
  8. 01:01:542 Gede banget tripletnya >~< sayang banget kalo ga di map.... - ok ~ di tambah 1 circle
  9. 01:02:460 (1,2,3) - Mendingan pake rhythm yang lurus lurus aja deh xD jaga biar notenya tetep di white tick http://puu.sh/pzeOd/19f2d9a3c6.jpg - ok fixed ~
  10. 01:23:073 (4,5,6) - waw :v linear flow kayak gini agak susah di hit loh xD - benerkah? ok saya ganti :x
  11. 01:28:583 (5,6,1,2,3) - Mungkin bagian ini biar ga sama terus bisa di map ngikutin vocalnya (?) - ok!

[Light Insane]
  1. 00:26:542 (1) - coba di ctrl+g, 00:26:950 (2) - ini juga, flownya bakal lebih enak sama jumpnya lebih mantep. - hmm masih enakan yg sekarang deh ;w;
  2. 00:35:317 (7) - di split laa jadi 1/2 slider sama circle biar drumnya kedapetan hitsound. - ok ~
  3. 00:56:338 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - perbaikin lagi deh, rhythmnya off, coba pake rhythm kayak suggestion di Hard ^ tpi dibikin agak jumpy aja gitu. http://puu.sh/pzf6F/4e75d58270.jpg - ok ~ cuma pattern agak lain dengan yg disarankan kak ~
  4. 01:00:419 (6) - mendingan pake circle aja deh xD gak cocok pake slider... - hmm ok ~
  5. 01:06:950 (4) - ikutin vocalnya aja http://puu.sh/pzfaL/50d65eddaa.jpg - ok ~
  6. 01:11:236 (3) - buat Hard keatas, usahain jangan ignore suara - suara walaupun yang kecil - kecil gitu. Jadi itu drumnya tolong di map yak xD - ok XD
  7. 01:12:868 (2,3,4) - terbalik nih :v harusnya circle dulu baru slider, lebih cocok sama vocalnya. 01:13:685 (5,6,7) - yang ini juga sama. 01:14:501 (8) - terus mendingan ini pake circle aja kalo yang sebelom - sebelomnya di apply biar lebih konsisten. Jadinya begini akhirnya http://puu.sh/pzfiJ/d04d05114c.jpg - bener juga ya kwkwkw
  8. Sebenernya udah cukup layak disebut Insane sih daripada Light Insane soalnya rhythmnya udh cukup complex sama jumpnya juga udh jauh - jauh. Mungkin kalo mau, ini disebut Insane aja, ntar guestmapnya dikasih custom name... tapi terserah sih... - masalahnya starnya masih rendah kalau disebut insane ~ jadi ini tetap light insane aja ~

Overall bagus sih, tapi placementnya masih agak kurang rapi aja, blanketnya masih banyak yang off, kalo bisa di cek lagi yak :3 - ok kak makasih!!

Good luck~!!!
makasih banget kak modnya!! ~
Kalibe
2,060 posts
Joined October 2013
Kalibe
Sorry if my mod is shit, but i didn't mod for ages xd

*Easy

- 00:51:440 (4,5) - Spacing problem !
- 00:45:317 (5) - Well.. imo this will be play better if you move this a bit to down for better flow play xd. 344|136 are cool coordinates to show this. :3
- 01:31:032 (2,3) - 01:32:664 (4,1) - Blankets could be more presented aka fix blankets.

*Normal

- You can easily increase AR to 5, since Easy have 3 and Hard 7 ~
- Overall this diff looks like Easy with few 1/2 sliders and a little bigger spacing. You should add some circles on 1/2 beat, places like : 00:26:338 (6) - 00:28:787 (4) - 00:36:134 (5) - and etc. // just put some circles on 1/2 rhythm before kiai for spread fit.
- .. but generally good diff.

*Hard

- 00:16:746 (1,2,3) - I'm not a fan of this flow! It's too edgy, hard ppl will be hate that transision. Just make something like this or otherwise.
- Hmm? Do i see some NC issues? 00:21:644 (4) - add nc, 00:22:868 (1,3) - swap nc, 00:26:338 (1,2) - swap 00:27:971 (1,2) - same as previous 00:31:440 (4,1) - same xd and etc.
- 00:36:134 (2) - In my opinion -> ( 2<1<3 in spacing emphasis ) so i think it's better to stack (2) on (1) than (3) ~
- 00:45:930 (5,1) - People will be confuse something like this. Change spacing 5 - 1 to identically spacing from 4 - 5 .

*Light Insane

- 00:06:134 (6,1) - Increase spacing a bit, cause of new combo emphasis.
- 00:45:930 (7,8) - Pls, pls, pls map that triplet ! :c
- 00:59:195 (6,1) - 01:25:113 (1,2) - 01:30:215 (5,1) - 01:32:664 (1,2) - Swap NC.
- 01:33:277 (1) - Remove NC here, it's really useless tho.
- 01:35:113 (2) - Hah, this plays better, when you do ctrl G on, so try it !

*Aki's Insane

- Why Aki, but no Akitoshi's ? Sounds more reasonable imo, but nvm xd.
- 00:25:931 (4,6) - How about ctrl G these? Plays cooler to me! :3
- 00:34:298 (4) - If you can, please move this slider a bit to down ( 304|192 nice place ) so transision couldn't be awkward.
- 01:13:074 (1) - Unessesary NC imo.
- 01:19:196 (2,4) - Fix this circle stack on sliderend ~
- cool diff

Ok, that's all. Sorry for bad mod and english ;w; // Good luck!
Akitoshi
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Joined August 2014
Akitoshi

Kalibe wrote:

*Aki's Insane

- Why Aki, but no Akitoshi's ? Sounds more reasonable imo, but nvm xd. it's like how nanaka using 7ka and habiholic using habi xd
- 00:25:931 (4,6) - How about ctrl G these? Plays cooler to me! :3 sure
- 00:34:298 (4) - If you can, please move this slider a bit to down ( 304|192 nice place ) so transision couldn't be awkward. oke
- 01:13:074 (1) - Unessesary NC imo. hoLY removed
- 01:19:196 (2,4) - Fix this circle stack on sliderend ~ Peppy why u do dis
- cool diff Akitoshit diff shit diff

Ok, that's all. Sorry for bad mod and english ;w; // Good luck! hi im japaniz and didn't knowing that england languages ;3
Fixed all thanks!

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128,176,64298,1,0,2:0:0:0:
281,277,64502,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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168,309,65523,1,0,2:0:0:0:
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253,265,68176,2,0,P|213:230|187:169,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
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86,174,68788,1,0,2:0:0:0:
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254,50,72665,1,8,0:0:0:0:
281,253,72869,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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203,350,77563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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316,98,84705,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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-NanoRIPE-
2,018 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-

Kalibe wrote:

Sorry if my mod is shit, but i didn't mod for ages xd

*Easy

- 00:51:440 (4,5) - Spacing problem ! - fixed
- 00:45:317 (5) - Well.. imo this will be play better if you move this a bit to down for better flow play xd. 344|136 are cool coordinates to show this. :3 - okay ~
- 01:31:032 (2,3) - 01:32:664 (4,1) - Blankets could be more presented aka fix blankets. - fixed ~

*Normal

- You can easily increase AR to 5, since Easy have 3 and Hard 7 ~ - okay ~
- Overall this diff looks like Easy with few 1/2 sliders and a little bigger spacing. You should add some circles on 1/2 , places like : 00:26:338 (6) - 00:28:787 (4) - 00:36:134 (5) - and etc. // just put some circles on 1/2 rhythm before kiai for spread fit. - okay ~
- .. but generally good diff. - Thanks ~

*Hard

- 00:16:746 (1,2,3) - I'm not a fan of this flow! It's too edgy, hard ppl will be hate that transision. Just make something like this or otherwise. - okay fixed in anoither way ~
- Hmm? Do i see some NC issues? 00:21:644 (4) - add nc, 00:22:868 (1,3) - swap nc, 00:26:338 (1,2) - swap 00:27:971 (1,2) - same as previous 00:31:440 (4,1) - same xd and etc. - fixed some ~
- 00:36:134 (2) - In my opinion -> ( 2<1<3 in spacing emphasis ) so i think it's better to stack (2) on (1) than (3) ~ - okay ~
- 00:45:930 (5,1) - People will be confuse something like this. Change spacing 5 - 1 to identically spacing from 4 - 5 . - ?

*Light Insane

- 00:06:134 (6,1) - Increase spacing a bit, cause of new combo emphasis. - okay ~
- 00:45:930 (7,8) - Pls, pls, pls map that triplet ! :c - oops fixed ~
- 00:59:195 (6,1) - 01:25:113 (1,2) - 01:30:215 (5,1) - 01:32:664 (1,2) - Swap NC. - fixed some ~
- 01:33:277 (1) - Remove NC here, it's really useless tho. - okay ~
- 01:35:113 (2) - Hah, this plays better, when you do ctrl G on, so try it ! - i dont need jump here ~



Ok, that's all. Sorry for bad mod and english ;w; // Good luck!
Thanks for your mod!!
Last edited by -NanoRIPE- , edited 1 time in total.
Caput Mortuum
1,854 posts
Joined March 2016
Caput Mortuum
Hi, I came from queue~

Easy
No issue found.
Normal
01:21:032 (6,7) - do this http://imgur.com/2HLx74R
Hard
00:16:542 (8,1) - Kayaknya kejauhan deh buat hard. Apalagi di pojokan gitu
00:45:930 (7,8,1) - masalah kecil sih.. cuma arah stack nya keatasin deh :v
00:55:930 (6,1) - Daripada kosong gitu mending isi ginian http://imgur.com/DOlDWdy
01:32:664 (1,2,3) - stacknya sesuain arah slider
01:38:379 (2,3,4) - ^
Light Insane
No issue found.
Aki's Insane
01:22:665 (2) - Off-screen
01:38:176 (5) - ^

That's all. Sorry if I missed many things. Also thanks for choosing me~
-NanoRIPE-
2,018 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-

MeinGauche wrote:

Hi, I came from queue~

Easy
No issue found.
Normal
01:21:032 (6,7) - do this http://imgur.com/2HLx74R - menrutuku nggk masuk ritme :/
Hard
00:16:542 (8,1) - Kayaknya kejauhan deh buat hard. Apalagi di pojokan gitu - saya ngejump disini dan juga slidernya nggk buruk2 amat ~
00:45:930 (7,8,1) - masalah kecil sih.. cuma arah stack nya keatasin deh :v - nggk ngerti :3 ~
00:55:930 (6,1) - Daripada kosong gitu mending isi ginian http://imgur.com/DOlDWdy - untuk saat ini saya tetap kosongkan ~
01:32:664 (1,2,3) - stacknya sesuain arah slider - sumpah aku nggk ngerti apa yang kau maksud ini :'3
01:38:379 (2,3,4) - ^ - ^ masa di stack ~ kan circle (4) itu untuk jump ~
Light Insane
No issue found.


That's all. Sorry if I missed many things. Also thanks for choosing me~
Makasih modnya ~ Tapi nggk ada perubahan hehe :3
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi
@MeinGauche they aren't offscreen even for playing :(

and @-NanoRIPE- yep don't forget to update my diff xd
-NanoRIPE-
2,018 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-

Akitoshi wrote:

@MeinGauche they aren't offscreen even for playing :(

and @-NanoRIPE- yep don't forget to update my diff xd
oops i'm almost forget to update it :x okay,Update ~
ncuh
185 posts
Joined July 2013
ncuh
NM request from my queue
Hard
00:02:052 (1,1) - fix blanket
00:21:440 - there is should be tap I guess(there is not music beat or smth but playing rly better with it)
00:40:419 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:46:950 (3) - there is beat on blue tic, so better do like this http://i.imgur.com/DpwOiFh.png
00:48:583 (3) - same^
00:50:215 (4,5) - same situation http://i.imgur.com/LZyKXlq.png I know, it's only hard, but I am sure u shouldn't ignore that
00:52:154 - there's should be a note
00:53:379 - same^
00:53:787 - same
00:54:195 - same
01:07:971 (2,3) - fix blanket

Light Insane
00:14:093 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:14:909 (4,5) - same
00:17:358 (2,3) - same
00:21:440 - there is should be tap I guess(there is not music beat or smth but playing rly better with it)
00:23:277 (3,4,5) - bad flow
00:46:950 (4) - well. Same as 00:46:950 at hard diff
00:48:583 same
00:50:215 ^
same
same
same))))
01:30:011 (4,1) - fix blanket

I want to say. These 2 diffs looks very...symmilar. When I opened light insane, I thought that I accidentally opened again hard diff :o
-NanoRIPE-
2,018 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-

M1k0 wrote:

NM request from my queue
Hard
00:02:052 (1,1) - fix blanket
00:21:440 - there is should be tap I guess(there is not music or smth but playing rly better with it)
00:40:419 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:46:950 (3) - there is on blue tic, so better do like this http://i.imgur.com/DpwOiFh.png
00:48:583 (3) - same^
00:50:215 (4,5) - same situation http://i.imgur.com/LZyKXlq.png I know, it's only hard, but I am sure u shouldn't ignore that
00:52:154 - there's should be a note
00:53:379 - same^
00:53:787 - same
00:54:195 - same
01:07:971 (2,3) - fix blanket

Light Insane
00:14:093 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:14:909 (4,5) - same
00:17:358 (2,3) - same
00:21:440 - there is should be tap I guess(there is not music or smth but playing rly better with it)
00:23:277 (3,4,5) - bad flow
00:46:950 (4) - well. Same as 00:46:950 at hard diff
00:48:583 same
00:50:215 ^
same
same
same))))
01:30:011 (4,1) - fix blanket

I want to say. These 2 diffs looks very...symmilar. When I opened light insane, I thought that I accidentally opened again hard diff :o
All fixed! ~ Thanks for your mod!!
Electoz
1,886 posts
Joined May 2015
Electoz
Hi, from my modding queue~

[Easy]

  1. 00:46:134 (1,2) - Ctrl+G rhythm? Just my preference but I think a slider would support a cymbal + guitar sound on 00:46:134 better.
  2. 00:52:664 (1) - The rhythm is going on constantly, so 00:53:073 shouldn't be skipped, how about a 1/1 repeat slider here?
  3. 01:25:726 - Should be clickable, it's just the same sound as 01:25:317 after all.
  4. 01:28:583 (3,4) - Use a circle + 1/1 repeat slider instead of these? Having a chain of 1/1 sliders this long 01:26:950 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) is quite repetitive.
[Normal]

  1. Wish to see a soft-sliderslide here, it's awkward to hear creaky sound on 00:10:828 (1) - 00:32:664 (4) .
  2. 00:22:868 - Clap here instead of whistle? Also a missing whistle on 00:23:277 .
  3. 00:54:705 (4,5) - Ctrl+G rhythm would match perfectly with vocal, also it's a bit uncomfortable to have a weaker sound on 00:55:317 clickable.
[Hard]

  1. 00:12:664 (3,4,1) - The spacing difference between these is so high and it's kinda uncomfortable, can you use a similar spacing as 00:15:930 (7,8,1) ?
  2. 00:32:868 - This beat is strong enough to call for a whistle or other minor hitsounds imo.
  3. 00:57:562 (1,2) - a slightly off blanket I guess
Hope this helps and good luck~
lit120
3,251 posts
Joined August 2013
lit120
[akitoshi]
  1. AR8 pls :V /runs
  2. 00:15:931 (3,1,3) - small blanket error here
  3. 00:40:420 (3,1) - blanket error
[kok ringan kali insane ny? dah kurus?]
  1. 00:05:113 (1) - coba remove NC ni, baru 00:05:522 (2) - NC ini. biar lebih enak rhythm ny sih
  2. 00:58:583 (8,1,2,3,4,5,1) - aneh amat NC set lu buat dari stream ini :/. coba 00:58:583 (8) - NC, baru 00:58:685 (1) - remove NC
[keras kali ni]
  1. 00:05:113 (1,2) - sama kek diff di atas
  2. 00:59:807 (3,4) - perbaiki blanket ny
  3. 01:07:971 (2,3) - ^
tu aja

GL!
-NanoRIPE-
2,018 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~

[Easy]

  1. 00:46:134 (1,2) - Ctrl+G rhythm? Just my preference but I think a slider would support a cymbal + guitar sound on 00:46:134 better. - nope ~ i think its fine ~
  2. 00:52:664 (1) - The rhythm is going on constantly, so 00:53:073 shouldn't be skipped, how about a 1/1 repeat slider here?
  3. 01:25:726 - Should be clickable, it's just the same sound as 01:25:317 after all.
  4. 01:28:583 (3,4) - Use a circle + 1/1 repeat slider instead of these? Having a chain of 1/1 sliders this long 01:26:950 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) is quite repetitive. - hmm i will consider it ~ *waiting other opinion about this ~
[Normal]

  1. Wish to see a soft-sliderslide here, it's awkward to hear creaky sound on 00:10:828 (1) - 00:32:664 (4) . - hmm i will try to search another hitsound ~ but now i will keep it ~
  2. 00:22:868 - Clap here instead of whistle? Also a missing whistle on 00:23:277 .
  3. 00:54:705 (4,5) - Ctrl+G rhythm would match perfectly with vocal, also it's a bit uncomfortable to have a weaker sound on 00:55:317 clickable.
[Hard]

  1. 00:12:664 (3,4,1) - The spacing difference between these is so high and it's kinda uncomfortable, can you use a similar spacing as 00:15:930 (7,8,1) ?
  2. 00:32:868 - This is strong enough to call for a whistle or other minor hitsounds imo.
  3. 00:57:562 (1,2) - a slightly off blanket I guess
Hope this helps and good luck~

lit120 wrote:

[kok ringan kali insane ny? dah kurus?]
  1. 00:05:113 (1) - coba remove NC ni, baru 00:05:522 (2) - NC ini. biar lebih enak rhythm ny sih
  2. 00:58:583 (8,1,2,3,4,5,1) - aneh amat NC set lu buat dari stream ini :/. coba 00:58:583 (8) - NC, baru 00:58:685 (1) - remove NC
[keras kali ni]
  1. 00:05:113 (1,2) - sama kek diff di atas
  2. 00:59:807 (3,4) - perbaiki blanket ny
  3. 01:07:971 (2,3) - ^
*Diff namenya jangan kasih nama kayak gitulah kak ;w;

tu aja

GL!
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Thanks for the mod!! ~
Akitoshi
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Akitoshi
@lit120 Light insane has AR8 so why not 8.2 :^))))))))

I think fixed that blankets now

asd
osu file format v14

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253,265,68176,2,0,P|213:230|187:169,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
159,6,68584,1,8,0:0:0:0:
86,174,68788,1,0,2:0:0:0:
255,104,68992,6,0,B|333:96|333:96|381:111|381:111|465:103,1,203.999993774414,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,9,69604,1,0,2:0:0:0:
255,183,69808,2,0,P|187:141|230:30,1,203.999993774414,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,9,70420,1,0,2:0:0:0:
472,181,70625,6,0,L|467:289,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
286,378,71033,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,227,71237,2,0,P|92:220|32:246,1,101.999996887207,0|2,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,363,71645,1,0,2:0:0:0:
281,253,71849,2,0,B|290:211|290:211|278:143,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
121,24,72257,5,6,0:0:0:0:
148,227,72461,1,2,0:0:0:0:
254,50,72665,1,8,0:0:0:0:
281,253,72869,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,130,73074,2,0,P|62:174|79:301,1,203.999993774414,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,367,73686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,195,73890,6,0,L|482:198,1,101.999996887207,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,253,74298,2,0,L|175:250,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
21,244,74706,5,8,0:0:0:0:
4,206,74808,1,0,0:0:0:0:
1,165,74910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
17,127,75012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
59,145,75114,1,8,0:0:0:0:
103,155,75216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,149,75318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
185,123,75420,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,83,75523,6,0,B|281:81|281:81|338:100|338:100|417:97,1,203.999993774414,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,15,76135,1,0,2:0:0:0:
148,149,76339,2,0,P|127:110|130:42,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
315,179,76747,2,0,P|276:200|214:195,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
22,143,77155,6,0,L|29:249,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
203,350,77563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
315,179,77767,2,0,B|351:171|351:171|429:179,1,101.999996887207,0|2,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,348,78176,1,0,2:0:0:0:
224,159,78380,2,0,P|246:117|297:87,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
303,348,78788,6,0,P|261:326|231:275,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
162,89,79196,1,8,0:0:0:0:
15,232,79400,2,0,B|5:271|5:271|13:347,1,101.999996887207,0|2,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,190,79808,2,0,B|168:151|168:151|160:75,1,101.999996887207,0|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,286,80216,1,0,2:0:0:0:
305,170,80420,6,0,B|385:136|429:210|516:158,1,203.999993774414,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,244,81033,2,0,P|227:200|229:138,1,101.999996887207,0|2,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,62,81441,1,0,2:0:0:0:
455,259,81645,2,0,L|450:378,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
200,360,82053,6,0,B|203:288|203:288|219:239|219:239|222:158,1,203.999993774414,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,5,82665,1,0,2:0:0:0:
63,207,82869,2,0,L|66:320,1,101.999996887207,2|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
268,266,83278,2,0,L|272:146,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
431,37,83686,5,8,0:0:0:0:
456,239,83890,2,0,L|455:282,2,33.9999989624024,0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
441,223,84094,2,0,P|391:232|342:219,1,101.999996887207,0|12,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,106,84501,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,98,84705,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,217,84910,2,0,P|150:226|84:205,1,101.999996887207,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
32,36,85318,5,12,0:0:0:0:
0,259,85523,1,0,2:0:0:0:
133,78,85727,1,12,0:0:0:0:
101,301,85930,1,0,2:0:0:0:
271,164,86135,5,2,0:0:0:0:
13,130,86339,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,128,86543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
14,162,86747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
255,30,86951,6,0,B|318:24|318:24|362:36|362:36|451:27,1,170,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
503,149,87563,1,0,0:0:0:0:
378,222,87767,2,0,P|347:289|385:383,1,170,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,300,88380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
407,140,88584,6,0,B|356:126|320:158|320:158|285:188|210:169,1,170,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,141,89196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
27,262,89400,2,0,L|34:362,1,85,2|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
175,326,89808,2,0,L|168:226,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,54,90216,6,0,B|223:48|223:48|275:67|275:67|355:59,1,170,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,44,90829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,157,91033,2,0,B|363:198|388:241|388:241|419:286|383:340,1,170,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,195,91645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,286,91849,6,0,B|266:288|266:288|214:268|214:268|141:271,1,170,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
15,286,92461,1,0,0:0:0:0:
77,155,92665,2,0,B|93:115|77:68|77:68|106:31,1,127.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,25,93074,2,0,P|213:30|274:18,1,85,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
407,6,93482,5,6,0:0:0:0:
282,94,93686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
433,104,93890,2,0,P|473:82|502:39,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,138,94298,2,0,B|346:197|346:197|360:242|360:242|353:337,1,170,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,183,94910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,256,95114,6,0,P|193:266|109:209,1,170,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,93,95727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,33,95931,2,0,B|298:11|219:61|363:40,1,170,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
502,26,96543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
465,191,96747,5,6,0:0:0:0:
423,35,96951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,162,97155,2,0,B|274:165|274:165|192:149,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,121,97563,2,0,P|144:154|165:260,1,170,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,382,98176,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,322,98380,6,0,B|375:314|375:314|428:332,1,127.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,334,98788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
492,187,98992,1,0,0:0:0:0:
498,171,99094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
505,155,99196,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,99298,12,0,102053,0:0:0:0:
Foxy Grandpa
709 posts
Joined January 2015
Foxy Grandpa
Hi, from my queue~


Really, in all honesty the 2 insane difficulties look ready for rank to me, i couldn't find a single thing i didn't like about it

For hard:

00:35:930 (1,2,3) - what looks better is if you were to move 1 and 2 up to the middle of the two sliders
00:37:766 (6,1) - Move 1 back a little more
00:58:583 (5,6,7) - you should make 7 a repeating slider, fits the drums better

Maps look great, good luck!
-NanoRIPE-
2,018 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-

FoxyGrandpa wrote:

Hi, from my queue~


Really, in all honesty the 2 insane difficulties look ready for rank to me, i couldn't find a single thing i didn't like about it - really? hmm maybe i will call BN soon ~

For hard:

00:35:930 (1,2,3) - what looks better is if you were to move 1 and 2 up to the middle of the two sliders - hmm i think its fine imo ~
00:37:766 (6,1) - Move 1 back a little more - nope ~
00:58:583 (5,6,7) - you should make 7 a repeating slider, fits the drums better - okay ~

Maps look great, good luck!
Thanks for your mod!! ~
AmigoDoChroome
228 posts
Joined September 2014
AmigoDoChroome
Hi
m4m you request

Easy

00:03:685 (1) - nc here and remove 00:05:113 (2) -
00:29:603 - strong hit here, guy
00:38:787 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - the same flow... it's weird
01:04:093 (4) - blanket
01:39:399 (1) - extend 01:43:277 -

Normal
i like it

Hard
01:08:991 (1) - forced jump
01:12:868 (1) - forced jump in red tick
01:12:868 (1) - remove nc
01:14:501 (1) - ^^^^^
01:38:991 (4,5,6) - forced ds

Ligth Insane
00:02:052 (1,1) - remove nc's
00:05:317 - strong hit
00:06:032 (4) - stack with 00:06:134 (5) -
00:41:236 (1,2) - bad flow here
00:43:481 (4) -
01:24:297 (4) - ctrl + <
01:38:991 (4,5,6) - forced ds

Aki's Insane
00:02:052 (1,1) - remove the nc
00:05:522 (1) - ^^
00:15:727 (2) - stack with 00:15:931 (3) -
00:32:868 (5) - stack 00:33:074 (1) -
01:20:420 (1) - again this?
01:35:931 (3) - wtf
-NanoRIPE-
2,018 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-

AmigoDoChroome wrote:

Hi
m4m you request

Easy

00:03:685 (1) - nc here and remove 00:05:113 (2) -
00:29:603 - strong hit here, guy - i think easy's diff dont need 1/2 beat :/
00:38:787 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - the same flow... it's weird
01:04:093 (4) - blanket - ?
01:39:399 (1) - extend 01:43:277 - i'm follow Aki's Insane spinner ~

Normal
i like it - Thanks :)

Hard
01:08:991 (1) - forced jump - i think its fine ~
01:12:868 (1) - forced jump in red tick -
01:12:868 (1) - remove nc
01:14:501 (1) - ^^^^^
01:38:991 (4,5,6) - forced ds - i think its fine ~ (same as light insane)

Ligth Insane
00:02:052 (1,1) - remove nc's - why ;w;?
00:05:317 - strong hit - i didnt hear anything at that :/
00:06:032 (4) - stack with 00:06:134 (5) - hmm its too hard to read it if i stacked ~
00:41:236 (1,2) - bad flow here - hmmm its okay imo ~
00:43:481 (4) - ?
01:24:297 (4) - ctrl + < - waaat?
01:38:991 (4,5,6) - forced ds - i think its fine (same as hard :< )

No Reply = fixed ~
Thanks for your mod!! ~
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
Add "DUGOUT ACCIDENT"to source?
[Aki's Insane]
Well Done
[Light Insane]
00:07:562 - break start here?for bass not vocal
00:23:277 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5459504 how about this? make a sence of shifting.
00:26:542 (1,2) - use rotation?looks not same
00:54:705 (2) - fix blanket
01:15:930 (2,3) - use rotation?looks not same
[Hard]
00:07:562 - break start here
blankets could be fixed better.
00:48:379 (3,4,5,6) - I think this partten is unread able for Hard
00:50:011 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:53:277 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:25:113 (4,1) - 232,108 better blanket
[Normal]
00:39:399 (5) - del
[Easy]
00:02:052 - spinner from 00:00:522 - instead
00:03:685 - ^ better for hidden
00:07:562 - break start here
-NanoRIPE-
2,018 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-

ts8zs wrote:

Add "DUGOUT ACCIDENT"to source? - this song from Album "DUGOUT ACCIDENT" by UNISON SQUARE GARDEN ;w;

[Light Insane]
00:07:562 - break start here?for bass not vocal
00:23:277 (3) - https://.ppy.sh/ss/5459504 how about this? make a sence of shifting. - fixed in another way ~
00:26:542 (1,2) - use rotation?looks not same
00:54:705 (2) - fix blanket
01:15:930 (2,3) - use rotation?looks not same
[Hard]
00:07:562 - break start here
blankets could be fixed better.
00:48:379 (3,4,5,6) - I think this partten is unread able for Hard
00:50:011 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:53:277 (3,4,5,6) - ^ - hmm i will waiting other opinion about this ~
01:25:113 (4,1) - 232,108 better blanket - waaaat??? its really weird imo :x
[Normal]
00:39:399 (5) - del - if i delete it,its looks incosistent with 00:36:134 (5)
[Easy]
00:02:052 - spinner from 00:00:522 - instead - nope ~ there has strong at 00:02:052 and 00:03:685
00:03:685 - ^ better for hidden - ^
00:07:562 - break start here
No reply = fixed

Thanks for your mod!! ~
Last edited by -NanoRIPE- , edited 2 times in total.
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi

AmigoDoChroome wrote:

Aki's Insane
00:02:052 (1,1) - remove the nc no this is how I intro for 3 long sliders
00:05:522 (1) - ^^ for less conflict with 1/1 gap
00:15:727 (2) - stack with 00:15:931 (3) - meh looks bad xd
00:32:868 (5) - stack 00:33:074 (1) - same
01:20:420 (1) - again this? why?
01:35:931 (3) - wtf do you even playing or seeing how evilelvis doing his wave slider? :3
no change~
thanks for the check!
Spiraler
152 posts
Joined November 2014
Spiraler
From my queue

Aki's Insane
00:22:053 (3,4) - this is a bit of a weird flow, it's just barely angled away
00:28:176 (1) - I think this slider's top curve is a little too sharp to blanket 00:27:359 (3) properly
00:29:808 (1,2) - this is kind of a minor point but these are irritatingly similar and yet not the same
00:40:420 (3) - honestly I don't think either curve is quite suited for the blankets attempted here
01:28:584 (1) - this curve looks a little weird...

Light Insane
00:05:113 (2) - I think this blanket looks better if you move the circle like 3 units down (x:344 y:91)
00:23:277 (3,5) - are both of these missing hitclap on the end?
00:28:583 (2) - and this missing hitclap on the start?
01:26:746 (6,1) - little bit of an awkward flow here

Hard
00:02:052 (1,1) - this is a very questionable blanket
00:10:828 (1,2,3,4,1) - this all just seems like a strange spacing to put these circles at in a Hard
00:15:930 (7) - is the end missing a hitclap?
00:25:317 (2) - missing hitclap
01:34:909 (4,5) - questionable blanket
01:38:991 (4,5,6) - this triple has inconsistent spacing

Normal
00:42:256 (5) - shouldn't the reverse arrow have hitclap instead of hitwhistle?
01:09:399 (2) - shouldn't the start have hitclap?
01:19:195 (2) - ^

No comments for easy.

Very nice and fun set, good luck with rank!
-NanoRIPE-
2,018 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-

Spiral527 wrote:

From my queue

Light Insane
00:05:113 (2) - I think this blanket looks better if you move the circle like 3 units down (x:344 y:91) - sure
00:23:277 (3,5) - are both of these missing hitclap on the end? - oops fixed ~
00:28:583 (2) - and this missing hitclap on the start? - i'm such an idiot ;w; fixed ~
01:26:746 (6,1) - little bit of an awkward flow here - hmm fixed a little bit ~

Hard
00:02:052 (1,1) - this is a very questionable blanket - i think its fine imo ~
00:10:828 (1,2,3,4,1) - this all just seems like a strange spacing to put these circles at in a Hard - fixed ~ *except (4,1) for consistent jump with 00:13:277 (4,1)
00:15:930 (7) - is the end missing a hitclap? - oops fixed ~
00:25:317 (2) - missing hitclap - ahhh i forget it ;w;
01:34:909 (4,5) - questionable blanket - hmm if i change the slider,it will ruin the pattern ;w;
01:38:991 (4,5,6) - this triple has inconsistent spacing - fixed

Normal
00:42:256 (5) - shouldn't the reverse arrow have hitclap instead of hitwhistle? - hmm sure
01:09:399 (2) - shouldn't the start have hitclap? - ok
01:19:195 (2) - ^ - i forget to add it ;w;

No comments for easy.

Very nice and fun set, good luck with rank!
Thanks!! for your mod!! ~
Deppyforce
1,961 posts
Joined November 2014
Deppyforce
hi

[-AKiTOSHi-]
00:30:216 (2) - split to circles for vocals ?
00:43:482 (3,4) - try ctrl+g rhythm!
nice

[Light Insane]
00:18:379 (5) - move the head to the left for better flow!
00:38:175 (7,1) - why this has less spacing than 6 -> 7 :c
00:46:848 - 00:48:481 - 00:49:705 - lol missing note its light insane itshould be fine if you map them
00:55:930 - this rhythm would make most sense here http://puu.sh/pFrkE/32eda4b66c.jpg
01:38:991 (4,5,6) - make it curve down like this would b more comfortable to play! http://puu.sh/pFrqY/41814f6edc.jpg

[Hard]
00:02:052 (1,1) - lol blanket
00:36:950 (4,5) - 00:57:562 (1,2) - 01:07:971 (2,3) -
01:13:889 (6,7,1,2) - try make symmetry shape for aesthetics pls ( move 7 and 1 http://puu.sh/pFrCW/a54aaf3e4f.jpg )

[Normal]
00:11:848 (3,4) - blanket xd ( i wont mention other ones)
00:33:481 (1,2) - change to 1/1 reverse + circle fits better with vocals!
01:29:807 (1,2,3) - stack 12 on 3's head pls so it'll be easier, cuz this is hard for beginners to hit

thats it good luck
-NanoRIPE-
2,018 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-

Deppyforce wrote:

hi

[Light Insane]
00:18:379 (5) - move the head to the left for better flow! - nah ~ i think its fine ~
00:38:175 (7,1) - why this has less spacing than 6 -> 7 :c - fixed xd
00:46:848 - 00:48:481 - 00:49:705 - lol missing note its light insane itshould be fine if you map them - okay ~
00:55:930 - this rhythm would make most sense here http://puu.sh/pFrkE/32eda4b66c.jpg - will consider it ~
01:38:991 (4,5,6) - make it curve down like this would b more comfortable to play! http://puu.sh/pFrqY/41814f6edc.jpg - hmm agreed ~

[Hard]
00:02:052 (1,1) - lol blanket - hmm maybe i will change the shape (for better blanket)
00:36:950 (4,5) - 00:57:562 (1,2) - 01:07:971 (2,3) - i think its fine at all ~
01:13:889 (6,7,1,2) - try make symmetry shape for aesthetics pls ( move 7 and 1 http://puu.sh/pFrCW/a54aaf3e4f.jpg ) - ok fixed xd

[Normal]
00:11:848 (3,4) - blanket xd ( i wont mention other ones) - i'm tried xd
00:33:481 (1,2) - change to 1/1 reverse + circle fits better with vocals! - ok ok fixed
01:29:807 (1,2,3) - stack 12 on 3's head pls so it'll be easier, cuz this is hard for beginners to hit - hmm agreed ~

thats it good luck
Thanks for your mod!! ~
GENDER BENDER
196 posts
Joined June 2013
GENDER BENDER
from here t/470617
Note: I did Ez and normal last night and the rest this morning, you updated the map during that time so some might not apply haha
Half of it is on blanket lol~
Easy
00:22:052 (4) - move the middle point to x: 56 y: 248 so the blanket looks clean
00:24:501 (3) - change this slider's shape so the blanket looks clean
00:35:522 (4) - cleaner blanket xD
00:38:787 (5,2) - stack?
00:38:787 (5,2) - cleaner blanket
01:01:440 (4) - cleaner blanket
01:23:685 (3) - drum whistle
01:30:215 (2) - not sure if this was done on purpose, but was expecting a finish here
there's a distance snap issue with AImod at 01:28:583 (3,4) - but I don't think it matters xD up to you if you wanna fix it
Normal
00:17:154 (2) - blanket fix
00:24:909 (3) - ^
00:30:215 (1) - ^
00:34:297 (2) - ^
00:39:603 (1) - ^
00:40:419 (2) - ^
00:43:685 (2) - ^
00:55:113 (5) - clap on slider end?
01:14:705 (4,5) - why not put clap on slider end as well
01:16:338 (3) - blanket fix
Hard
00:02:052 (1) - move middle point x:292 y: 272
00:03:685 (1) - blanket fix
00:07:358 - break should be a little later so it's same as other diff
00:37:154 (5) - blanket fix
00:57:766 (2) - ^
01:08:175 (3) - ^
01:11:644 (5) - ^
Light Insane
00:28:175 (1) - whistle
00:29:807 (5) - ^
00:30:419 (2) - ^ slider end
00:46:134 - just a suggestion but this part sounds different right? i think it would sound better if the claps in this section are drum
00:56:338 (1) - clap?
01:30:828 (2) - whistle
01:37:562 (3) - ^
Aki's Insane
00:07:562 - delay the break a little? haha
00:46:543 (3) - drum clap to keep consistency?
00:53:482 (3) - ^
01:13:890 (1) - whistle sounds better on slider beginning, not end
01:23:686 (1) - drum clap?
01:24:501 (4) - no clap
01:24:910 (6) - yes clap
Fun stuff Good luck~
Akitoshi
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Akitoshi

Spiral527 wrote:

Aki's Insane
00:22:053 (3,4) - this is a bit of a weird flow, it's just barely angled away not rly weird imo
00:28:176 (1) - I think this slider's top curve is a little too sharp to blanket 00:27:359 (3) properly s t y l e
00:29:808 (1,2) - this is kind of a minor point but these are irritatingly similar and yet not the same
00:40:420 (3) - honestly I don't think either curve is quite suited for the blankets attempted here it iss
01:28:584 (1) - this curve looks a little weird...why everyone hating my various sliders orz

Deppyforce wrote:

hi

[-AKiTOSHi-] Firetruck my old name
00:30:216 (2) - split to circles for vocals ?
00:43:482 (3,4) - try ctrl+g rhythm!
nice neci

warpgenius wrote:

Aki's Insane
00:07:562 - delay the break a little? haha
00:46:543 (3) - drum clap to keep consistency?
00:53:482 (3) - ^
01:13:890 (1) - whistle sounds better on slider beginning, not end
01:23:686 (1) - drum clap?
01:24:501 (4) - no clap
01:24:910 (6) - yes clap
no reply = fixed, thank you guys~

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-NanoRIPE-
2,018 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-

warpgenius wrote:

from here https://.ppy.sh/forum/t/470617
Note: I did Ez and normal last night and the rest this morning, you updated the map during that time so some might not apply haha
Half of it is on blanket lol~
Easy
00:22:052 (4) - move the middle point to x: 56 y: 248 so the blanket looks clean
00:24:501 (3) - change this slider's shape so the blanket looks clean
00:35:522 (4) - cleaner blanket xD
00:38:787 (5,2) - stack?
00:38:787 (5,2) - cleaner blanket
01:01:440 (4) - cleaner blanket
01:23:685 (3) - drum whistle
01:30:215 (2) - not sure if this was done on purpose, but was expecting a finish here
there's a distance snap issue with AImod at 01:28:583 (3,4) - but I don't think it matters xD up to you if you wanna fix it
Normal
00:17:154 (2) - blanket fix
00:24:909 (3) - ^
00:30:215 (1) - ^
00:34:297 (2) - ^
00:39:603 (1) - ^
00:40:419 (2) - ^
00:43:685 (2) - ^
00:55:113 (5) - clap on slider end?
01:14:705 (4,5) - why not put clap on slider end as well
01:16:338 (3) - blanket fix
Hard
00:02:052 (1) - move middle point x:292 y: 272
00:03:685 (1) - blanket fix
00:07:358 - break should be a little later so it's same as other diff
00:37:154 (5) - blanket fix
00:57:766 (2) - ^
01:08:175 (3) - ^
01:11:644 (5) - ^
Light Insane
00:28:175 (1) - whistle
00:29:807 (5) - ^
00:30:419 (2) - ^ slider end
00:46:134 - just a suggestion but this part sounds different right? i think it would sound better if the claps in this section are drum
00:56:338 (1) - clap?
01:30:828 (2) - whistle
01:37:562 (3) - ^
Fun stuff Good luck~
Fixed all (I guess) ~
Thanks for your mod!!
beaw
632 posts
Joined July 2015
beaw
Hello >///< There's already a ton of mods so don't listen to me if my mod sucks

Easy
I didn't find anything here... it's pretty set, in my opinion.

Normal
I didn't anything here either...

Hard
Uhhh... Nothing here either...

Light Insane
...

Aki's Insane
...
I'm just... gonna go... It would've been nice to see an Extra difficulty on this song though. The only things I found in any of the maps were things like Nc placements and slider angles. I'm not sure if that's important to you or not...

Thank you, and good luck!~
-NanoRIPE-
2,018 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-

Stingy wrote:

Hello >///< There's already a ton of mods so don't listen to me if my mod sucks

Easy
I didn't find anything here... it's pretty set, in my opinion.

Normal
I didn't anything here either...

Hard
Uhhh... Nothing here either...

Light Insane
...

Aki's Insane
...
I'm just... gonna go... It would've been nice to see an Extra difficulty on this song though. - nah ~ its enough xd since the BPM of this song is 147
The only things I found in any of the maps were things like Nc placements and slider angles. I'm not sure if that's important to you or not... - okay....

Thank you, and good luck!~
hmm since you're tried to find any problem on my map xd its enough for meh ~
Rieri
905 posts
Joined December 2014
Rieri
Hello~ M4M from my queue

General
  1. Your ncs aren't all consistent, making them consistent would be much better and reduce confusion.
  2. Check all sliders for imperfect blankets.

Easy
  1. whats the point of having x0.5 velocity if youre only mapping circles xD there shouldnt be any velocity changes on easy anyways
  2. 00:00:420 (1,2,1,2) - not sure about stacking these, is it okay to do this?
  3. 00:19:603 (5) - usually, you dont put a slider where theres a big cymbal like that, i recommend this rhythm so you can emphasize the finish a bit better.
  4. 00:21:644 (3,4) - blanket, not mentioning any more, check every slider for imperfect blankets
  5. 01:22:052 (1,2) - this is not the first time you made the flow change to another direction, 01:22:460 (2) - ctrl-g on this would make a much better flow imo

Normal
  1. 00:43:685 (2,3,4) - putting this more in a straight line would make it flow better, you can tell it's not straight if you see the follow points
  2. 00:55:930 (1,2) - how about a short slider instead to make it a bit easier
  3. 01:09:399 (2,3) - put circle directly above the slider for flow

Hard
  1. 00:00:420 (1,1,1) - you should have mapped it like this on easy and normal too
  2. 00:46:950 (3,4,5) - hmm, looks sorta cramped. make the two circles stick out of the slider so it can be read easily
  3. 00:48:583 (4,5,6) - ^ same thing for other similar patterns
  4. 01:05:317 (4,1) - unusual spacing compared to other spacing
  5. 01:08:175 (3,2) - touching
  6. 01:10:215 (4,1) - doesn't seem suitable for a hard

Light Insane
  1. 00:59:399 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you could make a fancier pattern than this
  2. 01:17:766 (3) - ctrl-g would have a better flow
  3. 01:26:134 (3,4,5,6) - make into a perfect square

Good luck with the mapset :D
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