This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 18 juni 2016 at 23:19:46

Artist: Anba
Title: Attakain Dakara
Tags: short because its warm honeyworks Kumamushi Utaite クマムシ
BPM: 170
Filesize: 1396kb
Play Time: 01:17
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1,56 stars, 93 notes)
2. Extra (5,28 stars, 309 notes)
3. Hard (3,71 stars, 236 notes)
4. Insane (4,92 stars, 292 notes)

Download: Anba - Attakain Dakara
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Kawaii

Naww thanks

From queue~
cute background btw

General
need custom combo colors!
need to be hitsounded and add custom hitsounds if needed
need more difficulti(es) between Easy and Insane. Also the Easy difficulty classifies as a Normal right now.

Easy
-DS not always consistent, it must be consistent throughout an Easy/Normal difficulty
00:02:896 (3,5) - slider tail of 5 way too close to 3, happens in some other spots too
also make better blankets like right here 00:46:308 (3,4)
fix these things and your map should look much better!

Insane
00:03:602 (4,6) - space them out further
00:06:425 (3,7) - ^
00:05:367 (4,5,2) - overlap not look good, happens in other spots too
I don't recommend going over the above suggestions until you do what i've said below:
basically for this difficulty is i dont think its technically unrankable, but its lacking in structure. As in, the objects seem all over the place. Study a variety of ranked maps (as in recently 2015-2016 ranked maps), especially ones you like. I think it'll help you develop your mapping style. Also, you can check out the mapping technique page for more ideas. https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Mapping_Techniques

Well, good luck!

Yahuri wrote:

From queue~
cute background btw

General
need custom combo colors!
need to be hitsounded and add custom hitsounds if needed
need more difficulti(es) between Easy and Insane. Also the Easy difficulty classifies as a Normal right now.

Easy
-DS not always consistent, it must be consistent throughout an Easy/Normal difficulty
00:02:896 (3,5) - slider tail of 5 way too close to 3, happens in some other spots too
also make better blankets like right here 00:46:308 (3,4)
fix these things and your map should look much better!

Insane
00:03:602 (4,6) - space them out further
00:06:425 (3,7) - ^
00:05:367 (4,5,2) - overlap not look good, happens in other spots too
I don't recommend going over the above suggestions until you do what i've said below:
basically for this difficulty is i dont think its technically unrankable, but its lacking in structure. As in, the objects seem all over the place. Study a variety of ranked maps (as in recently 2015-2016 ranked maps), especially ones you like. I think it'll help you develop your mapping style. Also, you can check out the mapping technique page for more ideas. https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Mapping_Techniques

Well, good luck!

Thanks! I was actually hitsounding as you posted this so that is done now. I looked through the proposed changes on easy and insane and they look good. I also understand your criticism with the scattered notes, it is something im working on for sure.

Hi, from #modreqs


FINAL THOUGHTS

You need a kiai section somewhere in the diff. I like the jumps. Good luck on getting ranked

Harutora wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs

Extra

00:02:190 (3,4) - Slider maybe?

00:02:896 (1,2) - ^

00:15:072 (10,11,12,13,14) - Shape could be better

00:15:602 (1,2,3) - Make it closer?

00:16:484 (6) - NC

00:18:425 (1,2,3) - Make it closer?

00:19:837 (1,2,3) - ^

0:22:925 - You can start the stream here since I hear music on the blue tick

00:24:072 (1,2,3) - Make it closer?

00:24:955 (6) - NC

00:48:525 - Start the stream here. Same reason above or you can make this into a slider 00:48:425 (6) leading the stream

00:58:661 (7) - I think two circles would be better

01:12:602 (3) - Change this to a slider to 01:12:690

01:12:778 (4) - Move this to 0:12:867 then take that and the stream together. Also NC

01:14:455 - Slider art maybe? to 01:15:161

FINAL THOUGHTS

You need a kiai section somewhere in the diff. I like the jumps. Good luck on getting ranked

Thanks a lot man! I went ahead with all the suggested changges except for the ones at the very end before the final stream because i found that the 1/4 slider from 01:12:602 (3) - sounds really off.

Also yes, i totally forgot about kiai lol, thanks about the reminder!

Anba - Attakain Dakara

You don't need "Japanese attakain dakara Anba" in the tags since they'll be in the title/artist/genre fields upon ranking.

Your red timing should start at 00:01:484 - since the anacrusis (lead-in) would start the measure incorrectly.

[Easy]
What I really suggest you do for this is to increase the DS to 1.2 and use that as a base for the spacing between notes. Right now, some of them overlap and some don't. This will make the map look much cleaner!

1. 00:05:720 (1,2) - It's actually pretty simple to create decent blankets. A good tip is to use the approach circle from other notes. I can't upload any pics because data, but for now. Move the (2) to 00:06:690 - (temporarily, you'll be moving this back after) and then move to 00:06:602 - in the timeline, You'll be able to use the approach circle of (2) to adjust the (1) for blanketing. Remember to move the (2) back into place after . You do a good job with 00:16:661 (4,5) - as an example, so I'm sure you should be able to do this as well!
2. 00:11:014 (8,9) - I would suggest using a circle where (8) is and then use a long slider starting at 00:11:367 - (where the (8)'s tail used to be) While it isn't exactly loud, the drums do start at 00:11:367 -
3. 00:18:425 (7,8) - for variety, try using two 1/1 sliders instead. Simply remove the reverse on (7) and then add another 1/1 slider after it.
4. 00:45:249 (1,2,3) - For variety, try using a 3/2 slider here, It makes the vocals that play heavily at 00:45:778 - feel important as well since it'll be hit by a reverse.
5. 00:59:014 (4) - These kind of overlaps aren't great either. It'd be butter to have this note flow with the end of the (4) instead.
6. 01:06:778 (3) - Stuff like these long ones would make a great 3/2 slider as well! It'll make the reverse land on 01:07:308 - which is pretty strong in the song.
7. 01:12:425 (3) - I would end this at 01:13:837 - where the drums stop.
   
   For comboing. I'd suggest that you NC every 2 measures (On easy). Which is every 2 big white lines.
   Here's some examples.
   The first combo should start at 00:01:484 (1) - and end at 00:03:955 -
   The second combo should start at 00:04:308 (5) - and end at 00:06:778 -
   If you notice the big finish playing at 00:07:131 (3) - It simply means that you've completed a set of 4 measures. Note that the next part has the same 4 but then an extra one starting at 00:12:778 - This would simply be NC'd for 1 measure (which in this diff you don't really map it) The basic idea for combos on this difficulty is below.
   2 2 | 2 2 | 1
   2 2 | 2 2 | 1
   2 2 | 2 2 | 1
   
   Note that because of this. You should technically be putting a red line where the bold numbers above are. The only one that's manditory is written below, but for good practice, I highly suggest doing it for all of these.
   00:14:190 -
   00:26:896 -
   00:38:190 -
   00:51:249 - Note that this one has an extra beat in it, so it starts off later than the rest.
   01:15:248 -

[Hard]

1. 00:03:602 (4,6) - These could be nicely blanketed. try curve the (4) out a bit more.
2. 00:04:308 (1,3) - same as above.
3. Some hitsounding examples now. 00:06:955 (5,6,7) - For the (5,6) you could try using the Normal sampleset (no additions) for the snares (highlight the note, and then in the top left change the sampleset to Normal.) and then use a finish for 00:07:131 -
4. 00:09:161 (3) - Would personally fit the song butter if played at 00:09:867 - where the similar snare like 00:09:425 (5) - plays.
5. 00:11:014 (7) - There isn't any sound playing on 00:11:102 - so butter yet, 00:11:278 - has some noise you can map to.
6. 00:14:543 (2) - Using simple 1/2 sliders here would be more appropriate than having a 1/4 with multiple repeats. You don't have to map the 1/4 stream here in Hard.
7. 00:16:308 (5) - same with this.
8. 00:22:837 (2) - Maybe move the tail end of this up a bit? Just so there's more of a visual gap between (2) and (3,4,5) Small aesthetics again.
9. 00:25:308 (6) - try making a copy paste of (5) so the angles of (5,6) are similar. The little things that help aesthetics.
10. 00:33:955 (1) - blanket could be slightly improved. try moving the tail node to x112 y284 (you can see the coords of nodes by hovering overtop of them and then looking at the top right)
11. The red timing at 01:00:690 - should be back at 00:51:249 - All of your other diffs should have similar timings as well. See the Easy diff mod for more info.
12. 01:05:190 (6) - Try moving this up a bit so it isn't so close to the (4)'s tail. You may need to adjust for DS for 01:05:367 (1) - as well
13. 01:10:219 - good spot to add a note if you want!

[Insane]

1. 00:09:072 (2) - Try a 1/4 slider here as well so it couples with 00:08:896 (1) - and then the streaming can start appropriately at 00:09:248 (4) -
2. 00:09:690 (8) - You could actually remove this since there isn't really anything in the song to support this note. For insane, you could easily nerf this a ton.
3. 00:09:955 (12,1) - swap NC here.
4. 00:10:484 (2,3,4,5) - Try moving these a little bit closer to (6), it's a pretty big jump otherwise.
5. 00:18:425 (1) - Could be angled down a little to flow slightly better into the upcoming stream. Like 40-45° CW rotation would work.
6. 00:19:484 (10) - Finish on the tail is a bit odd. It'd fit better on the head of 00:19:837 (1) -
7. 00:22:661 (1) - Rotate left 90°, and control+G, (then move back into place). It'll flow slightly better into the stream again.
8. 00:25:308 (9) - Finish doesn't really support here. The music gets quiet here, so there isn't anything loud playing. like before, it works better at 00:26:896 (1) - instead.
9. 00:48:778 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - These notes here are actually in 1/3. Change the beat snap divisor to 1/3 (top right) and try this again.
10. 01:08:102 - good spot to add a note!
11. 01:13:131 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 1/3 again.

[Extra]

1. 00:08:896 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Note that you made this easier than your Insane, This means you should actually make sure you nerfed Insane a bit
2. 00:09:689 (10) - another reminder that 00:09:689 (10) - doesn't actually hit anything.
3. 00:18:249 (12) - A little odd that this doesn't follow the same pattern as the notes before it. Did you know you can make streams using sliders? Try making a shape similar to 00:17:367 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - with a slider, and then press control+shift+f to convert it to a stream. Change the object count to 11. It's a great tool to help make evenly spaced streams. Another method is to use the distance snap tool with grid snap turned off, and do it that way (though it'll probably be a little bit messier.)
4. 00:25:307 (9) - same thing about these finishes as Insane. I'll just mention it this once.
5. 00:28:131 (6) - could be blanketed slightly better. Maybe something like x357 y260?
6. 00:28:661 (2) - same as above. Try to avoid these overlaps! Might as well mention 00:30:778 (6,1) - as well.
7. 00:43:837 (9) - Maybe loosen this curve a little. It's a bit sharp otherwise. Something like 00:44:543 (3) - is shaped well.
8. 00:46:661 (1,2,3,4) - Try using copy paste for these so they're roughly the same angle. Simply rotate them after as needed.
9. 01:05:278 - good spot to add a note if you want.
10. 01:06:337 (7) - isn't a good spot for a note since there isn't much sound to back it up
11. 01:07:925 (7) - I'd suggest removing this as well for the same reasons.
12. 01:10:572 (2) - Same as above. 01:10:220 - is a better spot for a circle.
13. 01:13:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - reminder that this is in 1/3

Hopefully something helps. Sorry I can't provide pictures or anything to explain better. Good luck!

Thanks man, really helpful. Will implement the stuff! Also i actually used convert slider for my streams, i just made weird sliders lol.

Saw in #modreqs

[General]

Check AIMod
Disable countdown
Add combo colours relating to your background but not using exact colours

[Hitsounding]

So your hitsounding is kinda lacking, since you've just put a clap on every other white tick which kinda works as a metronome but isn't very true to the song, which is what hitsounding should be. I'll look at Extra for this, so on 00:01:484 (1) - this slider if you turn off hitsound volume and listen slowly, you can hear that the start and end of this slider are a "kick" drum (idk the actual words help). This means you should find a hitsound that sounds similar, and use that one hitsound every time you hear this drum. You also have hats, like on 00:02:014 (2) - , but these don't really need hitsounding and just the base hitsound will do. 00:06:955 (6,7) - These two sound like snares, so a new hitsound is good for these and other sounds like it! 00:07:131 (1) - On this you can hear a finish, so add a softfinish, since you're already using soft hitsounds you just add a finish. Ok that's the basics of drum hitsounding, you can study other maps hitsounding to get a better idea of hitsounding more things than just drums, like using normalwhistle and such.

[Easy]

Follow Lanturn's advice on increasing distance snap to 1.2

1. 00:51:249 - You have kiai starting during a break lol (and you don't actually end it)

[Insane]

See Extra and then apply the same ideas since this is just a less difficult Extra

[Extra]

1. 00:01:484 (1,2) - So when you've got sliders like these you get an area where the player would expect the next object to be, considering the curvature of the slider it would typically be somewhere to the right of it, so where (2) is right now is kinda unexpected and it also doesn't play particularly well when you think of the path that the cursor will take
2. 00:04:308 (1,3) - This overlap is pretty ugly since it's pretty uneven, i.e. some parts overlap more than others where you should be doing your best to keep consistent overlaps throughout (although you should try to avoid overlaps like this they look bad anyway)
3. 00:07:837 (4) - So if you listen to this carefully, you can hear that the slider ends on a stronger beat than it starts on, which typically is a no-no. You need to consider what beats of the song you want to make clickable when you decide whether to use circles or sliders, since you want the stronger beat to be clickable I'd recommend turning this into two circles with greater spacing on the circle on 00:08:014 -
4. 00:10:308 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This looks really cramped vertically, expand these upwards a bit more so that it looks better
5. 00:11:543 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Typically when you do big jumps like this you should try to keep roughly the same angle between them for each one in the same combo, whereas here (5,6,7) is 60 degrees as opposed to like 15 degrees or whatever the other ones are. Your two choices here are either make (5,6,7) keep the same angles as the rest of the jumps or put a new combo on (5) to indicate an angle change
6. 00:14:190 (1) - Move this more right so that it leads into the stream a bit better
7. 00:15:602 (1,2) - I'd just have the same spacing here as you have for (2,3), since theres no particularly strong beat compared to the others on (2) it doesn't make much sense to have the higher spacing
8. 00:17:455 (3) - This doesn't exist in the music, also for 1/4 sections its good to start on red ticks because of rhythm reasons I can't really explain
9. 00:48:778 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This should be 1/3, you could try something similar to this if you like, it makes 1/3 parts playable for most people, especially when in this case there's not a whole lot you can do to indicate that there's a 1/3 section. If you do what I did, take note of the combo usage, as I've used the NC to indicate where the 1/3 section starts
10. 01:02:543 - Start kiai here rather than in the buildup
11. 01:00:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is good jump angle usage (not a modding point)
12. 01:02:543 (1) - Add finish to the head
13. 01:05:014 (1,2) - There's a beat inbetween these two you may have missed
14. 01:08:190 (9) - Finish
15. 01:13:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Could be good to do the slider thing I suggested for the previous 1/3
16. 01:15:249 - Perhaps add a circle here directly in the center and move the spinner back 1/4 tick
17. 01:15:249 (1) - End this on the downbeat at 01:17:720 -
    
    If it seems like I've mentioned something in one place, but then not mentioned the same thing elsewhere, that means I expect you to find and change them yourself

Good luck!

Thanks man! Especially the hitsounding help was good since that is something i've struggled with a bit so far in mapping.

Hi, m4m.






I am sorry for being so negative at the end, but this would feel really embarrasing if I had no "major" mistakes in the mapset except for the hardest difficulty.
Also, nice work, needs changes but well done.

Thanks. I wont respond to every change but will change most stuff!

Hey, so heres the mod from m4m :3

General
"Resnap all notes" in all diffs because you got lots of unsnapped notes in every diff which is unrankable.


Normal
00:05:014 (1) - Remove NC
01:12:072 (2) - x:208 y:224
01:12:425 (3) - x:124 y:208
01:15:425 (1) - Make sliderend same as in Extra
And for the finish hitsounds see Hard. Also i think you have nearly no whistles in this diff?
00:01:483 - From here i would do every big white tick a whistle until 00:11:365 -
Then again every big white tick whistle
So i mean:
00:01:484 (1) - Whistle at start of the slider.
00:02:896 (3) - Whistle ^
And so on.
And then from: 00:56:896 (1) -
00:56:894 (1) - Whistle at sliderstart
00:57:954 (3) - Whistle at both start and end
00:59:367 (5) - Whistle at end
01:00:425 (2) - ^
01:00:778 (3) - ^ at end
And from 01:02:543 - every big white tick again.


Hard
00:01:484 (1) - Finish at sliderbeginning
00:05:014 (2) - This one ~ x:68 y:204 and make its shape go a bit to the next 3 then.
00:07:131 (7) - Finish at slider beginning
00:08:543 (1) - ^
00:09:953 (1) - ^
00:14:190 (1) - ^
00:14:541 (2) - This is way too many repeat. make this 2 sliders. I think it would be much better like this:
Like that, just correct spacing after that if you do it.
00:19:837 (1) - Finish
00:26:894 (1) - ^ at sliderbeginning
00:32:543 (1) - ^
00:38:188 (1) - ^
00:48:072 (1) - ^
00:49:482 (6) - ^
00:56:896 (1) - ^
00:58:308 (1) - ^
00:59:720 (1) - ^
01:02:543 (1) - ^
01:08:190 (1) - ^
01:13:131 (1) - Correct spacing here. This antijump is really bad and breaks combo for no reason because you think its right after 7.
(for example x:424 y:40 and make it go straight to the right then, looks better like that)
01:15:248 (1) - Finish.
01:15:366 (1) - This spinnerend.. is this intended? In extra you let it end at 01:17:601 - would do this consistent for all diffs.

This diff is pretty good already. As you see i told you to "finish" everytime theres a finish in the song. I think you should do
it like this for every diff but im just going to point this out in this diff.


Insane
00:31:661 (2) - x:488 y:184 .. because it was under the previous slider and ... well it was kinda weird imo. I think it would be better like this.
00:36:072 (3) - Stack this under 00:35:014 (5) -
00:36:602 (5) - This one should be ~ x:360 y:36 .. i think it will get better flow like this.
01:08:367 (3) - Stack this under the start of 01:07:484 (4) -
01:11:190 (5) - x:228 y:24 ... It was touching the other circle, and like this it will be consistent spacing and no touching to look better.
01:11:896 (8) - Same with this: x:232 y:180
01:15:336 (1) - And make this one end at the white tick where it ends at your extra.
Hmm well as for hitsounds... For the finishes you should look at the hard again but again the hitsounding from you is kinda weird here XD
Also it was weird that you only used claps at the end, they werent even bad its just that its ONLY at the end which is kinda weird.


Extra
For finishes look Hard again.
00:03:955 (9) - Would stack this over the beginning of 00:04:308 (1) - and then put the 00:04:131 (10) - bit further away.
00:15:337 (13,14) - Why is this so weird and not like this:
00:18:249 (11) - Also here why this spacing.. its just weird and not good to play imo.
00:18:778 (3) - Here too?
00:25:482 - Hmm here you maybe should add notes with little spacing.. would be nice imo.
00:36:953 - Here too.
00:48:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Look down below, because this is really not a good idea with this spacing.
00:56:896 - Pls rework your hitsounds from this point on. Do the whistles like you did the section before
00:58:308 (6) - 00:59:014 (9) - 01:00:425 (5) - These 3 for better flow.

Overall i think this diff is playable but kinda random. the most important thing you really should change is : 00:48:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
Maybe something like this?:

And also : 01:13:131 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Would recommend 1,2 spacing.



This map still needs some work but I guess it is already pretty okay, gl with it :3

Hi! I did the Hitsounds you requested on my hitsound queue^^


Nice map
I hope it gets ranked^^

Thanks a lot to all of you! Roshan and Parachute ive looked through the changes and made them. Vill, thanks tons for the hitsounds, really needed some help there.

Thanks man, i went through with most of the changes!

hej from modq

1. Artist Unicode: アンバ
2. Title Unicode: あったかいんだからぁ♪
   the "♪" is part of the title
3. Title Romanized: Attakain Dakara~♪
   ~^
4. Tags add:
   クマムシ
   Kumamushi
   Utaite
5. Tags remove:
   Vocaloid (Anba är inte en Vocaloid)
   Japanese (useless)
   hatsune miku (Varför? Original producer och versionen är från クマムシ (Kumamushi))
6. Lägg till combo colors, helst matcha bakgrunden och lite annat
7. Insane, Hard, Normal alla tre använder "Widescreen support", Om inte du tänker lägga till en Storyboard så är de unrankable
8. Insane 00:56:894 - lägg till +1 offest på timingpointen (Se AiMod)

Utaite betyder att det är en riktig person som sjunger som en karaktär, det är en populär trend på Nico Nico Douga (exampl: Cillia, yuikonnu, sana, Nanahira, Hanatan osv). Vocaloids är program-skapade artister som typ Hatsune Miku och Kagamine Len.

Tack så mycket! Jag har inte riktigt koll på hur det där med vocaloid funkar, har inte orkat sätta mig in i det så tur att du kunde reda ut det.

From queue
gl

Thanks man! You made me realize that i probably overspaced a couple of areas. Also interesting idea with the sped-up sliders, trying it atm.

Hi, from my queue~

[Normal]

1. 00:16:659 (4,1) - blanket better
2. 00:19:131 (4) - maybe whistle
3. 00:17:012 (1,2,3) - i dont think they are good flow. 00:18:072 (2,3,4) - put on under? but if you change this, after part need to change too. dont change okok
   
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4. 00:57:601 (1) - remove NC and add NC at 00:59:719 (5) -
5. 01:02:543 (1) - add finish

[Hard]

1. 00:01:483 (1) - remove finish on slider end
2. 00:05:718 (1) - maybe miss body whistle
3. 00:30:777 (4,5,1) - this part is not good flow. my suggestion here
   
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4. 00:32:541 (1) - remove finish on slider end
5. 01:05:367 (1) - maybe miss body whistle and add whistle slider start

[Insane]

1. 00:02:894 (6) - add NC
2. 00:30:424 (3) - remove body whistle
3. 00:35:718 (2) - ^
4. 00:41:012 (1) - ^
5. 00:43:659 (6) - remove finish
6. 00:46:306 (6) - ^
7. 01:04:307 (4) - remove body whistle
8. 01:09:248 (1) - remove finish on slider end

[Extra]

1. 00:02:894 (5) - add NC
2. 00:02:012 (2,3,4,5) - looks bad. you should use same DS or any pattern
3. 00:06:953 (6,7) - why clap and whistle? in Insane diffi both finish. you should match both diff.

Extra is bad Hitsound. you should recheck Extra diffi. for examle almost slider use body whistle
00:31:130 (1,4) - 00:33:953 (7,3) -
or added finish on slider end and start both.
00:41:012 (1,4) - 00:42:424 (1) -

good luck~

Thanks a lot man! I fiddled a bit with hitsounds and replaced most body whistles with whistles only on first hit

from my queue~



Cool map, gl with rank!

Thanks a lot man! I straightened out some sliders and added variety to the mad drum part