1. Koishi Komeiji (6.76 stars, 1905 notes)

Left wrote:

Yo first mod~
[hyouri]
-> is 'hyouri' related to this song? I think it's just your name. Name difficulties are common (Skystar, HW, wkyik etc.) but I will change once going for ranked

00:01:235 (3,1) - Actually I don't hate this distance, but you should consider consistency with this section. meh
00:44:778 (1,2,3,4) - from here, I can't know why DS in stream is irregular...At least use same DS in same NC. didn't really see an issue since I was using 0.7x for both streams but i'll check
01:06:293 (9,1) - How about removing this jump to emphasize 01:06:550 (2,3,1) - this? changed into my preference
01:13:493 (8,1,2) - 1/2 and 1/4 have same distance? It would be really hard to read. no
This map, you mapped background sound and main vocal melody really selectively. 01:11:864 (5,6,7,8,1) - this strong sound is OK, but 01:15:978 (5,6,1) - somebody can feel awkward in here, because it's only your translation, not exactly from song.fixed
01:45:464 (3,1,2) - uncomfortable jump route fixed
02:34:407 (4,1) - wat DS 7.7?? you need to check this kind of 1/4 jump... fixed
02:48:035 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this NC is correct http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4980503 no
03:26:607 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - (lol)
Why DS is higher than a stream in higher tension? DS is 1.0x? I don't understand what you mean, SV is 1.4x and stream uses 1.0x DS?
04:31:063 (1,2,3,4,5) - you can use more distance. fixed
04:51:121 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same fixed

and check NC, metadata, Distance. WIP

good luck~

1. Make Length: 5:38 (5:00 drain) or up more (1diif mapset get rank, less length/drain time is 5 min)
2. AR is so high can you down 9 ?

1. add whistle - 00:00:893 (1,1) - 00:03:978 (2,1) - 00:05:178 (1,2) - <-(2) End / 00:06:378 (1,1) - 00:07:717 ~ 00:23:033 add whistle Odd number note'
2. Sudden Slider speed dnow is player make Confused. such as 00:35:693 (1) - this
3. 00:55:750(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Between its parts add Slider (player make miss alot here #maybe)
4. 01:36:550 (6) - 01:37:921 (6) - add clap
5. 03:23:864 (1) - 03:47:178 (1) - can you chage this to Spinner?
6. 04:54:378 ~ 05:38:264 mapping?
7. Spinner end is 05:44:093