I MY ME MINE - Troublemaker [Osu|CatchTheBeat|Taiko|OsuMania · forum

Underforest

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-09T18:08:18+00:00

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:
Hi.
From my Q～
General
A start of offset is 333. Therefore I think that a little bit a start of the music is early. Would you change AudioLeadIn to 1,000? Changed to 2000 in every diff

Light Insane
00:04:848 (3,4,5,1) - I feel a sense of incongruity in rhythm. As for the 00:04:848 - , a head of slider matches a song very much. And I think that the 00:05:413 - match a song. http://puu.sh/obEwV.jpg 00:15:170 (3,4,5,1) - same. it's fine
00:11:300 (5,6) - The (5) faces the direction of the (6). However, (5) is 5hit. The player will cause misunderstanding of 4hit. The 00:11:618 - has a sound suitable for slider. try this plz http://puu.sh/obFlX.jpg / http://puu.sh/obFnT.jpg ok
00:16:784 (5,6,1) - It is hard to see this overlap very much. I recommend movement of the 00:17:026 (6,1) - . http://puu.sh/obFzr.jpg I decided to delete them
00:24:849 (4) - NC ok

Normal
00:09:364 (1) - finish sure
00:11:945 (1,2) - Would you make modifications in symmetry? http://puu.sh/obGc1.jpg It's fine
00:17:106 (1) - finish added
00:19:687 (1) - ^ added
00:20:170 (2,3) - I kinda feel a sense of incongruity in rhythm. Would you change the 00:20:170 (2,3) - by the ctrl+g? ok
00:21:622 (6) - finish to tail no

Easy
00:08:235 (3) - I can't recommend 1/2 reverse slider in easy diff. Would you switch to 1/1slider? 00:18:558 (3) - same. I saw ranked mapsets with this
00:09:364 (1) - finish ok
00:17:106 (1) - ^ added
00:19:203 (4) - I can't recommend 1/2 slider in easy diff. 1/2slider is the same as kick slider for a beginner. I think that you should do it in the same way as 00:09:042 (4) - ok fixed
00:19:687 (1) - finish added
00:21:945 (4) - ^ nah
GL

Deppyforce wrote:
m4m return -

[General]
add audioleadin ~1000 - 2000 since the offset is earlier than 1000ms added from the kunkan's mod
00:23:558 - why is there a red point here? it starts on the downbeat and the bpm is the same.. just delete it cuz it doesnt necessary because without it, Nightcore have wrong positioned finishes, so that's why it's here

[Easy]
00:07:429 (2,3) - try blanket? would look nicer imo for me doesn't look
00:10:655 - missing downbeat is bad ;; consider change 00:09:364 (1,2) - to 1/1 + 1/1 + circle. or atleast add whistle to the downbeat to emphasize it I see it fine
00:10:977 (3) - curve slider would flow better imo I prefer current pattern
00:15:816 (3) - blanket 2's head maybe I don't think so
00:23:235 (7,1) - blanket ok
00:25:494 (3,4,1) - flows bad cuz the 3,4 are over 1's curve, consider move 1 up over 4 instead of under it fixed

[Normal]
00:00:655 (1,2,3,1) - make a symmetry diamond pattern? would be cleaner sure
00:03:397 (4) - consider end the slider on vocal at 00:03:719 - and add circle since this is a normal diff I'm following music and vocal lol
00:08:235 (4) - rotate this a bit ccw would flow better imo and you can avoid the current weird lookin blanket thing it's fine
00:10:977 (5) - consider change to 3 circles to make it constant with the start of the map ok

[Light Insane]
00:06:461 (5) - since this is a 'light insane' u could make these 1/4s clickable are clickable
00:11:300 (5) - add finish not needed
00:14:041 (4) - the clap supposed to be on the end? !
00:22:752 (3) - could be a triple instead ok
00:24:526 - feels kinda empty to me, maybe change 00:24:204 (3) - to 1/2 + 1/2 I'll think about it

pretty cool map
good luck!

ty for the mods

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

B r o k e n 2016-04-10T07:43:22+00:00

My Modding Queue

Normal

00:22:913 (2,3) - soft these too? or give 00:22:268 (1) - normal hit sound, hit sounds just sounds a bit weird to me
00:26:784 (2) - sounds weird, think about making 00:26:139 (1) - just following the guitar and finishing with it? 2 full beat slider @.75 or .50 spd
00:28:075 (4) - following guitar? change it to full beat slider

Mk's Hard

00:02:913 (1) - all notes before this are following vocals well, and this note throws it off, 1/2 slider + single note would fit better, this will require you to change the map a bit on this aera
00:04:203 (1) - you can fix this full beat slider to fit vocals better if you want
00:05:493 (1) - ^
00:13:235 (1) - ^
00:15:816 (1) - ^
00:28:720 (1) - this NC isn't really needed
only thing I feel off is following the vocals or not, not so sure if you're trying to do that

Light Insane

00:19:687 (1,2,3,4) - a box shape? Clean this up and make it neater, distance snapping all of these the same would clean it up, up on u
00:20:332 (5) - this is my personal liking, instead of a straight down slider
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4901767
00:28:075 (2,3,4) - stacking would just be better, or distance them a bit more

my mod prob didn't help much or at all, but here it is

Okoayu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

4,959 posts

Joined May 2012

Okoayu 2016-04-10T17:44:12+00:00

I love traps

[general]
If you want a bg with less pixels here you go:
http://puu.sh/odaHN/7e36b9a2f9.jpg
http://puu.sh/odaIe/59da8613f4.jpg

00:23:558 - what exactly does this metronome reset do? It doesn't seem necessary to reset the metronome here at all

normal-sliderslide2 and normal-slidertick2 are unused
tbh you should make your slidertricks a bit less loud in general, the ones of the normal sampleset are really noisy on lower diffs especially

[Marianna]
00:03:397 (4) - 00:05:977 (4) - and others like this: i don't know if it's just me but i feel like clicking the vocal on these sliderends might end up feeling better, because your mapping is pretty focused on the vocals. So at least try http://puu.sh/odb4G/74ff9afb2f.jpg or http://puu.sh/odb6i/02896cf0dc.jpg and tell me what you think
00:05:493 (1,2,3,4) - i think you should nerf this jump pattern a bit it's a lot larger than what you usually do
00:08:881 - i think you should be able to click this vocal so how about making 00:08:558 (3) - an 1/2 slider?
00:23:559 (1,2) - the way these overlap doesn't look too nice, i think you should either overlap them more or avoid that by moving 2 to the left
00:25:494 (3,4,5,6) - i don't think an overmap like this is necessary but the main problem i have with that is that it plays hitnormals for the entire time and that just sounds really really noisy. circles would be less loud and a bit closer to the song i guess
00:28:075 (1) - i mean you could map the instruments on white and red tick that this skips over but in itself the slider is pretty functional. otherwise http://puu.sh/odbnA/a81a4968ef.jpg would work, too

prolly good to go

[Light Insane]
hm AR could be slightly higher imo
sv 1.5x makes all sliders feel slightly too slow but uhh i guess you like that
the entire diff feels like you're just slapping 1/2 rhythm and a few patterns everywhere without paying much attentions which layer of the song you're following with them
so here a few questions:
00:01:623 (1,2) - accidentally land on vocals but you switch to instruments for 00:02:268 (3,4,5) - ? Why? you switch back to vocals in 00:02:913 (1,2,3,4) - again so mapping instruments there seems out of place to be honest same with 00:07:429 (3,4,5) -
00:05:010 (4) - nothing significant (neither a strong instrument nor anything else) is there so why do yo ustart the slider there? 00:04:848 (3,4) - could be one single 1/1 slider
00:04:203 (1,2) - seems kinda inconsequent with how you mapped 00:01:623 (1,2) - but whatever
00:06:461 (5) - there isn't even a drum 5plet, it's something like http://puu.sh/odhz8/d3ed7813f9.jpg
00:09:364 (1,2,3,4,5) - these are drums again? if you were following vocals it'd be something like http://puu.sh/odhGm/23b806bc30.jpg because 00:10:493 (6) - already follows vocals i guess.
00:16:784 (5) - similarly to 00:06:461 (5) - the triplet is in the wrong place here >_<
00:20:977 (1,2) - doesn't make much sense to start that slider on the red tick again, vocals and instruments are focused on white ticks
and the rest is basically repeating what i said above because you kept the diff consistent
00:23:559 (1,2,3,4) - for these a rhythm like http://puu.sh/odhUa/395eff6154.jpg could be more consequent and easier to predict

needs work in visuals and rhythm, though rhythm is more urgent so i talked about rhythm

[mk]
with that SV i think higher AR would be better
00:18:719 (2) - idk if you're a fan of that but replacing with 2 circles to actually jump to 3 would give this a cool touch imo, mainly because it'd allow you to click both vocals: http://puu.sh/odi1E/057a7960c2.jpg
00:22:752 (2,3,4) - enable stacking in edit if you want to make these blanket ingame because right now 00:21:945 (3,2,3,4) - these are kinda clusterfuck

good to go.

[normal]
AR 5.5 ?
00:03:397 (4) - 00:13:719 (4) - i think you should shorten these to 1/1 because that captures the vocal better
00:20:977 (4,5) - i don't understand why these have to be 1/2 sliders, circles would've worked well enough and this pattern becomes a really big chain ? at least 00:20:977 (4) - could be nerfed to a circle
00:25:494 (4,5) - slidershapes pls ;; less curve if you want to do something like that
00:27:429 (3,4,1) - tbh something like http://puu.sh/odizZ/4bfe28fa3d.jpg will be easier to comprehend for your target audience
could use more mods focusing on visuals.

[easy]
00:18:558 (3) - 00:08:235 (3) - could you avoid short repeat sliders? they usually confuse everyone who just started because reading them is more difficult. just use 1/1 lol

its okayish, can use more polishing here and there but overall okayish

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-10T18:52:08+00:00

B r o k e n wrote:
My Modding Queue

Normal
00:22:913 (2,3) - soft these too? or give 00:22:268 (1) - normal hit sound, hit sounds just sounds a bit weird to me goes to the rhythm
00:26:784 (2) - sounds weird, think about making 00:26:139 (1) - just following the guitar and finishing with it? 2 full beat slider @.75 or .50 spd yes, you're right
00:28:075 (4) - following guitar? change it to full beat slider I want a spinner here

my mod prob didn't help much or at all, but here it is don't worry, helped

Okoratu wrote:
I love traps me too

[general]
If you want a bg with less pixels here you go: applied first
http://puu.sh/odaHN/7e36b9a2f9.jpg
http://puu.sh/odaIe/59da8613f4.jpg

00:23:558 - what exactly does this metronome reset do? It doesn't seem necessary to reset the metronome here at all

normal-sliderslide2 and normal-slidertick2 are unused
tbh you should make your slidertricks a bit less loud in general, the ones of the normal sampleset are really noisy on lower diffs especially ok removed

[Light Insane]
I decided to remove this diff cause the overmap I done, so no applies here

[normal]
AR 5.5 ? sure
00:03:397 (4) - 00:13:719 (4) - i think you should shorten these to 1/1 because that captures the vocal better I don't think so
00:20:977 (4,5) - i don't understand why these have to be 1/2 sliders, circles would've worked well enough and this pattern becomes a really big chain ? at least replcad for a slider foced to vocals
00:20:977 (4) - could be nerfed to a circle ^
00:25:494 (4,5) - slidershapes pls ;; less curve if you want to do something like that sure, sure
00:27:429 (3,4,1) - tbh something like http://puu.sh/odizZ/4bfe28fa3d.jpg will be easier to comprehend for your target audience fixed
could use more mods focusing on visuals.

[easy]
00:18:558 (3) - 00:08:235 (3) - could you avoid short repeat sliders? they usually confuse everyone who just started because reading them is more difficult. just use 1/1 lol ok, reducing it

its okayish, can use more polishing here and there but overall okayish

ty

Marianna

1,429 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2016-04-10T19:04:55+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
I love traps

[Marianna]
00:03:397 (4) - 00:05:977 (4) - and others like this: i don't know if it's just me but i feel like clicking the vocal on these sliderends might end up feeling better, because your mapping is pretty focused on the vocals. So at least try http://puu.sh/odb4G/74ff9afb2f.jpg or http://puu.sh/odb6i/02896cf0dc.jpg and tell me what you think In some parts I try to focus on what is most notable in the music, this is one of them
00:05:493 (1,2,3,4) - i think you should nerf this jump pattern a bit it's a lot larger than what you usually do Idk, it is one Insane :v
00:08:881 - i think you should be able to click this vocal so how about making 00:08:558 (3) - an 1/2 slider? I used what is most prominent in music to this part
00:23:559 (1,2) - the way these overlap doesn't look too nice, i think you should either overlap them more or avoid that by moving 2 to the left Fixed
00:25:494 (3,4,5,6) - i don't think an overmap like this is necessary but the main problem i have with that is that it plays hitnormals for the entire time and that just sounds really really noisy. circles would be less loud and a bit closer to the song i guess I like this jump so I adjusted the hitsound
00:28:075 (1) - i mean you could map the instruments on white and red tick that this skips over but in itself the slider is pretty functional. otherwise http://puu.sh/odbnA/a81a4968ef.jpg would work, too The guitar is the most important sound here

prolly good to go

Note: @Deppyforce and @kunkakunkakunkakunka No changes

osu file format v14

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ac8129464363

1,566 posts

Joined October 2013

ac8129464363 2016-04-10T23:32:44+00:00

[easy]
00:21:945 (4,5,6,7) - ehh 5 isn't emphasized as much as 6 and 7 in the music so I don't really get your reasoning for having 3 circles here, especially in an easy diff. it could be better to just throw a repeat on 4 somehow.

looks fine

[normal]
00:08:235 (4) - consider shortening the repeat and adding a circle, could suit the rise in vocal pitch more idk
00:20:977 (4) - could be converted to a 2 circles, one stacked on 5's head. idk it prevents the pattern from becoming too "connected" and dense for this part.

[mk]
00:02:913 (1,2) - intended blanket or not?
00:11:945 (1,2,3) - this one looks more like an intended blanket and its pretty off lol
00:18:719 (2) - could change this into 2 circles, especially considering how you've placed a whistle on the end
00:24:204 (3) - not telling you to change anything but im just curious why you chose to place that sound on the sliderhead
00:28:074 (3) - consider using a 1/2 repeat cuz of the percussion sounds. the circles between the sliders are circles that you've added as opposed to this which is an actual sound in the music. idk it could feel better

looks fine

[marianna's mining]
00:11:622 (8,9,10,1) - feels pretty awkward cuz of the linear acceleration required to play this pattern. it would feel better if there was more of an angle between these circles so consider moving 1 to the left or to the right a bit
00:15:816 (1,2) - why is this pattern really easy when 00:05:332 (4,1,2,3,4) - was one of the biggest jumps in the map
00:23:559 (1) - 00:24:204 (1) - consider soft sampleset on the tails of these so it doesnt sound so loud and out of place lol

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-10T23:49:48+00:00

deetz wrote:
[easy]
00:21:945 (4,5,6,7) - ehh 5 isn't emphasized as much as 6 and 7 in the music so I don't really get your reasoning for having 3 circles here, especially in an easy diff. it could be better to just throw a repeat on 4 somehow. I find it good

looks fine

[normal]
00:08:235 (4) - consider shortening the repeat and adding a circle, could suit the rise in vocal pitch more idk ok
00:20:977 (4) - could be converted to a 2 circles, one stacked on 5's head. idk it prevents the pattern from becoming too "connected" and dense for this part. sure

ty

Marianna

1,429 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2016-04-11T00:04:13+00:00

deetz wrote:
[marianna's mining]
00:11:622 (8,9,10,1) - feels pretty awkward cuz of the linear acceleration required to play this pattern. it would feel better if there was more of an angle between these circles so consider moving 1 to the left or to the right a bit Okay
00:15:816 (1,2) - why is this pattern really easy when 00:05:332 (4,1,2,3,4) - was one of the biggest jumps in the map Meh
00:23:559 (1) - 00:24:204 (1) - consider soft sampleset on the tails of these so it doesnt sound so loud and out of place lol

Sankyu ^^

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Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Haya 2016-04-11T00:40:54+00:00

M4M.

General

All good.

Easy

00:07:429 (2,3) - I feel like both of these sliders don't really need the clap at the ends. I think it would be better to remove them, as your hitsound pattern suggests that the claps hit on the beat, not the lyrics.
00:09:042 (4) - Insert a clap here to follow your pattern.
00:12:590 (2,3) - Since this is the only overlap in this entire difficulty I don't think that it aesthetically look good. In my eyes it looks out of place. So perhaps think about making a cleaner pattern here with no overlap or incorporate more of these overlaps in this Easy.
00:17:751 (2,3) - Here is the hitsound consistency problem again. Please remove both clap sounds from these sliders and add a Clap sound at 00:19:364 (4) - .
00:23:559 (1) - There is a slight blanket issue here. Move the sliderpoint to x318, y69 and the sliderend to x322, y18.

Normal

00:00:655 (1,2,3,1) - I have a problem with this pattern with not being symmetrical or in a perfect "diamond shape". Move (3) to x173, y195 and The slider to x104, y307.
00:09:364 (1,2) - I think that the way these two sliders are connected right now is awkward to play and disrupts the flow. You made a better connection in the following notes 00:09:848 (2,3) - . Try to keep stuff like this more linear.
00:10:977 (5,6,7,1) - This pattern is again not symmetrical. Move (6) to x501, y222. Move (7) to x432, y319. Move the Slider to x390, y209.
00:14:526 (1) - I think you forgot to place a Clap hitsound on the end of this slider.
00:20:170 (2,3) - I am not sure about this stack. In my eyes it would be very hard for a beginner to play a 1/2 bridge while stacked even. I'd say either find a different pattern or delete 00:20:170 (2) - and reassemble.
00:24:526 (1) - Remove the NC here. Since the melody is still the same and usually you only want NCs on downbeats.
00:28:719 (1) - Please don't stack the spinner on the note. Instead, Move the spinner on tick further on the blue tick.

Mk's Hard

00:10:655 (1,2,3) - Using 1/2 sliders fits this part better.
SPOILER
00:11:300 (3) - I think you forgot to add a clap hitsound here.
00:18:719 (2) - I would suggest having this slider point downwards instead of upwards to suggest a small 1/1 break. With the slider going up the flow looks like it's just a jump. Players who play hard difficulties aren't that good at differenciating Approach circles.
00:26:139 (1) - I think you forgot to add a clap hitsound here.

Marianna's Mine

00:00:655 (1) - I found it really weird to play this slider into the next one. I think a more sideways slider coming from the right would be more fitting flow/gameplay wise. Something like this
SPOILER

This Star shape is not symmetrical at all. Use this code and insert it into your .osu file.

SPOILER

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00:10:493 (1) - You can further improve this blanket. Move first sliderpoint to x129, y16.
00:12:590 (5) - Blanket issue again. Move sliderpoint to x379, y84 and sliderend to x276, y96.
00:21:461 - Insert a circle here
00:21:863 (5) - Delete this circle. The beat in this part is a triplet and not a 5-burst.

Good luck

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-11T01:03:46+00:00

Haya wrote:
M4M.

General
All good.

Easy
00:07:429 (2,3) - I feel like both of these sliders don't really need the clap at the ends. I think it would be better to remove them, as your hitsound pattern suggests that the claps hit on the beat, not the lyrics. It's for a better following to the pattern
00:09:042 (4) - Insert a clap here to follow your pattern. ok
00:12:590 (2,3) - Since this is the only overlap in this entire difficulty I don't think that it aesthetically look good. In my eyes it looks out of place. So perhaps think about making a cleaner pattern here with no overlap or incorporate more of these overlaps in this Easy. Those overlaps are allowed and it's rankable
00:17:751 (2,3) - Here is the hitsound consistency problem again. Please remove both clap sounds from these sliders and add a Clap sound at 00:19:364 (4) - . done
00:23:559 (1) - There is a slight blanket issue here. Move the sliderpoint to x318, y69 and the sliderend to x322, y18. fixed only first point

Normal
00:00:655 (1,2,3,1) - I have a problem with this pattern with not being symmetrical or in a perfect "diamond shape". Move (3) to x173, y195 and The slider to x104, y307. Of course it's a diamong shape

00:09:364 (1,2) - I think that the way these two sliders are connected right now is awkward to play and disrupts the flow. You made a better connection in the following notes 00:09:848 (2,3) - . Try to keep stuff like this more linear. It's fine
00:10:977 (5,6,7,1) - This pattern is again not symmetrical. Move (6) to x501, y222. Move (7) to x432, y319. Move the Slider to x390, y209. Fixed
00:14:526 (1) - I think you forgot to place a Clap hitsound on the end of this slider.
00:20:170 (2,3) - I am not sure about this stack. In my eyes it would be very hard for a beginner to play a 1/2 bridge while stacked even. I'd say either find a different pattern or delete 00:20:170 (2) - and reassemble. Every normal haves at least 1 stack
00:24:526 (1) - Remove the NC here. Since the melody is still the same and usually you only want NCs on downbeats. ok fixed
00:28:719 (1) - Please don't stack the spinner on the note. Instead, Move the spinner on tick further on the blue tick. I forgot to fix that

ty

Marianna

1,429 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2016-04-11T01:08:46+00:00

Haya wrote:
Marianna's Mine
00:00:655 (1) - I found it really weird to play this slider into the next one. I think a more sideways slider coming from the right would be more fitting flow/gameplay wise. Something like this
SPOILER
This Star shape is not symmetrical at all. Use this code and insert it into your .osu file.
SPOILER
339,321,5332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
129,126,5493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
411,160,5655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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If someone else complain about it I fix
00:10:493 (1) - You can further improve this blanket. Move first sliderpoint to x129, y16. No
00:12:590 (5) - Blanket issue again. Move sliderpoint to x379, y84 and sliderend to x276, y96.
00:21:461 - Insert a circle here No
00:21:863 (5) - Delete this circle. The beat in this part is a triplet and not a 5-burst. No
Good luck

Thanks ^^

Mekki

Mekki 2016-04-11T22:49:51+00:00

a

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 655
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

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TitleUnicode:とらぶるめーかー
Artist:I MY ME MINE
ArtistUnicode:あいまいみーまいん
Creator:Underforest
Version:Mk's Hard
Source:ひめゴト
Tags:SECRET PRINCESS HIMEGOTO Toraburumeka Aimaimimain Opening TV Size 睦月周平 ミズノ ゲンキ Mutsuki Shuhei Genki Mizuno 小野早稀 東城日沙子 桑原由気  摩天楼由香 Ono Saki Toujou Hisako Yūki Kuwahara Yuka Matenrou 有川 ひめ Arikawa Hime 歩く18禁 Aruku Juuhachi-kin 霜科 十八 Shimoshina Toya 伊集院 運子 Ijūin Sadako 運子 Unko アルベルティーナ 2世 Aruberutina Albertina Ni-sei 阿部 ちな Abe China 有川 かぐや Arikawa Kaguya MkGuh Hoen Marianna
BeatmapID:944681
BeatmapSetID:438919

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

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Video,-50,"video.avi"
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Factorial

691 posts

Joined August 2013

Factorial 2016-04-12T04:43:43+00:00

Hi, M4M here:
Overall

Hitsounds normal-sliderslide2.wav and normal-slidertick2.wav seems to be unused.
This should have only one timing line, since there were no measure change

Easy

00:10:977 (3,1) - Fix blanketing
00:15:171 (2,3) - ^, with sliderhead of 00:15:171 (2)
00:12:590 (2,3) - With this pattern, players might click the reverse arrow instead:

Normal

00:02:913 (3) - This should be moved to 00:02:752 with "imini?" ending at 00:03:074
00:05:494 (3) - Move to 00:05:332, this fits better here, imo
00:13:235 (3) - This should be moved to 00:13:074 with "egao" ending at 00:13:397
00:15:816 (3) - Move to 00:15:655, same as above
00:20:977 (4,5) - This rhythm seems awkward, imo. See MK's Hard.

Hard

00:25:655 - Add something at the red tick, feels empty here (replace slider)

Light Insane

00:10:977 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this stream more curved?
00:19:364 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - It would be be better if these circles have same distance (DS)

Marianna's Mine

00:14:203 (5,6,7,8,1) - Blanket with 00:13:881 (3) ??
This diff's greatly mapped. Nothing moddable.

That's all I can mod!
Modded from 4/10/16 update

Mekki

Mekki 2016-04-13T17:04:49+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
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Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:とらぶるめーかー
Artist:I MY ME MINE
ArtistUnicode:あいまいみーまいん
Creator:Underforest
Version:Mk's Hard
Source:ひめゴト
Tags:SECRET PRINCESS HIMEGOTO Toraburumeka Aimaimimain Opening TV Size 睦月周平 ミズノ ゲンキ Mutsuki Shuhei Genki Mizuno 小野早稀 東城日沙子 桑原由気  摩天楼由香 Ono Saki Toujou Hisako Yūki Kuwahara Yuka Matenrou 有川 ひめ Arikawa Hime 歩く18禁 Aruku Juuhachi-kin 霜科 十八 Shimoshina Toya 伊集院 運子 Ijūin Sadako 運子 Unko アルベルティーナ 2世 Aruberutina Albertina Ni-sei 阿部 ちな Abe China 有川 かぐや Arikawa Kaguya MkGuh Hoen Marianna
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sahuang

2,294 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-04-13T23:58:44+00:00

Mark

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-14T04:34:37+00:00

I can't apply Neil Leo's mod cause I fixed basically everything was mentioned on other mods XD
Thank you

Ataraxia

673 posts

Joined February 2014

Ataraxia 2016-04-15T00:30:43+00:00

Hii from my queue

Easy

All see good to me

Normal

00:16:299 (4) - i Thinks is better like This

Mk's Hard

I Think Is good after all

Marianna's Mine

Ok

No KD for this post

this map is great! Good work Underforest and the team

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-15T02:21:05+00:00

I'll give KD because anyways helped
Ty

George

George 2016-04-15T03:11:35+00:00

m4m thing
---Easy---
00:06:784 (1) - Just to add variety I would rotate this slider ~50 degrees and add a white point in the middle to make a really shallow c shape
00:07:429 (2) - I would remove the white point from this slider and move it up to accommodate my previous suggestion
00:10:332 (2) - I would add a white point to this slider so the slider has a little bump to add more flow to this section (what I mean)
00:19:364 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:23:235 (7,1) - ^

---Normal---
00:04:203 (1,2) - fix this blanket plz
00:10:332 (3,4) - personally I'd try to stay away from stacks like this in Easy and Normal diffs, they're more or something for hard
Delete this ( 00:12:590 (2) - ) slider and make it a flipped version of 00:11:945 (1) -
00:24:042 (2,3) - stack thing

---Hard---'
00:09:848 (2) - Move the end point of the slider to the left one so the slider is symmetrical

---Mine---
00:09:364 (1) - I would try to round the end of this slider out so it blankets 00:09:848 (2) - better
00:10:493 (1) - same thing here

alrighty I guess, good collab of mappers :3

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-15T03:30:48+00:00

George wrote:
m4m thing
---Easy---
00:06:784 (1) - Just to add variety I would rotate this slider ~50 degrees and add a white point in the middle to make a really shallow c shape Is not a blanket so no
00:07:429 (2) - I would remove the white point from this slider and move it up to accommodate my previous suggestion I want it curved
00:10:332 (2) - I would add a white point to this slider so the slider has a little bump to add more flow to this section fixed(what I mean)
00:19:364 (4,1) - fix blanket It's fine
00:23:235 (7,1) - ^ Same

---Normal---
00:04:203 (1,2) - fix this blanket plz
00:10:332 (3,4) - personally I'd try to stay away from stacks like this in Easy and Normal diffs, they're more or something for hard I prefer it friendly
Delete this ( 00:12:590 (2) - ) slider and make it a flipped version of 00:11:945 (1) - I think it's fine
00:24:042 (2,3) - stack thing It's fine

alrighty I guess, good collab of mappers :3

Doormat

2,050 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2016-04-15T11:46:23+00:00

m4m here sorry for being late-
this show confuses me x-x
[Easy]

not really a big deal but i think you can make this blanket 00:04:848 (2) - for nicer aesthetics
SPOILER
you're gonna have to move this a bit to prevent overlapping with 00:06:784 (1) - though
00:18:558 (3) - just my preference so you can feel free to completely ignore me here but i'd rather you have the slider at 00:17:751 (2) - lead into this slider, e.g. have (2)'s slider end point towards the (3). makes it easier to guide beginners
00:28:397 (4) - maybe delete this to give more emphasis (3)'s slider end. i know you want to capture the drum here, but it doesn't really work that well without the beat at 00:28:235 imo
00:28:719 (1) - maybe have a circle here and start the spinner at 00:28:881 instead
yeah looks good feel free to ignore these if you want

[Normal]

00:11:945 (1,2) - can make these blankets; right now it just looks kind of ugh
00:28:720 (1) - same as easy

[Mk]

00:07:429 (3,1) - minor overlap here triggers me because it's not centred lmao
00:20:332 (3) - i think two 1/2 sliders would work over a 1/1 slider here because guitars are pretty emphasized here
00:28:075 (3) - ^same but because drums this time

[Marianna]

00:21:461 - pause here feels a little weird imo. i wouldn't ignore the beat here; circle maybe?

hope this helps!

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-16T05:53:49+00:00

Doormat wrote:
m4m here sorry for being late-
this show confuses me x-x
[Easy]
not really a big deal but i think you can make this blanket 00:04:848 (2) - for nicer aesthetics ok
SPOILER
you're gonna have to move this a bit to prevent overlapping with 00:06:784 (1) - though
00:18:558 (3) - just my preference so you can feel free to completely ignore me here but i'd rather you have the slider at 00:17:751 (2) - lead into this slider, e.g. have (2)'s slider end point towards the (3). makes it easier to guide beginners I think current is okay
00:28:397 (4) - maybe delete this to give more emphasis (3)'s slider end. i know you want to capture the drum here, but it doesn't really work that well without the beat at 00:28:235 imo there's a soft drum, let's not
00:28:719 (1) - maybe have a circle here and start the spinner at 00:28:881 instead I want a diff more easier
yeah looks good feel free to ignore these if you want
[Normal]
00:11:945 (1,2) - can make these blankets; right now it just looks kind of ugh I'll think about that
00:28:720 (1) - same as easy same as easy
hope this helps!

ty

Electoz

Beatmap Nominator

1,895 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-04-16T07:02:55+00:00

Alright then.

[Easy]

00:07:429 (2,3) - How about this rhythm? 00:07:429 (2) Plays a bit off because there isn't a vocal going on in the slider. Same applies to 00:17:751 (2,3) .
00:15:171 (2,3) - Idk maybe the symmetry here can be improved.
00:21:945 (4,5) - Ctrl+G this might fit better so that downbeat won't get ignored.

[Normal]

00:02:913 (3) - If you're using this to follow vocal, moving this to the red tick earlier 00:02:752 would make much more sense imo. Same applies to 00:13:235 (3) .
00:04:849 (2,3) - Idk what happened but you shouldn't ignore 00:05:332 - 00:05:655 if you're following vocal, the rhythm is pretty much the same with previous stanza but I think you can represent these vocals differently. Same applies to 00:15:171 (2,3) .
00:25:010 - Don't ignore this pls, it would sound a lot better if you map it.

[Mk's Hard]

00:02:752 (4,1) - Dude not sure if it's just me but I don't really see a reason for a higher spacing here even though it's a downbeat.
00:10:977 (1,2) - A slider here instead of these? Imo the vocal is building up so might as well making only vocals clickable?
00:22:752 (2,3,4,5) - Idk might flow better with Ctrl+g.
00:24:687 - Feels weird to have this empty, can you do sth about it?
00:24:849 (1) - Optional, 2 circles might capture the guitar sound better.

[Marianna's Mine]

00:05:332 (4,1,2,3,4) - The jumps are kinda overdone imo, at least you should use a similar spacing you did at 00:16:139 (2,3,4,5,6) .
00:14:848 (2,3) - Imo this really needs a higher spacing.
00:20:977 (1,2) - Maybe delete 00:21:622 (2) and make 00:20:977 (1) a repeat slider? It would feel less awkward this way cuz 00:21:461 won't be left empty imo, well if you do that you have to move some stuff there.
00:24:849 (1,2) - Just my preference but I would make a small jump here.

Hope this helps, good luck~

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,108 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2016-04-16T09:01:19+00:00

i only can mod insane diff and i cant find problem of it ;w;
so ill just shoot a star

GL ~

BoatKrab

740 posts

Joined September 2012

BoatKrab 2016-04-16T11:19:25+00:00

Hellow :3
don't forget to add MkGuh and Marianna to tags
no kds pls

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-16T21:24:45+00:00

Electoz wrote:
Alright then.

[Easy]

00:07:429 (2,3) - How about this rhythm? 00:07:429 (2) Plays a bit off because there isn't a vocal going on in the slider. Same applies to 00:17:751 (2,3) . I prefer as it is now
00:15:171 (2,3) - Idk maybe the symmetry here can be improved. done
00:21:945 (4,5) - Ctrl+G this might fit better so that downbeat won't get ignored. ok
[Normal]

00:02:913 (3) - If you're using this to follow vocal, moving this to the red tick earlier 00:02:752 would make much more sense imo. Same applies to 00:13:235 (3) . I don't know about this
00:04:849 (2,3) - Idk what happened but you shouldn't ignore 00:05:332 - 00:05:655 if you're following vocal, the rhythm is pretty much the same with previous stanza but I think you can represent these vocals differently. Same applies to 00:15:171 (2,3) . ok fixed
00:25:010 - Don't ignore this pls, it would sound a lot better if you map it. I want to leave a little break here
Hope this helps, good luck~

Thank you for your mod

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
i only can mod insane diff and i cant find problem of it ;w;
so ill just shoot a star
GL ~

Thank you for the star

BoatKrab wrote:
Hellow :3
don't forget to add MkGuh and Marianna to tags
no kds pls

They are added already, just that the tags can't display correctly on forum

Mekki

Mekki 2016-04-16T23:00:08+00:00

electoz

Electoz wrote:
Alright then.

[Mk's Hard]

00:02:752 (4,1) - Dude not sure if it's just me but I don't really see a reason for a higher spacing here even though it's a downbeat. there is a high sound on it for sure
00:10:977 (1,2) - A slider here instead of these? Imo the vocal is building up so might as well making only vocals clickable? ok
00:22:752 (2,3,4,5) - Idk might flow better with Ctrl+g. why?
00:24:687 - Feels weird to have this empty, can you do sth about it? nah, gap seems nice here because guitar sound
00:24:849 (1) - Optional, 2 circles might capture the guitar sound better. not really, it flows better with those slider, cuz just the head is strong.

Hope this helps, good luck~

cutie doormat

Doormat wrote:
m4m here sorry for being late-

[Mk]
00:07:429 (3,1) - minor overlap here triggers me because it's not centred lmao wat
00:20:332 (3) - i think two 1/2 sliders would work over a 1/1 slider here because guitars are pretty emphasized here true
00:28:075 (3) - ^same but because drums this time not here cuz following guitar

moe

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ErunamoJAZZ

osu! Alumni

2,728 posts

Joined August 2012

ErunamoJAZZ 2016-04-17T01:27:07+00:00

Hi~

too short xD

[Marianna's Insane]
00:12:106 (2,3) - That felt a bit bad for me, because jump between those are diferent to others in the map. I want to suggest change spacing to 1.6: http://puu.sh/ol3Sa/2746d3f55b.jpg (1:

, 2:

)
Why id OD at 7.5??, OD8 is more appropriate here (for spread)

[Mk's Hard]
HP will be 6, imo

IRC

19:40 ErunamoJAZZ: asd
19:41 Underforest: ¿?
19:41 *ErunamoJAZZ is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/945175 I MY ME MINE - Troublemaker]
19:41 ErunamoJAZZ: los tuyos son los primeros, no?
19:42 Underforest: Si
19:42 *ErunamoJAZZ is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/944682 I MY ME MINE - Troublemaker [Normal]] +Hidden +SuddenDeath +HardRock +Nightcore
19:45 ErunamoJAZZ: ahhaha
19:45 Underforest: Si, ya se xd
19:45 *ErunamoJAZZ is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/944679 I MY ME MINE - Troublemaker [Easy]]
19:45 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:05:493 (3) - Este patron así no lo recomendaría en un easy
19:46 ErunamoJAZZ: en un normal sí, pero no en un easy
19:46 Underforest: No se, voy a pensar sobre eso
19:46 ErunamoJAZZ: porque el final del slider anterior apunta hacia la flecha
19:47 ErunamoJAZZ: pero!, buscaste testplays de nubs?
19:47 ErunamoJAZZ: (pusiste a tu mamá a jugarlo? (?) :v)
19:47 ErunamoJAZZ: jajajjaa
19:47 ErunamoJAZZ: antes de decir si es bueno o malo, es mejor ver como le va a gente nueva jugandolo
19:47 ErunamoJAZZ:

19:48 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:08:235 (3,4) - este flow definitivamente no me agrada
19:48 Underforest: Se supone que es un blanket
19:48 ErunamoJAZZ: soy de los que piensa que el flow debe ser lo más obvio posible
19:50 Underforest: Lo dejaré como es en mi opinion
19:50 Underforest: Si un BN dice lo mismo, lo cambio
19:50 ErunamoJAZZ: que piensas de algo así? http://puu.sh/ol2AG/51ac1af065.jpg
19:51 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:15:171 (2,3) - este flow tamién lo siento raro
19:51 Underforest: Suena un poco dificil para un nuevo jugador
19:51 ErunamoJAZZ: no creo, yo lo he usado un montón en mis mapas faciles xD
19:52 ErunamoJAZZ: la sugerencia la hago es por el "polarity issue" que hay ahí
19:52 ErunamoJAZZ: (00:18:558 (3,4) - y acá también)
19:54 ErunamoJAZZ: muchas veces es mejor evitar esos cambios en la polaridad tan bruscos
19:54 ErunamoJAZZ: se pueden dejar cuando el sonido es demasiado obvio
19:54 ErunamoJAZZ: pero en este caso, haciendo el mini slider, queda bastante cool con la voz
19:55 ErunamoJAZZ: eso sería con el easy

19:55 *ErunamoJAZZ is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/944682 I MY ME MINE - Troublemaker [Normal]]
19:55 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:11:945 (1,2) - la forma de estos dos podría ser más bonita >_<
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: mm... en vez de 00:24:526 (4,5) - por qué no repetiste lo mismo que en 00:23:558 (1,2,3) - ?, pienso que quedaría mejor
19:57 Underforest: Sobre el segundo 11 yo pienso que esta bien
19:57 Underforest: Lo del segundo 24 lo cambio
19:58 ErunamoJAZZ: No estan mal, pero pueden ser mejores owo
19:58 ErunamoJAZZ: la idea de modear es hacer los mapas mejore, anyway xD
19:59 ErunamoJAZZ: pregunta: Los chicos brasileros saben español?, o mejor les escribo en inglés?
19:59 Underforest: MkGuh está tomando clases de español
19:59 Underforest: pero no sabe del todo
19:59 Underforest: asi que en ingles
19:59 Underforest: Marianna solo sabe ingles igualmente
19:59 ErunamoJAZZ: English then

20:15 ErunamoJAZZ: mm...
20:15 ErunamoJAZZ: por qué el HP lo tienes tan bajito en el easy?
20:15 ErunamoJAZZ: normalmente, el lvl normal lo lleva en 5
20:16 Underforest: Es un easy
20:16 ErunamoJAZZ: es un easy de un mapa de 30 segundos xD
20:16 Underforest: Ni modo que sea CS:3 AR:10
20:16 ErunamoJAZZ: si fuera un mapa de 4 min
20:16 ErunamoJAZZ: sería diferente
20:16 Underforest: Un BN me dijo que lo cambiara a 5.5
20:17 ErunamoJAZZ: hp5.5 en el normal?
20:17 ErunamoJAZZ: suena bien
20:17 Underforest: Tampoco te pases XD
20:17 ErunamoJAZZ: no me estoy pasando
20:18 ErunamoJAZZ: tener 5 de HP en un mapa hace que si te quedas quieto, no subes ni bajas
20:18 ErunamoJAZZ: más de 5 si te quedasq uiero baja
20:18 ErunamoJAZZ: y menos de 5, cualquier cosa recupera vida
20:18 ErunamoJAZZ: yo le pondría
20:18 Underforest: prefiero dejarlo en 4
20:18 ErunamoJAZZ: insane 7, hard 6, normal 5, y easy 4
20:19 Underforest: No conozco ningun mapa rankeado que tenga a Easy de 4 de HP
20:20 Underforest: Mas que los de 60BPMm y los antiguos que estan bien feos
20:21 *ErunamoJAZZ is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/206846 Last Note. - Setsuna Trip (Short Ver.)]
20:22 Underforest: Eso ya es criterio del mapper
20:23 ErunamoJAZZ: sip
20:23 ErunamoJAZZ: aun así, es mi sugerencia

-----------
My suggestion about HP is: I:7, H:6, N:5, E:4.
This map is very short, so I think it is fine.

Good luck!

Marianna

1,429 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2016-04-17T02:58:21+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
Hi~

too short xD

[Marianna's Insane]
00:12:106 (2,3) - That felt a bit bad for me, because jump between those are diferent to others in the map. I want to suggest change spacing to 1.6: http://puu.sh/ol3Sa/2746d3f55b.jpg (1: , 2: ) For me and test play this is good
Why id OD at 7.5??, OD8 is more appropriate here (for spread) This is not one extra

@Electoz Sorry no changes

Mafumafu

Nomination Assessment Team

3,373 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2016-04-17T03:42:10+00:00

From my M4M queue.
My map for M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/404283
[General]
Volume sounds too loud for clap. Reduce by 15%.
Do you have an official source for metadata

[Easy]
00:26:140 (1,2) - There's a long soundhttp://puu.sh/oladi/bc31aef452.jpg

[Normal]
AR5. The gap between 3 to 5.5 is too large.
00:07:913 (3,4,5) - This is quite complex for Normal. Change it to http://puu.sh/olao8/77b4c73975.jpg Same to 00:17:752 (2,3,4,5) -
00:11:945 (1,2) - Should be a blanket.
00:10:332 (3,4) - Replace this with a 1/2 slider.
00:03:397 (4) - http://puu.sh/olaA9/7aa5f6193a.jpg Same to 00:13:719 (4) -
00:23:558 (1,2,3) - Apply the rhythm at 00:24:526 (4,5) - .
00:26:139 (1,2) -

[Hard]
AR7.
00:02:913 (1,2) - Blanket.
00:26:058 (6) - For me, You have to remove this. It's completely overmapped.

[Marianna's Mine]
The gap between Hard and this diff is too huge. I guess you have to reduce the jump spacings in this diff by 25% or more. And do not enhance the SV at the last part. 1.5x to 1.9x is already a large gap from hard to this diff.

00:23:559 (1,1) - Silence the slider-ends on 3/4. It sounds terrible.
00:25:494 (3,4,5,6) - Do not use this pls. Use hitcircles instead.
====================
You can call me back if you apply those above!

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-17T05:43:12+00:00

Regraz wrote:
From my M4M queue.
My map for M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/404283
[General]
Volume sounds too loud for clap. Reduce by 15%. ok changed in all diffs (-10%)
Do you have an official source for metadata yes, here: http://www.i-mmm.me/discography/index.html

[Easy]
00:26:140 (1,2) - There's a long soundhttp://puu.sh/oladi/bc31aef452.jpg ok applied

[Normal]
AR5. The gap between 3 to 5.5 is too large. ok
00:07:913 (3,4,5) - This is quite complex for Normal. Change it to http://puu.sh/olao8/77b4c73975.jpg Same to 00:17:752 (2,3,4,5) - fixed
00:11:945 (1,2) - Should be a blanket. replaced with something better i think
00:10:332 (3,4) - Replace this with a 1/2 slider. ok
00:03:397 (4) - http://puu.sh/olaA9/7aa5f6193a.jpg Same to 00:13:719 (4) - ok
00:23:558 (1,2,3) - Apply the rhythm at 00:24:526 (4,5) - . I forgot it ah
00:26:139 (1,2) - ?

====================
You can call me back if you apply those above! I call you back when Marianna and MkGuh replied

tysm o3o

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_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2016-04-17T10:52:55+00:00

the race is on

Last edited by _handholding 2016-04-17T14:24:25+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Mekki

Mekki 2016-04-17T12:48:35+00:00

Regraz wrote:
[Hard]
AR7. With the kind of jumps and rhythm AR 8 fits much better.
00:02:913 (1,2) - Blanket. It's already fine :c
00:26:058 (6) - For me, You have to remove this. It's completely overmapped. It's following guitar sound, I don't get it why it'd be overmapped.

Great job for your first iconed set, Forest!

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-17T23:50:48+00:00

Keeped AR 5.5 on Normal so gap for ARs is equal
~~Waiting for Marianna~~~ He will reply tomorrow

ErunamoJAZZ

osu! Alumni

2,728 posts

Joined August 2012

ErunamoJAZZ 2016-04-18T01:10:30+00:00

Marianna wrote:
ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
Hi~

too short xD

[Marianna's Insane]
Why id OD at 7.5??, OD8 is more appropriate here (for spread) This is not one extra
@Electoz Sorry no changes

Extras will need OD9, 8 is fine for Insanes... btw

Yuii-

2,501 posts

Joined July 2013

Yuii- 2016-04-18T01:14:12+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
Extras will need OD9, 8 is fine for Insanes... btw

I might have to disagree here. That's not written anywhere. Using OD8 would just inflate the amount of given pp. 7 or even 7.5 is more than enough.

Underforest

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Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-18T01:19:13+00:00

My opinion is the same as Yuii-

Marianna

1,429 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2016-04-18T04:24:04+00:00

Underforest wrote:
My opinion is the same as Yuii-

btw i'll reply tomorrow @Regraz

Underforest

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Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-18T04:55:45+00:00

I said that previously o3o

Marianna

1,429 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2016-04-18T13:08:37+00:00

Well I tried to fix all :v

:v

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Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-18T13:26:50+00:00

ok updated
I'll send to recheck when I get home

-Atri-

3,049 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2016-04-19T03:36:59+00:00

that speedranking though

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-19T03:41:50+00:00

Soon...

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

ZekeyHache 2016-04-19T18:04:41+00:00

Chiquitibum a la bim bom ba
Chiquitibum a la bim bom ba
A la bio, a la bao, a la bim bom ba
El Forest! El Forest!
RA RA RAAA!!!

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-19T23:00:17+00:00

gracias ezek o3o
still waiting for recheck or BN mods~

Marianna

1,429 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2016-04-20T23:57:54+00:00

Waiting ~~and stalking~~

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2016-04-20T23:57:56+00:00

[Marianne's Mine]

00:06:784 (1,2,3) - Can you make their visual spacing more similar?

~

00:10:977 (2,3,4) - This sounds overmapped to me. The other triplets are fine but here it just doesn't sound like anything xP. If you want to keep the 1/4's maybe try 1/4 repeats since those have the advantage of being passive 1/4's instead of actives. Players won't notice the overmap as much that way.
00:17:752 (3,1,2,3) - The spacing here is really small compared to what you've used earlier. It doesn't really create a lot of emphasis here xP. Can you make this pattern bigger/more difficult?

[Mk's Hard]

00:07:429 (3,1) - Something like this would be nice

~

00:23:559 (1,3) - Stacks are off

[Normal]

00:04:203 (1,2) - Blankets off
00:07:913 (3,4,5) - I really dislike this rhythm here... I can't really tell what its following. Reconsider this.
00:09:364 (1) - Here too. Maybe something like this

~

[Easy]

00:05:493 (3,1) - Blanket is off.
00:14:526 (1,2,3) - This arrangement just doesn't look nice. especially 2 and 3. Can you try something else? Maybe parallel sliders with cornered edges? (Red nodes)
00:23:235 (6,1) - Blanket

Some rhythm issues in Normal and visual improvements in Easy, but other than that, set looks ready.

Marianna

1,429 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2016-04-21T00:00:25+00:00

I'M ONE WITCH

All fixed, more about the overlap I will not change, I think that is matching with the rest and is flowing and makes it so i dont will change

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Mekki

Mekki 2016-04-21T00:08:35+00:00

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Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-21T00:23:10+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
[Normal]

00:04:203 (1,2) - Blankets off fixed
00:07:913 (3,4,5) - I really dislike this rhythm here... I can't really tell what its following. Reconsider this. OK I tried to fix with a blanket
00:09:364 (1) - Here too. Maybe something like this fixed too
~

[Easy]

00:05:493 (3,1) - Blanket is off. same
00:14:526 (1,2,3) - This arrangement just doesn't look nice. especially 2 and 3. Can you try something else? Maybe parallel sliders with cornered edges? (Red nodes) I tried
00:23:235 (6,1) - Blanket OK

Some rhythm issues in Normal and visual improvements in Easy, but other than that, set looks ready.

btw, thank you for random mod

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2016-04-21T05:09:39+00:00

Marianna wrote:

I'M ONE WITCH

All fixed, more about the overlap I will not change, I think that is matching with the rest and is flowing and makes it so i dont will change

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00:10:977 (2,3,4) - You didn't fix this, but you said you fixed all except the overlap thing?
00:06:784 (1,2,3) - Spacing is still a bit off, move 3 like six more pixels to the left.

I can bubble once these are addressed.

Mafumafu

Nomination Assessment Team

3,373 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2016-04-21T08:49:17+00:00

oh i could recheck this after monstrata's bubble actually.

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-21T12:41:14+00:00

Guys, it's happening~
Waiting for Marianna

Marianna

1,429 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2016-04-21T13:32:09+00:00

All Fixed

♥

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 655
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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Title:Troublemaker
TitleUnicode:とらぶるめーかー
Artist:I MY ME MINE
ArtistUnicode:あいまいみーまいん
Creator:Underforest
Version:Marianna's Mine
Source:ひめゴト
Tags:SECRET PRINCESS HIMEGOTO Toraburumeka Aimaimimain Opening TV Size 睦月周平 ミズノ ゲンキ Mutsuki Shuhei Genki Mizuno 小野早稀 東城日沙子 桑原由気  摩天楼由香 Ono Saki Toujou Hisako Yūki Kuwahara Yuka Matenrou 有川 ひめ Arikawa Hime 歩く18禁 Aruku Juuhachi-kin 霜科 十八 Shimoshina Toya 伊集院 運子 Ijūin Sadako 運子 Unko アルベルティーナ 2世 Aruberutina Albertina Ni-sei 阿部 ちな Abe China 有川 かぐや Arikawa Kaguya MkGuh Hoen Marianna
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Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-21T13:33:24+00:00

ok, ready for bubble

Mekki

Mekki 2016-04-21T13:55:35+00:00

00:15:655 (4) - move this note to x: 448 y: 380 if possible in my diff thanks

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-21T14:31:20+00:00

ok
when I get home

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-21T22:17:35+00:00

MkGuh wrote:
00:15:655 (4) - move this note to x: 448 y: 380 if possible in my diff thanks

Updated

Underforest wrote:
ok, ready for bubble x2 baby

Renamed Marianna's Mine as Marianna's Hime
Hime = Princess

Kyouren

5,659 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2016-04-22T15:27:30+00:00

Go go! :3

Marianna

1,429 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2016-04-22T22:28:20+00:00

Notice me BN senpai~ ♥

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-24T22:02:06+00:00

Added skin + slider decorations so Re-DL :3
Hit circle from this map | Entire rest from me
rip speedrank

Marianna wrote:
Notice me BN senpai~ ♥

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2016-04-26T05:55:36+00:00

Problem with adding a skinset is the complications that come with them.

spinner-rpm.png is missing from the Spinner set file.

Also, give me a screenshot of these files being used, or delete them.

inputoverlay-background.png
inputoverlay-key.png
spinner-osu.png

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-26T12:43:34+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
Problem with adding a skinset is the complications that come with them.

spinner-rpm.png is missing from the Spinner set file.

Also, give me a screenshot of these files being used, or delete them.

inputoverlay-background.png
inputoverlay-key.png
spinner-osu.png

I'll reply when I get home, wait

Last edited by Underforest 2016-04-26T22:15:52+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-26T22:15:09+00:00

Deleted some parts of the skin, doing this like a mini-skin, now it's just 9.71 MB.
Mapping didn't get any more changes

Confirm:

Underforest

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Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-27T03:56:18+00:00

Final reupdate: Added a forgotten drum whistle hitsound
Finally we're ready I guess

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2016-04-28T00:52:43+00:00

Slider skinset is missing these:

sliderscorepoint.png
sliderb.png
sliderfollowcircle.png

I really dislike working with maps that include skinning elements because its one of the features on osu I haven't bothered exploring. Good luck.

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-28T01:57:20+00:00

Decided to delete all skin at once

rip hype

Marianna

1,429 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2016-04-28T13:24:44+00:00

xD

Underforest

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Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-29T02:04:56+00:00

Handled as WIP now, I'll add Taiko diffs soon :3

Nardoxyribonucleic

osu! Alumni

3,009 posts

Joined May 2011

Nardoxyribonucleic 2016-04-29T15:42:26+00:00

Hi, here are the taiko diffs as requested :3 (no kd)

http://puu.sh/oA7ZG.rar

Good luck~

Underforest

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Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-29T18:25:16+00:00

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-Sh1n1-

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-Sh1n1- 2016-04-30T03:00:46+00:00

Hey~~

as requested:

click me!

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GL~~

El combo colour, el sliderborder y el SliderTrackOverride propios del skin no son necesarios en Taiko, solo incrementaran el tamaño del bloc de notas asi que te recomiendo que lo dejes en default, yo te mande mi code con los mismos codigos que el de Nardo para no tener problemas, solo una sugerencia :3

Underforest

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Underforest 2016-04-30T03:17:37+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
El combo colour, el sliderborder y el SliderTrackOverride propios del skin no son necesarios en Taiko, solo incrementaran el tamaño del bloc de notas asi que te recomiendo que lo dejes en default, yo te mande mi code con los mismos codigos que el de Nardo para no tener problemas, solo una sugerencia :3 Mi Kantan también tiene los codigos del Nardo XD BTW, los colores y los detalles de los deslizadores son usados para el modo standard y si los elimino en el Taiko, creará un conflicto con todo el mapset, asi que los dejare como tal

Tu diff ya fue subida

Everything is ready for icon

Mafumafu

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Mafumafu 2016-04-30T03:39:01+00:00

Oh there are taiko diffs.
I am sorry that I can't help further.

Good luck then.

Underforest

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Underforest 2016-04-30T03:47:26+00:00

you can just icon with circle
Anyway, ty

-Sh1n1-

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-Sh1n1- 2016-04-30T05:34:14+00:00

Underforest wrote:
-Sh1n1- wrote:
El combo colour, el sliderborder y el SliderTrackOverride propios del skin no son necesarios en Taiko, solo incrementaran el tamaño del bloc de notas asi que te recomiendo que lo dejes en default, yo te mande mi code con los mismos codigos que el de Nardo para no tener problemas, solo una sugerencia :3 Mi Kantan también tiene los codigos del Nardo XD BTW, los colores y los detalles de los deslizadores son usados para el modo standard y si los elimino en el Taiko, creará un conflicto con todo el mapset, asi que los dejare como tal lol no habra ningun conflicto pero anyways mejor dejarlo asi para evitar problemas
Tu diff ya fue subida Gracias

Everything is ready for icon

Volta

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Joined March 2014

Volta 2016-04-30T09:38:09+00:00

i love traps!
but i think futsuu desperately in need of more 1/2 rhythm

-Atri-

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-Atri- 2016-04-30T10:56:06+00:00

Ask Irreversible for a diff

-Sh1n1-

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-Sh1n1- 2016-04-30T11:52:15+00:00

Volta wrote:
i love traps!
but i think futsuu desperately in need of more 1/2 rhythm

naa, it's not necessary considering that there isn't Kantan

Prophecy

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Joined December 2013

Prophecy 2016-04-30T12:27:48+00:00

hi, as requested

[Futsuu]
Compare with Muzukashii, your difficulties is too easy. you should add more 1/2 notes.
00:01:945 - add a d, you're following the vocal
00:05:332 - add a don/kat, add some 1/2 notes.
00:07:106 - same as above, you should consider to add some 1/1 notes to follow the vocal
00:08:235 - add a don here, a lower pitch here and you can add a 1/2 notes here as a example.
00:09:848 - same as above, add a don/kat
00:12:268 - It's repeating, so if you applied the don at 00:01:945, you should add here too.
00:13:074 - add a don here, vocal sound and 1/2.
00:15:655 - add a don/kat here, just consider to add some 1/2 notes and it's is nice to following the vocal.
00:17:429 - add a don here, same as above.

the spread can improve a lot by adding more 1/2 in Futsuu, GL for rank.

Mekki

Mekki 2016-04-30T13:51:09+00:00

What the fuck?! You have just lost two BNs for your map... This is really bad luck in my opinion lol

Anyways, good luck with further process o.o7

-Sh1n1-

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-Sh1n1- 2016-04-30T14:24:38+00:00

Prophecy wrote:
hi, as requested

[Futsuu]
Compare with Muzukashii, your difficulties is too easy. you should add more 1/2 notes. Ok, you are the third person who said that, so I'll add a couple of 1/2 rhythm
00:01:945 - add a d, you're following the vocal actually isn't my style, but this is not a reason, I'll give you one, to be honest I think that at lower diffs like Kantan and Futsuu you should add a little rest after big notes cause newbies don't have enough reaction.
00:05:332 - add a don/kat, add some 1/2 notes. Ok, this one looks nice. I took k
00:07:106 - same as above, you should consider to add some 1/1 notes to follow the vocal Same as above, there is a big note before so I'll keep
00:08:235 - add a don here, a lower pitch here and you can add a 1/2 notes here as a example. looks reasonable, fixed.
00:09:848 - same as above, add a don/kat actually, there is a don.
00:12:268 - It's repeating, so if you applied the don at 00:01:945, you should add here too. yeah consistency, right? keep as I did on intro.
00:13:074 - add a don here, vocal sound and 1/2. consistency, yeah.
00:15:655 - add a don/kat here, just consider to add some 1/2 notes and it's is nice to following the vocal. consistency again, fixed
00:17:429 - add a don here, same as above. keep for the same reason as others

the spread can improve a lot by adding more 1/2 in Futsuu, spread on note and structure, yeah, but about stars I don't think so. GL for rank. Thank you!

Click me!

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Underforest

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Underforest 2016-04-30T15:23:47+00:00

MkGuh wrote:
What the fuck?! You have just lost two BNs for your map... This is really bad luck in my opinion lol

Anyways, good luck with further process o.o7

Ty

KuranteMelodii wrote:
Ask Irreversible for a diff

XD nu

I'll update when I get home

Marianna

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Joined July 2015

Marianna 2016-04-30T15:30:39+00:00

Underforest wrote:
KuranteMelodii wrote:
Ask Irreversible for a diff
XD nu

I'll update when I get home

NOOOOOOO
ok

-Sh1n1-

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-Sh1n1- 2016-04-30T18:04:21+00:00

Hime: Marianna

bakaaa!! :3

Underforest

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Underforest 2016-04-30T20:05:30+00:00

OK XD
Fixed description and re-added Kantan
Tried to fix gap between :p

Marianna

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Marianna 2016-04-30T20:41:23+00:00

Underforest wrote:
OK XD
Fixed description and re-added Kantan
Tried to fix gap between :p

Fix again xD

Underforest

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Underforest 2016-05-01T00:05:37+00:00

Auto-mod para el Sh1n1

[Sh1n1's Fuutsu]
En tu dificultad, encontré unas cosas que están haciendo que el star rating aumente demasiado y el gap entre esta diff y el Kantan ya remapeado (1.34*) sean muy grandes.

Elimina todas estas notas:
00:02:752 (6) - 00:05:332 (13) - 00:09:848 (24) - 00:13:074 (32) - 00:15:655 (39) - 00:22:590 (54)

Cambia esta nota a Don: 00:22:913 (55)

Debería estar por debajo de 2.20* Fixed via forum PM

Volta

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Joined March 2014

Volta 2016-05-01T05:03:53+00:00

randomly mod.

[Nardo's Oni]
00:03:397 (14,15,16) - disunified with 00:13:720 (77,78,79,80,81) - the first one looks similar with muzu.
00:24:364 - the flow suddenly dropped too much here imo. how about make triplet here (ddk) for gradually less the density to the end

[Nardo's Muzukashii]
00:05:010 - delete? follow vocal more nicely, similar with 00:02:429 -
00:15:332 - ^

good luck!

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2016-05-01T05:54:33+00:00

Volta wrote:
randomly mod.

[Nardo's Oni]
00:03:397 (14,15,16) - disunified with 00:13:720 (77,78,79,80,81) - the first one looks similar with muzu. fixed
00:24:364 - the flow suddenly dropped too much here imo. how about make triplet here (ddk) for gradually less the density to the end added the 1/4 at 00:24:687 - instead.

[Nardo's Muzukashii]
00:05:010 - delete? follow vocal more nicely, similar with 00:02:429 - Retained to keep the pattern length comparable with 00:02:590 (7,8,9,10,11,12) -
00:15:332 - ^ same as ^

good luck!

Thanks for your mod Volta~

Update: http://puu.sh/oC4tw.rar

_handholding

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Joined April 2014

_handholding 2016-05-05T15:45:08+00:00

How come you're adding so many diffs when it was so close to ranking the other day?

I know I did but I was trolling

Okoayu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

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Okoayu 2016-05-05T16:26:53+00:00

Maybe he's a troll as well..?

Underforest

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Underforest 2016-05-05T21:53:21+00:00

stop stalking xd
i'm not a troll, I just feel this needs an Extra plus Taiko diffs too (for rank obviously)
Anyway, I lost 2 BNs before

Silky

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Silky 2016-05-07T12:50:36+00:00

http://puu.sh/oJntn/13858d5948.zip

Underforest

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Underforest 2016-05-07T17:13:33+00:00

ty

Silky

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Silky 2016-05-07T18:05:37+00:00

Are you kidding?
if you did change gd without my consent again, I'll add you to blacklist

Underforest

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Underforest 2016-05-07T18:13:30+00:00

yea, i said no changes, but this was because drain time

Mekki

Mekki 2016-05-07T18:30:30+00:00

Dude, I wonder how many times people will have to say for you stop changing things without permission. Even if it has something that it's bad or you'd like to change, CONTACT the mapper first, this is like really annoying.

Underforest

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Underforest 2016-05-07T18:45:24+00:00

i understood this, anyway, pls let's get back on topic
cause this thread have so many pages and more drama will cause this thread be locked (anti-bubble)

Fycho

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Fycho 2016-05-08T07:46:45+00:00

[General]

00:28:719 (1) – most difficultie use a slilder here but don’t silence the slidertick hitsounds, the tick sounds quite noisy, please reduce the volume.

[Walao's Princess]

AR9.3 feels fast for this difficulty while ar9 fits best, since you don’t haver complicated patterns or very large spaces.
00:08:558 (3,5) -why do you overlap these two objects? It doesn’t look well and just random placed. To avoid this you could move it to (205,58) around
00:09:203 (6) -this note overlapped by hutburst and the body of 00:08:558 (3) - is quite not easy to read, try moving it to (273, 210),it’s much more comfortable for playing.
00:26:461 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -The NC spamming is quite bad and unneeded. Usually we add new combo when the pattern is quite different from the flows which is around the pattern. But your this jump pattern 00:26:461 (1,2,1,2,1,2) – is just back and forth jumps, no matter the spaces or structurtes are similar as 00:23:881 (2,3,4) -or 00:24:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -. The drums of music are same as those too. New combo doesn’t help reading at this case.

[Mamayu's Extra]

00:08:719 (1) -miss a whistle on slider head I guess, there is a kick-drum in music here.
00:21:300 (2,3) -how about making them a 1/2 slider to emphasize the cymbal of 00:21:300 -better?

[Marianna's Insane]

00:21:461 -You probably miss a note here, otherwise the space of 00:21:300 -and 00:21:622 – is too small, the anti-jump is not good when playing since the music is still strong.
00:22:429 (2) –‘s slidertail and 00:22:832 (3) -need normal-sampleset to follow the drums beats of music imo.
00:23:559 (1,2,1) -why do you speed-up these sliders? They are inconsistent with neither 00:24:848 (1) -or 00:26:139 (1,3) -. I strongly suggest you use 1.12x speed for consistency. Also your space of 00:23:559 (1,2) – is quite small considering they are a speed-up sliders.
00:28:397 -noise slidertrick hitsounds, try reducing volume to 30%
00:27:429 (1,1,1) -considering the difficulty is an easy Insane that’s onlu 4.23 stars, I don’t reccommen you split 1/4 rhythms so large. Moreover the slidertails are not directing the next slider’heads, it’s quite unfriend to players that can only play this difficulty, It causes sliderbreaks. There are two ways to fix them: change the rhythm gap to 1/2 from 1/4; the other way is not splitting them and make a good direction from tail to head such as http://puu.sh/oKgIX/4ea3aed9c6.jpg, http://puu.sh/oKgJA/4f5d5b2d49.jpg

[Mk's Hard]

00:05:493 (1,2) – how about trying this for better flow? http://puu.sh/oKgN7/a7503f0504.jpg. Just stack 00:05:493 (1) –‘s head to 00:04:848 (3) –‘s tail first.
00:20:332 (3) -the clap on tail doesn’t fit music well. It should be a kick drum here.
00:27:913 (2) -weird overmapping. The note is not snapped to any beat in music, making it clickable is uncomforting the playing.

[Normal]

00:06:139 (5) – I believe 1/2 slider can start from 00:05:977 – and add a circle to 00:06:461 to follow vocal like http://puu.sh/oKh6l/6d886176be.jpg.
, for consistency of 00:03:397 (4) –
00:16:461 (5) -^
00:26:784 (2,3,4,1) – inconsistent space, it’s not recommended for normal difficulty, you’d better choose 0.8x space here.

[Easy]

00:08:235 (3) -it’s not a good choice to ignore snare drum 00:08:397 – to follow the vocal, it breaks the rhythm and is uncomfortable to play. Try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/oKhgg/8ebdf57d8c.jpg
00:18:558 (3) -^

GL

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