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XVoIR
851 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
XVoIR

Yales wrote:

Hello! crn request :3
[General]
Epilepsy warning is a must. Also check Aimod there's some tag conflicts with Gay Bar lol done and lol i forgot about tags here
[Hard]
  1. 00:11:188 (3) - Move the point of the tail around x460y148 to make a nice blanket. fixed
  2. 00:14:958 (2) - ^ x372y164 ^
  3. 00:22:997 (3) - Try something like that? http://puu.sh/nCP7R/73566fe81f.jpg 00:23:489 (4) - would look a bit less randomly positionned. Then adjust 00:23:653 (1) - i hope i did it fine
  4. 00:32:178 (3) - It would look neater if you stack properly with the end of 00:30:866 (2) - done!
  5. 00:33:653 (4) - Move it around x260y180 for blanket
  6. 00:34:145 (1) - x351y242 and the point of the tail around x272y356 then 00:34:637 (2) - I'd say x240y247 and you could probably let the jump to 00:34:801 (3) - somehow done
  7. 00:36:768 (1) - x184 y256 so 00:36:112 (2,3,1) - will be an actual triangle and I think it would go along better with 00:35:456 (1) - lol good idea
  8. 00:40:702 (1) - x143y320 done!
  9. 00:35:456 (1,2,1,2) - I would really remove the claps on the end, sounds so bad :c i guess done
[Insane]
  1. The map is overall cool, but I have the same remarks to make than in Hard... I don't know if you will agree with those so this is a bit awkward..
  2. 00:03:811 (4) - Try at least to fix those blankets... You just have to move it around x340y68 moved
  3. 00:19:220 (4) - It would flow better if you Ctrl+J the slider I think. let's try
  4. 00:27:587 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/nCPxU/fe15c20fa3.jpg done
  5. 00:43:325 (1) - I find the spacing really confusing tbh try to move it around x260y32 to at least keep the same flow done
  6. 00:35:456 (1,2,1,2) - I'd remove the claps on the end removed
  7. 00:43:325 (1) - x384y80 would have the same effect in gameplay but it would be smoother to play especially because of better reading em, so x260y32 or x384y80?
[Aniki]
  1. 00:19:712 (1) - Try to put this shape or something to flow better with the next slider. http://puu.sh/nCPVZ/62cdf79097.jpg done!
  2. 00:35:456 (1,2,1,2) - Remove clap on the end, it's sooo loud :c remooooved
  3. 00:41:276 (2) - I would remove to make more sense with your previous stream. Then I would remove NC here 00:41:194 (1) - and add it here 00:41:357 (3) - instead. Like this : http://puu.sh/nCQ2b/0abc224cbf.jpg
done!
[Gay Bar]
  1. 00:05:450 (2) - Stack properly with 00:04:794 (5) - ? It would look neater. stacked (5) with (2) ;]
  2. 00:17:581 (2) - I would move it to x400 y176 and 00:17:745 (3) - to x300y140. It looks better overall in my point of view. definitely better
  3. 00:21:024 (2) - NC, totally different rhythm + speed up comapred to the previous slider.
  4. 00:33:489 (1) - Add finish not sure why
  5. 00:35:456 (1,2,1,2) - Remove clap at the end please, so loud again done!
Fun set :p
Good luck! i'll need it
thanks a lot!
MrDorian
448 posts
Joined April 2012
MrDorian

Yales wrote:

[MrDorian's Normal+]
  1. I find your rhythm really cool But I sincerly think you could improve the placement of your objects. For example. 00:28:243 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Nothing to say about the rhythm it's just great. The flow is cool too. But hey, the fact that 00:30:046 (4) - touch this slider 00:28:899 (1) - and isn't stacked with 00:28:735 (4) - doesn't feel neat in my point of view. I don't what you think about it though. I stacked it, i think now it'll be good
  2. 00:06:270 (4) - Would be cool if you stack properly with the end of 00:03:974 (1) - It's totally visible and kill the neat. repaired
  3. 00:07:909 (2) - The random overlap with 00:06:597 (1) - doesn't feel that neat ???
  4. 00:10:532 (1) - Stack properly with 00:09:220 (1) - done
  5. 00:31:522 (1) - stack with 00:30:210 (1) - or just don't overlap stacked
  6. 00:40:046 (2) - ^ ???
caren_sk
782 posts
Joined October 2010
caren_sk
http://puu.sh/nIBpv/e86b2ba53c.osu

thx Yales !!


[CRN's GOLD FINGER]
00:35:456 (1,1,1,1,1) - So cool! thx
00:37:423 (5,6) - I think it would sound better if you would add soft sampleset at the tails.nice idea fix
00:38:899 (7) - It's 1/8!no change,but i think too
00:42:997 (5) - NC? To prevent the new spacing OR nc here 00:43:325 (5) - cause new sound. Other diffs did it imo!fix
Really fun diff!!
XVoIR
851 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
XVoIR
updated!
-Atri-
3,047 posts
Joined March 2013
-Atri-
what the
XVoIR
851 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
XVoIR
hai
Intelli
842 posts
Joined July 2014
Intelli
Timing Check:

I checked in both Audacity and ingame, and came up with around 1,364 for the first timing point and 22,354 for the 2nd

First point:


Second point:

(Looks better from this angle, very confusing up close, especially in the top line)

This is my best guess, but you can go with whatever you think is correct :3
XVoIR
851 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
XVoIR
Somehow fixed timing using your values and messin' with them a bit :^
Testo
603 posts
Joined November 2014
Testo
From my queue:)
[General]

  • OD8 for last diff? maybe 9?
[extra]
  1. 00:32:835 -unnecessary longstream(its very good at insane diff only because sliders is realy good for rhythm)
[MrDorian's Normal+]
  1. 00:01:356 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - overlap looks ugly
  2. 00:11:847 (1,2) - same
[estellia-'s Easy]
  1. Now, you're going to want to use Distance Snap for most of an Easy.(c) wiki.
    You need regular DS at this diff





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XVoIR
851 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
XVoIR

Testo wrote:

From my queue:)
[General]

  • OD8 for last diff? maybe 9?
[extra]
  1. 00:32:835 -unnecessary longstream(its very good at insane diff only because sliders is realy good for rhythm) nerfed ending of this stream
[MrDorian's Normal+]
  1. 00:01:356 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - overlap looks ugly
  2. 00:11:847 (1,2) - same
[estellia-'s Easy]
  1. Now, you're going to want to use Distance Snap for most of an Easy.(c) wiki.
    You need regular DS at this diff





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gonna redirect to other mappers!
LeQuack
516 posts
Joined September 2015
LeQuack
From my NM Queue

Hard
00:02:339 (3) - Change this to a note
00:10:372 (3) - Unnecessary note
00:24:966 (1) - I think this would do better as a repeat slider that goes to the red tick and repeats once
00:35:458 (1) - I think this would do well as two notes to be similar with the next part which is the same in the song
00:43:327 (1) - It would make sense for a spinner to go from here until 00:44:639

Insane
00:03:815 (4) - Unnecessary note
00:10:372 (4,1) - Swap this so the 4 has NC and the 1 does not
00:11:028 (3) - NC
00:27:425 (5,1) - Same as ^^
00:32:671 (6,1) - Also same ^
00:36:770 (3) - NC so the previous section is emphasized more
00:38:245 (4) - NC
00:39:311 (9,1) - Swap so 9 is NC and 1 is not
00:43:327 (1) - Like in previous diff a spinner would fit well here (Same length as previous difficulty)

Cool map :D
XVoIR
851 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
XVoIR

LeQuack wrote:

From my NM Queue

Hard
00:02:339 (3) - Change this to a note no :(
00:10:372 (3) - Unnecessary note welp, there should be smth 1/8 but it's hard
00:24:966 (1) - I think this would do better as a repeat slider that goes to the red tick and repeats once it'd break distance too much
00:35:458 (1) - I think this would do well as two notes to be similar with the next part which is the same in the song somehow fixed
00:43:327 (1) - It would make sense for a spinner to go from here until 00:44:639 I don't want endin' spinners there :(

Insane
00:03:815 (4) - Unnecessary note nah, there's definitely a sound
00:10:372 (4,1) - Swap this so the 4 has NC and the 1 does not not sure
00:11:028 (3) - NC
00:27:425 (5,1) - Same as ^^
00:32:671 (6,1) - Also same ^
00:36:770 (3) - NC so the previous section is emphasized more done
00:38:245 (4) - NC fixed NC
00:39:311 (9,1) - Swap so 9 is NC and 1 is not
00:43:327 (1) - Like in previous diff a spinner would fit well here (Same length as previous difficulty) same

Cool map :D
Fixed few things, thanks a lot :^
Exile-
Elite Storyboarder
449 posts
Joined April 2013
Exile-
[General]

Why Storyboard and the video in the same map? You can't watch both at once.
"oh god.jpg" should scale from 0.639322916, not 1.

[Gay Bar]

00:03:159 (2) - Wyprostuj go tak jak 00:02:667 (1) -
00:03:651 (3,4) - Ctrl + G aby kontynuować ruch obrotowy. Dopasuj oczywiście spacing.
00:14:306 - Wystepuje tutaj mocny dźwięk który powinien być clickable. Pozatym 00:13:815 (5,6) - te slidery są bardzo podobne mimo że drugi jest o wiele mocniejszy. Zamień na dwa kółka
00:19:716 (1) - Moze cos takiego?
SPOILER
00:24:639 (5) - Proste lub górne uwypuklenie. ;)
00:31:852 (2,3,4) - Ten triple jest malo slyszalny. ogólnie 00:31:524 (1,2,3,4) - zrobilbym z tego patterna same jumpy na 1/2
00:33:327 (7,8) - 00:34:639 (7,8) - Czemu by tu nie zrobic sliderów? :o
00:35:786 (2,1,2) - Zrób je coraz szybsze

[Aniki]

00:05:126 (4,1,2) - Flow jest zbyt liniowy, zwłaszcza że w środku postawiłeś NC
00:02:175 (4) - Taki troche offbeat. Przy koncowce jest bardzo wyrazny dzwiek a poczatek slidera zaczyna sie od upbeatu
00:05:454 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Imo troche zbyt ekstremalne jak na poczatek. W kiai nie ma nawet takich jumpow. 00:05:454 (2,6,7) - Chyba tu zapomniales zestackowac
00:36:770 (1) - Zbyt podobne do poprzedniego patternu a ten slider rozpoczyna nową sekcje

[Extra]

00:16:765 (1) - Ctrl + G?
00:31:852 (2,3) - To powinno być sliderem jeśli zrobiles tak z 00:31:524 (1,4) -

[Insane]

00:11:274 (5) - Skoro ten double już połączyłeś to czemu nie 00:11:028 (3,4) - ?
00:31:524 (1,2,1) - Większy spacing!
00:38:573 (3,4) - Damn! Nie mozesz tak stackowac upbeatu przed downbeatem. Postaw 00:38:573 (3) - blizej 00:38:245 (2) -
00:43:327 (1) - W poprzednich diffach stawiales to o wiele dalej. Czemu tutaj jest to tak blisko?
XVoIR
851 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
XVoIR

Exile- wrote:

[General]

Why Storyboard and the video in the same map? You can't watch both at once.
"oh god.jpg" should scale from 0.639322916, not 1. niedługo usunę storyboard ok?

[Gay Bar]

00:03:159 (2) - Wyprostuj go tak jak 00:02:667 (1) - chyba fixed
00:03:651 (3,4) - Ctrl + G aby kontynuować ruch obrotowy. Dopasuj oczywiście spacing. zrobion
00:14:306 - Wystepuje tutaj mocny dźwięk który powinien być clickable. Pozatym 00:13:815 (5,6) - te slidery są bardzo podobne mimo że drugi jest o wiele mocniejszy. Zamień na dwa kółka zrobiłem super pięciokąt (?)
00:19:716 (1) - Moze cos takiego? też fixed
SPOILER
00:24:639 (5) - Proste lub górne uwypuklenie. ;) fixed
00:31:852 (2,3,4) - Ten triple jest malo slyszalny. ogólnie 00:31:524 (1,2,3,4) - zrobilbym z tego patterna same jumpy na 1/2
00:33:327 (7,8) - 00:34:639 (7,8) - Czemu by tu nie zrobic sliderów? :o bo to ma być element trudności :(
00:35:786 (2,1,2) - Zrób je coraz szybsze zwiększyłem SV na słowie FUCk

[Aniki]

00:05:126 (4,1,2) - Flow jest zbyt liniowy, zwłaszcza że w środku postawiłeś NC przeniosłem kulkajn
00:02:175 (4) - Taki troche offbeat. Przy koncowce jest bardzo wyrazny dzwiek a poczatek slidera zaczyna sie od upbeatu poprzestawiałem wszystko co sie dało lol
00:05:454 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Imo troche zbyt ekstremalne jak na poczatek. W kiai nie ma nawet takich jumpow. 00:05:454 (2,6,7) - Chyba tu zapomniales zestackowac NERF
00:36:770 (1) - Zbyt podobne do poprzedniego patternu a ten slider rozpoczyna nową sekcje zostawię to tak

[Extra]

00:16:765 (1) - Ctrl + G? ok
00:31:852 (2,3) - To powinno być sliderem jeśli zrobiles tak z 00:31:524 (1,4) - tbh nie wiem o co chodzi z tym :/

[Insane]

00:11:274 (5) - Skoro ten double już połączyłeś to czemu nie 00:11:028 (3,4) - ? em już
00:31:524 (1,2,1) - Większy spacing! zwiększon!!
00:38:573 (3,4) - Damn! Nie mozesz tak stackowac upbeatu przed downbeatem. Postaw 00:38:573 (3) - blizej 00:38:245 (2) - już
00:43:327 (1) - W poprzednich diffach stawiales to o wiele dalej. Czemu tutaj jest to tak blisko? już!
dzięki o/
Ambient
579 posts
Joined August 2013
Ambient
Heyo, since I can't find anything worth mentioning (as well as being minorly disturbed) have a star! (i should make that a rule in my queue)

GL man ;)
XVoIR
851 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
XVoIR
welp

thanks for star xD

and i'll really need luck
CyberX
494 posts
Joined December 2012
CyberX
Sorry man, i cant find much for this
i'll shot a star for you
Here we go my mod
note that everythings here is just my opinons
Insane
00:04:634 (3,4) - Blanket
00:16:765 (4) - 1/6 better
00:19:224 (4) - i prefer to make this not reverse, and add 1 hitcircle at 00:19:552 - stack it with the next slider
00:27:180 (4) - it was terrible, break the gameplay

Extra
00:13:651 (3,4) - too far from each other
00:16:765 (1) - 1/6 reverse slider
00:26:934 (1,2,3,4) - break the gameplay
00:32:835 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - too much,put some slider
00:38:737 (1,2,3,4,1) - after all the flow, you reverse it here, kind of wierd too play

Aniki -Extreme-
this is a beautiful map, cant get much problem
00:04:470 (2,3) - fix the blanket
00:16:765 (1) - 1/6
00:27:589 (1,2) - Fix blanket
00:33:327 (7,1) - gap too much

Gay Bar -Challenge-
i cant pass this map xD
since you alr make the CS small, i suggest you to lower the HP drain, or do the opposite
00:07:257 (3,4) - better blanket
00:16:765 (1) - 1/6


Thanks in advance for choosing my ModQ
Come again next time
Good Luck with your map
Cellina
1,004 posts
Joined March 2013
Cellina
actually there is a ranked map which contain both of video and sb but i cant remember lol
XVoIR
851 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
XVoIR

CyberX wrote:

Sorry man, i cant find much for this
i'll shot a star for you yay
Here we go my mod
note that everythings here is just my opinons
Insane
00:04:634 (3,4) - Blanket feexed
00:16:765 (4) - 1/6 better nah, it's definitely 1/3
00:19:224 (4) - i prefer to make this not reverse, and add 1 hitcircle at 00:19:552 - stack it with the next slider let's try this (I've improved this :^)
00:27:180 (4) - it was terrible, break the gameplay not anymore!

Extra
00:13:651 (3,4) - too far from each other it's Extra so you know
00:16:765 (1) - 1/6 reverse slider as above
00:26:934 (1,2,3,4) - break the gameplay eeeee
00:32:835 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - too much,put some slider nerfed :(
00:38:737 (1,2,3,4,1) - after all the flow, you reverse it here, kind of wierd too play I think it's fine

Aniki -Extreme-
this is a beautiful map, cant get much problem
00:04:470 (2,3) - fix the blanket aaaaa
00:16:765 (1) - 1/6 as above
00:27:589 (1,2) - Fix blanket mb it's fine now
00:33:327 (7,1) - gap too much it's fine tbh

Gay Bar -Challenge-
i cant pass this map xD Coz it's a challenge \:D/
since you alr make the CS small, i suggest you to lower the HP drain, or do the opposite nah ;]
00:07:257 (3,4) - better blanket idk where but fixed (2) and (4) whoops was looking at wrong diff - fixed now
00:16:765 (1) - 1/6aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa


Thanks in advance for choosing my ModQ
Come again next time
Good Luck with your map
thanks a lot~~~~~ 8-) 8-)

Reana wrote:

actually there is a ranked map which contain both of video and sb but i cant remember lol
maybe 8 Awesome Angles of YouTube, but there it was necessary
CyberX
494 posts
Joined December 2012
CyberX
NO KDS

There is 1 more diff that left behind,
sorry didnt know that you added new diff here
CRN's GOLD FINGER
Lower the Hp Drain pls.. too much
00:05:454 (2,5,7,8) - this slider ruin the gameplay, just feels not right, while the rhythm is alr good
00:16:765 (10,11,12,13) - unexpectedly come, prefer reverse slider
00:35:786 (1) - it suppose to be longer right?
Love this diff <3


Isnt much,but i just hate left things behind so..

Thanks again for chooseing my ModQ
Len
2,812 posts
Joined June 2012
Len
from q

Normal+:
  1. 00:24:311 (2) - what about avoiding that overlap with 1

Hard:
  1. 00:23:491 (4) - distance is too small
  2. 00:32:180 (3,4) - distance is too big pls
  3. 00:38:737 (2) - small

orz
MrDorian
448 posts
Joined April 2012
MrDorian

Len wrote:

from q

Normal+:
  1. 00:24:311 (2) - what about avoiding that overlap with 1 I-i d-don't u-understand q.q



orz
XVoIR
851 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
XVoIR

Len wrote:

from q
Hard:
  1. 00:23:491 (4) - distance is too small idk between which notes
  2. 00:32:180 (3,4) - distance is too big pls fixed
  3. 00:38:737 (2) - small I have no idea

orz
thanks~
Strategas
1,378 posts
Joined July 2013
Strategas
queue

[CRN]

00:16:765 (10,11,12,13) - slider and nc, it's dumb to not have any indication it's not 1/4

00:26:770 (4) - jump doesn't make sense

00:27:425 (10) - 00:28:081 (3,6) - 00:29:393 (3,5) - 00:36:934 (2) - ^

00:34:147 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing increased for no reason

00:38:901 (7,8,9) - wrongly snapped, it's 1/8

nice spacing

[Gay Bar]

00:11:683 (9,1) - hope it's intentional flow break

00:21:028 (1) - strange that this part is equally spaced as parts before, it's rather intense. also the claps don't sound too well xd

00:32:671 (6,1) - you put those objects as if the slider was 1/8 more distence please

00:33:409 (8,1) - 00:34:721 (8,1) - too much

00:43:327 (1) - easy misread as 1/2 gap, cuz people don't make 1/4 gaps like this lel

[Aniki]

00:06:437 (9,1) - flow

00:21:028 (1,2,3,4,5) - what's with the clap spam, it doesn't sound nice

00:43:327 (1) - easy misread as 1/2 gap, cuz people don't make 1/4 gaps like this lel

[Extra]

nothing important, just has that clap spam before kiai

[Insane]

00:04:470 (2,3) - flow

00:19:224 (4) - kinda huge jump for no real reason

also has that clap spam thing


gl
XVoIR
851 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
XVoIR

Strategas wrote:

queue


[Gay Bar]

00:11:683 (9,1) - hope it's intentional flow break em ofc

00:21:028 (1) - strange that this part is equally spaced as parts before, it's rather intense. also the claps don't sound too well xd intensed

00:32:671 (6,1) - you put those objects as if the slider was 1/8 more distence please done

00:33:409 (8,1) - 00:34:721 (8,1) - too much plz it's playable and provides sort of challenge ;-;

00:43:327 (1) - easy misread as 1/2 gap, cuz people don't make 1/4 gaps like this lel idk i like this and it's fine i think that's why it is

[Aniki]

00:06:437 (9,1) - flow rotated

00:21:028 (1,2,3,4,5) - what's with the clap spam, it doesn't sound nice fixed

00:43:327 (1) - easy misread as 1/2 gap, cuz people don't make 1/4 gaps like this lel idk i like this and it's fine i think that's why it is

[Extra]

nothing important, just has that clap spam before kiai

[Insane]

00:04:470 (2,3) - flow did linear flow

00:19:224 (4) - kinda huge jump for no real reason i think fixed

also has that clap spam thing aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa


gl
ty
Gaia
2,808 posts
Joined May 2013
Gaia
[general]
the way normal is mapped the spike from E->N is way too big. u need a real normal diff imo

extrememe and challenge's names are unrankable as they are :x

[easy]
also 00:14:470 (1,2) - 3/2 spacings arent great for easies either, try reversing the slider
00:17:093 (1,2) - these can be reversed too
00:35:458 (1,2) - these bend into itself quite a lot and could be challenging for beginners

iirc 1/2 spacing in easy in high bpm is unrankable but that might be outdated but still be careful

map is generally ok but i dont understand why the 1/2 density at the beginning is higher than the actual kiai which is 1/1 spam

[normal]
00:03:323 (2,3) - really hard to play imo
00:06:274 (4,5) - ^ try stacking or make them into 1/2 sliders
00:13:159 (2) - bad flow + overlap isnt good
00:13:815 (4) - ^
00:24:311 (2) - ^
00:26:278 (1) - ^
00:27:589 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this is a big slidertrain and is just way too cramped. aesthetically speaking isnt good either
00:31:524 (1) - bad flow, and another slidertrain

this diff is way too hard to sustain the spread in the set, u need to cut down on the slidertrains if u want to improve spread. either that or make another normal lol
also aesthetically speaking you'd want to avoid clustering cuz overlaps look really bad if u dunno how to utilize them

[hard]
00:06:601 (1,2,1,2) - i think u can make this rhythm more interesting! use more 1/1 sliders like u did at 00:01:356 (1,2,3) -
00:14:962 (2) - shorten to 1/1 and add circle at the end
00:19:716 (1) - the sliderend is really emphasized so u should have something clickable there
00:23:655 (1) -
00:24:966 (1,2) - doesnt look too good and has bad flow
00:34:639 (2) - confusing overlap
00:38:737 (2) - wrong spacing. too close
00:40:376 (2) - ^

[insane]
00:05:782 (4,5) - wats this rhythm
00:11:028 (3,4,5,6) - ^ like you're skipping a drum beat on the white tick whyy
00:24:966 (1,2,3,4) - messy and bad flow
00:38:901 (5) - reduce the repeat by 1

flow is okay but just really messy

Extra is basically the same, u should avoid overlaps if u dont know how to use them. right now ur map is really messy so it looks bad

thats about it , good luck have fun!
BigEarsMau
786 posts
Joined June 2015
BigEarsMau


M4M from queue
Gonna mod only Hard and Insane bc u asked for it :3

[Hard]
  1. 00:10:536 (1) - Maybe make it more curved like this to improve flow
  2. 00:15:782 (1,2) - Blanket could be more tidy
  3. 00:24:639 (5,1) - ^
  4. 00:29:884 (3,1) - ^
  5. 00:27:098 (4) - Maybe blanket this with 00:27:589 (1) so it'll look tidier, as seen here
  6. 00:33:491 (3,4) - Blanket these two
  7. 00:43:409 - Maybe add a spinner?
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:028 (3,4,5,6) - This part troubles me. Make them into sliders like in 00:05:782 (4,5)
  2. 00:34:803 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stream looks ugly. Try to make them more curved like this
  3. 00:43:409 - Spinner?
Pretty nice diffs if you ask me :)

Hope this helps
Good luck in being ranked :)
XVoIR
851 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
XVoIR
will respond after 23.04
exams and you know
caren_sk
782 posts
Joined October 2010
caren_sk
upd plz
osu file format v14

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fixed mod
XVoIR
851 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
XVoIR
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A s h e m u
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A s h e m u
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XVoIR
851 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
XVoIR

Gaia wrote:

[general]
extrememe and challenge's names are unrankable as they are :x so I need to change Aniki -Extreme- to Extreme -Aniki- or what

[hard]
00:06:601 (1,2,1,2) - i think u can make this rhythm more interesting! use more 1/1 sliders like u did at 00:01:356 (1,2,3) - dun
00:14:962 (2) - shorten to 1/1 and add circle at the end yaaaa
00:19:716 (1) - the sliderend is really emphasized so u should have something clickable there ya but i think it's fine
00:23:655 (1) - idk how I could make this work
00:24:966 (1,2) - doesnt look too good and has bad flow i think fixed
00:34:639 (2) - confusing overlap idk it's not that bad
00:38:737 (2) - wrong spacing. too close mb fixed
00:40:376 (2) - ^ above

[insane]
00:05:782 (4,5) - wats this rhythm
00:11:028 (3,4,5,6) - ^ like you're skipping a drum beat on the white tick whyy focused on claps
00:24:966 (1,2,3,4) - messy and bad flow idk how can I fix this but huh
00:38:901 (5) - reduce the repeat by 1 nah

flow is okay but just really messy

Extra is basically the same, u should avoid overlaps if u dont know how to use them. right now ur map is really messy so it looks bad

thats about it , good luck have fun!
gonna fix overlaps~~~~

BigEarsMau wrote:



M4M from queue
Gonna mod only Hard and Insane bc u asked for it :3

[Hard]
  1. 00:10:536 (1) - Maybe make it more curved like this to improve flow done
  2. 00:15:782 (1,2) - Blanket could be more tidy
  3. 00:24:639 (5,1) - ^
  4. 00:29:884 (3,1) - ^
  5. 00:27:098 (4) - Maybe blanket this with 00:27:589 (1) so it'll look tidier, as seen here
  6. 00:33:491 (3,4) - Blanket these two all blankets (hopefully) fixed
  7. 00:43:409 - Maybe add a spinner? nah
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:028 (3,4,5,6) - This part troubles me. Make them into sliders like in 00:05:782 (4,5)
  2. 00:34:803 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stream looks ugly. Try to make them more curved like this
  3. 00:43:409 - Spinner? no spinners allowed >:(
Pretty nice diffs if you ask me :)

Hope this helps
Good luck in being ranked :)
thanks alot~~

A s h e m u wrote:

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MrDorian
448 posts
Joined April 2012
MrDorian

Gaia wrote:

[general]

[normal]
00:03:323 (2,3) - really hard to play imo not really
00:06:274 (4,5) - ^ try stacking or make them into 1/2 sliders kay
00:13:159 (2) - bad flow + overlap isnt good how is it overlapped and why is it bad flow
00:13:815 (4) - ^ changed??
00:24:311 (2) - ^ changed??
00:26:278 (1) - ^ well, nope
00:27:589 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this is a big slidertrain and is just way too cramped. aesthetically speaking isnt good either changed??
00:31:524 (1) - bad flow, and another slidertrain changed??????
Zyl
520 posts
Joined October 2013
Zyl
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i don't know why but this sounds like gay porn xDDD

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General Things
*Add more tags
*Create a beginner

[Easy]

Easy diff
Well this is a "Easy" diff so...

00:01:356 (1,2) - You can not do this in a easy
00:03:651 (4,1) - Same
00:06:601 (1,2) - same
00:11:847 (1,2) - same
00:14:142 (4,1) - same
00:07:913 (3,1) - blanket?
00:23:655 (3,1) - fix flow
00:35:458 (1,2) - doesn't look good

[MrDorian's Normal+]

MrDorian's Normal+ diff
00:09:060 (3) - unnecessary note

i evade the mostly of the time this diff because haves so much overlap A LOT! more than the necessary in a normal diff, sorry normal + (its better rename it to advanced)

[Hard]

Hard diff
00:01:356 (1,2) - awful blanket sorry but you need to fix it
00:06:601 (1,2) - fix flow
00:14:470 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:17:093 (1,2) - these arrows aren't really necessary
00:27:098 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:29:884 (3) - remeber if you are creating a hard do "soft jumps" of 1,5 because it will really hard for the player
00:38:081 (1,2) - unnecessary jump and fix flow
00:42:180 (1,2,3) - doesn't fit with the music

[Extra]

Extra diff
Please re-map this diff and make it a little harder but this diff isn't rankable for a extra
XVoIR
851 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
XVoIR

Trent83 wrote:

From my queue




*= Advices

i don't know why but this sounds like gay porn xDDD coz it is

[General]

General Things
*Add more tags why?
*Create a beginner nah, spread is fine

[Hard]

Hard diff
00:01:356 (1,2) - awful blanket sorry but you need to fix it maybe fixed
00:06:601 (1,2) - fix flow it's fine
00:14:470 (1,2) - fix blanket fix'd
00:17:093 (1,2) - these arrows aren't really necessary i think it's good
00:27:098 (4,1) - fix blanket hopefully fixed
00:29:884 (3) - remeber if you are creating a hard do "soft jumps" of 1,5 because it will really hard for the player idk i guess it's good now so i'll leave it
00:38:081 (1,2) - unnecessary jump and fix flow fixed flow but jump is still here
00:42:180 (1,2,3) - doesn't fit with the music ya i should make it stream

[Extra]

Extra diff
Please re-map this diff and make it a little harder but this diff isn't rankable for a extra Lol why, I know it has I star but it's definitely harder than Insane
thanks~
emilia
893 posts
Joined October 2012
emilia
accepted most

pls recheck hs for me i think i fucked some up ;w;
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XVoIR
851 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
XVoIR
checked HS and updated
Janpai
1,288 posts
Joined March 2015
Janpai

NM from my Queue

General
  1. The gap between easy & normal+ is pretty high, maybe reconstruct the patterns of the normal+ into a proper normal diff or add a proper normal instead?

estellia-'s Easy
  1. Lower down your OD to 2 and also why 1.00x SV? sliders are pretty fast for new players because the BPM is 180 above. Basically it's always 0.80x SV
  2. 00:14:142 (4) - Place to x:171 y:29? since 00:14:470 (1) - is going down so that you can have S-like flow in those objects
  3. 00:21:028 (1,2) - Increase the spacing between these two they are nearly overlapping
  4. 00:28:245 (2,3,4) - Just a flow suggestion http://puu.sh/oDi3K/8d17905a34.jpg
  5. 00:34:147 (3) - Ctrl+J?
  6. I like this diff =3=)b

MrDorian's Normal+
  1. Use CS 3.3 instead? man idk to mod this diff xDD
  2. Why DS is not consistent and also 1.45-1.50 o.o that's too much even it's called as advanced normal
  3. 00:03:323 (2) - Ctrl+G this somehow this pattern kills the flow
  4. 00:11:847 (1,2) - Overlap don't look nice here
  5. 00:17:749 (2,1) - Why placing a sudden overlap?
  6. 00:26:114 (4,1) - It's doesn't look nice at all in that slider body
  7. 00:42:016 (1) - This should be clickable (the white tick)
  8. This diff needs to be polished more, looks like a light hard imo

Hard
  1. Use CS 3.7 instead? cuz Normal+ uses 3.5 ;w;
  2. 00:01:356 (1,2) - Blanket is a bit off
  3. 00:19:716 (1) - This should be clickable because there is a rising sound here
  4. 00:33:655 (4,2) - Stack? it's either of the two
  5. 00:38:081 (1,2) - I think it's already ok if you follow the rapid background sound here since this is hard, make it a cirle then a triple or circle then a 1/4 reverse slider and also put note on 00:38:573 - if you gonna follow the background sound
  6. Not my type of mapping but flows good =3=)b

Insane
  1. Why OD 7.7? maybe reduce it to 7 too much for a 4.33* insane
  2. 00:05:782 (4,5) - Can't really define what you are following here
  3. 00:06:274 (6,2) - Their overlap is pretty noticeable, move away the circle a little bit?
  4. 00:18:405 (1,3) - Why overlap? it doesn't fit on this kind of slider
  5. 00:30:868 (3,1) - ^
As i said on my rules, I can't mod extras xD goodluck! hope my mod helps
emilia
893 posts
Joined October 2012
emilia

Janpai wrote:

estellia-'s Easy
  1. Lower down your OD to 2 and also why 1.00x SV? sliders are pretty fast for new players because the BPM is 180 above. Basically it's always 0.80x SV changed OD cuz i never know what to put xd but i doubt i'll change the SV, its not that bad to play and its too hard to change everything now LOL
  2. 00:14:142 (4) - Place to x:171 y:29? since 00:14:470 (1) - is going down so that you can have S-like flow in those objects sure
  3. 00:21:028 (1,2) - Increase the spacing between these two they are nearly overlapping i cant do it in a way that makes it better ;(
  4. 00:28:245 (2,3,4) - Just a flow suggestion http://puu.sh/oDi3K/8d17905a34.jpg tried something else thats similar, i like this change!
  5. 00:34:147 (3) - Ctrl+J? nah theres no reason to, besides it leads into the next slider
  6. I like this diff =3=)b thank you! (*＾▽＾)／
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MrDorian
448 posts
Joined April 2012
MrDorian

Janpai wrote:

MrDorian's Normal+
  1. Use CS 3.3 instead? man idk to mod this diff xDD changeed
  2. Why DS is not consistent and also 1.45-1.50 o.o that's too much even it's called as advanced normal one tells me to make bigger gaps, one tells me to do smaller gaps, gaaaaaaaaaah. I'll make it 1.4x. And it isn't too much
  3. 00:03:323 (2) - Ctrl+G this somehow this pattern kills the flow kay
  4. 00:11:847 (1,2) - Overlap don't look nice here tried to avoid
  5. 00:17:749 (2,1) - Why placing a sudden overlap? because of the sound, which is like "AAAAaaa aaaAAAA" and it fits
  6. 00:26:114 (4,1) - It's doesn't look nice at all in that slider body changed
  7. 00:42:016 (1) - This should be clickable (the white tick) nah
  8. This diff needs to be polished more, looks like a light hard imo
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