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Diao Ye Zong - Genki ni Natta Toki no Uta [OsuMania]

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17VA
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MadBricktree
From the RRM Mania Modding Queue

0|1|2|3|4|5|6

My side of the M4M.

Kirisame Sange+
00:18:453 (18453|0,18453|1,18453|3,18646|0,18646|1,18646|3,18840|1,18840|3,18840|0) - The chords here are a bit too big for the sound intensity imo.
00:19:130 (19130|6,19227|6,19324|6) - Could've been avoided.
00:19:517 (19517|3,19517|6,19614|3,19614|6) - Same goes for these.
02:30:840 (150840|6,150937|6) - ^
02:40:517 (160517|1,160517|5,160517|2,160517|0,160517|4,160904|2,160904|0,160904|6,160904|5,160904|3,161292|6,161292|3,161292|4,161292|1,161292|0,161679|4,161679|1,161679|3,161679|5,161679|2,162066|5,162066|3,162066|6,162066|1,162066|0) - I think it'll better fit the song if these LNs were connected better rather than being cut off by 1/4.
03:50:195 (230195|0,230243|1,230292|0,230340|1,230437|1) - :o
03:50:824 (230824|5,230921|5,231017|5) - :o :o :o
04:03:569 (243569|0,243569|6,243666|0,243666|6) - Doesn't really fit the song imo.
04:06:743 (246743|6,246935|6,247127|6,247319|6,247512|6,247704|6,247896|6) - That's a pretty long anchor.
04:12:704 (252704|0,252896|0,253089|0,253281|0,253473|0,253666|0,253858|0,254050|0) - Same goes for this.
04:28:569 (268569|3,268569|4,268569|6,268666|4,268666|3,268666|6) - Not a good jack imo.
04:40:877 (280877|0,280877|2,280973|2,280973|0) - ^
04:53:185 (293185|6,293281|6) - ^
04:59:339 (299339|3,299339|5,299435|3,299435|5) - ^
05:14:728 (314728|2,314728|0,314824|2,314824|0) - ^
05:28:679 (328679|3,328871|3,329064|3,329256|3,329449|3,329641|3,329833|3) - Anchor
05:31:277 (331277|1,331277|2,331373|2,331373|1,331661|3,331758|3) - Bad jacks.

Gotta love those LNs.
Good luck on ranking.
Topic Starter
17VA

Minseo2000 wrote:

From the RRM Mania Modding Queue

0|1|2|3|4|5|6

My side of the M4M.

Kirisame Sange+
00:18:453 (18453|0,18453|1,18453|3,18646|0,18646|1,18646|3,18840|1,18840|3,18840|0) - The chords here are a bit too big for the sound intensity imo.

- OK fixed

00:19:130 (19130|6,19227|6,19324|6) - Could've been avoided. - Fixed
00:19:517 (19517|3,19517|6,19614|3,19614|6) - Same goes for these. - Fixed
02:30:840 (150840|6,150937|6) - ^ - Fixed
02:40:517 (160517|1,160517|5,160517|2,160517|0,160517|4,160904|2,160904|0,160904|6,160904|5,160904|3,161292|6,161292|3,161292|4,161292|1,161292|0,161679|4,161679|1,161679|3,161679|5,161679|2,162066|5,162066|3,162066|6,162066|1,162066|0) - I think it'll better fit the song if these LNs were connected better rather than being cut off by 1/4.
03:50:195 (230195|0,230243|1,230292|0,230340|1,230437|1) - :o
03:50:824 (230824|5,230921|5,231017|5) - :o :o :o
04:03:569 (243569|0,243569|6,243666|0,243666|6) - Doesn't really fit the song imo. - This part has double drum So I map like this
04:06:743 (246743|6,246935|6,247127|6,247319|6,247512|6,247704|6,247896|6) - That's a pretty long anchor.
04:12:704 (252704|0,252896|0,253089|0,253281|0,253473|0,253666|0,253858|0,254050|0) - Same goes for this.
04:28:569 (268569|3,268569|4,268569|6,268666|4,268666|3,268666|6) - Not a good jack imo.
04:40:877 (280877|0,280877|2,280973|2,280973|0) - ^
04:53:185 (293185|6,293281|6) - ^
04:59:339 (299339|3,299339|5,299435|3,299435|5) - ^
05:14:728 (314728|2,314728|0,314824|2,314824|0) - ^
05:28:679 (328679|3,328871|3,329064|3,329256|3,329449|3,329641|3,329833|3) - Anchor - Following piano Sounds. Like This : http://puu.sh/ocMo3/92e04f04cd.png
05:31:277 (331277|1,331277|2,331373|2,331373|1,331661|3,331758|3) - Bad jacks.

Gotta love those LNs.
Good luck on ranking.
Thanks
arcwinolivirus
"Arcwinolivirus' M4M-only contract"

A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.


Song: Diao Ye Zong - Genki ni Natta Toki no Uta (Yooh)
Number of difficulties modded in my map: All 7Ks


Note:
• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I do not bite rawr.
• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.


[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: Background exceeds and larger than 1366x768. Fix this. It is also mentioned at AiMod.
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: would recommend preview time start at 03:51:743 - since its the kiai time and the main chorus.

AiMod:
• Just the image size fix.

Column:
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7K - |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Kirisame Sange+]
SPOILER
00:08:969 - add one or two more note here? it seems louder than 00:09:163 (9163|1,9163|3,9163|2,9163|0) - because of that chord piano sound which is similar to 00:09:550 (9550|3,9550|0,9550|1,9550|4,9550|5) -

00:19:324 (19324|6,19517|6) - suggesting to remove these notes. They are not different from the piano sound of 00:19:033 (19033|2,19033|0,19130|3,19130|5,19421|2,19421|0) - and also to avoid those sudden jacks which can throw off many players in this part.

00:20:066 (20066|4,20130|5) - these piano sounds seems off for me. I play in 25% playback rate and listen to it carefully. It feels it should be at 00:20:098 - and 00:20:146 -

00:44:582 - I think its better to add long notes here as it feels empty without it. Too awkward also since the violin-sound starts here.

00:56:582 (56582|6,56582|0) - add note to 2 and 6 because it has the same power or even stronger than 00:56:195 (56195|5,56195|4,56195|6,56195|3) -

00:57:163 (57163|6,57163|0) - ^

00:57:356 (57356|4,57356|2) - ^ but only add to 4

00:57:937 (57937|6,57937|0) - ^ add to 4, piano with the sudden violin sound.

01:02:969 (62969|0,63163|2) - how about changing them to mini long notes like you did to these violin sounds: 01:03:356 (63356|6,63550|4,63743|3,63937|5) -

01:10:711 (70711|0) - change to long note? because it is the same as these guys 01:10:904 (70904|5,71098|1,71292|4,71485|2) - and pretty similar to 01:13:808 (73808|6) -

01:23:872 (83872|5,83872|0,83872|1,83872|3,83872|4,83872|2,84259|3,84259|2,84259|1,84259|6,84259|5,84259|4,84646|6,84646|2,84646|0,84646|4) - I think its better if yuou map for those 1/8th sound we can hear between these notes. Just suggesting. you decide~

01:30:356 - add note/s here for that hihat-like sound.

01:30:743 - ^

01:36:163 - add note to 2 and 6, same sound as 01:35:775 (95775|4,95775|2) -

01:49:711 (109711|3,109711|6,109711|0,109711|4,109711|2) - remove one note here as it is not the same power/loud as 01:49:421 (109421|2,109421|0,109421|4,109421|3,109421|6) -

01:51:259 (111259|5,111259|2,111259|0,111259|1,111259|4,111259|6) - ^ same reason. And also this one has 6-noters which is really different than the previous one. would recommend to reduce it to 4-noter or 3 noters like you did at: 01:52:324 (112324|5,112324|6,112324|4) -

02:01:421 (121421|4,121421|1) - add one more note? strong sound here

02:28:130 (148130|2,148130|5) - I think this note should be the Long notes not the 02:28:324 (148324|5,148324|6,148324|3) - . Its because of the chord-like piano sound here.

02:28:517 (148517|2,148517|0,148711|4,148711|1) - ^ I really don't think the Long note fits for the vocals. Too awkward imo not to mention they are 3-Layered Long notes.

02:30:792 (150792|5) - move to 4 for comfortability and stair pattern.

02:51:259 - you can add note here as well like you did at 02:50:872 (170872|4,170872|2) - because of hihat.

02:57:356 - and 02:57:453 - add note for the beat sound?

03:18:550 (198550|4,198646|6,198743|6) - what these notes represent? I assume its the hihat but it seems not right. Suggeting to remove. I prefer long notes for that as solution.

03:20:098 (200098|4,200195|6,200292|6,200388|6,200485|6) - ^

03:37:614 - add note. Beat.

03:37:711 - add note. Hihat.

03:49:421 (229421|1,229421|3,229421|0,229421|2,229517|4,229517|5,229517|6,229614|1,229614|3,229614|2,229614|0,229711|6,229711|4,229711|5,229808|0,229808|1,229808|2,229904|3,229904|4,229904|5,229904|6,230001|1,230001|2,230001|0,230098|5,230098|3,230098|6,230098|4) - quite awkward imo because the sound here is not very strong and did not change compared to 03:48:743 (228743|4,228743|6,228840|0,228840|2,228937|6,228937|4,229033|0,229033|2,229130|4,229130|6,229227|2,229227|0,229324|6,229324|4) - I suggest to reduce the notes just like the before-notes.

04:27:896 (267896|1,267896|3,267896|2,267896|0,267993|5,267993|6,267993|4,268089|1,268089|3,268089|2,268089|0,268185|5,268185|4,268185|6,268281|1,268281|0,268281|2,268377|3,268377|5,268377|6,268377|4,268473|2,268473|1,268473|0,268569|3,268569|5,268569|4,268569|6) - ^ same reason. Way too much.

04:59:339 (299339|3) - remove. No cymbals occured here compared to 04:59:050 (299050|2,299050|3,299050|0,299050|1) -

05:00:589 (300589|2,300685|2,300781|2,300877|2) - feels awkward because I do not find any instrument to fit for these jacks. Same with 05:02:127 (302127|4,302223|4,302319|4,302416|4) - and especially 05:03:666 (303666|3,303762|3,303858|3,303954|3,304050|3) - .

and the rest seems.. out of my reach, sarry. I leave it to expert modders :v

[Overall]
The song is actually good, nice song pick!
Good luck and thank you for the contract, until next time :)


~ END OF CONTRACT ~
Topic Starter
17VA
BG, Preview Fixed Thanks

arcwinolivirus wrote:

[centre]BG, Preview Fixed Thanks


[Kirisame Sange+]
SPOILER
00:08:969 - add one or two more note here? it seems louder than 00:09:163 (9163|1,9163|3,9163|2,9163|0) - because of that chord piano sound which is similar to 00:09:550 (9550|3,9550|0,9550|1,9550|4,9550|5) -

- Reduced notes in upper part. Fixed.

00:19:324 (19324|6,19517|6) - suggesting to remove these notes. They are not different from the piano sound of 00:19:033 (19033|2,19033|0,19130|3,19130|5,19421|2,19421|0) - and also to avoid those sudden jacks which can throw off many players in this part.

- ok, Fixed

00:20:066 (20066|4,20130|5) - these piano sounds seems off for me. I play in 25% playback rate and listen to it carefully. It feels it should be at 00:20:098 - and 00:20:146 -

- Fixed to 1/8 grids

00:44:582 - I think its better to add long notes here as it feels empty without it. Too awkward also since the violin-sound starts here.

- I'll add Sv changes instead of Longnote

00:56:582 (56582|6,56582|0) - add note to 2 and 6 because it has the same power or even stronger than 00:56:195 (56195|5,56195|4,56195|6,56195|3) -

00:57:163 (57163|6,57163|0) - ^

00:57:356 (57356|4,57356|2) - ^ but only add to 4

00:57:937 (57937|6,57937|0) - ^ add to 4, piano with the sudden violin sound.

- Reduced notes in lower parts. Fixed

01:02:969 (62969|0,63163|2) - how about changing them to mini long notes like you did to these violin sounds: 01:03:356 (63356|6,63550|4,63743|3,63937|5) -

- Nice Idea, Fixed

01:10:711 (70711|0) - change to long note? because it is the same as these guys 01:10:904 (70904|5,71098|1,71292|4,71485|2) - and pretty similar to 01:13:808 (73808|6) -

- Fixed

01:23:872 (83872|5,83872|0,83872|1,83872|3,83872|4,83872|2,84259|3,84259|2,84259|1,84259|6,84259|5,84259|4,84646|6,84646|2,84646|0,84646|4) - I think its better if yuou map for those 1/8th sound we can hear between these notes. Just suggesting. you decide~

- I'll add SV changes in this part ~ sorry ;w;

01:30:356 - add note/s here for that hihat-like sound.

01:30:743 - ^

01:36:163 - add note to 2 and 6, same sound as 01:35:775 (95775|4,95775|2) -

- I'm going to emphasize bass-chord sounds only in this part. 2nd part countains hithat notes here

01:49:711 (109711|3,109711|6,109711|0,109711|4,109711|2) - remove one note here as it is not the same power/loud as 01:49:421 (109421|2,109421|0,109421|4,109421|3,109421|6) -

01:51:259 (111259|5,111259|2,111259|0,111259|1,111259|4,111259|6) - ^ same reason. And also this one has 6-noters which is really different than the previous one. would recommend to reduce it to 4-noter or 3 noters like you did at: 01:52:324 (112324|5,112324|6,112324|4) -

02:01:421 (121421|4,121421|1) - add one more note? strong sound here

- Fixed

02:28:130 (148130|2,148130|5) - I think this note should be the Long notes not the 02:28:324 (148324|5,148324|6,148324|3) - . Its because of the chord-like piano sound here.

- low piano sounds here. so I decided to map circle here

02:28:517 (148517|2,148517|0,148711|4,148711|1) - ^ I really don't think the Long note fits for the vocals. Too awkward imo not to mention they are 3-Layered Long notes.

02:30:792 (150792|5) - move to 4 for comfortability and stair pattern.

- I think kira(hithat?) sound is more proper at this pattern.

02:51:259 - you can add note here as well like you did at 02:50:872 (170872|4,170872|2) - because of hihat.

02:57:356 - and 02:57:453 - add note for the beat sound?

- I deiced to emphasize vocals in this part. sry

03:18:550 (198550|4,198646|6,198743|6) - what these notes represent? I assume its the hihat but it seems not right. Suggeting to remove. I prefer long notes for that as solution.

- ok

03:20:098 (200098|4,200195|6,200292|6,200388|6,200485|6) - ^

03:37:614 - add note. Beat.

03:37:711 - add note. Hihat.

- Fixed

03:49:421 (229421|1,229421|3,229421|0,229421|2,229517|4,229517|5,229517|6,229614|1,229614|3,229614|2,229614|0,229711|6,229711|4,229711|5,229808|0,229808|1,229808|2,229904|3,229904|4,229904|5,229904|6,230001|1,230001|2,230001|0,230098|5,230098|3,230098|6,230098|4) - quite awkward imo because the sound here is not very strong and did not change compared to 03:48:743 (228743|4,228743|6,228840|0,228840|2,228937|6,228937|4,229033|0,229033|2,229130|4,229130|6,229227|2,229227|0,229324|6,229324|4) - I suggest to reduce the notes just like the before-notes.

- Those chords means eversion, sry

04:27:896 (267896|1,267896|3,267896|2,267896|0,267993|5,267993|6,267993|4,268089|1,268089|3,268089|2,268089|0,268185|5,268185|4,268185|6,268281|1,268281|0,268281|2,268377|3,268377|5,268377|6,268377|4,268473|2,268473|1,268473|0,268569|3,268569|5,268569|4,268569|6) - ^ same reason. Way too much.

04:59:339 (299339|3) - remove. No cymbals occured here compared to 04:59:050 (299050|2,299050|3,299050|0,299050|1) -

- Fixed

05:00:589 (300589|2,300685|2,300781|2,300877|2) - feels awkward because I do not find any instrument to fit for these jacks. Same with 05:02:127 (302127|4,302223|4,302319|4,302416|4) - and especially 05:03:666 (303666|3,303762|3,303858|3,303954|3,304050|3) - .

- There's loop drum so... I tried to using same gimmicks on BMS patterns

and the rest seems.. out of my reach, sarry. I leave it to expert modders :v

Thanks for your help!
ArcherLove
hi~~

kawaii song owo). .

00:03:550 (3550|4) - add note for piano?
01:10:904 (70904|5) - 01:11:292 (71292|4) - 01:11:679 (71679|5) - 01:12:066 (72066|4) - 01:12:453 (72453|3) - 01:12:840 (72840|5) - 01:13:227 (73227|2) - 01:13:614 (73614|4) - 01:14:001 (74001|1) - 01:14:388 (74388|0) - 01:14:775 (74775|2) - 01:15:163 (75163|0) - 01:15:550 (75550|1) - 01:15:937 (75937|1) - 01:16:324 (76324|2) - 01:16:711 (76711|2) - 01:17:098 (77098|1) - 01:17:485 (77485|2) - 01:17:872 (77872|0) - 01:18:259 (78259|1) - add note for piano?

01:18:646 (78646|1) - 01:19:033 (79033|5) - add note for piano?
01:19:421 (79421|5,79808|1) - ^
01:37:614 (97614|6) - move to 6?
01:38:388 (98388|0) - move to 2?
02:10:904 (130904|6) - move to ... other?
02:24:550 - add
02:24:937 - add
02:42:259 - http://puu.sh/oivMv/7624a75911.jpg or mirror
03:18:453 (198453|2) - move to 2?
03:21:550 (201550|2) - ^

great map~~
I post on your thread~
Nivrad00
From Nivrad00's Mania Queue

Sanka
01:36:163 - This violin is pretty loud. Maybe add notes like 02:56:679 - ?
02:10:904 - this jack seems out-of-place; there are no other jacks in the simple piano parts
04:57:319 (297319|3) - this looks like it was supposed to be a LN lol
05:28:775 (328775|4,328871|5,328871|3,328967|4,329064|3,329064|5,329160|4,329256|3,329256|5,329352|4,329449|3,329449|5,329545|4,329641|3,329641|5) - it seems like this long repetitive pattern was probably unintentional

This map is absolutely beautiful. I'm a big fan of your work!! Please have some stars

Thanks for using my queue!
Nivrad00
oh crap I forgot to give you stars so I came back but then I realized that it's in graveyard so I can't

I'll star later :?
DJ Profetti
mark :D
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