First kiai isn't very consistent with the second one, and I don't really like the first one. I think there is points where you go "kdd" which in second kiai becomes "kkd". kdd is generally a worse pattern than kkd, it just looks worse and plays worse. I think go back to first kiai and tweak it some. Then slow section after is strange too. But the beginning and end are very strongly mapped. OD and HP should both probably be about 5.5. HP maybe 6 but OD 5.5 would be good.
Tick rate should be 1, no reason to be 4.
Is the slider velocity 1 or is this a glitch? SV is supposed to be 1.4 or 1.6, I recommend 1.4.
Almost all of your green lines do not do anything. Please remove all which don't have a purpose. Your volumes are all 100%, they should probably be tweaked to fit the song as well. I will leave that to you.
00:15:134 - This should be don, because as far as I can realise, k is used for the snare in your map, so you should use don here.
00:32:412 (77) - Try changing to k, and see how you like it. It adds some small variety but follows with the sound.
00:39:637 (1) - This spinner is definitely not rankable I think, it cannot be so close to the following note!
01:18:590 - I know what you are getting at here, but just to be cute, maybe in following with pattern of d d k k you can do kkddkkd here, for small difficulty but more fun?
01:35:867 - Try changing this pattern to k d k k k d k, it doesn't leave out the snare like the other.
02:14:349 (400,408,416) - These should all be k imo because of the song's progression into the next section. The sound goes up and back down.
03:06:024 - to 03:46:234 - Whole section needs kats, there is parts where you let the music go up but the density go down (such as 03:32:412 - )
I suggest to work on it independently to suit your map
04:51:260 - kkk? 04:56:286 - ddd? they both fit, because you are not adding any 1/4 due to music, but those parts do have 1/4 and it fits to music.
