1. HD - 4Key (2,86 stars, 715 notes)
2. MX - 4Key (3,67 stars, 927 notes)
3. Shana's NM - 4Key (1,98 stars, 495 notes)

Davin Fortune wrote:

Hello Kenny sama :3

Modding Request HAS COME :V
Nice Song (>o<), Star o/

4k column : 1-2-3-4
7K column : 1-2-3-4-5-6-7

Shana's 4K NM's Mod Inside

00:02:113 - add LN at column 4 with end at 00:02:278 - , thats the place where violin sound get started

00:18:273 - add a LN here at column 2 or 3, the voice just start

01:21:919 - add a LN at column 2/3 which end at 01:22:168 - and 01:22:168 - at column 2/3 which end at 01:22:499 - , but make sure both of them has different column (I think shana already know what i mean before i say this)

NICE PATTERN SHANA!!! (>o<) LIKE RANKED MAP PATTERN

4K HD's Mod Inside

00:06:919 - add notes like this, i feel empty here


00:09:571 - same^


00:12:223 - add a LN here until 00:12:886 - , there's a voice get in which 00:12:886 (12886|0) - <-- is the evolutin sound of it
(OMG! what i talking about)

00:19:185 - add circle at column2 here for differentation than the otherpart

00:19:848 - same^ at column 1(they has same sound meaning)

00:20:510 - same^ at column 4 so 00:20:345 (20345|3) - move to column 2

00:21:256 (21256|0,21339|1,21422|2) - move 1 line down (e.g 00:21:256 (21256|0) - move to 00:21:173 - ) this is used to make 00:21:173 - get double note like ^

00:21:505 - add circle at column 3 for^

00:22:002 (22002|3) - move to 00:21:919 - for ^

00:22:499 - add circle at column 2 for ^

00:22:914 (22914|1,22997|0) - move 1 line down for ^

00:23:908 (23908|3,23991|2) - move 1 line down for ^

00:52:499 (52499|3) - delete it cause 00:52:499 - bit unsese, like your last pattern(*hard to explain)

00:57:057 (57057|3,57140|2) - move 1 line down for just like last mod

00:57:638 - add a circle a column for ^

00:58:466 (58466|3,58549|2,58632|1) - move 1 line up for ^, and i think the pattern become more better

00:58:964 - add circle at column 4 for ^

00:59:378 (59378|0,59461|1,59544|2) - move 1 line up for ^

01:00:372 - add circle at column 4 for ^

01:01:698 - same^(*lol*)

01:02:278 - add circle at column 1 for ^

01:03:687 (63687|3,63770|2) - move 1 line down

01:06:505 (66505|2) - move to 01:06:588 - at column 4 for ^

01:07:748 (67748|2,67831|3) - move 1 line up for ^

01:14:875 (74875|1) - move to 01:14:958 -

I LOVE THE DRUM PART ~(>o<)~

4K MX

The beginning ;w; cek HD mod

*Davin Fortune lazy to check drum part, other is good

7K MX's Mod Inside

please take a look 4K HD's mod and try to self mod it first
Especially like the empty in the beginnin(I mean the beginning only) *LOL*

00:15:455 - add a circle at clumn 4 and 6 to make the stair follow and end with the new LN

00:18:853 - until 00:24:157 - cool (>w<) and LOL, LN use non white and circle white

00:24:820 - add circle at column 5 for make the last note is still follow next notes

00:27:472 - add circle at column 6 for ^

00:55:980 - start from here, please check my 4K HD's mod, cause the problem is same and i don't want make myself tired
Little extra from ^ :
01:11:146 (71146|5,71312|3) - use circles please, consistent with ur pattern ;w;

Okay i think is good

NOT FINISHED! >o< FINISHED!

Davin Fortune wrote:

Hello Kenny sama :3

Modding Request HAS COME :V
Nice Song (>o<), Star o/

4k column : 1-2-3-4
7K column : 1-2-3-4-5-6-7

Shana's 4K NM's Mod Inside

00:02:113 - add LN at column 4 with end at 00:02:278 - , thats the place where violin sound get started

00:18:273 - add a LN here at column 2 or 3, the voice just start

01:21:919 - add a LN at column 2/3 which end at 01:22:168 - and 01:22:168 - at column 2/3 which end at 01:22:499 - , but make sure both of them has different column (I think shana already know what i mean before i say this)

NICE PATTERN SHANA!!! (>o<) LIKE RANKED MAP PATTERN

4K HD's Mod Inside

00:06:919 - add notes like this, i feel empty here


00:09:571 - same^


00:12:223 - add a LN here until 00:12:886 - , there's a voice get in which 00:12:886 (12886|0) - <-- is the evolutin sound of it
(OMG! what i talking about)

00:19:185 - add circle at column2 here for differentation than the otherpart

00:19:848 - same^ at column 1(they has same sound meaning)

00:20:510 - same^ at column 4 so 00:20:345 (20345|3) - move to column 2

00:21:256 (21256|0,21339|1,21422|2) - move 1 line down (e.g 00:21:256 (21256|0) - move to 00:21:173 - ) this is used to make 00:21:173 - get double note like ^

00:21:505 - add circle at column 3 for^

00:22:002 (22002|3) - move to 00:21:919 - for ^

00:22:499 - add circle at column 2 for ^

00:22:914 (22914|1,22997|0) - move 1 line down for ^

00:23:908 (23908|3,23991|2) - move 1 line down for ^

00:52:499 (52499|3) - delete it cause 00:52:499 - bit unsese, like your last pattern(*hard to explain)

00:57:057 (57057|3,57140|2) - move 1 line down for just like last mod

00:57:638 - add a circle a column for ^

00:58:466 (58466|3,58549|2,58632|1) - move 1 line up for ^, and i think the pattern become more better

00:58:964 - add circle at column 4 for ^

00:59:378 (59378|0,59461|1,59544|2) - move 1 line up for ^

01:00:372 - add circle at column 4 for ^

01:01:698 - same^(*lol*)

01:02:278 - add circle at column 1 for ^

01:03:687 (63687|3,63770|2) - move 1 line down

01:06:505 (66505|2) - move to 01:06:588 - at column 4 for ^

01:07:748 (67748|2,67831|3) - move 1 line up for ^

01:14:875 (74875|1) - move to 01:14:958 -

I LOVE THE DRUM PART ~(>o<)~

4K MX

The beginning ;w; cek HD mod

*Davin Fortune lazy to check drum part, other is good

7K MX's Mod Inside

please take a look 4K HD's mod and try to self mod it first
Especially like the empty in the beginnin(I mean the beginning only) *LOL*

00:15:455 - add a circle at clumn 4 and 6 to make the stair follow and end with the new LN

00:18:853 - until 00:24:157 - cool (>w<) and LOL, LN use non white and circle white

00:24:820 - add circle at column 5 for make the last note is still follow next notes

00:27:472 - add circle at column 6 for ^

00:55:980 - start from here, please check my 4K HD's mod, cause the problem is same and i don't want make myself tired
Little extra from ^ :
01:11:146 (71146|5,71312|3) - use circles please, consistent with ur pattern ;w;

Okay i think is good

NOT FINISHED! >o< FINISHED!

BilliumMoto wrote:

Leggo boiz

|1|2|3|4| or |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

7K MX

00:02:941 (2941|2,2941|3) - The space after these notes is not very fun to play.
00:04:930 (4930|2,6256|2) - three notes for a snare that's barely audible? make it one.
00:16:781 (16781|5) - Not actually in drums, delete this note.
00:17:361 (17361|4) - Add a note here because there's more impact here in the music.
00:17:859 (17859|3) - you missed a note here for snare
00:18:853 (18853|0,18936|4,19019|2,19185|2,19185|0) - I have a general concern for the pattering here where you put LNs in 246 only and notes in 1357 only. It's a very awkward pattern at whenever you have the LN in 2 or 6, and it feels like you just took the 4k map, converted to 7k, and slapped some LNs on it. Granted, it's kind of a fun gimmick, but it doesn't really fit here. There's also the fact that the actual layering in question is kinda boring, but eh
00:22:831 (22831|6) - Music gets a little more intense here, change your layering a bit
00:29:295 (29295|4) - there is a snare on the 1/4 after this, add a note there.
00:32:527 (32527|5) - Another ghost note
00:47:196 (47196|6) - I can't tell how this note fits in your layering, but it feels like your layering is very inconsistent in this section in general. If I were you, I would clearly define what I want to map here, drums or guitar or whatever, and then map only that. Because right now, this section feels very undecisive.
00:50:510 - just one of many missed notes in this section, but this one especially feels lacking
00:52:334 (52334|1,52334|2) - Empty space warrants a double note?
00:53:411 (53411|4,53577|3) - Please be more careful about what notes you slap onto your map, these notes dont correspond to anything in the music.
00:53:908 (53908|4,54074|3) - ^
00:55:980 (55980|6) - Same issue as 00:18:853 except worse since the LNs get longer.
01:05:883 (65883|0,66008|0) - These two notes especially, a combo break for most players right here. Fix it.
01:19:848 (79848|6) - Empty space is never fun, unless there's some kind of effect. The SVs don't seem to do anything (I read at 25 speed)
01:22:499 - You probably know exactly what I have to say about this lol

4K MX

ALL THE LAYERING ISSUES DISCUSSED IN THE 7K MX APPLY HERE AS WELL.
Make sure to fix all of them first!

Moving on...
00:12:803 (12803|2,12886|1,12969|0,13052|2,13135|1,13218|0,13301|2,13383|1,13466|0) - A bit excessive perhaps? I would make these an LN but it's probably fine the way it is.
00:18:853 (18853|0) - Add one or two notes, it's a big impact
00:50:676 (50676|2,50759|3) - Very awkward, a big combo break point for most players. I suggest shortening the LN and fixing the layering as we discussed earlier.

Other than the same layering issues, this should be fine...

4K HD

I'm really bad at modding easier diffs but...

ALL THE LAYERING ISSUES DISCUSSED IN THE 7K MX APPLY HERE AS WELL.
Make sure to fix all of them first!

00:34:848 (34848|2,34930|3,35013|2,35096|3) - Not sure if this is too hard for this diff but you be the judge. (Similar sentiments on silimar patterns in this diff.)

Like I said, I'm bad at easier diffs >_>

4K NM

Nitpicking here...
00:26:975 (26975|3) - Move a 1/2 beat earlier, there's no hihat here but the kick before it could use another note.
00:29:461 (29461|3) - Add note for cymbal?
01:15:870 (75870|0) - Make these doubles to sustain some density, this section should be much harder than it is, even though it is an easy diff. After all, it's kind of the climax of the song here.
01:19:848 (79848|0,80013|1,80179|3,80345|2) - what happened to pitch relevancy?
01:20:676 (80676|0,80842|2,81008|3) - ^
There are some empty spaces throughout the diff that should probably be filled

And that's all folks!
Hope you find this useful!
Don't forget the m4m deal

-BANGKE- wrote:

m4m yh

General

- please apus ini, ga guna timing nya, kecuali main bpm sama kiai
- MX OD HP > 8
- HD+ OD HP > 7.5

BG, MP3, Hitsound

- BG nya unrankable tuh, cari aman aja yg 1366x768
- mp3 nya nanggung, up sampe 192kbps

1|2|3|4

MX

- 00:00:290 - add 1 nih, suaranya agak keras
- 00:20:345 (20345|3,20510|3,20676|3) - well, 00:20:676 (20676|3) - move to 1
- 00:21:671 (21671|3,21836|3,22002|3) - well, 00:21:671 (21671|3,21754|2) - ctrl + j this, and 00:21:836 (21836|3) - move to 3
- 00:23:328 (23328|3) - pindahin ke 2
- 00:24:074 (24074|0,24157|1) - ctrl + j this, and add note in |3| 00:24:157 -
- 00:25:317 (25317|1) - move to 4, avoid this jack 00:24:986 (24986|1,25151|1) -
- 00:28:798 (28798|3) - move to 1, avoid this jack 00:28:964 (28964|3,29129|3) -
- 00:45:870 (45870|2) - move to 4, variation
- 00:48:687 (48687|2) - why 2 hitsound in 1 note?
- 00:53:411 (53411|2,53577|2,53743|2) - well, try this, more playable pattern http://puu.sh/mE41J/f2d97b65ee.jpg
- 00:58:052 (58052|2,58218|2,58383|2,58549|2) - try this more fun and enjoyable http://puu.sh/mE48s/6260567e59.jpg
- 00:59:958 (59958|3) - move to 1
- 01:02:444 (62444|0) - move to 4
- 01:05:883 (65883|0,65925|1,65966|2) - why 1/8? this part is same with another note stream 1/4, like 01:05:676 (65676|1,65759|2,65842|3) -
- 01:10:566 (70566|3) - move to 1
- 01:13:383 (73383|2,73549|2,73715|2) - well, 01:13:549 (73549|2) - move to 1, 01:13:632 (73632|0) - move to 2
- 01:23:991 (83991|3,84157|3,84323|3) - well, 01:23:991 (83991|3) - move to 2, 01:24:323 (84323|3) - move to 1
- 01:25:317 (85317|3,85483|3,85649|3) - .. 01:25:317 (85317|3,85400|2) - ctrl + j this, 01:25:483 (85483|3) - and move to 3
- 01:25:980 (85980|1,86146|1,86312|1) - too much, try this http://puu.sh/mE4pe/0eb5baea30.jpg

Shana's NM

wow, cant find any error, good job shana >w>

erlinadewi- wrote:

mark dlu xD

Davin Fortune wrote:

Kenny you should reply to every mod the modder give you and give senseable reason for each mod you get

1 more : do you already ask shana that you take control of her GD?
If yes you may continue but if no idk what happen

Kenny-sama wrote:

Davin Fortune wrote:

Kenny you should reply to every mod the modder give you and give senseable reason for each mod you get

1 more : do you already ask shana that you take control of her GD?
If yes you may continue but if no idk what happen

I will reply it, I just forget it and lazy to do it :v
Shana did, but she said to me on facebook no update

Wicakz wrote:

Hello kenny w/

|1|2|3|4|

4K HD+

00:37:417 (37417|1) - delete, add note 4
00:37:499 (37499|3) - delete, add note 1 and 2
00:37:582 - add note 4
00:37:665 (37665|3) - delete, add note 1 and 2
00:37:748 - add note 4
00:40:069 (40069|2) - delete, add note 3
00:40:151 - add note 4
00:40:234 - add note 3
00:40:317 - add note 4
00:40:400 - add note 3

Raediaufar wrote:

Not going to mod this but let me help you: no kudosu

Put "黄昏乙女×アムネジア" as source

Delete "suzuki konomi choir jail tv size tv edit kenny-sama" from the tags

Rename HD+ -> HD , except you want to add diff between NM and HD+

Shana why did you unfriend u.u

Harbyter wrote:

yo here my mod


[MX]

00:12:803 (12803|2,12886|1,12969|0,13052|2,13135|1,13218|0,13301|2,13383|1,13466|0) - i think this pattern doesn't suit here, since you didn't followed the piano but just the battery hit ,suggest to remove and adding a LN here 00:12:886 - up to here 00:13:549 - and then adding notes here
00:13:218 - for the crash


00:15:372 (15372|3) - mind removing this since you didn't followed the drums here There's a drum sound there. Check it again if you don't believe

00:15:538 - suggest to add a note in 3 to keep a little the consistence of the guitar percussion like the previous three-chords

00:15:704 - add 4 same reason

00:15:870 - here adding 1 and 4 Only 1

00:16:781 (16781|3) - no drum suggest to removeWell, you should really check it again. There's a drum sound I'm sure

00:16:864 (16864|2,16947|1,17030|0) - wrong snap ,here there is a 1/6 roll drum,if you have followed the previous suggestion you can move this 00:16:864 (16864|2) - in 4 ,then removing 00:16:947 (16947|1) - and adding notes in 3 00:16:919 - and in 2 00:16:975 - Wow, I didn't know that

00:17:859 - dunno why you ignored this, adding notes?[/color ]Thanks. I didn't hear it

[color=#BFFF00]00:18:190 (18190|2,18190|3,18522|1,18522|2) - too much for only those vocal ,suggest to put simple single LN

00:21:173 (21173|1) - move in 1 and 00:21:256 (21256|0) - move in 2 and 00:21:339 (21339|1) - move in 4

00:32:278 (32278|2,32527|2) - there aren't any sound for this stream ? remove? If yes you should rearrange the pattern too

00:53:411 (53411|2,53577|2,53908|3,54074|1,54406|2) - ghost, and this 00:53:743 (53743|1) - is wrong snapped, 1/6 there 00:53:715 - 00:53:770 - , i think you have to rework a lot this pattern I think it's already good so no.

00:58:632 - double here??removing one to keep your consistency

01:05:883 (65883|0,65966|2) - ?_? suggesto to remove xD

01:21:836 (81836|1) - i think you can remove this, here for this sound 1 LN is enought




also i think the hitsound are pretty noise, you may reducing some sample where there are triple notes or double like those for example






EDIT: forgot to tell ,can you remove the video clip in the folder of this beatmap since it is a duplicate and you don't use it, cause is unrankable and it increase the filesize by 10mb xd THANKS I FORGOT THIS

SanadaYukimura wrote:

As request
[HD]
00:17:859 - Missing drum
00:24:488 - kinda confuse with this part, like 00:25:317 - , what is this note for if thats for vocal then u should add 00:25:980 - It's an addons?
00:34:185 - add one, same as 00:34:267 (34267|0,34350|1) -
00:34:267 (34267|0,34350|1) - from here, you using 1/4 for the whole kiai which is kinda boring, try thisimg Can't explain the reason but no.
thats all for now, gl

erlinadewi- wrote:

halo

Mod req via pm

Timing

01:22:499 - 01:27:803 - better delete this kiai cause less then 15s

Tidak terima kasih wkwk

HD

00:17:859 - hear cymbal here, so add some note
00:52:002 - ^ Ghost? :/

MX

00:00:290 (290|0) - ummm ini ikut apa ya? .-.Kata mz bangke sih loud sound, yaudah dihapus aja deh
00:22:831 - add 1 note lagi 2 note hanya untuk clap sound
00:23:494 - ^ ^
00:29:461 - add 1 untuk cymbal
00:45:372 - sama ^ Gak deh, ntar makin susah dan gak enak dimainkan

Gak banyak sih mod nya ._. semoga mod nya membantu

Gl

Takane6 wrote:

MX
====
00:15:538 (15538|2,15538|0,15704|1,15704|3,15870|0,15870|2) - this can be layered by 1/4 stream tho and ignore this LN 00:15:538 (15538|0,15704|1) -
00:16:754 (16754|3,16809|2) - its unsnapped and yet there is no sound here :<
00:16:864 (16864|1,16919|0) - there is still 1/6 snap sound also in here 00:16:975 - 00:17:030 - so best to add note there
00:17:859 - also add note at here because the sound is same power as 00:17:361 -
00:17:859 - and best to chang one note into LN for represent guitar sound (LN ends at here 00:18:190 - )
*all of them such as this >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4402334
====
from 00:18:853 - until 00:24:157 - the stream is kinda random and didnt following any pattern at all, it looks odd... try to arrange the stream to be getting more purpose and not random at all..
add more note here 00:18:853 - because he sound here is strong
00:22:831 - 00:23:494 - also add note at here... the drum clap is strong in here too and it same as 00:23:162 -
*from 00:18:853 - until 00:20:510 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4402317
*from 00:20:510 - until 00:21:836 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4402318
*from 00:21:836 - until 00:22:831 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4402321
*from 00:22:831 - until 00:24:157 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4402324
====
00:33:936 (33936|0,34102|0,34102|1,34267|0,34350|1) - ugh there is a less comfort pattern here... move 00:34:267 (34267|0) - to collumn 3 are better for prevent that uncomfort pattern
00:46:367 - 00:49:019 - 00:49:516 - 00:50:013 - its a quite strong drum hit clap here... best to add note
====
00:52:334 (52334|1,52334|0) - no sound here pls :3
00:52:168 - add note at here for consistency with 00:51:836 - 00:51:505 -
00:52:499 (52499|3) - and move this to collumn 2 for preventing uncomfort pattern in here 00:52:499 (52499|3,52665|3,52831|3) -
*all of them such as this >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4402534
====
the kiai is uh... not fun at all...
all of the part is just full of stream without considering the break point or variation in patterning.. i know that the 1/4 stream are fit to the music... but still ... try to consider the moment to add a short break or anything...
====

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

waduh, mau ngemod ada lagi yg nunggu di fix
ntar panggil w lagi klo udah di fix mod mereka berdua yah ^ ^

Kawawa wrote:

Mod

4K ｜1｜2｜3｜4｜

Please check once again your all two diff's for hitsounds. It will be important for consistence.

[HD]
00:16:781 (16781|3,16864|2,16947|1) - I could not feel drum roll on this snap. there is 6snap only (00:16:864 - ~ 00:17:030 - )
Just please skip this drum beat. and follow the vocal in this part. and It will be good than before for playalbe and structure.
and you can consider about this part from "HD diff's mods"

00:37:085 (37085|1) - Hitsounds missing "C"

00:23:494 - If this is not intend, then you need to same consistence of hitsounds with Hard diffs.
Consider this. I will not say it again from "HD mods' please compare with HD
00:24:157 - ^same with above.
00:46:035 - ^same with above.
00:48:687 - ^same with above.
like these things.

[MX]
00:16:754 (16754|3,16809|2) - There is not 6snap drum. is here exactly 00:16:864 - ~ 00:17:030 -
sample :: http://puu.sh/mTQDP/75e80dd0ef.png

00:53:328 - ~ 00:54:488 - in this part.
I could not feel some drum roll at here. You need to change this part for drum.
consider it http://puu.sh/mTTS6/b3f2b9a175.jpg
and you have to fix your NM diff also. like this.

01:01:367 (61367|1) - Hitsounds missing "W"

01:22:499 - add at 2. it same music structure with this 00:18:853 -
and you used 2note at here. it will be same consistence for amount of note.

Good luck !

Julie wrote:

Mod

4K 1|2|3|4

[Shana' NM]

00:34:765 - Shouldn't it be 2 note here like you did here 00:24:157 - ? Due to the cymbal and a new section and mostly to make it feel different then this 00:34:433 - and this 00:37:417 - .

01:06:588 - I know your mostly trying to make it 1/1/1/2 and follow the rhythm of the drum, but this part should really be like here 00:55:980 - , the cymbal is really clear + to emphasize the begining of a new kiai.

01:15:538 - to 01:16:864 - The song isn't going more and more calm here, this is probably the easiest part to play on the whole diff (easier then some slow pace part), while it should still feel like as if it was a really important kiai part.

[Hard]

00:16:781 (16781|3,16864|2,16947|1,17030|0) - This is kinda unrankable, I understand your trying to avoid 1/6, because this is an HD and not an MX, but we mapper should always keep our map with good snapping to not ruin the song.
00:16:947 (16947|1) - This is unrankable, since the 1/6 triplet stream start here 00:16:864 - , and there is no sound at 1/4 here 00:16:947 - . So I probably suggest removing this note, and keep the rhythm 1/2.
I probably suggest deleting this 00:16:781 (16781|3) - , since like you did on your MX, you thought the stream start here 00:16:754 - , but there stream start here 00:16:864 - . At 00:16:781 - is still 1/4 and nicely snap, but it might not be good to play if you don't map the stream after.

00:17:196 (17196|2,17196|3) - I think is better if you just put one note here, since you are basically changing the song a bit with those clap hitsound. 00:17:196 - and 00:17:361 - have the same sound now because of your double clap, while in the song, the drum here 00:17:196 - isn't as loud as here 00:17:361 - . So this is a bit re-creating the song due to the hitsound xD.

00:22:831 (22831|3) - Hmm shouldn't this be a clap? Too keep your clap consistent and fit the loud drum, also to keep it consistent with your MX.

00:23:494 (23494|1) - ^.

00:23:825 (23825|0,23908|3) - Change this 00:23:908 (23908|3) - into a clap, since these 2 in the song have the same drum sound, while these 2 00:23:991 (23991|2,24074|0) - have another drum sound.

00:24:157 (24157|3,24157|1) - This is a bit tooo much! Like the reason here 00:17:196 (17196|2,17196|3) - , you are a bit modifying the song. Yes this is 00:24:157 - a new section of the song, but is a calm part, if you remove your note and listen carefully, the cymbal isn't really super loud in the song. Mostly because this is the start of a calm part, it shouldn't be having much impact, but your hitsound are way too loud!! I'm pretty sure 1 finisher would been enough, 2 fnisher should fit more for like the begining of the kiai.

00:29:295 (29295|1) - Remove this note, I don't hear any loud bass sound, which you mostly map your whistle for a louds bass, I just hear another drum sound that is here 00:29:378 - and not suggested to map of course xD.

00:29:461 (29461|2,29461|3) - I think one finisher is enough, 2 rings the ears too much, yes the sound suddendly go high in the song, but the cymbal is pretty low. So you can keep 2 notes, but 2 finish hitsound, really rings the ears too much xD.

00:32:113 (32113|3,32113|1) - Feel like there is a bit too much hitsound, not sure where the 2 clap come from, since there is no snare sound there.

00:34:185 (34185|3) - Maybe remove this? So is a better spread in rhythm with the MX, also mostly because this is really unclear to hear compare to the drum stream here 00:34:267 (34267|2,34350|1,34433|0) - , so you can keep it pretty simple for HD.

00:35:925 (35925|2,35925|0) - This part should be 2 clap due to the snare and to keep your clap consistent. Is not the same drum sound as here 00:35:593 - .

00:37:085 (37085|0,37085|1) - Shouldn't this be double clap like you did here 00:36:422 (36422|3,36422|2) - and to keep it consistent with MX?

00:38:577 (38577|2,38577|3) - Same reason as 0:35:925 (35925|2,35925|0)

00:38:245 (38245|1,38245|0,38577|2,38577|3) - ^ if you fix above, ctrl + h for the pattern, so that 00:38:245 (38245|1,38245|0) - don't have the same column then this 00:37:748 (37748|0,37748|1) - , since both should really feel different in playing.

00:41:229 (41229|0,41229|3) - 00:43:881 (43881|1,43881|0) - Same reason with 00:35:925 (35925|2,35925|0) -

00:46:035 (46035|3,46035|1,46035|2) - Wowow 3 clap is wayy too much! + You even have more then MX!

00:48:687 (48687|0,48687|3,48687|2) - and 00:49:350 (49350|0,49350|1,49350|3) - ^

00:46:035 - to 00:49:350 - To be honest I don't think you need 3 notes hit for HD, you can just make it spread better with the MX by making it 2 notes, since there isn't much impact on those part from the song either.

00:51:008 - Same reason as 00:17:196 (17196|2,17196|3) -, really suggest to just keep it one note, the snare isn't even that loud, while is super loud due to your hitsound. Even this part 00:50:676 - should have more hit then here 00:51:008 - .

00:53:494 (53494|3) - Should be a clap here for the loud drum.

00:53:743 (53743|0) - ^ Same drum as 00:53:660 (53660|1) - .

00:53:328 - + You are totally modifying the song, player will feel like there is a nice drum stream here, but the actual song don't have a stream here.
PLEASE REMOVE YOUR NOTE IN ORDER TO SEE THE PART I SPOT, because if you don't, you will hear your whistle hitsound.
00:53:411 - There is no new drum sound, only vocal change of pitch.
00:53:908 - No drum sound, overmap.
00:54:074 - No drum sound
00:54:406 - No drum sound.

Good luck !

Interlude- wrote:

Interlude's 4K Mania Modding Queue
1/2/3/4

Mod | NM

00:32:113 - Ctrl + H
00:52:168 - Change patterns? 1-3 or 2-4
01:00:289 - You could open these 2-3 *pasted patterns. I see a lot of them. Dunno if intended, because latter patterns got variated
01:15:870 - 01:16:201 - 01:16:533 - 01:16:864 - Add notes for impact

Mod | HD

00:13:218 - Add note?
00:42:057 - Ctrl + H
00:42:720 - Variate pattern here!
00:47:030 - Add note?
01:06:588 - Add note
01:19:848 - Add note

Mod | MX

I see very similar patterns to HD here
00:47:030 - Add note
00:48:356 - Add note

Not pretty much to mod,
Check Ctrl + Shift + A

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hi Kenny . . .
here is my mod as requested on my queue
sorry for delay hhh

|1|2|3|4|

Mod

• 
  [HD]
  

1. 00:16:698 (16698|3,16781|2,16864|1,16947|0) - sebenarnya ini salah snap, harusnya cuman 1/2 tapi dibagian drum nya ada 1/6 sound, seperti ini nih fixed nya http://puu.sh/mXGeJ/6ff07f04e0.jpg Detail sekali senpai :v Arigatou -A-
   
2. 00:23:245 (23245|2,23328|3) - Ctrl G aja, flows nya lebih enakan
   
3. 00:24:488 - sampai dengan 00:32:113 - kayak nya kamu bikin rythim sendiri ? soal nya kudengar 00:25:317 (25317|2) - 00:27:969 (27969|2) - 00:30:621 (30621|0) - dan lain-lain itu nggak ada suaranya, nggak ada piano atau pun suara kick, snare, dsb . . . w saranin liat aja diff shana sebagai referensi buat diff HD mu ini Tau aja senpai :* ty~
   
4. 00:32:278 (32278|2,32527|2,32610|1) - ghost note, delete aja . . . nggak ada drum roll ataupun suara sejenis stream lainnya disana
   
5. 00:34:433 (34433|1) - pindahin ke kolom 1 lalu setelah itu tambahkan note di kolom 2, lebih balance + disana ada drum impact, jadi saran w jadikan 2 note aja sekalian (1 LN + 1 Single Note)
   
6. 00:49:019 - tambah note, ada suara drum yang sama dengan part ini 00:47:361 (47361|1,47361|0,47693|1,47693|0) - Nope, udah benar tuh kok ._.
   
7. 00:49:350 (49350|1) - pindahin ke sini 00:49:516 - kolom 3 (suara drum nya ada disana) ^
   
8. 00:49:848 - enakan begini http://puu.sh/mXGJ7/3a170244c0.jpg fokus ke drum lebih pas Udah bener tuh bos...
   
9. 00:52:499 - gini aja http://puu.sh/mXGOh/4f029aff28.jpg for better flows
   
10. l00:59:792 (59792|2,59875|1,59958|3,60041|1,60124|2,60207|0,60289|1,60372|2,60455|0,60538|2,60621|1) - dan juga 01:01:284 (61284|1,61367|2,61450|0,61533|1,61615|2,61698|0,61781|2,61864|1) - dan lain-lainnya . . . . nah stream yg kek bgitu sungguh nggak recommended, susah dijangkau (serius) bahkan menurut saya stream di diff MX mu lebih gampang daripada stream di diff HD ini wkwkwk
11. 01:07:417 (67417|2,67582|2,67748|2) - kek gini juga masalah nih, coba deh di re-arrange lagi supaya lebih mulus streamnya ^ ^
    
    [MX]
    
12. 00:16:781 (16781|3,16864|2,16947|1,17030|0) - salah snapping, coba liat lagi mod w di diff HD
    
13. 00:24:654 - 00:25:317 - 00:27:306 - 00:27:969 - 00:29:295 - 00:29:958 - 00:30:621 - wadaw, itu very low sound gan, masa dikasi 2 note juga . . . saran w sih jadikan 1 note aja, tau hapus sama sekali Sip, beberapa gua buat remap.
    
14. 00:32:610 (32610|3) - nggak ada drum, delete aja . . . setelah itu 00:32:693 (32693|2) - pindahin ke kolom 1
    
15. 00:32:693 (32693|3) - big impact, tambahin LN lagi di kolom 1 http://puu.sh/mXHke/0f48bcfb66.jpg
    
16. 00:43:549 (43549|1,43881|2) - saran w sih pindahin aja ke kolom 4 dan 1 . . . biar lebih leluasa dan balance saat mau mencet double trill disini 00:44:046 -
    
17. 00:50:510 - waduh kamu ketinggalan drum sound disini, tambahin 2 note di kolom 1 sama 3
    
18. 00:52:831 - for consistency http://puu.sh/mXHxk/9fbeb880ca.jpg
19. 00:53:328 - kek gini lebih pas http://puu.sh/mXHzw/d0ee53837f.jpg
20. oke itu aja, but saran w . . . streamnya lebih dimulusin lagi :3

i hope this can be helped . . . overall of your map, hmmm good enough
but i still feel bad at your stream in HD diff wkwkwk

OK good luck Kenny ~

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

All mods checked, thanks guys, most of the advice was accepted.

Update

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-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hii

4k = 1~4

Click Me!

[general]Video doesn't work on shana's diff Anjir... Lupa gua :v

[shana]seems fine

[HD]00:02:941 (2941|0) - delete W
00:04:930 (4930|1) - ^ C
dkk
HS dalam 1 timing sebaikan 1 aja kecuali beda sound misal W sama F baru gpp. tapi kalo sama 1 timing mending 1 aja.

00:04:930 (4930|1) - ganti F
00:16:698 (16698|3) - jgn nge double HS dalam 1 note

00:16:809 (16809|2) - move ke 00:16:864 -
00:16:919 (16919|1) - ^ ke 00:16:947 -
00:29:129 (29129|0) - F
00:32:113 (32113|2,32113|1) - HSnya -w-
00:33:604 (33604|1,33936|3) - ganti F
00:45:704 - mising hithat
00:46:035 (46035|1) - =w=
00:47:030 - hithat
00:47:859 - ^
00:48:356 - ^

[MX]HSnya jgn lupa di fix kek HD
00:12:886 - add kick
00:13:218 (13218|1) - ganti F
00:15:870 (15870|1) - ^
00:16:809 (16809|2,16919|1) - sama kayak HD
00:45:704 - hithat'
00:47:030 - ^
00:47:859 - kick
00:48:356 - hithat

GL~

-[Apple]- wrote:

From my queue!
Lol dude just wait for bubble and qualified,Your map is near perfect,So i shoot a star for you.
(I just have a trip and without computer 30 days lol,So delayed your mod request. That's all.
good luck!

Damar-sama wrote:

Why BN are not check this map for bubble?

I gave request to some BNs but they mostly reject it :'3

erlinadewi- wrote:

Wqwqwqwq :'3

ehh? :3

jakads wrote:

Hi, Kenny-sama!
You didn't request from my queue

BUT WHO CARES

1|2|3|4|

Overall

1. BG:
2. MP3:
3. Diff Spread:
4. AIMod:
5. Hitsound:
6. Timing:
7. Etc: Why isn't this map bubbled? This map is so good

MX

1. 00:17:693 (17693|0,17693|1,17693|3) - this CAN be 2 notes... Accepted
2. 00:29:295 (29295|2) - maybe move to 00:29:378 - Accepted
3. 01:00:621 (60621|3) - Remove (with this, this part has 2 notes) The LN is for the piano sound, so rejected
4. 01:05:925 - Add 3 (Clap hitsound needs 2 notes) Accepted
5. 01:06:588 - This can be 3 notes Accepted
6. 01:17:196 - ~ 01:18:853 - Change Whistle hitsound part to 2 notes I deleted 1 each whistle note
7. 01:19:516 - Add 1 Accepted

PLEASE MAKE THIS RANKED
I'LL GIVE YOU KUDOSU Thank you so much I'll do my best to get this map ranked xD

chieftots wrote:

Good map

Scores

CHOIR JAIL (Shana's NM)

CHOIR JAIL (HD)

CHOIR JAIL (MX)

Thanks for your testplay

jakads wrote:

oh, and how about moving this to Pending?
You can select Pending when you're uploading it

Damar-sama wrote:

Why BN are not check this map for bubble?