Pharos21 wrote:

Aha.. Found it

mark for MOD

HS: HS placement like this 00:00:455 (455|0,455|3) - are too much... and too loud.. reduce to only 1 (for all diff) No, It is better as it is

pattern:

EZ = already good... not gonna check it Thanks owo

NM= 00:55:312 (55312|0,55312|2,55312|3) - hmm.. i guess 1 note and 1 LN are enough.. so delete 1 note please Fixed

HD= already good Thanks!


Consistency:

hmm.. al diff folowing Vocal as main layer.. am i right? and the drum for aditional layer.. pretty good and consistence. ^.^ Thank you so much ^w^

wait... LOL...

HD = 00:50:812 (50812|2,51026|1) - same sound with 00:49:097 (49097|0,49205|1,49312|2,49312|0) - Fixed


Ghost note:

EZ=not found any ghost Thanks

NM = here too Thanks!

HD = 00:33:026 (33026|3,33133|2,33240|1,33347|0,33455|1,33562|2,33669|3,33776|2,33883|1,33990|0,34097|1,34205|2,34312|3,34419|2,34526|1,34633|0) - i'm not so sure with this... check again please.. cuz i can't fing any Stream sound there Fixed

00:46:740 (46740|1,46847|2,46955|3,47062|2,47169|1,47276|2,47383|3,47490|2,47597|1,47705|2,47812|3,47919|2,48026|1,48133|2,48240|3,48347|2,48455|3,48455|1) - this too Nop, this is fine.

00:53:597 (53597|0,53705|1,53812|3,53919|2,54026|0,54133|1,54240|3,54347|2,54455|0,54562|1,54669|3,54776|2,54883|1) - this one too Fixed

Done~ ;3

sorry if Short ^.^

Level 51 wrote:

Hey there! I hope you don't mind if i just put in a random mod :> Don't worry hahaha :33

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notation example: 13 / 4 indicates a two-note chord on columns 1 and 3 followed by a note on 4.

SPOILER

[General]
Consider raising the HP on HD to 7.5 or 8! 7 is better.
Consider raising the OD on NM to 7.5! 7 is better.

[EZ]
00:05:597 (5597|3) - I think the 4 LNs like this one at the start would be better if they were removed (so that there's a bit of empty chart there). Just personal preference. Fixed
00:38:169 (38169|2) - Could shift this to 1 or 4 so that you can add a note on column 3 at 00:39:883 - . 00:40:205 (40205|1,40205|2,40526|2,40526|1,40740|2,40740|1) - I change this to LNs because to listen it can hear a significant sound to the LNS.
00:40:526 (40526|2,40526|1) - Perhaps change to 14 to avoid the (1/2-beat) jack? No for the previous answer.
00:46:740 (46740|2,46740|1,47169|1,47169|2,47597|1,47597|2,48026|2,48026|1) - Perhaps alternate 23 / 14 / 23 / 14? Nice, fixed!

[NM]
00:05:597 (5597|0) - Again, these LNs could be removed. Especially since in the third and fourth bits there aren't any LNs anyway, haha. Fixed
00:40:740 (40740|3) - Consider replacing this LN with a 4 / 3 / 2 progression. Very nice, fixed.

[HD]
00:05:597 (5597|0) - As above. Fixed
00:08:169 (8169|3) - This kind of short LNs near the start seem pretty artificial, and they don't really sound very LN-like anyway. Consider replacing with simpler chord patterns. I see fine this.
00:28:740 (28740|0) - The LNs here are better, they're definitely more obvious. Yes :33
00:38:169 - This doesn't really seem to fit in with the music that well, maybe try a 1 / 2 / 1 / 3 pattern instead? No, I see fine this
00:39:883 - Consider moving some of the notes from here onto column 4? A one-handed trill is quite a large difficulty spike. Fixed
00:46:740 - Maybe try focusing on 1/2 beat chords here instead of a 1/4 stair? It adds a bit of variation to the map imo, you have a lot of parts which already feature fast 1/4 streams. No
00:48:669 (48669|1,48776|2,48883|3) - There are some short mini-streams like this one where the middle note seems to be fairly extraneous, I can't really hear a corresponding sound. Consider removing the middle note, maybe? Here have a corresponding sound. Also this is fine, so no :c
00:54:455 (54455|3,54562|2,54669|1,54776|0) - You might consider replacing this with a 12 / 34 / 12 / 34 chordtrill to match the heavier sound if you want! Though that might be a bit hard. Very nice, fixed

Good luck with your map!

Kruzon wrote:

haii

modding

my key column format is as following: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

nm

00:03:883 (3883|1,3883|0) - this felt random and out of nowhere, i suggest you follow 00:02:169 (2169|0,2169|2) - pattern for consistency. therefore,
you can move 00:03:883 (3883|0) - to 4 for mirroring the said pattern Fixed

00:04:740 (4740|3,5062|2) - might as well inherit the zig zag stair from previous flow, i suggest shifting them 2 times to the left Fixed
00:05:383 (5383|1) - you may move this to 4 Fixed

00:27:026 (27026|3,27240|2) - should not be align the same with 00:27:455 (27455|3,27669|2) - due to the sound they represented are far different, they does not belong to the same group. i suggest you press Ctrl + G on 00:27:026 (27026|3,27240|2) - continuing the stairs Fixed
00:27:455 (27455|3) - you may move this to 2, so it is separate from the stairs, which is better as it represent squeaky sound Fixed

00:27:883 (27883|1) - i would move this to 4 as wider gap between notes represent loud sound nicely Fixed
00:28:312 (28312|3) - move to 2, pattern flow Fixed

00:36:883 (36883|3) - move to 3, repeat sequence and pitch relevancy Fixed
00:37:312 (37312|2) - move to 4, , Fixed
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hd

00:33:990 (33990|0,34097|1,34205|0) - its current pattern is map with no particular reason, you should've continue along the stairs. actually, if you want to revolve your pattern, then you can do so to these notes 00:34:205 (34205|0,34312|1) - since the rhythm actually shifted there Ok I'm following the stairs, Fixed

you are missing a long note here 00:43:097 (43097|1) - , you plot ln on identical section like this at here 00:44:812 (44812|3,45026|0) - Fixed

nothing much to say here, it's good but not perfect, saying more would be out of question since i dont want to force my pattern styling into yours Oh owo

good luck with your map c:

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hi game rock . . . i'm really sorry for big delay
really busy nowadays, but here is my mod

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click

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  [EZ]

1. 00:12:455 (12455|2) - this will be better to change into single note only (give some break) and since on that part is not contains any long sound, that's really weird to press LN while no long sound on that.
2. 00:18:455 (18455|2,18776|1,19097|2) - move to 1 3 1 for have some "feels" it's way better to press
3. 00:19:312 (19312|3) - same reason as my first mod, better to change into a single note only
4. 00:22:205 (22205|0,22740|2) - arrange this to 4th column, since the sog itself is repeating too . . . this one is just an sample, actually other part is have some issue with pitch too, you can find it by yourself
5. 00:23:169 - until 00:26:169 - i don't know why you leave 4th column blank as well . . . suggest to make it more balanced in all column
6. 00:29:597 (29597|1) - move to first column, it's different sound/feel like this part 00:29:062 (29062|1) -
7. 00:30:026 (30026|3) - you can move this to 3 afterward ^
8. 00:32:169 (32169|3) - move this to 3 for more balance pattern
9. 00:33:455 (33455|1,33455|0,33883|2,33883|3) - Ctrl H, this would be more fit according to vocal sound . . . try it
10. 00:41:169 - i suggest you to add a note on this part for closing the instrument, idk i just feel weird with that previous LN
11. 00:42:776 (42776|1,43097|2,43312|0) - arrange to 3 2 4 . . . it's more fit
12. 00:43:526 (43526|1) - i don't know what your following for . . . suggest to delete it, since other part is not using like that, example on this 00:45:240 -
    
    All fixed in EZ
    
    [HD]
13. 00:03:883 (3883|2) - move to 4, it's more well balanced and fit with your other vocal or kick part
14. 00:09:026 (9026|2,9240|2) - why this part same column ? please move the other one into another column, since that part is have no same sound
15. 00:12:455 - add a note here, i think you've missed a kick sound here, just like 00:09:026 -
16. just writing a big mapping technical issues here, i don't know why your map this low sound 00:19:740 (19740|0,19740|1,20169|1,20169|0,20490|0,20490|1,20812|1,20812|0,21026|0,21026|1) - with 2 note . . . and this strong sound 00:18:026 (18026|3,18455|1,18776|3) - with 1 note . . . that's really a big mistake in this entire diff, maybe you need to re-arrange whole of this entire HD diff, because the 1 note for a big sound is really not make any sense . . . it's even not really have a different with your NM diff that actually using 1 note too, and sorry i can't point all issues because too much *^* . . . you can take that my suggestion for a sample for a concept
    i hope you can open your mind and make a big change in this diff

Thank you so mucho for you suggestion in HD, y change all this difficulty later, or maybe a long time...

Good and Unique song . . . Good Luck