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Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size) [OsuMania]

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-[ AmiShici ]-
Topic Starter
-[ AmiShici ]-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, January 5, 2016 at 1:41:22 AM

Artist: Horie Yui
Title: PRESENTER (TV Size)
Source: DOG DAYS
Tags: Elements Garden Nakaramu Kanata Raediaufar
BPM: 151
Filesize: 3173kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard - 4Key (3.13 stars, 689 notes)
  2. Insane - 4Key (3.59 stars, 855 notes)
  3. Raedi's Normal - 4Key (1.82 stars, 437 notes)
Download: Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size)
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Last edited by -[ AmiShici ]- , edited 9 times in total.
Davin Fortune
584 posts
Joined June 2014
Davin Fortune
The normal has arrived >w<

http://puu.sh/maYDX/5585087534.rar
-[ AmiShici ]-
Topic Starter
-[ AmiShici ]-

Davin Fortune wrote:

The normal has arrived >w<

http://puu.sh/maYDX/5585087534.rar
Disuruh ke PM biar bersih malah kemari :3
yowes terlajur

matur nuwun ^^
MEGAtive
1,656 posts
Joined August 2013
MEGAtive
Mark for M4M

Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size)

M4M with: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/361537


Column
|1|2|3|4|

[Insane]
Mods
  1. 00:01:213 (1213|0) - You can move this to |2| in order to emphasize the increasing pitch of the Piano.
  2. 00:10:253 - The piano streams starts here.
  3. 00:12:835 (12835|1,12935|2) - Really suggesting you to switch column of these notes so it plays better.
  4. 00:15:915 - Wut why's this section pattern is like this?
  5. 00:16:412 (16412|1) - This is a ghost note. Listen it carefully.
  6. 00:16:511 - The kick in here is running at 1/8 burst length. UTY to add or not but I strongly encourage to add that.
  7. 00:20:484 (20484|2) - You can move this to |2| so it emphasize the pitch of the piano which is low.
  8. 00:20:882 until 00:21:279 - It actually sounds same as 00:17:703 so it's encouraged to make the pattern same to maintain the consistency of the pattern.
  9. 00:21:875 (21875|3) - Move to |1| are nicer to play than current pattern.
  10. 00:25:352 - 00:25:451 - Missing kick if you hear it more carefully.
  11. 00:32:902 - There's a piano sound here that you should add there.
  12. 00:33:895 - You can hear the bass Piano here that I suggest to add note here.
  13. 00:34:491 - 00:35:286 - There's a piano sound here that's pretty audible. Adding note here would make the pattern not weird.
  14. 00:39:657 - Why's this Triple while 00:38:067 sounds same and only got Double? I recommend you to make it same for the pattern consistency. Also damn that (124)(134) Jack.
  15. 00:42:289 - I would prefer something like http://puu.sh/mcBUX/960e961384.png as the pattern since it's pretty balanced for hands.
  16. 00:47:206 - I prefer you to change this to double since it's what you do at 00:50:385
  17. 01:07:769 - I wonder for what purpose is this Extra LN.... Since at 01:06:180 it doesn't exist. And there's no guitar sounding there. The guitar's sounding at 01:07:570 FYI.
  18. 01:14:226 - Missing note for the Piano. Listen it carefully.
  19. 01:18:597 - Missing notes for snare like 01:06:279
  20. 01:23:415 - Missing kick in here. Complete the Burst.

[Hard]
Mods
  1. 00:06:776 (6776|1) - Suggest to move this to |3| so the left hand aren't doing a heavy work with the Jacks and the LN.
  2. 00:12:736 (12736|3) - I think you should delete this since there's no Piano sounding there. And when you refer to the Insane, it's the only section that you don't give double.
  3. 00:14:723 (14723|3) - Move to |3|, 00:14:822 (14822|2) - Move to |2|, 00:14:921 (14921|1) - Move to |3|. That plays better than the current pattern.
  4. 00:16:412 (16412|0) - Seems like ghost note as I mention in "Insane". There's no Piano or Drum here. Delete, then.
  5. ^^^If you do that, try moving 00:16:511 (16511|2,16511|3) - two columns to the left and 00:16:610 (16610|1) - to |3|. That plays better.
  6. 00:20:286 - 00:21:080 - I think this should be double since you're covering Snares with double in 00:21:875 and 00:22:670
  7. 00:42:736 (42736|1) - Move to |4|, 00:42:835 (42835|3) - Move to |3|. Making it Dive feels better since at 00:43:332 you're doing a reverse dive.
  8. 01:08:166 (68166|2) - I really prefer you to move this to |2| so column |3| don't have Hidden Jacks.
  9. 01:18:895 (78895|1) - I suggest you to move this to 01:19:094 . The instruments that are playing aren't dominant there.
  10. 01:24:061 (84061|1,84259|3,84557|2,84855|0) - Suggest to delete this since at 00:58:431 you didn't follow the vocal.

[Raedi's Normal]
Mods
  1. 00:22:968 (22968|1) - I'm suggesting you to remove this. I really thought that this wet snare aren't that audible so it's better to be removed.
  2. 00:28:431 - I'm suggesting you to make the pattern same as 00:30:021 . Or just make both more relevant to the pitch. Since there's no nuisance such as LNs.
    Nice diff, bro.

Well, nice song TBH and nice LN coverage. Good Luck.
Raediaufar
879 posts
Joined November 2014
Raediaufar

MEGAtive wrote:

Mark for M4M

Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size)

M4M with: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/361537


Column
|1|2|3|4|

[Raedi's Normal]
Mods
  1. 00:22:968 (22968|1) - I'm suggesting you to remove this. I really thought that this wet snare aren't that audible so it's better to be removed.
  2. 00:28:431 - I'm suggesting you to make the pattern same as 00:30:021 . Or just make both more relevant to the pitch. Since there's no nuisance such as LNs.
    Nice diff, bro.

Well, nice song TBH and nice LN coverage. Good Luck.
accept all, thank you mega ^^

update bozz
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58630
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:PRESENTER (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:PRESENTER (TV Size)
Artist:Horie Yui
ArtistUnicode:堀江由衣
Creator:-[ AmiShici ]-
Version:Raedi's Normal
Source:DOG DAYS
Tags:Elements Garden Nakaramu Kanata Raediaufar
BeatmapID:865177
BeatmapSetID:397084

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64,192,55849,128,2,56445:0:0:0:0:
320,192,56445,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,56445,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,56743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,56743,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,57041,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,57041,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,57438,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,57637,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,57835,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,57835,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,58233,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,58233,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,58431,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,58431,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,59623,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,59623,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,59822,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,60021,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,60021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,60219,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,60418,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60418,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,60617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,60815,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,60815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,61014,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61014,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,61412,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,61610,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,192,61809,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,62206,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,62405,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,192,62604,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,62802,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,62802,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,63001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,63200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,63200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,63398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,63597,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,63597,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,63796,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,63994,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,63994,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,64193,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,64392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,64392,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,64590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,64789,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,64988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,64988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,65385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,65584,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,65782,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,65981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,65981,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,66180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,66378,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,66577,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,66577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,66974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,67173,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,67372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,67570,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,67570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,67769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,67968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,68166,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,68166,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,68564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,68763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,68961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,69160,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,69160,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,69458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,69756,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,69955,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,69955,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,70253,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,70551,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,70749,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,70749,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,71047,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,71345,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,71345,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,71544,128,0,72339:0:0:0:0:
64,192,71743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,71941,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,72140,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,72339,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,72339,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,72537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,72736,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,72736,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,72935,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,73133,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,73133,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,73332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,73531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,73531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,73729,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,73729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,74127,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,74325,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,192,74524,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,74921,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,75120,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,192,75319,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,75517,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,75517,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,75716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,75915,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,75915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,76114,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,76312,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,76312,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,76511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,76710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,76710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,76908,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,77107,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,77107,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,77306,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,77504,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,77703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,77703,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,78299,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,78696,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,78696,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,78994,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,79292,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,79292,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,79690,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,79888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,80087,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,80286,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,80286,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,80584,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,80882,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,80882,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,81279,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,81478,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,81676,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,81875,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,81875,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,82074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,82272,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,82471,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,82670,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,82769,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,82868,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,83067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,83266,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,83465,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,83465,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,83663,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,83663,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,85054,128,2,85451:0:0:0:0:
448,192,85054,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,85451,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,85849,128,2,86246:0:0:0:0:
448,192,86246,128,2,86643:0:0:0:0:
64,192,86643,128,2,87041:0:0:0:0:
320,192,87041,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,87438,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,87835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,88233,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,88233,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,88829,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,88829,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,89226,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,89226,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,89623,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,89623,128,4,92604:0:0:0:0:
-[ AmiShici ]-
Topic Starter
-[ AmiShici ]-

MEGAtive wrote:

Mark for M4M

Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size)

M4M with: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/361537


Column
|1|2|3|4|

[Insane]
Mods
  1. 00:01:213 (1213|0) - You can move this to |2| in order to emphasize the increasing pitch of the Piano. // oki
  2. 00:10:253 - The piano streams starts here. // idk, i dont hear sound. keep for a while. actually i dong follow piano for stream on that part
  3. 00:12:835 (12835|1,12935|2) - Really suggesting you to switch column of these notes so it plays better.
  4. 00:15:915 - Wut why's this section pattern is like this? // oki, i dont understand to make batter stairs :lol:
  5. 00:16:412 (16412|1) - This is a ghost note. Listen it carefully. // nice cacth >w<)b
  6. 00:16:511 - The kick in here is running at 1/8 burst length. UTY to add or not but I strongly encourage to add that.
  7. 00:20:484 (20484|2) - You can move this to |2| so it emphasize the pitch of the piano which is low.
  8. 00:20:882 until 00:21:279 - It actually sounds same as 00:17:703 so it's encouraged to make the pattern same to maintain the consistency of the pattern.
  9. 00:21:875 (21875|3) - Move to |1| are nicer to play than current pattern. // ok
  10. 00:25:352 - 00:25:451 - Missing kick if you hear it more carefully. // sebenernya sengaja sih but it's okay
  11. 00:32:902 - There's a piano sound here that you should add there. // decide to delete this 00:32:703 (32703|1) - . Thanks for notice ^^
  12. 00:33:895 - You can hear the bass Piano here that I suggest to add note here. // ^ no
  13. 00:34:491 - 00:35:286 - There's a piano sound here that's pretty audible. Adding note here would make the pattern not weird. // no thanks. just follow main piano with vocal
  14. 00:39:657 - Why's this Triple while 00:38:067 sounds same and only got Double? I recommend you to make it same for the pattern consistency. Also damn that (124)(134) Jack. // my bad ><
  15. 00:42:289 - I would prefer something like http://puu.sh/mcBUX/960e961384.png as the pattern since it's pretty balanced for hands. // ok
  16. 00:47:206 - I prefer you to change this to double since it's what you do at 00:50:385 // ok
  17. 01:07:769 - I wonder for what purpose is this Extra LN.... Since at 01:06:180 it doesn't exist. And there's no guitar sounding there. The guitar's sounding at 01:07:570 FYI. // change to normal note
  18. 01:14:226 - Missing note for the Piano. Listen it carefully. // naisu ><)b
  19. 01:18:597 - Missing notes for snare like 01:06:279 sip
  20. 01:23:415 - Missing kick in here. Complete the Burst.// yeah

[Hard]
Mods
  1. 00:06:776 (6776|1) - Suggest to move this to |3| so the left hand aren't doing a heavy work with the Jacks and the LN.
  2. 00:12:736 (12736|3) - I think you should delete this since there's no Piano sounding there. And when you refer to the Insane, it's the only section that you don't give double.
  3. 00:14:723 (14723|3) - Move to |3|, 00:14:822 (14822|2) - Move to |2|, 00:14:921 (14921|1) - Move to |3|. That plays better than the current pattern.
  4. 00:16:412 (16412|0) - Seems like ghost note as I mention in "Insane". There's no Piano or Drum here. Delete, then.
  5. ^^^If you do that, try moving 00:16:511 (16511|2,16511|3) - two columns to the left and 00:16:610 (16610|1) - to |3|. That plays better.
  6. 00:20:286 - 00:21:080 - I think this should be double since you're covering Snares with double in 00:21:875 and 00:22:670
  7. 00:42:736 (42736|1) - Move to |4|, 00:42:835 (42835|3) - Move to |3|. Making it Dive feels better since at 00:43:332 you're doing a reverse dive.
  8. 01:08:166 (68166|2) - I really prefer you to move this to |2| so column |3| don't have Hidden Jacks.
  9. 01:18:895 (78895|1) - I suggest you to move this to 01:19:094 . The instruments that are playing aren't dominant there.
  10. 01:24:061 (84061|1,84259|3,84557|2,84855|0) - Suggest to delete this since at 00:58:431 you didn't follow the vocal.

    all applied


Well, nice song TBH and nice LN coverage. Good Luck.
Thanks for mod mega-chi ^^

update~
Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Shinzo-

MOD READY


Mod by Request on



7K

[1|2|3|4|5|6|7]


Mod Inside
[General]

Timing
  1. offset kinda late try 1103

[Insane]
00:04:292 - Missing Note
00:04:888 - 00:05:286 - you must add note here, you can't suddenly stop following the hithat
00:05:882 (5882|3) - move to 00:05:683 - since 00:05:683 - has a sound (Hithat) but 00:05:882 (5882|3) - has no sound
00:13:928 (13928|0) - delete since no kick like 00:14:325 - and 00:14:723 -
00:15:915 (15915|0,16114|2) - what about delete ? the loud piano is in 00:16:312 - 00:16:511 - and 00:15:915 (15915|0,16014|0,16114|2,16213|2) - this jack is really unnesecary
00:24:259 (24259|1) - delete since no guitar
00:25:253 (25253|0) - end the LN on 00:26:147 - and add note on 00:26:246 - because 00:26:246 (26246|1,26246|2) - has same sound with 00:26:544 (26544|3,26544|1,26544|0,26842|3,26842|2,26842|0,27041|3,27041|2,27041|1,27438|3,27438|1,27438|0,27637|0,27637|3,27637|2) - also as you can hear the guitar is kinda changing on 00:26:147 -
00:32:206 - 00:32:405 - add note please, just like the other piano
00:43:531 - add note for the kick please, just like 00:42:835 (42835|2,42835|3,42935|1,42935|0,43133|0,43133|1,43332|1,43332|0) -
00:51:974 (51974|2) - delete, there's no cymbal or for impact there, also diffrent with 00:51:676 (51676|1,51676|2,51676|3,52272|1,52272|0,52272|3) -
00:54:359 (54359|3,54359|0) - it's kinda confusing when you follow 2 note for kick on 00:53:663 - and suddenly follow the synt on 00:54:359 - and suddenly you follow again the kick 00:55:054 - not the synt (00:55:153 - )
00:56:544 (56544|2) - move to 1, oh man you still have 1 collumn, why should be jack ? ot's really unnecesary
01:06:378 (66378|3) - move to 01:06:279 - since 01:06:279 - has a kick and 01:06:378 - just a clap, not cymbal or loud sound
01:06:776 (66776|0,66875|2,66974|1,67074|3,67173|2,67272|0,67372|3,67471|1) - oh hey what sound that you layer ? i hear the same with 01:08:365 - till 01:09:160 -
01:09:458 (69458|1,69756|2,70253|2,70551|0) - consider delete them, since there is just a kick, not a cymbal or high sound just like you do on 01:11:047 (71047|2,71047|1) -
01:16:511 - omg why 2 note ? delete please, inconsistent
01:24:061 (84061|1,84259|3,84557|2,84855|0) - better to delete as a break after those epic part 01:22:670 (82670|1,82670|0,82719|2,82769|3,82868|0,82868|1,82968|3,82968|2,83067|0,83067|1,83166|3,83166|2,83216|1,83266|0,83315|3,83365|2,83415|1,83465|2,83465|3,83465|0,83663|3,83663|0,83663|1) - also you can't follow the vocal there and suddenly stop it on 01:25:054 - this part
01:27:239 (87239|3) - move to 01:27:339 - cuz 01:27:339 - is even louder than 01:27:239 - cuz theres a something like snare

[Hard]
00:03:001 - ok why suddenly 2 note ?
00:16:312 - try something like http://puu.sh/meJJp/0add74b99f.jpg for the same piano pitch
00:17:504 (17504|3) - move to 00:17:902 - since its snare and 00:17:504 - just kick and you make 1 note on kick 00:19:094 - 00:23:862 - or maybe just even delete it because you just make 1 note too for snare
00:25:948 (25948|3,26047|2) - Ctrl J for the piano and make diffrences with 00:25:253 (25253|3,25352|2,25451|1) -
00:25:253 (25253|0) - end the LN on 00:25:849 - and add note on 00:26:246 -
00:37:173 - missing note for the piano since you layer it on 00:36:776 (36776|0,36974|2) -
00:43:630 - 00:43:729 - plz why you didn't layer the sound ? even a kick on 00:43:630 -
00:51:974 (51974|3) - delete because no cymbal and diffrent with 00:51:676 (51676|3,51676|0,51676|1,52272|1,52272|2,52272|3) -
00:54:259 (54259|1,54359|2) - delete please, the hithat isn't just in there
01:08:365 - i hear the same sound like 01:06:776 (66776|0,66875|2,66974|1,67074|3,67173|2,67272|0,67372|3,67471|1) -
01:14:127 - the piano start here, so you missing note for the piano on 01:14:226 -
01:20:484 (80484|2) - move to 01:20:584 - for consistency in layering just like 01:18:994 (78994|3,78994|0,79094|1) -
01:29:623 (89623|2) - move to 2nd collumn cuz of diffrent pitch with 01:29:226 (89226|0,89226|2,89226|3) -
Good Luck and Happy New Year !
-[ AmiShici ]-
Topic Starter
-[ AmiShici ]-

Shinzo- wrote:

MOD READY


Mod by Request on



7K

[1|2|3|4|5|6|7]


Mod Inside
[General]

Timing
  1. offset kinda late try 1103

[Insane]
00:04:292 - Missing Note
00:04:888 - 00:05:286 - you must add note here, you can't suddenly stop following the hithat
00:05:882 (5882|3) - move to 00:05:683 - since 00:05:683 - has a sound (Hithat) but 00:05:882 (5882|3) - has no sound
00:13:928 (13928|0) - delete since no kick like 00:14:325 - and 00:14:723 - // [color=#FF0000]have kick :3[/color]
00:15:915 (15915|0,16114|2) - what about delete ? the loud piano is in 00:16:312 - 00:16:511 - and 00:15:915 (15915|0,16014|0,16114|2,16213|2) - this jack is really unnesecary // keep
00:24:259 (24259|1) - delete since no guitar // no, clap sound
00:25:253 (25253|0) - end the LN on 00:26:147 - and add note on 00:26:246 - because 00:26:246 (26246|1,26246|2) - has same sound with 00:26:544 (26544|3,26544|1,26544|0,26842|3,26842|2,26842|0,27041|3,27041|2,27041|1,27438|3,27438|1,27438|0,27637|0,27637|3,27637|2) - also as you can hear the guitar is kinda changing on 00:26:147 - // oki but end on here 00:26:035 -
00:32:206 - 00:32:405 - add note please, just like the other piano
00:43:531 - add note for the kick please, just like 00:42:835 (42835|2,42835|3,42935|1,42935|0,43133|0,43133|1,43332|1,43332|0) -
00:51:974 (51974|2) - delete, there's no cymbal or for impact there, also diffrent with 00:51:676 (51676|1,51676|2,51676|3,52272|1,52272|0,52272|3) -
00:54:359 (54359|3,54359|0) - it's kinda confusing when you follow 2 note for kick on 00:53:663 - and suddenly follow the synt on 00:54:359 - and suddenly you follow again the kick 00:55:054 - not the synt (00:55:153 - )
00:56:544 (56544|2) - move to 1, oh man you still have 1 collumn, why should be jack ? ot's really unnecesary
01:06:378 (66378|3) - move to 01:06:279 - since 01:06:279 - has a kick and 01:06:378 - just a clap, not cymbal or loud sound // add note, not move note
01:06:776 (66776|0,66875|2,66974|1,67074|3,67173|2,67272|0,67372|3,67471|1) - oh hey what sound that you layer ? i hear the same with 01:08:365 - till 01:09:160 -
01:09:458 (69458|1,69756|2,70253|2,70551|0) - consider delete them, since there is just a kick, not a cymbal or high sound just like you do on 01:11:047 (71047|2,71047|1) -
01:16:511 - omg why 2 note ? delete please, inconsistent
01:24:061 (84061|1,84259|3,84557|2,84855|0) - better to delete as a break after those epic part 01:22:670 (82670|1,82670|0,82719|2,82769|3,82868|0,82868|1,82968|3,82968|2,83067|0,83067|1,83166|3,83166|2,83216|1,83266|0,83315|3,83365|2,83415|1,83465|2,83465|3,83465|0,83663|3,83663|0,83663|1) - also you can't follow the vocal there and suddenly stop it on 01:25:054 - this part
01:27:239 (87239|3) - move to 01:27:339 - cuz 01:27:339 - is even louder than 01:27:239 - cuz theres a something like snare

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00:03:001 - ok why suddenly 2 note ? // mu bad
00:16:312 - try something like http://puu.sh/meJJp/0add74b99f.jpg for the same piano pitch
00:17:504 (17504|3) - move to 00:17:902 - since its snare and 00:17:504 - just kick and you make 1 note on kick 00:19:094 - 00:23:862 - or maybe just even delete it because you just make 1 note too for snare
00:25:948 (25948|3,26047|2) - Ctrl J for the piano and make diffrences with 00:25:253 (25253|3,25352|2,25451|1) -
00:25:253 (25253|0) - end the LN on 00:25:849 - and add note on 00:26:246 -
00:37:173 - missing note for the piano since you layer it on 00:36:776 (36776|0,36974|2) -
00:43:630 - 00:43:729 - plz why you didn't layer the sound ? even a kick on 00:43:630 -
00:51:974 (51974|3) - delete because no cymbal and diffrent with 00:51:676 (51676|3,51676|0,51676|1,52272|1,52272|2,52272|3) -
00:54:259 (54259|1,54359|2) - delete please, the hithat isn't just in there
01:08:365 - i hear the same sound like 01:06:776 (66776|0,66875|2,66974|1,67074|3,67173|2,67272|0,67372|3,67471|1) -
01:14:127 - the piano start here, so you missing note for the piano on 01:14:226 -
01:20:484 (80484|2) - move to 01:20:584 - for consistency in layering just like 01:18:994 (78994|3,78994|0,79094|1) -
01:29:623 (89623|2) - move to 2nd collumn cuz of diffrent pitch with 01:29:226 (89226|0,89226|2,89226|3) -
Good Luck and Happy New Year !
Thanks for mod shin ^^
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