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Feint - Stray

posted 2015-12-01T17:54:11+00:00

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Zectro

Joined April 2013

Zectro 2015-12-22T14:33:22+00:00

Stjpa wrote:
sorry for not modding ur Monk map, I stopped modding maps before u posted it lo

[Zectro's Hard]
sup m8 hiaiaiai

• 00:39:951 (4,2) - Small overlap.
• 01:09:257 (3,1) - Little bit high up there. D:
• 01:26:772 (2) - This could also hit HP-Bars.

thx fixed everything

pishifat wrote:
zectrp
00:54:605 (2) - 01:16:801 (2) - blue tick 1/4 sliders pretty confusing when there's more emphasis on white/red ticks surrounding it. 2 circles = more appropriate
01:06:483 (5,1) - 01:28:680 (5,1) - try to treat this like 1/1 spacing. rhythmically it's already confusing, but spacing makes it even more waht since it looks like your ordianry 1/2

happy holidays!!!!

thank you i tried
happy holidays to you aswell pishi!

Momochikun wrote:
[Hard]
00:28:333 (2,3,4) - this was quite confusing to read, try stacking (3) with (2) instead of (4) fixed in own way
00:48:795 (1) - missing normal sampleset ?
00:49:489 - i found this stop was pretty weird during gameplay, why not keep the pace of the rhythm ? its k
00:51:223 (5) - replace with symmetrical slider with 00:51:570 (1) - ? i think those were more neat what why this makes much more sense
00:54:171 (5) - ctrl g ? it's kinda hard for players on hard diff level current one is easier tbh lol
01:06:483 (5) - single note pls >< same like the next one

it's more like light insane with bigger CS imo xD , but well that's fine for the spread

~

~thanx

Slayed wrote:
o v e r m a p p e djok :c

zectro

pls stack notes asdsadsadsdasd its not marathon 5* wat which ones

i mean this 00:26:599 (1,3) - 00:29:373 (1,5) - o i thought it was easier to read like that

00:34:836 (9) - really very weak sound.. dunno if circle is really needed here

00:58:506 (1,2) - mom pls no...... even this will work better subjective x.x

01:04:056 (1) - stack with the beginning of 01:03:362 (3) - is really needed here or it will look messy

01:20:703 (1,2) - same thing as with polylines

01:25:558 (3,1) - again stack pls

01:26:772 (2) - touching the HP bar, can be hard to play

01:28:767 - why? just a circle on 01:28:680 - will be ok i think

thenk5med

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Zectro's Hard

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Raose

698 posts

Joined July 2012

Raose 2015-12-24T02:12:07+00:00

[Fort's Wondering]

00:33:882 (2) - add clap on head for consistency
00:52:610 (6) - how about tilting this slider upward a little so it flows smoothly from 00:52:437 (5) ?
01:01:801 (3,4,5) - consider ctrl+J (flip vertically) these circles for a more circular flow from 01:01:281 (1,2)

[Insane]

00:25:212 (1) - the flow from this slider to the next stream feels a bit awkward to play imo D: how about removing the repeat and placing a circle somewhere above the stream (ex: http://puu.sh/m6BTB/3d3fefc099.jpg), and the circle would emphasize the beat
00:30:414 (8) - the flow from the stream to this circle feels slightly jarring to me, how about putting it to the left of 00:30:761 (1)? ex: http://puu.sh/m6C4Q/5b205a8c68.jpg
00:57:986 (5,6) - ctrl+G feels better for me to play

[MKL's Insane]
can't think of anything e_e

[Advanced]

01:01:281 (1) - could blanket 5 a bit better
01:20:356 (5) - add clap to head

[Zectro's Hard]

01:06:483 (5) - i think this would be better as a circle or 1/2 slider, since there's no beat on the blue tick
01:28:680 (5) - ^

[xDarxen's Normal]

00:44:634 (1) - add finish on head?
01:29:027 (1) - add whistle to end of spinner?

[HB's Easy]

00:44:634 (1,2,3) - doesn't really match the background music imo, how about switch the rhythm to circle, long slider, slider (http://puu.sh/m6G8q/567c2f6b8e.png)?
00:47:408 (1) - add whistle here and similar places, like 00:47:408 (1) for variation in hitsounding

Hope my mod was helpful!!

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

FCL 2015-12-24T09:14:18+00:00

00:57:986 (5,6) - ctrl+G feels better for me to play not fixed since break a flow sometimes is okay
Other fixed, thanks!

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2015-12-24T09:39:48+00:00

Hey~ From my M4M queue.

General:
Looks clean to me.

Fort’s Wondering:

00:44:807 (2,5) –I don’t like this overlap at all. Stack or avoid them touching.
00:46:194 (2,5) -^
00:57:293 (2,5) -^
01:04:229 (2,5) -^, etc.
01:07:350 (3) –It’s weird that you suddenly use a shaped slider like this when you didn’t use it anywhere else.
01:12:899 (4) –Maybe rather place this circle here to create a square shape with 01:12:379 (1,2,3) –
Picture

Insane:

Maybe lower the HP drain rate to 6.5 so it isn’t the same as Fort’s diff. It has to be easier afterall.
00:25:212 (1) –I would try to place this slider somewhere else where the slider isn’t crammed between 00:24:171 (2,3) – and causes unnecessary overlappings. Just for neatness reasons.
00:33:535 (1) -^
00:35:443 (2,3,4,5,6,7) –Personally I would try to map these in the right side of the grid and not try to force the pattern to the left where it looks crammed with 00:32:755 (4,5,6,7,2,3,7) –
00:43:073 (7) –In the editor, the tail of this slider is quite hidden behind 00:42:466 (3) – Perhaps place that slider somewhere else where the tail is more visible so that players can see that it’s a short slider.

MKL’s Insane:

00:28:506 (3,2) –This overlap looks bad. It even looks as if the slider is hiding behind the circles. I suggest you try to avoid an overlap like that.
01:06:570 – and 01:06:657 – and 01:06:743 –Perhaps make the stream longer by placing notes there as well. Would play better imo.

I guess some of the overlappings in the editor bugged me a bit, but since it’s not really visible in testplaying, I guess it’s fine.

Zectro’s Hard:

00:22:437 (1,5) –Try to avoid this overlap please. It’s unnecessary.
00:26:599 (1,3) –Personally I feel it would be better to stack this.
00:29:373 (1,5) -^
00:49:489 –Quite an important beat and it feels empty if you leave it empty like this. I suggest you place a note here.
00:53:477 (3) –This slider seems a bit out of place since you miss beats that could have been mapped. Maybe this:
Picture
01:09:604 (1) –This circle is slightly touching the HP bar. I suggest you lower it a bit.
01:11:686 –Same as 00:49:489 –
01:15:674 (3) –Same as 00:53:477 (3) –
01:17:061 (4,6) –Uhh, why this ugly placement? Seriously, this overlapping looks so bad to me.
01:26:772 (2) –The head of this slider is grazing the HP bar slightly. Lower it a bit.

Advanced:

00:42:379 (2,1,2,3) –Perfect this stack. That jump also looks a bit big, especially since there’s a triple which is a bit difficult to play.

xDarxen's Normal:

Why not follow FCL’s kiai time idea instead?
00:19:662 –I highly suggest you start mapping here since most of the other mappers have and it is mappable.

HB’s Easy:

Why not follow FCL’s kiai time idea instead?
00:19:662 –Same thing I suggested to xdarxen. Why not start mapping here like most of the mappers? It is mappable.
01:00:241 (4) –Ctrl+J this. Better flow.
01:20:703 (1,3) –Be careful of making stacks like this since (3) is hidden behind (1) and it can be a bit hard for beginners to see it clearly. Pointing this out because a QAT has pointed this out to me as well before.
01:27:986 (4) –Same as 01:00:241 (4) –

Nice mapset overall. Take a shiny star from me.
Good Luck with getting this ranked, FCL~!

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2015-12-24T10:04:15+00:00

Hey M4M~

[Insane]

00:26:079 (7) - I don't like this overlap since it's not well stacked on 00:24:518 (5) -
00:43:073 (7) - i don't really like this overlap imo
00:55:905 (2) - It's better if you curve your slider better to make them blanket perfectly
01:01:975 (4) - blanket is off, Ctrl G this slider to see that the blanket is off - and place the slider at the middle of the other slider to make a perfect blanket by disableing the Grid
SPOILER
01:12:379 (1,2,3,4) - same ^

[HentaiBoy24's Easy]

00:19:662 - put a spinner here doode
00:57:466 (4,1) - blanket this better doode

i know you'll fix nothing 'cause you're a scumbad <3

[MKL's Insane]

Nice diff :O

[Fort's Wondering]
Nothing to sa here to, nice diff :O

____

That's all for me, nice map dude, hope i'll see this rank soon! <3

Makeli

932 posts

Joined October 2013

Makeli 2015-12-24T10:11:11+00:00

Helo im not home atm and prolly wont be for about five days but ill try to answer mods this evening with my moms laptop lol
Also merry christmas aaaaaaaa

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

FCL 2015-12-24T10:39:15+00:00

ayayayay thanks for modding!!!

-Nya- wrote:
Insane:
Maybe lower the HP drain rate to 6.5 so it isn’t the same as Fort’s diff. It has to be easier afterall. change to 6.7, don't like 6.5
00:25:212 (1) –I would try to place this slider somewhere else where the slider isn’t crammed between 00:24:171 (2,3) – and causes unnecessary overlappings. Just for neatness reasons. like this, maybe later
00:33:535 (1) -^ ^
00:35:443 (2,3,4,5,6,7) –Personally I would try to map these in the right side of the grid and not try to force the pattern to the left where it looks crammed with 00:32:755 (4,5,6,7,2,3,7) – well, remaped previous part
00:43:073 (7) –In the editor, the tail of this slider is quite hidden behind 00:42:466 (3) – Perhaps place that slider somewhere else where the tail is more visible so that players can see that it’s a short slider. fixed

-Nya- wrote:
Advanced:
00:42:379 (2,1,2,3) –Perfect this stack. That jump also looks a bit big, especially since there’s a triple which is a bit difficult to play. sure, fxd

Sotarks wrote:
[Insane]

00:26:079 (7) - I don't like this overlap since it's not well stacked on 00:24:518 (5) - it's my style, just accept it xD. Stack fixed
00:43:073 (7) - i don't really like this overlap imo fixed before
00:55:905 (2) - It's better if you curve your slider better to make them blanket perfectly aaaa, i tired to fix it
01:01:975 (4) - blanket is off, Ctrl G this slider to see that the blanket is off - and place the slider at the middle of the other slider to make a perfect blanket by disableing the Grid tbh it's not noticeably in game, but okay
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01:12:379 (1,2,3,4) - same ^ ^

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2015-12-24T10:50:40+00:00

Okey fixed almost everything thx guys 0/

SPOILER

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Creator:FCL
Version:HB's Easy
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Tags:dnb drum and bass piano HB24 xDarxen Maakkeli Zectro Fort
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xDarxen

313 posts

Joined July 2014

xDarxen 2015-12-24T11:42:11+00:00

Raose wrote:
[xDarxen's Normal]
00:44:634 (1) - add finish on head?
01:29:027 (1) - add whistle to end of spinner?
Done all

Hope my mod was helpful!!

-Nya- wrote:
Hey~ From my M4M queue.

xDarxen's Normal:
Why not follow FCL’s kiai time idea instead? Yep, I split it to two parts
00:19:662 –I highly suggest you start mapping here since most of the other mappers have and it is mappable. The problem with this is that this part is too quiet and the only thing I can add is a spinner, which I had before, but ppl said the reaction time was too short so, I removed it.

Thanks!

xDarxen's Normal

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Zectro

371 posts

Joined April 2013

Zectro 2015-12-24T12:12:24+00:00

Raose wrote:
[Zectro's Hard]
01:06:483 (5) - i think this would be better as a circle or 1/2 slider, since there's no beat on the blue tick
01:28:680 (5) - ^
Hope my mod was helpful!!

Thank you sir c:

-Nya- wrote:
Hey~ From my M4M queue.

Zectro’s Hard:
00:22:437 (1,5) –Try to avoid this overlap please. It’s unnecessary.
00:26:599 (1,3) –Personally I feel it would be better to stack this.
00:29:373 (1,5) -^
00:49:489 –Quite an important beat and it feels empty if you leave it empty like this. I suggest you place a note here.
00:53:477 (3) –This slider seems a bit out of place since you miss beats that could have been mapped. Maybe this:
Picture
01:09:604 (1) –This circle is slightly touching the HP bar. I suggest you lower it a bit.
01:11:686 –Same as 00:49:489 –
01:15:674 (3) –Same as 00:53:477 (3) –
01:17:061 (4,6) –Uhh, why this ugly placement? Seriously, this overlapping looks so bad to me.
01:26:772 (2) –The head of this slider is grazing the HP bar slightly. Lower it a bit.

Nice mapset overall. Take a shiny star from me.
Good Luck with getting this ranked, FCL~!

Thank you! Fixed everything from both mods~

Zectro's Hard

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reanik

51 posts

Joined May 2015

reanik 2015-12-24T16:40:15+00:00

Hey, I'm that idiot who used the wrong tab xD - no worries still had the map there so I thought I'd have a bit of a look

It's just gonna be minor things if anything, 'cause I've not modded in ages

It's all personal opinion, so you can ignore pretty much anything I say, I just wanted to get back into doing this

HB's Easy
Nothing I can see wrong here! Nicely done

xDarxen's Normal
Again, nothing I can see

Advanced
00:27:293 (4,1) - Um... yeah find this confusing to read, the overlap looks a little weird in my opinion

It's a nice map, that's just the only thing that bugged me about it

Zectro's Hard
00:25:905 - there could be a circle here. White tick shouldn't be left. I can hear something there as well.

00:53:998 (5,6,1,2,3) - Not too sure about this section, I think the slider (6) would work better as 2 hit circles leading in from (5) personally

01:00:414 (3) - Slider could probably look a little better

01:16:367 (6,1,2,3) - Same as a couple of comments back, although, this one might be easier to read how it is... I'm not massively sure on this one actually, but I'll put it here just in case

01:22:610 (3) - Another odd looking slider.

That's about it, It's a nice map, This is all just opinions though, so feel free to ignore the more nitpicky ones xD

I don't think I'll mod the higher diffs... I'm not the best mod in the world and it's been ages since I last did one.

It's not a full mod, but I hope you're okay with that, it's just a couple of things I saw in the lower diff range that I thought might be either hard to read, or looked a little off.

Good luck on getting this ranked. The insane difficulties are fun to play!

~Reanik

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-12-26T01:33:36+00:00

pishifat wrote:
fprt
00:22:090 (5) - needs to be audible okokok deleted inheritted points

Raose wrote:
[Fort's Wondering]
00:33:882 (2) - add clap on head for consistency F
00:52:610 (6) - how about tilting this slider upward a little so it flows smoothly from 00:52:437 (5) ? F
01:01:801 (3,4,5) - consider ctrl+J (flip vertically) these circles for a more circular flow from 01:01:281 (1,2) looks i need to keep this thing because well that triplet have good flow on 01:01:801 (3,4,5,6) -

-Nya- wrote:
Fort’s Wondering:
00:44:807 (2,5) –I don’t like this overlap at all. Stack or avoid them touching.
00:46:194 (2,5) -^
00:57:293 (2,5) -^
01:04:229 (2,5) -^, etc. i was wondering if this changed with other style method it will be okay, but well tbh i like this direction changin on overlap parts, this has cool crossing movement haha, well i will keep all overlaps
01:07:350 (3) –It’s weird that you suddenly use a shaped slider like this when you didn’t use it anywhere else. 01:06:830 (1,3) - this slider 1 block my way, makes slider tail has overlapped if i put common curve in slider 3
01:12:899 (4) –Maybe rather place this circle here to create a square shape with 01:12:379 (1,2,3) – ummm sure
Picture

Sotarks wrote:
[Fort's Wondering]
Nothing to sa here to, nice diff :O thanks you very much

thanks for mods guys!

i fix all suggestion and problems except red one
okay here the update

osu file format v14

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Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2015-12-26T09:46:53+00:00

[Fort's Wandering]

→ 00:21:050 (1,2) - This 1/4 is quite noticeable. I think it's best if you made this a 1/2 slider and added a circle on 00:21:310 - because right now you're skipping the red tick entirely.
→ 00:24:518 (5,6) - No jump? 00:20:183 (2,3) - 00:21:570 (3,4) - 00:23:131 (4,5) - all jumps xD.
→ 00:29:200 (6) - This note is barely audible for me. I think a 1/2 slider is better on 5.
→ 00:59:547 (7,8,9,10,1) - The spacing on this stream is a bit weird... each circle has a different spacing like 00:59:807 (10) - is 0.56 xD. I think you might have accidentally converted to stream with grid-snap on.
→ 01:13:246 (6,7) - A jump here would be niiice.
→ 01:22:090 (1,2) - I would reduce the spacing a bit. This jump is a bit sudden for me xP.

[Insane]

→ 00:42:899 (6,7) - I don't really get this jump tbh. it doesn't really emphasize anything
→ 00:46:021 (1,2) - Ctrl+G'ing this rhythm makes more sense. Make 00:46:368 - clickable xD
→ 00:54:691 (3) - I would stack this with 00:53:477 (3) - . Looks nicer than the partial overlap, and makes things easier to read.
→ 01:00:761 (6,1) - Would be cool if you could get them to stack.
→ 01:12:032 (8,9,1) - I don't really like this linear motion tbh xP. Linear motion in general doesn't play very well because its difficult to snap. You could try simple Ctrl J'ing 01:12:032 (8,9,1) - . Looks cool too.

[MKL's Insane]

→ 00:27:639 (6,1,2) - This is a bit confusing to read mainly because 6>1 is 1/1 and 1>2 is 1/2 but they are both stacked and 2 is even stacked under the slider. I would just use normal DS here.

Tbh that was my only concern, your stop and go flow is really enjoyable and what i mentioned above was the only place where i found it hard to read because of the double stack xD. Nice diff.

[Zextro's Hard]

→ 00:25:558 (2) - I feel a circle followed by a 1/2 slider is a better rhythm here.

→ 00:34:402 (7,8) - Ctrl+G the rhythm imo. The snares 00:34:576 - really deserve to be clickable lol.
→ 01:19:836 (3,4) - Idk I don't think the kicksliders are that necessary here. They just add unnecessary difficulty imo, and the sound on 01:19:836 - isn't even that strong (no snare or kick). So it shouldn't need that kind of emphasis.

[Advanced]

→ 00:27:986 (1,2,3) - Spacing here looks a bit weird. especially since 2>3 are overlapping. Compare to 00:27:293 (4,5,6) - visually you should see a difference.
→ 00:29:373 (1,2) - Here too, these slight overlaps don't look really great.

talking about stuff like this

[xDarken's Normal]

→ 00:23:651 (3) - I feel like for a normal, this beat isn't all that necessary. You could skip it and it would still be playable.
→ 00:25:558 (2) - However, for rhythms like this there is a very noticeable kick on 00:25:732 - that you completely ignore. You should map to those.

You could try a rhythm like this

→ ^Mentioned above applies to quite a few parts where you map a circle to non-snare/kick (loud beats) but skip over louder ones.
→ 00:30:761 (1) - For example.

[HB's Easy]

→ 00:23:824 (2,3) - Ayy blanket's off.

Good luck dude!

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

FCL 2015-12-26T11:20:11+00:00

monstrata wrote:
[Insane]

→ 00:42:899 (6,7) - I don't really get this jump tbh. it doesn't really emphasize anything fine for me, but okay
→ 00:46:021 (1,2) - Ctrl+G'ing this rhythm makes more sense. Make 00:46:368 - clickable xD fine for me, but okay
→ 00:54:691 (3) - I would stack this with 00:53:477 (3) - . Looks nicer than the partial overlap, and makes things easier to read. stack almost imperceptible lol
→ 01:00:761 (6,1) - Would be cool if you could get them to stack. ooops
→ 01:12:032 (8,9,1) - I don't really like this linear motion tbh xP. Linear motion in general doesn't play very well because its difficult to snap. You could try simple Ctrl J'ing 01:12:032 (8,9,1) - . Looks cool too. okay
also fixed other unclickable claps

monstrata wrote:
[Advanced]

→ 00:27:986 (1,2,3) - Spacing here looks a bit weird. especially since 2>3 are overlapping. Compare to 00:27:293 (4,5,6) - visually you should see a difference. ayyyyy lmao, spacing error
→ 00:29:373 (1,2) - Here too, these slight overlaps don't look really great.
talking about stuff like this

Thanks dude!

Makeli

932 posts

Joined October 2013

Makeli 2015-12-26T12:08:53+00:00

Thanks for the mods and I'm still not home so I still can't fix anything cuz my mom's laptop is shit and aæææ
Äfkfhwklgkhwuj
Have a fucking awesome new year everyone but pls don't drive and drink cuz thats just D.O.A

My rank is decaying I NEED PP

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2015-12-26T12:58:58+00:00

Hi

[General]

Widescreen conflicts in Fort's diff.

[Easy]

00:49:142 (4,1) - A very very very random suggestion. How about sth like this? > http://puu.sh/m96XV/26d172735d.jpg

[Normal]

Nothing found in particular

[Advanced]

1/4 sliders is kinda difficult for Advanced imo. I think triplets would be easier.
00:31:975 (4,1,2) - Spacing here should be balanced.

[Hard]

00:23:824 (1,2) - 00:27:119 (3,4) - The spacing is too small imo, compared to what you did on 00:25:558 (2,3) - 00:36:830 (3,4) . Some players might interpret this as 1/2 jump.
01:09:951 (3,4) - Should they have a similar spacing? Compared to 01:09:604 (1,2,3) .

Probably gonna stop here tho, I feel the map quality is very high now. I didn't mod insanes cuz I don't wanna throw some trash suggestions on them.
Good luck bro~

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

FCL 2015-12-26T15:51:55+00:00

In Advance spacing fixed a bit, thanks

Maakkeli wrote:
Thanks for the mods and I'm still not home so I still can't fix anything cuz my mom's laptop is shit and aæææ
Äfkfhwklgkhwuj
Have a fucking awesome new year everyone but pls don't drive and drink cuz thats just D.O.A

My rank is decaying I NEED PP

np, i wait you

xDarxen

313 posts

Joined July 2014

xDarxen 2015-12-27T10:06:49+00:00

monstrata wrote:
[xDarken's Normal]

→ 00:23:651 (3) - I feel like for a normal, this beat isn't all that necessary. You could skip it and it would still be playable.
→ 00:25:558 (2) - However, for rhythms like this there is a very noticeable kick on 00:25:732 - that you completely ignore. You should map to those.
You could try a rhythm like this
→ ^Mentioned above applies to quite a few parts where you map a circle to non-snare/kick (loud beats) but skip over louder ones.
→ 00:30:761 (1) - For example.

Thanks monstrata! Alright, I did a kind of remap, hope it's better now. Also, it is xDarxen not xDarken lol

xDarxen's Normal

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Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-12-27T15:57:52+00:00

monstrata wrote:
[Fort's Wandering]

→ 00:21:050 (1,2) - This 1/4 is quite noticeable. I think it's best if you made this a 1/2 slider and added a circle on 00:21:310 - because right now you're skipping the red tick entirely. but there is no something in red tick :/
→ 00:24:518 (5,6) - No jump? 00:20:183 (2,3) - 00:21:570 (3,4) - 00:23:131 (4,5) - all jumps xD. get rekt m8
→ 00:29:200 (6) - This note is barely audible for me. I think a 1/2 slider is better on 5. rekt the circles
→ 00:59:547 (7,8,9,10,1) - The spacing on this stream is a bit weird... each circle has a different spacing like 00:59:807 (10) - is 0.56 xD. I think you might have accidentally converted to stream with grid-snap on. fixed
→ 01:13:246 (6,7) - A jump here would be niiice. that jump is enough for 4 stars map
→ 01:22:090 (1,2) - I would reduce the spacing a bit. This jump is a bit sudden for me xP. then fixed a spacing

thanks for mod, monstrata. Fix all things except red one
update

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Makeli

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Joined October 2013

Makeli 2015-12-27T16:03:46+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
MKL’s Insane:
00:28:506 (3,2) –This overlap looks bad. It even looks as if the slider is hiding behind the circles. I suggest you try to avoid an overlap like that. - stacked some stuff
01:06:570 – and 01:06:657 – and 01:06:743 –Perhaps make the stream longer by placing notes there as well. Would play better imo. - SR = UP

I guess some of the overlappings in the editor bugged me a bit, but since it’s not really visible in testplaying, I guess it’s fine.

monstrata wrote:
[MKL's Insane]

→ 00:27:639 (6,1,2) - This is a bit confusing to read mainly because 6>1 is 1/1 and 1>2 is 1/2 but they are both stacked and 2 is even stacked under the slider. I would just use normal DS here. - that's the difference and that's how i thought it should be that (6) is stacked and (2) is that custom stack thing but idk i still think it's fine really

Tbh that was my only concern, your stop and go flow is really enjoyable and what i mentioned above was the only place where i found it hard to read because of the double stack xD. Nice diff. - tyty

Thanks for da mods aaaaaaaasdadfg

i can't think of anything clever here

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 43246
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Version:MKL's Insane
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Tags:dnb drum and bass piano HB24 xDarxen Maakkeli Zectro Fort cut version
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ErunamoJAZZ

osu! Alumni

2,693 posts

Joined August 2012

ErunamoJAZZ 2015-12-28T00:57:56+00:00

hi.

Easy and Normal... are fine, but feels without love

[advanced]
00:27:293 (4) - ~~delete maybe?~~ nahh, is fine.
01:29:027 (1) - I want to suggest this:

[Zectro's hard]
00:54:865 (4,5,6,7) - sorry, but this play very bad. Flow is very confusing. Pls, try other way.
map feels a bit "messy" imo.

[MKL's insane]
I dislike stacks like 01:23:131 (6,1) - (you use a lot in this map), stacks made this very quiet (and not feels dynamic).

[Insane]
00:54:518 (2) - wow, that was really evil ;w;, I think this will be bad idea, its very difficult to read.

[fort]
01:27:899 (2,3) - here was a bit difficult to read.

------
Very simple song (nice for speedrank hahaha)

Good luck!

Makeli

932 posts

Joined October 2013

Makeli 2015-12-28T02:23:34+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
hi. - hi.
[MKL's insane]
I dislike stacks like 01:23:131 (6,1) - (you use a lot in this map), stacks made this very quiet (and not feels dynamic). - oh nope nope nope nope and nope. i could almost say that my map is built around this thing (not really but it's a semi big part) and if i were to change this i would probably have to remap this whole thing and i don't feel like doing that cuz it's really fine. like if someone comes and utterly rapes me in an argument about this then i will do a remap but yea. generally in 1/1 transitions it's really hard to emphasize anything with spacing (unless you make it an overscreen transition) and so i just came to the conclusion that it would be best for everyone's sake that i just simply stack those.

ye that's what i have to say about it i guess this is one of those things where the mapper should be able to explain everything he/she does in his/her maps and i feel like i succeeded hooray!

when we gettin' dem bubbles bois oh baby äääääääää

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-12-28T05:33:57+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
[fort]
01:27:899 (2,3) - here was a bit difficult to read. fixed

ty for mods, eru.

updating!

osu file format v14

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FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

FCL 2015-12-28T07:47:09+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
hi.
[advanced]
00:27:293 (4) - ~~delete maybe?~~ nahh, is fine.
01:29:027 (1) - I want to suggest this:
nah, i want to stack it, like in Insane diff

[Insane]
00:54:518 (2) - wow, that was really evil ;w;, I think this will be bad idea, its very difficult to read. okaaay

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Very simple song (nice for speedrank hahaha) speedrank is shit (joke, just i can't do speedrank )

Good luck!

THanks for mod!

Maakkeli wrote:
when we gettin' dem bubbles bois oh baby äääääääää

Hope when Cerulean Veyron will coming

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-12-28T23:19:03+00:00

R.I.P Secretpipe BN virginity

Zectro

371 posts

Joined April 2013

Zectro 2016-01-02T20:06:08+00:00

reply to mods

reanik wrote:
Hey, I'm that idiot who used the wrong tab xD - no worries still had the map there so I thought I'd have a bit of a look

It's just gonna be minor things if anything, 'cause I've not modded in ages

It's all personal opinion, so you can ignore pretty much anything I say, I just wanted to get back into doing this

Zectro's Hard
00:25:905 - there could be a circle here. White tick shouldn't be left. I can hear something there as well. nah i find the little pause quite fitting

00:53:998 (5,6,1,2,3) - Not too sure about this section, I think the slider (6) would work better as 2 hit circles leading in from (5) personally
eh 2 hit circles makes it even more confusing imo
01:00:414 (3) - Slider could probably look a little better

01:16:367 (6,1,2,3) - Same as a couple of comments back, although, this one might be easier to read how it is... I'm not massively sure on this one actually, but I'll put it here just in case

01:22:610 (3) - Another odd looking slider.

That's about it, It's a nice map, This is all just opinions though, so feel free to ignore the more nitpicky ones xD

I don't think I'll mod the higher diffs... I'm not the best mod in the world and it's been ages since I last did one.

It's not a full mod, but I hope you're okay with that, it's just a couple of things I saw in the lower diff range that I thought might be either hard to read, or looked a little off.

Good luck on getting this ranked. The insane difficulties are fun to play!

~Reanik

Monstrata wrote:
[Zextro's Hard]

→ 00:25:558 (2) - I feel a circle followed by a 1/2 slider is a better rhythm here.

→ 00:34:402 (7,8) - Ctrl+G the rhythm imo. The snares 00:34:576 - really deserve to be clickable lol.
→ 01:19:836 (3,4) - Idk I don't think the kicksliders are that necessary here. They just add unnecessary difficulty imo, and the sound on 01:19:836 - isn't even that strong (no snare or kick). So it shouldn't need that kind of emphasis.
applied all ;w;
Good luck dude!

Electoz wrote:
Hi

[Hard]

00:23:824 (1,2) - 00:27:119 (3,4) - The spacing is too small imo, compared to what you did on 00:25:558 (2,3) - 00:36:830 (3,4) . Some players might interpret this as 1/2 jump.
01:09:951 (3,4) - Should they have a similar spacing? Compared to 01:09:604 (1,2,3) .
Probably gonna stop here tho, I feel the map quality is very high now. I didn't mod insanes cuz I don't wanna throw some trash suggestions on them.
applied everything
Good luck bro~

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
hi.

[Zectro's hard]
00:54:865 (4,5,6,7) - sorry, but this play very bad. Flow is very confusing. Pls, try other way.
map feels a bit "messy" imo.

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Very simple song (nice for speedrank hahaha)

Good luck!

thanks for the mods hehe

zectro's hard

osu file format v14

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riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2016-01-04T16:13:43+00:00

I was asked to look at the map. And so I did. A few suggestions were made, none of them are listed here so you should trust me.

Cerulean Veyron

2,090 posts

Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2016-01-07T20:32:55+00:00

Hello! M4M from queue as promised! Sorry for delaying ;n;

DnB 8DDDDDDDD

[> General <]

- Couldn't find anything wrong here, great job~

[> HB's Easy <]

01:11:339 (4,1) - Optional objective: The distance spacing here looks pretty much making a gap of 0.05x while you're using 1.2x as the difficulty's default DS. It's probably minor to make a huge change of this, so yeah... a bit moving with a few grids to fit the spacing, not a big deal as well ;p
01:23:477 (1) - Almost the same thing as above, but this is pretty close.
- This diff looks solid and simple, and great btw!

[> xDarxen's Normal <]

00:30:067 (4) - To make a rhythm consistency with 00:23:824 (3,4) - , Perhaps you could redo this to a 1/2 repeatable slider. To represent the music much clearer.
00:41:165 (4) - Kinda same as above, well... might not be necessary because you're repeating it twice as before. So, this may just be my suggestion, not highly recommended for a big change~
00:46:021 (3) - This sharp slider looks little odd with the red anchor's placement, might even be a weird place for the whole pattern(with 00:44:634 (1,2) - ). If you could make some symmetry by redoing this slider or trying sth else, that might work really cool tbh.
01:00:587 (7,8) - Could've been replaced this to a normal 1/1 slider to fill up the rhythm a bit more, exactly like you've did on 00:55:038 (7) - .
- Probably more further, there are similar issues to this. Just some issues about rhythm and so(sorry to be picky of it). Was a good diff too~

[> Advanced <]

00:23:824 (1) - Add clap on tail? Might be a mistake missing it, If you're making a percussion.
00:27:639 (6) - Same as above.
00:33:535 (1) - & 00:34:923 (1) - These two on their tails missed a clap~
- There are few more missing hitsounds you have skipped some, I might not mention them all but these ones above. Well, you may find them if you could~
00:37:177 (4,1) - This spacing looks pretty low, compared to 00:26:252 (4,1) - which seems a bit inconsistent. So, you can recorrect it with 1.3x as you've used the diff's spacing as default. It can make them a bit cleaner on a few consistency for sure.
00:42:379 (2,1,2,3) - Could look better when these were stacked behind on slider (2) for a bit of neatness. It can also be noticeable during gameplay, so you may not worry about readability~
01:00:934 (5,1) - Optional objective: The parallel you're attempting to do here doesn't look very good as usual, of course if you'd select these two and put in the same grid and same place, you can notice it's a little down further. It's probably minor for some fixing aesthetics ;p
01:04:576 (2,3) - You could actually try a little bit of moving here to ameliorate the distance spacing and bit of flowing structure. Also might wanna stack the slider tail on the next circle (4) much perfectly for some aesthetic improvement or sth:
ss
01:17:235 (4,5,6) - I prefer circle (5) stacks with slider (6) rather than circle (4). It's makes more sense with this kind of passive patterning, also identical to 01:11:165 (2,3,4) - . So yeah, probably some consistency can make it's little rhythm clear and cleanse. Might also both have an equal emphasis compared to this.
01:25:905 (4,1) - Optional objective: Well, if you could select these two sliders, you may notice something incorrect about aesthetics. Simply blanket? nahhh the spacing has a little incorrect distance too on previous and next(if both are selected separately). But it's probably little, so it's not that big~
- Just a few bits more of patterning and stuff. The difficulty plays okay imo.

[> Zectro's Hard <]

00:25:732 (3,4,5) - You've used some random distance spacing here, with a jump included in. I don't really feel right that the spacing and the sliders' jump is either a right place of this rhythm here. I may need to tell to balance it a few by a normal 2x spacing, and the jump would rightfully should be nearby on 00:26:079 (4,5,1) - or between circle (5) and (1). It might've been better than me just explaining this.
00:29:373 (1,5) - I prefer these two circles should be a manual stacking for visibility. Due it's diff setting is AR8, which is almost a little too high for any Hard diffs, It's likely unnoticeable while creating some back-and-forth by a triplet, and this shows an example. How about trying to split them by five to eight grids away in-between?
00:33:709 (2,3) - Optional objective: How about Ctrl + G with the two circles? Might perform (kinda like) a zig-zag flowing here, would keep it much smoother. But if you'd like the way it is now, then it's fine!
00:39:951 (4,1) - Probably didn't like this kind of progressing-slider downbeat patterning here, because slider (4) puts off it's previous ongoing flow out of place. Which might break a little of player's cursor movement over the next. I might recommend moving slider (1) nearby x:15|y:185 for a little more chance of keeping up it's structure. So to might not be much more worrying on gameplay.
00:47:928 (4) - Maybe curving this slider could emphasize the previous placed circles, just as how you've made a curve on them. Can also point it's curve to the next slider (5), which seems to be much smoother when guiding our cursor on it.
00:49:142 (4,5) - I'm afraid this jump is quite too big and too much for this downbeat. It's used perfectly, but not in the correct place. Rather reconsider replace the jump to 00:49:662 (6,7) - , or either just balance the distance spacing out as usual.
00:52:610 (5) - You maybe missed a clap here on slider head, for the percussion ;p
00:49:489 (5) - / 00:53:477 (3) - (slider tail) & 00:57:813 (4) - Add some whistles as done for consistency with the rest.
- There are many more missing of those, maybe you can find it once you're hearing this kiai part for some time. And you'd notice it for sure.
00:55:385 (7,1) - You can try a little bit of a 1.6x spacing jump here. Quite small, but pretty much stressing the downbeat would sound much cooler.
00:57:986 (5,6,1) - It's almost the same thing on 00:25:732 (3,4,5) -. I mean, I thought circle (6) supposed to be more further from slider (1) for a bit jump on downbeat. But it seems quite the opposite.
01:00:414 (3) - How about making this a little more sharper for a gimmick slider? Might do better for aesthetics, you can try another thing than just what I did on the sample:
ss
01:06:830 (1) - Same thing on 00:47:928 (4) -.
- Hardly mapping, it seems forced. You decrease DS on a very suitable part that deserves much like a jump or greater pattern than a lower spacing. It's quite okay, but not really amazed on this difficulty. Keep it up anyway!

[> Insane <]

00:34:576 (7) - How about balancing out the spacing here on this slider? because it (somehow) has a spacing gap of x0.10 between the notes. So maybe moving it towards to the next slider and behind the five-notes stream, probably a grid on... x:257|y:299 or nearby. It'll do a spacing of x2.1, on the top right of the editor. Might've been more accurate on placements ;p
00:43:853 (4) - Literally, there's no beat here. Either the drums did a small snaring triplet after this, it didn't hit here. So, you may delete this circle to avoid some overmapping issues. Don't forget to remake the circle formations after this is applied.
00:46:021 (1) - You might need to change this slider's tail, Sampleset to Auto. It sounds pretty noisy imo.
00:55:732 (1,2,3,4) - Optional objective: Sth's not feeling right here... not just because of some blanket aesthetics, nor flows. But it seems really weird on gameplay tbh. Like, gliding down with the slider, and gets behind the slider in all of the sudden for going to the triplets. I bet this should be changed into sth else... I'm not sure but just telling this part would look awkward to me.
01:11:165 (2,3,4) - You maybe want to curve these a little more for a follow-up with 01:10:125 (3,4,5) - . I prefer visibility than any other~ rather than just fully overlap them up behind 01:10:298 (5) - . Couldn't do the best work, but it's actually okay. Sth like this for example, you might wanna try different for a bit of consistency:
ss
- This diff is really good to play, the flowing structure and rhythm choice is very much suitable and great for this kind of music! Just some minor issues to be fixed up, and you're all fine with it!

I guess that's all I can find~ Good luck with this map!

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

FCL 2016-01-08T06:07:00+00:00

Cerulean Veyron wrote:
Hello! M4M from queue as promised! Sorry for delaying ;n;

DnB 8DDDDDDDD
[> General <]
- Couldn't find anything wrong here, great job~
[> Advanced <]
00:23:824 (1) - Add clap on tail? Might be a mistake missing it, If you're making a percussion.
00:27:639 (6) - Same as above.
00:33:535 (1) - & 00:34:923 (1) - These two on their tails missed a clap~
- There are few more missing hitsounds you have skipped some, I might not mention them all but these ones above. Well, you may find them if you could~ probably i forgot to add hitsounds after change patterns, okay
00:37:177 (4,1) - This spacing looks pretty low, compared to 00:26:252 (4,1) - which seems a bit inconsistent. So, you can recorrect it with 1.3x as you've used the diff's spacing as default. It can make them a bit cleaner on a few consistency for sure. yep, it's just a spacing error, fixed
00:42:379 (2,1,2,3) - Could look better when these were stacked behind on slider (2) for a bit of neatness. It can also be noticeable during gameplay, so you may not worry about readability~ okay
01:00:934 (5,1) - Optional objective: The parallel you're attempting to do here doesn't look very good as usual, of course if you'd select these two and put in the same grid and same place, you can notice it's a little down further. It's probably minor for some fixing aesthetics ;p done to parallel
01:04:576 (2,3) - You could actually try a little bit of moving here to ameliorate the distance spacing and bit of flowing structure. Also might wanna stack the slider tail on the next circle (4) much perfectly for some aesthetic improvement or sth: nice idea
ss
01:17:235 (4,5,6) - I prefer circle (5) stacks with slider (6) rather than circle (4). It's makes more sense with this kind of passive patterning, also identical to 01:11:165 (2,3,4) - . So yeah, probably some consistency can make it's little rhythm clear and cleanse. Might also both have an equal emphasis compared to this. you are right
01:25:905 (4,1) - Optional objective: Well, if you could select these two sliders, you may notice something incorrect about aesthetics. Simply blanket? nahhh the spacing has a little incorrect distance too on previous and next(if both are selected separately). But it's probably little, so it's not that big~ spacing is fine since i have nc here
- Just a few bits more of patterning and stuff. The difficulty plays okay imo.
[> Insane <]
00:34:576 (7) - How about balancing out the spacing here on this slider? because it (somehow) has a spacing gap of x0.10 between the notes. So maybe moving it towards to the next slider and behind the five-notes stream, probably a grid on... x:257|y:299 or nearby. It'll do a spacing of x2.1, on the top right of the editor. Might've been more accurate on placements ;p lol ok
00:43:853 (4) - Literally, there's no beat here. Either the drums did a small snaring triplet after this, it didn't hit here. So, you may delete this circle to avoid some overmapping issues. Don't forget to remake the circle formations after this is applied. fixed
00:46:021 (1) - You might need to change this slider's tail, Sampleset to Auto. It sounds pretty noisy imo. lol why i did it?
00:55:732 (1,2,3,4) - Optional objective: Sth's not feeling right here... not just because of some blanket aesthetics, nor flows. But it seems really weird on gameplay tbh. Like, gliding down with the slider, and gets behind the slider in all of the sudden for going to the triplets. I bet this should be changed into sth else... I'm not sure but just telling this part would look awkward to me. i often play my diff and never noticed any uncomfortable here. So i want to keep it
01:11:165 (2,3,4) - You maybe want to curve these a little more for a follow-up with 01:10:125 (3,4,5) - . I prefer visibility than any other~ rather than just fully overlap them up behind 01:10:298 (5) - . Couldn't do the best work, but it's actually okay. Sth like this for example, you might wanna try different for a bit of consistency: not see a problem here, but okay
ss
- This diff is really good to play, the flowing structure and rhythm choice is very much suitable and great for this kind of music! Just some minor issues to be fixed up, and you're all fine with it!

I guess that's all I can find~ Good luck with this map!

Thanks a lot for the mod!

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2016-01-08T10:58:11+00:00

Cerulean Veyron wrote:
Hello! M4M from queue as promised! Sorry for delaying ;n;

[> HB's Easy <]
01:11:339 (4,1) - Optional objective: The distance spacing here looks pretty much making a gap of 0.05x while you're using 1.2x as the difficulty's default DS. It's probably minor to make a huge change of this, so yeah... a bit moving with a few grids to fit the spacing, not a big deal as well ;p
01:23:477 (1) - Almost the same thing as above, but this is pretty close.
- This diff looks solid and simple, and great btw!

Fixed all thanks!

Update

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Zectro

371 posts

Joined April 2013

Zectro 2016-01-08T18:19:54+00:00

Cerulean Veyron wrote:
Hello! M4M from queue as promised! Sorry for delaying ;n;

DnB 8DDDDDDDD

[> Zectro's Hard <]
00:25:732 (3,4,5) - You've used some random distance spacing here, with a jump included in. I don't really feel right that the spacing and the sliders' jump is either a right place of this rhythm here. I may need to tell to balance it a few by a normal 2x spacing, and the jump would rightfully should be nearby on 00:26:079 (4,5,1) - or between circle (5) and (1). It might've been better than me just explaining this.
00:29:373 (1,5) - I prefer these two circles should be a manual stacking for visibility. Due it's diff setting is AR8, which is almost a little too high for any Hard diffs, It's likely unnoticeable while creating some back-and-forth by a triplet, and this shows an example. How about trying to split them by five to eight grids away in-between? I agree. Previous mods told me to remove the custom stack (i added it back now)
00:33:709 (2,3) - Optional objective: How about Ctrl + G with the two circles? Might perform (kinda like) a zig-zag flowing here, would keep it much smoother. But if you'd like the way it is now, then it's fine!
00:39:951 (4,1) - Probably didn't like this kind of progressing-slider downbeat patterning here, because slider (4) puts off it's previous ongoing flow out of place. Which might break a little of player's cursor movement over the next. I might recommend moving slider (1) nearby x:15|y:185 for a little more chance of keeping up it's structure. So to might not be much more worrying on gameplay.
00:47:928 (4) - Maybe curving this slider could emphasize the previous placed circles, just as how you've made a curve on them. Can also point it's curve to the next slider (5), which seems to be much smoother when guiding our cursor on it.
00:49:142 (4,5) - I'm afraid this jump is quite too big and too much for this downbeat. It's used perfectly, but not in the correct place. Rather reconsider replace the jump to 00:49:662 (6,7) - , or either just balance the distance spacing out as usual.
00:52:610 (5) - You maybe missed a clap here on slider head, for the percussion ;p
00:49:489 (5) - / 00:53:477 (3) - (slider tail) & 00:57:813 (4) - Add some whistles as done for consistency with the rest.
- There are many more missing of those, maybe you can find it once you're hearing this kiai part for some time. And you'd notice it for sure.
00:55:385 (7,1) - You can try a little bit of a 1.6x spacing jump here. Quite small, but pretty much stressing the downbeat would sound much cooler.
00:57:986 (5,6,1) - It's almost the same thing on 00:25:732 (3,4,5) -. I mean, I thought circle (6) supposed to be more further from slider (1) for a bit jump on downbeat. But it seems quite the opposite.
01:00:414 (3) - How about making this a little more sharper for a gimmick slider? Might do better for aesthetics, you can try another thing than just what I did on the sample:
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01:06:830 (1) - Same thing on 00:47:928 (4) -.
- Hardly mapping, it seems forced. You decrease DS on a very suitable part that deserves much like a jump or greater pattern than a lower spacing. It's quite okay, but not really amazed on this difficulty. Keep it up anyway!
I guess that's all I can find~ Good luck with this map!

Thanks for the great mod!

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xDarxen

313 posts

Joined July 2014

xDarxen 2016-01-08T19:24:42+00:00

Cerulean Veyron wrote:
[> xDarxen's Normal <]
00:30:067 (4) - To make a rhythm consistency with 00:23:824 (3,4) - , Perhaps you could redo this to a 1/2 repeatable slider. To represent the music much clearer.
00:41:165 (4) - Kinda same as above, well... might not be necessary because you're repeating it twice as before. So, this may just be my suggestion, not highly recommended for a big change~ Well, I did it for variety, if it was only 1/2 reverses it would be really boring. If it is really noticable, I will change it ok
00:46:021 (3) - This sharp slider looks little odd with the red anchor's placement, might even be a weird place for the whole pattern(with 00:44:634 (1,2) - ). If you could make some symmetry by redoing this slider or trying sth else, that might work really cool tbh. I did something
01:00:587 (7,8) - Could've been replaced this to a normal 1/1 slider to fill up the rhythm a bit more, exactly like you've did on 00:55:038 (7) - .Changed all the patters like that
- Probably more further, there are similar issues to this. Just some issues about rhythm and so(sorry to be picky of it). Was a good diff too~

Thanks Veyron!

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Come[Back]Home

1,785 posts

Joined October 2011

Come[Back]Home 2016-01-09T09:32:25+00:00

HB's Easy

00:22:437 - why do you skip this beat? It really weird that the map doesnt start on the downbeat. and in drum and bass its drum snare drum snare and youve just skipped the drum, which is actually important. Its like ignoring the fact that youre mapping dnb. just put a circle there. Its the only diff that skips the beat as well.
00:36:657 (2) - I would move the slidertail too 436/84. Like that it will go better with the movement of 00:35:269 (4,1) -
00:44:980 (2,3) - I really dislike the choice of sliders here. (3) is skipping a beat 00:46:021 - which was mapped the whole time before. Its really weird, since this only happens 2 times in the whole map. 01:01:628 (2,3) - here the same. Especially since its a downbeat which should not be skipped in this case
00:54:691 (4) - I would let this one face in the other direction as well. It will go better with the movement of 00:53:304 (2,3) -

xDarxen's Normal

00:24:518 (4) - I think that moving the slidertail too 48/24 would be kinda cool to play. It would kinda fit more with the movement of 00:23:824 (3) -
00:27:293 (7) - i think this one should be straight like the 1/2 sliders before. it looks better imo. will point this out just once though since its just my opinion
00:34:229 (2) - I think that this one should face into the other direction as well, like moving the slidertail too 208/368 so it will face into the direction of 00:34:923 (3) - it would feel better to play
01:13:073 (2) - move slidertail too 68/364. Same reason as above
01:18:622 (2) - ^ 24/140

Advanced

00:24:865 (4,1) - is it intentional that they are touching each other like that?
00:26:772 (2) - a kickslider in Advanced? That seems kinda hard to me. I think its better to use 1/4
01:00:067 (2) - ^
01:12:899 (2,4) - this might be a bit too confusing as well. stacks like that are mostly misleading.
01:16:714 (2) - you know
01:19:662 (3,4,5) - i think this would be cooler to play if you ctrl+g 01:20:009 (4) - and then 01:20:356 (5) - brings some nice movement into it
cool diff

Zectro's Hard

00:26:079 (4,5,1) - why the ds change here? theres nothing in the song which suggests such a thing. its just randomly placed
00:29:373 (1,5) - just my opinione but i think this would look way better with a perfect stack, otherwise it looks just random
00:40:819 (2,3) - i dont get the spacing here as well. (2) is understandable because of the strong snare, but (3) has no strong sounds to do such a spacing
00:44:287 (5) - this slider is ending on nothing, theres no sound on the blue tick, so why did you let the slider end there?
00:49:836 (7) ^ (wont point them out anymore)
00:52:610 (5,3) - this overlap looks really ugly tbh, couldnt you place (3) somewhere else?
01:07:871 (3,2) - ^
01:14:807 (5,3) - ^ (wont point them out anymore)

I dont really like this diff, everything seems so randomly placed and mapped.

MKL's Insane

00:44:634 (1,3) - a perfect stack would make this one easier to read (3)

really cool insane, and very well mapped.

Insane

00:44:287 (6) - yeah theres no sound on the blue tick. i think a 1/2 slider would fit way better
01:06:483 (6) - ^

awesome insane as well

Fort's Wondering

00:23:131 (4) - i would move this one too 212/372 so it goes better with the flow of 00:22:784 (2,3) -
00:25:212 (1) - this slider ending on a blue tick takes out the speed we had from before, it somehow stops the flow of movement. i suggest a 1/2 slider again since it fits more with the music and wont break the movement
00:29:373 (1) - those are ending on basically nothing as well
00:33:535 (1) - ill stop pointing them out, i just dont like the way how they overmap.
00:37:957 (2,3) - i know what youre trying to do here by trying to prioritize the snare 00:38:044 - but i think thats just weird, and its weird to play as well. constant ds would be way better here.
00:49:836 (8,9,10,11) - i think taking away the clap sounds on the blue ticks would make this one sound much better.
00:52:610 (6) - There is a clap missing on this sliders head
00:53:998 (7,8,9,10) - same as 00:49:836 (8,9,10,11) -
00:59:547 (7,8,9,10) - ^ ( i wont point them out anymore)
01:12:726 (3,4) - i think ctrl+g would create an awesome jump flow and pattern

Cool mapset :3
Good Luck!

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

FCL 2016-01-09T10:14:02+00:00

wow, surprise mod by CBH

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Advanced

00:24:865 (4,1) - is it intentional that they are touching each other like that? yep
00:26:772 (2) - a kickslider in Advanced? That seems kinda hard to me. I think its better to use 1/4 kicksliders are not hard for playing, i guess it's fine
01:00:067 (2) - ^
01:12:899 (2,4) - this might be a bit too confusing as well. stacks like that are mostly misleading. you are right, fixed
01:16:714 (2) - you know
01:19:662 (3,4,5) - i think this would be cooler to play if you ctrl+g 01:20:009 (4) - and then 01:20:356 (5) - brings some nice movement into it nah, i like it
cool diff

Insane

00:44:287 (6) - yeah theres no sound on the blue tick. i think a 1/2 slider would fit way better yes, probably it's overmapped. But you can listen it and observe long sound of increase. So i silenced ends now
01:06:483 (6) - ^

awesome insane as well

Cool mapset :3
Good Luck!

Thanks a lot!

Zectro

371 posts

Joined April 2013

Zectro 2016-01-09T12:33:03+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Zectro's Hard

00:26:079 (4,5,1) - why the ds change here? theres nothing in the song which suggests such a thing. its just randomly placed
00:29:373 (1,5) - just my opinione but i think this would look way better with a perfect stack, otherwise it looks just random
00:40:819 (2,3) - i dont get the spacing here as well. (2) is understandable because of the strong snare, but (3) has no strong sounds to do such a spacing
00:44:287 (5) - this slider is ending on nothing, theres no sound on the blue tick, so why did you let the slider end there? To emphasize the buildup
00:49:836 (7) ^ (wont point them out anymore)
00:52:610 (5,3) - this overlap looks really ugly tbh, couldnt you place (3) somewhere else?
01:07:871 (3,2) - ^
01:14:807 (5,3) - ^ (wont point them out anymore)

I dont really like this diff, everything seems so randomly placed and mapped. I agree, I found it extremely hard to map this. I am actively trying my best to improve the diff so it's as good as the other ones though.

Applied nearly everything, tried to fix the spacing issues.

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Makeli

932 posts

Joined October 2013

Makeli 2016-01-09T14:32:17+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
MKL's Insane

00:44:634 (1,3) - a perfect stack would make this one easier to read (3) - l o l i f i x e d i t

really cool insane, and very well mapped. - ty m8

osu file format v14

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Title:Stray
TitleUnicode:Stray
Artist:Feint
ArtistUnicode:Feint
Creator:FCL
Version:MKL's Insane
Source:
Tags:dnb drum and bass piano HB24 xDarxen Maakkeli Zectro Fort cut version mkl
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xDarxen

313 posts

Joined July 2014

xDarxen 2016-01-09T15:46:41+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
xDarxen's Normal

00:24:518 (4) - I think that moving the slidertail too 48/24 would be kinda cool to play. It would kinda fit more with the movement of 00:23:824 (3) -
00:27:293 (7) - i think this one should be straight like the 1/2 sliders before. it looks better imo. will point this out just once though since its just my opinion
00:34:229 (2) - I think that this one should face into the other direction as well, like moving the slidertail too 208/368 so it will face into the direction of 00:34:923 (3) - it would feel better to play
01:13:073 (2) - move slidertail too 68/364. Same reason as above
01:18:622 (2) - ^ 24/140

Fixed almost everything, thanks!

xDarxen's Normal

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Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2016-01-09T18:53:30+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
HB's Easy

00:22:437 - why do you skip this beat? It really weird that the map doesnt start on the downbeat. and in drum and bass its drum snare drum snare and youve just skipped the drum, which is actually important. Its like ignoring the fact that youre mapping dnb. just put a circle there. Its the only diff that skips the beat as well.
00:36:657 (2) - I would move the slidertail too 436/84. Like that it will go better with the movement of 00:35:269 (4,1) -
00:44:980 (2,3) - I really dislike the choice of sliders here. (3) is skipping a beat 00:46:021 - which was mapped the whole time before. Its really weird, since this only happens 2 times in the whole map. 01:01:628 (2,3) - here the same. Especially since its a downbeat which should not be skipped in this case
00:54:691 (4) - I would let this one face in the other direction as well. It will go better with the movement of 00:53:304 (2,3) -

Thanks!

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Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2016-01-18T08:29:01+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Fort's Wondering

00:23:131 (4) - i would move this one too 212/372 so it goes better with the flow of 00:22:784 (2,3) - i like wave pattern :<
00:25:212 (1) - this slider ending on a blue tick takes out the speed we had from before, it somehow stops the flow of movement. i suggest a 1/2 slider again since it fits more with the music and wont break the movement
00:29:373 (1) - those are ending on basically nothing as well
00:33:535 (1) - ill stop pointing them out, i just dont like the way how they overmap. lol ya this is how i map the song, really cool (especially for highest diff with full density mapping) lmao
00:37:957 (2,3) - i know what youre trying to do here by trying to prioritize the snare 00:38:044 - but i think thats just weird, and its weird to play as well. constant ds would be way better here.
00:49:836 (8,9,10,11) - i think taking away the clap sounds on the blue ticks would make this one sound much better. rapid faayaaa lol
00:52:610 (6) - There is a clap missing on this sliders head
00:53:998 (7,8,9,10) - same as 00:49:836 (8,9,10,11) -
00:59:547 (7,8,9,10) - ^ ( i wont point them out anymore) well yeah that thing sound weird if hitsounded like that, so i put clap on all notes
01:12:726 (3,4) - i think ctrl+g would create an awesome jump flow and pattern

Cool mapset :3
Good Luck!

thanks for mods CBH, sorry for late reply
fix all things except red one :3

updated

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