1. Mania Legend - 4Key (4,9 stars, 5808 notes)

Shinzo- wrote:

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Mod by Request
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[General]

AiMod

1. please fix
   

Whoops. Fixed
Timing

1. No Problem

Difficulty

1. ~Marathon~

Hitsound

1. No Problem

Metadata/Song Setup

1. No Problem

File/BG/etc.

1. Clear

[Mania Legend]

00:00:412 (412|1,537|3,662|2) - move to 3 2 4 ? for pitch I was scared about Jack but it plays nice
00:17:912 (17912|2) - move to 4 for pitch, also jack is not reallly fit to the music Done
00:17:912 (17912|2) - Ctrl H for pitch and then, 00:36:287 (36287|2,36287|0) - swap collumn for pitch Can't apply, 1st Timing you posted is wrong
00:38:099 (38099|1,38224|2,38287|1) - Ctrl H for pitch Done
00:39:037 (39037|1,39287|2,39662|1,39974|3) - make the LN on 1 2 3 4 ? for pitch Done
00:50:507 (50507|2) - should be 1/6 snap 00:50:482 - 00:50:532 - or delete, since there is guitar only and the guitar is like that Okay deleted, also rearranged and deleted some more notes to be consistent here
00:56:282 - add note for cymbal/impact Done
01:07:682 - http://puu.sh/m001N/05f3e97701.jpg for pitch Nice!
01:09:332 (69332|0) - should be on blue line 01:09:407 - except you follow the long guitar, the LN should be end on 01:10:082 - Changed the long LN
01:19:832 (79832|2,79832|3) - move to left hand ( 1 2 ) I keep mine to emphasize here the strong drum :3
01:29:057 (89057|3,89132|0,89207|3,89357|3,89432|0,89507|3) - delete ? since it's too overmap to make 2 note stream since the sound is not really loud or high sound Mhm changed a bit
01:32:507 (92507|2,92507|3) - actually should be 01:32:482 - and should be just 1 note Mhm i deleted it, i think 1/6 would play here not rly good
01:33:482 (93482|0,93557|1,93632|3) - should be 2 note since the sound is similar to 01:34:232 (94232|3,94232|2,94307|0,94307|1,94382|2,94382|3,94457|1,94457|0) - Nice catch! Added and rearranged
01:50:882 (110882|2) - move to 4, those jack is not really necesary Changed
02:14:282 - what about http://puu.sh/m00oj/ae6e9b6c8d.png? since those guitar are really fit for a jack, yeah maybe youll reject this, but if you agreed then maybe you should do it tho on the other chorus I take it :3
02:19:082 - the sound is just not really fit with this pattern, might re-pattern this part, i mean... not just 2 note thrill shince the sound is not like that I know what you mean but i will reject it for now. I like this trill here to emphasize the end of this Part with these strong drums
02:27:482 (147482|0,147932|1) - 04:14:282 (254282|0,254732|2) - i don't really understand why the LN's end is like that, better to just make it 1/1 LN Just wanted to try something new xD Changed
02:32:282 (152282|1,152282|0,152432|0,152432|1,152732|2,152732|3,152882|2,152882|3) - those can be 3 note according to 4 note on 02:31:682 (151682|2,151682|3,151682|1,151682|0) - (even harder but..) Maked them 3 Chords
02:57:257 (177257|2) - delete ? since not louder as 02:57:182 (177182|1,177182|0) - Okay
03:04:682 (184682|2,184832|1) - ctrl H to prevent unnecesary jack Done
03:05:957 - 03:06:032 - idk if this counted as missing note, but you should add note here I think its fine
03:06:932 (186932|3) - move to 2 since the pitch is diffrent with the others Keep, better Emphasize :3
03:35:282 (215282|0,215282|1,215357|3,215357|2,215432|0,215432|1,215507|3,215507|2) - should be just 1 note since it just same with 03:34:982 (214982|1,215057|0,215132|2,215207|3) - but if you make 2 note because of the guitar, then 03:35:432 (215432|0,215432|1) - should just 1 note since no guitar there Keep for consistency here
03:54:707 (234707|3,234707|2) - actually, i hear nothing, so you better delete Nice catch.
03:57:482 - might want to add note on 4th collumn for the cymbal Changed but a bit other
04:16:682 - actually 2 note stream on this part, is not to fit, what about http://puu.sh/m00Tw/04d437165a.png? I keep to emphasize the end of this part :3
04:19:082 - please, the part is so damn epic, why just make it 2 note like that huaaa T_T Added xD
04:29:882 - add note for cymbal ? just like 04:39:482 - Nice catch!
04:33:182 (273182|0) - it's kinda 1/2 sound but... I had it already like this. Its the Background guitar that is 1/2 but that wouldn't fit here
04:53:282 - add 1 more note for since the sound (04:52:532 (292532|3,292532|2,292682|1,292682|0,292832|0,292832|1,292982|3,292982|2,293132|1,293132|2) - ) is still there Done
04:56:282 - add note ? just like what you do on 04:53:882 - or why suddenly 3 note on there Done
04:57:782 - 04:58:382 - can be 3 note ? for the drum ? i keep mine, plays better :3
05:07:982 - should be 3 note for consistency with 05:07:382 - Added one
05:09:932 (309932|0,310082|3,310232|1,310382|2) - change to LN ? to emphasize those guitar Aktually this nice but i reject it, the LN's should be 1/4 and that really don't fit here :c
05:15:407 - maybe add 1 more note ? since you make 2 note in those part that has an LN No drum
05:18:707 (318707|2,318782|1) - Ctrl J to make a thril 05:18:482 (318482|3,318557|1,318632|3,318707|1) - for the guitar sound Changed
05:27:557 (327557|2) - should be on 05:27:594 - or it's a ghost note
05:27:707 (327707|1) - should be on 05:27:744 - Both accepted for now, but 1/8.. uhuhuhu xD
05:32:582 (332582|1,332732|3) - Ctrl J for pitch Haaaai!
05:34:082 (334082|0,334082|3,334082|1,334082|2) - maybe delete one of it ? since no more guitar like 05:32:432 (332432|2,332582|1,332732|3,332882|2,333032|2,333182|1,333332|1,333482|2,333632|2,333782|3,333932|0) - I know but i keep for this really really strong impact here
05:55:832 - should be 2 note for the guitar that supposed to be LN but you make it as normal note cause lack of collumn Changed
05:58:682 - add note on 1 for impact that changed kind of sound Added
06:09:032 (369032|0,369032|1) - actually i hear nothing hehe Deleted
06:19:082 - again... Keep
06:36:182 (396182|1,396257|2,396332|1,396407|0,396482|3,396582|2,396682|1,396782|0,396932|1,396932|2) - Ctrl H for pitch ? maybe.. Nice!
06:38:882 (398882|3) - move to 3 since no same pitch that supposed to be jack Changed
06:41:882 - add note for cymbal/impact Done
06:44:657 (404657|3,404657|2) - 06:45:257 (405257|2,405257|3) - should be just 1 note since it just the echo of the cymbal Drum. Also fit well here
06:46:682 (406682|0) - there is no sound that end 06:48:782 - all sound end 06:49:082 - Changed
07:25:082 (445082|0) - 07:26:282 (446282|0,446732|1) - ermm.. Hai haaaaai, changed xDD
07:35:582 - might want to try something like http://puu.sh/m01Cb/88439a442e.png for the guitar on 07:35:582 - till 07:35:882 - Hey thats nice!!
07:39:482 - try this http://puu.sh/m01En/f676617632.jpg ? for pitch, but really recomended since really fit to the song Changed!

phew~
i hope it can help you... x..x
I wish a really Good Luck for this map >w<

DixonBlackwing wrote:

Hii feeruuu

Mod here req via PM.

[Mania Legend]
00:17:037 - you use double here, while in 00:19:037 - 00:21:037 - etc, you only use one. Baka Feerum, changed
00:24:287 - just a bit curious XD.. you use triple for cymbal here, while 00:04:287 - 00:06:287 - etc, you decided to use double for cymbal instead. Here's an extra drum
00:56:282 - not add here? for cymbal? kinda weird with only one note. Already done
01:34:682 - not add for that heavy sound? Also add F? Haaai!
01:37:082 - you can also add one here XD Keep since i mapped vocal here
02:01:982 (121982|0) - ghost note? o.o Not rly
02:47:582 (167582|0) - add F? okay
02:53:432 - why not making triple for every sound that's like this? to differentiate it from 02:53:282 - , because i thought 02:53:432 - 02:53:732 - , etc have stronger sound. I think double is okay here
03:25:532 - 03:25:832 - 03:26:132 - is this on purpose not add one "C" on each of them? Done
03:34:682 - forgot "C"? XD Added
03:35:732 - not add? i hear something XD Guitar, but i like this little break.
03:45:332 (225332|1,225407|2) - if you add C on them, then you should also add C on 03:44:882 (224882|2,224957|3) - Nope
03:46:832 (226832|0) - Add "C". Done
04:05:732 (245732|0,245807|1) - why add C here, while you didn't add on other single in the jumptrill like 04:05:432 (245432|3,245507|2) - , etc. Becaue feerum is Baka, changed xd
04:47:882 - add one? for consistency with 04:48:182 - 04:48:482 - ,etc. Nice
05:05:882 - add one? i could hear and feel the emphasis, similar with 04:53:882 - No Finish
05:20:357 - i can't hear beat for this sound. Changed it a bit because guitar
05:34:532 - there's still sound here actually for you to add. Wouldn't fit
05:37:082 - add for cymbal? Done
06:31:082 - isn't the jumptrill supposed to start here? if so, add here and add two notes at 06:31:157 - No its just guitar there
06:53:882 - add here? similar sound as 06:54:782 - Nice catch!

gomen if it's short XD
It's been a while since i saw mania dragonforce XD..
I love DF's map ;w;
Take my starrr, shuuuu
Good luck feeruuu >w</

NixoNS wrote:

Easiest 5* map ever btw

from 00:04:287 to 00:16:287 I would have used triples, the sound is pretty strong (same for the rest of the beginning) Okay

02:07:082 This pattern is too light, I would have used this one instead http://puu.sh/m0qc8/16e1519023.jpg Nah i like my pattern. It fit well to the drum

03:23:882 The drum kicks in there, it's time for a jumpstream http://puu.sh/m0qr3/9bd1dae777.png I think i have enough jumpstreams here. I really like how my Pattern give some Variety to the song with these Mapped very loud Vocals

07:17:882 This patterns are getting boring and I think It's time to change them to something harder like that http://puu.sh/m0rai/eb922f3747.jpg ; http://puu.sh/m0rbU/99100b4edd.png ; http://puu.sh/m0rdH/d9244b3a93.png this is to not make people tryhard your map just for the pp and to variate a bit, 7 minutes are long and if the patterns are always the same it gets worse... I know what you mean.. but this is just not my Style. I try to avoid so many 1/2 jacks while jumpstream as i can. It just didn't fit my style.

Sorry for the super short mod, but I'm not the kind of modder who checks for micro errors in the map (which seems perfect to me), I just have some final hints to give you: 1) Variate so people can enjoy playing your map without getting bored. 2) Make some of the patterns harder at the end of the map, so it seems more epic.

Vote: 9.1/10 good job

Critical_Star wrote:

Hi Feu-nyan "w"/
mod requested via forum-pm
OWO marathonia~
column 1 2 3 4
incoming mod..
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feel free to reject any of it, just my suggestion here~
I like how you call your Box everytime xD

Feru Legend Operation <MISSION IMPOSSIBLE> GO

00:12:537 (12537|0) - move to 4?
- balance for right hand Yes!
00:18:537 (18537|2,18662|3) - CTRL+G?
-stair is fine, but would prefer 12 43 something more like jump pattern for these sound Haai!
00:17:787 (17787|2,17787|1,17912|3) - move to the left by 1
- does it feel better to hit? owo Yes it does! // kimochi~~
00:35:287 - how about a long note here?
-there is a long sound here example http://puu.sh/m4D7F/cb61ca7e4c.png and is the same instrument with 00:36:037 (36037|2) - No thanks. There is not that guitar i follow with LN's here c: But i cut the short LN you mention because was too long lol
00:46:382 (46382|1) - change into long note? end 00:46:682 - ?
- it fit the guitar sound well here~ thats actually really nice
00:52:082 (52082|3,52082|1) - why double here?
-and u stopped mapping double at the red tick which have a stronger sound than this. Will prefer too add double at the red tick for consistency Ehehee. I Mapped the Guitar! It is really fast to hit and fit awesome here! Also the Chord is to Emphasize the Pitchchange of the Guitar c:
00:58:757 (58757|2,58832|0) - CTRL+G?
- to make another pattern variation and make it different variation from 00:57:932 (57932|3,57932|0,58007|2,58082|1,58157|2,58232|3,58232|0,58307|1,58382|2,58457|1,58532|3,58532|0) - Changed and rearragend
01:05:882 (65882|2,65882|1,65882|3,65882|0,66182|0,66182|3,66182|1,66182|2,66632|0,66632|3,66632|1,66632|2,66932|1,66932|2,66932|0,66932|3,67082|3,67082|0,67082|2,67082|1,67382|3,67382|0,67382|2,67382|1) - triple note should be enough for all these
- i know u wanna emphysize those loud crash sound but each of have a different crash sound (using triple note allow u to make some space to differenciate those sound) I have to reject it for now Its a really strong crash there and it fit to such a metal song really nice. Also it don't really increase the difficult so i keep it for now!
01:37:307 (97307|1,97307|2,97757|2,97757|0) - hmm? random pattern?
-not really sure what sound u are following here (ﾉ )ω( ヾ) Vocals for Variation. They are really strong here and i think it fit well
01:35:282 (95282|0,95282|3,95357|1,95432|2,95507|1,95582|0,95582|3,95657|2,95732|1,95807|2,95882|0,95882|3,95957|1,96032|2,96107|1,96182|3,96182|0,96257|2,96332|1,96407|2,96482|0,96482|3,96557|1,96632|2,96707|1,96782|3,96782|0,96857|2,96932|1,97007|2,97082|3,97082|0) - mmm, hmm kinda odd (see below)
01:35:282 - start here , maybe http://puu.sh/m4MNp/d1b9a34255.png ? (suggestion)
-i think u can place a different variation pattern for these sound since they are different from each other :3 i just refer to your pattern variation here 01:34:682 (94682|0,94682|1,94757|2,94832|3,94907|1,94982|2,94982|0,95057|3,95132|1,95207|2,95282|3,95282|0) - goes to right then to left, i think u have my point :p AND THATS WHY I LOVE YOU YOUR MODS! You understand my Style. Thanks accepted <3
01:57:932 (117932|1,117932|0,118007|3,118007|2,118082|0,118082|1,118157|2,118157|3) - i guess u can make different pattern trill instead only 12-34, u been quite often using it. maybe http://puu.sh/m4Nc0/28b6dc15f0.png ? i don't really like this sorry :c
01:59:882 - till 02:01:082 - if u realize, there is a different sound for this section.Instead only follow those kick, how about adding double note for every 1/2 beats to emphysize those loud guitar sound? Idk.. i think that didn't fit very well here. But i keep it in mind!
02:20:282 (140282|0,140882|1,141482|2) - if u are planning to follow all these long sound then 02:22:082 - and 02:22:382 - should have a LN too
-example: http://puu.sh/m4NGI/28a0beb8b8.png I really know what you mean. But i want to give the Hands at least a little rest. You know this is 200 BPM Marathon. I think such little breaks fit well c: also i don't need to map everything
02:38:282 - till 02:40:682 - oh, no more double note for strong drum? Nope. I emphasize the guitar with fast 1/4 singlenote burst c:
02:42:482 - add a note here? (strong drum) nice catch. i Added a chordtrill here because its the same sound like very other chord trill \>w</
02:54:707 (174707|3,174782|1) - CTRL+G?
-more comfortable to hit and fit the pitch better Okay
03:05:132 (185132|3) - move to 1? (balance) Yes!
03:05:882 (185882|0,185882|1) - move to 34?
-the sound is kinda different from 03:05:732 (185732|0,185732|1) - No. I like this 12 12 and then strong 34 34 34 etc
03:06:182 (186182|2,186182|3,186332|3,186332|2,186482|2,186482|3,186632|2,186632|3,186782|3,186782|2,186932|3,186932|2) - hmm, i think they have different sound from each other
- maybe something like this ? http://puu.sh/m4O8g/a59d5cb2ea.png See above :c
03:14:282 (194282|3,194357|0,194432|2,194507|0,194582|1,194657|3,194732|2,194807|0) - mm, kinda random jump pattern here
- maybe this ?http://puu.sh/m4OgG/6030d5d7d9.png it is much more neat I feel so bad to reject so much.. xD but i like this random pattern. It makes the song more exiting
03:20:957 (200957|3,201032|2,201107|1,201182|0,201182|2,201257|1,201332|3,201407|2,201482|0,201482|1) - http://puu.sh/m4RHX/e1671d9f3e.png ?
- u can actually continue the jump trill till the end since it fit the sound I like this, also fits nice to the next Chords
03:24:107 (204107|2,204107|1,204557|1,204557|3) - kinda weird to hit these, like before Vocals
03:26:582 - start here, is there any other sound u can follow here? :s
-maybe u can try catch those long guitar sound here, keep on repeating the same pattern variation may not be too good since this is a marathon map so u might wanna make some different pattern for 2nd half part. rejected for now. Maybe its for some kinda boring but it just fit best
04:08:882 - same as before they have long sound here, and it really fit the sound + vocal well http://puu.sh/m4Sc9/ac8663c2e0.png Same like before
04:14:282 - add a note?
- i think is fine to have a note here too just like u do at 02:20:282 (140282|1,140282|3) - Nice catch!
04:17:882 - add a note for crash
-since previous part u already have a minijack for these, so better make it consistent Added
05:22:682 - start here too, u might wanna catch guitar sound + kick to avoid using the same pattern variation I accept this for now. I mapped guitar with Chord to here. Lets see how ppl will like this.
05:51:482 (351482|3,351932|2,352382|0) - nice, example of this :3 Also added some LN's in this Part. I will wait for players feedback and lets see.
06:55:082 (415082|2,415082|3,415232|2,415232|3,415382|3,415382|2,415532|2,415532|3,415682|2,415682|3) - hmm, there is some different pitch between them
- how about this? http://puu.sh/m4SLA/c5abdc26a4.png Okay
07:40:082 - maybe add another note at 2? (finishing hit 4-note) optional Added

hope these help~ good luck ferumiya~ (ﾉ )ω( ヾ)

Kyousuke- wrote:

Mod Request

Hi Feerum! for M4M xD sorry it was a bit late ;-;Take note that my mods mostly contains suggestion~ so feel free to reject ^^

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General

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1. Delete that unnecesarry green line lol, bcs there is no SV changes on there Good Point. Deleted.

Mania Legend

SPOILER

00:00:287 (287|2,412|2,4287|2,4412|2,6287|1,6412|1) - i actually dunno about the purpose to doing this into jack and i think that's not really suitable, because player will think that it's really a jack sound while suddenly the same sound pattern changed into the right one 00:08:412 - 00:10:412 - 00:12:412 - 00:14:412 - considering to change the pattern into the normal one xd Removed these jacks
00:16:287 (16287|0,16412|0,24287|1,24412|1) - nah if this i think it's suitable, because of similiar drum sound
00:47:057 (47057|1,47132|2) - hmm make it same like the others lol (ctrl + h) bcs i don't see any pattern like this anymore in this part xd Why not
00:47:057 (47057|1) - add note like 00:52:082 - 00:52:682 - 00:53:282 - 00:53:882 - the others? No because in this part i emphasize the Guitar pitch change with a chord

01:14:882 (74882|1,75032|1) - whoa the only jack o.o i think you get stuck here xd how about 01:14:882 (74882|1) - move this to 1, and 01:15:032 (75032|0) - this to 3. it follows the pattern Changed by my own.
01:16:082 (76082|2,76232|3) - ctrl + g, so it keeps consistent and match with the pattern Yaaa
01:22:382 - ~ 01:24:482 - http://puu.sh/m5ZhU/092ad5c26d.jpg how about making this part consistent like the first 01:20:582 (80582|0,80657|2,80732|1,80732|3,81182|3,81257|1,81332|0,81332|2) - (or simply 01:23:432 (83432|2) - move this to 1 for avoiding a jack, but this might break your pattern) Actually a really nice idea so i take this!

01:43:982 (103982|2) - move to 1, for keeping your pattern consistent. since you map this part reversely every 1/2 white tick No dont want a 3Noted 1/2 Jack :c
01:47:282 (107282|1) - move to 1, 01:47:432 (107432|0) - move to 3. same like before, following the pattern and avoiding jack
01:52:682 (112682|1,112832|2) - ctrl + h, same like ^ Take both

02:00:182 - ~ 02:01:232 - this pattern is not well aranged, it turns like a kind of jack and become uncomfortable imo. suggesting to 02:00:257 (120257|1) - move this to 3, and 02:01:082 (121082|1,121232|2) - ctrl + h this one.
02:04:682 - ~ 02:05:732 - hope you can rearrange that pattern, it looks like not well arranged http://puu.sh/m74Y6/dd51fe5971.jpg maybe something like this? o.o I reject both. Somewhere the difficult have to be, also it gives some variety
02:14:132 (134132|2,134282|2,134432|1,134582|1,134732|3,134882|3,135032|1,135182|1,135932|1,136082|1) - hmm seems this intended? then i suggest you to make it same in 02:13:082 - ~ 02:17:882 - this part, so player will more easy to recognise the pattern (also for consistency) Because i'm an Evil little Feerum i rearranged it to more jacku c:
02:25:007 - whoops missing note? its have a sound and it feels awkward when there's only a space between full 1/4 stream lol
btw i liked the whole stream section in this map, it plays smoothly xD #blameFeerum2k15. Added

02:41:882 (161882|0) - move to 2, it looks better for both pattern and pitch Haai
02:48:332 (168332|3) - move to 1, and 02:48:407 (168407|2) - move to 4 for more constructive pattern. it's the only pattern that seems 'off' imo NoNoNoNoNo. No 3 Jacku's in my Jumpstreams!
02:54:482 (174482|2) - move to 2 or 4 for the pattern Rearragend all to pitch
03:07:832 (187832|1) - move to 4 for balance also for following 03:07:232 - this Nice Catch!

03:09:482 (189482|2) - move to 1, 03:09:632 (189632|1) - move to 3. I know you want to keep the pattern consistency, but it will affect to the comfortability so don't too be strict / forced with the pattern. Why not!
03:11:732 - ~ 03:12:482 - http://puu.sh/m77b6/ff27a9db45.jpg ^ for avoiding the unnecesary jack I'll take
03:14:357 (194357|0) - move to 2, for more flowy pattern and follows the pitch okay
03:15:857 (195857|0) - move to 3, 03:16:457 (196457|0) - move to 2, for avoiding a jack in the left side. also it plays better Nice

03:21:482 - ~ 03:23:882 - feels a bit off when playing this. might want to change the pattern xd Ohhh hell no i like mine
03:27:032 (207032|1) - move to 4, same with the mod before, for following 03:26:432 - 03:27:632 - this
03:27:932 (207932|0) - move to 3, 03:28:532 (208532|3,208682|1) - ctrl + g, yeah try to not use that pattern for avoiding a jack
03:30:332 (210332|3) - move to 2, 03:30:482 (210482|2) - move to 4, 03:30:932 (210932|0) - move to 3, ^ or you can try something different for that reason
^ if you accept, 03:31:082 (211082|2) - move to 2, for prevent heavier on the right side and more balance Accepted almost everything but the last chord i rearrange by my own c:

03:52:232 (232232|2) - move to 1. yeah again, i know you want to keep the consistency of the pattern, but try considering too for the balance Moved
03:58:607 - hey don't skip this lmao, it slightly affect to the playability xd so 03:58:532 (238532|2) - move this to 2, and 03:58:607 - add note at 3 The note on col 3 of the 1st Chord was just wrong Placed. Should be 1/4 beat up >.<
04:26:882 (266882|2) - move to 2, like the before. Since you're following the guitar right? i mean not the effect / other one No change because other pitch c:
04:28:832 - 04:29:132 - it's not fair lol when you add doubles for clap, but not in this finish sound even though it's more louder xd so add note on there Keep because the LN's are a note too
04:57:782 - 04:58:382 - add note for the finish sound? also add the C and F hitsound lol This would break a bit the Pattern i think so i keep mine for now :c

05:16:532 (316532|3) - change this to LN, and 05:16:607 (316607|2) - delete this. since it's still a part of the first sound transition, like 05:15:407 (315407|3) - Yeah
05:22:982 - 05:23:282 - 05:25:382 - 05:25:682 - add note like the others, it's generally the same sound 4x Nope because with the extra chords i emphasize the Guitar c:
05:27:932 (327932|1,328007|0) - ctrl + g this one. the current pitch is wrong and this is the right one Nice Catch.
05:29:957 (329957|3) - move to 3 for more arranged and flowy pattern xd I keep mine i think it plays better

05:42:782 - ~ 05:43:682 - http://puu.sh/m7c1t/a070dcb794.jpg something like this is more comfortable imo xD
05:52:382 - ~ 05:53:282 - http://puu.sh/m7coQ/84e2c26c87.jpg same goes for this xD since the LNs pattern is fairly readable imo Woah thanks i sit so long in these and had no idea.
06:07:532 (367532|0) - move to 3, 06:07:682 (367682|1) - move to 1 No change
06:20:732 (380732|0) - how about moving this to 2? seems more better and flowy o.o Yes!

06:31:157 - add note on here? No
06:36:932 (396932|1) - move to 1 for more balance xd That wouldn't emphasize the next 4 Chords for Guitar
06:39:182 - add note at 4, since you add too in the others Good catch
06:54:332 (414332|3) - move this to 1, for preventing too heavy on the right side But i don't want sorry
06:55:082 - 06:55:232 - 06:55:382 - 06:55:532 - 06:55:682 - 06:55:982 - how about making this into 3 notes? since the sound is more loud and stands out rather than another loud sound in before http://puu.sh/m7dVL/b94f02fe31.jpg Accepted for now because its a nice emphasize here.

07:08:057 - ~ 07:08:282 - how about this? http://puu.sh/m7eaU/b36c265725.jpg it's more suitable also more flowy Yes!
07:36:182 (456182|2) - move this to 1, so it won't break the stairs pattern and more better imo xD Changed it by my own

omg this is the longest map that i've ever mod lmao

wow well hitsounded, i have no words on the stream bcs it fits to the song and plays smoothly xD
one thing that bothered me is the unnecessary jack in some pattern, so that's why i pointed it a lot. Oh also try to make more variation of pattern bcs it constantly repeat in some part, which is make the player bored (since the length is soo long lmao)
Overall it's a nice map!

Phil wrote:

Feerum mein Popokloß, sei mir nicht böse für den ranzigen Mod :p

03:57:482 - Sehe zwar, was der darstellen soll, ist aber meines erachtens nach unpassend Yeah war eig für den Finish gedacht. Hat mir einer vorgeschlagen, hab aber nur drauf gewartet das einer sagt "no no"
03:58:532 - Hier fehlt ein Akkord Naah. ich hatte hier vorher ein. Habs aber rearranged so das es jeweis 4 Single und 4 Chords abwechseln sind. Spielt sich einfach viel besser
05:15:782 (315782|0,315932|3) - Die raus, da du in dieser Section das Gitarrensolo repräsentieren willst und diese Zwei Singles wahrscheinlich das Drum darstellen sollen, also raus mit denen, sonst wär's nicht konsistent
05:16:982 (316982|2,317132|0) - Das Gleiche mit den beiden Nice Catch. Beides entfernt
05:19:682 (319682|0,319832|3,319982|0,320132|3) - Auch hier das Gleiche Mhm.. nagut. Vorerst akzeptiert da es sich ohne die etwas leer anfühlt. Ma gucken was die anderen dazu sagen
05:25:382 - fehlender Akkord Nope weil ich die Extra Chords hier für die Gitarre benutzt hab. Da is keine
06:31:082 - Mach daraus ein 34 Akkord Vorerst las ich meins für consistency.
06:31:157 - 12 Akkord hier Da is no sound o.o
06:36:932 - Würde 23 entfernen, da du das Drumgedöns davor auch nicht benutzt hast hab eine note entfernt und die andere auf 1 geschoben
06:39:032 (399032|0,399332|1,399632|1,400232|3) - evtl. entfernen Passt eig ganz gut find ich
07:26:882 - fängt zu spät an, 1/4 weiter nach vorne Es waren sogar 1/2 beat . Nice catch

Wie du siehst, sind es nur Kleinigkeiten,hoffe trotzdem ich konnte dir etwas helfen.
(sorry for native language btw, it's my first mod)

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hi feerum . . .
here's my mod as requested

|1|2|3|4|

click

1. General & Metadata
   - all general things (song setup, hitsound, offset & timing, BPM, song folder, osu files, Ai Mod, etc) was really fine and no issues found
   - metadata is clear, according to official youtube account https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ywxm6zLEjFY
   and you need to add "Inhuman Rampage" on tags since this song is the part of that album title Added
   
   [Mania Legend]
2. 00:17:037 (17037|0) - change this note into "drum sampleset" since the other has using it too for kind of this drum sound Whoops
3. 00:34:037 (34037|2) - i suggest to change this part into LN, that sound feels same like other LN that you used for that Okay i take that for now
4. 00:36:037 (36037|2) - if you listen it deeply, the sound is not start on white line . . . but it start on this timing interval 00:35:995 - You're right. Thanks!
5. 00:45:257 (45257|3,45332|1,45407|0) - actually i feels this jump was a little awkward to catch . . . i suggest to re-arrange that pattern into like this http://puu.sh/mhZsE/6fc8ac92b1.jpg it feels more smoothly to plays I give it a try
6. 00:51:182 (51182|2,51257|1,51332|0,51482|2,51557|1,51632|0) - actually that 3 notes part is exactly feels different . . . maybe you can re-arrange that into another form of patterns . . . for example http://puu.sh/mhZHz/9f6ff66cc9.jpg Okay. I take this but i rearrange it a little bit different!
7. 00:52:682 - reduce 1 note, there is no guitar push or impact like 00:52:082 - or 00:53:282 - Actually this is for the Pitch Change of the Guitar so i will keep it for now
8. 00:54:482 - add a note for guitar part . . . just like you do in this part 00:54:632 (54632|1,54632|2,54782|2,54782|3,54932|1,54932|0) - There was change to drum pattern but actually this plays really nice
9. remove clap hitsound on this note 00:54:782 (54782|3) - there's not contains any clap sound on here Nice catch
10. 01:09:632 (69632|1) - actually this LN is come too late . . . the sound itself starts before reached the red line Thanks! I changed it and will let this recheck to be sure
11. 01:30:632 (90632|2,90707|3,90857|2,90932|3,91082|2,91157|3,91307|2,91382|3,91532|2,91607|3) - this pattern form is repeated too much, i think you can re-arrange a little for more good flows in playing this part . . . and i saw in other parts seems have same problems too Okay lol
12. 01:39:482 - this impact was not really loud i think . . . reducing 1 note will fix this I like this 4-Noted Chord here so i keep
13. 01:56:357 - until 01:57:407 - well, that jump pattern can be arranged a little i think, actually the sound itself doesn't need jump like that . . . according to guitar flows i hope this can be an example http://puu.sh/mi0bL/c197240c19.jpg Thats a really nice emphasize for the drumroll!
14. 02:00:182 - 02:00:482 - 02:00:782 - 02:01:082 - add one more note on that timing, because you can hear that the guitar sound was really epic on this part, sad if you left that sound don't really understand here so i keep mine :c
15. 02:02:432 - 02:02:732 - 02:03:032 - 02:03:332 - why only 1 note ? actually it feels same like your previous pattern that already using 2 notes for clap sounds Here i follow the fast Guitar Only
16. 02:10:232 (130232|3,130307|2,130382|3) - my finger feels sad ;w; . . . can be rrrre-arrange for more smoothly ? Okay okay. #RipAvaFinger2k16 :3
17. 02:14:432 (134432|1,134582|1) - 02:14:732 (134732|3,134882|3) - i can understand you use jack for guitar sound . . . but not on this 02:14:132 (134132|2,134282|2) - because that part is not contains any guitar impact like other jacks Okaaay
18. 02:22:082 - and 02:22:382 - add note for vocal pls . . . feels wierd if you leave that because you've already follow vocal on your previous LNs Okay
19. 02:29:882 - try this ? http://puu.sh/mi0Il/53763508d6.jpg well, i feel that pattern fit with guitar flows :3 I give it a try!
20. 02:51:032 (171032|2) - move to 2, better flows Done
21. 03:20:282 (200282|3,200882|0,201482|2) - you can add clap hitsounds for this section . . . since the clap sound was still audible on that part Right :O
22. 03:26:282 - reduce 1 note, because this impact was not really loud again i like my 4-Chords
23. 03:46:832 - start here, you can add a note for that guitar impact, or make it jack like you do in this part 02:14:432 (134432|1,134582|1) - give some music "feels" for player when playing is fun concept i think I tried but it feels kinda weird here :/
24. 04:08:882 - and 04:09:182 - again, pls don't leave this vocal sound . . . because you mapped vocal too on your previous LNs Since i added the last i do it here too for Consistency
25. 04:47:732 - guitar here, suggest to add a note No need for
26. 05:34:382 (334382|1) - make this single note into LN is fit and fun i think, since the guitar sound itself is long too I know but then i would have to add more here and that wouldn't fit :c
27. 05:48:482 - not going to map this melody sound ? weaweawewawwwww that was really special sound that rarely show up on this song . . . so i suggest to map it, at least even just a LN is fine for that No.. i don't really like this
28. the rest of this map is fine i think, since you using much mapping part on guitar and drums

Good Luck Feerum !

-SoraGami- wrote:

Hi Feerum :3

okay here's my mod...
Really sorry for the huge delay, some crazy stuffs happened ;w; Hope you are okay o:

Column = 1|2|3|4

[Mania Legend]

- 00:05:412 (5412|1) - move to 3? for hand balance and also there's a huge space in column 3 Yes!
- 00:08:537 (8537|1,8662|2) - maybe put these in both outer column 1,4 for the change of flow Nice
- 00:20:537 (20537|2) - move to 2 for the trill-like feels https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4351408 while this 00:20:787 is the emphasis pattern Accepted!
- 00:26:537 (26537|1) - move to 2, kinda like with ^ but for hand balance for this part 00:27:162 (27162|2,27287|3) Nice!
- 00:35:995 (35995|2) - i think this LN ends here 00:36:162 where the sustain sound started to release You are right
- 01:05:882 - maybe change this quads to triples, because it feels monotonouos for me ;w; while in triples you can arrange them based on the pitch for the feels xD I like my quads
- if followed ^ 01:05:807 - add a note for the sound here
- 01:23:432 (83432|2) - move to 1 to balance both hands Yes
- 01:29:282 - add a note here, actually same with 01:28:982 it is just a pitch is higher Oh nice
- 01:33:332 (93332|1) - move to 1? for balance and comfortability preparing for the next pattern Yeah!
- 02:02:357 (122357|2,122432|3,122507|2) - weird to play because the last note in this hand is 02:02:132 that gives impact making the 1/4s play weird from the start + wide space in col 2, you can move this 02:02:357 (122357|2) to 2 instead You've convinced me, changed!
- then 02:03:407 (123407|2,123482|1) - ctrl + h, cuz this part is not that fun "Because its not that fun" xD Changed haha
- 02:05:282 (125282|1,125432|1) - intentional? Actually idk anymore. Changed
- 02:05:657 (125657|2,125732|1) - ctrl + h for different feels, the double note is same with the last double 02:05:432 Okay
- 02:17:057 (137057|1,137132|2,137132|3,137282|2) - move to 4,23,2 so that 02:17:582 (137582|0,137657|2,137732|1,137732|3) - can move to 4,3,12 to avoid 02:17:732 (137732|3,137882|3,137882|2,138032|3,138032|2) which is i think too imbalance.. WoW Nice
- 02:19:007 - not adding note? Well oaky
- 02:31:682 (151682|1) - remove? to show the same impact with 02:31:082 cuz they are the same You guys really don't like quads? Changed
- 02:38:282 (158282|0,158357|2) - move to 3,2 to avoid 02:38:132 (158132|0,158282|0,158432|0) or maybe 02:38:282 (158282|0,158357|2,158432|0,158582|1) - move to 3,1,2,1 for the start up boogling pattern here 02:38:582 xD changed
- 02:41:882 - pattern suggestion: 1,2,4,3,2,1,3,2 Keep mine. I really like mine :c
- 02:52:982 - same about the quads i mentioned before (just a suggestion tho xD I keep the quads!
- suggestion: 04:03:632 (243632|1) - move to 3 since it has a same pattern with 04:03:332 then 04:03:782 (243782|2,243857|3,243932|1,243932|2) - 2,3,14 so you can balance this note 04:04:082 (244082|0) - to 2 Accepted
- 04:18:482 - remove 1? same with 02:31:682 okaaaay
- 04:53:357 (293357|2,293432|1,293507|3) - move to 2,3,4 for a smooth flow Sure i give it a try
- 05:29:882 - add note huge sound No change here. I think the singlenotes are enough to emphasize here the fast drums
- 05:32:732 (332732|0) - emove a note for each quad? like my reason before I think the Quads fit here very well. They give the song a. special feeling while playing it!
- 05:51:182 (351182|2,351257|3,351332|1,351407|0) - ctrl + g + h i for better flow, a difference with 05:50:582 also to emphasize that the roll is going down here 05:51:182 Sure!
- 06:27:632 (387632|2) - move to 4 then 06:27:782 (387782|3,387857|2,387932|1) - move to left to balance the flow and col 1 has a huge space there Yeah
- 07:01:832 (421832|1) - move to 4 for balance
- 07:02:432 (422432|2) - move to 1 same reason
- 07:03:032 (423032|1) - move to 4 ^ All accepted!
- 07:10:832 (430832|0,430832|2) - move to right then 07:10:982 (430982|1,431057|2,431132|1) - 1,2,3 to avoid the imbalance flow because of 07:10:607 (430607|0,430682|0) Changed!

- Really Nice map >w<)b i love the flow of the streams it's too soft to play Thanks ^_^

Goodluck Feerum!!~~ xD