Electoz wrote:
Sup, thanks for requesting my service again. Last time I was a bit drunk when I pointed out the tag conflict on my last mod.
LOL ^
Here you go.
[Normal]
Hit sounds are REALLY quiet, and I keep mine turned up pretty loud compared to other people. Might wanna up the volume on these by a little bit, even in a chill song like this.
00:00:146 (1,2) - clap/or finish on the end of these is nice
00:07:418 (1,2) - ^^
00:14:236 (6) - It's bugging me that this overlap isn't centered xd
00:18:100 - Don't hear what you're mapping here, if you're going for vocals it doesn't really match up
00:21:055 (5) - You should strongly hitsound the end of this slider or fix notes since you're transitioning from instrumental to vocal here, and it's kind of confusing since the end of the slider is a strong vocal hit
00:25:146 (1) - This part sounds great because sliders coming after vocals are lighter hits, so it's fine to start them on slider ends, compared to ^^ where it's the other way around.
00:27:418 (1) - Same here as 21:055, maybe this? this setup goes with drums too
http://puu.sh/lWFe6/34811c34a2.png00:51:055 (1) - I don't like how these look, but it's a personal thing, different direction on last slider would be neat to emphasize vocal difference there
01:11:055 (1) - I'd rather more vocal mapping here than a spinner
01:44:691 (4) - This is kinda weird, I like singles at both spots of 01:44:691 (4) - slider instead, to emphasize second vocal hit more
I like what you did 01:03:555 (2) - a LOT more than 02:09:236 (2) -
02:18:782 (1) - Don't see what you're mapping with this, hit starts on end of slider 02:16:509 (3) -
02:23:782 (2) - There's no hit on the return part of this slider here
02:51:055 (1) - Might want to make the end corner on that slider more defined for the newbies
02:53:782 (2) - Starting vocal hit on slider end again
02:57:418 (1) - Here I feel it's fine because it's lighter, but in ^ that vocal hit starts the phrase
02:59:236 (3) -
http://puu.sh/lWGiG/9b8a67533c.png03:07:646 (3) - Same as 2:53
[Advanced]
AR almost 9 feels bad. AR 8 feels great. okay, AR 8 feels a little slow, maybe a little higher than that? Play with it.
00:21:055 (4) - I like a slider here instead of 2 singles, emphasizes the switch over to vocals
00:26:964 (5) - Not a huge fan of the breath mapping here, plus it puts the main vocal hit on the end of the slider
00:29:009 (3) - This SV swap feels REALLY abrupt
00:45:600 (3) - All of these are awesome, kudos to you on slider art!
00:57:191 (2) - This triple feels overmapped
01:11:736 (2) - ^^
01:26:509 (1) - That's a long jump, doing the square backwards would go along with your connected thing you've got going on
01:34:464 (4) - Same here as earlier, feels really fast
01:49:236 (1) - Think that end needs moved up just a hair
01:51:055 (3) - And I think this one needs moved down a hair
But then the other overlaps aren't set on. Eh, it's so little its no big deal.
01:52:873 (1) - Fixerino? That overlap there...
http://puu.sh/lWHfn/16e379fcfc.png02:02:646 (2) - Overmapped, I think
02:16:509 (1) - That's a rough jump too
02:18:555 (1) - This whole section kinda feels too loud, you're mapping harp here, quiet it down so that you can hear the harp toooo
02:49:236 (3) - Fixerino the overlap.
03:01:055 (1) - This feels very overdone
Good luck getting this ranked !
