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King Cream Soda - Gera Gera Po (English Ver.)

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Chibi Maruko
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  1. 00:06:549 (1,2) - This part is similar in music with 00:02:800 (1,2) - (and to lesser extent, 00:08:548 (1,2) - ) imo, so consider moving slider head to 00:06:799 - and 00:07:298 -
  2. 00:10:423 - No sound here, while there’s sound 00:10:673 - . consider making 00:10:298 (1) - a circle or making 00:10:548 (2) - two circles.
  3. 00:10:798 (3) - This could be a slider thanks to lingering sound.
  4. 00:29:418 (3,4,5,6) - I think it could be prettier if it was made circular (http://puu.sh/lzFcg/5ec61ffde0.jpg)
  5. 00:34:542 (1) - Consider making this a blanket for 00:35:041 (2) -
  6. 00:35:041 (2) - Consider curving the slider like (http://puu.sh/lzFj8/4d62dedee4.jpg ). I think it looks nicer and flows better because next note is above. Also, making this a blanket for 00:35:791 (3) -
  7. 00:35:791 (3) - Consider stacking this with 00:34:042 (4) -
  8. 00:56:036 (3,3,5) - Ugly overlap imo. Maybe a stack? xD
  9. 00:58:286 (1,1) - Tiny overlaps like this isn’t very beautiful imo. I suggest making overlap larger by moving 00:59:535 (1) - to (458, 165) or removing overlap completely.
  10. 01:04:534 (7,3) - Could be stacked (while moving 01:05:784 (4) - as well)
  11. 01:17:906 (5,6,1,4) - Try to avoid overlaps like this.
Good luck :3
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