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00:22:097 (22097|2,22097|3,22554|0,22554|1) - I personally think why not only just one note? Since they're only guitar sound and they're different with the rest of double notes there
The sound here is beat + guitar.00:22:173 - There is emphasize(?) noise like you mapped here - 00:22:630 (22630|3) - So why not add there?
great catch! fixed.You may have to ctrl+h from - 00:22:249 - to - 00:23:468 (23468|2) - if you applied above suggest
done~00:23:468 (23468|3,23468|0) - this LNs seems to have different sound. you don't split this? (You know, for more harder xD)
for the guitar :v00:24:077 - This is a big Impact noise, why no triple? ;w;
oh ya, sorry fixed ;w;00:25:143 (25143|2,25143|3,25143|0) - This triple have a different noise than - 00:25:447 (25447|2,25447|0,25447|3) - and - 00:25:143 (25143|0,25143|3,25143|2) - So maybe deleting - 00:25:295 (25295|0) - or - 00:25:295 (25295|3) - <- (Recommended) will be fit ( also for hand balance too. This pretty heavily righthanded imo xD )
uhh.. the main reason why it is triple is because of the cymbals. Might reconsider this later on. Noted00:31:386 (31386|0,31386|1,31462|2,31462|3) - delete one bcuz it's only Guitar noise only. and it's totally different with - 00:31:539 (31539|1,31539|0,31615|3,31615|2,31691|0,31691|1) - Cuz it have kick noise too blending with guitar
remove 00:31:462 (31462|3) - instead since there's a snare + guitar at 00:31:234 (31234|1,31234|0) - 00:32:605 (32605|3,32605|2,32605|0) - aw cmon the noise is too faint to have triple :v
nope, as you can hear cymbals there :v00:34:584 (34584|1,34737|0) - move one step to right? better looks
sound good!00:35:041 (35041|0) - delete this pls. This is only a fade out noise
nope, 2-noter for the kick + guitar00:35:650 (35650|1) - ^
^00:36:259 (36259|0) - extend to - 00:36:564 - ? The guitar bg cant properly hearded in 100% playback though so maybe player may get confused on what noise he must follows.
It exactly finished on red line. Another guitar strum can be heard also at the red line whic is the note 00:36:412 (36412|2) - 00:41:894 (41894|2,42046|3) - one step to left. better looks xD
Oki!00:44:178 (44178|2,44787|0) - delete? only a small guitar noise. also for comfortability
Same reason previously00:46:615 (46615|1,47224|3) - ^
Same reason previously00:46:006 (46006|3,46006|1,46006|0) - delete one or two of these? no kick noises there
There is a kick with guitar owo00:48:442 - no LN? like you do in - 00:48:899 (48899|3) -
as you can notice, every first guitar strum of the same sound do not have LNs for pattern openings.00:51:488 (51488|0) - delete. no heavy noise
There is a kick, what I did here is evert beat are doubles / 2-noters. You can also notice that in my map MAMA and other maps :v00:52:478 (52478|2) - this note is also contain kick like double notes before. why you not doubling these? (Maybe it'll be an issue because 1/4 jack notes. but
you can rearrange the following pattern)
This is on purpose as I emphasized the toms at 00:52:554 (52554|3,52554|1,52630|0,52630|2) - 00:52:782 (52782|3) - delete. cuz it's only guitar
great notice!00:58:036 - you not adding a following LN?
oh ya, fixed!00:59:254 - ^
On purpose, for the very low pitched guitar sound.01:01:843 - you can add double here cuz there's a kick noise
Oh my how could I forget this, Thanks!01:03:671 (63671|3) - delete. faint guitar and reduce heavily righthanded notes - 01:03:214 (63214|3,63366|3,63518|3,63671|3,63823|3,63975|3) -
kick + guitar like previous01:06:107 (66107|1) - delete. not a heavy noise
kick /beat sound = 2-noter in this map. Also there's a faint cymbal in this part.01:07:935 (67935|3) - delete. Heavily righthanded - 01:07:630 (67630|3,67782|3,67935|3,68087|3,68239|3,68391|3,68544|3,68696|3,68848|3) - and literally have the same noise with - 01:07:630 (67630|0,67630|3) -
once again, cymbals with kick = 3-noters.01:10:523 (70523|1,70676|0) - the 2 noter here doesn't seem heavy from what I hear. deleting this could make this section more comfortable
01:10:980 (70980|1,71133|0) - same^ but you may have to change the pattern a bit
^This is on purpose as the notes can be even a jumptrill here. I decided to make it half so I can perform patterns.01:14:026 (74026|0) - not a heavy noise. delete
removed this as I noticed I note the similar sound in the same chorus = 2-noters01:14:787 (74787|1) - ^
The explanation behind these 3-noters is that, every snare will be heard is triple / 3noters, and in this song, this part is reasonable as it have the violin at the background.01:17:072 (77072|0) - ^
^01:17:605 (77605|3,77681|0) - 1|4 respectively. could be more comfortable pattern
rearranged instead to different pattern.01:17:528 (77528|1,77681|1,77833|1,77985|1,78138|1,78290|1,78442|1,78594|1,78747|1) - owww. rearrange somehow?
Nope, this is on purpose for that strumming of guitars.01:19:965 (79965|2) - delete? cuz it's a faint noise and for a little bit reducing jackiness on col 3
snare + weak cymbal.01:22:554 (82554|1,82554|3,82554|0) - faint noise. why triple?
It is strong with guitar + cymbals + kick.01:23:772 (83772|0,83772|1,83772|3) - ^
^Okay there's other like this. many of them. becuz you sometimes use triple for big kick but sometimes you also mapped faint kick with triple. Idk which one you follow but if this broke your pattern a lot, I'm sorry ;w;
I do not triple the kicks except if there are cymbals or strong guitars :vaccording to the noise I heard.........
01:27:046 (87046|2) - should be double and - 01:27:122 (87122|1,87122|3) - should be single
on purpose so that I can triple the snare before this note.01:42:808 (102808|2,102960|3) - move left one step
oki!01:43:112 - missing kick noise here?
there is no kick in this part.01:43:874 (103874|2) - delete. too faint to has double
same reason previously01:46:919 (106919|3,106919|2,106919|0) - this 3 noter has a different noises than - 01:46:615 (106615|3,106615|1,106615|0) - so you might wanna change that
guitar with the cymbals.01:50:117 (110117|1,110270|0) - Move right one step
oki! fixed02:00:701 - does this should be double?
on purpose like previous02:28:341 - no triple? there's a cymbal noises
not following the cymbals yet in this kind of sound, its in the last part.02:33:214 (153214|3) - delete? not too heavy I think
kick + guitar02:37:935 (157935|1) - delete. the noise is just like the other single notes around
kick02:45:777 - add here and move - 02:45:853 (165853|3) - to 3? seems kinda odd to see this kind of pattern compared to other pattern in this "after 2nd kiai"
section
following the bass at 1/4th and 1/2 and 1/1 for the violin-like sound.03:01:919 (181919|3) - no noise. delete
Good notice! fixed.2 choices
delete - 03:16:615 (196615|2) - or - 03:16:691 - add one more notes here becuz there is a faint kick noise03:29:864 (209864|2) - delete. avoid jack and it's a faint noise
no change as the double there are for guitar + kickis - 03:32:148 (212148|0,212148|1,212148|2) - has the same noise with - 03:32:757 (212757|3,212757|2) - ? why don't you add a note there - 03:32:757 (212757|3,212757|2) -
good catch! fixed.03:35:041 - not triple? a big kick noise
whoa great notice. fixed!03:38:239 (218239|2,218239|1,218239|0) - no need for 3 notes imo, the noises seems kinda faint to me
how dafuq dis became 3-noters LOL, fixed!03:43:112 (223112|1) - what is this follows. if it's follow vocal it should be longer
It does follow the vocal but it has not literally to follow everything. This is because to have opening for the next patterns.04:00:930 (240930|1) - delete. becuz there is no cymbal like - 03:59:711 -
great notice! fixed.04:10:828 (250828|1,250828|0,250828|3,250828|2) - end of this LN could be more interesting
"stair-releasing-LN" pattern like this could be nice xD
nice! fixed![MX]
You not mapping the intro section like "Warning", why? (Applied to others too)
Fixed :v00:26:666 (26666|1,26742|2) - 3|2 respectively. more comfortable pattern
Fixed01:12:808 - add on 2 for entering kiai time Impact . also cymbal to add some stronger feeling. like something you map here - 02:23:468 (143468|3,143468|0,143468|2) -
Fixed01:27:655 (87655|3,87732|0) - 2|4 respectively. reduce some lefthanded pattern issues (seems this pattern will make a perfect connection to - 01:27:960 (87960|2,88036|3) - xD)
The notes at column 1 represents the strum of guitar which cause semi trills for left hand, this is on purpose and fits.01:37:478 (97478|1,97554|2,97630|1) - 3|2|3 reduce jack pattern
the funny thing here is that when you 3-2-3, the next notes will cause the jack pattern you have said Lol :v 01:40:067 (100067|1,100143|2,100219|1) - ctrl+h ^
Fixed01:40:676 (100676|1,100752|0) - 1|2 better flow and - 01:40:828 (100828|3) - to 4
wat, the last note already on 4, but yeah fixed.02:15:092 (135092|2) - to 4? seems empty on col 4 and the pattern in this section looks pretty much lefthanded
moving to 4 doesn't change the press for leftfor more comfortable pattern:
02:24:838 (144838|3,144990|1) - 2|4
02:26:209 (146209|1) - 4
02:26:209 (146209|1) - 1
02:27:579 (147579|0) - 2
02:33:975 (153975|0,154127|2,154204|1) - 3|2|3
02:34:584 (154584|0,154737|2) - 3|1
02:35:955 (155955|2) - 1
02:36:564 (156564|1) - 4
The triplets are on purpose and have their own phases. Also they are comfortable the way it is. Stairs is not always the answer for triple kicks @.@02:46:310 (166310|1,166462|3,166462|2) - one step to left
oki!02:46:158 (166158|3) - 3 or 2
moved to 3 instead.04:10:828 (250828|3,250828|1,250828|0) - end Of the LN could be more interesting
fixed![HD]
00:50:726 - it's a kick noise. why not double? I assume this - 00:50:879 (50879|1) - was misplaced. Keep it consistent pls
this is on purpose and understand first pls. The focus of the notes are for the guitar strumsl. Percussion is not always the right to be mapped on. You need some variations too.01:12:960 (72960|0,72960|1) - move to right one step seems more comfortable. also to avoid jack
It is already comfortable as the left will do the snare after than open-wide cymbal note.01:22:706 (82706|3,82706|2) - move left ^
fixed!01:51:945 (111945|1,111945|0) - ^ Right ^
As for this, is on purpose for the pitch of guitar.02:23:620 (143620|3,143620|2) - ^ left ^
^02:51:259 (171259|2) - does this should be on - 02:51:107 - on col 4? according on what I heard add note - 02:51:412 - 02:51:336 - and - 02:51:488 -
following the pattern before. so this will make consistent
oh it seems I miss this part, its incomplete. added notes. thanks!02:51:716 - add on 3. following the pattern next
^03:11:970 (191970|0,192046|2,192122|1) - 3|1|2 seems more comfortable.
already comfortable as it is with guitar pitch.03:29:711 (209711|0) - if this LN follow vocal, it's should be ended - 03:30:777
fixed!03:31:691 (211691|1) - ^ should end - 03:32:757 -
fixed!For more comfortable pattern
03:42:960 (222960|2) - 1
fixed!03:44:635 (224635|2,224711|1,224787|2) - 2|4|3
03:44:940 (224940|2,225016|1,225092|2) - 2|3|2
03:46:082 (226082|1,226158|2,226234|1) - ctrl+h
they are on-purpose as every 1/2 represents the strum of guitars causing mini-trills03:54:381 (234381|1,234457|2,234534|1) - move left. seems a lil bit odd to see 4 jack in col 2
its fine the way it is.03:55:904 (235904|0) - 4
no change.03:59:711 (239711|1) -
why you suddenly map triple? oh cymbal xD
yap XD since this is the ending, it won't be bad to add cymbals = 3-noters now. Always my mapping style: bridge (as it goes, it becomes harder)[NM]
00:27:884 - miss a note here. cuz you mapped the same noise like - 00:26:666 (26666|2) - 01:33:823
Fixed!(93823|3,93823|1,94127|2,94127|0,94432|1,94432|3) - ctrl+h this pattern. if you notice you mapped - 01:33:214 (93214|3,93518|3,93823|3) - on the same colum and it's quite weird to see it in NM
Fixed! I do not mind the column but it seems I repeated the same pattern as previous so better be mirror'd01:35:346 (95346|0,95346|1) - to 2|4. again it's quite weird. just see this pattern - 01:34:737 (94737|0,95041|0,95346|0,95650|0,95955|0) - it's on the same col. as I said it's quite weird
No change. not weird if the same instrument: snare. Also as you can notice to the notes that changes column every snare, it represents the pitch of the guitar.01:36:564 (96564|3) - to 2 maybe? avoid this - 01:35:955 (95955|3,96259|3,96564|3) - pattern
no change, same as previous.02:13:874 (133874|3,134026|2) - 3|2 is more comfortable pattern
Fixed!02:44:026 (164026|1) - 1. fill the emptiness and to balance amount of notes on each column
Fixed!02:45:244 (165244|1,165397|2) - 1|4 maybe? more symmetrical
Fixed!03:09:381 (189381|2,189610|2,189762|1) - move right. fill the emptiness and to balance amount of notes on each column
moved only the 1st note to right.suggestion
03:16:615 (196615|2) - 2
awkward to left hand.03:19:508 (199508|3) - 1
pitch wised.03:21:031 (201031|2,201031|1) - move left or - 03:21:031 (201031|2) - 4
pitch wised.03:51:488 (231488|0,231640|3) - 4|1 more symmetrical
hand balance.03:57:503 (237503|1) - 1
Fixed.03:59:102 (239102|1,239102|0) - 2|4 avoid this pattern - 03:58:493 (238493|0,238798|0,239102|0,239407|0) -
not avoiding as they have the same instruments. It is still comfortable and fits on each snare sound. Remember that you do not always avoid notes to be stacked, sometimes they are fit to be stacked IF they have the same instrument and pitch. 04:00:625 (240625|2,240625|3) - 1|3 ^ - 03:59:711 (239711|3,240016|3,240320|3,240625|3) -
^04:01:234 (241234|1,241843|1) - 1|4 ^ - 04:00:930 (240930|1,241234|1,241539|1,241843|1,242148|1) -
^04:02:452 (242452|2,243061|2) - 4|2 - 04:02:148 (242148|2,242452|2,242757|2,243061|2) -
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