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This is my first modding so be gentle I know it's bad

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  Hard

1. 00:07:619 (1,2,3) - I think spacing is too large here, while spacing is too small here: 00:12:899 (3,5) . The song is calm at the intro, I don't think there should be any jumps.
   
2. 00:30:899 (3, 4, 5) - Spacing between 00:30:899 (4, 5) should be greater than 00:30:899 (3, 4). Or, maybe new combo at 00:30:899 (5) ?
   
3. 00:52:739 (8, 9, 10) - It would flow better if you use distance snap instead of stacking.
   
4. General - I think stacking should be reduced in general to improve readability. Stacked notes are difficult to read for newer players. Few examples: 00:46:739 , 01:17:219 (6, 7) , 01:19:379 (1, 2, 3)
   
5. General - use distance snapping more in order to keep spacing consistent and easier to read.
   
6. General - use new combos more frequently

That's long enough for the first mod :3

CaffeAmericano wrote:

This is my first modding so be gentle I know it's bad

• 
  Hard

1. 00:07:619 (1,2,3) - I think spacing is too large here, while spacing is too small here: 00:12:899 (3,5) . The song is calm at the intro, I don't think there should be any jumps.
   
2. 00:30:899 (3, 4, 5) - Spacing between 00:30:899 (4, 5) should be greater than 00:30:899 (3, 4). Or, maybe new combo at 00:30:899 (5) ?
   
3. 00:52:739 (8, 9, 10) - It would flow better if you use distance snap instead of stacking.
   
4. General - I think stacking should be reduced in general to improve readability. Stacked notes are difficult to read for newer players. Few examples: 00:46:739 , 01:17:219 (6, 7) , 01:19:379 (1, 2, 3)
   
5. General - use distance snapping more in order to keep spacing consistent and easier to read.
   
6. General - use new combos more frequently

That's long enough for the first mod :3

Thanks for the mod, i have fixed the things that you have pointed out because you are right, hopefully this is a good fix on my part :3

My first modding... yeah

Be noted, that this is a proposal, not a "must do".

Generel:
Offset: 1.140
Most of the sliders begins or ends on a blue tick, here an example 00:00:899 (3) - let end this slider at 00:01:859

Normal
Change the spinner and to much combos

Hard
00:08:579 (4) - Blue tick...
00:09:659 - Set here a note for a triple
00:30:659 - Set a note
00:30:899 (1) - Lets be it two notes
Set notes at 00:32:819 and 00:34:739
00:36:899 (9) - Push Q
00:39:779 - Set a note and begin here a new combo
Set notes at 00:42:179 - 00:42:419 - 00:42:659 - 00:42:899 and 00:43:139
00:43:139 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - So weird D:

• Begin the first backslider at 00:43:379 and end it at 00:44:219 .
  Secend backslider 00:44:339 end it 00:45:179 .
  Third backslider begin 00:45:299 end it 00:45:659 .
  Fourth backslider begin at 00:45:899 end it 00:46:139 .
  00:46:379 (8) - Delete this note
  00:46:019 (5,6,7) - Begin this "package" at 00:46:259

02:02:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Do here the same
00:48:899 (1) - Begin this slider at 00:49:379 and end it here 00:51:059
00:48:899 - Set here a slider, whichone end is here 00:49:139
Do here 01:04:259 - 02:07:618 - 02:22:978 - 02:52:018 (12) - 02:59:458 and 03:14:818 the same like the other one.
00:52:739 (8,9) - Set a note between the slider a note (like a triple). Do here 02:11:938 (2,3) , 02:20:578 (10,11) , 03:12:418 (9,10) and 03:23:938 (10,11) the same like the other one.
01:09:779 - Set here a note and move the slider 01:09:899 (10) one tick forward
02:46:738 (4,7) - I explaned you the problem here

Hey you should click "Give Kudosu" when someone mod the map! just pointing that sdjsiodjsiod

Hello! ;w;

[General]
[Normal]
00:55:858 (1,1,2,3,4) - We have some DS problems here, also try to use the wave I told you (linear flow) and some of the patterns as well ;w;00:59:698 (1,1) - Spacing issue01:02:098 (3,1) - Don't overlap here as well, try a blanket, blankets is a very cute thing which consists in folding a slider in a circle or another slider, look:
01:04:258 (1) - Move this to 01:04:498 - and remove 01:06:418 (1) - 01:06:418 (1,2,3) - Meeeh too straight!! Waves, curved sliders and stuff here please!01:12:178 (1,2,3,4) - ^ also there is too much circles here, not so good for a Normal01:14:098 (1,1) - Don't stack!01:15:058 (1,1) - Spacing issue01:16:978 (2,3,1) - Don't overlap, and this one is very confusing, try one of the patterns I showed b4, I think you need to get ride of straight patterns and everything will be beautiful ;w;01:17:938 (1) - Make this slider end at 01:18:898 - 01:24:178 (2,3) - You can just copy 01:24:178 (2) - and do Control G and place where you want ;w;01:26:098 (1,2,3) - Avoid squared patterns, they were abandoned at 2013 xD01:29:458 (1,2) - It is a bit weird to change the direction of the flow drasticaly like that, when you want to change the direction of the pattern, use curved sliders, always curves and waves ;w;01:31:858 (1,2,3,1) - Kinda like that, but this is a bit messed up since the height of each circle is different01:33:298 (1,2) - Don't stack ;w;01:37:618 (2,1) - ^Ok from here on I want you to see the squared patterns and try to make them look better, at rhythm therms, everything is quite good. Just another thing: don't start sliders on the red tick, like: 02:17:218 (5) - 02:22:977 (1) - . Get these suggestions and apply on the rest of the song
[Hard]

Since I fcked up with the format of my last post, I can't edit it anymore, I hate this bug ;w;, so I will continue here.. DON'T GIVE KUDOSU ON THIS POST, JUST ON THE OTHER!

[New Combo for Normal]

hard soon ;w;

Lumael wrote:

Since I fcked up with the format of my last post, I can't edit it anymore, I hate this bug ;w;, so I will continue here.. DON'T GIVE KUDOSU ON THIS POST, JUST ON THE OTHER!

[New Combo for Normal]

1. Okay, now that the tall white tick is correct (if you changed the offset to 1139 ofc) you do Control A to select all the notes, and press "Q" twice, this will remove all New combos from the song. After that, place the NC every 2 tall white ticks. (one with, the other without, the other with..)
   

hard soon ;w;

Thank you for the very thorough mod, I will attempt to fix over the next couple days :3

Sephrit wrote:

My first modding... yeah

Be noted, that this is a proposal, not a "must do".

Generel:
Offset: 1.140
Most of the sliders begins or ends on a blue tick, here an example 00:00:899 (3) - let end this slider at 00:01:859

Normal
Change the spinner and to much combos

Hard
00:08:579 (4) - Blue tick...
00:09:659 - Set here a note for a triple
00:30:659 - Set a note
00:30:899 (1) - Lets be it two notes
Set notes at 00:32:819 and 00:34:739
00:36:899 (9) - Push Q
00:39:779 - Set a note and begin here a new combo
Set notes at 00:42:179 - 00:42:419 - 00:42:659 - 00:42:899 and 00:43:139
00:43:139 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - So weird D:

• Begin the first backslider at 00:43:379 and end it at 00:44:219 .
  Secend backslider 00:44:339 end it 00:45:179 .
  Third backslider begin 00:45:299 end it 00:45:659 .
  Fourth backslider begin at 00:45:899 end it 00:46:139 .
  00:46:379 (8) - Delete this note
  00:46:019 (5,6,7) - Begin this "package" at 00:46:259

02:02:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Do here the same
00:48:899 (1) - Begin this slider at 00:49:379 and end it here 00:51:059
00:48:899 - Set here a slider, whichone end is here 00:49:139
Do here 01:04:259 - 02:07:618 - 02:22:978 - 02:52:018 (12) - 02:59:458 and 03:14:818 the same like the other one.
00:52:739 (8,9) - Set a note between the slider a note (like a triple). Do here 02:11:938 (2,3) , 02:20:578 (10,11) , 03:12:418 (9,10) and 03:23:938 (10,11) the same like the other one.
01:09:779 - Set here a note and move the slider 01:09:899 (10) one tick forward
02:46:738 (4,7) - I explaned you the problem here

Thank you for the mod Seph, I will work on these things :3