General

1. Audio bitrate is too high, compress your song.
2. You need to add a preview point.

Easy

1. I suggest CS3
2. OD3
3. Add custom combo colours.
4. Slider velocity is really high, but I think you might get away with it since the song is short.
5. 1/4 is forbidden in easy, set the snap divisor in 1/2. here, the music needs it, so make 1/4 notes sliderends.
6. I found a lot. To be honest, I don't think you have enough experience yet to get a map ranked. It's not bad, totally not, but I think that you need some more training, more mapping and more understanding of general things. I tried to remap this easy, I kept most things but just changed the curves of sliders, and the placement of things. Look at it, try to think what the difference is between mine and your version (mine version isn't the best either, but I think you can learn at least a bit from it) and apply those things to your other diffs. Also remap the easy, don't take my version of it. When you did that, call me back and I'll look again. I do not mean to hurt you with this (although it might hurt a lot, I'm sorry for that), but I only mean to make you a better mapper/modder.)

1. 00:21:394 (2) - Curve this slider a little bit more. Something like this maybe:
   
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2. 00:22:453 (1,2) - Improve this blanket please. Just curve the slider a abit like this:
   
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   Just to make this look neater.
3. 00:23:159 (2,3) - Same here ^
4. 00:23:864 (3,4) - ^
5. 00:25:276 (1) - Do something like this instead:
   
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   If you don't understand, you may ask me in-game or PM me.
6. 00:32:335 (3) - Ctrl+ H
7. 00:37:453 (5,1,2,3) - I suggest you do something like this instead:
   
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   Start 00:37:453 (5) - there.
8. 00:52:805 (2,3) - Try blanketing these two sliders:
   
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   It will look much more neater imo.
9. 01:01:982 (3,2) - Stack them please.
10. This diff needs more improvement, but also has potential.

1. Correct metadata: song name "Your Life Doesn't Count" sung by "The Planets" http://theamazingworldofgumball.wikia.c ... Song_Guide
2. Add The Amazing World of Gumball to tags, not artist
3. Consider cropping off the start
4. Combo 1 is too bright, Combo 2 is a bit too dark

1. 00:30:923 (1,2,3,4) - blanket them? also the 4 overlap is really ugly
2. 00:37:982 (1,2) - fix blanket
3. 00:40:805 (1,2,3) - blanket?
4. 00:43:629 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:45:041 (3,4) - ^
6. 00:52:099 (1,2) - ^

1. 00:30:923 (1) - id recommend using a 3 point slider, it will look cleaner
2. 01:02:688 (3) - touched lifebar
3. 01:20:640 (1) - spinner is too short

1. 00:21:041 (5) - NC
2. 00:23:688 (8) - ^
3. 00:26:688 (7) - ^
4. 00:29:511 (5) - ^
5. 00:30:217 (9,10) - there is no justification for the jumps there. please fix
6. 00:42:041 (5) - NC
7. 00:52:805 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - really unnecessary triple spam
8. 00:53:511 (7) - NC
9. 01:01:982 (8) - NC
10. 01:02:864 - missing note
11. 01:15:503 (3,4,5) - just like the previous set of triples. consider making them a slider repeat
12. 01:17:337 (4,5,6) - ^
13. 01:18:805 (5,6,7) - ^
14. 01:20:640 (1) - spinner too short

1. I want you to consider this problem: the linear spread of AR and CS. Currently the Normal has higher CS than the Hard, which is strange. Not only does this affect the mapping of the Hard, but also the spread of the difficulties slightly. I recommend increasing the CS of the Hard to 4, and decreasing the CS of the Normal to ~3.7. Secondly, the current AR spread goes 3, 4, 8 from the lowest difficulty. This is very odd, the Normal could definately use an AR boost and it would make this spread more linear. Increase the AR of the Normal to 5.5.
2. The current mp3 file is over 192kb/s. You will need to convert the file into a 192kb/s file to help the song take up less space. I've taken the liberty of converting it for you, however just make sure if you rename this file that you keep the same name as before.
   https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/91116489/The_Amazing_World_of_Gumball_-_The_Meaning_of_Life.mp3
   
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3. There are a few other Ctrl+Shift+A errors, including Letterbox inconsistency and an uninherited timing point. Please be sure to double check these.
4. Offset should start at 00:19:629 or 19629. This is because the actual beat starts here. This also means that the kiai time will be matched up with a downbeat. Fix this. While you're at it, you should fix the BPMs so that they display whole numbers. These would be 170 and 163.5

1. 00:22:806 (3,4,6,7) - A very odd rhythm exists here with the stacks. Since the first one you start a stack on a white tick, then the second one you have starting on a red tick. This is a bit inconsistent and should be fixed.
2. 00:23:688 (8,9) - These sliders start on the red tick which is weaker if you're mapping to the lyrics. I recommend moving them back 1/2 a beat so they can match up to the vocals better.
3. 00:37:982 (1,2) - I highly advise against these types of sliders. The flow when using these is completely ruined as you have to go back and forth or either stay still. A more intuitive solution would be to split up these sliders so that you can place more objects as well as fix the flow here.
4. 00:45:923 (6) - I think it would be more logical to stack here, considering it would be weird to read if the player expects a stacked object here. The position is very similar anyways, so a little movement won't affect much. A better solution would be to move this 00:43:629 (1,2,3,4,5) - whole section over a bit to stack with the object, since 00:45:923 (6) - is a blanket.
5. 00:53:864 (10) - Again, splitting up the slider into more objects would provide better gameplay.

1. 00:22:453 (1) - Fix blanket
2. 00:25:276 (1,2) - These sliders are especially bad in Normals, as newer players will never expect it and combo break. I recommend just following the before mentioned fix, and splitting the sliders up.
3. 00:57:746 (1,2,3,4) - Brush up the positioning of these slightly so that they are perfectly mirrored or symmetrical
4. 01:19:172 (1,2,3,4) - Normal difficulty requires consistent distance spacing. This is so newer players can develop coordination between timing and space of notes.

1. I'd advise that you use a smaller slider velocity than Normal for this difficulty. This is so that the maps feel as if they are getting progressively harder, rather than having a sort of odd spread.
2. 00:23:159 (2) - Fix blanket.
3. 00:25:276 (1,2) - I've already explained these. I don't believe I need to go over it again.
4. 00:33:041 (4) - This note will cause reading problems, as the overlap of this note appears before the slider ends. This will confuse newer players into hitting it earlier than expected. Fix this.
5. 00:33:747 (1) - Fix blanket.
6. 00:50:688 (3) - Same as before.
7. 00:53:511 (3) - ^