HappyRocket88 wrote:

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Hi (•ω•) From my queue. Sorry for modding this map so late, but I had stuffs to do. So, here's the mod.

General

1. First at all, I'd suggest to increase the stack latency because I didn't find the reason to set it in 2, even knowing the BPM is a bit high. Setting it between 3 or 5 is good. fixed
2. Unckeck the Letterbox during breaks because this is an option used wehn you have storyboard. As you don't have it, there's no reason to put it. fixed
3. Don't you think the colors are so colorful with that dark background? I think they don't fit on it. What about this ones?
   
   SPOILER

   
   fixed
4. HP + 0.5. Becase of the flow and the patters are hard to set HP 5.5. fixed
5. This is a minor suggestion, but I'd reduce the OD -1 because of the short spinners.

fixed

Marathon

1. I don't know, but what about choosing an epic name for the map and no just marathon? Maybe Disaster, storm or dik.Be creative! 8^) fixed
2. 00:02:381 (3) Add NC for consistency in patterns in (1,2) (1,2) in NC combing. fixed, but a little differently
3. 00:03:079 (1) Remove NC.
4. 00:03:776 (2) Add NC.
5. 00:04:474 (1) Remove NC.
6. 00:05:869 (3) Put it somewhere else. º3º)/
7. 00:13:893 (2,3) Ctrl +G and Ctrl +H, to avoid overlapping and make an intuite pattern. Why?
8. 00:17:730 (1) Move a bit to up to avoid a mini-overlap with this object 00:17:206 (3) fixed
9. 00:25:055 (2) Remove the finish and replace for a clap, but just in the head and the tail of that slider. Not in the reverse, fixed
10. 00:40:055 (1,2,3) I know you wanted to make a blanket here but the overlap between the slider (1) and the circle (3) isn't good. Try something else. fixed
11. 01:00:986 (1) Stack this circle at this slider 01:00:201 (2) 's head. fixed
12. 01:14:154 (2) Stack this slider tail over this slider's head 01:13:544 (1) . fixed
13. 01:27:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) This streams goes too fast for me. Idk if it is intentional. this is intentional
14. 02:09:009 (4,1) This looks ugly. :> Try some blanketing between them maybe. fixed
15. 02:28:369 (9) NC. fixed
16. 02:35:520 (5,1) This is not properly blanket. Set the circle here x=228 | y=52 to fix it.

fixed

My mod ends here because I don't know how to mod those streams because I can't even pass them.

Good luck with your map. ◕‿↼ Here a star!

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ZenithAnnul wrote:

Really like the song~ GL getting it ranked ~

1. I'm not sure if your difficulty title is related to the song or not but maybe a single-word name would give a much better impact. ^^
2. I think you should use a higher SV than 1.0. :s
3. 00:42:061 (2) - This slider looks ugly and out of place. ><
4. 00:47:381 (2,3) - Make this symmetrical maybe?
5. 00:49:561 (4,1,2,3) - Instead of going back and forth why not make it loop? Like this:
   
   Rough Example 1~

   
6. 01:39:183 (6) - There's a triple beat here so I suggest changing this to fit with it.
7. 02:02:904 (4) - Why is this one a reverse instead of the last one? It feels abrupt and it sort of messes up the flow...
8. 02:05:695 (4) - Same here.
9. 02:07:962 (1,2,3,4) - You've mapped similar parts of the song densely so why suddenly change it to simpler notes?
10. 03:00:986 - 03:03:602 - Insert a small breaks on these parts. (If you do, I suggest you disable letterboxing in your meta.)
11. 04:02:991 (6,7,8,9) - Move this slightly up so that it matches the rest of the stream.
12. 04:50:869 (6) - Ctrl G

Victorica wrote:

Hi~ From my modding queue~ (M4M)

[From the shadow]

1. I'm not sure if your difficulty title is related to the song or not but maybe a single-word name would give a much better impact. ^^ okaaay
2. I think you should use a higher SV than 1.0. :s but i use SV higher 1.0
3. 00:42:061 (2) - This slider looks ugly and out of place. >< fixed
4. 00:47:381 (2,3) - Make this symmetrical maybe? These patterns are good and without symmetry, I think
5. 00:49:561 (4,1,2,3) - Instead of going back and forth why not make it loop? Like this: I changed to something like
   
   Rough Example 1~

   
6. 01:39:183 (6) - There's a triple beat here so I suggest changing this to fit with it. fixed
7. 02:02:904 (4) - Why is this one a reverse instead of the last one? It feels abrupt and it sort of messes up the flow... fixed
8. 02:05:695 (4) - Same here.
9. 02:07:962 (1,2,3,4) - You've mapped similar parts of the song densely so why suddenly change it to simpler notes? It looks like you're right
10. 03:00:986 - 03:03:602 - Insert a small breaks on these parts. (If you do, I suggest you disable letterboxing in your meta.) ok
11. 04:02:991 (6,7,8,9) - Move this slightly up so that it matches the rest of the stream. fixed
12. 04:50:869 (6) - Ctrl G fixed

It's a bit rough but it's a good start. ^^ I hoped my mod helped~ ^^ ofc

inspectorscout wrote:

yo, from my queue

First of all, listen to AImod, she has some useful things to say, then I dont have to repeat them
00:45:986 (1,2,3) - spacing is terrible here, try moving the 2 a bit up so that there is at least some kind of constant spacing.
Some green lines are not used, consider removing them so that the BN's don't have something messy to check. Fixed
05:13:892 (1,3) - these are mapped to nearly nothing, so try placing the (current) 2 and 4 in the middle of the map and remove these two. A lot of players will rage if they can't ss just because of these two notes. replaced spinner
Lower od to 8, it's way too hard to get any accuracy I made OD 7.5
00:24:445 (4,1) - put the first note on the white tick before the blue, not the blue tick itself. Yes you are right
00:25:840 (3,1) - ^
00:27:236 (3,1) - ^
00:29:939 (4) - white tick, not blue tick.
And so on, you get my point. (why white tick: there is no real sound on either ticks, so to make an insane diff, you overmapped this a little bit. Overmapping is, in this case, making a new rhythm that isn't in the song. Players don't like to play on blue ticks because the main notes are never on blue ticks, that's why most people will hit these too early/late, hence placing them on white ticks)
01:51:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - please, don't do this It messes with everyone's reading. With this pattern and some other ones in this map, it might be better to rename the difficulty to 'illusion' to warn the player a bit I do not see anything wrong with these patterns. The opportunity to change them later


There are many things that I haven't mentioned yet, but if you take what I told you as an example and go trough the map with those in mind, you will have fixed a lot of those. I hope this was helpful somehow. This map still needs a lot of work, but I'm sure that you can do it!

1. 00:01:596 (1,1,1 and so on) - I think their tails are noisy, I guess you use reverse for make gap between these slider to the note to be 1/1 which is great, I agreed but it's kinda noisy (don't know if it just me though) I mean add green line and decrease volume, not remove.
2. 00:35:520 (3) - is this circle muted? it's unrankable.
3. 00:43:456 (2,3) - I think these finish are out of place, remove or change to other hitsound is better imo.
4. 01:07:090 (1) - remove whistle on tail and add note on 01:07:439 sounds better imo. or use 1/1 slider instead would work as well.
5. 01:07:613 (3) - remove clap on tail?
6. 01:07:875 (1) - since strong note start on big white tick so move this spinner to big white tick would works better. oh and please end it on 01:09:009
7. 01:23:398 (1) - I'm not sure if this spinner is really fit with music.. I think use circle or slider instead would be better to play. nah I just heard the beat that make you use spinner. but i think it's really weak and.. not that fit the song but it's fit to be the beginner of that spam pattern though.
8. 01:24:706 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - if you don't mind maybe you can make it more symmetry. this is what I mean.
9. I don't know why you skip most of beat like 01:31:160 and 01:32:555 and so on. it's your choice though but I think if you add note on those section would be more playable. recently it's like stream pause and slider, stream pause and slider. but it's not wrong though. someone might like it.
10. I think change to circle stream is more enjoyable. like 01:34:474 (1,2,3) and 01:33:079 (1,2,3) and so on.
11. 02:02:381 (1,2,3,4,5) - you need some pattern, here is the example if you ask me. (just an example)
12. 03:44:241 - this part your whistle are kinda out of place imo. better don't have them.
13. 03:50:259 (3) - remove this note and add on 03:50:084 or 03:50:433 instead. apply to all of similar case.
14. overall your rhythm is kinda good but still need to work on pattern to make them beautiful and neat. you still use the wrong tool to emphasis the beat. here is the example:
    03:57:846 (8,9) - 8 supposed to be 1/2 slider and 9 to be circle. why? because 9's tail is strong beat which tail can't emphasis properly because player no need to click it and head of 9 is downbeat so if you changed to the thing I said, it will emphasis the beat better.

P A N wrote:

[Shadow]

1. 00:01:596 (1,1,1 and so on) - I think their tails are noisy, I guess you use reverse for make gap between these slider to the note to be 1/1 which is great, I agreed but it's kinda noisy (don't know if it just me though) I mean add green line and decrease volume, not remove. ok, fix
2. 00:35:520 (3) - is this circle muted? it's unrankable. fix
3. 00:43:456 (2,3) - I think these finish are out of place, remove or change to other hitsound is better imo. fix
4. 01:07:090 (1) - remove whistle on tail and add note on 01:07:439 sounds better imo. or use 1/1 slider instead would work as well. ok, added circle
5. 01:07:613 (3) - remove clap on tail? fix
6. 01:07:875 (1) - since strong note start on big white tick so move this spinner to big white tick would works better. oh and please end it on 01:09:009 fix
7. 01:23:398 (1) - I'm not sure if this spinner is really fit with music.. I think use circle or slider instead would be better to play. nah I just heard the beat that make you use spinner. but i think it's really weak and.. not that fit the song but it's fit to be the beginner of that spam pattern though. yet I leave
8. 01:24:706 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - if you don't mind maybe you can make it more symmetry. this is what I mean. fix
9. I don't know why you skip most of beat like 01:31:160 and 01:32:555 and so on. it's your choice though but I think if you add note on those section would be more playable. recently it's like stream pause and slider, stream pause and slider. but it's not wrong though. someone might like it.oh really, fixed
10. I think change to circle stream is more enjoyable. like 01:34:474 (1,2,3) and 01:33:079 (1,2,3) and so on. fix
11. 02:02:381 (1,2,3,4,5) - you need some pattern, here is the example if you ask me. (just an example) nice patterns, i take it
12. 03:44:241 - this part your whistle are kinda out of place imo. better don't have them. fixed
13. 03:50:259 (3) - remove this note and add on 03:50:084 or 03:50:433 instead. apply to all of similar case.
14. overall your rhythm is kinda good but still need to work on pattern to make them beautiful and neat. you still use the wrong tool to emphasis the beat. here is the example: I will work on this
    03:57:846 (8,9) - 8 supposed to be 1/2 slider and 9 to be circle. why? because 9's tail is strong beat which tail can't emphasis properly because player no need to click it and head of 9 is downbeat so if you changed to the thing I said, it will emphasis the beat better.

GL with this

1. 00:10:753 (4) - Ctrl G to increase flow and movement
2. 00:15:811 (3) - Sliderwhistle makes absolutely no sense at all, it's loud and noisy (and painful to everyones ears if they don't have a silenced sliderwhistle)
3. 00:17:206 (3) - ^^
4. 00:18:602 (3) - ^^
5. 00:28:369 (4,1) - I'm no fan of overlaps, try stacking them
6. 00:55:927 (1) - Again a sliderwhistle, please remove ALL sliderwhistles unless they really fit as they are a pain in the ass to listen to, especially in calm parts like this. I will not list them from now on
7. 00:57:846 (3,1) - Blanket feels better here
8. 01:16:160 (4) - It's a really weird slider, and on the edge of unrankable (if not already unrankable) It's path is nigh invisible, and the wiggle slows it down to such extent players will most likely miss. Please make it a straight slider
9. 01:17:555 (4) - ^^
10. 01:27:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This applies to all your streams: The stream here is not really aesthetically appealing. It looks rather sloppy and hand made. Streams should be made by making a slider, selecting it and pressing ctrl shift f. This way, they'll look much nicer, and have perfect distance
11. 01:34:648 (3,4) - Huge distance makes no sense here. It''s only for difficulty. Please space it evenly so people can see it's 1/4
12. 01:51:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is almost unreadable
13. 02:13:892 (5,6) - Again a distance issue, please space close to the previous circles
14. 03:00:113 - Add a circle, best is at 316:260, at the same place as 03:00:288 (1) -
15. 03:10:753 (1,2,3,4) - SPace evenly for aesthetics
16. 03:13:544 (1,2,3,4) - ^^
17. 03:21:916 - Normal sampleset is like the last thing I'd use here, I'd recommend soft sampleset
18. 04:06:218 (6) - 10% is too low, actually, this whole stream is too soft in volume, really inaudible (unrankable)
19. 04:49:125 (5) - It's a really weird slider, and on the edge of unrankable (if not already unrankable) It's path is nigh invisible, and the wiggle slows it down to such extent players will most likely miss. Please make it a straight slider

baraatje123 wrote:

This map, honestly, needs much more work. It's not close to being ready for rank. This however mostly applies due to the "bad streams" as most of them are really ugly, sorry to say
I advise you to completely recheck all streams and redo with the Ctrl Shift F
You'll see it'll look much and much better, and making it better to play :3
Good luck!

1. Your volume adjustment is too odd, because it's kinda inaudible in some parts as we can see on here http://puu.sh/jsBRm/d541cc663c.png. So please consider to readjust the volume higher, so players have enough feedback on what they clicked
2. You can delete Black Sun Empire & Noisia - Feed The Machine (FCL).osb, since this mapset is no storyboard

1. 00:13:892 (2,3) - The polarity on them kinda hard to read imo as (2) is ended on blue tick then (3) is start on red tick, furthermore I think there's no strong beat here 00:14:590 - imo. So how about change the rhythm into something like this http://puu.sh/jsCrs/1b39f0e085.jpg?
2. 00:15:288 (2,3) - 00:16:683 (2,3) - 00:18:079 (2,3) - Same as above
3. 00:27:846 (2,3,4) - Why not have same clap sound as 00:25:055 (2,3) - and 00:26:451 (2,3) - to make it more consistent
4. 00:29:241 (2,3,4) - 00:30:637 (2,3) - Same as above
5. 01:28:892 (1) - Imo, better make that one closer a bit, because it's kinda too sudden after the stream we have big jump on slow slider. So maybe move to x:304 y:304 might good?
6. 01:34:474 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Those stream and how it turn kinda too sharp imo and kinda make the next flow doesn't feels good, while the song itself doesn't change significant
7. 01:40:840 - How about add circle there? based on song kinda fit while a pipe being hitted there imo
8. 01:56:799 (1,2,3,4) - Those stream (2,3,4) under the slider end doesn't flows good tbh, it's hard to read and may misleading to next stream on
9. 01:57:323 (5,6,7,8,9) - . Maybe make them more visible is a good choice imo
10. 02:23:486 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above, make the stream more visible might play better here
11. 02:24:532 (7) - The rhythm choice kinda bad there imo, as we skip strong beat on this downbeat 02:24:706 - make it to 1/2 slider with circle might good here
12. 03:40:055 (7,8,9,1,2) - Honestly that (9) 1/4 slider with reverse kinda make the whole circles stream before distrupted imo, it's out of no where that (9) suddenly appear make the stream's flow kinda bad imo
13. 03:41:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Imo how the stream turn too sharp kinda out of place, while the rest before can flow fluently

Yoges wrote:

Hello. From my M4M queue.

Shadow

I don't think I can mod this. So have 2 stars as compensation.

Yoges wrote:

Yoges wrote:

Hello. From my M4M queue.

Shadow

I don't think I can mod this. So have 2 stars as compensation.

Do not give kudosu unless they mod your map. I didn't mod it. Why are you giving me kudosu?

NM from my Queue~
Remember, I'm just expressing my opinion, so please don't take critism as offense, thanks~ c:

General

Shadow

Aerous wrote:

Shadow

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  00:01:509 (1) - I don't like how much it curves , might be too much. changed to a straight slider
  00:05:869 (1,1) - Should be the same angle , no point in changing it yea, fixed
  00:14:241 - Shouldn't skip this beat , try to map it out ! I map this beat, looks good
  00:15:288 (2,3) - Too close , feels clumped c
  00:16:683 (2,3) - ^
  00:20:869 - Don't skip again !
  00:23:922 (3,2) - If you wan't your map to look a lot cleaner , I would suggest you have these two with the same shape fixed
  00:31:160 (3) - Should use two notes instead of this slider , you did it at 00:29:241 (2,3,4) - nice suggestion, fixed
  00:44:067 - and 00:44:241 - Recommend you to map it out , and then use a long low SV slider to cover it up sry, but I think it is better to leave the spinner
  00:49:038 (2,3,4) - Visually it looks like they have same distance , but they have different distance. Please try fixing this , its super confusing for people first playing this map Yes you are right
  00:50:172 (2,3) - ^ everything's in order with the DS
  00:52:265 (4,1) - You can do a better job at this yea
  00:55:404 (1,2,3,4,1) - The distance should be larger here 00:55:753 (4,1) - instead of 00:55:404 (1,2) - decrease the distance between the first and second circled second circle
  00:59:241 (3,1) - Same with the covering up thing
  01:05:172 (1) - Starting here , I would gradually increase the distance because theres this buildup in the music. I will do this laterl do this later
  01:07:962 - Don't skip this beat please , its super important. Also theres a finish hitsound on it so you probably should map it out okay
  01:18:079 - Drum beat
  01:23:398 (1) - Map this out like what you did before deleted spinner
  01:27:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Stream feels super sloppy , heres a tip use the slider --> stream tool by pressing Shift + CTRL + F for smoother streams but this stream, I did it by this method, lol
  01:32:206 (6) - Curve other way for flow fixed
  01:34:300 (10) - Why is this distance so low going to the next stream? Should be more compared to 01:34:125 (9,10) - fixed
  01:39:183 (6,7,8,9,10) - Try to have a up and down motion , flows a lot better I changed the flow from the 5 circles
  01:44:503 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Either go full straight stream or curve don't half ass it I did direct flow
  01:46:334 (9) - Missing whistle fixed
  01:49:038 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Jerky flow and feels clumped together fixed
  01:52:962 - Should make something clickable here because of drum sound put there сircle
  02:00:026 (6,7,8,9) - Same thing with the jerky stream fixed
  02:00:986 (1) - Lower it , I think it hits the HP bar I'm not sure fixed
  02:01:596 (4) - Don't clump anchor points together , super messy looking okay
  02:05:869 (9) - ^
  02:06:567 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same thing with the clumping , its super weird and forced. 02:07:613 (8,9) - Then it drops down after , try to spread them out to the left side yet I leave as is
  02:18:340 - Beat here you missed I like those patterns, so, too, is leave
  02:19:474 (5,6) - Anchor problems
  
  Uhh I'm not gonna continue my mod because its going to get repetitive. Try to go over your map and look at the flow and spacing problems.
  
  edit : please reply to the mods

forbiddenplayer wrote:

forbiddenplayer's Marathon Modding Queue

[General]
>I'm not going to spam NC issues here (probably) but rather mod it according to my own understanding of the song.
>There are some inconsistencies on spacing. possible, but they are not critical
>I saw some pretty ugly sliders. ^
>Small playability issues.
>Inconsistencies on the streams. yes, I'm working on it
>I think you should drop this own to OD7 because the map is not that hard. OD 7.5 it's okay
>I just though about changing the diff name to something more unique... something more intense. maybe, but I would like to hear your suggestions

[Shadow]
00:01:509 (1) - Remove NC. fixed
00:02:381 (2) - Add NC.
00:03:079 (1) - The spacing is inconsistent here given the same space with a less interval for 00:01:509 (1). Try ctrl+Ging it. fixed
00:03:079 (1) - Remove NC also.
00:03:776 (2) - NC here.
00:04:474 (1) - Remove NC.
00:05:172 (2) - Add NC.
00:05:869 (1) - Remove NC.
00:06:567 (2) - Add NC.
00:07:265 (1) - Remove NC O.o.
00:07:962 (2) - Last, add NC.
00:15:811 (3) - Circle is too near from the slider. fixed
00:17:206 (3) - ^
00:31:858 (2) - Remove clap. Sounds inappropriate. fixed
00:32:556 (4) - ^
00:33:079 (5) and 00:33:776 (6) - Remove the end claps. Sounds inappropriate.
00:36:218 (2) - AiMod says this object's end is not snapped. Try moving it in the timeline then returning it back to its place. wow, yea
00:39:706 (4) - Weird overlap with 00:39:009 (2). I left this overlap specially
00:52:613 (1) - Too near from previous object. ^
02:34:125 (8,9) - I think you should make this a stream instead. yea, fixed
03:42:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Curve looks awkward. fixed too
04:21:916 (1,2,3,4) - Playability issue. A player might seem to misread this pattern. fixed
Thanks for mod

1. first to all, the main thing that did bother me in this map is the lack of hitsounds, don't get me wrong map is fun, but there are alot of sections where hitsounds are basically inaudibles, for example 04:32:032 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you can add claps every 2 and 4 white tick in all that section + use whistles at the calm ones, if the defaul hitsounds doesn't work then you can search for some custom ones, well just saying that the full diff need a rework with hitsounds
2. OD 8 is better, but up to you
3. 00:12:497 (2) - isn't better if you use this rhythm so you can cover the music at 00:12:846 - (apply to similar parts as well)
   
4. 00:13:108 - 00:14:503 - 00:15:898 - etc unused green line, cflean them if you can
5. 00:15:288 (2,3) - basically same as 00:12:497 - apply to other similar parts as well
6. 00:23:922 (3) - claps in this slider doesn't fit the song, in any case the clap should be at 00:23:660 -
7. 00:25:753 (3) - I cant hear anything here, better remove this circle, there are some similar ones
8. 00:39:009 (2,4) - ugly overlap
9. 00:58:195 (1,2) - there are some blankets that need some rework too, not just this one, but more around the whole diff
10. 01:18:253 (1) - add a repeat on this slider to fit the special sound at the music
11. 01:24:358 (1) - remove this NC you don't need it
12. 01:28:892 (9) - in my first play I did think this was a 1/4 slider when is 1/2, personally I prefer if you change the SV here, but if you really like this then use a NC atleast
13. 01:31:683 in all the kiai will be nice if you find a nice clap and use it every 2 and 4 white lines
14. 01:37:700 (6) - there are some streams that have some overmaped beat, for example 01:37:700 (6) -
15. 01:41:451 (1,2) - spacing?
16. 01:55:404 (1,3) - can you avoid this overlap, maybe just move 1 a bit tothe left, doesn't looks cool in game tbh
17. 02:08:487 (6,1) - swap NC
18. 02:13:195 (6,2) - Ttry to avoid overlap
19. 02:16:073 (5) - there is nothing in the music at the head of this slider
20. 02:18:079 (2,3,4) - reove claps from slider body, just keep them at the head
21. 02:29:590 (4) - normal whistle sounds random, since you don't have a whistle pattern
22. 02:58:718 (6,1) - swap NC
23. 03:39:967 (4,5) - This plays really bad, also players are used to not have this kind of 1/4 jumps, I suggest you to use a normal spacing here and use your 1/4 jumps just in slider to slider cases
24. 03:54:009 (7,1) - swap NC
25. 04:02:991 (6,7,8,9) - stream shape seems a bit random, maybe rework it
26. 04:05:956 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - music just calm down there, use a repeat slider, or use less spacing between the stream
27. try to rework hitsounds and some rhythms that can be better, I guess this need some more work anyways GL with this

Natsu wrote:

Hi

Diff

1. first to all, the main thing that did bother me in this map is the lack of hitsounds, don't get me wrong map is fun, but there are alot of sections where hitsounds are basically inaudibles, for example 04:32:032 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you can add claps every 2 and 4 white tick in all that section + use whistles at the calm ones, if the defaul hitsounds doesn't work then you can search for some custom ones, well just saying that the full diff need a rework with hitsounds okay
2. OD 8 is better, but up to you OD suits me
3. 00:12:497 (2) - isn't better if you use this rhythm so you can cover the music at 00:12:846 - (apply to similar parts as well)
   You're the second person who spoke to me about it. At first I was skeptical and decided to leave everything as is. But now I'm fully convinced that this bit is not to be missed. thanks
4. 00:13:108 - 00:14:503 - 00:15:898 - etc unused green line, cflean them if you can fixed
5. 00:15:288 (2,3) - basically same as 00:12:497 - apply to other similar parts as well
6. 00:23:922 (3) - claps in this slider doesn't fit the song, in any case the clap should be at 00:23:660 - fixed
7. 00:25:753 (3) - I cant hear anything here, better remove this circle, there are some similar ones
8. 00:39:009 (2,4) - ugly overlap
9. 00:58:195 (1,2) - there are some blankets that need some rework too, not just this one, but more around the whole diff
10. 01:18:253 (1) - add a repeat on this slider to fit the special sound at the music okay
11. 01:24:358 (1) - remove this NC you don't need it fixed
12. 01:28:892 (9) - in my first play I did think this was a 1/4 slider when is 1/2, personally I prefer if you change the SV here, but if you really like this then use a NC atleast add NC
13. 01:31:683 in all the kiai will be nice if you find a nice clap and use it every 2 and 4 white lines ok
14. 01:37:700 (6) - there are some streams that have some overmaped beat, for example 01:37:700 (6) - I am working on it
15. 01:41:451 (1,2) - spacing? fixed
16. 01:55:404 (1,3) - can you avoid this overlap, maybe just move 1 a bit tothe left, doesn't looks cool in game tbh ok
17. 02:08:487 (6,1) - swap NC okay
18. 02:13:195 (6,2) - Ttry to avoid overlap fixed
19. 02:16:073 (5) - there is nothing in the music at the head of this slider Here I disagree. I guess everything is 3 bits are quite suitable
20. 02:18:079 (2,3,4) - reove claps from slider body, just keep them at the head fixed
21. 02:29:590 (4) - normal whistle sounds random, since you don't have a whistle pattern
22. 02:58:718 (6,1) - swap NC fixed
23. 03:39:967 (4,5) - This plays really bad, also players are used to not have this kind of 1/4 jumps, I suggest you to use a normal spacing here and use your 1/4 jumps just in slider to slider cases fixed too
24. 03:54:009 (7,1) - swap NC okay
25. 04:02:991 (6,7,8,9) - stream shape seems a bit random, maybe rework it reworked
26. 04:05:956 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - music just calm down there, use a repeat slider, or use less spacing between the stream
27. try to rework hitsounds and some rhythms that can be better, I guess this need some more work anyways GL with this
    thank you for this good mod

buhei wrote:

from my queue

Shadow

1. 00:19:125 (1,2,1) - the music here is totally the same as 00:17:730 (1,2,3) - , so i think you'd better copy the pattern of 00:17:730 (1,2,3) - and use Ctrl+H as you did in the part before. And thus, you can move 00:19:823 (1,2,3,4) - to 00:20:520 - , and delete 00:22:613 (5) - . in that way this part will be prefectly symmetrical and regular. good idea, I did so
2. 00:40:404 - missed clap here fixed
3. 00:41:799 - 00:43:195 - 00:43:544 (3,4) - ^
4. 00:50:433 - ^
5. 01:29:939 (2) - speed up. a higher sv here would be cool I do not think so
6. 01:46:422 - missed beat here. maybe change 01:46:334 (9,10) - into a short slider with a reverser? fixed
7. 01:57:759 - ^, change 01:57:671 (10,11) - into slider
8. 02:28:718 (7,8,1) - it's wierd to place slidertail on a beat. better to change 02:28:718 (7) - to two notes. fixed
9. 02:36:916 (3) - use a higher sv. and.. you didn't add any sound effect to 01:29:416 (1,2) - but finish here. better to unify them! I am satisfied with the SV
10. 03:30:898 - missed beat here. you can lengthen 03:30:637 (1) - to 03:30:898 - , or just add a note here. fixed
11. 03:34:736 - ^, change 03:34:648 (2) - into a short slider starting at 03:34:736 - , as you did in 03:33:079 (1,2) -
12. 03:37:439 (2) - ^
13. 03:40:055 (5,6) - it's impossible to read. you SHOULD end the first slider at 03:40:317 - , and let the second slider start at 03:40:404 - and end at 03:40:666 - . fill 03:40:753 - and 03:40:840 - with notes. oh lol, idk how it happened. fixed
14. 03:57:410 - add note here okay
15. 04:06:829 - 04:09:619 - 04:23:573 - 05:11:015 - ^

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  Shadow
  
  00:35:869 (1) - Stack on 00:35:172 (3) - because it feels a bit random where it is now
  00:53:224 (2,3) - Move a bit up to fix overlap
  00:56:799 (1,2) - Improve blanket
  00:58:195 (1,3) - ^
  00:59:590 (1) - Move down a bit to prevent overlap with 00:58:892 (3) -
  01:00:986 (1) - fail stack
  01:34:474 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you can perfect this shape
  01:35:869 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make it slightly curved to make it look better
  02:06:567 (1,2,3,4) - Keep constant spacing
  02:07:613 (8) - Move down a bit to fix overlap
  02:56:799 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 02:58:195 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) -Don't shorten DS here
  03:08:573 - Such a loud song omg
  03:40:753 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Try to improve this part, the rest of this stream is fine
  04:10:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Please make a curve here properly
  04:58:020 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Move this stream a bit to the right to fix overlap
  05:12:148 - I suggest a stream here to finish the song with style heh
  
  The map itself is not bad, but need a lot of improvement. Unfortunantly, I can't link every issue since I'm not a mod machine '-', but imo these are the main problems, but some other problems like flow, DS inconsistente and odd shapes are also found through the song (Flow and DS are the worst problems here).