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-Kanzaki

imaikiseta wrote:


  • 00:28:353 - Missing a singing note here, I would recommend:
    ^^00:28:190 (6) - Add a circle
    ^^00:28:353 - Add a slider ending 00:28:679 -- No change, i dont think it feels weird while playing.

    This diff has too many jumps, consider on reducing it? -- Reduced the distance a little bit between the patterns and some parts
Thanks!

Here is the .osu file : http://puu.sh/ixFff/6343c3bc44.rar
Spayyce
Topic Starter
Lumael

[ Space ] wrote:

Thank you so much!

Moved to Pending Section!
-Visceral-
Gonna mod this tomorrow whee~

EDIT: Will mod Saturday. Apparently going to New York and we are staying the night.
nazzinoz
Hello, my mod from your m4m queue
I know very little about hitsound, so I won't mod on it :(
[Metadata]
Title: 雨、キミを連れて (Short ver.)
Romanised title: Ame, Kimi wo Tsurete (Short Ver.)
Source: Guilty Crown
remove "guilty crown" from tags
[General]
  1. Remove the spinners at the start of your own diffs. Don't make them be too different from GDs.
  2. I think you should use custom hitsound for all diffs
  3. 00:52:646 - This could be a Break Time
[Easy]
Keep Distance Snap , you must keep it turned on and no Distance Spacing changing when mapping an Easy/Normal diff. These are objects that break DS, you must fix them:
SPOILER
  1. 00:18:733 (3)
  2. 00:23:951 (3)
  3. 00:25:255 (4)
  4. 01:00:472 (1)
  1. 00:18:733 (3) - Draw better, move 00:21:342 (1) to (352,164) (same as 00:17:429 (2) ), then fix DS after 00:21:342 (1), now it looks like this: http://puu.sh/izk5h.jpg
  2. 00:23:951 (3,4) - Fix DS, draw better: http://puu.sh/izkkU.jpg
  3. 00:28:353 (2,3,4) - This could be a little too hard for an Easy map. But I'm not sure if this is true or not
  4. 00:29:005 (4) - I think this should be end at 00:30:146, then make 2 circles at 00:30:472 and 00:31:125
  5. 00:40:907 (1) - Remove new combo
  6. 00:41:152 - Useless uninherited point
  7. 00:42:212 (2) - New combo
  8. 01:05:119 - Useless uninherited point
  9. 01:05:690 (1) - I think it should end at 01:06:668
  10. 01:08:299 (3) - End at 01:09:277
[AsaNe's Normal]
A song with 184 BPM is quite fast, that using many half-beat circles may be a little too hard.
  1. 00:43:842 - The sound here is loud. Please add something... (I suggest a circle)
  2. 00:44:494 - ^
  3. 00:46:451 - ^
  4. 00:47:103 - ^
  5. 00:49:059 - ^
  6. 00:49:712 - ^
  7. 00:57:538 (4,1) - I think it could look more pretty if you move 00:57:538 (4) to (232,260) and the start of 00:57:864 (1) to (156,196)
  8. 01:11:559 (3,4) - Maybe curved sliders is prettier?
[Kanzaki's Hard]
  1. 00:30:472 (2) - I think move it to (312,40) (same as 00:30:309 (1) ) is better
  2. 00:36:994 (2,3) - too far, right?
  3. 00:37:646 (3,4) - if 00:36:994 (2,3) is so far like that, 00:37:646 (3,4) become too close. I suggest move both 00:36:831 (1,2) to (104,108), curve 00:36:994 (2) more, move both 00:37:646 (3,4) to (196,152). Then they will look like this: http://puu.sh/izor8.jpg
  4. 00:40:581 (3,1) - Too far, I think. Maybe move 00:40:581 (3) to (296, 136)
  5. 00:40:907 (2,3) - ^. I suggest move 00:41:233 (3) to (396,232)
  6. 00:43:842 - The sound here is loud. Should add objects
  7. 00:51:668 and 00:51:831 - I think you should follow voice here and add objects, because if you follow the instrumental, the dense drum starts at 00:51:831 and ends at 00:52:320, makes players hard to catch the triplet
  8. 00:57:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This could look better: http://puu.sh/izqNL.gif
    SPOILER
    1. Move 00:57:701 (1,2) to (308, 168) and move the second point of 00:57:864 (2) to (240,208)
    2. Reverse 00:58:190 (3) (CTRL + G), then move to (128,184)
    3. Move 00:58:516 (4) to (92,100), 00:58:679 (5) to (24, 184)
    4. Reverse 00:59:168 (8)
    5. Remove 00:59:494 (9)
    6. Copy 00:59:168 (8) and paste at 00:59:494, reverse and move to (279, 259)
    7. Move 00:59:983 (10) to the end of 00:59:494 (9)
  9. 01:20:038 (1) - Maybe hard to catch, please make it nearer to the center of the screen
[Light Insane]
  1. 00:17:592 - Why do we have a blank here? A trap to players :|
  2. 00:20:201 - ^
  3. 00:23:788 (9) - Move to 00:23:625
  4. 00:26:396 (6,1) - To far in compared with others objects
  5. 00:32:266 - Should add a circle here (I suggest (344,188))
  6. 00:39:521 (7) - Move to 00:39:440
  7. 00:42:701 (4) - Make it a 1/2 slider
  8. 00:43:842 - Loud sound (voice-instrumental). Should add a circle
  9. 00:44:494 - ^
  10. 00:46:451 - ^
  11. 00:47:103 - ^
  12. 00:49:059 - ^
  13. 00:49:712 - ^
  14. 00:50:690 - ^
  15. 01:10:581 - ^
  16. 01:13:190 - ^
  17. 01:05:690 (1,2,3) - My hand moves unnatural here. Please make them softer. I suggest add a slider point at (328,220) to 01:05:690 (1)
  18. 01:01:451 - The sound here is loud
I won't mod Insane or Extra diffs, since I can't get FC on insane, and can't even pass Extra. (Don't believe in my rank, SS players have very much more pp than their skills have). But I think Insane is better than Light Insane, because it follow the music better, and I feel more comfortable to play, instead of trapped, mind the traps, retry until FC :|
AsakuraNe

noz1995 wrote:

Hello, my mod from your m4m queue
I know very little about hitsound, so I won't mod on it :(

[AsaNe's Normal]
A song with 184 BPM is quite fast, that using many half-beat circles may be a little too hard. -Well, it's okay to me though :3 still normal for a normal with that BPM :P
  1. 00:43:842 - The sound here is loud. Please add something... (I suggest a circle) -Following the instrument and adding would make it more harder~
  2. 00:44:494 - ^ -^^
  3. 00:46:451 - ^ -^^
  4. 00:47:103 - ^ -^^
  5. 00:49:059 - ^ -^^
  6. 00:49:712 - ^ -^^
  7. 00:57:538 (4,1) - I think it could look more pretty if you move 00:57:538 (4) to (232,260) and the start of 00:57:864 (1) to (156,196) -Done
  8. 01:11:559 (3,4) - Maybe curved sliders is prettier? -was waiting for someone to mod this. Done~ :P
Thanks for Modding :D

UPDATE:

AsaNe's Normal
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Egoist - Ame, Kimi wo Tsurete.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54603
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 10907,21342,42212,55255,66668
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Ame, Kimi wo Tsurete (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Ame, Kimi wo Tsurete (Short Ver.)
Artist:EGOIST
ArtistUnicode:EGOIST
Creator:LucaSA4
Version:AsaNe's Normal
Source:
Tags:guilty crown anime supercell ryo rock guitar vocal -Kanzaki AsakuraNe [ Space ]
BeatmapID:723497
BeatmapSetID:325217

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Topic Starter
Lumael

noz1995 wrote:

Hello, my mod from your m4m queue
I know very little about hitsound, so I won't mod on it :(
[Metadata]
Title: 雨、キミを連れて (Short ver.)
Romanised title: Ame, Kimi wo Tsurete (Short Ver.)
Source: Guilty Crown
remove "guilty crown" from tags
[General]
  1. Remove the spinners at the start of your own diffs. Don't make them be too different from GDs.
  2. I think you should use custom hitsound for all diffs
  3. 00:52:646 - This could be a Break Time No.
[Easy]
Keep Distance Snap , you must keep it turned on and no Distance Spacing changing when mapping an Easy/Normal diff. These are objects that break DS, you must fix them:
SPOILER
  1. 00:18:733 (3)
  2. 00:23:951 (3)
  3. 00:25:255 (4)
  4. 01:00:472 (1)
  1. 00:18:733 (3) - Draw better, move 00:21:342 (1) to (352,164) (same as 00:17:429 (2) ), then fix DS after 00:21:342 (1), now it looks like this: http://puu.sh/izk5h.jpg I did something different
  2. 00:23:951 (3,4) - Fix DS, draw better: http://puu.sh/izkkU.jpg ^
  3. 00:28:353 (2,3,4) - This could be a little too hard for an Easy map. But I'm not sure if this is true or not
  4. 00:29:005 (4) - I think this should be end at 00:30:146, then make 2 circles at 00:30:472 and 00:31:125
  5. 00:40:907 (1) - Remove new combo
  6. 00:41:152 - Useless uninherited point
  7. 00:42:212 (2) - New combo
  8. 01:05:119 - Useless uninherited point
  9. 01:05:690 (1) - I think it should end at 01:06:668 Nooks nice, but at the red snap looks nice as well
  10. 01:08:299 (3) - End at 01:09:277 ^
[Light Insane]
  1. 00:17:592 - Why do we have a blank here? A trap to players :| Why it's a trap with the DS is constant? The distance between 00:17:429 (4,5) - is equivalent to the time distance they have, not a trap at all
  2. 00:20:201 - ^ ^
  3. 00:23:788 (9) - Move to 00:23:625 I'm following the vocals, this jump is intentional
  4. 00:26:396 (6,1) - To far in compared with others objects It's a jump '-'
  5. 00:32:266 - Should add a circle here (I suggest (344,188)) This will make the jump much harder, this is light Insane
  6. 00:39:521 (7) - Move to 00:39:440 No, there's a note right before (1)
  7. 00:42:701 (4) - Make it a 1/2 slider Prefer how it is now
  8. 00:43:842 - Loud sound (voice-instrumental). Should add a circle I'm not following that noise
  9. 00:44:494 - ^
  10. 00:46:451 - ^
  11. 00:47:103 - ^
  12. 00:49:059 - ^
  13. 00:49:712 - ^
  14. 00:50:690 - ^
  15. 01:10:581 - ^
  16. 01:13:190 - ^
    Same for all above
  17. 01:05:690 (1,2,3) - My hand moves unnatural here. Please make them softer. I suggest add a slider point at (328,220) to 01:05:690 (1) If someone else complain, I'll change, but for now no changes here
  18. 01:01:451 - The sound here is loud I'm following vocals
I won't mod Insane or Extra diffs, since I can't get FC on insane, and can't even pass Extra. (Don't believe in my rank, SS players have very much more pp than their skills have). But I think Insane is better than Light Insane, because it follow the music better, and I feel more comfortable to play, instead of trapped, mind the traps, retry until FC :|
Thank you for mod dude, sorry for no changes on Light Insane, but Easy mod was very useful :)

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Topic Starter
Lumael

AsakuraNe wrote:

UPDATE:

AsaNe's Normal
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Updated
-Kanzaki

noz1995 wrote:

Hello, my mod from your m4m queue

[Kanzaki's Hard]
  1. 00:30:472 (2) - I think move it to (312,40) (same as 00:30:309 (1) ) is better
  2. 00:36:994 (2,3) - too far, right?
  3. 00:37:646 (3,4) - if 00:36:994 (2,3) is so far like that, 00:37:646 (3,4) become too close. I suggest move both 00:36:831 (1,2) to (104,108), curve 00:36:994 (2) more, move both 00:37:646 (3,4) to (196,152). Then they will look like this: http://puu.sh/izor8.jpg
  4. 00:40:581 (3,1) - Too far, I think. Maybe move 00:40:581 (3) to (296, 136)
  5. 00:40:907 (2,3) - ^. I suggest move 00:41:233 (3) to (396,232)
  6. 00:43:842 - The sound here is loud. Should add objects
  7. 00:51:668 and 00:51:831 - I think you should follow voice here and add objects, because if you follow the instrumental, the dense drum starts at 00:51:831 and ends at 00:52:320, makes players hard to catch the triplet
  8. 00:57:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This could look better: http://puu.sh/izqNL.gif
    SPOILER
    1. Move 00:57:701 (1,2) to (308, 168) and move the second point of 00:57:864 (2) to (240,208)
    2. Reverse 00:58:190 (3) (CTRL + G), then move to (128,184)
    3. Move 00:58:516 (4) to (92,100), 00:58:679 (5) to (24, 184)
    4. Reverse 00:59:168 (8)
    5. Remove 00:59:494 (9)
    6. Copy 00:59:168 (8) and paste at 00:59:494, reverse and move to (279, 259)
    7. Move 00:59:983 (10) to the end of 00:59:494 (9)
  9. 01:20:038 (1) - Maybe hard to catch, please make it nearer to the center of the screen
Applied some of them thanks for your mod.

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HappyRocket88
Please, the srotyboard almost made me blind palying the insane. lol

Fix this, I guess (?)
Topic Starter
Lumael

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Please, the srotyboard almost made me blind palying the insane. lol

Fix this, I guess (?)
The max I can do is to add epilepsy warning :3
Come[Back]Home
General
Map has Tag Conflicts.
You should deactivate letterbox in breaks
Source conflicts
You should check the Ai-Mod

Easy

00:10:907 (1,3) Bad overlap imo
00:13:516 (3,4,1) I'd have tried to do a perfect triangle by moving (1) too 168/32 because it looks better
00:28:353 (2,3) Starting on redticks can be a bit confusing in an Easy, id stick to the white ticks.
00:38:299 (2,3) Slider instead, its easier because new people dont have to focus on the red tick
00:40:907 (2,2) Im unsure about this because (2) is completely under (2). I dont think its okay in an Easy
01:00:472 (1,2) You could do it like this: Its not perfect, but i hope you know what i mean

AsaNe's Normal

00:14:820 (1) Move it a bit up, its too far down

Well, in general i think that the part before the kiai time is a bit too hard, kiai is way easier then the part before, but kiai is more mapped like a Normal. Its just my opinion though, overall its a cool Normal

Kanzaki's Hard

I spotted 1 non-straight 1/2 slider in the part before the kiai, i think you should think about that since it feels really "boring" to play
00:13:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6) This is nice to play for an Insane, but not in a Hard. Going in circles can be a bit too hard in hard. You should put curvy sliders for (5,6) instead. to get "something else" in and not just straight sliders.
00:20:690 (6) You should move it too 200/228 for a perfect triangle
00:28:190 (6) Why do you ignore beats and vocals with this slider?
00:36:994 (2,4) They are nearly touching each other, you should fix that
00:46:288 (7) This one shouldnt start on a red tick
00:47:918 (3,7,9) ^
00:53:951 (1,2,3,4,5) You should improve this part, first repeat is too long and that makes the other repeats akward too. Do it like this. First repeatslider starts here 00:53:951 second here 00:54:277 third here 00:54:603 fourth here (if you want one) 00:54:929 Plays much better

kiai time is full of just straight 1/2 sliders too
01:05:690 (2,3,4,5) This is good for Insanes, but not Hards
01:07:483 (8,1,2) Ugly overlap
01:08:299 (2,3,4,5,6,8) Insane pattern

So many straight 1/2 sliders, makes the map boring. Feels random to me

Space's Hard

00:34:222 (9) A single circle would do better. Theres no reason to force 1/4 slider
01:05:527 (3) Repeat slider till 01:05:690 would be better so its not too hard imo
01:05:853 (1,2,3) This sliders shouldnt start on red ticks. Delete (1) and put a circle here 01:05:853 then let (2) start here 01:06:016 and (3) start here 01:06:342 and we fixed the problem, feels much better. You can add a circle here 01:06:668 or you could do a 1/2 slider there
01:09:603 (4) This should be 1/2
01:15:799 (1) Slider should end here 01:16:125 and spinner start here 01:16:206

Light Insane

00:17:103 (2,3,4) Random jump feels random
00:18:733 (1,3) Bad overlap imo
00:19:386 (3,4,5) Random jump, theres nothing in the music that suggests a jump
00:22:483 (4,5,6,7) I dont like this pattern, its supposed to be a light Insane, maybe you should reduce the DS a bit and the overlap 00:22:483 (5,7) looks ugly
00:23:788 (9,1) This feels random and its hard to predict since (9) is under a slider.
00:36:505 (9,1) This feels random
00:39:521 (7,1) You could add a circle here 00:39:440 since theres a vocal, and its better to play.
00:42:212 (1,2,3,4) You shouldnt stack them, takes out the movement
00:45:799 (5) Why a multiple repeat instead of 2 1/2 sliders which is better to play?
00:49:386 (3,4,1,2,3,4) Why did you increase the DS? Its still the same as before and nothing has changed in the song to suggest this
00:53:951 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) This is more for an Insane and not Light Insane

Kiai has barely any jumps even though its the main part of the song. Why did you do that? Feels more like a Hard except the stream


Ill stop here. Insane was too random for me sorry. This map needs a lot of polishing and mods.

Good Luck :3
(Sry if you think im mean or something, im not >w<)
Spayyce

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Space's Hard

00:34:222 (9) A single circle would do better. Theres no reason to force 1/4 slider idk why i done that, it was late :3
01:05:527 (3) Repeat slider till 01:05:690 would be better so its not too hard imo My map needs some challenge, the rest of it is no jumps, this is literally the only stream in my map that is noteworthy XD
01:05:853 (1,2,3) This sliders shouldnt start on red ticks. Delete (1) and put a circle here 01:05:853 then let (2) start here 01:06:016 and (3) start here 01:06:342 and we fixed the problem, feels much better. You can add a circle here 01:06:668 or you could do a 1/2 slider there Fixed thank you.
01:09:603 (4) This should be 1/2 fixed
01:15:799 (1) Slider should end here 01:16:125 and spinner start here 01:16:206 Listening at 25% the vocals i've mapped the spinner to start on the downbeat.
http://puu.sh/iB5J4/abff145f00.osu
Topic Starter
Lumael

[ Space ] wrote:

http://puu.sh/iB5J4/abff145f00.osu
Updated.
-Kanzaki

Come[Back]Home wrote:

General


Kanzaki's Hard

I spotted 1 non-straight 1/2 slider in the part before the kiai, i think you should think about that since it feels really "boring" to play
00:13:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6) This is nice to play for an Insane, but not in a Hard. Going in circles can be a bit too hard in hard. You should put curvy sliders for (5,6) instead. to get "something else" in and not just straight sliders. - Since i used lower SV than usual they arent insane. I wont accept any "this is an insane pattern"
00:20:690 (6) You should move it too 200/228 for a perfect triangle - Fixed.
00:28:190 (6) Why do you ignore beats and vocals with this slider? - Changed.
00:36:994 (2,4) They are nearly touching each other, you should fix that - Fixed.
00:46:288 (7) This one shouldnt start on a red tick - Fixed
00:47:918 (3,7,9) ^ - Eh they fits fine to me i dont know give an example maybe?
00:53:951 (1,2,3,4,5) You should improve this part, first repeat is too long and that makes the other repeats akward too. Do it like this. First repeatslider starts here 00:53:951 second here 00:54:277 third here 00:54:603 fourth here (if you want one) 00:54:929 Plays much better - Fixed.

kiai time is full of just straight 1/2 sliders too
01:05:690 (2,3,4,5) This is good for Insanes, but not Hards -
01:07:483 (8,1,2) Ugly overlap - Changed.
01:08:299 (2,3,4,5,6,8) Insane pattern -

So many straight 1/2 sliders, makes the map boring. Feels random to me

People find it fun to play (some low ranks who are playing hard difficulties with no mod) For me almost all of the hard difficulties arent fun without DT.
Thanks for your criticism!

Update
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Topic Starter
Lumael

Come[Back]Home wrote:

General
Map has Tag Conflicts.
You should deactivate letterbox in breaks
Source conflicts
You should check the Ai-Mod

Easy

00:10:907 (1,3) Bad overlap imo Not even an overlap, (1) desappear b4 (3) comes out
00:13:516 (3,4,1) I'd have tried to do a perfect triangle by moving (1) too 168/32 because it looks better
00:28:353 (2,3) Starting on redticks can be a bit confusing in an Easy, id stick to the white ticks.
00:38:299 (2,3) Slider instead, its easier because new people dont have to focus on the red tick
00:40:907 (2,2) Im unsure about this because (2) is completely under (2). I dont think its okay in an Easy
01:00:472 (1,2) You could do it like this: Its not perfect, but i hope you know what i mean Actually this is completely impossible with the DS I'm using

Light Insane

00:17:103 (2,3,4) Random jump feels random if you listen to the rhythm there's a reason to this jump
00:18:733 (1,3) Bad overlap imo
00:19:386 (3,4,5) Random jump, theres nothing in the music that suggests a jump Ofc there is, listem to it calmly that you'll realize that there is a complete reasonable reason, this rhythm appears from time to time, that's why I did jumps
00:22:483 (4,5,6,7) I dont like this pattern, its supposed to be a light Insane, maybe you should reduce the DS a bit and the overlap 00:22:483 (5,7) looks ugly
00:23:788 (9,1) This feels random and its hard to predict since (9) is under a slider.
00:36:505 (9,1) This feels random I'm Following vocals
00:39:521 (7,1) You could add a circle here 00:39:440 since theres a vocal, and its better to play.
00:42:212 (1,2,3,4) You shouldnt stack them, takes out the movement
00:45:799 (5) Why a multiple repeat instead of 2 1/2 sliders which is better to play? I was trying to not repeat patterns but fixed
00:49:386 (3,4,1,2,3,4) Why did you increase the DS? Its still the same as before and nothing has changed in the song to suggest this Man listen to the song carefuly, the rhythm gets stronger and I increase DS to make players feel that
00:53:951 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) This is more for an Insane and not Light Insane

Kiai has barely any jumps even though its the main part of the song. Why did you do that? Feels more like a Hard except the stream Increased the amount of Jumps


Ill stop here. Insane was too random for me sorry. This map needs a lot of polishing and mods. Don't think so but working on that

Good Luck :3
(Sry if you think im mean or something, im not >w<) hope so
Thank you for the mod dude

No reply = fixed
Topic Starter
Lumael

-Kanzaki wrote:

Update
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Updated.
AsakuraNe

Come[Back]Home wrote:

AsaNe's Normal

00:14:820 (1) Move it a bit up, its too far down -Fixed

Well, in general i think that the part before the kiai time is a bit too hard, kiai is way easier then the part before, but kiai is more mapped like a Normal. Its just my opinion though, overall its a cool Normal -Yey~! 8-) hmm. yeah. the part before the kiai is overmapped lewl :3 but i guess it's okay~ :D
Thanks for Modding :3

UPDATE:

AsaNe's Normal
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-Kanzaki wrote:

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AsakuraNe wrote:

UPDATE:

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[Colours]
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Combo3 : 26,26,247
Combo4 : 16,168,250

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Updated.
Bara-

6x0:45=4:30 -->4 diffs
I decided to mod the 4 lowest diffs (as you didn't specify the diffs you wanted)

[General]

◾Song Folder: BG is of unrankable dimension, it should have either a 16:9 or a 4:3 ratio, This means it should be 1366x768 (and not 1336x768)
◾Song Setup: AseNe's Normal has many issues regarding metadata. They are the following
Source: Guily Crown (Currently it's empty, while the other diffs do have it as source)
Tags: Remove Guilty Crown (as it's already in the source)
Letterbox in breaks: Turn this off, as it's also off in the other diffs
◾Timing: Seems fine
◾Hitsounds: The soft-hitnormal should IMO be used in all diffs, not only Kanzaki's
◾AImod: All the issues I also pointed out in Song setup
◾Other: Why not make the preview point at 00:55:255 It's makes more sense, as this is where the kiai starts

[Easy]
HP 1 is very low for an easy, set it to 2 for a more balanced spread (as the next diff uses 4)

  1. 00:10:907 (1) - Try to curve this slider. Try to make the flow better from going from (1) to (2) to (3). A circular flow works best here. Try making this slider like this
  2. 00:12:864 (2,3) - If you look at these 2 from 00:12:212, you'll see the blanket is pretty off. Try to improve it
  3. 00:21:342 (1) - It's better if the curve goes the otherway around. Now, if you follow the slider, in the end, it goes to the right, but the next object is to the left of that slider. Make it like this, so it'll flow better
    SPOILER
    http://puu.sh/iDjw9/35fe12c5e5.jpg
  4. 00:29:005 (3) - The timing here is really complex. Everything (with a few exceptions) is snapped to 2/1. Here, however, you snap it to 3/2. A newbie would just follow the beat, but if he hits it at the beat here, it'll be off, and he misses. Make the timing like this to fix it
  5. 00:38:299 (2) - Here, as well as ^^, the timing is very complex. However, this time it's not the start of the slider, but the end. All sliders are 2/1 in length, while this one is 3/2. This'll make a newbie confused on when to hit the next note. Make the timing like this, and it'll play much better
  6. 00:40:907 (2,1) - minor: I'm not quite sure on what to say about this. This is a really weird overlap, but it plays and looks fine, except for one really small detail. The fact that the end of (1) also touches (2) concerns me a bit. Move the end a little to the right to fix this (yeah, it's a really small thing)
  7. 00:43:190 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - I don't think you shoudl raise the difficulty here. You use a lot of 1/1, which is something, compared to the previous parts, you don't do in this map. It feels pretty hard and complex. Something like this will work better
  8. 01:03:081 (2) - This slider has a really low distance compared to the previous note. You should keep the distance even in the whole difficulty (perhaps a slight change from 1.0-1.1 in kiai) if the difficulty is normal or easy. Try to make it like this, it also fixes the distance
  9. 01:05:690 (1,2,3,4) - Again, a fairly difficult rhythm. Try to make it either all 2/1 or all 3/1 sliders. A mixture of 5/2 and 3/1 sliders should technically be avoided
  10. 01:08:299 (3,4) - This pattern feels a little weird. Such patterns are hard to make, as they need great blankets and proper overlaps. In it's current state, I don't think it well-made. The blanket between these 2 can be improved greatly (move (4) to 340:28)
Overall, this diff is decent, but still needs some polishing

[AsaNe's Normal]
I'm quite unsure about the stacks. I was told many times that stacks in Easy/Normal difficulties should be avoided as they are rather hard to understand. However, nowadays, many of those old statements are no longer true. I do not know how it's with these stacks. They do play nicely, so they can stay, however, you should be prepared to change them if multiple people say so, as I'm quite unsure about it
  1. 00:13:516 (1) - Please curve this slider. It feels a little blank, and it'll play/flow better if you have a curve in it. Add a grey node at 308:280 for example
  2. 00:29:168 (1) - This slider feels off, as it doesn't follow the vocals properly, the vocals start at 00:29:331 (well, the dooooooooooo sound) Move the slider to 00:29:331 to make this slider play better. If you just completely move it, it'll end on other vocals which you left unmapped, so it's good in 2 ways
  3. 00:42:212 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I think you're much better off if you just follow the vocals or the beat. The notes gets snapped really weird if you follow the guitar strings, making it pretty hard for the players
  4. 00:53:951 (1) - Such sliders are unrankable. The wiggle is way to extensive and should be toned down heaviliy. As the SV is still the same, players will move in the speed as before. Here, however, the speed gets toned down. I made a normal slider with the same speed/direction, and it's only 3/2 long, instead of 3/1 This means the wiggle slows it down with 50%. You shoudl either delete this slider and make a new one, tone down the wiggles or put a SV change there (which should be 2.00 here)
  5. 01:04:875 (4) - This slider should be shortened to follow the vocals to a 1/1 slider
  6. 01:05:119 - What's the point of this green line?
Even though it looks weird, mostly due to all the stacks, I still think it's a fairly good diff. It does, like the other diffs needs some polishing until it an get ranked, but I'm quite sure this diff will be a solid diff soon I only miss blankets in this diff >.<

[Kanzaki's Hard]
AR 8 is way to high. It's only the 3rd diff in this mapset. Make it 7, so the spread will be 3-5-7-8-8-9-9.4

  1. 00:29:331 (2) - This slider feels really weird. The wiggle is fairly strong and it has a slowdown. Try to make it more curvy, like this
  2. 00:30:799 (4) - ^^
  3. 00:41:233 (3) - I think you made a small mistake here, with the snapping of this slider, right?
  4. 00:42:212 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - You should completely revise the rhythm in this whole part. It feels really awkward as it follow some faint guitar string, opposed to the vocals/beat
    Try this



  5. 00:54:603 (3) - Why do you end this at 00:55:011? It feels really off, make it end at 00:54:929
  6. 01:01:288 (3) - Move this to 01:01:451, as there is no beat/vocals at the Original time
Overall, this diff is decent. It can be improved greatly by polishing. Please, take a good look at your map and look at the blankets. If you see a slider which looks like a blanket, look thoroughly to see if the blanket is perfect. If it's not, keep trying until you can get it perfect. I'm quite sure, after you improve all those blankets (which I didn't note, as quite some people found it too nazi) the diff will be much better

[Space's Hard]
Hi Space :3

The audio in the begin is very inaudible, as it's only 10% (And soft-sampleset) which makes it nigh impossible to hear on most skins. Raise it to 30%
  1. 00:31:777 (1,2) - This doesn't follow the vocals properly. Make it like this to fix this
  2. 00:49:222 (7) - The 3/4 feels weird, as the sound you were probably trying to map is at 00:49:549. Remove 00:49:875 (8) - and make the slider 1/1 instead of 3/4
  3. 00:52:157 (9,10,11) - I think a slider works better here, to follow the aahh~~. Something like this looks nice IMO
  4. 01:04:875 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This comes really sudden, as in the rest of the map, you don't even use 1/4. Please make these either 1/4 sliders (reverses) or make them 1/2 circles (with small jumps)
  5. 01:08:217 (10) - This feels overmapped, mostly because you don't use 1/4 elsewhere in the map (with the exception of ^^). also, there is no sound here, so you're better of deleting it
  6. 01:14:820 (4) - The wiggle makes little to no sense IMO. Make it like this (but please make it nicely symmetrical)
  7. 01:15:799 (1) - This slider should either be a 1/1 slider (thus ending on the start of the spinner) or a 3/4 slider with a circle on 01:16:125
    In both cases, the spinner should start at 01:16:206. Why? The start of a spinner makes no sound, so it can start 1/4 later and still give the origianl feeling. If you put it 1/4 later, you can add a circle at the orignal start of it so it does have impact now
Oehh, I like this diff a lot :3

Good luck with the map, and if you need any help, ask me!
Topic Starter
Lumael

baraatje123 wrote:


6x0:45=4:30 -->4 diffs
I decided to mod the 4 lowest diffs (as you didn't specify the diffs you wanted) :cry: x.x

[General]

◾Song Folder: BG is of unrankable dimension, it should have either a 16:9 or a 4:3 ratio, This means it should be 1366x768 (and not 1336x768)
◾Song Setup: AseNe's Normal has many issues regarding metadata. They are the following
Source: Guily Crown (Currently it's empty, while the other diffs do have it as source)
Tags: Remove Guilty Crown (as it's already in the source)
Letterbox in breaks: Turn this off, as it's also off in the other diffs
◾Timing: Seems fine
◾Hitsounds: The soft-hitnormal should IMO be used in all diffs, not only Kanzaki's Well in my diffs I don't even use soft hs
◾AImod: All the issues I also pointed out in Song setup
◾Other: Why not make the preview point at 00:55:255 It's makes more sense, as this is where the kiai starts

All conflicts fixed
[Easy]
HP 1 is very low for an easy, set it to 2 for a more balanced spread (as the next diff uses 4)

  1. 00:10:907 (1) - Try to curve this slider. Try to make the flow better from going from (1) to (2) to (3). A circular flow works best here. Try making this slider like this
  2. 00:12:864 (2,3) - If you look at these 2 from 00:12:212, you'll see the blanket is pretty off. Try to improve it
  3. 00:21:342 (1) - It's better if the curve goes the otherway around. Now, if you follow the slider, in the end, it goes to the right, but the next object is to the left of that slider. Make it like this, so it'll flow better
    SPOILER
    http://puu.sh/iDjw9/35fe12c5e5.jpg
  4. 00:29:005 (3) - The timing here is really complex. Everything (with a few exceptions) is snapped to 2/1. Here, however, you snap it to 3/2. A newbie would just follow the beat, but if he hits it at the beat here, it'll be off, and he misses. Make the timing like this to fix it
  5. 00:38:299 (2) - Here, as well as ^^, the timing is very complex. However, this time it's not the start of the slider, but the end. All sliders are 2/1 in length, while this one is 3/2. This'll make a newbie confused on when to hit the next note. Make the timing like this, and it'll play much better
  6. 00:40:907 (2,1) - minor: I'm not quite sure on what to say about this. This is a really weird overlap, but it plays and looks fine, except for one really small detail. The fact that the end of (1) also touches (2) concerns me a bit. Move the end a little to the right to fix this (yeah, it's a really small thing)
  7. 00:43:190 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - I don't think you shoudl raise the difficulty here. You use a lot of 1/1, which is something, compared to the previous parts, you don't do in this map. It feels pretty hard and complex. Something like this will work better No changes for now since I don't have time to do so :p
  8. 01:03:081 (2) - This slider has a really low distance compared to the previous note. You should keep the distance even in the whole difficulty (perhaps a slight change from 1.0-1.1 in kiai) if the difficulty is normal or easy. Try to make it like this, it also fixes the distance
  9. 01:05:690 (1,2,3,4) - Again, a fairly difficult rhythm. Try to make it either all 2/1 or all 3/1 sliders. A mixture of 5/2 and 3/1 sliders should technically be avoided Same, don't have time to fix that now
  10. 01:08:299 (3,4) - This pattern feels a little weird. Such patterns are hard to make, as they need great blankets and proper overlaps. In it's current state, I don't think it well-made. The blanket between these 2 can be improved greatly (move (4) to 340:28)
Overall, this diff is decent, but still needs some polishing Probably because I've mapped this in 20 minutes, but thank you for the motivation :3

Good luck with the map, and if you need any help, ask me!
Thank you for the mod dude!

No reply = fixed
-Kanzaki

baraatje123 wrote:


6x0:45=4:30 -->4 diffs
I decided to mod the 4 lowest diffs (as you didn't specify the diffs you wanted)

[General]

◾Hitsounds: The soft-hitnormal should IMO be used in all diffs, not only Kanzaki's - I gave the hitsound to use it on my diff but i didn't know that now everbody has to use it or not, should they?

[Kanzaki's Hard]
AR 8 is way to high. It's only the 3rd diff in this mapset. Make it 7, so the spread will be 3-5-7-8-8-9-9.4 - changed it to 7.5, I do understand about the spread but i think 7 is too low.

  1. 00:29:331 (2) - This slider feels really weird. The wiggle is fairly strong and it has a slowdown. Try to make it more curvy, like this - Good one made it.
  2. 00:30:799 (4) - ^^ ^
  3. 00:41:233 (3) - I think you made a small mistake here, with the snapping of this slider, right? - Fixed
  4. 00:42:212 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - You should completely revise the rhythm in this whole part. It feels really awkward as it follow some faint guitar string, opposed to the vocals/beat - Alright i made this one but not the exactly same i still gave some space to emphasize the guitar.
    Try this



  5. 00:54:603 (3) - Why do you end this at 00:55:011? It feels really off, make it end at 00:54:929 - Ok here drum doesnt finishes at 05.11 so i made that but i changed there and added a circle at the end.
  6. 01:01:288 (3) - Move this to 01:01:451, as there is no beat/vocals at the Original time - I didn't understand this one why i hear it exactly at this time.
Overall, this diff is decent. It can be improved greatly by polishing. Please, take a good look at your map and look at the blankets. If you see a slider which looks like a blanket, look thoroughly to see if the blanket is perfect. If it's not, keep trying until you can get it perfect. I'm quite sure, after you improve all those blankets (which I didn't note, as quite some people found it too nazi) the diff will be much better. - Thanks for your help and comment i fixed some blankets, thanks for your mod!

Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Egoist - Ame, Kimi wo Tsurete.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54603
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 10907,21342,42212,55255,66668
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Ame, Kimi wo Tsurete (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Ame, Kimi wo Tsurete (Short Ver.)
Artist:EGOIST
ArtistUnicode:EGOIST
Creator:LucaSA4
Version:Kanzaki's Hard
Source:
Tags:guilty crown anime supercell ryo rock guitar vocal -Kanzaki
BeatmapID:723069
BeatmapSetID:325217

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

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Bara-
About the soft-hitnormal, it really fits with the song , so it makes the other diffs better if it uses it :3
It is not any problem if you keep it though
-Kanzaki

baraatje123 wrote:

About the soft-hitnormal, it really fits with the song , so it makes the other diffs better if it uses it :3
It is not any problem if you keep it though
Hehehe thanks.
Topic Starter
Lumael

baraatje123 wrote:

About the soft-hitnormal, it really fits with the song , so it makes the other diffs better if it uses it :3
It is not any problem if you keep it though
aww I really love my hs but I may check. To tell the truth, I couldn't even hear any hs on kanzaki's diff, my skin is a bit simplistic when it comes to that, maybe my hitnormal is very near his whistle
Spayyce

baraatje123 wrote:


[Space's Hard]
Hi Space :3 hey :D

The audio in the begin is very inaudible, as it's only 10% (And soft-sampleset) which makes it nigh impossible to hear on most skins. Raise it to 30%
  1. 00:31:777 (1,2) - This doesn't follow the vocals properly. Make it like this to fix this
    Fixed :) thanks
  2. 00:49:222 (7) - The 3/4 feels weird, as the sound you were probably trying to map is at 00:49:549. Remove 00:49:875 (8) - and make the slider 1/1 instead of 3/4 I made it 1/1 and removed the note after
  3. 00:52:157 (9,10,11) - I think a slider works better here, to follow the aahh~~. Something like this looks nice IMO Nice idea and cool slider (although I think mine is a little different)
  4. 01:04:875 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This comes really sudden, as in the rest of the map, you don't even use 1/4. Please make these either 1/4 sliders (reverses) or make them 1/2 circles (with small jumps) It is the only thing in my map which expresses any form of difficulty imo and I think having reverse sliders would ruin the flow.
  5. 01:08:217 (10) - This feels overmapped, mostly because you don't use 1/4 elsewhere in the map (with the exception of ^^). also, there is no sound here, so you're better of deleting it Listening at 25% I can hear 2 syllables within the vocals so no change
  6. 01:14:820 (4) - The wiggle makes little to no sense IMO. Make it like this (but please make it nicely symmetrical) Fixed nice idea :D
  7. 01:15:799 (1) - This slider should either be a 1/1 slider (thus ending on the start of the spinner) or a 3/4 slider with a circle on 01:16:125
    In both cases, the spinner should start at 01:16:206. Why? The start of a spinner makes no sound, so it can start 1/4 later and still give the origianl feeling. If you put it 1/4 later, you can add a circle at the orignal start of it so it does have impact nowI'll add a note on and move the spinner by 1/4
Oehh, I like this diff a lot :3 <3
Diff
http://puu.sh/iE2mG/892e755e0a.osu
Topic Starter
Lumael
UPDATE

  1. Metadata Fixed. The original title is 雨、キミを連れて
  2. Insane remapped
  3. Added new hitsounding and followed the last mod advice about hs
  4. Removed Extra since I'm horrible mapping extra and it was completely random
  5. Removed Light Insane since the new Insane is a Light Insane already
Suggestions to a custom name to the Insane are well welcome

Still working on HS, Please don't kill me I know I need to fix it
AsakuraNe

baraatje123 wrote:

[AsaNe's Normal]
I'm quite unsure about the stacks. I was told many times that stacks in Easy/Normal difficulties should be avoided as they are rather hard to understand. However, nowadays, many of those old statements are no longer true. I do not know how it's with these stacks. They do play nicely, so they can stay, however, you should be prepared to change them if multiple people say so, as I'm quite unsure about it -Stack are SUppperr OKAY :D it's not unrankable but I realized I used too many stacks LOL so i removed some :3
  1. 00:13:516 (1) - Please curve this slider. It feels a little blank, and it'll play/flow better if you have a curve in it. Add a grey node at 308:280 for example -Done
  2. 00:29:168 (1) - This slider feels off, as it doesn't follow the vocals properly, the vocals start at 00:29:331 (well, the dooooooooooo sound) Move the slider to 00:29:331 to make this slider play better. If you just completely move it, it'll end on other vocals which you left unmapped, so it's good in 2 ways -Done
  3. 00:42:212 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I think you're much better off if you just follow the vocals or the beat. The notes gets snapped really weird if you follow the guitar strings, making it pretty hard for the players -Remapped
  4. 00:53:951 (1) - Such sliders are unrankable. The wiggle is way to extensive and should be toned down heaviliy. As the SV is still the same, players will move in the speed as before. Here, however, the speed gets toned down. I made a normal slider with the same speed/direction, and it's only 3/2 long, instead of 3/1 This means the wiggle slows it down with 50%. You shoudl either delete this slider and make a new one, tone down the wiggles or put a SV change there (which should be 2.00 here) -Done
  5. 01:04:875 (4) - This slider should be shortened to follow the vocals to a 1/1 slider -The 3/4 slider is better instead of changing it to 1/1 slider and giving a break~
  6. 01:05:119 - What's the point of this green line? -Don't know lol Must be Lucas' Mistake :3
Even though it looks weird, mostly due to all the stacks, I still think it's a fairly good diff. It does, like the other diffs needs some polishing until it an get ranked, but I'm quite sure this diff will be a solid diff soon I only miss blankets in this diff >.<

Good luck with the map, and if you need any help, ask me!
Thanks for Modding :)

UPDATE:
AsaNe's Normal
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TitleUnicode:雨、キミを連れて
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LucaSA4 wrote:

Suggestions to a custom name to the Insane are well welcome
Hmm. Perpetual? Ceaseless? Conceal? Perennial? Continuity? Ambiguity? Mystery? Lmao this is too random but cool words :lol:
Topic Starter
Lumael
So, I won't be online so much for a while, hope you understand, still need to update your diffs but I can't :/ this beatmap will be inactive for some days :s
[ Joey ]
So sorry that this took so long
Here is my M4M

Monochromatic World

00:08:299 - Should start the spinner here, when that noise starts, and then gradually increase the volume of the spinner
00:14:331 (5,6) - Feels better if the slider and the hit circle were switched, so the hit circle comes first. Just matches the music better imo
00:21:342 (1) - Should turn this into a 1/1 slider, to add emphasize to the change of music
00:23:951 (1) - I feel this is another good spot for a 1/1 slider
00:30:309 - to 00:30:799 - Should all be hitcircle imo, to match the vocals, possibly even antijumps?
00:31:777 - 1/1 slider here?
00:38:625 (6,7) - This distance feel a little large compared to everything else. http://puu.sh/iLae1/f6f4d78039.jpg (I overlapped the 7 and 8 with the 5 and 6)
00:48:407 (4,5) - This beat doesn't really match the music imo. 00:48:407 (4) - Should just make this a 1/2 slider
00:51:831 - According to the music, the stream should start here 00:51:831 - , rather than here 00:51:668 -
00:53:951 (3) - NC?
01:01:451 (5) - The rest of your map has a very clean look, so I think this slider shape should be a little less messy. Try something like this? http://puu.sh/iLauf/b360edacd0.jpg
01:04:549 - 01:04:875 - Add whistles on these
01:05:608 (8,1) - Give these a ltitle more space to emphasize the note maybe? http://puu.sh/iLaDB/6d2a7399cf.jpg
I recommend puttin a NC on every new measure, (so every tall white tick) To me, when combos are at 9 or 10, that's too high. But not a big deal, I don't think it's an unrankable issue
Space's Hard

I highly recommend not using these hitsounds. They are one of the most popular hitsounds used for skins, and shouldn't be used as customs in a map.
00:00:473 - Also, I think you should take out that slider-slide noise, it's pretty over-powering to the music. To do this, just add a blank wav file for the slider-slide sound
00:08:299 (1) - Gradually increase the volume of this slider, to match that noise that is increasing in volume
00:17:103 (4,8) - Not a big deal at all, but you can stack these 00:17:103 (4,8) -
00:30:472 (5,6,7) - Not very good flow here. Would be better if the 7 was facing this direction http://puu.sh/iLbms/cd4e661710.jpg But something that I think feels good is if you stack the notes like this http://puu.sh/iLbps/bcece73344.jpg It fits the vocals really good this way imo
00:49:222 (7) - I know you are following vocals here, but I don't agree with starting a slider on a red tick here. You miss too important of a beat 00:49:386 -
01:04:875 (1,2,3) - I also don't agree with this triple. There isn't a triple in the music, and I don't think it feels very pleasant to play either. I think a beat like this feels better http://puu.sh/iLbLt/8bd0f060f8.jpg
01:05:201 - The stream should actually start here, so add a note here 01:05:282 -
01:08:951 (3) - Shorten this to a 1/1 slider, and put a circle here 01:09:440 -
01:15:799 (1) - Shorten this to a 1/2 slider. A 3/4 slider doesn't fit here.
Kanzaki's Hard

00:10:907 - This first section is missing hitsounds, should probably add some :P Also, the hitsound volume is way to high for a soft part like this. Consider reducing it to around 40%
00:21:342 (2) - Add a finish
00:22:646 (5,6,7) - I know you are going to vocals, but don't ignore the background beat. It's very hard to hit a note like this properly 00:23:462 (7) - because its on a red tick, with nothing immediately before it. Try something like this http://puu.sh/iLcjn/097cae049b.jpg
00:25:255 (5,6,7) - Same thing here
00:28:516 - Ya, I really think you shouldn't skip these white ticks. Turn this into a reverse slider 00:28:190 (6) -
00:29:168 - Add note here
01:01:614 (1) - I don't agree with this sudden decrease in slider velocity. Doesn't fit the music imo
01:12:049 (1) - ^
AsaNe's Normal

00:53:951 (1) - I like this, but I don't think you are supposed to use any slider velocity changes in a normal difficulty. You might want to check that with someone else.
Very good diff, but missing hitsounds
Easy

00:56:886 - A really big gap here. Keep in mind, the kiai should be slightly more difficult than the rest of the song.
01:12:049 (3) - Shouldn't start a note on a red tick, especially in an Easy. Move it over to the white tick.
01:16:288 (1) - Move this spinner over to the white tick, because it's an Easy
Good diff, just make the kiai a little more difficult.
Topic Starter
Lumael

[ Joey ] wrote:

So sorry that this took so long
Here is my M4M
Monochromatic World

00:08:299 - Should start the spinner here, when that noise starts, and then gradually increase the volume of the spinner
Actually there's a noise starting at 00:05:690 - and I'm following this one
00:14:331 (5,6) - Feels better if the slider and the hit circle were switched, so the hit circle comes first. Just matches the music better imo
Right
00:21:342 (1) - Should turn this into a 1/1 slider, to add emphasize to the change of music
Right
00:23:951 (1) - I feel this is another good spot for a 1/1 slider
Right
00:30:309 - to 00:30:799 - Should all be hitcircle imo, to match the vocals, possibly even antijumps?
Okay, didn't do antijumps because I'm very bad at making those kinds of patterns
00:31:777 - 1/1 slider here?
Right
00:38:625 (6,7) - This distance feel a little large compared to everything else. http://puu.sh/iLae1/f6f4d78039.jpg (I overlapped the 7 and 8 with the 5 and 6)
Right, also good idea! Thanks
00:48:407 (4,5) - This beat doesn't really match the music imo. 00:48:407 (4) - Should just make this a 1/2 slider
Right
00:51:831 - According to the music, the stream should start here 00:51:831 - , rather than here 00:51:668 -
Well I can hear the noise at 00:51:668 - sorry
00:53:951 (3) - NC?
Right
01:01:451 (5) - The rest of your map has a very clean look, so I think this slider shape should be a little less messy. Try something like this? http://puu.sh/iLauf/b360edacd0.jpg
I did something different, also thank you ^^
01:04:549 - 01:04:875 - Add whistles on these
Added at 01:04:875 - only, the other sounded a bit weird for me
01:05:608 (8,1) - Give these a ltitle more space to emphasize the note maybe? http://puu.sh/iLaDB/6d2a7399cf.jpg
Right
I recommend puttin a NC on every new measure, (so every tall white tick) To me, when combos are at 9 or 10, that's too high. But not a big deal, I don't think it's an unrankable issue
Fixed!

Easy

00:56:886 - A really big gap here. Keep in mind, the kiai should be slightly more difficult than the rest of the song.7
Right, trying to fix that
01:12:049 (3) - Shouldn't start a note on a red tick, especially in an Easy. Move it over to the white tick.
Right
01:16:288 (1) - Move this spinner over to the white tick, because it's an Easy
Right
Good diff, just make the kiai a little more difficult. Thank you ^^
ThAnKs! This was a really useful mod!!
AsakuraNe

[ Joey ] wrote:

AsaNe's Normal

00:53:951 (1) - I like this, but I don't think you are supposed to use any slider velocity changes in a normal difficulty. You might want to check that with someone else. -I like this too >,< I'll ask someone about this~
Very good diff, but missing hitsounds -Yey~! :D Added Hitsounds~
Thanks for Modding :D

UPDATE:
DOWNLOAD this .wav file. It's a hitsound in my diff :3
AsaNe's Normal
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Topic Starter
Lumael
Updated and added hs
-Kanzaki

[ Joey ] wrote:

Kanzaki's Hard

00:10:907 - This first section is missing hitsounds, should probably add some :P Also, the hitsound volume is way to high for a soft part like this. Consider reducing it to around 40% -- Please first check if i have hitsound there or not. I already have custom2 soft hitsound there fits perfect.

00:21:342 (2) - Add a finish -- y
00:22:646 (5,6,7) - I know you are going to vocals, but don't ignore the background beat. It's very hard to hit a note like this properly 00:23:462 (7) - because its on a red tick, with nothing immediately before it. Try something like this http://puu.sh/iLcjn/097cae049b.jpg -- y
00:25:255 (5,6,7) - Same thing here ^^
00:28:516 - Ya, I really think you shouldn't skip these white ticks. Turn this into a reverse slider 00:28:190 (6) -- y
00:29:168 - Add note here -- No i follow vocal.
01:01:614 (1) - I don't agree with this sudden decrease in slider velocity. Doesn't fit the music imo -- Because i follow vocal.
01:12:049 (1) - ^ ^
Thanks for your mod.


Update
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Title:Ame, Kimi wo Tsurete (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Ame, Kimi wo Tsurete (Short Ver.)
Artist:EGOIST
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Creator:LucaSA4
Version:Kanzaki's Hard
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Tags:guilty crown anime supercell ryo rock guitar vocal -Kanzaki
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Topic Starter
Lumael
well, I want to mod this weird? a bit? ik

[Kanzaki's Hard]

  • 00:15:146 (6,7) - I think the spacing here is a bit random considering 00:13:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these jumps of 1,7 DS
    00:16:125 (1,2) - Anti jump? used 1.4 DS b4 and suddenly 1.2 DS try to have the same DS through all the beatmap and just some jumps like 00:13:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
    00:18:407 (7,1) - dunno about the flow here but it seens a bit weird for me. Ctrl H 00:18:733 (1) - ?
    00:20:038 (4,7) - Fix overlap
    00:20:364 (5,2) - ^ I suggest blanketing them
    00:21:342 (2,3) - ^ blanket
    00:21:994 (3) - well suddenly you changed to 1.2/1.3 DS? Them 00:22:320 (4) - 1.4 again, them 00:22:646 (5) - 1.3, fix it please, DS consistency
    00:22:483 - Add circle if you're following vocals
    00:23:136 (6,7) - weird flow, I recommend something like http://puu.sh/iM5gS/6948b954d0.jpg
    00:23:462 (7,1) - Also there's a BIG jump here, I think it's unrankeable for a Hard (2.4 DS) DS consistency!
    00:23:951 (2,3) - DS 1.2? Fix to 1.4 as it's your main
    00:24:929 (4) - DS 1.15? ^ fix
    00:25:255 (5,6,7) - Same as mentioned b4
    00:26:070 (7,1) - Jump same as mentioned b4 (looks like it's the same pattern too)
    00:27:864 (4) - Remove and add 1/2 slider at 00:27:701 -
    00:28:027 (5,2) - Overlap and weird slider :/
    00:30:309 (1,4) - ^^^^^even more :x
    00:31:777 (2,3) - 1.5 DS? 1.4!! DS consistency please
    00:32:755 (4) - 1.6 DS? o.OO ^
    00:32:755 (4,5) - Weird flow and DS consistency please!
    00:35:690 (4,5,6) - Same as mentioned b4
    00:36:179 (5,2) - Weird overlap , fix blanket
    00:39:114 (7,1) - Big jump! Fix it
    00:38:299 (5,6,7) - Same as mentioned b4
    00:41:233 (3) - This slider would be perfect if there wasn't the red anchor on the end (Remove this: http://puu.sh/iM5BX/069b66e337.jpg )
    00:46:288 (6,9,1) - Fix overlap
    00:51:994 (1,2,3) - I don't think Normal Hitsound fits here
    00:54:603 (3,4) - 1.8 DS I don't think here is a place for a jump, fix it
    00:55:255 (1,2) - Fix blanket http://puu.sh/iM5HZ/59e4340dc1.jpg
    00:56:886 (7,2) - Fix overlap
    01:01:614 (1) - I agree with Joey but ok if you think so, it's something too suddenly and hard to understand because you're mainly following drums and suddenly changed to vocals
    01:02:918 (1) - DS is fine here but the flow is a bit odd because the slider ended on the very right and unexperienced players would have to hold their mouses weirdly to get this here
    01:06:994 (8,9) - Fix blanket
    01:06:016 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think this has a insane feel, too hard to get
    01:08:625 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
    01:10:092 (9,2) - Flow here
    01:12:049 (1) - I agree with Joey but ok if you think so, it's something too suddenly and hard to understand because you're mainly following drums and suddenly changed to vocals²
    01:13:353 (1) - Same as mentioned b4, flow is odd

    later i do the rest, I wish I could recieve kds :p
-Kanzaki

LucaSA4 wrote:

well, I want to mod this weird? a bit? ik

[Kanzaki's Hard]

  • 00:15:146 (6,7) - I think the spacing here is a bit random considering 00:13:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these jumps of 1,7 DS
    00:16:125 (1,2) - Anti jump? used 1.4 DS b4 and suddenly 1.2 DS try to have the same DS through all the beatmap and just some jumps like 00:13:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
    00:18:407 (7,1) - dunno about the flow here but it seens a bit weird for me. Ctrl H 00:18:733 (1) - ?
    00:20:038 (4,7) - Fix overlap
    00:20:364 (5,2) - ^ I suggest blanketing them
    00:21:342 (2,3) - ^ blanket
    00:21:994 (3) - well suddenly you changed to 1.2/1.3 DS? Them 00:22:320 (4) - 1.4 again, them 00:22:646 (5) - 1.3, fix it please, DS consistency
    00:22:483 - Add circle if you're following vocals
    00:23:136 (6,7) - weird flow, I recommend something like http://puu.sh/iM5gS/6948b954d0.jpg
    00:23:462 (7,1) - Also there's a BIG jump here, I think it's unrankeable for a Hard (2.4 DS) DS consistency!
    00:23:951 (2,3) - DS 1.2? Fix to 1.4 as it's your main
    00:24:929 (4) - DS 1.15? ^ fix
    00:25:255 (5,6,7) - Same as mentioned b4
    00:26:070 (7,1) - Jump same as mentioned b4 (looks like it's the same pattern too)
    00:27:864 (4) - Remove and add 1/2 slider at 00:27:701 -
    00:28:027 (5,2) - Overlap and weird slider :/
    00:30:309 (1,4) - ^^^^^even more :x
    00:31:777 (2,3) - 1.5 DS? 1.4!! DS consistency please
    00:32:755 (4) - 1.6 DS? o.OO ^
    00:32:755 (4,5) - Weird flow and DS consistency please!
    00:35:690 (4,5,6) - Same as mentioned b4
    00:36:179 (5,2) - Weird overlap , fix blanket
    00:39:114 (7,1) - Big jump! Fix it
    00:38:299 (5,6,7) - Same as mentioned b4
    00:41:233 (3) - This slider would be perfect if there wasn't the red anchor on the end (Remove this: http://puu.sh/iM5BX/069b66e337.jpg )
    00:46:288 (6,9,1) - Fix overlap
    00:51:994 (1,2,3) - I don't think Normal Hitsound fits here
    00:54:603 (3,4) - 1.8 DS I don't think here is a place for a jump, fix it
    00:55:255 (1,2) - Fix blanket http://puu.sh/iM5HZ/59e4340dc1.jpg
    00:56:886 (7,2) - Fix overlap
    01:01:614 (1) - I agree with Joey but ok if you think so, it's something too suddenly and hard to understand because you're mainly following drums and suddenly changed to vocals
    01:02:918 (1) - DS is fine here but the flow is a bit odd because the slider ended on the very right and unexperienced players would have to hold their mouses weirdly to get this here
    01:06:994 (8,9) - Fix blanket
    01:06:016 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think this has a insane feel, too hard to get
    01:08:625 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
    01:10:092 (9,2) - Flow here
    01:12:049 (1) - I agree with Joey but ok if you think so, it's something too suddenly and hard to understand because you're mainly following drums and suddenly changed to vocals²
    01:13:353 (1) - Same as mentioned b4, flow is odd

    later i do the rest, I wish I could recieve kds :p
Applied some of them i don't understand what is wrong with the blankets ,fixed some DS stuff, 01:12:049 (1) - i dont suddenly change what i follow i alreadu follow vocal previous part listen carefully it is like i following both, fixed flows, i dont find my diff is too hard, Thanks for your mod.

Update
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TitleUnicode:雨、キミを連れて
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Spayyce

[ Joey ] wrote:

Space's Hard

I highly recommend not using these hitsounds. They are one of the most popular hitsounds used for skins, and shouldn't be used as customs in a map.
00:00:473 - Also, I think you should take out that slider-slide noise, it's pretty over-powering to the music. To do this, just add a blank wav file for the slider-slide sound Done, it used to be blank but idk what happened, I had one lying around so I used it.
00:08:299 (1) - Gradually increase the volume of this slider, to match that noise that is increasing in volume Done
00:17:103 (4,8) - Not a big deal at all, but you can stack these 00:17:103 (4,8) - It will ruin the consistency with the pattern I created.
00:30:472 (5,6,7) - Not very good flow here. Would be better if the 7 was facing this direction http://puu.sh/iLbms/cd4e661710.jpg But something that I think feels good is if you stack the notes like this http://puu.sh/iLbps/bcece73344.jpg It fits the vocals really good this way imo I believe it will stunt the song and ruin overall flow, plus it is a triangle pattern if you look closer.
00:49:222 (7) - I know you are following vocals here, but I don't agree with starting a slider on a red tick here. You miss too important of a beat 00:49:386 - It doesn't sound that major to me imo and I think it sounds fine XD
01:04:875 (1,2,3) - I also don't agree with this triple. There isn't a triple in the music, and I don't think it feels very pleasant to play either. I think a beat like this feels better http://puu.sh/iLbLt/8bd0f060f8.jpg I removed the triple and left 2 notes instead.
01:05:201 - The stream should actually start here, so add a note here 01:05:282 - Done
01:08:951 (3) - Shorten this to a 1/1 slider, and put a circle here 01:09:440 - I changed it around
01:15:799 (1) - Shorten this to a 1/2 slider. A 3/4 slider doesn't fit here. Changed

Topic Starter
Lumael
Both updated
A Mystery
Hello! From my queue

General

  1. drum-hitnormal.wav is a lot longer than needed. Consider cutting off the end of the .wav
  2. It rather feels like you are forcing a skin sound set on a mapset than actually choosing sounds that fit the song
  3. Use of rhythm could be improved, there is a lot of 1/2 in this song, but also some 1/1 for example in the vocals. However you use those 1/1 sliders on the wrong spots, so they feel random and they often ignore the vocals, snares or other strong beats.
Monochromatic World

00:17:429 (1) - Consider making this 1/2, it's the only object really ignoring the guitar
00:21:016 (4) - Use 1/2 here as well. There isn't really a reason to use an extended slider here, as the hihat and the start of a voice is on that red tick
00:24:929 (4) - Replace by a 1/2 slider and a circle, you are ignoring the voice and the bass kick in the middle of the slider D:
00:25:581 (2) - And this by a circle followed by a 1/2 slider because of the same reason
00:27:538 (4) - This extended slider doesn't fit either :( please remove it
00:30:799 (3) - Why not use a 1/1 slider here instead of 00:31:125 (5) - . The long vocal note is starting here, so it would be better to switch the objects on the timeline
00:34:386 (1,2) - Using this would represent the vocals better. Again, you are using a long slider on a weird place because it doesn't really represent anything in the song. You did it perfectly here 00:31:777 (1,2,3) -
00:36:016 (2) - Try a circle followed by a slider. It will again represent the voice better
00:36:994 (1) - Since this is a strong beat, try moving it further away from the circle (preferable even further than 00:36:668 (4,5) - this distance
00:38:625 (2) - 2 strong vocal ticks but you only use a 1/1 slider :( Try to replace by a circle+1/2 slider
00:40:581 (4) - The slider-end is ignoring the downbeat, so it would be better to use a 1/2 slider and a circle
00:48:407 (4) - Make the spacing consistent here, no reason for this slider to be further away
00:48:733 (1) - The 1/1 slider doesn't fit, try to use 3 circles, it sounds like the best way to represent the voice to me
00:50:853 (4,5) - These offbeat sliders are unnecessary. Try this rhythm as it will represent both the vocals and the snare/downbeat better
00:51:750 (2,4) - Both these circles are overmapped and not present in the song. I recommend you to remove them as the actual stream in the song starts here 00:51:994 (5) -
00:53:951 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - The snare actually does this, and it's not a continues stream. Reconsider this part
00:56:559 (1) - 1/2 slider+circle would, again, represent the voice better
00:57:864 (1) - Same here
00:58:516 (3,4,1,2) - This use of rhythm is a lot more interesting and represents the vocals better than constantly using 1/2 sliders on the white ticks
01:00:472 (1,2,3,4,5) - The switch to red ticks here doesn't really make a lot of sense, and at the end of the measure you used a 1/1 slider 01:01:451 (5) - that ignores the vocals. Try using this pattern
01:04:222 (5) - The higher pitch vocal is a really strong beat, but using a return slider, so the slider return falls on that beat is really a bad idea. If you want to keep the 1/2, use a circle+slider
01:11:396 (4) - This circle doesn't need to be emphasized, so why is there a jump to it? Consider using the circle to create a diamond shape with 01:10:907 (1,2,3) - . There will be a little jump to 01:11:559 (5) - which makes more sense because of the beat and the voice
01:13:190 (3) - Also this extended slider doesn't fit, use a 1/2 slider
01:13:190 (3) - NC

I have some unfinished business, so this mod will have to do for now, and the suggestions I made will help out for the other diffs as well.
At first glance the other diffs looked okay but I'm concerned about Kanzaki's Hard. Also there is a spread gap between that hard and the normal, because the difficulty difference is really big there.

Good luck with the set!
Topic Starter
Lumael

A Mystery wrote:

Hello! From my queue

General

  1. drum-hitnormal.wav is a lot longer than needed. Consider cutting off the end of the .wav
  2. It rather feels like you are forcing a skin sound set on a mapset than actually choosing sounds that fit the song
  3. Use of rhythm could be improved, there is a lot of 1/2 in this song, but also some 1/1 for example in the vocals. However you use those 1/1 sliders on the wrong spots, so they feel random and they often ignore the vocals, snares or other strong beats.
Monochromatic World

00:17:429 (1) - Consider making this 1/2, it's the only object really ignoring the guitar
00:21:016 (4) - Use 1/2 here as well. There isn't really a reason to use an extended slider here, as the hihat and the start of a voice is on that red tick
00:24:929 (4) - Replace by a 1/2 slider and a circle, you are ignoring the voice and the bass kick in the middle of the slider D:
00:25:581 (2) - And this by a circle followed by a 1/2 slider because of the same reason
00:27:538 (4) - This extended slider doesn't fit either :( please remove it
00:30:799 (3) - Why not use a 1/1 slider here instead of 00:31:125 (5) - . The long vocal note is starting here, so it would be better to switch the objects on the timeline
00:34:386 (1,2) - Using this would represent the vocals better. Again, you are using a long slider on a weird place because it doesn't really represent anything in the song. You did it perfectly here 00:31:777 (1,2,3) -
00:36:016 (2) - Try a circle followed by a slider. It will again represent the voice better
00:36:994 (1) - Since this is a strong beat, try moving it further away from the circle (preferable even further than 00:36:668 (4,5) - this distance
00:38:625 (2) - 2 strong vocal ticks but you only use a 1/1 slider :( Try to replace by a circle+1/2 slider
00:40:581 (4) - The slider-end is ignoring the downbeat, so it would be better to use a 1/2 slider and a circle
00:48:407 (4) - Make the spacing consistent here, no reason for this slider to be further away i like it '-
00:48:733 (1) - The 1/1 slider doesn't fit, try to use 3 circles, it sounds like the best way to represent the voice to me
00:50:853 (4,5) - These offbeat sliders are unnecessary. Try this rhythm as it will represent both the vocals and the snare/downbeat better
00:51:750 (2,4) - Both these circles are overmapped and not present in the song. I recommend you to remove them as the actual stream in the song starts here 00:51:994 (5) -
00:53:951 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - The snare actually does this, and it's not a continues stream. Reconsider this part sorry but I don't think it sounds better at all
00:56:559 (1) - 1/2 slider+circle would, again, represent the voice better
00:57:864 (1) - Same here
00:58:516 (3,4,1,2) - This use of rhythm is a lot more interesting and represents the vocals better than constantly using 1/2 sliders on the white ticks
01:00:472 (1,2,3,4,5) - The switch to red ticks here doesn't really make a lot of sense, and at the end of the measure you used a 1/1 slider 01:01:451 (5) - that ignores the vocals. Try using this pattern
01:04:222 (5) - The higher pitch vocal is a really strong beat, but using a return slider, so the slider return falls on that beat is really a bad idea. If you want to keep the 1/2, use a circle+slider
01:11:396 (4) - This circle doesn't need to be emphasized, so why is there a jump to it? Consider using the circle to create a diamond shape with 01:10:907 (1,2,3) - . There will be a little jump to 01:11:559 (5) - which makes more sense because of the beat and the voice
01:13:190 (3) - Also this extended slider doesn't fit, use a 1/2 slider
01:13:190 (3) - NC why?

I have some unfinished business, so this mod will have to do for now, and the suggestions I made will help out for the other diffs as well.
At first glance the other diffs looked okay but I'm concerned about Kanzaki's Hard. Also there is a spread gap between that hard and the normal, because the difficulty difference is really big there.

Good luck with the set! thxxx!
This mod was reaaaaaaaally helpfull!!

No reply = fixed

thank you so much for this mod!
HabiHolic
[General]

Timing is offset better 503. now is small faster.

Fixed "Space's Hard" diff unicode title please

No Kuds

good Luck for ranked
Spayyce
Fixed unicode.

SPOILER
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290,54,20527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,128,20690,2,0,B|240:188|240:188|240:252,1,120
300,296,21179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,240,21342,6,0,P|372:184|440:156,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,232,21831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,304,21994,2,0,P|336:312|280:260,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,220,22483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,176,22646,2,0,P|132:172|104:184,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,232,22972,2,0,P|64:280|76:308,1,60
124,344,23299,2,0,P|172:348|200:336,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,296,23625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,220,23788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,156,23951,6,0,B|352:144|352:176|424:148,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,92,24440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,32,24603,2,0,B|384:48|372:76|372:76|348:44|308:36,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,20,25092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,64,25255,2,0,P|180:104|184:136,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,108,25581,2,0,P|261:137|257:167,1,60
200,220,25907,2,0,P|212:292|272:316,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,240,26396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,264,26559,6,0,P|352:228|336:192,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,132,26886,2,0,P|324:80|400:80,2,120
368,192,27701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,252,27864,2,0,P|416:304|340:304,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,276,28353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,220,28516,2,0,P|208:208|160:208,1,60
100,216,28842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,148,29005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,76,29168,6,0,P|124:72|156:80,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,88,29494,2,0,P|268:92|340:72,1,120
412,40,29983,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,112,30146,2,0,P|456:148|448:180,1,60
448,248,30472,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,304,30636,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,228,30799,2,0,P|324:228|272:104,1,180
348,144,31451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,68,31614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,44,31777,6,0,P|208:64|184:144,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,204,32266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,248,32429,2,0,P|60:224|40:184,1,120
120,168,32918,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,88,33081,2,0,P|132:76|152:80,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,112,33407,2,0,P|249:114|277:103,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,64,33733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,108,33896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,180,34059,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,256,34222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,328,34386,6,0,P|376:312|276:320,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,336,34875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,284,35038,2,0,P|168:228|144:156,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,92,35527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,56,35690,2,0,L|264:44,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,120,36016,2,0,L|352:144,1,60
300,204,36342,2,0,L|340:252,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,328,36668,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,324,36831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,280,36994,6,0,P|168:248|80:236,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,308,37483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,360,37646,2,0,P|236:348|268:280,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,240,38136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,296,38299,2,0,P|400:312|484:292,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,224,38788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,152,38951,2,0,B|432:136|392:156,1,60
372,220,39277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,208,39440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,184,39603,6,0,B|188:180|172:152|172:152|140:132|96:148,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,196,40092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,120,40255,2,0,P|60:76|144:64,1,120
196,32,40744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,60,40907,2,0,P|296:72|332:76,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,24,41233,2,0,P|404:80|376:136,1,120
328,192,41722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,268,41886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,328,42049,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,360,42212,6,0,P|136:372|72:324,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,264,42701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,200,42864,2,0,P|124:196|152:208,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,236,43190,2,0,P|240:243|270:238,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,196,43516,2,0,P|352:136|316:80,1,120
276,148,44005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,160,44168,2,0,P|184:184|180:224,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,292,44494,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,296,44657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,244,44820,6,0,P|48:184|88:124,2,120,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,308,45636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,340,45799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,308,45962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,232,46125,2,0,B|268:196|268:196|304:164|352:180,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,216,46614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,148,46777,2,0,P|420:96|340:72,1,120
296,36,47266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,68,47429,6,0,P|170:92|142:144,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,224,47918,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,296,48081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,328,48244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,288,48407,2,0,P|336:276|384:276,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,256,48733,2,0,B|440:196|440:196|416:132,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,68,49222,2,0,P|348:100|348:172,2,120
460,108,50038,6,0,B|448:168|448:168|448:244,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,292,50527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,228,50690,2,0,L|356:160,1,60
316,104,51016,2,0,P|284:100|248:108,1,60
184,128,51342,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,180,51505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,256,51668,2,0,P|112:296|132:320,1,60
176,256,51994,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,228,52157,2,0,B|276:220|304:228|304:228|320:220|320:220|360:260|424:232,1,180
392,80,55255,6,0,L|320:68,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,148,55581,2,0,L|276:148,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,224,55907,2,0,L|236:248,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,304,56233,2,0,L|248:344,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,304,56559,2,0,P|136:268|136:200,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,136,57049,2,0,P|200:172|200:240,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,304,57538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,328,57701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,296,57864,6,0,P|340:256|324:216,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,204,58190,2,0,P|256:244|272:284,2,60,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,128,58679,2,0,P|312:144|332:172,1,60
392,196,59005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,120,59168,2,0,P|332:72|260:56,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,56,59657,2,0,B|176:68|160:92|160:92|120:108|76:84,1,120
40,44,60146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,120,60309,2,0,P|20:156|32:184,1,60,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,248,60799,5,4,0:0:0:0:
236,288,60962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,288,61125,2,0,P|360:284|384:268,1,60
368,200,61451,2,0,P|364:168|372:136,1,60
396,68,61777,2,0,P|376:28|248:104,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,168,62592,2,0,P|276:208|272:236,1,60
200,204,62918,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,168,63081,6,0,B|120:200|128:224|128:224|120:232|120:232|136:264|128:300,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,332,63570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,268,63733,2,0,P|16:216|20:192,1,60
36,136,64059,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,100,64222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,116,64386,2,0,B|224:132|248:136|248:136|272:132|312:112,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,72,64875,5,0,0:0:0:0:
440,92,65038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,164,65201,1,2,0:0:0:0:
478,191,65282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
479,221,65364,1,2,0:0:0:0:
469,249,65445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
449,272,65527,1,2,0:0:0:0:
423,286,65608,1,2,0:0:0:0:
394,290,65690,5,4,0:0:0:0:
320,264,65853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,292,66016,2,0,P|204:292|172:276,1,60
224,216,66342,2,0,P|195:208|165:210,1,60
116,272,66668,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,220,66831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,144,66994,2,0,B|120:120|132:160|196:128,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,88,67483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,120,67646,2,0,P|336:168|340:264,1,120
284,288,68136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,308,68217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,296,68299,6,0,P|200:256|204:220,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,272,68625,2,0,P|124:232|136:196,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,136,68951,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,76,69114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,76,69277,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,132,69440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,144,69603,2,2,P|440:152|464:172,1,60
400,216,69929,2,0,P|348:208|324:188,1,60
312,132,70255,5,2,0:0:0:0:
252,184,70418,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,260,70581,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,328,70744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,352,70826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,360,70907,6,0,P|396:368|484:344,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,280,71396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,204,71559,2,0,P|416:196|328:220,1,120
288,264,72049,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,192,72212,2,0,P|224:136|272:80,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,152,73027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,80,73190,2,0,P|320:44|296:24,1,60
228,20,73516,6,0,P|184:52|152:124,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,172,74005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,232,74168,2,0,P|182:285|229:321,1,120
376,268,74820,2,0,B|392:228|372:192|372:192|352:152|372:116|372:116|392:76|364:32,1,240
292,16,75636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,72,75799,6,0,P|212:104|208:140,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,132,76125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76206,12,0,81342,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Lumael

HabiHolic wrote:

[General]

Timing is offset better 503. now is small faster.

Fixed "Space's Hard" diff unicode title please

No Kuds

good Luck for ranked
I'll try the offset later, thx!! Also thank you for your stars!!
Topic Starter
Lumael
Please update your beatmaps using the offset 503

About the hitsound I'm going to use Kanzaki's soft-hitnormal only. I'll use whistles and drum sample set but without custom hs
Topic Starter
Lumael
Ame, Kimi wo Tsurete is BACK!
Billy
Hello. From my queue.

General

The difficulty spread between AsaNe's Normal and Space's Hard may be a bit much. This may not be an issue, so ignore if you see fit.

While it is not an actual problem, the difficulty name Yoges's Rain is commonly used in CTB mapsets exclusively.

AR8 in the Insane difficulty may be a bit low due to this being 184 bpm. While the insane is of course only 3.7 stars, AR8.5 may suit it better.

Lastly, you may want to add each guest difficulty mapper's full username to your tags.

AsaNe's Normal

  1. 00:24:603 - A slight curve on this slider may look nicer, as it is would be more uniform with the majority of the other horizontal sliders in the difficulty.
  2. 00:25:255 - Same as above, a slight curve while remaining symmetrical with the slider before may be more aesthetically pleasing.
  3. 00:30:472 - The angle at which this slider meets the next is a bit awkward, it may look better if the slider is angled slightly more vertically.
  4. 00:44:168 - This may look better if you use the same angle of slider as 00:43:190 but mirrored, as it is currently slightly off.
  5. 01:02:266 - While the symmetry of sliders is nice, it may look a bit better if both the note following the first slider as well as the second slider are slightly lower. The current meeting point looks a bit sharp due to the second slider being a bit high.
This difficulty is otherwise good in my opinion, and the consistent spacing works well.

Space's Hard

  1. 00:03:081 - The sharpness of this slider seems a bit awkward to me because it is during a calm intro. I feel like a curve would be nicer for an intro like this.
  2. 00:06:994 - This slider is a bit oddly shaped. I feel like a curve of this type would be fine, but it is somewhat lopsided as it is.
  3. 00:18:570 - This isn't actually important, but if this note could line up with where 4 was in the same combo it would be more pleasing.
  4. 00:23:788 - This note being directly above 8 looks a bit odd to me, a slight angle may look better. That, or 8 could be at a slightly different spot.
  5. 00:24:603 - This slider's shape is a bit weird, it may look nicer if it didn't have such an acute angle.
  6. 01:09:603 - You may want to split this in to a new combo, as 13 notes in a single combo is somewhat uncommon in a hard.
Some of the sliders in this difficulty have some interesting shapes, although it is done in such a way that it works out nicely. You may want to be somewhat more consistent with where you use certain slider shapes, but as it is, it is still nice to play overall.

As for both insanes, they both overall play decently. There is good flow to both, and the only word of advice I can give for both is to watch for slider overlaps. They are not hugely present in these difficulties, but there are spots where future modifications to the mapset may cause problems with this. Overall nice map set though.
Topic Starter
Lumael

Obedear wrote:

Hello. From my queue.

General

The difficulty spread between AsaNe's Normal and Space's Hard may be a bit much. This may not be an issue, so ignore if you see fit. I guess it isn't since there are a lot of ranked maps with bigger gaps

While it is not an actual problem, the difficulty name Yoges's Rain is commonly used in CTB mapsets exclusively. Already known issue, we're thinking on a new name :)

AR8 in the Insane difficulty may be a bit low due to this being 184 bpm. While the insane is of course only 3.7 stars, AR8.5 may suit it better. Changed to 8.5

Lastly, you may want to add each guest difficulty mapper's full username to your tags. I didn't get here since I think their full names are on the tags? I didn't add ][ to Space's name because it understands as 3 tags.

As for both insanes, they both overall play decently. There is good flow to both, and the only word of advice I can give for both is to watch for slider overlaps. They are not hugely present in these difficulties, but there are spots where future modifications to the mapset may cause problems with this. Overall nice map set though. Thx ^^ I'll look for overlaps though
Thanks for mod!
Topic Starter
Lumael
nvm I'm dumb, Yoges sorry xD going to add u to tags
Synpoo
[Space's Hard]
00:11:396 (2) - this should start on the white tick
00:14:005 (2) - ^
00:26:559 (1) - feels awkward as a 1/2 slider, i think it plays nicer as a 1/1, like the rest of the sliders that match the vocals in this verse
01:00:309 (8) - why is there a pause after this? the song is at it's strongest right now and doesn't call for a pause, and this slider should start on the white tick of the next measure

[Insane]
  1. This diff could be harder since it's nearly the same sr as the hard but nowhere close to yoges' diff, perhaps around 4.10 would make for a better spread
  2. HP should be at least 6 since the hard has HP6 yet this is supposed to be a harder diff but for no reason the HP is lower
  3. If this diffs sr does go up I'd like to see OD7 on it
[Yoges' Rain]
Might wanna check the metadata (title issue, not sure if i'm the only one who's seeing it as this
00:56:886 (6,7) - bigger spacing here, the pattern builds up to this vocal but the jump here is smaller than the rest which flows awkwardly
00:58:842 (4,5) - slider should start where 4 is
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DeletedUser_3821342

Synpoo wrote:

[Yoges' Rain]
Might wanna check the metadata (title issue, not sure if i'm the only one who's seeing it as this
00:56:886 (6,7) - bigger spacing here, the pattern builds up to this vocal but the jump here is smaller than the rest which flows awkwardly Okie
00:58:842 (4,5) - slider should start where 4 is Nope. I have it mapped so there's a click for every syllable during the fast parts. The sliders are there for the longer single syllables
Topic Starter
Lumael
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Mekki

Lumael wrote:

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Yay :)
HappyRocket88
Isn't the gap between the Hard and the Insane a bit high?
Mekki

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Isn't the gap between the Hard and the Insane a bit high?

I think he is making a 4 stars Insane :P
Topic Starter
Lumael
I will work on this soon, I just don't have time for atm, I will search for a light insane or just make it myself
Topic Starter
Lumael
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Added a Light Insane and an Extra
Cosmolade
Hello
M4M for your queue
sorry the delay

only hard diffs
(I will try, I suck at modding extras)
and holy, all the mapset is really well mapped o3o)/
Sorry if I'm not very helpful...

[Light Insane]
  1. 00:33:578 (2) - You make a pattern with more DS before with the same linetime, so why you make less spacing here? I suggest move the slider more to the right, to make the sliders don't touch each others, and Ctrl+G (2)
  2. 00:52:328 (9) - Slider here? to follow the vocals
  3. 00:53:959 (1,2,3,4) - Move the stream more to the right, to make it visible, if the stream is behind the slidertail, is really difficult to read when I suppose to click D:
[Natsuny's Insane]
  1. 01:01:785 (1,3) - Maybe Ctrl+G (1) and (3) separately, to make more flow here
[Void Genome]
  1. 00:23:959 (1,3) - Maybe make sliderforms to this two? It feels weird if they are rigid sliders ~
  2. 00:31:785 (1,3) - ^
  3. 00:37:002 (1,3) - ^
  4. 00:46:622 (4,5) - Suggest: yup
    The only thing I cant point in this diff are the monotonous sliders, dont make them only a rect line! You can make them pointy, curvy, etc so many types o vo)/
That'a all
Sorry, short mod
All are already fine for me =w=)b
GL!
Topic Starter
Lumael

Cosmolade wrote:

Hello
M4M for your queue
sorry the delay

only hard diffs
(I will try, I suck at modding extras)
and holy, all the mapset is really well mapped o3o)/
Sorry if I'm not very helpful...

[Light Insane]
  1. 00:33:578 (2) - You make a pattern with more DS before with the same linetime, so why you make less spacing here? I suggest move the slider more to the right, to make the sliders don't touch each others, and Ctrl+G (2) I'm using DS here :3 and the overlap is intentional
  2. 00:52:328 (9) - Slider here? to follow the vocals It's a good idea but I want to keep consistency between my difficulties and none of them have vocals mapped here
  3. 00:53:959 (1,2,3,4) - Move the stream more to the right, to make it visible, if the stream is behind the slidertail, is really difficult to read when I suppose to click D: Sure
[Natsuny's Insane]
  1. 01:01:785 (1,3) - Maybe Ctrl+G (1) and (3) separately, to make more flow here
[Void Genome]
  1. 00:23:959 (1,3) - Maybe make sliderforms to this two? It feels weird if they are rigid sliders ~
  2. 00:31:785 (1,3) - ^
  3. 00:37:002 (1,3) - ^

    It's kind of the essence of my style, making twin sliders xD
  4. 00:46:622 (4,5) - Suggest: yup I don't like to rotate startes too much, I think that low angles makes the pattern cleaner xD
    The only thing I cant point in this diff are the monotonous sliders, dont make them only a rect line! You can make them pointy, curvy, etc so many types o vo)/ I think the cool part of my mapping is the geometry since I don't like to abuse of slider shapes, I prefer to maintain a clear one xD
That'a all
Sorry, short mod
All are already fine for me =w=)b
GL!
Thanks! I also changed the hitsounding a bit since it was too noise on the kiai xd
Kyouren
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