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Nishikino Maki(CV.Pile) - Daring!!

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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
hi, i made a diff thi song (already finished)
can you add my diff to your map so i don't have to upload it myself?

dl -> http://puu.sh/cwdtX/67b2fcf3ff.rar

you should set the offset to 490 though, spinner is before red line 0.0
Topic Starter
Hinsvar
Unfortunately, I don't want to add more diffs here. Your diff is pretty okay, but I'm not sure about its rankability lol

Archived the diff with the custom hitsound in my laptop though.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
it's ok, then i ask someone else to upload it lol
lsc930625

examination wrote:

no kds

title should be Daring!!

BTW still mapping this?
Actually, the name is Daring!! in Love Live! School Idol Festival (official mobile phone game)
But it is said that is Darling!! in CD and is an official misspelling from the record company.
Ciyus Miapah
Ujimatsu Chiya
[Passion]
  1. 00:38:927 (4) - make same y - coordinate better to design.
  2. 00:41:505 (3) - change normal whistle better for me. ~ㅅ~
  3. 00:53:927 (4) - start 00:53:810 (3) - better I think. I can herad sound 00:53:868 here.
  4. 01:49:239 (1) - Is not end point 01:49:434 (2) here? ( 1/12 beat )
  5. 01:52:286 (2) - Why not change in symmetry?
  6. 02:00:489 (2) - same reson with 00:53:927 (4) , start 02:00:372 better I think
  7. 02:50:294 ~ 02:51:934 (1) - remove break like other diffs.
  8. 03:25:333 (2) - change a circle 03:25:333 (2) , and add 1/12 beat reverse slider 03:25:489 > 03:25:606 > 03:25:723
[Xinely's Hard]
  1. 00:06:115 (1) - um.. any reason for increase DS?
  2. 00:07:872 (6) - match DS prev , next better.
  3. 00:09:279 (3) - ^
  4. 01:40:216 (5) - ^
  5. 01:47:481 (4) - ^
  6. 01:45:958 (5) - cheak blanket
  7. 01:49:591 - add note?
  8. 03:18:653 (2) - match DS prev , next better.
GL o/
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

eINess wrote:

[Passion]
  1. 00:38:927 (4) - make same y - coordinate better to design. There won't be really any difference, I think?
  2. 00:41:505 (3) - change normal whistle better for me. ~ㅅ~ Nope; the instrument here is quite electro-ish, and a soft whistle would be nicer.
  3. 00:53:927 (4) - start 00:53:810 (3) - better I think. I can herad sound 00:53:868 here. I'm doing this to simplify the rhythm.
  4. 01:49:239 (1) - Is not end point 01:49:434 (2) here? ( 1/12 beat ) There is actually something on the blue tick.
  5. 01:52:286 (2) - Why not change in symmetry? Flows better the current way.
  6. 02:00:489 (2) - same reson with 00:53:927 (4) , start 02:00:372 better I think Same.
  7. 02:50:294 ~ 02:51:934 (1) - remove break like other diffs. Sure.
  8. 03:25:333 (2) - change a circle 03:25:333 (2) , and add 1/12 beat reverse slider 03:25:489 > 03:25:606 > 03:25:723Did something different.
Thanks!
Sonnyc
Reply eINess' mod.

Easy:

-- Remove duplicate timeline at 00:55:802 for all of your diffs.

00:19:240 (1,1) - Spacing could be improved.
01:25:802 (1) - The start and the end being a drum sampleset was a little bad to feel the audability of the object. Consider adding some additional hitsounds.
01:37:052 (3,4) - Say hello to the distance please.
02:59:083 (4,1) - ^

Normal:

01:25:802 (1,3) - Same opinion with Easy.
02:26:739 (6,1) - Distance can be maintained.

Insane:

01:55:216 (7,8) - Starting (8) 1/4 earlier and end where it ends now fits the song better.

The gap with Normal and Hard is big. The rhythms are actually fine and balanced, but the jumps of Hard are not recommended which refrains from me letting this map go forward. Contact another BN who thinks this map is fine to go, or map an [Advanced] difficulty to fill that gap. Bye~
Xinely

eINess wrote:

[Xinely's Hard]
  1. 00:06:115 (1) - um.. any reason for increase DS? normal spacing here o.o
  2. 00:07:872 (6) - match DS prev , next better.
  3. 00:09:279 (3) - ^
  4. 01:40:216 (5) - ^
  5. 01:47:481 (4) - ^ they are consistent :C
  6. 01:45:958 (5) - cheak blanket
  7. 01:49:591 - add note? kinda weird. blame vocal orz
  8. 03:18:653 (2) - match DS prev , next better. same
GL o/
gonna nerf tomorrow maybe
Sonnyc
Not sure a nerf will work imo x.x Well maybe for other BNs :3
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

Sonnyc wrote:

Reply eINess' mod.

Easy:

-- Remove duplicate timeline at 00:55:802 for all of your diffs. Done.

00:19:240 (1,1) - Spacing could be improved. Fixed.
01:25:802 (1) - The start and the end being a drum sampleset was a little bad to feel the audability of the object. Consider adding some additional hitsounds. Done.
01:37:052 (3,4) - Say hello to the distance please.
02:59:083 (4,1) - ^ Fixed both.

Normal:

01:25:802 (1,3) - Same opinion with Easy. Done.
02:26:739 (6,1) - Distance can be maintained. ^

Insane:

01:55:216 (7,8) - Starting (8) 1/4 earlier and end where it ends now fits the song better. Well I can't really leave 01:55:333 unmapped now, do I? lol

The gap with Normal and Hard is big. The rhythms are actually fine and balanced, but the jumps of Hard are not recommended which refrains from me letting this map go forward. Contact another BN who thinks this map is fine to go, or map an [Advanced] difficulty to fill that gap. Bye~
Thanks!
Kyle Y
<3 Maki
I am not experienced in modding/mapping,
maybe the modding below cannot help you.
And sorry about my laziness on modding
[Easy]
SPOILER
00:13:615 (3) - blanket
02:23:927 (1) - ^
00:54:865 (3) - maybe place at 00:54:630 - ?
00:59:552 (1,2) - same as 00:55:802 (1,2,3) -
01:07:989 (2) - ^
01:14:552 (1,2) - I think better to keep a pattern on the same melody for easy diff?
01:35:177 (1) - better to stack 01:32:833 (2) -
01:40:333 (2) - stack 01:38:458 (4) - becasue stack to some other notes make the map more cleaner
01:44:083 (2,3) - same as 01:51:583 (2) -

[Normal]
SPOILER
00:22:052 (2) - Blanket
01:52:989 (5) - maybe slider?
03:23:927 (3) - nc (?)

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:10:802 (3) - blanket
00:14:786 (5) - stack 00:13:615 (1) -
00:20:646 (5) - stack 00:19:943 (2) -
00:23:927 (4) - blanket with 00:23:458 (2) -
00:27:677 (4) - blanket with 00:27:208 (2) -
00:46:427 (4) - blanket
01:09:161 (2,4) - blanket with 01:09:630 (3) -
01:19:239 (4) - blanket
01:20:880 (2) - stack 01:19:239 (4) -
01:22:403 (2) - extent to 01:22:755 - and use circle at 01:22:872 -
01:26:739 (4) - just see if it can stack 01:25:333 (4) -
01:26:036 (2,5,6,7) - this 2 is same melody, better to use some note, either 3 circles or reversed slider
01:30:841 (2) - at 01:30:723 -
01:31:192 (3) - at 01:30:958 -
01:57:208 (6) - stack 01:55:802 (1) -
02:07:286 (2) - blanket
02:11:270 (3,4,5,6) - I think not good enough, maybe better 02:11:270 (3,6) - is a reflection
02:18:770 (3,4,5) - better blanket each other
02:23:927 (1) - blanket (just see if possible?)
02:27:442 (4) - move to (241,299) to fix blanket
02:48:302 (1) - better to stack 02:46:427 (1) - , but the ds change - -'
02:54:161 (2) - stack 02:52:989 (4) -
03:09:395 (3,4,5) - 5 not blanket with 3 and 4
03:15:489 (4) - can stack 03:14:317 (6) - ?

[Passion]
SPOILER
02:42:208 (6) - stack on 02:40:684 (5) -
02:43:145 (2) - why 1/16 beat
02:49:708 (3) - maybe reverse slider?
02:55:333 (1,2,3,4) - slider?
[ Setsuna ]
DONT WORRY, DONT WORRY
pishifat
hi this my second mod ever !!!!! sry if it bad :( :( :(

[general]
  1. could you not letterbox during breaks cuz you're almost cutting off face thx
  2. nice storyboard file
[insane]
  1. 00:00:490 (1) - softsmaplestetpls
  2. 00:19:240 (1) - would be cool to lower sv for these relief parts. seems weird to have it same speed as other stuff when way less intense music to back it
  3. 01:37:052 (1,2) - same thing as easy probably with sliderslide. softsampleset on 2 would also be good. also also xinely's diff yeaeyeyeay
  4. 01:56:036 (2,3) - what year do you think this is 1/4 sliders havent been spaced like this in 30 years
  5. 02:31:427 (1) - idk how much it would break but slightly lower sv for this section would also make sense
  6. 03:20:059 (3) - unlike the other blue tick 1/4 sliders this one just doesnt work cuz nothing worth mapping on blue tick compared to whtie
[hard]
  1. 00:30:255 (5,6,1) - nice triple on silence
  2. 01:30:489 (1,2,3) - gonna be confusing to interpret rhythm since you're ignoring the vocals that you were exclusively following right before this. using a 3/4 reverse slider would be easier to interpret since it plays itself pretty much or following vocals would workkkk
  3. 01:38:458 (3,1,2) - stacking makes your linear 01:37:989 (1,2,3) - look like lol
  4. 01:47:950 (6) - of all the 1/4 sliders on blue ticks this one is the wrost since it's got almost nothing on the head and something on the tail
[normal]
  1. 00:17:365 (3,5) - s0 cl0se
  2. 00:22:990 (3,4) - a rhythm like this is nice cuz you can actually click on the strong thing. right now 4 has stronger sound on tail when avoiding is ez
  3. 00:43:615 (1,2) - should probably use the same rhythm as 01:42:677 (1) - 01:50:177 (1) - 00:36:115 (1) - . 3/4 stuff stands out so skipping it where it's expected would too
  4. 01:12:677 (4,5) - overlaps caused by automatic stacking are pretty lame.
[easy]
  1. 00:32:365 (1) - 00:47:365 (1) - 00:49:240 (2) - 00:59:552 (1,2) - 01:07:989 (2) - 01:18:302 (1) - 01:55:802 (3) - 02:05:177 (1) - 02:10:802 (3) - 02:20:177 (1) - 02:27:677 (1) - 02:55:802 (1) - 03:01:427 (3) - 03:07:052 (1,2) - 03:14:552 (1) - all of these make no sense. it's like you're forcing variety where the song doesnt support it. all of these reverses are less impacting than the surrounding white ticks, eespecially the ones where it literally repeats the same vocals 2 beats in a row like 02:05:177 (1) -
  2. 01:37:052 (3) - would work better as a 1/1 slider followed by a gap to show that music is stopping here. hey look normal did something like that nice. also this sliderslide is so gross when there's no background sound to cover it up so silencing that would be cooooool
  3. 00:43:615 (1,2) - if you plan on keeping 00:36:115 (1) - as its current rhythm (which is one of the few 3/2 reverse sliders that work), you shoudl probably do the same here cuz consistency of emphasizing vocals vs insrumeptmsal ok do it
these combo colors are eye death
Peachtrees
M4-2+2M

c:

  • Easy
  1. 00:19:240 (1) - could perhaps give this a little bump to go along with the clap on the white tick here like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3412719
  2. 00:32:365 (1) - uhh I think the little bump here would go along much better if moved to the white tick instead
  3. 00:59:552 (1) - both white ticks here feels a lot stronger (+ I just feel like following vocals here is the most intuitive thing to do for a beginner since that is what stands out the most)
  4. 01:01:427 (2,2) - do you think it is possible to avoid having these overlap?
  5. 02:05:177 (1) - 00:59:552 (1) - similar story for this one. I think phishi pointed like a bunch of these out but I feel like these really are the worst offenders (well that might be me anyways)
  6. 02:55:802 (1) - same story
  7. 03:20:645 (4) - could move this down and to the left a bit, makes catching the next slider smoother

    Normal
  8. 00:18:302 (5,6) - use 1.1 for these too?
  9. 00:34:240 (4,5,6) - both vocals and the weird eletronical sound here land on the blue tick, so the current rythm is kinda skipping that. Could just use a 3/4 repeat here imo
  10. 00:42:677 (5) - honestly don't really see a reason for this repeat here. The sound that is being skipped on the white tick feels ALOT stronger than whatever sound is being mapped right now. Would probably just make this a 1/1
  11. 01:30:489 (1) - missing a clap here? had on in the Easy Diff >w<
  12. 02:18:302 (4,5,6,7) - would probably use something that is similar to 01:12:677 (4,5,6) - rythm wise. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3412930 for example feels a lot more intuitive

    Xinely's Hard
  13. 00:51:115 (1) - might just be me, but I feel like a soft finish hears goes along a bit bincer with the 'swoosh' sound in the song. Also helps emphasizing the new track
  14. 01:12:911 (2,3) - plays a little bit clunky I think, since in order to catch this properly you'd have to move up a bit and then down instead of being able to catch this in one swift motion
  15. 01:18:302 (1,2) - rythm would feel more intuitive if you swapped these I think
  16. 01:39:864 (4,5,6) - is using uneven spacing here intentional? and if yes, is this REALLY a good thing to do in a Hard Diff?
  17. 03:07:520 (2,5) - if this isn't too much of a bother, try avoiding this tiny overlap?:c

    Passion
  18. 00:50:880 (5,1) - was kind expecting something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413013 (basically just the slider ctrl+g and slightly re-arranged. Larger drop felt like it went along nicely with the new track. Would have to re-arrange the following slider though soo ehh if you're happy with how this currently looks don't bother
  19. 02:04:708 (1,2,1) - could so something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413050 which allows for more emphasize on the downbeat, which works really well here with the previous stream working as a build-up and introducing the player to 1/4 rythm

    lovely Diff, not much for me to find c:

    blergh mod ended up being kinda sucky

    Good luck!
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

Kyle Y wrote:

<3 Maki
I am not experienced in modding/mapping,
maybe the modding below cannot help you.
And sorry about my laziness on modding
[Easy]
SPOILER
00:13:615 (3) - blanket I hope it's okay now.
02:23:927 (1) - ^ ^
00:54:865 (3) - maybe place at 00:54:630 - ? A constant rhythm will be easier to play here.
00:59:552 (1,2) - same as 00:55:802 (1,2,3) - Fixed.
01:07:989 (2) - ^ ^
01:14:552 (1,2) - I think better to keep a pattern on the same melody for easy diff? Sure.
01:35:177 (1) - better to stack 01:32:833 (2) - Isn't visible while playing.
01:40:333 (2) - stack 01:38:458 (4) - becasue stack to some other notes make the map more cleaner ^
01:44:083 (2,3) - same as 01:51:583 (2) - Did the oppoiste.

[Normal]
SPOILER
00:22:052 (2) - Blanket This looks ok to me and can't be seen in-game anyway.
01:52:989 (5) - maybe slider? Sure.
03:23:927 (3) - nc (?) No need for it; gotta keep the consistency.

[Passion]
SPOILER
02:42:208 (6) - stack on 02:40:684 (5) - Not changing anything while playing.
02:43:145 (2) - why 1/16 beat Because it does fit with the instrument here.
02:49:708 (3) - maybe reverse slider? Nope; a slider goes with the music best.
02:55:333 (1,2,3,4) - slider? Why?

pishifat wrote:

hi this my second mod ever !!!!! sry if it bad :( :( :( ye sure

[general]
  1. could you not letterbox during breaks cuz you're almost cutting off face thx is that actually a valid reason to turn off

    but ye sure
  2. nice storyboard file ikr
[insane]
  1. 00:00:490 (1) - softsmaplestetpls dank
  2. 00:19:240 (1) - would be cool to lower sv for these relief parts. seems weird to have it same speed as other stuff when way less intense music to back it sure
  3. 01:37:052 (1,2) - same thing as easy probably with sliderslide. softsampleset on 2 would also be good. also also xinely's diff yeaeyeyeay sure
  4. 01:56:036 (2,3) - what year do you think this is 1/4 sliders havent been spaced like this in 30 years because why not

    to be serious I don't think this will be problematic at all
  5. 02:31:427 (1) - idk how much it would break but slightly lower sv for this section would also make sense I don't think so. The intensity here is still quite high, and 1x supports mapping here better.
  6. 03:20:059 (3) - unlike the other blue tick 1/4 sliders this one just doesnt work cuz nothing worth mapping on blue tick compared to whtie Changed to circles.
[normal]
  1. 00:17:365 (3,5) - s0 cl0se dam
  2. 00:22:990 (3,4) - a rhythm like this is nice cuz you can actually click on the strong thing. right now 4 has stronger sound on tail when avoiding is ez Oh yep sure.
  3. 00:43:615 (1,2) - should probably use the same rhythm as 01:42:677 (1) - 01:50:177 (1) - 00:36:115 (1) - . 3/4 stuff stands out so skipping it where it's expected would too sure
  4. 01:12:677 (4,5) - overlaps caused by automatic stacking are pretty lame. fixed
[easy]
  1. 00:32:365 (1) - 00:47:365 (1) - 00:49:240 (2) - 00:59:552 (1,2) - 01:07:989 (2) - 01:18:302 (1) - 01:55:802 (3) - 02:05:177 (1) - 02:10:802 (3) - 02:20:177 (1) - 02:27:677 (1) - 02:55:802 (1) - 03:01:427 (3) - 03:07:052 (1,2) - 03:14:552 (1) - all of these make no sense. it's like you're forcing variety where the song doesnt support it. all of these reverses are less impacting than the surrounding white ticks, eespecially the ones where it literally repeats the same vocals 2 beats in a row like 02:05:177 (1) - I think I ended up remapping like 30% of the diff. Also, fixed everything except the second slider because I'm still sure it really fits with the instruments here.
  2. 01:37:052 (3) - would work better as a 1/1 slider followed by a gap to show that music is stopping here. hey look normal did something like that nice. also this sliderslide is so gross when there's no background sound to cover it up so silencing that would be cooooool Sure.
  3. 00:43:615 (1,2) - if you plan on keeping 00:36:115 (1) - as its current rhythm (which is one of the few 3/2 reverse sliders that work), you shoudl probably do the same here cuz consistency of emphasizing vocals vs insrumeptmsal ok do it Done.
these combo colors are eye death made them darker

Peachtrees wrote:

M4-2+2M

c:

  • Easy
  1. 00:19:240 (1) - could perhaps give this a little bump to go along with the clap on the white tick here like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3412719 Pretty sure there's nothing you can emphasize with that bump...
  2. 00:32:365 (1) - uhh I think the little bump here would go along much better if moved to the white tick instead I remapped this part.
  3. 00:59:552 (1) - both white ticks here feels a lot stronger (+ I just feel like following vocals here is the most intuitive thing to do for a beginner since that is what stands out the most) Fixed.
  4. 01:01:427 (2,2) - do you think it is possible to avoid having these overlap? Remapped this part.
  5. 02:05:177 (1) - 00:59:552 (1) - similar story for this one. I think phishi pointed like a bunch of these out but I feel like these really are the worst offenders (well that might be me anyways) Fixed stuff like this.
  6. 02:55:802 (1) - same story ^
  7. 03:20:645 (4) - could move this down and to the left a bit, makes catching the next slider smoother Remapped this part, basically.

    Normal
  8. 00:18:302 (5,6) - use 1.1 for these too? oh yeah right
  9. 00:34:240 (4,5,6) - both vocals and the weird eletronical sound here land on the blue tick, so the current rythm is kinda skipping that. Could just use a 3/4 repeat here imo A 3/4 slider feels too... odd here? I don't know; I can't find the right word for it. But it just feels really, really weird.
  10. 00:42:677 (5) - honestly don't really see a reason for this repeat here. The sound that is being skipped on the white tick feels ALOT stronger than whatever sound is being mapped right now. Would probably just make this a 1/1 Changed.
  11. 01:30:489 (1) - missing a clap here? had on in the Easy Diff >w< Added.
  12. 02:18:302 (4,5,6,7) - would probably use something that is similar to 01:12:677 (4,5,6) - rythm wise. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3412930 for example feels a lot more intuitive This is... different, I suppose? You can't really map them with the same rhythm.

    Passion
  13. 00:50:880 (5,1) - was kind expecting something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413013 (basically just the slider ctrl+g and slightly re-arranged. Larger drop felt like it went along nicely with the new track. Would have to re-arrange the following slider though soo ehh if you're happy with how this currently looks don't bother Sure; I made it more rotated clockwise, though.
  14. 02:04:708 (1,2,1) - could so something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413050 which allows for more emphasize on the downbeat, which works really well here with the previous stream working as a build-up and introducing the player to 1/4 rythm Ah okay.

    lovely Diff, not much for me to find c:

    blergh mod ended up being kinda sucky

    Good luck!
Thanks guys!

I'll make the letterbox and color consistent in all diffs once Xinely has her diff in.
Xinely
fixed all, rip old diff

SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Darling!!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50880
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 4240,21115,36115,55802,70802,85802,91427,102677,121427,136427,151427,166427,172052,187052,202052
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Daring!!
TitleUnicode:Daring!!
Artist:Nishikino Maki(CV.Pile)
ArtistUnicode:西木野真姫(CV.Pile)
Creator:Hinsvar
Version:Xinely's Hard
Source:ラブライブ!School idol project
Tags:Love Live! Hori Eriko Erico 絵梨子 堀 soldier game Love Live Duo Single 4 Darling!! Xinely Best Album Best Live Collection
BeatmapID:458574
BeatmapSetID:186856

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5.5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.3
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Maki.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,151627,165573
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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169239,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
172052,-100,4,1,0,80,0,1
202052,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,51,153
Combo2 : 255,32,255
Combo3 : 234,0,0
Combo4 : 196,112,214

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508,132,202052,5,0,0:0:0:0:
356,168,202403,2,0,L|352:92,1,45,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,228,202872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,228,202989,2,0,P|164:252|112:208,1,135,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,196,203458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,68,203927,6,0,P|324:40|404:84,1,135,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,84,204395,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,244,204747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,244,204864,2,0,P|296:260|252:220,1,135,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,208,205333,1,8,0:0:0:0:
Shurelia
おっす!やったよ!
from my queue


~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~


[General]
- BG issue that already being discussed with the mapper.
- Remove .osb file since you seems didn't using any SB or there is?

[Easy]
  1. 01:37:052 (3) - The slider-slider's sound at here is quite disturbing. Should be silenced.
  2. 01:55:333 (2) - Distance issue at here.

[Normal]
  1. 00:26:036 (3) - Move this a bit upper left to remove the overlap.
  2. 03:21:348 - only a personal opinion but how about to add an object at here since i feel like i want to click something at here.

[Xinely's Hard]
  1. 02:31:427 (5) - Add a finish and use Normal additions at here? Cocok sepertinya...

[Passion]
  1. 00:09:865 (1,2) - These two could make a confusion with 00:10:802 (4,5,6) - since it has a same look but different play. Would suggest to unstack (1).

Mmh, already a good map for me.
That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!
Owntrolf
  • Easy

    Yu so risuki with deesu row notsu, wa0 almosuto outosaidu sukureen 02:59:552 (1) - the level of daring, over9000

    00:15:490 (1,2) - I must complain about blankets even the 1 pixel ones
    00:34:240 (3) - Maybe add a curve to this to flow better? 00:35:646 (4) - This sounds really quiet to me
    00:51:115 (1,2) - Why not move these closer to the center so you can use symmetry (you might need to move 00:49:240 (2,3) - to match it too
    01:01:427 (3) - Change to 1/1 repeat and then add a circle after to match the vocals better?
    01:08:927 (3) - Why not reuse the same point as 01:06:583 (4) - for the perfect triangle:> Illuminati Confirmed
    01:44:083 (2,3) - Why not move the two to make it look nicer by having a good smiley face01:48:302 (3,4,1) - Move all this 1 px to the right for perfect symmetry


  • Normal

    00:17:365 (3,5) - HOW DARE 3 TOUCH 5
    00:24:865 (1,3) - HOW DARE 1 TOUCH 3
    01:03:302 (1,2,3) - Triangle ocd active
    01:36:114 (2,3) - #blankets circles are cold


  • Xinely's Hard

    00:19:943 (2,3,4) - Triangle Ocd
    00:27:208 (2) - Maybe move this so its blanketed by 4 and inbetween the startpoint of 3 and 4 like this 00:45:958 (2,3) - Maybe move 3 closer so that the ds between it is 0.9 to match the distance of lpurple4,2
    00:47:833 (2) - Maybe center this on top of the tick and rotate it a bit to make the flow from 1 smoother
    00:59:552 (1,2) - Why not use the same pattern as 01:00:489 (3,4,5) - because theres a sound on the white tick of 2
    01:03:302 (1,2,3) - This plays weird for me :\
    01:11:739 (3,4,5) - Maybe center this inbetween 5 and 4 by moving it to x260 y179
    01:49:239 (4) - I find that 1/4 slider and a circle fits better


I like how passionate isnt as daring wit things almost falling off the screen like in easy
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

Shurelia wrote:

おっす!やったよ!
from my queue


~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~


[General]
- BG issue that already being discussed with the mapper. Probably reverting later.
- Remove .osb file since you seems didn't using any SB or there is? Deleted.

[Easy]
  1. 01:37:052 (3) - The slider-slider's sound at here is quite disturbing. Should be silenced. ok
  2. 01:55:333 (2) - Distance issue at here. RIP

[Normal]
  1. 00:26:036 (3) - Move this a bit upper left to remove the overlap. ok
  2. 03:21:348 - only a personal opinion but how about to add an object at here since i feel like i want to click something at here. I don't feel the need to do so...

[Passion]
  1. 00:09:865 (1,2) - These two could make a confusion with 00:10:802 (4,5,6) - since it has a same look but different play. Would suggest to unstack (1). Pretty sure they look quite different...

Mmh, already a good map for me.
That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!

Owntrolf wrote:

  • Easy

    Yu so risuki with deesu row notsu, wa0 almosuto outosaidu sukureen 02:59:552 (1) - the level of daring, over9000 moved

    00:15:490 (1,2) - I must complain about blankets even the 1 pixel ones pls
    00:34:240 (3) - Maybe add a curve to this to flow better? ok
    00:35:646 (4) - This sounds really quiet to me Removed.
    00:51:115 (1,2) - Why not move these closer to the center so you can use symmetry (you might need to move 00:49:240 (2,3) - to match it too I don't really think it's needed...
    01:01:427 (3) - Change to 1/1 repeat and then add a circle after to match the vocals better? ok
    01:08:927 (3) - Why not reuse the same point as 01:06:583 (4) - for the perfect triangle:> Illuminati Confirmed I think I... changed this part a little bit.
    01:44:083 (2,3) - Why not move the two to make it look nicer by having a good smiley face pls
    01:48:302 (3,4,1) - Move all this 1 px to the right for perfect symmetry no need; won't be noticeable in-game anyway


  • Normal

    00:17:365 (3,5) - HOW DARE 3 TOUCH 5 fixed
    00:24:865 (1,3) - HOW DARE 1 TOUCH 3 ^
    01:03:302 (1,2,3) - Triangle ocd active ^
    01:36:114 (2,3) - #blankets circles are cold ok...


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I like how passionate isnt as daring wit things almost falling off the screen like in easy
Thanks guys!
F D Flourite
Hi, m4m from ur queue
[General]
  1. Fine
[Passion]
  1. 00:07:990 (1,2) - The flow here is not good. Probably because 1 is a slider and they are not stacked together so Approaching circle is hard to determine the rhythm.
  2. 00:08:927 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:24:396 (1,1) - A bit confused about the NC because It seems that only for emphasizing a heavy beat doesn't really need an NC. Besides, if you try to follow the music (instead of the beat), use normal-hitwhistle at 00:24:865 (1) - would be better because soft-hitwhistle can hardly be heard, especially when playing. Otherwise, why did you set normal-hitwhistle at 00:24:396 (1) - ?
  4. 01:45:958 (1,1) - ^
  5. 00:28:615 (1) - ^
  6. 00:27:208 (2,3,4) - Don't use 1/4 here. It starts from the white line and ends at the red line, which makes less sense than the triplets start from the red line. What's more, the music doesn't show this.
  7. 00:42:208 (2,3,4) - ^ Move 00:42:325 (3) - to 00:42:091 - and the rhythm will be much better.
  8. 01:09:864 (4,5,6) - ^
  9. 02:58:614 (4,5,6) - ^
  10. 00:35:177 (1) - Try to use soft-* hitsound at tail? I noticed that you've turn down the volume because there is no drum at tail.
  11. 00:50:177 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to make a regular triangle?
  12. 00:58:614 (5,1) - swap NC (Such NC suggestions are based on the way you've NCed previously)
  13. 01:06:114 (6) - NC
  14. 01:09:864 (5) - ^
  15. 01:10:567 (9,10,1) - Why not use 1/8 here, just as you did before?
  16. 02:08:809 - ^ (Making it empty here is even more weird)
  17. 03:14:434 (5) - ^
  18. 01:17:364 (4) - NC
  19. 01:19:239 (3) - ^
  20. 01:26:739 (5) - ^
  21. 02:12:208 (3) - Making it a 1/2 slider will be better in rhythm.
  22. 02:16:778 - Adding a note here will be better because you can clearly hear the voice.
  23. 02:07:520 (1,2) - swap NC
  24. 02:15:489 (5) - NC
  25. 02:22:989 (4) - ^
  26. 02:30:489 (4) - ^
  27. 02:34:708 (1) - remove NC?
  28. 02:38:458 (1) - ^
  29. 02:58:614 (4) - NC
  30. 03:14:552 (1,2,3,4) - (totally personal) I thought you would add more 1/4 in the final kiai. For example, from 03:05:411 - to 03:08:927 -
[Easy]
  1. 02:15:958 (4,1) - nazi blanket
  2. 02:08:458 (5) - whistle to respond to vocal? (If you want to, adapt it to the whole map)
  3. 02:31:427 (5) - NC?
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:490 (1) - Kinda too short for newbies?
  2. 00:20:880 (4,2) - nazi blanket
  3. 01:42:677 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:02:364 (4) - same as Easy
  5. 01:27:442 (4) - split it into 2 circles to emphasize the heavy beat at 01:27:677 - ?
  6. 01:38:458 (5,1) - same as Passion about the whistle
  7. 02:31:427 (7) - NC?
  8. 03:10:333 - whistle here. If you try to follow the music to set whistle like 03:02:364 (5) -
  9. 03:23:927 (3,4,5,6) - Circles don't fit the music here imo. Sliders are better to show the feeling of dragging. (My bad English ;w;)
[Xinely's Hard]
  1. 00:10:099 (2,4) - ugly overlap
  2. 03:08:927 (1,4) - ^
  3. 01:03:653 (2,3) - Try to make rhythm like 00:59:903 (2) - ? A bit difficult for a Hard.
  4. 01:22:052 (1,2,3) - ^
  5. 02:08:927 (1,2,3) - ^
  6. 02:13:614 (2,3,4) - ^
  7. 02:52:052 (1,2,3) - ^
  8. 02:56:739 (3,4,5) - ^
  9. 01:13:614 (4) - Remove the clap here? It feels weird.
  10. 01:15:958 (4) - clap
  11. 03:18:302 (1,2,3) - Why the triplet is placed so irregular XD
GL~
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