1. airtist: Pile (I have never seen "パイル" as Pile's name)

1. 00:17:365 (3,1) - stack correctly
2. 00:51:115 (1,2,3) - how about exchanging to spinner?
3. 02:00:958 (3) - I prefer to delete
4. 02:23:927 (1,2) - blanket correctly

1. 00:46:661 (5) - I prefer not to reverse and suit to vocal
   
2. 01:04:239 (2,3) - not suit to rhythm. I recommend the rhythm like 01:00:489 (2,3) - or 01:03:302 (1) -
3. 01:23:692- add a note
4. 01:54:630 (2,4) - stack correctly
5. 02:06:114 (2) - I prefer the same slider as 02:05:177 (1) -
6. 02:56:739 (2) - ^
7. 03:00:489 (2) - ^
8. 02:57:677 (3,5) - stack correctly

1. 00:18:771 (6,7,8) - not to stack. so confusing
2. 00:35:880 (2) - I prefer to delete
3. 01:02:247 (4,1) - not to stack. so confusing
4. 01:30:489 (3,1) - I feel too big jump
5. 02:45:958 (1,2,3,4,1) - decrease DS

1. 00:11:740 (1,2,3) - m~, this rhythm is not good...
2. 00:46:896 (5,1) - blanket correctly
3. 00:47:599 (1,2) - align in a straight line
4. 00:50:411 (4,1) - looks awkward blanketting
5. 01:09:161 (2,3,4) - ^
6. 02:14:786 (2,3,4) -
7. 01:30:489 (1,2,3) - a little hard to find rhythm, imo. i prefer to suit to vocal
   
8. 01:39:044 (2) - I prefer to delete
9. 02:05:177 (1,2) - the same pattern as 02:06:114 (3,4,5) - is better. want clap at 02:05:645- !
10. 03:15:489 (4,5) - blanket correctly

RandomEffect wrote:

hey, M4M~

[Xinely's Hard]

1. 00:11:740 (1,2,3) - m~, this rhythm is not good... changed
2. 00:46:896 (5,1) - blanket correctly oops fixed
3. 00:47:599 (1,2) - align in a straight line this is one of my style so i keep this
4. 00:50:411 (4,1) - looks awkward blanketting
5. 01:09:161 (2,3,4) - ^
6. 02:14:786 (2,3,4) - don't find way to make it better
7. 01:30:489 (1,2,3) - a little hard to find rhythm, imo. i prefer to suit to vocal i following music instead vocal :<
   
8. 01:39:044 (2) - I prefer to delete sure
9. 02:05:177 (1,2) - the same pattern as 02:06:114 (3,4,5) - is better. want clap at 02:05:645- ! actually i do this for some variation
10. 03:15:489 (4,5) - blanket correctly done

thanks 4 mod ~

~

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Darling!!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50880
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Darling!!
TitleUnicode:Darling!!
Artist:Pile
ArtistUnicode:パイル
Creator:Hinsvar
Version:Xinely's Hard
Source:Love Live! School idol project
Tags:ラブライブ! Nishikino Maki 西木野 真姫 Eriko Hori 絵梨子 堀 soldier game Love Live Duo Trio Single 4 Daring!! Xinely
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OverallDifficulty:6
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300,48,179552,6,0,P|252:40|192:64,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,52,179903,2,0,P|196:100|188:140,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,168,180255,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,304,180489,2,0,P|52:264|32:216,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,176,180841,2,0,P|48:188|104:164,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,140,181192,2,0,L|136:256,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,340,181661,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,280,181895,2,0,P|267:269|312:273,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,336,182364,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,356,182598,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,240,182833,2,0,P|352:180|372:88,1,135,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,88,183302,6,0,L|228:104,2,135,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,184,184239,2,0,P|416:252|336:292,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,308,184708,2,0,P|324:268|300:216,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,144,185177,5,2,0:0:0:0:
144,208,185411,2,0,P|126:248|129:293,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,264,185880,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,151,186114,2,0,B|19:191|15:247|15:247|47:319,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,364,186817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,364,186934,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,364,187052,6,0,L|248:352,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,276,187520,2,0,L|240:208,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,136,187989,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,244,188223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,164,188458,2,0,P|208:116|236:56,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,136,188927,5,2,0:0:0:0:
120,128,189161,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,260,189395,2,0,P|252:284|304:280,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,189864,2,0,P|132:224|124:256,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,200,190333,2,0,P|244:132|176:92,1,135,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,76,190802,6,0,L|304:52,2,135,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,148,191739,2,0,P|40:192|48:264,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,284,192091,2,0,P|96:268|164:284,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,292,192442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,224,192677,5,2,0:0:0:0:
376,248,192911,2,0,P|376:200|348:148,2,90,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,332,193614,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,284,193848,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,284,193966,2,0,L|200:216,1,45,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,132,194317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,280,194552,5,6,0:0:0:0:
212,284,194786,2,0,L|316:272,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,256,195255,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,160,195489,2,0,P|296:184|196:128,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,72,196192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,116,196427,6,0,P|438:159|423:212,2,90,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,44,197130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,84,197364,2,0,P|205:69|160:69,2,90,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,172,198067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,272,198302,6,0,L|192:348,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,348,198653,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,360,198770,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,300,199005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,212,199239,2,0,L|140:48,2,135,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,300,200177,5,2,0:0:0:0:
252,200,200411,2,0,P|264:152|308:108,2,90,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,252,201114,2,0,P|408:268|508:220,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,292,201583,2,0,P|493:227|507:162,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,124,202052,5,0,0:0:0:0:
356,168,202403,2,0,L|352:92,1,45,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,228,202872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,228,202989,2,0,P|164:252|112:208,1,135,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,192,203458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,68,203927,6,0,P|324:40|404:84,1,135,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,84,204395,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,244,204747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,244,204864,2,0,P|296:260|252:220,1,135,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,208,205333,1,8,0:0:0:0:

you lo~ve μ's , don't you?
~Good Luck~

RandomEffect wrote:

hey, M4M~

[General]

1. airtist: Pile (I have never seen "パイル" as Pile's name) Fixed.

[Easy]

1. 00:17:365 (3,1) - stack correctly Done.
2. 00:51:115 (1,2,3) - how about exchanging to spinner? I feel that sliders capture the music better.
3. 02:00:958 (3) - I prefer to delete Why?
4. 02:23:927 (1,2) - blanket correctly Never meant to be blanketed.

[Normal]

1. 00:46:661 (5) - I prefer not to reverse and suit to vocal It really fits with the instruments though. I don't know how to explain, but it just... fits.
   
2. 01:04:239 (2,3) - not suit to rhythm. I recommend the rhythm like 01:00:489 (2,3) - or 01:03:302 (1) - Done.
3. 01:23:692- add a note ^
4. 01:54:630 (2,4) - stack correctly ^
5. 02:06:114 (2) - I prefer the same slider as 02:05:177 (1) - ^
6. 02:56:739 (2) - ^ I'll keep this for now since it'll need a massive rearrangement.
7. 03:00:489 (2) - ^ ^
8. 02:57:677 (3,5) - stack correctly Done.

[Passion]

1. 00:18:771 (6,7,8) - not to stack. so confusing I think this fits how the instruments are played the best.
2. 00:35:880 (2) - I prefer to delete Why?
3. 01:02:247 (4,1) - not to stack. so confusing I can't see any problem with this...
4. 01:30:489 (3,1) - I feel too big jump It's readable and fits with the song.
5. 02:45:958 (1,2,3,4,1) - decrease DS Intentional to follow the power of the instruments.

you lo~ve μ's , don't you?
~Good Luck~

kakifly wrote:

hello~ m4m :3 (ill comment on your m4m queue)

SPOILER

just some random m4m thing, i have a TV size map with 1:28 drain time, ill mod 3 of your diffs this this map (so about 10min worth) and you can mod my 5 standard diffs, hows that ? >< Well, sure I guess.

Easy

00:31:427 (3) - move to x:268 y:40 so its a bit more symmetrical with previous slider, remember to fix the DS with the next slider~ Done.
00:52:990 (2) - finish hitsound? since the previous slider had one The instrument here is different.
00:54:865 (3) - finish Drum should suffice.
01:01:427 (2,3) - try this pattern ?? I'll keep the current pattern since it works just as well...

SPOILER

01:07:989 (2) - this repeat slider goes through a strong beat, i would suggest changing the pattern so the strong beat is emphasized with the start of a note :3 The strong beat you're talking about isn't really that strong to the point where it needs to be mapped, though, IMO...
01:59:552 (2) - finish? Nope. I think you should know the reason at this point!
02:25:333 (2) - blanket with previous slider a bit better Never intended a blanket here.
02:48:302 (2) - nc? Added.
03:11:739 (2) - blanket with previous slider, again remember to DS next slider if you do >< Umm, why should I do that...?
03:25:333 (4) - i think should just be a circle, the slider ending on the blue tick feels weird, especially for this diff Ah, you're right. It was like this in Normal too. Done.

Normal

try circle size 3, not 3.5 I personally feels that CS3.5 does work better here, but we'll see later...
00:42:677 (5) - maybe try this ?

SPOILER

01:04:239 (2,3) - you should just have a 3/4 slider repeat (like the previous slider) the current pattern with the slider starting on a red tick feels weird? idk but the sound just really stood out to me I feel that the current rhythm works nice as is.
01:27:442 (4) - end on a finish or clap (or both lol) Whistle gives a nicer impact.
01:52:989 (5) - put it like this, i think it has better flow (you can also change the slider shape? The current pattern also has about the same quality of flow as what you suggested, and I feel that it'll take too much effort to do this...

SPOILER

remove 01:55:567 (4) - i dont really hear music there ...Are you being serious? I mean, there is definitely an instrument sound here.

Passion

00:15:255 (2) - ctrl + g (better flow?) No. Trust me, it'll create a forced cursor movement which feels uncomfortable.
00:30:958 (3) - ^ ^
00:31:896 (1) - i find the placement kind of random... but i wouldnt know where else to put it xD Well can't be helped... the music is just like this.
take out 02:32:716 (5,2,4) - , that isnt really a good place for a stream in my opinion I have a better idea...
02:35:645 (3,5) - LOl these sliders are on the exact same spot, its a bit hard to notice >_> Made (5) visible a little.
03:01:427 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - even out this stream, also i dont think 03:01:895 (1) - should be NC The spacing increases, so...
03:21:583 (1,2) - even out to match the distance with the other notes in this stream ^


really nice beatmap as always~ hard to find things wrong >< good luck :3

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

Mod!

EASY

00:28:615 (1) - suggest adding whistle on the turnback point, to me it makes the rhythm easier to identify Sure.

01:30:489 (1) - suggest adding a clap along with the whistle here, since I here a clap ^

01:40:333 (2) - maybe stack on top of 01:38:458 (4) - to avoid some minor overlap The overlap on the editor won't be visible while playing, so this is okay.

01:42:208 (4) - Stack this note along with the other two (but only if you follow ^) ^

02:31:427 (5) - To make a nice triangle pattern, I suggest moving this slightly to the right at (168,112) Done.

02:46:427 (1) - this is probs just my opinion, but I dont think its good to start a single note after a break on this diff, its hard for rookies to suddenly adapt to the rhythm again Hmm idk about this... I feel that a circle definitely fits this part better, but we'll see later.

NORMAL

00:44:435 (2) - This slider should start at 00:44:318 since the vocal starts there, and then try extending the slider to the same ending point at 00:45:021. hopefully this could make it match more to the vocal This was never meant to follow the vocal; just the instruments.

01:52:989 (5) - try to not make this slider too curved, otherwise it kinda looks very different from 01:52:052 (3) -. Try moving the middle dot of the slider path to (296,120) and the tail to (342,172) Remapped this part.

SPOILER

02:11:270 (4) - the current location of this note makes the pattern a bit hard to interpret, might suggest moving to (444,172) to make a clearer triangle on the right hand side instead ^

INSANE

01:02:364 (1,2) - the frequent amount of NCs make the patterns hard to interpret because of the different colors. I suggest removing it for these 2 notes Removed the one at 01:02:833 (1).

02:32:247 (3) - I dont think its a good idea to use 1/8 here because it kinda disrupts the rhythm for a long stream, so I suggest changing back to 1/4 maybe I don't have any choice. The music is just like this. It's at 1/16 btw.

03:08:341 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - I feel that this stream is a bit overmapped. try removing notes (2,4,6) first, then this is a pattern I suggest. I'm quite sure that I'm not overmapping this part and it's fine as is, so I'll keep this for now.

If you follow above: otherwise ignore. I put (x) because I suggest changed the combo patterns and Im not sure if you'd agree to that

03:08:458 (x) & 03:08:927 (x) - Move to (196,216)

03:08:692 (x) - Move to (160,356)

It should look something this so that the notes will have a bounce back pattern

SPOILER

03:25:450 (3,4,5) - Not sure if you agree, but these 3 notes dont really match the rhythm They're intended to follow the vocal, and they do match.

Pretty good mapset, like the usage of patterns! Good luck!

Loneight wrote:

o/~ Hinsvar
M4M

• 
  Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[general]

1. Useless green line in all diffs:
   
   green line

   00:55:802 -

[Easy]

1. 00:13:615 (3) - other modders maybe would point it (run, a nazi suggestion, make a perfect blanket? Done.
2. 00:17:833 (4) - just my feeling, how about use whistle to follow the "co" sound? yeah, I mean add a whistle at 00:18:771 - , I think it would be suitable to emphasize 00:19:240 (1) - change to different rhythm. 01:25:333 (4) - , 02:30:958 (4) - , 03:21:583 - Same as here I only use whistles on fourth white ticks if there are supporting sounds, and I'm not going to break the pattern.

nice Easy

[Normal]

1. 00:18:771 (6) - Same as Easy Same then.
2. 00:45:255 (3,4) - just susggestion, there is maybe too hard for newbie, they would make mistake at 00:45:490 (4) - because they think 00:45:255 (3) - is 00:45:490 (4) - 's start when there has overlap and stack, though they could find the arrow to read there rhythm. I believe that it's impossible for such a thing to happen since (3) already appeared fully when you hit (1), and Normal players should have picked up bits of skill while playing Easy diff, and thus this should be readable and plays fine for them.
3. 01:02:130 - it's a little weird that there is empty, try to make 01:01:427 (4) - like the picture? this would make a brand-new rhythm Added a circle.
4. 01:27:442 (4) - feel a little weird because you use slider end at 01:27:677 - , 01:27:677 - should use a slider to show the electronic sound, how about change this like the picture? would be more suitable for song, if you change, remember add a soft green-line with 5% volume at 01:27:794 I feel that the current rhythm is fine as is, but I will reconsider.
5. 02:07:286 (4) - a nazi suggestion I think some modders would point it, so let me do it, make the blanket perfect? just move the last point to 232|188 I remapped this part.
6. 02:57:677 (3) - try to move it to 02:57:442 - , would be better for rhythm, i feel weird because 02:57:442 - is empty. 03:01:192 (3) - Same as here There is a strong instrument at 02:57:677 that I have to map, and I don't want to make this map too intense.
7. 03:12:677 (3) - feel weird again, it's a little hard to read the rhythm, how about move to 03:12:911 - to make a normal rhythm? I mean follow the vocal, would be better. 03:20:177 (3) - Same as here

nice~

[Passion]

1. 00:06:232 (2) - I feel it's unnecessary for music, IDK how to explain, how about remove it? is just like 00:09:865 (1,2) - . 00:57:794 (2) - Same as here I'm sure there is a sound that supports the circle's existence.
2. 00:54:396 (5) - well, I feel heavy weird for there, the whistle is too prominent that make me feel weird, try to remove it Removed and replaced with a finish.
3. 01:02:833 (1) - remove NC, it would make player hard to read instead easy to read Done.
4. 01:27:677 - just suggestion, you should add a break time at 01:27:677 - , I find there will reduce half of blood, it's easier to make some players feel stress. 02:50:177 - same as here ^
5. 02:33:887 (4) - I feel weird because of the clap, change it to whistle would be better, like 02:35:645 (3) - But the clap clearly lands on (4)'s tick...
6. 02:43:145 (2) - a little loud, try to reduce the volume would be better, for example: 40% voulme I think it's fine as is, but if more people says that this is too loud, I'll change.
7. 03:25:450 (3,4,5) - feel weird again (run, I think the song should end at 03:25:333, but you make it end at 03:25:684 - , I can't hear what they follow. In other words, 03:25:450 (3,4,5) - are unnecessary, try to remove them ...Okay then.

nice arrangement

that's all
good luck!
i like your arrangement, so... star!

• 
  [passion]

1. "passion" is not bad diff name, but i prefer call it "Darling".
2. 03:02:012 (2,4) - maybe your streams are expectable. so how about remove 2 and 4?
3. hard to point out other issues ..
   [normal]
4. maybe the objects' spacing is too small..Increase DS?
5. 01:01:192 (3,4,5) - this part is too hard to read for beginners i guess..
6. 01:54:630 (2,3,4) - ^
   [easy]
7. 02:16:427 (1,2,3) - hard to read...
8. 03:12:677 (3,4,1) - ^
   what a professional mapper you are!I love your symmetrical patterns. So take my star

AnreFM wrote:

<3

Awesome song, loved it instantly!

yes this is a placeholder

pandorawindy wrote:

hi for m4m,

• 
  [passion]

1. "passion" is not bad diff name, but i prefer call it "Darling". It feels uncreative to only take diff names from the song's title, so.
2. 03:02:012 (2,4) - maybe your streams are expectable. so how about remove 2 and 4? Why? I think this fits.
3. hard to point out other issues ..
   [normal]
4. maybe the objects' spacing is too small..Increase DS? The current one is okay.
5. 01:01:192 (3,4,5) - this part is too hard to read for beginners i guess.. Made it easier.
6. 01:54:630 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
   [easy]
7. 02:16:427 (1,2,3) - hard to read... I don't think so; (3)'s head is already visible even before you hit (2).
8. 03:12:677 (3,4,1) - ^ ^
   what a professional mapper you are!I love your symmetrical patterns. So take my star

Desperate-kun wrote:

• 
  General

1. The Artist should probably be 西木野真姫 - Romanised Version: CV.Pile - I'm not 100% sure though, I just know from lastfm, but sadly it's only a shorter version (probably something like TV Size) so we can't be sure. You might contact some more experienced people for help with the metadata. Uhm, this is going to be a bit long, but bear with me. (And don't worry, we don't need to get people as pro as Lanturn in yet!) 西木野真姫 if romanized will be written as Nishikino Maki, a main character of the Love Live! anime and one of the member of u's, the group which is Love Live!'s main focus. And as far as I know, we're supposed to use the seiyuu (VA/voice actor/actress)'s name for the artist since the the VA is the one that actually sings the song. Pile is the seiyuu of Maki, so there you have it. Also, I'm sure enough "CV." is a prefix that is used for a VA's name if their character's name were written before their name (in certain circumstances), so definitely not gonna add the "CV.".
2. Widescreen Support is not needed, since you don't have storyboard. Fixed.
3. Consider adding a spinner, to vary scores. At the beginning is the perfect place: Start it at 00:00:490 and end it at 00:03:771 for Hard / Insane and at 00:03:302 for Easy / Normal. Added in my diffs.
   Hitsounding:
4. 00:10:802 - I'd wish to have the same hitsounds on 00:10:802 and 00:11:271, because of the emphasized, repeated vocals. It will break your hitsound pattern in a positive way and imo it's necessary Clap would work, whistle would also work. Same applies for 00:18:302 - 01:02:364 ... I think you can find the other ones yourself! I only reserve usages of whistles for instruments like the one at 00:07:521. Using it to emphasize the vocal too doesn't seem to be a good idea to me, and I think it's okay right now. I might reconsider someday, though!

• 
  Easy

1. 00:09:865 (3) - I know it's not supposed to be symmetrical, but it would fit so well here o: So, gogo Symmetry! http://puu.sh/axMR7/3a7fc77fd8.jpg Done.
2. 02:08:458 (4) - Move it a bit, to fix the spacing to the following object. It's noticeably low. Whoops.
3. Flawless Easy Good job! Yay.

• 
  Normal

1. 00:13:615 (3) - Minor, but you could move it to (176|240) for a better look. I would be placed in the middle between (1) and (2). Done.
2. 00:44:552 (1) - Is this NC even intentional? o3o Shit.
3. 01:00:489 (2,3) - The rhythm is really inconsistent with what you did before. I'd really recommend you to follow the vocals here as well. It might even confuse players because they are so used to this rhythm 00:55:802 (1,2). Same applies for 01:22:989 (2,3) and some other places... (You actually used this quite often at the end so there's a high chance you will deny to change it all lol) Well okay, let's make everything consistent.
4. 01:44:552 (4) - Again, minor. But you could move this a bit to the right, so that it isn't so close to (2)'s tail. Sure.
5. ^So nazi. Please, someone shoot me ;_; ;_;

• 
  Passion

1. Imo you spam NCs a little bit too much. It's also rather inconsistent. Sometimes you place them every 2 white ticks (which is too much imo), but then sometimes you only place them every measure. I'd make it consistent: Just NC at every big white tick. Also:
   
   1. 00:15:021 (1) - And then, things like this... I don't know, I think it's better to delete the NC because it isn't needed at all for reading this. I don't see a reason for placing a NC just because there are 1/4-sliders.
   2. 00:24:396 (1) - Same about things like that - I know you NCd these objects in this section, but it just seems so weird having a combo with one single object, just because it is a little more emphasized then the others doesn't mean they don't belong to each other.
   3. These NC-problems appear all over the map, especially in the section starting at 02:31:427. I'd recommend you to tidy it up, it will improve the quality of your map. This is gonna be hard to explain, but... Well, essentially, my combo pattern is quite pattern-based. If there's a pattern that I feel needs to be noted with an NC, I'll do it. Things like 00:04:240 (1,2,3,1,2,3) only have the combo run for 2 beats to follow the vocal. Also, I believe that 00:24:396 (1) (and all the other similar cases) is in its own rhythm (although I do map this differently across the map, so this might be a shallow reasoning lol).
2. 03:22:989 (1) - *nazi* You could rotate this by -5° for a slightly better look, since 03:23:458 (2) will be in the middle between (1)'s head and tail then. (I can't believe I even wrote that down) Done.
3. Whoa, you improved so much, tell me since when your maps are soo clean o.o In my opinion you almost changed your style a bit - You took the good things from the old one and implemented even more good things to it to create the ultimate map o: I'm exaggerating a little bit Well honestly, I think you did exaggerated; this is in the lower end of my best maps, I think. I can still make a lot of better stuff than this, at least in the future! Thanks for the compliments, though

10/10 - Would bubble. Good luck ^3^ please bubble this if you managed to join the BAT someday

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

Mod!

XINELY'S HARD

00:11:740 (1) - I think the jump from the previous slider to this one is a bit too much even for hard. suggest you select all 3 of these notes 00:11:740 (1,2,3) - and then drag them so that 00:11:740 (1) - will be at (260,256) sure

Itll look something like this

SPOILER

00:14:786 (5) - slight overlap with 00:13:615 (1), may I suggest stacking on top of 00:15:021 (6) - to make the flow easier? the flow already make me love with it so i can't fix anything from here

00:48:654 (4) - at this location, its a bit hard to see the number, and actually spot it since its nearly completely covered by the slider. try moving it to (408, 316) so that you can maintain DS while making the transition easier to spot fixed on my own

01:05:411 (2) - is the jump here intentional? yes it is

01:30:841 (2,1) - starting notes on a blue tick is a bit unusual, so it may be better to change that to a 1/4 slider instead which ends at 01:30:958 removed circle on whitetick instead

01:38:927 (1,2) - its really confusing to make a pause and put a stacked note on it because people may mistake that as being a continous 1/2 hit, which can easily break combo. I suggest you maintain the DS change for the notes 01:37:989 (1,2,3) - but use the DS of 1.0 to move 01:38:927 (1,2) - to another location [e.g.] (160,328) that's why i NC'ed the circle. to let player know about the gap

SPOILER

01:53:223 (5) - theres another overlap here with 01:52:286 (2) - , suggest you move to another position fixed on my own

Loneight wrote:

o/~ Hinsvar

[Hard]

1. try to increase AR 0.5, I mean use 7.5 AR would be better, because some parts are a little hard to read in 7.0 AR use AR 7,3 instead. to make proper spread with Passion and Normal
2. 00:29:786 (4) - a nazi suggestion again, move to 260|204 to make perfect arrangement sure

i feel it's insane Hard (run, but anyway, good hard!

Desperate-kun wrote:

• 
  Xinely's Hard

1. 00:52:052 (2,1) - Hmm, minor, but two straight sliders like this don't really complement each other here, maybe make them parallel or do something like this? http://puu.sh/axJUd/94beabab48.jpg fixed by my own
2. 01:09:864 (4) - Minor again: You could move the anchor-point to (-16|180) so that 01:09:161 (2,3,4) these sliders complemented each other better. http://puu.sh/axKan/f67dd5e23c.jpg thanks 4 help! i'm bad at blanketing
3. 03:01:192 (6) - It sounds bad to end this slider on the big white tick. This beat is very emphasized, so it better should be clickable. A pattern like this http://puu.sh/axKvP/612060efde.jpg would fit the vocals much better, too. actually yes but the music isn't loud here so that's why i feel fine with tail on stanza. also i wanna make this rhythm kinda easier than normally i did on kiai >_<
4. 03:22:052 - Since these 03:21:583 (4,1) - 03:22:989 (4,5) - 03:23:927 (1,2) - 03:24:864 (4,5) follow shortly after each other, the unconsistent 1/4-spacing is really noticeable. You should make it consistent for these. 0,7x fits best imo okay
5. Really good Hard! You use many jumps which are quite big sometimes, but it is okay for low BPM i always do jumps on Hard x.x, well just like making insane one ww, but low bpm fits a lot with some high jumps imo

thanks 4 mods <3

upile

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10/10 - Would bubble. Good luck ^3^

Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Xinely's Hard

1. 00:29:083 (2,4) - , 00:46:896 (5,1) - , 00:50:177 (3,4) - and so on, try to blanket them to make the map more organized howmanytimesishouldfixblankets!aowejaowjaowjfoawfjaw fixed
2. 01:09:864 (4) - lol thou it's not offscreen i recommed not set things like this orz err it's fine
3. 01:40:216 add a note here with composing changing okay, happy replacement for me
4. 01:37:989 (1,2,3) - isn't this part too hard in a hard diff? already NC for marking it as anti jump ?_?
5. 02:16:427 (1,2) - larger ds no
6. hmm, tbh, ur map's not that arranged well... thou u have lots of patterns, consider more about the organization maybe just having different taste, that's all

good luck

AnreFM wrote:

Kak Hinsvarrヾ(　´・∀・｀)ノ gue gak disapa, sadnely u,u

[Xinely's]

1. I strongly recommend increasing the AR here. The kiai played fine with it, but the verse became somewhat awkward to play with the jumpy patterns and the seemingly low SV imo :< So yeah, even if it is by a tiny bit like 0,2(it should make it to 7.5), it could help much, so consider increasing it! nope, normal has 4,5 AR so the gap from Normal to Hard become far when gap from Hard to Passion become so small. Since AR 7 feels too slow here so that's why i'm using AR 7,3 for both balance spread and easier to read by player
2. 00:14:083 (3) - Consider moving this one a bit downward? It currently looked a bit cramped by being visibly close to 00:13:615 (1) -, unlike the one you did at 00:14:552 (4,6) - which looked better since the distance between them aren't too squishy owo So yeah, you can try moving 00:14:083 (3) - to somewhere around x376/y280 to make it looked better whlist keeping the jump not too big! :3 There are also parts like this on the rest of the diffs, might want to watch for those too ouo okay, i just make smaller spacing based i saw on pic.. the spacing seems so big lol
   Suggestion

   
3. 00:23:927 (4) - eh I think you could improve this blanket by much since it currently looked a bit off lol used approach circle and still ppl saying like this yolo lol
4. 00:30:490 (1) - Just a suggestion, but consider making this one straight instead of curvy? It will make the shape similar with 00:29:083 (2,4) - where straight slider is used and then followed by a curvy one owo It won't change the play by much, but it should make things looked neater imo~ nope, well this is just personal taste, but i don't like how straight slider works when compared with curved slider~
   Suggestion

   
5. 00:45:255 (4) - wah move this one a bit more to the right to make the blanket better for 00:44:318 (2) - 's tail ;w; wah i'm baka, fixed
6. 00:47:833 (2) - hmm how about making this one more curvy? It could make the flow to 00:48:302 (3) - smoother instead of directing it to the edge of the map owo i'm not fan of that kind pattern but the flow become better so fixed
   Suggestion

   
7. 01:17:598 (4,5,6) - This one part is particularly harder than the rest of the map imo. The usage of 1/4 beats combined with a jump won't play really nice for Hard players, and the fact that you didn't use this kind of rhythm for other the other similar parts makes it kinda surprising too :< So yeah, I'd recommend to tone this one down; you could try to simply make 01:17:598 (4,5) - a reverse triplet to make players click less or you can also try reducing the jump here. I would prefer the former since reducing the jump will require you to arrange more stuffs there owo and I later noticed that you used this kind of rhythm on the next sections, albeit with a much smaller jumps, which makes this one particularly stands out as a combo breaker, so consider fixing this one here~ ii yo
8. 01:21:817 - Eh this blank is kinda awkward when played imo. I'd prefer having this part filled with something as it is nicer to make the beat continues as this one is the powerful kiai part, and you also didn't leave this part blank on other similar parts, it could be nice to make them consistent too owo So yeah, consider adding a circle for this part! let's give a little rest with player.. i don't think the music on red tick is loud and must to mapped too
9. 01:24:161 (2,3) - eh fix the blanket? Currently they looked about halfway done lol oh yeah, this one already fixed from HW's mod but dunno why the blanket become more off. thanks 4 remind me
10. 01:47:364 (3,4,5,6) - hmm I don't really agree with this rhythm tbh. First, there isn't any distinct beats in the background that suggests for the current quite compliacted rhythm, and also I think it would be more fit it you use this kind of rhythm for the later part in this section which is in the 01:48:302 (1,2,3,4,5) - part, as the vocal became quite complicated there, thus making it fitter for having a complicated rhythm. So yeah' my suggestion here is to reducing the rhythm by changing 01:47:950 (6) - to a single circle instead of a 1/4 slider to make the rhythm less complex owo You could also try to insert a circle at 01:49:591 -, though that's up to your choice :3 same explanation before~
11. 02:14:786 (2,4) - blanket ;w; bakanely wishes she can fix this properly, she already boring with complains about blanket
    Suggestion

    
12. 03:06:114 (4) - uh umm this shape is kinda random imo as you always use standard curve on the rest of the map and this one suddenly has sharp points, it looked kinda off imo ;w; You can use a normal kind of blanket for this one fixing but still kinda same with previous. i wanna give some variation here since that blankets are feel boring if i use many times on one diff
    Suggestion

    
13. Nice Hard! A few of the rhythm are kinda tricky to follow and some blankets like 02:25:567 (5,1) -, 02:28:614 (4,2) - and meny others needs to get fixed :') Watch out for those! that's feel normal.. trust me ;3;

Good luck kak Hinsvar and kak Xinely (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ ~~☆ akhirnya disapa \w/

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Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Passion

1. 00:23:224 (2) - consider ctrl+g this a bit I feel that the current positioning matches the music and flow nicer.
2. 03:24:864 (1,2) - blanket? I never meant to make a blanket pattern here. I simply wanted it to be like this as is.
3. really nearly nothing to say, generally good stuff to me. \:D/
4. a tiny suggestion: 01:03:302 (1,2) - try not stack or overlap patterns like this, just as u did at 02:56:739 (1,2) - in more designs, it'll make the map more vivid imo I feel that this still look aesthetic enough, but we'll see the opinions from other modders later.
5. take a star \:D/

Normal

1. all fine to me, gj \:D/

Easy

1. 00:13:615 (3,4) - blanket perfect I think it's already perfect as is...
2. 02:17:833 (2,3) - overlapped patterns r not recommended to be set in a easy diff Hmm... Okay then.
3. 03:12:677 (3,4,1) - ^ ^
4. 02:23:927 (1,2) - u can blanket this indeed, with changing of 02:25:802 (3) - 's shape ^
5. 02:29:552 (2) - stack at 02:25:802 (3) - 's end? Why? It won't even be noticeable in the slightest.
6. 03:22:052 (1) - set head at 252.282, and arrange the end's position by urself I think the current positioning is okay enough.

lovely song, following stuffs in this map. nothing else to say :3

good luck

AnreFM wrote:

Kak Hinsvarrヾ(　´・∀・｀)ノ

um saw this map on your map lists and kinda have the urge to mod this owob

Let's go

If there's something you didn't understand or if the images and links are messed up, feel free to state so and I'll try my best to explain it better!

[PASSION]

1. 00:07:404 (4,5) - To make the feeling similar as 00:06:115 (1,2,3,4) - where you used jumps between (3) and (4) (which plays really nice imo), I really think you should also put a jump between these two. The jump between (3) and (4) matches the song well and it also makes the play more inuitive imo :3 So yeah, putting 00:07:521 (5) - on somewhere a bit left around x192/y340 would be good since it goes along with the natural flow and moving the cursor to 00:07:990 (1) - wouldn't be too hard owo
   Suggestion

   
   Let's try to make this similar to 00:06:115 (1,2,3,4).
2. 00:11:388 - Eh you sure want to left this blank? The drum on the background is quite loud, and since you aren't following the vocal for this one, I think you should put a note here to keep following the drum. You can make the slider at 00:11:036 (6) - a bit curvy and then put the circle at somewhere around x160/y312 to make it flow nicely owo Otherwise, I find the rhythm a bit confusing imo since I thought you were following the vocal due to the long slider lol
   Suggestion

   
   I think the instrument is not that noticeable, and I have to try to make it less confusing to hit 00:11:505 (7).
3. 00:23:224 (2) - hmm I think it would play smoother if you ctlr g this one, it will make the flow more natural and less cranky since the flow between 00:22:521 (6,1) - is transitioning to go down, moving the cursor up to 00:23:224 (2) - doesn't feel really nice imo. And also, the current section of the song doesn't really indicating a complicated pattern(it's the beginning of the song lol), so making the cursor moves smoothly would be nice! owo btw if you followed this, also make sure to ctrl g 00:23:693 (3) - too! After considering this and trying it again... Fine enough, I'll reverse this.
4. 00:35:880 (2) - Just a suggestion, but I think it would plays really nice if you just stack this at the tail of 00:35:177 (1) -'s slider owo It will emphasize the slowing down SV better than putting it on a normal distance; The next note at 00:36:115 (1) -, which has a higher SV, will feels more intense! x3 Sure.
5. 00:37:404 (4) - Dunno, but I think you should curve this one to make a similar effect as 00:36:115 (1,2) -, where (2) flows in a opposite direction of (1)'s tail. The current one has 00:37:404 (4) - in a straight line as 00:37:052 (3) - in which I don't really like how it plays imo >< You can try to curve it to the left like this one ovo
   Suggestion

   
   Done.
6. 00:42:677 (1,2,3) - mm I don't really agree with this rhythm tbh. Sure the one on (1) matches with the song well, but (2)'s 1/4 long slider doesn't feel really fit imo. It feels a bit too long to actualy matches with the vocal on the background and it also kinda dampen the jump effect, unlike what you did on a similar part like this one on 00:40:802 (1,2,3) - pattern(which is nice). So yeah, I'd suggest changing the rhythm here a bit; you can try just changing this to a 1/8 repeat, which should still create a 1/4 long slider, but with an extra beat on 00:43:087 - to emphasize the vocal like this. The current one plays a bit too easy for this part imo, so a little more jump would add the fun to play :'3
   Suggestion

   
7. 00:52:990 (1) - It actually would be nice to have a click at the end of this slider imo. Beside that it will go well with the vocal, there's also a small cymbal sound(unike the previous 00:51:115 (1,2) -) at the backgorund which should make it fit to click at that point imo :3 So yeah, you can try to change the slider to end at 00:53:400 - instead and have a circle stacked(or not :p) at it's tail~ ...I'm honestly really not sure about this. I don't know why, but I feel that the current rhythm is already the best one.
8. 01:01:895 (3,4) - Eh I stumbled here because I didn't recognize 01:02:364 (1) - stacked lol. It was kinda hard to read not because of the rhythm, but more by the color imo. The way it's light pink stacked with red is kinda hard to see imo :'D So yeah, I'd suggest to switch the combo color for these two; 01:01:427 (1) - should be a lighter pink one, while 01:02:364 (1) - has the red, it should help reading the notes better~ owo
   Suggestion

   
   I think it's already readable enough as is, and changing the combo colour won't really help... ._.
9. 01:21:114 (1) - As in 01:19:239 (3,4,5) - where you used jump between (3) and (4), it would be fit if you also create a jumpy feeling between 01:20:997 (6) - and 01:21:114 (1) - imo, The jump will also goes well since you put NC on (1) owo You can try putting a small jump by moving it to x432/y132, the play won't change much since the jump goes with the natural flow, but it could plays nicer than putting em in a normal distance imo :3
   Suggestion

   
   Again, I seriously doubt about doing this. I believe that making a 1/4 circle > slider jump will totally break the flow.
10. 01:30:958 (1,2) - hmm I think it will make the jump more comfortable if you ctlr g these two imo, would make the cursor movement less cranky since (1) will be directly in front of 01:30:489 (3) -'s tail owo. But yeah, actually I don't really mind with the current state, so if you did this jump on purpose, just keep it lol Not doing this. Totally goes against the flow I've created. Tried this and the movement actually becomes weirder, IMO.
11. 02:04:942 (2) - Eh how about ctrl g this one? Since the flow transition from 02:04:239 (1) - is going up, having a jump for this note would plays good imo rather than using normal distance. Since this one is in the kiai it would make the play more inutive too~ ovo ...I'm starting to be unsure about my definition of flow. idk why; I just feel that reversing the slider opposes the flow, making this pattern uncomfortable to play.
12. 02:34:473 (2,1) - mm You really should try switching the place of these two, the flow could become much better when played imo. Since 02:34:473 (2) - is currently placed on a parallel with 02:34:122 (1) -'s tail, the jump there isn't really well played, would be better if it's slightly lower imo - which is 02:34:708 (1) -'s place. So yeah, by switching these two's position, I think it will improve the gameplay much, so consider doing this :3
    Suggestion

    
    Sure.
13. 02:47:364 (2,3,1) - Eh since this part is the last section of this kind of part(lol), you sure you don't want to add something more intense? :p It could make the play much more fun if you decide to add a few jumps here and there for this part imo. You can try putting jump here by moving 02:48:302 (1) - (or 02:48:184 (3) - too if you like :p) a bit above on somewhere around x176/y56. The jump would fit nicely with both the NC and the vocal imo, you could also put jumps on other notes too since like I said, this section needs more something intense lol x3
    Suggestion

    
    This part is way too calm to be made more intense, IMO...
14. 03:25:333 (2,3,4,5) - (This was in the previous version where you used more circles to emphasize the vocal, sorry for the inconvenience! ><) Anyway, To create a similar jumpy feeling as 03:22:989 (1,2) -, I think you should also put a jump here tbh, otherwise this part feels a bit dull imo :< You can try putting 03:25:333 (2) - (and the rest of the circles) a bit more left to x240/y324 to make a small jump there owo Meanwhile, you can also increase the distance between the the circles like the one you did at 02:45:958 (1,2,3,4) -, would looked and plays better imo! x3 Consider re-adding these circles as it plays really well imo, and using only a single circle on the end like this really makes an anticlimax ending for the map :/ Used a 1/4 slider with two repeats.
15. So yeah, not much to say, I really like how player friendly this diff is played, with not much jumps and nice flow owob A few parts maybe a bit tricky to read, but it shouldn't be a big problem lol. As you may already notice, my suggestions are mostly to improve the difficulty, as I find it could be much more fun on some parts imo! :3 Anyway, it was pretty nice diff and I love it, great job as always kak Hinsvar! owob Yay owo/

[Normal]

• 00:13:615 (3,4,5) - hmm I think it would be better if you unstack (4) and (5) imo, since you didn't use stacks on any kind of the previous similar beats. Would be nice to keep them consistent imo :3 Sure.

1. 00:33:068 - Consider adding a circle here? it would create a very similar rhythm like the next part on 00:34:240 (3,4,5) -, it will also suit nicely with the vocal! :3 And also, the hole in the rhytm would fit for rhythms like 00:30:490 (4,5) -, but it isn't quite fit on this part imo, so consider fixing this :3 ^
2. 01:13:380 (5,6) - It would make the pattern more consistent if you stack these two imo, they would make the same feeling as 01:11:505 (2,3) - when played, which is nice owo ^
3. 01:34:239 (6) - Consider curving this one? two striahgt long sliders doesn't plays really good imo, they are a bit boring tbh :') So yeah, you could try to curve this one to also emphasize the pitch of the vocal with the curve! You can try this shape
   Suggestion

   
   ^
4. 02:08:692 (6,1) - It would plays better if you unstack these two imo. The powerful beat on (1) feels kinda dampened without the cursor movement :< So yeah, consider unstacking this to emphasize that powerful beat owo
   Suggestion

   
   ^
5. Nice Normal! I don't quite get the reason for a few stacks here and there, but it's not a big problem lol owob

[Easy]

1. 02:55:333 (4,1) - Consider moving (4) to somewhere lower than 02:53:927 (3) -'s tail to make the cursor movement less franky, it's currently a bit too parallel and the flow from (3) to (4) isn't really nice as it's also on the edge of the map. owo So yeah, consider moving (4) to somewhere around x32/y368 Done.

So yeah, I hope my mod could help, and I'm sorry if it didn't! ><
I hope this get ranked soon too!

Good luck kak Hinsvar and kak Xinely (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ ~~☆

IamKwaN wrote:

wa I love this song, lemme map this too lol

examination wrote:

no kds

title should be Daring!!

BTW still mapping this?

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi, from Google Doc.

General

1. Tag Suggestions: you may want to remove some duplicated tags, like "love live" and "Darling!!" coz they appear in the source and the title.
2. I am not sure but it's better to add an audio-leadin even it's a spinner at the beginning. Removed Love Live. "Darling!!" is actually "Daring!!" though lol
3. I really dislike your style of using default hitsounds for every song, specially the normal-whistle. Every song has different atmosphere and only various hitsounds can reflect this. So, I skip hitsounds. :c :c

Passion

1. 00:31:896 (1) - What's the actual function of this NC? Same for 00:39:396 (1) - 01:45:958 (1) - 01:53:458 (1) - 02:07:520 (1) - To indicate that it's a part of its own rhythm.
2. 02:32:247 (3) - Kinda tricky to have the end being opposite to 02:32:598 (4). Would it be more player-friendly by altering the direction like this? I'll consider. I think it's already the least confusing this way though.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:48:184 (3) - Weird to hit this note provided that there's only echo. Remove it? Done.

Normal

1. This Normal is great, except some NC usage and the hitsounds. It's rare to find a Normal which play extremely cool with DTHRHD imo. So, you did a good job!
2. 00:35:177 (1) - Again, wt's the usage of this NC? Same for 01:37:989 (1,2) and 03:23:927 (1). Removed.

Easy

1. Nothing to say except nazi

Good luck!

imoutosan wrote:

M4M

[Easy]

some notes touched HP bar. Is it ok? Still playable so yeah.
03:01:427 (3) - move 3rd grid to 230,55 Done.

[Normal]

It's a bit hard as a normal diff imo. Good job.

[Passion]

01:17:598 (5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/bczfu/812141c545.jpg may be better? I'm sure the current rhythm is more correct.
01:32:598 (5) - ctrl+g Why? It'll break the flow.
02:08:458 (6) - 1/8 reverse will be better imo The 1/8 notes don't appear until 02:08:692.
02:19:942 (7,1,2,1) - feel not good. but I don't know how to do here I personally feel that this has a cool flow and gives this sexy vibe~
02:58:848 (6) - change to a short slider? Why? It's okay as is.
03:00:489 (1,2) - try this? ...I'm not really sure how am I supposed to do this.

(2 is at 393,68)

Sorry for the nazi mod. Awesome mapset.

examination wrote:

lol
[General]
BG: I find a better BG here ;w;

SPOILER

the original pic is here : https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/HvensVM.jpeg

You can also choose one of the BGs in my marathon owo I think I'll stick with my current BG for now. The one you give doesn't really have this sexy and passionate feel which is pretty much what "Darling!!" is composed of lol

[Easy]
00:15:021 (4) - better blanket Fixed.
00:17:365 (3,1) - better stack Doesn't affect gameplay.
01:35:177 (1) - rotate 5° to make it look better Done.
02:16:427 (1,3) - Maybe you can make this part look like 01:35:177 (1,3) here 0.0 Variations are nice!
03:14:552 (1) - move the red point 2 grids left to make this slider look symmetrical Fixed.

[Normal]
00:17:599 (4,2) - maybe a stack? Again, not gonna affect gameplay.
02:11:739 (5,6) - make a slider here may feel better Why? I'm sure it's better with circles.
02:50:177 - a note is needed here Added.
[Passion]
00:35:880 (2) - this note is too hard to notice @_@ move it out plz Actually goes well with the song and patterns IMO.

nice mapset~~
maki >////<

Nozhomi wrote:

Hi~ Hinsvar M4M pls
I'll do my best ! (dat BG <3)

- General :

1. Confilct tags with Easy. Fixed.

- Passion :

1. AR8.5 pls 8.3 is enough. It's the most fitting value IMO.
2. 00:29:552 (3,1) - What do you think about stack them ? Sorry, but what am I supposed to stack here?
3. 00:50:646 (4,5) - Why not take same DS than 00:50:177 (1,2) - ? The music is stronger on the later part.
4. 00:55:099 - It's nly me but i would add a 1/2 reverse slider here ? Focusing on the music.
5. 01:14:552 (1,2,1,2) - Stack them like other similar patterns for consistency ? Variations. There are a few other unstacked stuff too here, you know.
6. 01:49:239 (1) - To follow perfectly voice here, slider should be 1/3. But it works too with 1/4 so make your choice. The music goes 1/4 and I'm mainly going with the music so.
7. 02:48:302 (1) - Move it at 164:36 to improve a little flow. Sure.
8. 03:01:427 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - For all other kiai you didn't change DS for stream, why now ? But what about 02:54:864 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)?
9. 03:25:333 (2) - I think for the last laugh, it's 1/6. Try this http://puu.sh/bcSjl/62b7549a22.jpg. Very sure it's 1/4.

- Normal :

1. 00:44:552 (2,4) - I don't know about this overlap, if it's good or bad, but i prefer point it out. Should be fine.
2. 01:12:677 (4) - Would CTRL+J to improve flow with 01:13:380 (5,6) - . Fixed.
3. 01:19:239 (2) - Place it at 216:112 for little better flow. ^
4. 01:37:989 (6) - Would transform it on a 1/2 slider to fit better with music. Did stuff differently.
5. 01:38:458 - NC ? ^
6. 02:13:614 (3,4) - Maybe more like this http://puu.sh/bcY6m/ae3e410137.jpg ? ^
7. 03:23:927 - NC ? Why?

- Easy :

1. CS 2.5 is more appropriate for an Easy imo. 3 should be okay for this. 2.5 is a little too big.
2. 01:03:302 (1,2) - Make them similar ? Why? They're okay as is.
3. 02:23:927 (1,2) - Improve blanket. Tried my best.
4. 02:31:427 - NC ? Hmm? Why should I?
5. 03:05:177 (3) - How do you think about make it like this http://puu.sh/bcYAN/a7420ec561.jpg ? It'd break the flow from 03:03:302 (1,2).

That's all. Good mapset ! Hope it help you
GL Mukyu~

Mira-san wrote:

Hi. lol Iamkwan stop copying my style lololol jk

Format: Time (object) - suggestion | reason why I suggested it

General

1. AIMod says the tags conflict with the Easy diff. Fixed.
2. "ラブライブ! Nishikino Maki 西木野 真姫 Hori Eriko 絵梨子 堀 soldier game Love Live Duo Single 4 Daring!! Xinely" - Not sure if this one is intended. Too lazy to research. Read some posts. Meeeh.
3. Consider adding erico to the tags (?) lol sure

Passion

00:50:880 (5) - Move this to x:212 y:36? | To make it look better. This is intentional to follow the power of the instrument.
00:57:911 (3) - I suggest making this slanted a bit. | Flow perhaps. I believe it's okay as is.
01:07:052 (1,2) - Move this to x:280 y:100 | Definitely a better flow and a cleaner look. Sure.
01:56:036 (2,3) - Straighten please. | nazi mod No need to.
02:55:802 (1,2) - These patterns look like they're out of place IMO. I recommend changing these to something else. | They look out of place. (Feel free to ignore this suggestion). Really? I believe they reflect the sexy vibe of the song.
03:09:630 (3,4,5) - Move to x:212 y:232 | Creates a nice flow between (2) and (3). Remapped this part.
03:23:927 (1,2) - Could make a blanket here. | Would look better for me. It fits the song better this way.
03:24:864 (1,2) - How does this look? | Just an idea. 'so it could bring the feel of the whole map until the end by putting similar patterns' ^

Image

Nothing much here. Fun to play too.

Easy and Normal

Nothing here.

lol this is ready to be ranked.
Nico x Maki aheauheaueh

Sinch wrote:

[Easy]
┐(´∀｀)┌

[Normal]
00:39:161 (5) - add note

[Xinely's Hard]
00:09:279 (3) - ?
00:12:091 (2) - ?
00:57:091 (3) - ?
01:00:841 (4) - ?
01:08:341 (3) - ?
02:01:778 (2) - ?
02:02:716 (6) - ?
02:06:466 (4) - ?
03:18:653 (2) - ?

01:28:380 (2,3,4,5,6) - hard to see. i want to use more sliders.
01:47:364 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - not fit music.
02:54:864 (4,5,6) - not good flow.

[Passion]
nothing to say

LexiaLovesU wrote:

Hello Hinsvar Modding time!!!

General

1. Personally i dont think that the Normal whistle hitsounds fit very well with this song it seems to techno-y pop to use the N whistles Eh idk; I feel the power of the whistles go along pretty well with the song.
2. 00:51:115 - Why dont you just put the Preview point here so that you dont get the beats on the 1/2 note in lol idk; I just think the current preview point feels more natural compared to this.

PASSION~~~

1. 00:11:388 - This felt very empty to me there is a loud note here its quite prominent aswell so i feel as if you should map it so that it wont feel as empty right now i feel like i was excepting to see a not there plus putting a note there makes a pretty good build up to the 1/8 patterns. Added a circle.
2. 00:19:240 (1) - Why dont you add a drum clap to this note so that it matches with the drum like noise in the bgm(same with 00:19:708 (4),00:20:177 (5) and 00:20:646 (6) ) i think it fits very well and adds a bit of variety to the part :3 drum-hitnormal should suffice.
3. 00:35:177 (1,2) - To me this sounds a bit awkward since you skip out the vocal 00:35:411 so it just sounds empty there and then you put a note in which nothing exists which is this 00:35:880 (2) that made it even more awkward sounding. to fix this i would suggest shorting the slider to 00:35:411 so that it hits the vocal and then moving the note to 00:35:646 so that you hit the other vocal. also you should put the circle ontop of the slider 00:36:115 (1) so that you emphasis the lack of music between 00:35:646 ~ 00:36:115 properly like so
   SPOILER

   
   this will make it sound less awkward and more musically correct owo I'm pretty much following the instrument here. Removed (2) though.
4. 00:38:927 (4) - why dont you make this into a different shape since you did the same shape with the 2 previous sliders it got a bit repetitive be creative try stuff like this
   SPOILER

   
   be creative with sliders since you can map to how the voice sassy ness lol Not gonna get too creative too, I guess...
5. 00:51:115 (1) - Why dont you add a drum finish to the body of the slider so that you can match the drawn out finish sound in the bgm I thought finish hitsounds won't have any effect if placed on sliders' path?
6. 00:54:396 (5) - why dont you add a finish to the body of the slider so that you can match the hold note in the bgm also on the end of the slider add a drum whistle so that you match the sound in the bgm ^
7. 01:02:950 - Super empty sounding This felt very empty to me there is a loud note here its quite prominent aswell so i feel as if you should map it so that it wont feel as empty right now i feel like i was excepting to see a not there plus putting a note there makes a pretty good build up to the 1/8 patterns. Added a note.
8. 01:10:802 (1) - Any reason for the whistle to me it sounds off honestly since you dont have anything to match to there other than the finish sound plus even if there is something there the main thing that should be heard is the finish and honestly the whistle just drowned it out since its really really loud The whistle is there to help emphasizing the loud instrument sound.
9. 01:18:302 (1) - ^^ ^
10. 01:19:239 (3) - Why dont you rotate this a bit to the left so it goes with the pattern you did before it would look more like it swirling this way see?
    SPOILER

    
    I thought it already goes well as is...?
11. 01:25:567 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as 00:19:240 (1) idk; added drum-hitnormal at 01:25:802 I guess.
12. 01:30:255 (1,2,3,1,2) - Nice it sounds really nice hue
13. 01:37:052 (1) - This sounds super awkward since of the fact that in the middle of the slider on the 1/2 note she starts sings and that is a hold not so you putting a 1/1 slider here sounds awkward since you are completely ignoring the fact that she holds a not on the 1/2 tick i would suggest doing this rhythm so that you hit the notes properly owo
    SPOILER

    
    Let me rethink about this. I'd like to follow the vocal, but since it's very silent here it would feel awkward.
14. 02:07:989 (2,3,4,5,6) - Not gonna do whatyou did in the other kiais? that really fit that part o.o Variations are nice, and this one also feels pretty okay.
15. 02:16:427 (1) - Any reason for the whistle to me it sounds off honestly since you dont have anything to match to there other than the finish sound plus even if there is something there the main thing that should be heard is the finish and honestly the whistle just drowned it out since its really really loud Well, you probably know why...
16. 02:23:927 (1) - ^^ ^
17. 02:33:302 (1,2) - Stacking at a end of a stream is super annoying to hit since you are constantly moving in a stream it awkward to suddenly stop and hit 2 notes i would suggest to move the slider. This fits the song better, though. By that, I mean waaay better than having to keep the movement going. Trust me, it's a hard choice to make.
18. 02:34:122 (1,2,1,2) - this is very awkward since at the end of 1 starts different pattern pattern of music so having a slider end on the start of a new musical point is not appropriate i would suggest revising the rhythm to this so it goes with the music
    SPOILER

    
    also you should make the new combo at 02:34:356 so that it goes with the new musical point
    ...Let me rethink (again). I personally feel that the current pattern is the best pattern to go along with the song.
19. 02:35:645 (3,4,5) - this is a bit hard to see since 3 is still fading when 5 is coming up during gameplay so this might confuse people since they wont even notice 5 and they might not hit. since 3 is still fading when your are hitting 4 so 5 will show very suddenly
    SPOILER

    
    Huh? I myself can read that perfectly. In fact, (5) was previously completely overlapped below (3). I'll consider.
20. 03:07:052 (1) - Any reason for the whistle to me it sounds off honestly since you dont have anything to match to there other than the finish sound plus even if there is something there the main thing that should be heard is the finish and honestly the whistle just drowned it out since its really really loud Uh... Yeah, I probably don't need to talk about this.
21. 03:14:552 (1) - ^^^
    
    Thats it owo NICE INSANE loved it 3 am here ill finish the rest tomorrow

Rare wrote:

sry for the delay
from modding queue

[Easy]
01:25:802 (1) - pref use sampleset to soft The drum goes well with the music.

[Normal]
nothing to say

[Xinely]
00:12:208 (3) - add clap to head Added.
00:53:927 (2,3,4) - pref more simply pattern. you should rearrange notes. This would be up to Xinely.
00:59:552 (1,2) - not fit to music. you can ctrl+g ^
01:03:302 (1,2,3,4,5) - it doesn't fit at all. ^
01:22:403 (2,3,4) - pref rearrange pattern. hard to see for player . ^
01:30:372- add note? ^
01:47:950 (6) - change to circle at put here 01:48:067 ^

[Passion]
nothing to say

Sinch wrote:

[Easy]
┐(´∀｀)┌

[Normal]
00:39:161 (5) - add note Nope; I fear it'd be too difficult for players.

[Xinely's Hard]
00:09:279 (3) - ?
00:12:091 (2) - ?
00:57:091 (3) - ?
01:00:841 (4) - ?
01:08:341 (3) - ?
02:01:778 (2) - ?
02:02:716 (6) - ?
02:06:466 (4) - ?
03:18:653 (2) - ?

01:28:380 (2,3,4,5,6) - hard to see. i want to use more sliders.
01:47:364 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - not fit music.
02:54:864 (4,5,6) - not good flow. Will leave all of these to Xinely, I guess.

[Passion]
nothing to say

examination wrote:

no kds

title should be Daring!!

BTW still mapping this?

1. 00:38:927 (4) - make same y - coordinate better to design.
2. 00:41:505 (3) - change normal whistle better for me. ~ㅅ~
3. 00:53:927 (4) - start 00:53:810 (3) - better I think. I can herad sound 00:53:868 here.
4. 01:49:239 (1) - Is not end point 01:49:434 (2) here? ( 1/12 beat )
5. 01:52:286 (2) - Why not change in symmetry?
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:00:489 (2) - same reson with 00:53:927 (4) , start 02:00:372 better I think
7. 02:50:294 ~ 02:51:934 (1) - remove break like other diffs.
8. 03:25:333 (2) - change a circle 03:25:333 (2) , and add 1/12 beat reverse slider 03:25:489 > 03:25:606 > 03:25:723
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:06:115 (1) - um.. any reason for increase DS?
2. 00:07:872 (6) - match DS prev , next better.
3. 00:09:279 (3) - ^
4. 01:40:216 (5) - ^
5. 01:47:481 (4) - ^
6. 01:45:958 (5) - cheak blanket
7. 01:49:591 - add note?
8. 03:18:653 (2) - match DS prev , next better.

eINess wrote:

[Passion]

1. 00:38:927 (4) - make same y - coordinate better to design. There won't be really any difference, I think?
2. 00:41:505 (3) - change normal whistle better for me. ~ㅅ~ Nope; the instrument here is quite electro-ish, and a soft whistle would be nicer.
3. 00:53:927 (4) - start 00:53:810 (3) - better I think. I can herad sound 00:53:868 here. I'm doing this to simplify the rhythm.
4. 01:49:239 (1) - Is not end point 01:49:434 (2) here? ( 1/12 beat ) There is actually something on the blue tick.
5. 01:52:286 (2) - Why not change in symmetry? Flows better the current way.
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:00:489 (2) - same reson with 00:53:927 (4) , start 02:00:372 better I think Same.
7. 02:50:294 ~ 02:51:934 (1) - remove break like other diffs. Sure.
8. 03:25:333 (2) - change a circle 03:25:333 (2) , and add 1/12 beat reverse slider 03:25:489 > 03:25:606 > 03:25:723Did something different.

eINess wrote:

[Xinely's Hard]

1. 00:06:115 (1) - um.. any reason for increase DS? normal spacing here o.o
2. 00:07:872 (6) - match DS prev , next better.
3. 00:09:279 (3) - ^
4. 01:40:216 (5) - ^
5. 01:47:481 (4) - ^ they are consistent :C
6. 01:45:958 (5) - cheak blanket
7. 01:49:591 - add note? kinda weird. blame vocal orz
8. 03:18:653 (2) - match DS prev , next better. same

GL o/

Sonnyc wrote:

Reply eINess' mod.

Easy:

-- Remove duplicate timeline at 00:55:802 for all of your diffs. Done.

00:19:240 (1,1) - Spacing could be improved. Fixed.
01:25:802 (1) - The start and the end being a drum sampleset was a little bad to feel the audability of the object. Consider adding some additional hitsounds. Done.
01:37:052 (3,4) - Say hello to the distance please.
02:59:083 (4,1) - ^ Fixed both.

Normal:

01:25:802 (1,3) - Same opinion with Easy. Done.
02:26:739 (6,1) - Distance can be maintained. ^

Insane:

01:55:216 (7,8) - Starting (8) 1/4 earlier and end where it ends now fits the song better. Well I can't really leave 01:55:333 unmapped now, do I? lol

The gap with Normal and Hard is big. The rhythms are actually fine and balanced, but the jumps of Hard are not recommended which refrains from me letting this map go forward. Contact another BN who thinks this map is fine to go, or map an [Advanced] difficulty to fill that gap. Bye~

1. could you not letterbox during breaks cuz you're almost cutting off face thx
2. nice storyboard file

1. 00:00:490 (1) - softsmaplestetpls
2. 00:19:240 (1) - would be cool to lower sv for these relief parts. seems weird to have it same speed as other stuff when way less intense music to back it
3. 01:37:052 (1,2) - same thing as easy probably with sliderslide. softsampleset on 2 would also be good. also also xinely's diff yeaeyeyeay
4. 01:56:036 (2,3) - what year do you think this is 1/4 sliders havent been spaced like this in 30 years
5. 02:31:427 (1) - idk how much it would break but slightly lower sv for this section would also make sense
6. 03:20:059 (3) - unlike the other blue tick 1/4 sliders this one just doesnt work cuz nothing worth mapping on blue tick compared to whtie

1. 00:30:255 (5,6,1) - nice triple on silence
2. 01:30:489 (1,2,3) - gonna be confusing to interpret rhythm since you're ignoring the vocals that you were exclusively following right before this. using a 3/4 reverse slider would be easier to interpret since it plays itself pretty much or following vocals would workkkk
3. 01:38:458 (3,1,2) - stacking makes your linear 01:37:989 (1,2,3) - look like lol
4. 01:47:950 (6) - of all the 1/4 sliders on blue ticks this one is the wrost since it's got almost nothing on the head and something on the tail

1. 00:17:365 (3,5) - s0 cl0se
2. 00:22:990 (3,4) - a rhythm like this is nice cuz you can actually click on the strong thing. right now 4 has stronger sound on tail when avoiding is ez
3. 00:43:615 (1,2) - should probably use the same rhythm as 01:42:677 (1) - 01:50:177 (1) - 00:36:115 (1) - . 3/4 stuff stands out so skipping it where it's expected would too
4. 01:12:677 (4,5) - overlaps caused by automatic stacking are pretty lame.

1. 00:32:365 (1) - 00:47:365 (1) - 00:49:240 (2) - 00:59:552 (1,2) - 01:07:989 (2) - 01:18:302 (1) - 01:55:802 (3) - 02:05:177 (1) - 02:10:802 (3) - 02:20:177 (1) - 02:27:677 (1) - 02:55:802 (1) - 03:01:427 (3) - 03:07:052 (1,2) - 03:14:552 (1) - all of these make no sense. it's like you're forcing variety where the song doesnt support it. all of these reverses are less impacting than the surrounding white ticks, eespecially the ones where it literally repeats the same vocals 2 beats in a row like 02:05:177 (1) -
2. 01:37:052 (3) - would work better as a 1/1 slider followed by a gap to show that music is stopping here. hey look normal did something like that nice. also this sliderslide is so gross when there's no background sound to cover it up so silencing that would be cooooool
3. 00:43:615 (1,2) - if you plan on keeping 00:36:115 (1) - as its current rhythm (which is one of the few 3/2 reverse sliders that work), you shoudl probably do the same here cuz consistency of emphasizing vocals vs insrumeptmsal ok do it

• Easy

1. 00:19:240 (1) - could perhaps give this a little bump to go along with the clap on the white tick here like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3412719
2. 00:32:365 (1) - uhh I think the little bump here would go along much better if moved to the white tick instead
3. 00:59:552 (1) - both white ticks here feels a lot stronger (+ I just feel like following vocals here is the most intuitive thing to do for a beginner since that is what stands out the most)
4. 01:01:427 (2,2) - do you think it is possible to avoid having these overlap?
5. 02:05:177 (1) - 00:59:552 (1) - similar story for this one. I think phishi pointed like a bunch of these out but I feel like these really are the worst offenders (well that might be me anyways)
6. 02:55:802 (1) - same story
7. 03:20:645 (4) - could move this down and to the left a bit, makes catching the next slider smoother
   
   Normal
   
8. 00:18:302 (5,6) - use 1.1 for these too?
9. 00:34:240 (4,5,6) - both vocals and the weird eletronical sound here land on the blue tick, so the current rythm is kinda skipping that. Could just use a 3/4 repeat here imo
10. 00:42:677 (5) - honestly don't really see a reason for this repeat here. The sound that is being skipped on the white tick feels ALOT stronger than whatever sound is being mapped right now. Would probably just make this a 1/1
11. 01:30:489 (1) - missing a clap here? had on in the Easy Diff >w<
12. 02:18:302 (4,5,6,7) - would probably use something that is similar to 01:12:677 (4,5,6) - rythm wise. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3412930 for example feels a lot more intuitive
    
    Xinely's Hard
    
13. 00:51:115 (1) - might just be me, but I feel like a soft finish hears goes along a bit bincer with the 'swoosh' sound in the song. Also helps emphasizing the new track
14. 01:12:911 (2,3) - plays a little bit clunky I think, since in order to catch this properly you'd have to move up a bit and then down instead of being able to catch this in one swift motion
15. 01:18:302 (1,2) - rythm would feel more intuitive if you swapped these I think
16. 01:39:864 (4,5,6) - is using uneven spacing here intentional? and if yes, is this REALLY a good thing to do in a Hard Diff?
17. 03:07:520 (2,5) - if this isn't too much of a bother, try avoiding this tiny overlap?:c
    
    Passion
    
18. 00:50:880 (5,1) - was kind expecting something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413013 (basically just the slider ctrl+g and slightly re-arranged. Larger drop felt like it went along nicely with the new track. Would have to re-arrange the following slider though soo ehh if you're happy with how this currently looks don't bother
19. 02:04:708 (1,2,1) - could so something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413050 which allows for more emphasize on the downbeat, which works really well here with the previous stream working as a build-up and introducing the player to 1/4 rythm
    
    lovely Diff, not much for me to find c:
    
    blergh mod ended up being kinda sucky
    
    Good luck!

Kyle Y wrote:

<3 Maki
I am not experienced in modding/mapping,
maybe the modding below cannot help you.
And sorry about my laziness on modding
[Easy]

SPOILER

00:13:615 (3) - blanket I hope it's okay now.
02:23:927 (1) - ^ ^
00:54:865 (3) - maybe place at 00:54:630 - ? A constant rhythm will be easier to play here.
00:59:552 (1,2) - same as 00:55:802 (1,2,3) - Fixed.
01:07:989 (2) - ^ ^
01:14:552 (1,2) - I think better to keep a pattern on the same melody for easy diff? Sure.
01:35:177 (1) - better to stack 01:32:833 (2) - Isn't visible while playing.
01:40:333 (2) - stack 01:38:458 (4) - becasue stack to some other notes make the map more cleaner ^
01:44:083 (2,3) - same as 01:51:583 (2) - Did the oppoiste.

[Normal]

SPOILER

00:22:052 (2) - Blanket This looks ok to me and can't be seen in-game anyway.
01:52:989 (5) - maybe slider? Sure.
03:23:927 (3) - nc (?) No need for it; gotta keep the consistency.

[Passion]

SPOILER

02:42:208 (6) - stack on 02:40:684 (5) - Not changing anything while playing.
02:43:145 (2) - why 1/16 beat Because it does fit with the instrument here.
02:49:708 (3) - maybe reverse slider? Nope; a slider goes with the music best.
02:55:333 (1,2,3,4) - slider? Why?

pishifat wrote:

hi this my second mod ever !!!!! sry if it bad ye sure

[general]

1. could you not letterbox during breaks cuz you're almost cutting off face thx is that actually a valid reason to turn off
   
   but ye sure
2. nice storyboard file ikr

[insane]

1. 00:00:490 (1) - softsmaplestetpls dank
2. 00:19:240 (1) - would be cool to lower sv for these relief parts. seems weird to have it same speed as other stuff when way less intense music to back it sure
3. 01:37:052 (1,2) - same thing as easy probably with sliderslide. softsampleset on 2 would also be good. also also xinely's diff yeaeyeyeay sure
4. 01:56:036 (2,3) - what year do you think this is 1/4 sliders havent been spaced like this in 30 years because why not
   
   to be serious I don't think this will be problematic at all
5. 02:31:427 (1) - idk how much it would break but slightly lower sv for this section would also make sense I don't think so. The intensity here is still quite high, and 1x supports mapping here better.
6. 03:20:059 (3) - unlike the other blue tick 1/4 sliders this one just doesnt work cuz nothing worth mapping on blue tick compared to whtie Changed to circles.

[normal]

1. 00:17:365 (3,5) - s0 cl0se dam
2. 00:22:990 (3,4) - a rhythm like this is nice cuz you can actually click on the strong thing. right now 4 has stronger sound on tail when avoiding is ez Oh yep sure.
3. 00:43:615 (1,2) - should probably use the same rhythm as 01:42:677 (1) - 01:50:177 (1) - 00:36:115 (1) - . 3/4 stuff stands out so skipping it where it's expected would too sure
4. 01:12:677 (4,5) - overlaps caused by automatic stacking are pretty lame. fixed

[easy]

1. 00:32:365 (1) - 00:47:365 (1) - 00:49:240 (2) - 00:59:552 (1,2) - 01:07:989 (2) - 01:18:302 (1) - 01:55:802 (3) - 02:05:177 (1) - 02:10:802 (3) - 02:20:177 (1) - 02:27:677 (1) - 02:55:802 (1) - 03:01:427 (3) - 03:07:052 (1,2) - 03:14:552 (1) - all of these make no sense. it's like you're forcing variety where the song doesnt support it. all of these reverses are less impacting than the surrounding white ticks, eespecially the ones where it literally repeats the same vocals 2 beats in a row like 02:05:177 (1) - I think I ended up remapping like 30% of the diff. Also, fixed everything except the second slider because I'm still sure it really fits with the instruments here.
2. 01:37:052 (3) - would work better as a 1/1 slider followed by a gap to show that music is stopping here. hey look normal did something like that nice. also this sliderslide is so gross when there's no background sound to cover it up so silencing that would be cooooool Sure.
3. 00:43:615 (1,2) - if you plan on keeping 00:36:115 (1) - as its current rhythm (which is one of the few 3/2 reverse sliders that work), you shoudl probably do the same here cuz consistency of emphasizing vocals vs insrumeptmsal ok do it Done.

these combo colors are eye death made them darker

Peachtrees wrote:

M4-2+2M

c:

• Easy

1. 00:19:240 (1) - could perhaps give this a little bump to go along with the clap on the white tick here like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3412719 Pretty sure there's nothing you can emphasize with that bump...
2. 00:32:365 (1) - uhh I think the little bump here would go along much better if moved to the white tick instead I remapped this part.
3. 00:59:552 (1) - both white ticks here feels a lot stronger (+ I just feel like following vocals here is the most intuitive thing to do for a beginner since that is what stands out the most) Fixed.
4. 01:01:427 (2,2) - do you think it is possible to avoid having these overlap? Remapped this part.
5. 02:05:177 (1) - 00:59:552 (1) - similar story for this one. I think phishi pointed like a bunch of these out but I feel like these really are the worst offenders (well that might be me anyways) Fixed stuff like this.
6. 02:55:802 (1) - same story ^
7. 03:20:645 (4) - could move this down and to the left a bit, makes catching the next slider smoother Remapped this part, basically.
   
   Normal
   
8. 00:18:302 (5,6) - use 1.1 for these too? oh yeah right
9. 00:34:240 (4,5,6) - both vocals and the weird eletronical sound here land on the blue tick, so the current rythm is kinda skipping that. Could just use a 3/4 repeat here imo A 3/4 slider feels too... odd here? I don't know; I can't find the right word for it. But it just feels really, really weird.
10. 00:42:677 (5) - honestly don't really see a reason for this repeat here. The sound that is being skipped on the white tick feels ALOT stronger than whatever sound is being mapped right now. Would probably just make this a 1/1 Changed.
11. 01:30:489 (1) - missing a clap here? had on in the Easy Diff >w< Added.
12. 02:18:302 (4,5,6,7) - would probably use something that is similar to 01:12:677 (4,5,6) - rythm wise. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3412930 for example feels a lot more intuitive This is... different, I suppose? You can't really map them with the same rhythm.
    
    Passion
    
13. 00:50:880 (5,1) - was kind expecting something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413013 (basically just the slider ctrl+g and slightly re-arranged. Larger drop felt like it went along nicely with the new track. Would have to re-arrange the following slider though soo ehh if you're happy with how this currently looks don't bother Sure; I made it more rotated clockwise, though.
14. 02:04:708 (1,2,1) - could so something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413050 which allows for more emphasize on the downbeat, which works really well here with the previous stream working as a build-up and introducing the player to 1/4 rythm Ah okay.
    
    lovely Diff, not much for me to find c:
    
    blergh mod ended up being kinda sucky
    
    Good luck!

Shurelia wrote:

おっす!やったよ!
from my queue


~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~

[General]

- BG issue that already being discussed with the mapper. Probably reverting later.
- Remove .osb file since you seems didn't using any SB or there is? Deleted.

[Easy]

1. 01:37:052 (3) - The slider-slider's sound at here is quite disturbing. Should be silenced. ok
2. 01:55:333 (2) - Distance issue at here. RIP

[Normal]

1. 00:26:036 (3) - Move this a bit upper left to remove the overlap. ok
2. 03:21:348 - only a personal opinion but how about to add an object at here since i feel like i want to click something at here. I don't feel the need to do so...

[Passion]

1. 00:09:865 (1,2) - These two could make a confusion with 00:10:802 (4,5,6) - since it has a same look but different play. Would suggest to unstack (1). Pretty sure they look quite different...

Mmh, already a good map for me.
That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!

Owntrolf wrote:

• Easy

  Yu so risuki with deesu row notsu, wa0 almosuto outosaidu sukureen 02:59:552 (1) - the level of daring, over9000 moved
  
  00:15:490 (1,2) - I must complain about blankets even the 1 pixel ones pls
  00:34:240 (3) - Maybe add a curve to this to flow better?
  SPOILER

  
  ok
  00:35:646 (4) - This sounds really quiet to me Removed.
  00:51:115 (1,2) - Why not move these closer to the center so you can use symmetry (you might need to move 00:49:240 (2,3) - to match it too I don't really think it's needed...
  01:01:427 (3) - Change to 1/1 repeat and then add a circle after to match the vocals better? ok
  01:08:927 (3) - Why not reuse the same point as 01:06:583 (4) - for the perfect triangle:> Illuminati Confirmed I think I... changed this part a little bit.
  01:44:083 (2,3) - Why not move the two to make it look nicer by having a good smiley face
  SPOILER

  
  pls
  01:48:302 (3,4,1) - Move all this 1 px to the right for perfect symmetry no need; won't be noticeable in-game anyway

• Normal

  00:17:365 (3,5) - HOW DARE 3 TOUCH 5 fixed
  00:24:865 (1,3) - HOW DARE 1 TOUCH 3 ^
  01:03:302 (1,2,3) - Triangle ocd active ^
  01:36:114 (2,3) - #blankets circles are cold ok...

[/notice]


I like how passionate isnt as daring wit things almost falling off the screen like in easy

1. Fine

1. 00:07:990 (1,2) - The flow here is not good. Probably because 1 is a slider and they are not stacked together so Approaching circle is hard to determine the rhythm.
2. 00:08:927 (1,2) - ^
3. 00:24:396 (1,1) - A bit confused about the NC because It seems that only for emphasizing a heavy beat doesn't really need an NC. Besides, if you try to follow the music (instead of the beat), use normal-hitwhistle at 00:24:865 (1) - would be better because soft-hitwhistle can hardly be heard, especially when playing. Otherwise, why did you set normal-hitwhistle at 00:24:396 (1) - ?
4. 01:45:958 (1,1) - ^
5. 00:28:615 (1) - ^
6. 00:27:208 (2,3,4) - Don't use 1/4 here. It starts from the white line and ends at the red line, which makes less sense than the triplets start from the red line. What's more, the music doesn't show this.
7. 00:42:208 (2,3,4) - ^ Move 00:42:325 (3) - to 00:42:091 - and the rhythm will be much better.
8. 01:09:864 (4,5,6) - ^
9. 02:58:614 (4,5,6) - ^
10. 00:35:177 (1) - Try to use soft-* hitsound at tail? I noticed that you've turn down the volume because there is no drum at tail.
11. 00:50:177 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to make a regular triangle?
12. 00:58:614 (5,1) - swap NC (Such NC suggestions are based on the way you've NCed previously)
13. 01:06:114 (6) - NC
14. 01:09:864 (5) - ^
15. 01:10:567 (9,10,1) - Why not use 1/8 here, just as you did before?
16. 02:08:809 - ^ (Making it empty here is even more weird)
17. 03:14:434 (5) - ^
18. 01:17:364 (4) - NC
19. 01:19:239 (3) - ^
20. 01:26:739 (5) - ^
21. 02:12:208 (3) - Making it a 1/2 slider will be better in rhythm.
22. 02:16:778 - Adding a note here will be better because you can clearly hear the voice.
23. 02:07:520 (1,2) - swap NC
24. 02:15:489 (5) - NC
25. 02:22:989 (4) - ^
26. 02:30:489 (4) - ^
27. 02:34:708 (1) - remove NC?
28. 02:38:458 (1) - ^
29. 02:58:614 (4) - NC
30. 03:14:552 (1,2,3,4) - (totally personal) I thought you would add more 1/4 in the final kiai. For example, from 03:05:411 - to 03:08:927 -

1. 02:15:958 (4,1) - nazi blanket
2. 02:08:458 (5) - whistle to respond to vocal? (If you want to, adapt it to the whole map)
3. 02:31:427 (5) - NC?

1. 00:00:490 (1) - Kinda too short for newbies?
2. 00:20:880 (4,2) - nazi blanket
3. 01:42:677 (1,2) - ^
4. 01:02:364 (4) - same as Easy
5. 01:27:442 (4) - split it into 2 circles to emphasize the heavy beat at 01:27:677 - ?
6. 01:38:458 (5,1) - same as Passion about the whistle
7. 02:31:427 (7) - NC?
8. 03:10:333 - whistle here. If you try to follow the music to set whistle like 03:02:364 (5) -
9. 03:23:927 (3,4,5,6) - Circles don't fit the music here imo. Sliders are better to show the feeling of dragging. (My bad English ;w;)

1. 00:10:099 (2,4) - ugly overlap
2. 03:08:927 (1,4) - ^
3. 01:03:653 (2,3) - Try to make rhythm like 00:59:903 (2) - ? A bit difficult for a Hard.
4. 01:22:052 (1,2,3) - ^
5. 02:08:927 (1,2,3) - ^
6. 02:13:614 (2,3,4) - ^
7. 02:52:052 (1,2,3) - ^
8. 02:56:739 (3,4,5) - ^
9. 01:13:614 (4) - Remove the clap here? It feels weird.
10. 01:15:958 (4) - clap
11. 03:18:302 (1,2,3) - Why the triplet is placed so irregular XD