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Raediaufar

logitechf1f4 wrote:

Here my Mod as requested from my queue

column format |1|2|3|4|

NOVICE
00:12:604 (12604|2) - add 1 note here
00:20:604 (20604|0) - ^
00:21:271 (21271|1) - ^ - don't hear anything/color]
00:25:937 (25937|1) - ^
00:32:271 (32271|0) - change to SN
00:32:493 (32493|3) - ^ here 00:32:604 (32604|3) - in column 4
00:53:271 (53271|0) - inconsisten pattern add 1 note here (following previous pattern before LNs) different sound, btw it's only low kick sound and i think one note only is good
00:53:937 (53937|3) - ^
00:54:604 (54604|2) - ^
00:55:271 (55271|3) - ^
00:55:937 (55937|3) - ^
00:56:604 (56604|2) - end here 00:58:104 (58104|3) it actually ends here - 00:57:854 -
00:59:271 (59271|1) - add 1 note
01:07:271 (67271|2) - ^ in column 1
01:09:937 (69937|1) - add 1 note
01:18:271 (78271|0) - move to 3
01:21:937 (81937|3) - add 1 note LN only is good i think
01:23:271 (83271|2) - ^ too hard for novice
01:36:937 (96937|0) - move to 2
01:39:937 (99937|2) - move to 4
01:40:604 (100604|0) - move to 2

ADVANCED
00:03:604 (3604|2) - move to 4 for balance
00:07:104 (7104|0) - add 1 note in column 1 i think it's not necesarry and that's not strong sound
00:08:104 (8104|1) - move to 3
00:10:687 (10687|2,10771|1,10854|0) - move right 1 column
00:10:937 (10937|1) - move to 1 and move to 4
00:11:104 (11104|0) - move to 3
00:13:771 (13771|1) - move to 4
00:13:937 (13937|3) - move to 2
00:20:104 (20104|1) - move to 4 for balance
00:20:271 (20271|1) - move to 3^
00:20:437 (20437|1) - move to 4^
00:49:437 (49437|3) - move to1^
00:49:437 (49437|3,62771|0,62854|1,62937|2) - move uo 1 grid
01:04:937 (64937|2) - move to 2
01:10:104 (70104|0) - move to 2
01:10:437 (70437|1) - move to 4
01:12:437 (72437|3) - move to 2
01:13:937 (73937|0) - move to 4
01:26:604 (86604|2,86771|1) - ctrl + G
01:27:271 (87271|1,87437|2) - ^
01:28:437 (88437|0) - move to 2

That's all from me, you should consider to rearrange alot of jack notes in ADVANCED, some of them are too hard for ADV diff. Good Luck ( '')b
thanks a lot for your mod :) remap a lot of patterns on the reff part on Advanced diff. No reply means accepted or remap
Verniy_Chan

Hi Ufar-san (lol gak tau manggilmu apa?) >.<)/
NM as requested from ☆ Moe Hunter Mania Queue ☆

General : ( )
Mapset : ( )
Metadata : ( ) hpus yooh di tagmu, krena konflik dngan artist, dan tmbahkan dj TAKA sbg Composition ,boleh jg tmbahkan ini Production Confirmation Commemorative Remix Contest . source https://remywiki.com/Snow_storm_-euphoria-
Timing : ( ) kiai unsnap (check aimod)
Audio : ( ) penempatan Preview pointmu slah, biasanya itu dkat2 kiai
Background : ( )

4K = |1|2|3|4|


(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variation/Consistency Pattern)


NOVICE
00:04:271 (4271|2) move to 1, hand balance, terus 00:03:604 (3604|1) move to 3
00:17:937 (17937|3,18104|2) Ctrl + G
00:22:604 slah satunya, ganti jd LN, stream beat
00:25:937 add note, utk beat
00:48:604 (48604|1) move to 1
00:55:604 (55604|2) move to 2
01:23:937 sharusnya ada note disini
01:27:271 (87271|2) move to 2
01:33:937 (93937|2) move to 1
01:52:521 (112521|3) move to 2
ADVANCED
00:22:604 - 00:22:937 ada stream beat disni? tmbah note atau LN jika mau
00:28:937 (28937|3) move to 3
nice..
EXHAUST
00:00:604 utk diff ini bisa tmbah LN disini
00:06:854 add note, piano?
00:11:104 add note
00:18:521 gak tmbah note disini? coba cek 00:15:854
00:22:854 add note?
00:47:271 gak tmbah note disini?
01:14:271 add note utk beat
01:20:604 add note
01:45:104 - 01:45:271 missing pattern disini
That all, nice pattern desu~
Good Luck -nya~ (づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ
Topic Starter
Raediaufar

Verniy_Chan wrote:


Hi Ufar-san (lol gak tau manggilmu apa?) >.<)/
NM as requested from ☆ Moe Hunter Mania Queue ☆

General : ( )
Mapset : ( )
Metadata : ( ) hpus yooh di tagmu, krena konflik dngan artist, dan tmbahkan dj TAKA sbg Composition ,boleh jg tmbahkan ini Production Confirmation Commemorative Remix Contest . source https://remywiki.com/Snow_storm_-euphoria-
Timing : ( ) kiai unsnap (check aimod)
Audio : ( ) penempatan Preview pointmu slah, biasanya itu dkat2 kiai
Background : ( )

4K = |1|2|3|4|


(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variation/Consistency Pattern)


NOVICE
00:04:271 (4271|2) move to 1, hand balance, terus 00:03:604 (3604|1) move to 3
00:17:937 (17937|3,18104|2) Ctrl + G - ngikuti suara kick
00:22:604 slah satunya, ganti jd LN, stream beat
00:25:937 add note, utk beat - two people recommmend this, accepted
00:48:604 (48604|1) move to 1
00:55:604 (55604|2) move to 2
01:23:937 sharusnya ada note disini - ini keknya terlalu sulit nuat novice, tapi udah dua orang merekomendasiin jadi accepted
01:27:271 (87271|2) move to 2
01:33:937 (93937|2) move to 1
01:52:521 (112521|3) move to 2
ADVANCED
00:22:604 - 00:22:937 ada stream beat disni? tmbah note atau LN jika mau
00:28:937 (28937|3) move to 3
nice..
EXHAUST
00:00:604 utk diff ini bisa tmbah LN disini personal choice, nggak
00:06:854 add note, piano?
00:11:104 add note
00:18:521 gak tmbah note disini? coba cek 00:15:854
00:22:854 add note?
00:47:271 gak tmbah note disini?
01:14:271 add note utk beat
01:20:604 add note - nope
01:45:104 - 01:45:271 missing pattern disini - lol, why i'm so baka XD
That all, nice pattern desu~
Good Luck -nya~ (づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ
panggil saya aufar aja oke :) great mod as expected
x M e l
Hi :3 mod for req via queue

columns 1|2|3|4

[NOVICE]
00:06:604 (6604|2) - move to 4
00:10:604 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3054123
00:15:271 - add note in 3
00:15:854 - http://puu.sh/hqnC4/0ee57aae53.png
00:31:937 - add in 1
00:34:937 - add in 2
00:39:937 - http://puu.sh/hqnYS/b90ad368f0.png
01:23:937 - delete one note
01:34:604 - add in 3
01:39:271 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3054190
01:52:729 - http://puu.sh/hqoig/ecdca3fb59.png http://puu.sh/hqoiD/d455769c7b.png
01:53:687 - this note in 01:53:660 -
01:53:937 - in 01:53:882 -
01:54:521 - in 01:54:479 -
01:54:854 - in 01:54:812 -

[ADVANCED]
00:04:604 - stream starts here, no here 00:04:854 -
01:01:271 - clap
01:02:604 - ^
01:03:937 - ^
01:16:271 - delete whistle
01:27:271 - clap
01:28:604 - ^
and there are more for add
01:53:687 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3054295 same than NOVICE with this notes

good luck~
Topic Starter
Raediaufar

Meiko Senpai wrote:

Hi :3 mod for req via queue

columns 1|2|3|4

[NOVICE]
00:06:604 (6604|2) - move to 4 - oh sure
00:10:604 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3054123 - okay
00:15:271 - add note in 3 - umm. no additional sound in there
00:15:854 - http://puu.sh/hqnC4/0ee57aae53.png - seems good
00:31:937 - add in 1 - ok
00:34:937 - add in 2 - if there another people recommend this, this will be accepted
00:39:937 - http://puu.sh/hqnYS/b90ad368f0.png - okay
01:23:937 - delete one note - okay, remove 1
01:34:604 - add in 3 - okay, and add finish there as well
01:39:271 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3054190 - omg, thanks a lot on this because I don't know how to do this part ;_;
01:52:729 - http://puu.sh/hqoig/ecdca3fb59.png http://puu.sh/hqoiD/d455769c7b.png - 1/8 seems better
01:53:687 - this note in 01:53:660 - - absolutely
01:53:937 - in 01:53:882 - - absolutely
01:54:521 - in 01:54:479 - - absolutely
01:54:854 - in 01:54:812 - - absolutely, and thanks a lot for help in this section

[ADVANCED]
00:04:604 - stream starts here, no here 00:04:854 - thanks, and I make it more symmetrical and mirrored
01:01:271 - clap - yes
01:02:604 - ^ - no
01:03:937 - ^ - no
01:16:271 - delete whistle I don't know, but I think it match with the sound
01:27:271 - clap finish sound better imo
01:28:604 - ^ - same as above, and I think the finish-clap transition will awkward imo
and there are more for add
01:53:687 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3054295 same than NOVICE with this notes

good luck~
MEGAtive

Hi
Mod from queue

[General]
Timing:
01:49:271 - BPM130
01:53:886 - BPM103
01:54:759 - BPM89

[EXHAUST]
Mods
00:04:604 (4604|3,5937|0) - Delete LN2 ini. Gk ad suara yg pas buat LNnya.
00:04:604 - Itu patternnya gk pas. Patternny begini. http://puu.sh/hrdY8/d472ca0d0a.png {Apply to other section with sound like this.}
00:09:337 - Coba gini. http://puu.sh/hre1N/a8adb3d0fb.png Lebih ikutin drumnya.
00:15:146 (15146|0,15187|1,15229|2) - Wrong snap. Snapny harusny 1/6.
00:22:604 (22604|0,22687|2,22771|2) - Wrong snap. Hrusny 1/3.
00:28:604 (28604|3,31271|1,31937|3,33271|2,34021|1) - Delete LN2 ini, dan fokus k suara Piano aja.
00:40:104 - 00:40:437 - 00:40:771 - Tambah not. Ad suara Kick.
00:43:437 (43437|0) - Pindah k 3. Lebih fit.
00:43:771 (43771|2,43854|1) - Ctrl+H. Lebih enak d pencetnya.
00:57:021 - Tambah not d sini. Kedengeran Leadnya.
01:07:521 (67521|3) - Pindah k 01:07:604
01:09:562 (69562|1) - Delete. Ghost note. Kickny gk mulai dri situ.
01:11:604 (71604|1,71660|2,71687|3,71771|2) - Snap 1/6.
01:12:187 (72187|1) - Delete. Gk ad Piano.
01:30:354 (90354|2) - Delete. Gk ad suara d sini.
01:45:354 - 01:45:687 - 01:45:687 - 01:46:104 - 01:46:187 - Ad Kicknya. Tambah not.

Diff lain udh keliatan kebentuk.
Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Raediaufar

MEGAtive wrote:


Hi
Mod from queue

[General]
Timing:
01:49:271 - BPM130
01:53:886 - BPM103
01:54:759 - BPM89

sebenarnya sih saya maunya dibikin SV disitu, bukan change bpm. Nanti kalo gak ada SV yang cocok sama sekali baru saya ganti bpm

[EXHAUST]
Mods
00:04:604 (4604|3,5937|0) - Delete LN2 ini. Gk ad suara yg pas buat LNnya. mm.. tunggu dulu, kalo ada orang lain yang rekomendasiin ini baru saya hapus LN nya
00:04:604 - Itu patternnya gk pas. Patternny begini. http://puu.sh/hrdY8/d472ca0d0a.png {Apply to other section with sound like this.} - apply pattern with some changes
00:09:337 - Coba gini. http://puu.sh/hre1N/a8adb3d0fb.png Lebih ikutin drumnya. - boleh - boleh, tapi LN tetap saya biarkan
00:15:146 (15146|0,15187|1,15229|2) - Wrong snap. Snapny harusny 1/6. - oke
00:22:604 (22604|0,22687|2,22771|2) - Wrong snap. Hrusny 1/3. - sepp
00:28:604 (28604|3,31271|1,31937|3,33271|2,34021|1) - Delete LN2 ini, dan fokus k suara Piano aja. - buat yang ini accepted karena LN + 1/6 itu sulit banget deh ._.
00:40:104 - 00:40:437 - 00:40:771 - Tambah not. Ad suara Kick. - okeh
00:43:437 (43437|0) - Pindah k 3. Lebih fit. - accepted
00:43:771 (43771|2,43854|1) - Ctrl+H. Lebih enak d pencetnya. accepted, sebenarnya sih bukan enak mencetnya tapi karena jack sama not sebelumnya. Mencet itu tergantung skill masing - masing 8-)
00:57:021 - Tambah not d sini. Kedengeran Leadnya. - sep
01:07:521 (67521|3) - Pindah k 01:07:604 - accepted
01:09:562 (69562|1) - Delete. Ghost note. Kickny gk mulai dri situ. - oh, bener juga. Accepted
01:11:604 (71604|1,71660|2,71687|3,71771|2) - Snap 1/6. - good
01:12:187 (72187|1) - Delete. Gk ad Piano. - accepted
01:30:354 (90354|2) - Delete. Gk ad suara d sini. - yep
01:45:354 - 01:45:687 - 01:45:687 - 01:46:104 - 01:46:187 - Ad Kicknya. Tambah not. - okey

Diff lain udh keliatan kebentuk.
Good Luck~
detail banget ini modnya, thanks a lot
Rinzler
M4M as requested, pake bahasa indo aja ya, ribet kalo pake inggris lel

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |


[General]
General
kenapa di folder mapnya, hitsoundnya namanya kick3,clap,bassdrum ?, kalo cuma 3 hitsound mending diganti jadi
soft-hitwistle
soft-hitclap
soft-hitfinish

biar ga ribet import sample

[Novice]
Novice
OD 6 HP 6

00:01:937 (1937|0,1937|3,2271|0,2604|2,2604|1,2937|3,3271|3,3271|0,3604|2,3937|2,3937|1,4271|0) - http://puu.sh/hyBZt/4a32a02e3e.jpg

00:12:104 (12104|0) - ini harusnya berhenti disini 00:12:271 -

00:14:937 (14937|1,14937|0) - pindah ke kanan 1x

00:22:271 (22271|1) - move ke 3

00:22:604 (22604|2) - move ke 4

00:22:937 (22937|3) - move ke 3

00:25:271 - add LN, berhenti disini 00:25:937 - biar ga terlalu kosong

00:29:937 - add note, masih ada piano soundnya disana, dan suaranya sama seperti note ini 00:30:937 (30937|3) -

00:51:271 - add note, bass sound

00:56:604 - ^

00:56:604 (56604|2,58021|3) - suara LN ini kurang nyambung deh kayanya

01:37:271 - ^

01:45:479 (105479|3) - start here 01:45:437 -

01:45:812 (105812|0) - start here 01:45:771 -

[Advanced]
Advanced
OD 7 HP 7

00:01:937 (1937|0,1937|3,2104|1,2271|1,2271|2,2437|3,2604|0,2604|2,2771|1,2937|2,2937|1) - http://puu.sh/hyCs6/fe0925c288.jpg

00:05:104 - add note

00:25:271 - add LN, end here 00:25:937 -

00:25:937 - add note

00:36:604 - coba dengerin beat musiknya baik", harusnya gini http://puu.sh/hyCFM/436ed7d23c.jpg

00:37:937 - http://puu.sh/hyCMm/11944b55c4.jpg

00:39:271 - http://puu.sh/hyCOZ/0b03cd955b.jpg

00:37:687 (37687|2) - move to 4, more balance

00:44:771 - add note, streamnya masih nyambung

00:44:854 - ^

00:57:271 - ^

00:58:021 - ^

01:39:937 (99937|1,99937|2) - move 1x ke kiri

01:45:479 (105479|0) - start here 01:45:437 -

01:45:812 (105812|3) - start here 01:45:771 -

[Exhaust]
Exhaust
OD 8 HP 8
it's a bit complicated to mod this diff

oh iya, itu timing yang dikasih megative apply aja, soalnya BPM =/= SV, dan dari lagunya pun udah jelas kalo BPM nya berubah, jadi ga bisa diakalin pake SV karena itu BPM Change, dan coba review lagi diffnya, perhatiin baik" beatnya, soalnya ada beberapa note yang kurang pas/ga konsisten, coba turunin sample volumenya jadi 0, supaya kedengeran beatnya

good luck ~
Topic Starter
Raediaufar

Rinzler wrote:

M4M as requested, pake bahasa indo aja ya, ribet kalo pake inggris lel

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |


[General]
General
kenapa di folder mapnya, hitsoundnya namanya kick3,clap,bassdrum ?, kalo cuma 3 hitsound mending diganti jadi
soft-hitwistle
soft-hitclap
soft-hitfinish

biar ga ribet import sample

hmmm... oke, tapi saya ada make suara finish sama whistle yang bawaan jadi clap aja yg applied.

[Novice]
Novice
OD 6 HP 6

00:01:937 (1937|0,1937|3,2271|0,2604|2,2604|1,2937|3,3271|3,3271|0,3604|2,3937|2,3937|1,4271|0) - http://puu.sh/hyBZt/4a32a02e3e.jpg

00:12:104 (12104|0) - ini harusnya berhenti disini 00:12:271 -

00:14:937 (14937|1,14937|0) - pindah ke kanan 1x

00:22:271 (22271|1) - move ke 3

00:22:604 (22604|2) - move ke 4

00:22:937 (22937|3) - move ke 3 - pattern ini jauh lebih baik, thanks owo

00:25:271 - add LN, berhenti disini 00:25:937 - biar ga terlalu kosong - no

00:29:937 - add note, masih ada piano soundnya disana, dan suaranya sama seperti note ini 00:30:937 (30937|3) -

00:51:271 - add note, bass sound

00:56:604 - ^

00:56:604 (56604|2,58021|3) - suara LN ini kurang nyambung deh kayanya - sebenarnya, LN nya berhenti disini -00:57:937 - tapi space LN yang itu sama yang selanjutnya jadi cuma 1/4 beat dan agak susah sih buat diff novice, tapi gak apa lah daripada gak nyambung

01:37:271 - ^ - fixed, kuubah jadi ngikutin beat aja

01:45:479 (105479|3) - start here 01:45:437 -

01:45:812 (105812|0) - start here 01:45:771 -

[Advanced]
Advanced
OD 7 HP 7

00:01:937 (1937|0,1937|3,2104|1,2271|1,2271|2,2437|3,2604|0,2604|2,2771|1,2937|2,2937|1) - http://puu.sh/hyCs6/fe0925c288.jpg

00:05:104 - add note

00:25:271 - add LN, end here 00:25:937 - -no, mungkin ini LN buat diff Exhaust aja

00:25:937 - add note

00:36:604 - coba dengerin beat musiknya baik", harusnya gini http://puu.sh/hyCFM/436ed7d23c.jpg

00:37:937 - http://puu.sh/hyCMm/11944b55c4.jpg

00:39:271 - http://puu.sh/hyCOZ/0b03cd955b.jpg

00:37:687 (37687|2) - move to 4, more balance - lah ini apa? udah apply pattern diatas om

00:44:771 - add note, streamnya masih nyambung

00:44:854 - ^

00:57:271 - ^

00:58:021 - ^

01:39:937 (99937|1,99937|2) - move 1x ke kiri

01:45:479 (105479|0) - start here 01:45:437 -

01:45:812 (105812|3) - start here 01:45:771 -

[Exhaust]
Exhaust
OD 8 HP 8
it's a bit complicated to mod this diff - yaelah..

oh iya, itu timing yang dikasih megative apply aja, soalnya BPM =/= SV, dan dari lagunya pun udah jelas kalo BPM nya berubah, jadi ga bisa diakalin pake SV karena itu BPM Change, dan coba review lagi diffnya, perhatiin baik" beatnya, soalnya ada beberapa note yang kurang pas/ga konsisten, coba turunin sample volumenya jadi 0, supaya kedengeran beatnya - ok, change bpm

good luck ~
no reply means ok, thanks a lot Rinzler-san ^^
Rilene
M4M request, thanks for modding but please read my private message that i sent to you

Column from left to right
1/2/3/4

NOVICE
00:22:271 (22271|0,22271|2) - Remove either of these note, this destroy the consistency (i know it is hard to maintain consistency)
00:58:021 (58021|3) - Make it longer by 1/4 beat, then move backward by 1/4 beat, just trying to maintaining consistency in the incoming pattern
01:34:604 - Might be better to add another note
01:39:354 (99354|0,99521|2,99604|1,99687|3,99854|0) - This part here uses 1/3 beat snap, did you resnap all note with 1/4 as beat snap divisor and forgot to resnap these note to correct beat snap divisor? :P

ADVANCED
00:01:937 - Missing note here
00:07:104 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3092894
00:12:604 - Missing note here, also if you are going to apply this, don't forget to move 00:12:771 (12771|2) - to column 4
00:15:271 - Add another note on column 4
00:15:437 (15437|1) - Move 1/2 beat foward
00:17:521 (17521|0) - Remove, there isn't the sound for this note to represent the sound here.
00:20:604 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3092908 or at least rearrange to your choice
00:28:604 - 00:33:937 - Some parts of the note here doesn't follow the piano correctly, try listen to 25% or 50% playback speed
00:33:937 - Add a hold note here
00:34:604 (34604|1) - Remove please, or add extra note to 00:33:937 - 00:34:271 - 00:34:937
00:40:437 (40437|0) - Move to column 3
00:48:604 - Add another note here
00:59:271 - Add another note here, don't forget to rearrange to the note nearby there, you might want to avoid 1/2 jacks
01:07:354 - Add another note here
01:11:271 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3092927
01:14:104 (74104|2,74187|1,74271|0,74271|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3092932
01:32:187 (92187|1,92271|0,92354|1) - Move backward by 1/4 beat
01:39:271 - A player get used to SV x1 through the map, then SV changes to x0.7 without any warning, how many miss does the player gets?
01:40:354 (100354|0) - Remove please
01:40:854 (100854|3,100937|2,101021|1,101104|0) - Move backward by 1/2 beat, you might want to rearrange the pattern too
01:41:521 (101521|0,101604|1,101687|2,101771|3) - Move backward by 1/2 beat, you might want to rearrange the pattern too
01:41:771 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3092955
01:44:021 - Add another note here
01:45:271 - Same as above.

EXHAUST
00:04:604 - One note missing here, add a note
00:05:937 - Same as above and also move 00:06:021 (6021|2) - to the rightest column
00:07:271 - One note missing here, add a note
00:11:854 - One note missing here, add a note
00:11:937 - Try make the pattern like above https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3089552 and also, you misplaced the second burst there, you know, burst like to either start either in white or red ticks.
00:15:104 - I suggest you to make it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3089562 and you also misplaced the burst, once again.
00:16:521 - 00:16:854 - 00:17:187 - 00:17:521 - Add a note on each section, you forgot a note to represent a piano sound.
00:19:271 - I recommend you to add another note here, to represent a cymbal or finish sound.
00:22:687 (22687|2) - You misplaced a note, move it 1/12 beat foward also I suggest you to add another note on 00:22:604 - any column works.
00:47:021 (47021|2,47062|3,47187|2,47229|3) - Ctrl + G looks better to me.
01:09:812 (69812|1) - Remove, because there is no 1/8 sounds here.
01:39:239 - The SV here might cause ragequit.
01:45:604 - 01:45:937 - 01:46:562 - 01:46:604 - Add a note here, you missed some of the notes.
00:09:937 - to - 00:11:937 - I'm sure you can make this harder, just make the pattern similar to the previous with exact same note, then add another note on every red ticks there, in the selected time range.


Overall here, some place lacks consistency but nice mapped though, try not to use too much zigzag, just to make it look nicer.
I mostly mod the missing/misplaced or note that isn't supposed to exist there.

Good luck on getting ranked! :D
Hope my mod is useful. :?
Topic Starter
Raediaufar

Sirade wrote:

M4M request, thanks for modding but please read my private message that i sent to you

Column from left to right
1/2/3/4

NOVICE
00:22:271 (22271|0,22271|2) - Remove either of these note, this destroy the consistency (i know it is hard to maintain consistency) - why? its a strong sounds there

00:58:021 (58021|3) - Make it longer by 1/4 beat, then move backward by 1/4 beat, just trying to maintaining consistency in the incoming pattern - yeah, i was thinking that too, but the sound actually starts from - 00:58:021 - and the previous LN ends at - 00:57:937 - and yes there are 1/4 beat space between both sounds.

01:34:604 - Might be better to add another note I think that is too hard for novice

01:39:354 (99354|0,99521|2,99604|1,99687|3,99854|0) - This part here uses 1/3 beat snap, did you resnap all note with 1/4 as beat snap divisor and forgot to resnap these note to correct beat snap divisor? :P oh, I didn't notice that XD

ADVANCED
00:01:937 - Missing note here - ok, add 3
00:07:104 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3092894 - no
00:12:604 - Missing note here, also if you are going to apply this, don't forget to move 00:12:771 (12771|2) - to column 4 - no, double is enough
00:15:271 - Add another note on column 4 I think - okay
00:15:437 (15437|1) - Move 1/2 beat foward - yes
00:17:521 (17521|0) - Remove, there isn't the sound for this note to represent the sound here. - oh, I didn't notice that
00:20:604 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3092908 or at least rearrange to your choice - yeah, I also found the pattern is bad, but I arrange the pattern in different thing. Thanks for this

00:28:604 - 00:33:937 - Some parts of the note here doesn't follow the piano correctly, try listen to 25% or 50% playback speed - change the pattern

00:33:937 - Add a hold note here - the LN is based on the piano sound, there's no piano sound there
00:34:604 (34604|1) - Remove please, or add extra note to 00:33:937 - 00:34:271 - 00:34:937 - remove
00:40:437 (40437|0) - Move to column 3 okay
00:48:604 - Add another note here - yes
00:59:271 - Add another note here, don't forget to rearrange to the note nearby there, you might want to avoid 1/2 jacks - no, because the sound is not strong enough i think
01:07:354 - Add another note here
01:11:271 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3092927 - great, I didn't notice this
01:14:104 (74104|2,74187|1,74271|0,74271|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3092932 - okay
01:32:187 (92187|1,92271|0,92354|1) - Move backward by 1/4 beat - okay
01:39:271 - A player get used to SV x1 through the map, then SV changes to x0.7 without any warning, how many miss does the player gets? - removed
01:40:354 (100354|0) - Remove please
01:40:854 (100854|3,100937|2,101021|1,101104|0) - Move backward by 1/2 beat, you might want to rearrange the pattern too
01:41:521 (101521|0,101604|1,101687|2,101771|3) - Move backward by 1/2 beat, you might want to rearrange the pattern too change the pattern for this and three mod before
01:41:771 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3092955 - okay
01:44:021 - Add another note here - yes
01:45:271 - Same as above. - yes

EXHAUST
00:04:604 - One note missing here, add a note - no
00:05:937 - Same as above and also move 00:06:021 (6021|2) - to the rightest column - no, and why I should move it to column 4?
00:07:271 - One note missing here, add a note - no, jack indeed
00:11:854 - One note missing here, add a note - oh, I didn't notice the kick there
00:11:937 - Try make the pattern like above https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3089552 and also, you misplaced the second burst there, you know, burst like to either start either in white or red ticks. - not following your pattern, I'm only move the second burst 1/8 beat further

00:15:104 - I suggest you to make it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3089562 and you also misplaced the burst, once again. - yeah, just notice it before, applied

00:16:521 - 00:16:854 - 00:17:187 - 00:17:521 - Add a note on each section, you forgot a note to represent a piano sound. - I'm not follow the piano sound there because it doesn't sound loud.

00:19:271 - I recommend you to add another note here, to represent a cymbal or finish sound. - accepted

00:22:687 (22687|2) - You misplaced a note, move it 1/12 beat foward also I suggest you to add another note on 00:22:604 - any column works. - moving the note but not ad any note at 00:22:604

00:47:021 (47021|2,47062|3,47187|2,47229|3) - Ctrl + G looks better to me. - me as well

01:09:812 (69812|1) - Remove, because there is no 1/8 sounds here. - didn't notice it, thanks

01:39:239 - The SV here might cause ragequit. - I think it's ok, by the way it's exhaust.

01:45:604 - 01:45:937 - 01:46:562 - 01:46:604 - Add a note here, you missed some of the notes. - fixed

00:09:937 - to - 00:11:937 - I'm sure you can make this harder, just make the pattern similar to the previous with exact same note, then add another note on every red ticks there, in the selected time range. - applied


Overall here, some place lacks consistency but nice mapped though, try not to use too much zigzag, just to make it look nicer.
I mostly mod the missing/misplaced or note that isn't supposed to exist there.

Good luck on getting ranked! :D
Hope my mod is useful. :?
thanks for the mod Sirade, :3
Rivals_7
Hi~ From my queue.
Sorry I'm late. Busy IRL :3

Click me :3
Exhaust

00:30:104 (30104|2,30187|1,30271|0) - Ghost notes
00:31:937 - add note. listen it with 25%
00:33:104 (33104|0) - Ghost notes
01:07:521 - Missing note here
01:09:521 - ^

advanced

00:10:937 (10937|3) - is the same sound like - 00:10:604 (10604|0) - and why is that have to be 2 notes?
00:30:354 (30354|3) - no sound
00:12:937 - Missing note?

Yeah it's short. But I hope this is helpful
GL~ :)
Topic Starter
Raediaufar

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi~ From my queue.
Sorry I'm late. Busy IRL :3

Click me :3
Exhaust

00:30:104 (30104|2,30187|1,30271|0) - Ghost notes
00:31:937 - add note. listen it with 25%
00:33:104 (33104|0) - Ghost notes
01:07:521 - Missing note here
01:09:521 - ^

advanced

00:10:937 (10937|3) - is the same sound like - 00:10:604 (10604|0) - and why is that have to be 2 notes? - if you listen closely, you can hear the kick, and also, add another notes on 00:10:604
00:30:354 (30354|3) - no sound
00:12:937 - Missing note?

Yeah it's short. But I hope this is helpful
GL~ :)
no reply means fixed, thanks Rivals :')
paperlens
Hi~~~ From my queue :)


Column 1|2|3|4


sorry for delay...
Most of these mods are just advice, feel free to reject~~so Lets start~~ :D

General
  1. 1. Your Mp3 quality is bad, I highly suggest you find a better one before further modding, because I think the low quality has already influenced you a lot on mapping.
  2. 2. It seems that you have some notes unsnapped and have lost some sounds. I didn't point every of it out because I'm not sure.. So please find a better Mp3
  3. 3. Highly suggest you pay more attention to Pitch Relevancy on this map, because its mostly piano. It's hard for me to point out every of it.

ADVANCED
00:05:771 - add
00:05:937 - add
00:07:104 - add
00:09:937 - add
00:11:271 - 00:11:604 - 00:11:937 - 00:12:271 - add
if you reject all these 'add', maybe you should delete these:
00:04:604 (4604|3) - 00:05:604 (5604|0) - 00:10:271 (10271|0) - 00:10:604 (10604|0) - 00:10:937 (10937|3) -

00:16:521 - 00:16:854 - 00:17:187 - 00:17:521 - consider to add at these point, more fit the music

00:21:854 - I think there is also a sound, add?
what's more, 00:16:604 - you used thiple notes at these sounds, so 00:21:937 - from here on it should be triple, too.
maybe add at 00:22:187 - 00:22:521 -

00:22:715 - 00:22:826 - add

00:31:271 (31271|0,31354|1,31437|2,31521|3,31604|2,31687|1,31771|0,31854|1,31937|2,32021|3,32104|2,32160|0,32215|1,32271|2) - it's confusing that it didn't snap

00:42:187 (42187|2) - suggest to move to 00:42:104 - , and
00:42:521 (42521|1,42854|2,43187|0,43521|0,43854|3,44187|1,44521|3) - ^

00:59:854 - 01:01:187 - add, also in EXHAUST

01:01:937 - 01:02:604 - add

01:17:354 - there is a sound with low pitch, so add at 1, also in EXHAUST

01:17:437 (77437|3,77521|2,77604|1,77687|0,77771|2,77854|1) - move to 3, 4, 3, 2, 1, 2 for pitch relevancy

01:18:104 (78104|1) - move to 3, 01:18:187 (78187|2) - move to 1, for pitch relevancy

01:32:687 (92687|2) - delete, and add at 01:32:437 - on 1, 01:32:521 - on 2, 01:32:604 (92604|1) - move to 3,
01:32:771 - add on 2, 01:32:854 (92854|0,92937|1) - move to 3,4

01:33:771 - add on 1, 01:33:854 - add on 2,
01:33:937 (93937|1) - move to 4,
01:34:021 (94021|3) - move to 2,
01:34:187 (94187|1) - move to 4,
01:34:271 (94271|0) - move to 3.

01:45:604 - add
01:45:937 - add
01:46:021 - add
01:46:104 - add
01:46:187 - add

01:54:934 - add also in EXHAUST

EXHAUST
00:12:271 - add

00:15:049 - add, piano sound here.

00:15:271 - add for drum sound.

00:22:604 (22604|0,22715|2,22826|2) - all move to column 2, they have same sound.

00:29:437 - 00:29:521 - I also hear piano sounds there.

00:57:937 - 00:58:271 - 00:58:521 - 00:58:604 - 00:58:771 - 00:58:937 - 00:59:104 - add

00:59:271 (59271|0) - delete one note, I don't think it worth 4 notes.

01:11:604 (71604|0,71660|1,71715|2,71771|3) - move to 3, 4, 3, 2, for Pitch

01:16:437 - add

01:28:937 - 01:29:271 - add

01:32:771 - add, there is a sound.

That's all, Good luck on this map~~ :D
schwarzvgrune

paperlens wrote:

Hi~~~ From my queue :)


Column 1|2|3|4


sorry for delay...
Most of these mods are just advice, feel free to reject~~so Lets start~~ :D

General
  1. 1. Your Mp3 quality is bad, I highly suggest you find a better one before further modding, because I think the low quality has already influenced you a lot on mapping.
  2. 2. It seems that you have some notes unsnapped and have lost some sounds. I didn't point every of it out because I'm not sure.. So please find a better Mp3
  3. 3. Highly suggest you pay more attention to Pitch Relevancy on this map, because its mostly piano. It's hard for me to point out every of it.

ADVANCED
00:05:771 - add
00:05:937 - add
00:07:104 - add
00:09:937 - add
00:11:271 - 00:11:604 - 00:11:937 - 00:12:271 - add
if you reject all these 'add', maybe you should delete these:
00:04:604 (4604|3) - 00:05:604 (5604|0) - 00:10:271 (10271|0) - 00:10:604 (10604|0) - 00:10:937 (10937|3) -

00:16:521 - 00:16:854 - 00:17:187 - 00:17:521 - consider to add at these point, more fit the music

00:21:854 - I think there is also a sound, add?
what's more, 00:16:604 - you used thiple notes at these sounds, so 00:21:937 - from here on it should be triple, too.
maybe add at 00:22:187 - 00:22:521 -

00:22:715 - 00:22:826 - add

00:31:271 (31271|0,31354|1,31437|2,31521|3,31604|2,31687|1,31771|0,31854|1,31937|2,32021|3,32104|2,32160|0,32215|1,32271|2) - it's confusing that it didn't snap

00:42:187 (42187|2) - suggest to move to 00:42:104 - , and
00:42:521 (42521|1,42854|2,43187|0,43521|0,43854|3,44187|1,44521|3) - ^

00:59:854 - 01:01:187 - add, also in EXHAUST

01:01:937 - 01:02:604 - add

01:17:354 - there is a sound with low pitch, so add at 1, also in EXHAUST

01:17:437 (77437|3,77521|2,77604|1,77687|0,77771|2,77854|1) - move to 3, 4, 3, 2, 1, 2 for pitch relevancy

01:18:104 (78104|1) - move to 3, 01:18:187 (78187|2) - move to 1, for pitch relevancy

01:32:687 (92687|2) - delete, and add at 01:32:437 - on 1, 01:32:521 - on 2, 01:32:604 (92604|1) - move to 3,
01:32:771 - add on 2, 01:32:854 (92854|0,92937|1) - move to 3,4

01:33:771 - add on 1, 01:33:854 - add on 2,
01:33:937 (93937|1) - move to 4,
01:34:021 (94021|3) - move to 2,
01:34:187 (94187|1) - move to 4,
01:34:271 (94271|0) - move to 3.

01:45:604 - add
01:45:937 - add
01:46:021 - add
01:46:104 - add
01:46:187 - add

01:54:934 - add also in EXHAUST

EXHAUST
00:12:271 - add

00:15:049 - add, piano sound here.

00:15:271 - add for drum sound.

00:22:604 (22604|0,22715|2,22826|2) - all move to column 2, they have same sound.

00:29:437 - 00:29:521 - I also hear piano sounds there.

00:57:937 - 00:58:271 - 00:58:521 - 00:58:604 - 00:58:771 - 00:58:937 - 00:59:104 - add

00:59:271 (59271|0) - delete one note, I don't think it worth 4 notes.

01:11:604 (71604|0,71660|1,71715|2,71771|3) - move to 3, 4, 3, 2, for Pitch

01:16:437 - add

01:28:937 - 01:29:271 - add

01:32:771 - add, there is a sound.

That's all, Good luck on this map~~ :D

きゃああああああああああああああああああああああああああああああああああああああああ!!!!!!!!!
換了頭像!!!!!!!最新的那麼萌呀!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!o(≧v≦)o~~好棒
正太!正太!正太!
schwarzvgrune
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In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
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(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
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Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )




ADV
00:07:104 - add a note, piano pitch is here

00:56:104 (56104|1,56187|0) - drag 1x to right

00:55:104 (55104|3) - move to 2

00:56:437 (56437|2,56521|3) - drag 1x to left

01:01:937 - add a note
01:31:937 (91937|3) - move to 2

01:32:104 (92104|1,92187|2,92271|3) - ctrl G


no reason not to follow PR for the following phase, because you only follow that piano pitch.

01:51:578 (111578|2) - move to 1
01:52:040 (112040|0) - 2
01:52:501 (112501|3) - 3
01:52:732 (112732|3,112809|2,112886|1,112963|0) - ctrl G

01:53:194 (113194|2) - 1

01:53:655 (113655|2,113886|3) - ctrl G

01:54:177 (114177|2,114468|1) - drag 1x to left

01:54:808 (114808|0,114976|3,115032|2,115088|1,115145|0) - also readjust.


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O
Topic Starter
Raediaufar

paperlens wrote:

Hi~~~ From my queue :)


Column 1|2|3|4


sorry for delay...
Most of these mods are just advice, feel free to reject~~so Lets start~~ :D

General
  1. 1. Your Mp3 quality is bad, I highly suggest you find a better one before further modding, because I think the low quality has already influenced you a lot on mapping.
  2. 2. It seems that you have some notes unsnapped and have lost some sounds. I didn't point every of it out because I'm not sure.. So please find a better Mp3
  3. 3. Highly suggest you pay more attention to Pitch Relevancy on this map, because its mostly piano. It's hard for me to point out every of it.

ADVANCED
00:05:771 - add
00:05:937 - add
00:07:104 - add no additional sound in there
00:09:937 - add
00:11:271 - 00:11:604 - 00:11:937 - 00:12:271 - add
if you reject all these 'add', maybe you should delete these:
00:04:604 (4604|3) - 00:05:604 (5604|0) - 00:10:271 (10271|0) - 00:10:604 (10604|0) - 00:10:937 (10937|3) - - ok, add. But I don't see why I should add note the - 00:12:271 - there's no other sound

00:16:521 - 00:16:854 - 00:17:187 - 00:17:521 - consider to add at these point, more fit the music - I think it's too hard for advance D:

00:21:854 - I think there is also a sound, add?
what's more, 00:16:604 - you used thiple notes at these sounds, so 00:21:937 - from here on it should be triple, too.
maybe add at 00:22:187 - 00:22:521 -

00:22:715 - 00:22:826 - add

00:31:271 (31271|0,31354|1,31437|2,31521|3,31604|2,31687|1,31771|0,31854|1,31937|2,32021|3,32104|2,32160|0,32215|1,32271|2) - it's confusing that it didn't snap - those notes are actually in 1/6 beat, but I still don't know to put that long 1/6 beat stairs in a way the "advance" way. So, I decided to put that on 1/4 and a bit 1/6 at the end. I'm seriously need help on this T_T

00:42:187 (42187|2) - suggest to move to 00:42:104 - , and
00:42:521 (42521|1,42854|2,43187|0,43521|0,43854|3,44187|1,44521|3) - ^

00:59:854 - 01:01:187 - add, also in EXHAUST - umm... no

01:01:937 - 01:02:604 - add - I think no

01:17:354 - there is a sound with low pitch, so add at 1, also in EXHAUST - sorry, but I don't hear anything. And also low sound maybe

01:17:437 (77437|3,77521|2,77604|1,77687|0,77771|2,77854|1) - move to 3, 4, 3, 2, 1, 2 for pitch relevancy

01:18:104 (78104|1) - move to 3, 01:18:187 (78187|2) - move to 1, for pitch relevancy - the pattern seems awkward to me

01:32:687 (92687|2) - delete, and add at 01:32:437 - on 1, 01:32:521 - on 2, 01:32:604 (92604|1) - move to 3,
01:32:771 - add on 2, 01:32:854 (92854|0,92937|1) - move to 3,4 accept the first, but reject others

01:33:771 - add on 1, 01:33:854 - add on 2, - no
01:33:937 (93937|1) - move to 4,
01:34:021 (94021|3) - move to 2,
01:34:187 (94187|1) - move to 4,
01:34:271 (94271|0) - move to 3. - sorry, but I have another better patter :D

01:45:604 - add - no
01:45:937 - add ^
01:46:021 - add ^
01:46:104 - add ^
01:46:187 - add ^

01:54:934 - add also in EXHAUST

EXHAUST
00:12:271 - add

00:15:049 - add, piano sound here.

00:15:271 - add for drum sound.

00:22:604 (22604|0,22715|2,22826|2) - all move to column 2, they have same sound.

00:29:437 - 00:29:521 - I also hear piano sounds there. - I didn't hear anything at -00:29:437- ._.

00:57:937 - 00:58:271 - 00:58:521 - 00:58:604 - 00:58:771 - 00:58:937 - 00:59:104 - add

00:59:271 (59271|0) - delete one note, I don't think it worth 4 notes.

01:11:604 (71604|0,71660|1,71715|2,71771|3) - move to 3, 4, 3, 2, for Pitch

01:16:437 - add

01:28:937 - 01:29:271 - add - no

01:32:771 - add, there is a sound.

That's all, Good luck on this map~~ :D
ok, thanks a lowt :')

for the mp3, because I have work on this map for a long time and many people have modded it, I think I better use this mp3 instead looking for others. Except if I find this mp3 is a problem to rank the map, I will change it. Thanks for the advice :')

schwarzvgrune wrote:

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Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


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In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )




ADV
00:07:104 - add a note, piano pitch is here no additional sound

00:56:104 (56104|1,56187|0) - drag 1x to right

00:55:104 (55104|3) - move to 2

00:56:437 (56437|2,56521|3) - drag 1x to left - I have make another pattern in the previous one, keep

01:01:937 - add a note triplets is ok

01:31:937 (91937|3) - move to 2

01:32:104 (92104|1,92187|2,92271|3) - ctrl G


no reason not to follow PR for the following phase, because you only follow that piano pitch.

01:51:578 (111578|2) - move to 1
01:52:040 (112040|0) - 2
01:52:501 (112501|3) - 3
01:52:732 (112732|3,112809|2,112886|1,112963|0) - ctrl G

01:53:194 (113194|2) - 1

01:53:655 (113655|2,113886|3) - ctrl G

01:54:177 (114177|2,114468|1) - drag 1x to left

01:54:808 (114808|0,114976|3,115032|2,115088|1,115145|0) - also readjust.


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O
for the tags, there are another things that I can add in the tag like in this mapset, but I don't really know what the meaning of "euphoria" tag and I don't know what is kshr >.<

Thanks :')
[-Star_Lenz-]
Yo aufar-san >w<
M4M for via queues Done~

Mungkin ini hanya sugesti ku sajah >w< kalo mod nya gak cocok no add ajah xD

Col : 1|2|3|4|

NOVICE
00:08:604 (8604|1) - move col 4
00:09:271 (9271|3) - ^ col 2
00:15:604 - add note

00:25:937 (25937|1,27271|3) - ctrl+g karena ketukan 00:25:937 (25937|1) - ini keras jadi di simpen di col 4 otamatis yang SN pindah keatas
00:25:937 - add note col 1
00:28:604 (28604|0) - del

00:53:937 (53937|0,54271|3) - ctrl+g
00:55:937 (55937|3) - move col 3
00:58:021 (58021|3,58271|2,58604|1,58937|0) - kalo di jadiin SN gimana ?
01:05:771 (65771|2,65937|0) - ctrl+g

ADVANCED
00:13:771 (13771|3,13771|2,13937|1,13937|0) - ctrl+g
00:13:521 (13521|0,13604|1) - ctrl+h ^ kalo ini di add sih >w< buar balanaced
00:14:187 (14187|2,14271|3) - ctrl+h balanced hand

00:19:937 (19937|1) - move col 1 00:19:937 (19937|2) - move col 4, pengulangan dari sini 00:19:271 (19271|3,19271|0) -

00:42:604 (42604|0,42771|2,42937|1) - ctrl+h
01:01:771 (61771|2,61854|1,61937|0) - ^
01:02:604 - add note ?
01:32:937 - ^
01:37:104 (97104|1,97187|2,97271|3) - ctrl+g tangan biar balanced 01:36:771 (96771|0,96854|1,96937|2) -
01:37:437 (97437|3,97521|2,97604|1,97687|0) - ctrl+h
01:46:604 - add note

EXHAUST
00:22:354 (22354|0) - del ? ghost note kah ._.
00:55:937 (55937|1) - move col 4
01:09:604 (69604|2) - move col 2 balanced dari 01:09:646 (69646|3,69687|2,69729|1,69771|0) - soalnya stairsnya pasti agak kesultian >w<
01:11:104 (71104|0) - del
01:12:437 (72437|2,72437|3) - del salah satu ?
01:12:437 (72437|3,72437|2) - add note

Good luck xD
Seijiro
As requested through my modding queue, here I am :3

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Please reply with:
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[General]
  1. Disable Widescreen support in your NOVICE and EXHAUST diffs

[EXHAUST]
  1. 00:05:187 - Missing note on 1st column?
  2. 00:05:354 (5354|0,5437|1,5521|2,5604|1,5604|0) - Maybe move 00:05:521 (5521|2) - to 1st column and 00:05:604 (5604|1,5604|0) - to 2nd and 3rd column
  3. 00:06:521 - Missing note on 2nd column?
  4. 00:06:604 (6604|1,6687|2,6771|1,6854|2,6937|1) - What about a Ctrl + H?
  5. 00:07:437 (7437|3,7604|2) - First note to 3rd column and second note on 4th column; 00:07:771 (7771|3) - Move to 3rd column; 00:08:104 (8104|2) - Move to 2nd column; 00:08:271 (8271|1) - Move to 3rd column. Actually, this is a whole pattern. You can see it only after you move everything. it's based on the the bass and piano
  6. 00:12:021 - Add note to 2nd column?
  7. 00:12:104 - Tha first part of the stream has ghost notes (at least I wasn't able to hear them played by the piano), while the second part has 1/6 notes, like this:
  8. 00:16:437 (16437|2) - Or move this note 1/4 later, ot add a note at 00:16:521 - , since I can clearly hear both of them
  9. 00:19:187 (19187|3) - Move to 3rd column maybe?
  10. vMove to 2nd?
  11. 00:22:354 (22354|0) - Either move this to 3rd or 4th column
  12. 00:22:715 (22715|2) - Move to 2nd column?
  13. 00:22:937 (22937|0) - LN till 00:25:937 - maybe. You'll have to move around a couple of LNs after the end of it tho :/
  14. 00:25:271 (25271|3) - Shouldn't this note start from 00:25:437 - ? It's true the note starts before that time, but the actuall sound is hearable only from there on
  15. 00:32:354 - Missing note here?
  16. 00:33:021 - Having this much space kinda stand out too much :/ What about using a LN for 00:32:993 (32993|1) - till 00:33:437 - ?
  17. 00:55:271 (55271|3) - Seeing this note on the 4th column makes me think it is a high pitch note, while it is lower than 00:54:937 (54937|3) - , so maybe move it to the 3rd column?
  18. vI have another pattern for this passage, since the actulal one doesn't fit well the rhythm imo:
  19. 01:17:937 (77937|2,77937|1) - Remove these notes to make the pattern similar to 01:18:271 (78271|3,78271|0,78437|1,78437|2) -

[ADVANCED]
  1. 00:07:104 - What about a LN till 00:07:271 - ?
  2. 00:17:937 - 00:20:604 - Why in this section you don't use 2 notes on white ticks and just one on red ticks? It will feel less exhausting for the player, also consider the players' level who'll going to play this: it's too hard imo
  3. 00:22:937 (22937|2) - As for the EXHAUST diff, one not adding a LN till 00:25:937 - ?
  4. 00:32:604 (32604|3,32715|2,32826|1,32937|0,32993|2,33049|1,33104|0) - I suggest making this stream end at 00:33:271 - (white tick) and make the other stream start at 00:33:604 - (again, white tick). These streams look like just "semplifications of the EXHAUST diff" right now and looks a bit ugly when you see streams ending on strange signatures :/
  5. 00:54:104 (54104|0,54187|1,54271|3,54271|2) - All this kind of triplets one after another are really tiresome :/ Why don't you remove the central note of each triplet? Players won't really notice the difference in rhythm at all at this level I guess...
  6. 01:04:604 - 01:07:271 - Same suggestion I made before for 00:17:937 - 00:20:604 - (2 notes on white ticks and one note on red ticks) (same reasoning)
  7. 01:15:271 (75271|0,75354|1,75437|2,75604|0,75687|1,75771|2) - What about this:
  8. 01:23:271 (83271|0) - After the previous long stream this LN feels really weird. Decrease the notes in your stream or add more notes during this LN, because the difference between those parts is really too much imo
  9. 01:33:021 - Missing note on 4th column?

[NOVICE]
  1. Is it ok to ignore AIMod and its warning about setting OD to at least 7?
  2. Make your kiai end at 01:46:604 - like on the other diffs
  3. 00:29:604 (29604|3,29687|2,29771|1) - What about a LN instead of these triplet? From 00:29:604 - to 00:29:937 -
  4. 00:30:437 (30437|0,30521|1) - What about deleting these ones? They aren't easy to be heard at this difficulty I guess
  5. 00:33:937 - Add note to 3rd column, feelss strange without it there :/
  6. 00:34:937 - Add a 1/1 LN here on 2nd column maybe. The stream feels incomplete without it
  7. 00:36:271 (36271|0) - There is a really high pitch here, so what about moving this note to the 4th column?
  8. 00:45:937 - Maybe add a note on 1st column...
  9. 00:56:604 (56604|2,58021|3) - Wow, what's this strange spacing? Make 00:58:021 (58021|3) - start from 00:57:937 -
  10. 01:05:437 (65437|2) - Delete? Give some rest to the player
  11. 01:06:437 (66437|1) - Same ^
  12. 01:17:271 (77271|1,77437|3) - Feels a bit strange. What about this:
  13. 01:54:920 (114920|2,114976|3,115032|2,115088|1,115145|0) - This is really too much I guess. Why not leaving just 01:54:976 (114976|3) - ?

That's all, I hope it is helpful :3
Good luck with your mapset ~
Topic Starter
Raediaufar

[-Star_Lenz-] wrote:

Yo aufar-san >w<
M4M for via queues Done~

Mungkin ini hanya sugesti ku sajah >w< kalo mod nya gak cocok no add ajah xD

Col : 1|2|3|4|

NOVICE
00:08:604 (8604|1) - move col 4 no
00:09:271 (9271|3) - ^ col 2 ^
00:15:604 - add note

00:25:937 (25937|1,27271|3) - ctrl+g karena ketukan 00:25:937 (25937|1) - ini keras jadi di simpen di col 4 otamatis yang SN pindah keatas perasaan LN yang pertama yang suaranya keras, yg kedua itu lembut makanya gak kukasih single not disana
00:25:937 - add note col 1 reject karena alasan diatas
00:28:604 (28604|0) - del nope, ada suara piano/color]

00:53:937 (53937|0,54271|3) - ctrl+g
00:55:937 (55937|3) - move col 3 ^
00:58:021 (58021|3,58271|2,58604|1,58937|0) - kalo di jadiin SN gimana ?
01:05:771 (65771|2,65937|0) - ctrl+g

ADVANCED
00:13:771 (13771|3,13771|2,13937|1,13937|0) - ctrl+g
00:13:521 (13521|0,13604|1) - ctrl+h ^ kalo ini di add sih >w< buar balanaced yang add gak ku apply

00:14:187 (14187|2,14271|3) - ctrl+h balanced hand

00:19:937 (19937|1) - move col 1 00:19:937 (19937|2) - move col 4, pengulangan dari sini 00:19:271 (19271|3,19271|0) - ntar patternnya jadi boring :3

00:42:604 (42604|0,42771|2,42937|1) - ctrl+h sama aja sih ._.
01:01:771 (61771|2,61854|1,61937|0) - ^gak apply karena pitch
01:02:604 - add note ?
01:32:937 - ^ gak
01:37:104 (97104|1,97187|2,97271|3) - ctrl+g tangan biar balanced 01:36:771 (96771|0,96854|1,96937|2) - ngepasin ke pitch

01:37:437 (97437|3,97521|2,97604|1,97687|0) - ctrl+h ^

01:46:604 - add note

EXHAUST
00:22:354 (22354|0) - del ? ghost note kah ._. nggak, coba denger pake 25%
00:55:937 (55937|1) - move col 4
01:09:604 (69604|2) - move col 2 balanced dari 01:09:646 (69646|3,69687|2,69729|1,69771|0) - soalnya stairsnya pasti agak kesultian >w< soalnya suaranya itu dari white tick ke red tick, kalo dibuat 1/8 stairnya emang harus dibuat lima, jadi no
01:11:104 (71104|0) - del
01:12:437 (72437|2,72437|3) - del salah satu ?
01:12:437 (72437|3,72437|2) - add note ini dua mod diatas saling bertabrakan lol apply yang delete

Good luck xD

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

As requested through my modding queue, here I am :3

SPOILER
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  1. Black = Just a suggestion, feel free to refuse
  2. Blue = Highly recommended suggestion. You need a strong reason to refuse this
  3. Red = Unrankable. You MUST fix this
Please reply with:
  1. Green = Fixed
  2. Red = Didn't fix
  3. Orange = Fixed part of the suggestion

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[General]
  1. Disable Widescreen support in your NOVICE and EXHAUST diffs

[EXHAUST]
  1. 00:05:187 - Missing note on 1st column? no I think
  2. 00:05:354 (5354|0,5437|1,5521|2,5604|1,5604|0) - Maybe move 00:05:521 (5521|2) - to 1st column and 00:05:604 (5604|1,5604|0) - to 2nd and 3rd column well, I think that's not much different with the previous pattern
  3. 00:06:521 - Missing note on 2nd column? this is not too I think
  4. 00:06:604 (6604|1,6687|2,6771|1,6854|2,6937|1) - What about a Ctrl + H? what? xD that pattern looks strange man
  5. 00:07:437 (7437|3,7604|2) - First note to 3rd column and second note on 4th column; 00:07:771 (7771|3) - Move to 3rd column; 00:08:104 (8104|2) - Move to 2nd column; 00:08:271 (8271|1) - Move to 3rd column. Actually, this is a whole pattern. You can see it only after you move everything. it's based on the the bass and piano it's pretty hard to understand (so hold this then) this but I think my patter is good enough
  6. 00:12:021 - Add note to 2nd column? no
  7. 00:12:104 - Tha first part of the stream has ghost notes (at least I wasn't able to hear them played by the piano), while the second part has 1/6 notes, like this: I'm not following the piano, just the stream

  8. 00:16:437 (16437|2) - Or move this note 1/4 later, ot add a note at 00:16:521 - , since I can clearly hear both of them decide to add
  9. 00:19:187 (19187|3) - Move to 3rd column maybe? I have testplay it and jack is more fit to the sound than jumpy ones
  10. vMove to 2nd? not much different like mine was
  11. 00:22:354 (22354|0) - Either move this to 3rd or 4th column no
  12. 00:22:715 (22715|2) - Move to 2nd column? no
  13. 00:22:937 (22937|0) - LN till 00:25:937 - maybe. You'll have to move around a couple of LNs after the end of it tho :/ no
  14. 00:25:271 (25271|3) - Shouldn't this note start from 00:25:437 - ? It's true the note starts before that time, but the actuall sound is hearable only from there on try to listen it more closer, you will hear that
  15. 00:32:354 - Missing note here? no
  16. 00:33:021 - Having this much space kinda stand out too much :/ What about using a LN for 00:32:993 (32993|1) - till 00:33:437 - ?
    i'm only follow the piano here. The space is ok I think, except you wanna make 5 above stars 4k another o_0
  17. 00:55:271 (55271|3) - Seeing this note on the 4th column makes me think it is a high pitch note, while it is lower than 00:54:937 (54937|3) - , so maybe move it to the 3rd column? has fixed that on star-lenz mod
  18. vI have another pattern for this passage, since the actulal one doesn't fit well the rhythm imo: no

  19. 01:17:937 (77937|2,77937|1) - Remove these notes to make the pattern similar to 01:18:271 (78271|3,78271|0,78437|1,78437|2) -

[ADVANCED]
  1. 00:07:104 - What about a LN till 00:07:271 - ? I have tried that but when I testplay that part just look weird and awkward. Also, it has same sound as the previous note and the length must be in exactly same
  2. 00:17:937 - 00:20:604 - Why in this section you don't use 2 notes on white ticks and just one on red ticks? It will feel less exhausting for the player, also consider the players' level who'll going to play this: it's too hard imo so because of that I put the notes in a way that medium-level player can easy sightreading it, if I put one then two notes pattern, the gap of advanced and exhaust in this part will be too high and reverse for advance to novice
  3. 00:22:937 (22937|2) - As for the EXHAUST diff, one not adding a LN till 00:25:937 - ? decided to add that only in exhaust diff
  4. 00:32:604 (32604|3,32715|2,32826|1,32937|0,32993|2,33049|1,33104|0) - I suggest making this stream end at 00:33:271 - (white tick) and make the other stream start at 00:33:604 - (again, white tick). These streams look like just "semplifications of the EXHAUST diff" right now and looks a bit ugly when you see streams ending on strange signatures :/ will reconsider this later, I think it's better for you to add pic to this so I can really understand what kind of stream you want
  5. 00:54:104 (54104|0,54187|1,54271|3,54271|2) - All this kind of triplets one after another are really tiresome :/ Why don't you remove the central note of each triplet? Players won't really notice the difference in rhythm at all at this level I guess... well, a bit hard. But if I apply your mod that will become too easy, I use to be this kind of player too and I think that part ain't too hard.
  6. 01:04:604 - 01:07:271 - Same suggestion I made before for 00:17:937 - 00:20:604 - (2 notes on white ticks and one note on red ticks) (same reasoning)
  7. 01:15:271 (75271|0,75354|1,75437|2,75604|0,75687|1,75771|2) - What about this:
    SPOILER


    stairs are more fit to the sound
  8. 01:23:271 (83271|0) - After the previous long stream this LN feels really weird. Decrease the notes in your stream or add more notes during this LN, because the difference between those parts is really too much imo almost other ranked maps uses LN to represent the 1/8 stream on harder pattern
  9. 01:33:021 - Missing note on 4th column? no, there's absolutely no sound there

[NOVICE]
  1. Is it ok to ignore AIMod and its warning about setting OD to at least 7? some ranked maps doesn't have problem with this
  2. Make your kiai end at 01:46:604 - like on the other diffs
  3. 00:29:604 (29604|3,29687|2,29771|1) - What about a LN instead of these triplet? From 00:29:604 - to 00:29:937 - I think it's okay
  4. 00:30:437 (30437|0,30521|1) - What about deleting these ones? They aren't easy to be heard at this difficulty I guess but that sound is exist
  5. 00:33:937 - Add note to 3rd column, feelss strange without it there :/ follow the piano
  6. 00:34:937 - Add a 1/1 LN here on 2nd column maybe. The stream feels incomplete without it I know there's a sound in there, but the sound is continuous until - 00:35:271 - it will create a hard pattern for novice if I did that
  7. 00:36:271 (36271|0) - There is a really high pitch here, so what about moving this note to the 4th column?
  8. 00:45:937 - Maybe add a note on 1st column... I don't hear other sounds
  9. 00:56:604 (56604|2,58021|3) - Wow, what's this strange spacing? Make 00:58:021 (58021|3) - start from 00:57:937 - color=#40BF00]yeah I know, had found the solution, thanks to star-lenz :D[/color]
  10. 01:05:437 (65437|2) - Delete? Give some rest to the player
  11. 01:06:437 (66437|1) - Same ^ Arrghh... yes I know maybe it's too hard, but if I delete doesn't it looks strange?
  12. 01:17:271 (77271|1,77437|3) - Feels a bit strange. What about this:
  13. 01:54:920 (114920|2,114976|3,115032|2,115088|1,115145|0) - This is really too much I guess. Why not leaving just 01:54:976 (114976|3) - ?

    low bpm, I think it's ok

That's all, I hope it is helpful :3
Good luck with your mapset ~
sorry for late reply, thanks a lot
pwhk
For M4M :)

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[NOVICE]
00:06:854 (6854|1) - This LN seems out of place to me. Remove and extend 00:06:604 (6604|3) - to 00:07:271 - ?
00:14:937 (14937|2) - remove?
00:19:437 (19437|1,19604|0) - swap for being pretty?
00:22:604 (22604|3) - You use 1/3s at 01:39:271 - , so you my consider using 1/3s instead of LN here too.
00:25:937 (25937|1,27271|3) - Swap for pitch reasons?
00:36:604 (36604|1,37937|3) - ^
00:58:021 (58021|0) - misplaced note? intentional? I thought that it should be at 00:57:937 - ...
01:04:604 - Add note for cymbal?
01:05:937 - ^
01:12:604 (72604|3,72937|2) - Shift one column left for more variance (not using same chord)
01:15:271 - add note for cymbal
01:23:937 - Add a red line for monochrome reset. (Not sure if this actually break RC, you'd better check with a BN/QAT)
01:50:963 (110963|0,111040|1,111117|2) - This is too hard, considering 1. This is Normal 2. Slow SV here and, 3. is calm part. One note at the end is enough.
01:52:732 (112732|0,112809|1,112886|2,112963|3) - ^
01:54:920 (114920|2,114976|3,115032|2,115088|1,115145|0) - ^

[ADVANCED]
00:04:604 - 00:05:604 - main instrument is not straight 1/4s here. Remove 00:04:771 - ,00:04:937 (4937|2) - 00:04:937 (4937|2,5021|3) - ,00:05:187 (5187|0,5354|2,5521|2) - and don't forget to move notes around for reasonable pattern
00:05:937 - 00:06:604 - ^
00:09:937 - 00:10:937 - ^
00:11:271 - 00:11:937 - ^
00:22:604 - same as NOVICE, consider 1/3s here
00:25:937 (25937|1,27271|3) - swap, as in NOVICE
00:53:354 (53354|1) - Remove. Main doesn't seem to have sound here.
01:08:604 - Add note for cymbal
01:17:354 - missing note
01:20:604 - Add note for cymbal
01:23:937 - Same as NOVICE (and you should have same timing for all diffs anyway)
01:31:937 - 01:34:604 - The 1/4s here are continuous, which you may consider putting streams all the way instead of broken at arbitrary points
01:37:271 - 01:39:271 - ^
01:54:808 (114808|0) - move to 1 for different pitch than previous note

[EXHAUST]
00:21:187 (21187|3,21187|2,21271|2,21271|0) - This is touchy. Jacks are generally frowned upon but I know what you are doing, and there are genuinely not enough room. I wouldn't change pattern here but up to you. Some other mappers would remove 00:21:271 (21271|2) - to prevent jacks btw.
00:22:604 (22604|2,22715|2,22826|2) - use 0,3 double jacks here as this sound is actually quite strong?
00:28:604 - 00:29:437 - 1/2 piano stream here
00:31:271 - 00:35:271 - I was disappointed because I expected continuous 1/6 streams here :( (and you have 1/8 streams in 00:45:937 - , no excuse about being too hard!!)
00:41:271 (41271|0) - remove, no sound here, and move 00:41:354 (41354|1) - to 0
00:53:354 (53354|0) - same as ADVANCED, main have no sound. Or, map the 1/1 kicks across entire section of 00:52:604 - 00:53:604 -
00:57:271 - 00:57:937 - Consider mirror this and move notes around, as this is different sound (main have higher pitch than before)
01:08:604 - add note for cymbal
01:20:604 - 01:21:935 - main and percussion are all continuous 1/4s here, not sure you instead not mapping full stream
01:22:521 (82521|3,82521|2,82604|3,82604|0) - same as 00:21:187 (21187|3,21187|2,21271|2,21271|0), revise.
01:29:271 - 01:34:604 - again, continuous 1/4s here
01:31:937 - add note for cymbal
01:33:271 - ^
01:37:354 - add note for continuous stream
01:37:937 (97937|2) - move 1/4 later for continuous stream
01:44:437 (104437|0,104437|1,104521|3,104521|0) - same as 00:21:187 (21187|3,21187|2,21271|2,21271|0), revise.
01:54:808 (114808|0) - move to 1 for different pitch than previous note

[Other]
This song has potential for INFINITE/GRAVITY difficulty. If within your reach, consider making one (or ask somebody else to make a GD for you)

good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Raediaufar

pwhk wrote:

For M4M :)

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[NOVICE]
00:06:854 (6854|1) - This LN seems out of place to me. Remove and extend 00:06:604 (6604|3) - to 00:07:271 - ? no, it's on proper location
00:14:937 (14937|2) - remove? remove one note
00:19:437 (19437|1,19604|0) - swap for being pretty? no
00:22:604 (22604|3) - You use 1/3s at 01:39:271 - , so you my consider using 1/3s instead of LN here too. LN for the streambeat
00:25:937 (25937|1,27271|3) - Swap for pitch reasons? yes
00:36:604 (36604|1,37937|3) - ^ but not for this
00:58:021 (58021|0) - misplaced note? intentional? I thought that it should be at 00:57:937 - ... lol, forgot about this. Fixed
01:04:604 - Add note for cymbal? kay
01:05:937 - ^ kay
01:12:604 (72604|3,72937|2) - Shift one column left for more variance (not using same chord) conflicts with next and previous sn
01:15:271 - add note for cymbal not strong sound imo
01:23:937 - Add a red line for monochrome reset. (Not sure if this actually break RC, you'd better check with a BN/QAT) I don't understand what you mean here ;_;
01:50:963 (110963|0,111040|1,111117|2) - This is too hard, considering 1. This is Normal 2. Slow SV here and, 3. is calm part. One note at the end is enough.
01:52:732 (112732|0,112809|1,112886|2,112963|3) - ^
01:54:920 (114920|2,114976|3,115032|2,115088|1,115145|0) - ^ fixed

[ADVANCED]
00:04:604 - 00:05:604 - main instrument is not straight 1/4s here. Remove 00:04:771 - ,00:04:937 (4937|2) - 00:04:937 (4937|2,5021|3) - ,00:05:187 (5187|0,5354|2,5521|2) - and don't forget to move notes around for reasonable pattern only removed - 00:05:187 - and -00:05:687 -
00:05:937 - 00:06:604 - ^
00:09:937 - 00:10:937 - ^
00:11:271 - 00:11:937 - ^
00:22:604 - same as NOVICE, consider 1/3s here no, I'm still using LN here
00:25:937 (25937|1,27271|3) - swap, as in NOVICE kay
00:53:354 (53354|1) - Remove. Main doesn't seem to have sound here. removed - 00:53:354 -
01:08:604 - Add note for cymbal too hard for this diff imo
01:17:354 - missing note no sound there
01:20:604 - Add note for cymbal not strong sound
01:23:937 - Same as NOVICE (and you should have same timing for all diffs anyway) fixed the timing, finally I know what u mean xD
01:31:937 - 01:34:604 - The 1/4s here are continuous, which you may consider putting streams all the way instead of broken at arbitrary points I decided to follow that sound
01:37:271 - 01:39:271 - ^ ^
01:54:808 (114808|0) - move to 1 for different pitch than previous note kay

[EXHAUST]
00:21:187 (21187|3,21187|2,21271|2,21271|0) - This is touchy. Jacks are generally frowned upon but I know what you are doing, and there are genuinely not enough room. I wouldn't change pattern here but up to you. Some other mappers would remove 00:21:271 (21271|2) - to prevent jacks btw. since the sound is continuous, putting one note there will be a bit awkward, yes I know it's jack but that jack should be there imo

00:22:604 (22604|2,22715|2,22826|2) - use 0,3 double jacks here as this sound is actually quite strong? hmmm.. idk but double will make jacks when you hit the burst

00:28:604 - 00:29:437 - 1/2 piano stream here actually no sound

00:31:271 - 00:35:271 - I was disappointed because I expected continuous 1/6 streams here :( (and you have 1/8 streams in 00:45:937 - , no excuse about being too hard!!) not to make it easy or whatever but I'm follow the piano sound here. And yeah, if you want continuous 1/6 stream play verse iv :p

00:41:271 (41271|0) - remove, no sound here, and move 00:41:354 (41354|1) - to 0 actually there is, try 50%
00:53:354 (53354|0) - same as ADVANCED, main have no sound. Or, map the 1/1 kicks across entire section of 00:52:604 - 00:53:604 - removed

00:57:271 - 00:57:937 - Consider mirror this and move notes around, as this is different sound (main have higher pitch than before) no, and I think it has the same sound

01:08:604 - add note for cymbal okay

01:20:604 - 01:21:935 - main and percussion are all continuous 1/4s here, not sure you instead not mapping full stream yes, but here I'm following a specific sound (I don't know what is that) and it sounds that way

01:22:521 (82521|3,82521|2,82604|3,82604|0) - same as 00:21:187 (21187|3,21187|2,21271|2,21271|0), revise. for variations

01:29:271 - 01:34:604 - again, continuous 1/4s here same as above, I'm following specific sound

01:31:937 - add note for cymbal

01:33:271 - ^ add for both

01:37:354 - add note for continuous stream

01:37:937 (97937|2) - move 1/4 later for continuous stream no for both above

01:44:437 (104437|0,104437|1,104521|3,104521|0) - same as 00:21:187 (21187|3,21187|2,21271|2,21271|0), revise. same as above, for variations, or maybe I should change the - 00:21:187 - ?

01:54:808 (114808|0) - move to 1 for different pitch than previous note fixed

[Other]
This song has potential for INFINITE/GRAVITY difficulty. If within your reach, consider making one (or ask somebody else to make a GD for you)

good luck! :)
Yeah, gravity would be great and infinite pp for sure but it something that out of my reach (I can't play it xD) I won't map something that I can't play. And no plan to do any GD for this map, decided to work this all alone
Aste-
Mark

HI

MOD from A.C. Modding Team here

What i MOD

General Setting, Beat Snap, Pattern, Balance, Comfortable, Flow, File inside your Folder


[General]

BG = OK

Audio = OK

HS = OK

AI MOD = OD problem in NOVICE

Diff spread = gile... lebar banget... NOVICE ke ADVANCED di perkecil lahh

Timing = OK

other things = Fine~

[MOD]

1/2/3/4

-Novice-

00:16:521 - have same Sound like 00:15:854 (15854|3,15937|2) - plus Drum here.. add note please

mending pake snap 1/4 ato 1/2.. soalnya ngga cocok banget kalo pake Snap yang ini

00:31:271 (31271|3) - point ini ke atas banyak stream nya.. manfaatkan lahh.. kasi LN ato 1/2 Stream

00:32:604 (32604|3) - sampe LN selanjutnya... ada Stream.. di LN aja lahh.. ato Stream 1/2

banyak Stream yang ngga di manfaatkan.... please jangan di sia siakan

01:04:271 (64271|0) - move to 4.. for Flow consistency

01:37:604 (97604|0) - adeh.. konsistensi please.. kaasi 1 note lagi.. wa nemu banyak yang kaya gini... dan bikin bingung

01:46:104 - add note for Kick.. gpp di tambah.. masi enak kok

-Advanced-

00:05:021 (5021|3) - Ghost note

00:07:104 - missing note

00:10:104 (10104|2) - Ghost

00:10:521 (10521|1,10687|3) - Ghost

00:11:437 (11437|2) - ^

00:16:521 - Missing note.. i hear you following Piano too

00:16:854 - ^ dan sebagainya

banyak Ghost dan Missing di sini.. tolong di Check lagi


Done~ cuz i can't mod the last one

GL ^.^
Topic Starter
Raediaufar

Pharos21 wrote:

Mark

HI

MOD from A.C. Modding Team here

What i MOD

General Setting, Beat Snap, Pattern, Balance, Comfortable, Flow, File inside your Folder


[General]

BG = OK

Audio = OK

HS = OK

AI MOD = OD problem in NOVICE

Diff spread = gile... lebar banget... NOVICE ke ADVANCED di perkecil lahh

Timing = OK

other things = Fine~

[MOD]

1/2/3/4

-Novice-

00:16:521 - have same Sound like 00:15:854 (15854|3,15937|2) - plus Drum here.. add note please kick ini 00:16:271 (16271|1) - udah cukup

mending pake snap 1/4 ato 1/2.. soalnya ngga cocok banget kalo pake Snap yang ini

00:31:271 (31271|3) - point ini ke atas banyak stream nya.. manfaatkan lahh.. kasi LN ato 1/2 Stream ini masalahnya 1/6, kalonya 14 mungkin bisa tak kasih 1/2 stream dan kalo LN jadi rasa kosong gitu

00:32:604 (32604|3) - sampe LN selanjutnya... ada Stream.. di LN aja lahh.. ato Stream 1/2 oke

banyak Stream yang ngga di manfaatkan.... please jangan di sia siakan

01:04:271 (64271|0) - move to 4.. for Flow consistency coba liat pattern sebelumnya

01:37:604 (97604|0) - adeh.. konsistensi please.. kaasi 1 note lagi.. wa nemu banyak yang kaya gini... dan bikin bingung sesuai permintaan maz

01:46:104 - add note for Kick.. gpp di tambah.. masi enak kok added

-Advanced-

00:05:021 (5021|3) - Ghost note gak, ada suaranya kok tapi kecil

00:07:104 - missing note ngikutin piano aja, sama biar konsisten sama LN sebelumnya

00:10:104 (10104|2) - Ghost ada suara jelas banget lagi -_-

00:10:521 (10521|1,10687|3) - Ghost ok

00:11:437 (11437|2) - ^ gak

00:16:521 - Missing note.. i hear you following Piano too sengaja, buat advanced nanti susah kalo gitu. Di exhaust ku taro kok

00:16:854 - ^ dan sebagainya

banyak Ghost dan Missing di sini.. tolong di Check lagi


Done~ cuz i can't mod the last one

GL ^.^
thanks pharos

remove annoying 4 chorus and more stable stream in exhaust
[ A v a l o n ]
halo . . . ini mod nya
pake bhs. daerah as requested . . . lol
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  • [NOVICE]
  1. 00:04:604 (4604|3,5271|0,5437|1,5604|2) - lah kada sama notenya 00:05:937 (5937|0,6604|1) - ? pdahal sama aja suaranya, konsisten la . . . lawan jua note ini 00:05:437 (5437|1) - kada pas lawan synth nya . . jadi bisa jua tu dihapus aja
  2. 00:07:271 - tambahi note gasan cymbal
  3. 00:12:604 - sama lawan yg diatas
  4. 00:15:271 - tambahi note gasan menutupi suara pianonya . . . di kolom 3 gen, di higa LN nya
  5. 00:17:937 - tambahi note jua, gasan cymbal . . . nah tu piano nya ada jua tuh suaranya . . . lwan jua kulihat-lihat ikam pke 2 note gasan piano di diff ini
  6. 00:21:937 - sama ^
  7. 00:22:604 (22604|3) - rasa lain nah temponya klo ikam pake LN . . . ganti ke 1/6 kick aja udah . . menuruti bgm nya pas aja udah, kad ngalih jua pang bila ma umpati suara kicknya, tambahi aja disini 00:22:715 - lawan 00:22:826 -
  8. 00:29:604 (29604|3,29687|2,29771|1) - bila handak maumpati iano tu bagusnya kainni haja . . .hapus tu dulu . . hayar tambahi note disini 00:29:521 - lawan 00:29:687 - . . . coba aja di putar dalam kecepatan 25%... tau tu ikam kena apa maksud ku
  9. 00:31:271 (31271|3,31493|2,31715|1) - aneh ni cuy ae . . . klo handak menganti piano streamnya . . . unda saran akan ganti aja note yg itu lawan LN . . . andak haja 1/1 LN nya disini 00:31:271 - & 00:31:604 - stopnya disini 00:31:937 - . . .nah contohnya kaya ini 00:34:271 (34271|0,34604|3) - udah bagus tuh
  10. 00:52:604 (52604|1) - panjangi LN nya sampai sini 00:53:271 -
  11. 00:58:271 - lah kenapa hayar aja pake 1 1 1 1 note . . disi ikam make 2 1 2 1 2 note 00:48:604 - konsisten aja tuh nah . . jangan beda2 :v
  12. 01:17:937 - tambahi note gasan cymbal, sama kaya ini 01:18:604 -
  13. 01:20:604 - sama ^
  14. 01:21:271 - 01:21:937 - 01:22:604 - 01:23:937 - sama, ada cymbalnya ^ (ayu ja kada papa jua . . . star nya masih safe)
  15. 01:29:937 - kenapa kosong . . . masih ada beatnya itu . . tambahi gen 1 note
  16. 01:34:604 - tambahi note, suara nya gancang daripada ini 01:35:271 - tapi malah yang gancang 1 note haja . . . T_T
  17. 01:43:937 - & 01:44:604 - sama ^
  18. 01:45:604 - & 01:45:937 - tambahi note di higa LN nya . . . gasan menutup efek nya . . .cobai ja di test dulu
  19. 01:54:808 (114808|1,114920|2,115032|1,115145|0) - ganti haja dah ke LN ini . . . orang noob kada harapan kawa mencet nag kytu :v . . sudah stream, bpm nya bganti ha pulang . . . mati kutu :v

    [ADVANCED]
    00:04:604 (4604|3,4604|2,4687|1,4771|0,4854|1,4937|2,5021|3,5104|2,5271|0,5271|1,5354|2,5437|3,5521|2,5604|1) - kenapa beda jumlah notenya lawan yag di part ini 00:09:937 - padahal sama aja suaranya . . umpati gen streamnya yg disini 00:09:937 (9937|0,10021|1,10104|2,10187|3,10687|3,10771|2,10854|1) -
  20. 00:07:104 - & 00:07:187 - lol jelas banar suaranya kicknya . . tambahi note !
  21. 00:13:521 (13521|3,13604|2) - aneh banar bro ay . setengah2 ikam ngemapnya . . coba di tambahi note disini nah 00:13:437 -
  22. 00:14:104 - sama kasus nya ^
  23. 00:14:937 (14937|2) - pindah akan ke kolom 1, imbah tu 00:15:271 - tambahi note di kolom 4 . . . gasan balance lawan konsistensi
  24. 00:15:771 - tambahi note, pianonya ada jua nah . . . sama kaya ini suaranya 00:15:854 (15854|2,15937|3) -
  25. 00:20:604 - suaranya gancang tambahi note . . . disini aja kam pake 2 note 00:20:437 (20437|2,20437|3) -
  26. 00:21:271 - tambahi jua note, gasan cymbal . .jadi ada jua tuh impactnya , daripada stream 1 note behabis . . . tenang haja . .ini level diffnya udah tinggi . . . jadi bebas aja nambahi asalkan jangan berlebihan
  27. 00:22:604 (22604|0) - ganti jadi 1/6 kick . . . ini diffnya sudah tinggi . . . jadi kada pas suara sejelas nang kytu dipasangi LN
  28. 00:29:604 (29604|3,29687|2,29771|1,29854|0,29937|1) - kada pas nih streamnya . . .cobai ja di dengar2 lagi di kecepatan 25%
  29. 00:41:937 - mulai sini . . . lah kenapa pakai 1 note haja ? . . . disini haja kam pake 2 behabis nah 00:40:604 - . . . ingat bro, amunnya ikam mapping tuh harus konsisten xD
  30. 00:52:521 - tambahi note . . ada piano jua nah, sama kaya ini 00:51:187 -
  31. 00:59:854 - tambahi note jua . . masih ada suaranya yang kaya ini 01:01:854 -
  32. 01:10:604 - saran unda nag kyni nih 2 note aja, kada usah 3 . . .suaranya kada tapi nyaring . . . yg jelas2 nyaring disini aja ikam andaki 1 note haja nah :v 01:15:271 -
  33. 01:10:187 - 01:10:521 - tambahi note . . masih jelas pianonya disana, kaya nang kyni nah 01:12:771 (72771|2,72854|1,72937|0) -
  34. 01:15:271 - tambahi note, cymbal + kicknya gancang kedengarannya disana
  35. 01:20:604 - tambahi note jua, ada cymbalnya . . sama kaya yang disini 01:17:937 - 01:18:604 - dan seterusnya
  36. 01:22:604 - sama ^
  37. 01:29:104 - tambahi note, suara kicknya jelas sama lawan 01:28:937 - . . . lawan jua lebih nyaraing daripada 01:28:771 -
  38. 01:32:437 - 01:32:521 - 01:32:771 - tambahi gen note disana gasan streamnya . . . kenapa jadi betinggalan kyni heh . . . aneh jua :v
  39. 01:33:604 (93604|2,93937|1,94021|3,94104|2,94187|0,94271|1) - di bagian sini kenapa 1 note brataan . . padahal ada jua tuh suara kick. . . lawan ikam kulihat-lihat di diff ini gasan suara kick ikam makai 2 note
  40. 01:41:854 - tambahi note gasan piano roll . . .masih ada tuh pianonya disana
  41. 01:42:271 - & 01:42:437 - tambahi note gasan kick . . . konsisten lah
  42. 01:45:271 - tambahi note gasan cymbal
  43. ini iya jua nah 01:45:604 - 01:45:937 -
dah . . akhirnya selesai . . .
Good luck =w=)b

edit : my 500th post xD
Topic Starter
Raediaufar

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

halo mas bro . . . ini mod nya
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  • [NOVICE]
  1. 00:04:604 (4604|3,5271|0,5437|1,5604|2) - lah kada sama notenya 00:05:937 (5937|0,6604|1) - ? pdahal sama aja suaranya, konsisten la . . . lawan jua note ini 00:05:437 (5437|1) - kada pas lawan synth nya . . jadi bisa jua tu dihapus aja dah dihapus
  2. 00:07:271 - tambahi note gasan cymbal rasa ulun kengalihan pang ini novice soalnya
  3. 00:12:604 - sama lawan yg diatas ^
  4. 00:15:271 - tambahi note gasan menutupi suara pianonya . . . di kolom 3 gen, di higa LN nya udah ditambahi tapi di 2 ja, kada hand-balance munnya diandak di 3
  5. 00:17:937 - tambahi note jua, gasan cymbal . . . nah tu piano nya ada jua tuh suaranya . . . lwan jua kulihat-lihat ikam pke 2 note gasan piano di diff ini sip
  6. 00:21:937 - sama ^ kada, ngalih meandak dimana soalnya, lawan sebelumnya kan LN jua tuh
  7. 00:22:604 (22604|3) - rasa lain nah temponya klo ikam pake LN . . . ganti ke 1/6 kick aja udah . . menuruti bgm nya pas aja udah, kad ngalih jua pang bila ma umpati suara kicknya, tambahi aja disini 00:22:715 - lawan 00:22:826 - biar aja, LN bisa aja dipakai buat mengganti suara kick na
  8. 00:29:604 (29604|3,29687|2,29771|1) - bila handak maumpati piano tu bagusnya kainni haja . . .hapus tu dulu . . hayar tambahi note disini 00:29:521 - lawan 00:29:687 - . . . coba aja di putar dalam kecepatan 25%... tau tu ikam kena apa maksud ku oh inggih inggih
  9. 00:31:271 (31271|3,31493|2,31715|1) - aneh ni cuy ae . . . klo handak menganti piano streamnya . . . unda saran akan ganti aja note yg itu lawan LN . . . andak haja 1/1 LN nya disini 00:31:271 - & 00:31:604 - stopnya disini 00:31:937 - . . .nah contohnya kaya ini 00:34:271 (34271|0,34604|3) - udah bagus tuh sip
  10. 00:52:604 (52604|1) - panjangi LN nya sampai sini 00:53:271 - rasa aneh pang menurut ulun, soalnya kada konsisten wan LN sebelumnya lwn suaranya jua sudah lain disitu
  11. 00:58:271 - lah kenapa hayar aja pake 1 1 1 1 note . . disi ikam make 2 1 2 1 2 note 00:48:604 - konsisten aja tuh nah . . jangan beda2 :v kadanya anu pang, tapi itu suaranya kick wara kdd cymbal
  12. 01:17:937 - tambahi note gasan cymbal, sama kaya ini 01:18:604 - sip
  13. 01:20:604 - sama ^ kdd cymbalnya disini
  14. 01:21:271 - 01:21:937 - 01:22:604 - 01:23:937 - sama, ada cymbalnya ^ (ayu ja kada papa jua . . . star nya masih safe) kd gin, lwn nang di - 01:23:937 - ulun sdh pakai 2 not tapi jar urang kengalihan :/
  15. 01:29:937 - kenapa kosong . . . masih ada beatnya itu . . tambahi gen 1 note dah sip
  16. 01:34:604 - tambahi note, suara nya gancang daripada ini 01:35:271 - tapi malah yang gancang 1 note haja . . . T_T kena jack pang jadi baik kd usah
  17. 01:43:937 - & 01:44:604 - sama ^ sudah
  18. 01:45:604 - & 01:45:937 - tambahi note di higa LN nya . . . gasan menutup efek nya . . .cobai ja di test dulu kd, biar ja LN wara pas aja, lwn kdd suara lain jua disitu
  19. 01:54:808 (114808|1,114920|2,115032|1,115145|0) - ganti haja dah ke LN ini . . . orang noob kada harapan kawa mencet nag kytu :v . . sudah stream, bpm nya bganti ha pulang . . . mati kutu :v sudah mang, ulun paham ja lwn noob :v

    [ADVANCED]
    00:04:604 (4604|3,4604|2,4687|1,4771|0,4854|1,4937|2,5021|3,5104|2,5271|0,5271|1,5354|2,5437|3,5521|2,5604|1) - kenapa beda jumlah notenya lawan yag di part ini 00:09:937 - padahal sama aja suaranya . . umpati gen streamnya yg disini 00:09:937
    (9937|0,10021|1,10104|2,10187|3,10687|3,10771|2,10854|1) - kd itu dasar lain, yg pertama kdd emphasis di kick yg kedua ada
  20. 00:07:104 - & 00:07:187 - lol jelas banar suaranya kicknya . . tambahi note ! di exhaust aja ulun tambahi
  21. 00:13:521 (13521|3,13604|2) - aneh banar bro ay . setengah2 ikam ngemapnya . . coba di tambahi note disini nah 00:13:437 -
  22. 00:14:104 - sama kasus nya ^ sip sudah, nang di atas jua
  23. 00:14:937 (14937|2) - pindah akan ke kolom 1, imbah tu 00:15:271 - tambahi note di kolom 4 . . . gasan balance lawan konsistensi yg di pindah yes, tapi di - 00:15:271 - kd usah soalnya sura piano wara
  24. 00:15:771 - tambahi note, pianonya ada jua nah . . . sama kaya ini suaranya 00:15:854 (15854|2,15937|3) - kdd, dah ulun cek
  25. 00:20:604 - suaranya gancang tambahi note . . . disini aja kam pake 2 note 00:20:437 (20437|2,20437|3) - handaknya sih, tapi kena ngalih + jack. Pattern streamnya udah sempurna masalahnya disitu B)
  26. 00:21:271 - tambahi jua note, gasan cymbal . .jadi ada jua tuh impactnya , daripada stream 1 note behabis . . . tenang haja . .ini level diffnya udah tinggi . . . jadi bebas aja nambahi asalkan jangan berlebihan kd, coba aja nah sudah stream 180 bpm ditengah timbul - timbul ada not dua maka sebelumnya sudah uyuh memicik not dua dua tuh
  27. 00:22:604 (22604|0) - ganti jadi 1/6 kick . . . ini diffnya sudah tinggi . . . jadi kada pas suara sejelas nang kytu dipasangi LN masih bingung nah, tapi pakai LN kdpp jua menurut ulun
  28. 00:29:604 (29604|3,29687|2,29771|1,29854|0,29937|1) - kada pas nih streamnya . . .cobai ja di dengar2 lagi di kecepatan 25% eh iya, di exhaust bujur aja tapi disini tenaik 1 kolom notnya
  29. 00:41:937 - mulai sini . . . lah kenapa pakai 1 note haja ? . . . disini haja kam pake 2 behabis nah 00:40:604 - . . . ingat bro, amunnya ikam mapping tuh harus konsisten xD lainnya anu pang tapi suaranya sudah lain, kena mun pakai dua aneh
  30. 00:52:521 - tambahi note . . ada piano jua nah, sama kaya ini 00:51:187 - sudah
  31. 00:59:854 - tambahi note jua . . masih ada suaranya yang kaya ini 01:01:854 - yg ini kd tapi jelas suaranya
  32. 01:10:604 - saran unda nag kyni nih 2 note aja, kada usah 3 . . .suaranya kada tapi nyaring . . . yg jelas2 nyaring disini aja ikam andaki 1 note haja nah :v 01:15:271 - meandak not tu lainnya nyaring kd nya pang, tapi suara nya tu na apa aja yg ada disitu, pengecualian kalo suaranya dasar liwar nyaring hanyar bisa satu saura = dua not
  33. 01:10:187 - 01:10:521 - tambahi note . . masih jelas pianonya disana, kaya nang kyni nah 01:12:771 (72771|2,72854|1,72937|0) - oh iya sip
  34. 01:15:271 - tambahi note, cymbal + kicknya gancang kedengarannya disana stream aja, soalnya suara kick dsb nya itu kd tapi kedangaran lalu
  35. 01:20:604 - tambahi note jua, ada cymbalnya . . sama kaya yang disini 01:17:937 - 01:18:604 - dan seterusnya sama jua, stream aja udah cukup kok
  36. 01:22:604 - sama ^ ^
  37. 01:29:104 - tambahi note, suara kicknya jelas sama lawan 01:28:937 - . . . lawan jua lebih nyaraing daripada 01:28:771 - kd, pas aja itu not gesan suara itu
  38. 01:32:437 - 01:32:521 - 01:32:771 - tambahi gen note disana gasan streamnya . . . kenapa jadi betinggalan kyni heh . . . aneh jua :v biar aja dah meumpati suara tu, mun ditambah tambahi lagi ghost note kena
  39. 01:33:604 (93604|2,93937|1,94021|3,94104|2,94187|0,94271|1) - di bagian sini kenapa 1 note brataan . . padahal ada jua tuh suara kick. . . lawan ikam kulihat-lihat di diff ini gasan suara kick ikam makai 2 note nang - 01:33:604 - ulun tambahi, soalnya yg lain tu dasar kd meumpati kick
  40. 01:41:854 - tambahi note gasan piano roll . . .masih ada tuh pianonya disana kd tapi kedangaran masalahnya
  41. 01:42:271 - & 01:42:437 - tambahi note gasan kick . . . konsisten lah udah
  42. 01:45:271 - tambahi note gasan cymbal kd
  43. ini iya jua nah 01:45:604 - 01:45:937 -alasannya sama kaya di novice tadi
dah . . akhirnya selesai . . .
Good luck =w=)b

edit : my 500th post xD
dasar liwar mod pian nih banyak banar, uyuh banar ulun jadinya :o

ae ja sip
Satoshi Kazuki
Hi~
Mod Requested From :

My Column:1|2|3|4
*Sorry if my mod wasn't very useful

ALL DIFF
01:51:117 - to - 02:00:201 - i think you should find the hitsound or just lower the vol

NOVICE
01:39:382 (99382|1,99493|2,99604|0,99715|3,99826|0) - 1/6 is not allowed in diff under 3/4 star...replace with LN

ADVANCE
00:07:104 - add note...there has a sound
00:19:187 - ^
01:22:604 (82604|1,82687|0) - Ctrl + G? hand balance
01:32:437 - add note? there has a sound - 01:32:521 - then combine here...piano sound too
01:32:771 - add note
01:33:771 - add note - 01:33:854 - combine
01:45:937 - to - 01:46:271 - there has a beat...make stairs

EXHAUST
01:23:271 (83271|0,83271|3) - i think u should replace with note...cause this is hardest diff right...and star too(unless u want to make INFINITE or etc diff)
01:31:771 - add note - 01:31:854 - here too

Good Luck :D
Topic Starter
Raediaufar

Satoshi Kazuki wrote:

Hi~
Mod Requested From :

My Column:1|2|3|4
*Sorry if my mod wasn't very useful

ALL DIFF
01:51:117 - to - 02:00:201 - i think you should find the hitsound or just lower the vol kay

NOVICE
01:39:382 (99382|1,99493|2,99604|0,99715|3,99826|0) - 1/6 is not allowed in diff under 3/4 star...replace with LN it's 1/3

ADVANCE
00:07:104 - add note...there has a sound - there's a kick but I'm not sure it's located in there
00:19:187 - ^ [color=#FF0000i'm just add the note in exhaust[/color]
01:22:604 (82604|1,82687|0) - Ctrl + G? hand balance I think my pattern is okay
01:32:437 - add note? there has a sound - 01:32:521 - then combine here...piano sound too the sound is really low and seems blend with the other sound
01:32:771 - add note yes
01:33:771 - add note - 01:33:854 - combine no
01:45:937 - to - 01:46:271 - there has a beat...make stairs okay

EXHAUST
01:23:271 (83271|0,83271|3) - i think u should replace with note...cause this is hardest diff right...and star too(unless u want to make INFINITE or etc diff) - no, LN is enough for this. Quadstream just make this diff a lot harder and increase the gap

01:31:771 - add note - 01:31:854 - here too o- okay but on - 01:31:854 - no

Good Luck :D
try24get
Hi, Here's my mod
Key notation |0|1|2|3|
Time notation [minute]:[second]:[milisecond] ([time in miliseconds]|[key])

---NOVICE---
These mods focusing on some pattern fixes, and a little sound following
00:04:604 - add note at 2
00:05:937 - add note at 3
00:06:854 (6854|3) - is 00:06:604 (6604|1) and 00:06:854 (6854|3) following piano sound? If so cut 00:06:854 (6854|3) slider at 00:07:104 and place it's upper side at 2
00:08:604 (8604|0) - move to 2
00:08:604 (8604|1,8604|0,8937|2) - move 1 column to right
00:09:271 (9271|3,9604|2) - move 1 column to left
00:10:271 (10271|2,10604|3,10771|2,10937|1) - Is it following drum? If so remove them or add notes on 00:09:937 -, 00:10:104 -, and 00:10:437 with same pattern as 00:10:604 (10604|3,10771|2,10937|1)
00:11:437 (11437|0,11604|1,11771|2,11937|1) - Is it following drum? If so remove them, then you may add notes on 00:11:271 -, 00:11:854 -, 00:11:937 -, and slider from 00:11:521 to 00:11:604
00:11:104 - add note on 2 if you add notes after read that 2 mods above
00:20:104 (20104|0,20271|1) - exchange their position
00:13:937 (13937|3,14271|2) - move them 1 column to left
00:14:937 (14937|1) - move to 2
00:29:604 - add note at 2
00:29:687 (29687|2) - move to 1 if you do mod above
00:29:771 - add note at 0
00:29:937 (29937|0) - move to 4
00:30:437 (30437|0,30521|1,30604|2) - move them 1 column to right
00:49:937 (49937|0) - move to 3
00:53:604 (53604|2) - move to 1
00:53:771 - add note at 2
00:55:604 (55604|1) - move to 2
00:54:271 (54271|0) - move to 1
00:54:604 (54604|2) - move to 0
00:54:937 (54937|0) - move to 3
00:55:271 (55271|3) - move to 2
00:58:271 (58271|2) - move to 1
00:58:521 - add note at 2
00:58:771 - ^
00:59:104 - ^
01:00:604 (60604|1) - move to 3
01:04:271 (64271|0) - move to 2
01:06:604 (66604|3,66937|3) - ^
01:06:771 (66771|0) - move to 3
01:16:271 (76271|1) - move to 2
01:20:271 (80271|1) - ^
01:28:604 (88604|1,88937|2) - exchange their column
01:31:271 (91271|2,91604|3) - ^
01:42:771 (102771|2,102937|1) - ^
01:25:604 (85604|3,85937|2) - ^
01:39:382 (99382|1,99493|2) - ^ (use 1/6 snap div)
01:39:715 (99715|3) - move to 1 (use 1/6 snap div)
01:39:826 (99826|0) - move to 2 (use 1/6 snap div)
01:41:271 (101271|3,101937|3) - move 1 column to left
01:41:604 (101604|1) - move to 3
01:42:271 (102271|2) - move to 1
01:35:937 (95937|1,95937|2,96271|3) - move 1 column to left
01:36:604 (96604|2) - move to 1
01:36:937 (96937|1) - move to 3
01:38:937 (98937|3) - move to 1
~~~~~~
Sorry I only mod this diff
Hope this mod can help and your map get ranked
GLHF
Topic Starter
Raediaufar

try24get wrote:

Hi, Here's my mod
Key notation |0|1|2|3|
Time notation [minute]:[second]:[milisecond] ([time in miliseconds]|[key])
---NOVICE---
These mods focusing on some pattern fixes, and a little sound following
00:04:604 - add note at 2
00:05:937 - add note at 3

00:06:854 (6854|3) - is 00:06:604 (6604|1) and 00:06:854 (6854|3) following piano sound? If so cut 00:06:854 (6854|3) slider at 00:07:104 and place it's upper side at 2 nice catch, ok applied

00:08:604 (8604|0) - move to 2

00:08:604 (8604|1,8604|0,8937|2) - move 1 column to right
00:09:271 (9271|3,9604|2) - move 1 column to left

00:10:271 (10271|2,10604|3,10771|2,10937|1) - Is it following drum? If so remove them or add notes on 00:09:937 -, 00:10:104 -, and 00:10:437 with same pattern as 00:10:604 (10604|3,10771|2,10937|1)

00:11:437 (11437|0,11604|1,11771|2,11937|1) - Is it following drum? If so remove them, then you may add notes on 00:11:271 -, 00:11:854 -, 00:11:937 -, and slider from 00:11:521 to 00:11:604 well, it's actually follow another sound as well

00:11:104 - add note on 2 if you add notes after read that 2 mods above decided to put that only on advanced and exhaust because the sound is rather low

00:20:104 (20104|0,20271|1) - exchange their position
00:13:937 (13937|3,14271|2) - move them 1 column to left
00:14:937 (14937|1) - move to 2
00:29:604 - add note at 2
00:29:687 (29687|2) - move to 1 if you do mod above
00:29:771 - add note at 0
00:29:937 (29937|0) - move to 4
00:30:437 (30437|0,30521|1,30604|2) - move them 1 column to right
00:49:937 (49937|0) - move to 3
00:53:604 (53604|2) - move to 1
00:53:771 - add note at 2
00:55:604 (55604|1) - move to 2
00:54:271 (54271|0) - move to 1
00:54:604 (54604|2) - move to 0
00:54:937 (54937|0) - move to 3
00:55:271 (55271|3) - move to 2
00:58:271 (58271|2) - move to 1
00:58:521 - add note at 2
00:58:771 - ^
00:59:104 - ^
01:00:604 (60604|1) - move to 3 well actually this is for pattern variation
01:04:271 (64271|0) - move to 2
01:06:604 (66604|3,66937|3) - ^
01:06:771 (66771|0) - move to 3
01:16:271 (76271|1) - move to 2
01:20:271 (80271|1) - ^
01:28:604 (88604|1,88937|2) - exchange their column
01:31:271 (91271|2,91604|3) - ^
01:42:771 (102771|2,102937|1) - ^
01:25:604 (85604|3,85937|2) - ^
01:39:382 (99382|1,99493|2) - ^ (use 1/6 snap div)
01:39:715 (99715|3) - move to 1 (use 1/6 snap div)
01:39:826 (99826|0) - move to 2 (use 1/6 snap div)
01:41:271 (101271|3,101937|3) - move 1 column to left
01:41:604 (101604|1) - move to 3
01:42:271 (102271|2) - move to 1
01:35:937 (95937|1,95937|2,96271|3) - move 1 column to left
01:36:604 (96604|2) - move to 1
01:36:937 (96937|1) - move to 3
01:38:937 (98937|3) - move to 1 applied
~~~~~~
Sorry I only mod this diff
Hope this mod can help and your map get ranked
GLHF
thanks for the mod and star :)
Frim4503
M4M from you Queue

NOVICE
00:31:937 (31937|1) - move to 3. feels empty in this col.
00:33:604 (33604|3) - make this LN 00:33:937 -
^also 00:33:937 - add another note it will not hurt just adding a few notes xD

00:54:271 (54271|0) - move to 2
00:58:771 - add note
00:59:104 - ^
01:06:771 (66771|0) - move to 3. feels empty in that col.
01:14:771 - add note
01:15:104 - ^
01:15:271 (75271|0) - make double for cymbal IMO
01:16:604 (76604|2) - ^
01:46:604 (106604|0) - move to 3

ADVANCED
00:07:104 - add note. same like 00:06:604 (6604|1,6854|3) -
00:33:271 - i think you can use same pattern like in 00:31:937 -
01:03:604 - 01:04:604 - suggest to re-arange this part.. cuz too much pressure in right hand
01:16:437 - add note. feels tanggung in here

EXHAUST
00:20:604 - please lower hs in this part to 50% maybe
00:33:271 - same like ADVANCED
00:33:937 - add note
00:44:937 (44937|2,45021|3,45104|2) - try something like this to reduce the emptyness http://puu.sh/iss5G/56274b599c.png
01:04:604 - same problem with hs
Topic Starter
Raediaufar

Frim4503 wrote:

M4M from you Queue

NOVICE
00:31:937 (31937|1) - move to 3. feels empty in this col. not applied, doing it in my way
00:33:604 (33604|3) - make this LN 00:33:937 - applied
^also 00:33:937 - add another note it will not hurt just adding a few notes xD ok, was thinking same as you

00:54:271 (54271|0) - move to 2 applied
00:58:771 - add note
00:59:104 - ^ applied both above
01:06:771 (66771|0) - move to 3. feels empty in that col.
01:14:771 - add note okay
01:15:104 - ^okay
01:15:271 (75271|0) - make double for cymbal IMO applied
01:16:604 (76604|2) - ^ okay
01:46:604 (106604|0) - move to 3

I was thinking of making this diff much harder to decrease the big gap between Novice and Advanced, and thanks for pharos that told me earlier ^^

ADVANCED
00:07:104 - add note. same like 00:06:604 (6604|1,6854|3) -
00:33:271 - i think you can use same pattern like in 00:31:937 -
01:03:604 - 01:04:604 - suggest to re-arange this part.. cuz too much pressure in right hand well actually in this part the pattern on mine match with the sound, so I can't do much with hand balance
01:16:437 - add note. feels tanggung in here decided to add the "tanggung part in exhaust"

EXHAUST
00:20:604 - please lower hs in this part to 50% maybe thanks ^^ applied to all drum custom hs
00:33:271 - same like ADVANCED decided to follow only piano sound in this part so, no
00:33:937 - add note
00:44:937 (44937|2,45021|3,45104|2) - try something like this to reduce the emptyness http://puu.sh/iss5G/56274b599c.png disini aku emang mau pake trill
01:04:604 - same problem with hs fixed as above
Julie
Again, really huge thanks for asking me for a m4m (Since I been having trouble getting some in my own map xD)! Really nice mods you did for me, was a great help! Here mine and I hope it help you a lots as well :D

Mod
[General]

You have some green line with 5-10% hitsound, which is not suggest. User should be able to hear every notes, even if the note have a keysound on it with over 25% but the green line there is 5%, if user disable keysound, he won't be able to hear that 25% keysound.
It is really recommended to at least put those volume up to minimum 25% if you really want to try to keep it low.


There is a lots of green timing point unsnap, is not a big issue because those aren't SV change, but it might be an issue for the sound, since you do a lots of volume change.
EXHAUST :
00:36:489 -
00:40:489 -
00:41:840 -
00:48:484 -
01:04:573 -
01:07:344 -
01:21:987 -
01:23:317 -
01:40:072 -
01:45:317 -

ADVANCED :
00:21:808 -
00:25:880 -
00:36:489 -
00:41:840 -
00:48:484 -
01:42:573 -

NOVICE :
00:21:808 -
01:49:156 -

[NOVICE]

00:29:521 (29521|3,29687|2) - these piano note look randomly pick while playing for beginner, you probably choose them due to this 00:29:521 - being the 1st note you here, the thing is there is piano here 00:29:437 - and here 00:29:854 - which you didn't map in ADV and EXH. My point it, the piano here 00:29:437 - to here 00:29:937 - is the same rhythm, while the way you map it in NOV here 00:29:521 (29521|3,29687|2,29937|0) - isn't play the same rhythm, due to blue stick then it go to while stick. In other words suggesting these 00:29:521 (29521|3,29687|2) - to be either white or red stick to keep the rhythm constant.

00:32:187 (32187|0) - This is pretty much unrankable issue, since the piano is on 1/6, even you hear it since you map it this way in ADV and EXH as well. I know your trying to do all 1/4 on NOV, but it is unrankable if you put a note on a place where it contain no sound. So either snap it here 00:32:160 - since there is a piano note, or find another way to keep it 1/4 but on a stick where there is a sound. What I will suggest, if you want keep it 1/4, add a note here 00:32:271 - , this piano sound really clear to hear :D! Will be easy to play :3.


00:34:937 - No LN to 00:35:271 - ? It feel empty, since the piano steam is the same rhythm as 00:34:271 (34271|0,34604|3) - .

00:41:937 - Hmm no LN like this part 00:43:271 - + , it should still be consistent here.

[ADVANCED]

00:12:604 - add one more note, should have more impact like a crash here.

00:14:771 - and 00:14:854 - hmm suddendly not mapping this anymore, probably better if keep it consistent and map it as well.

00:12:937 - to 00:14:271 - the ADV is harder then EXH, either in EXH or ADV do change, because in EXH is all 1/4 snap, while in ADV there is some triplet stream here 00:13:521 (13521|2,14187|2) - .

00:15:049 (15049|3) - wrong snap, the piano sound here isn<t the same rhythm as here 00:15:104 (15104|2,15160|1,15215|0) - you can hear this part go faster. The piano sound your trying to map is here 00:15:021 -

00:32:993 (32993|2,33049|1,33104|0) - This is not really consistent, the piano is tricky here since your trying to to make all 1/6 so the difficulty is easier then EXH xD. Ok, look at how you map here 00:31:271 (31271|0,31382|1,31493|2,31604|3,31715|2,31826|0,31937|1,32049|2,32160|0,32215|1,32271|2) - , the piano rhythm is the same as here, is start here 00:31:271 - to 00:32:271 - . Now listen to this piano rhythm that start here 00:32:604 - , you should be able to here the same rhythm, just different note sound of course. So it should look like the 1st part, that mean start here 00:32:604 - and end 00:33:604 - , but the tricky thing is in the 2nd part, this sound is important but this 00:33:660 - as well, so probably suggest ending it here 00:33:660 - . In other word for these 2 part, start with 1/3 and end it with 1/6 like you did on your 1st part so it doesn't look random on how you pick which piano sound to map.

00:36:604 - to 00:40:604 - is as hard as EXH and is totally possible to make it easier then EXH or EXH make it harder then ADV, probably reason why ADV(~1000) number of note is nearly the same as EXH(~1200), while there a huge gaps of number of note then NOV (~400).

00:51:937 (51937|1,52104|1) - pretty sure there is a way to not jack this, this look like a random jack xD.

00:48:604 - + the rhythm look WAY to similar with EXH, really might want to change a lots, and make it WAY more easier and LESS notes, also look at this part 00:36:604 - to 00:40:604 - I point out in mods. Could really make a nicer object spread among diff, and diff difficulty spread for player (not looking at the stars rating right now).

01:04:604 - to 01:07:271 - lolol this has as much jack as the EXH, really shoould nerf it, there really no difference from EXH except here 01:05:937 - having 3 notes in EXH.

01:15:271 (75271|0,75354|1,75437|2,75604|0,75687|1,75771|2,75937|1,76021|2,76104|3,76187|2,76271|0,76271|1) - This part is really weird, I think you hear two different thing to map when you map your ADV or EXH, the triplet isn't in the same time, probably want to check which sound is more important to map.

01:28:604 (88604|1,88604|2,88937|1,88937|2,89271|1,89271|2) - This is rare seing you do this, since the song doesn't really repeat itself, so there isn't much part that is the same. Well this part isn't the same, probably can do a better flow without puting these the same column?

01:29:271 - to 01:34:271 - same stream as EXH ahh, even some part have more note ahhhh!! xD. Either maybe map only the most important sound in ADV (I know this part might be hard, because I think these one you map already = important for you) or map the whole stream in EXH O.O!! since it go all the same rhythm.

01:30:021 (90021|1) - either you let this note, but you'll have to map this 01:30:354 - , or delete and you don't have to add a note here 01:30:354 - . Since these 2 part have similar rhythm except the sound isn't.

01:39:271 (99271|0,99271|1,99382|2,99382|3,99493|1,99493|0,99604|2,99604|3,99715|1,99715|0,99826|2,99826|3) - Since this part 01:39:937 - have to have more note then the drum previously for more impact, probably remove one note from each of those 1/3 drum, instead of the same. Just another exmaple since is the same as EXH.

A lots of stuff have to probably change because is the same as EXH, not the end of piano, calm part like piano that only have few note can be the same as EXH, since you can't overmap it more in EXH. But like fast part, with a lots of possibility on how to map it, you should really make it a lots more different then EXH, right now near the Kiai and the whole Kiai is nearly the same as the EXH.

[EXHAUST]

00:15:049 (15049|1) - wrong snap, the piano sound here isn<t the same rhythm as here 00:15:104 (15104|0,15160|1,15215|2,15271|3) - , you can hear this part go faster. The piano sound your trying to map is here 00:15:021 -

00:31:882 (31882|2,31937|1) - Hmm you map these two piano sound but not these 2 00:32:326 - and 00:32:382 - , same piano sound

00:32:993 - In EXH you stop here 00:32:993 - , but in ADV you stop mapping the piano here 00:33:104 -

00:33:437 (33437|3,33493|2,33549|1,33604|0,33660|3,33715|2,33771|1,33826|0) - this pattern really don't match for the piano itself. 1st. 00:33:437 (33437|3,33493|2,33549|1,33604|0) - and 00:33:660 (33660|3,33715|2,33771|1,33826|0) - isn't the same sound. 2nd you can hear the piano go higher pitch then lower pitch :3, so yes gj on stairs but probably not this kind of stairs (it should like go one side and then go to the other side)

00:35:937 (35937|3) - could move to 2nd column, cuz here 00:35:271 (35271|3,35271|2,35604|1,35604|2) - to here 00:35:937 - it go lower pitch on the piano then here 00:36:271 (36271|2,36271|3) - is higher.

00:44:771 (44771|2,44854|3,44937|2,45021|3,45104|2,45187|3,45271|2) - why only these are have kick3.wav keysound?

00:48:604 - I think you forgot to put finish hitsound here, since you did put it on the other difficulty.

01:10:521 - You're not mapping this sound? You map it here 01:10:104 (70104|1,70187|2,70271|3) - , 01:10:437 (70437|0) - , and after too~.

01:15:271 - This part should have more note then 01:14:771 (74771|2,74771|3,74937|2,74937|1,75104|0,75104|1) - or can even have more note then this 01:14:604 (74604|1,74604|0,74604|3) - due to the cymbal sound to give more impact while playing.

01:16:604 - ^

01:38:771 (98771|1,98854|2,98937|3,99021|1,99104|2,99187|3) - Why are these the same column The sound are entirely different.

01:54:128 (114128|1) - Oups I think you accidently moved this note here, since you put it right one ADV, the piano sound is here 01:54:177 -

You can call me back anytimes, I won't guarantee a BN mods, but you probably have to get a bit more modders, mostly the ADV, or EXH depending which one you choose to fix the most. Since both have nearly the same rhythm, which make ADV and NOV a huge gaps in playing. Stars rating can be ok, but seem like it doesn't prove if the spread in playing is xD.

If there anything you don't understand in my explanantion, you're free to pm me >w<!! hehehe~ And don't forget I might do some mistake as well XD.

Good luck, and keep it up!!!!!! You have potential :D!!
Topic Starter
Raediaufar

Julie wrote:

Again, really huge thanks for asking me for a m4m (Since I been having trouble getting some in my own map xD)! Really nice mods you did for me, was a great help! Here mine and I hope it help you a lots as well :D

Mod
[General]

You have some green line with 5-10% hitsound, which is not suggest. User should be able to hear every notes, even if the note have a keysound on it with over 25% but the green line there is 5%, if user disable keysound, he won't be able to hear that 25% keysound.
It is really recommended to at least put those volume up to minimum 25% if you really want to try to keep it low.


There is a lots of green timing point unsnap, is not a big issue because those aren't SV change, but it might be an issue for the sound, since you do a lots of volume change. oh my bad, I forget to change that when I'm changing the offset, that's why everything was so wrong
EXHAUST :
00:36:489 -
00:40:489 -
00:41:840 -
00:48:484 -
01:04:573 -
01:07:344 -
01:21:987 -
01:23:317 -
01:40:072 -
01:45:317 -

ADVANCED :
00:21:808 -
00:25:880 -
00:36:489 -
00:41:840 -
00:48:484 -
01:42:573 -

NOVICE :
00:21:808 -
01:49:156 -

[NOVICE]

00:29:521 (29521|3,29687|2) - these piano note look randomly pick while playing for beginner, you probably choose them due to this 00:29:521 - being the 1st note you here, the thing is there is piano here 00:29:437 - and here 00:29:854 - which you didn't map in ADV and EXH. My point it, the piano here 00:29:437 - to here 00:29:937 - is the same rhythm, while the way you map it in NOV here 00:29:521 (29521|3,29687|2,29937|0) - isn't play the same rhythm, due to blue stick then it go to while stick. In other words suggesting these 00:29:521 (29521|3,29687|2) - to be either white or red stick to keep the rhythm constant.
hmm ok
00:32:187 (32187|0) - This is pretty much unrankable issue, since the piano is on 1/6, even you hear it since you map it this way in ADV and EXH as well. I know your trying to do all 1/4 on NOV, but it is unrankable if you put a note on a place where it contain no sound. So either snap it here 00:32:160 - since there is a piano note, or find another way to keep it 1/4 but on a stick where there is a sound. What I will suggest, if you want keep it 1/4, add a note here 00:32:271 - , this piano sound really clear to hear :D! Will be easy to play :3.
snapped it to 1/6

00:34:937 - No LN to 00:35:271 - ? It feel empty, since the piano steam is the same rhythm as 00:34:271 (34271|0,34604|3) - .add LN

00:41:937 - Hmm no LN like this part 00:43:271 - + , it should still be consistent here. remove the LN :3

[ADVANCED]

00:12:604 - add one more note, should have more impact like a crash here. okay

00:14:771 - and 00:14:854 - hmm suddendly not mapping this anymore, probably better if keep it consistent and map it as well. add a note

00:12:937 - to 00:14:271 - the ADV is harder then EXH, either in EXH or ADV do change, because in EXH is all 1/4 snap, while in ADV there is some triplet stream here 00:13:521 (13521|2,14187|2) - . make adv easier

00:15:049 (15049|3) - wrong snap, the piano sound here isn<t the same rhythm as here 00:15:104 (15104|2,15160|1,15215|0) - you can hear this part go faster. The piano sound your trying to map is here 00:15:021 - jeez, didn't notice that

00:32:993 (32993|2,33049|1,33104|0) - This is not really consistent, the piano is tricky here since your trying to to make all 1/6 so the difficulty is easier then EXH xD. Ok, look at how you map here 00:31:271 (31271|0,31382|1,31493|2,31604|3,31715|2,31826|0,31937|1,32049|2,32160|0,32215|1,32271|2) - , the piano rhythm is the same as here, is start here 00:31:271 - to 00:32:271 - . Now listen to this piano rhythm that start here 00:32:604 - , you should be able to here the same rhythm, just different note sound of course. So it should look like the 1st part, that mean start here 00:32:604 - and end 00:33:604 - , but the tricky thing is in the 2nd part, this sound is important but this 00:33:660 - as well, so probably suggest ending it here 00:33:660 - . In other word for these 2 part, start with 1/3 and end it with 1/6 like you did on your 1st part so it doesn't look random on how you pick which piano sound to map. ok fixed, and omg took me some times to fix this XD

00:36:604 - to 00:40:604 - is as hard as EXH and is totally possible to make it easier then EXH or EXH make it harder then ADV, probably reason why ADV(~1000) number of note is nearly the same as EXH(~1200), while there a huge gaps of number of note then NOV (~400). ok remap adv

00:51:937 (51937|1,52104|1) - pretty sure there is a way to not jack this, this look like a random jack xD. fixed :>

00:48:604 - + the rhythm look WAY to similar with EXH, really might want to change a lots, and make it WAY more easier and LESS notes, also look at this part 00:36:604 - to 00:40:604 - I point out in mods. Could really make a nicer object spread among diff, and diff difficulty spread for player (not looking at the stars rating right now). yeah I see the part that exactly same as EXH, make it easier :3

01:04:604 - to 01:07:271 - lolol this has as much jack as the EXH, really shoould nerf it, there really no difference from EXH except here 01:05:937 - having 3 notes in EXH. well. actually this is pretty complicated to me, if I put one note only to those double it will become novice and if I make 1 then double note it will be not consistent (you can hear that the sound is same) well, remap it only to make less jacks

01:15:271 (75271|0,75354|1,75437|2,75604|0,75687|1,75771|2,75937|1,76021|2,76104|3,76187|2,76271|0,76271|1) - This part is really weird, I think you hear two different thing to map when you map your ADV or EXH, the triplet isn't in the same time, probably want to check which sound is more important to map didn't notice that XD, follow the way I map EXH

01:28:604 (88604|1,88604|2,88937|1,88937|2,89271|1,89271|2) - This is rare seing you do this, since the song doesn't really repeat itself, so there isn't much part that is the same. Well this part isn't the same, probably can do a better flow without puting these the same column fixed :3

01:29:271 - to 01:34:271 - same stream as EXH ahh, even some part have more note ahhhh!! xD. Either maybe map only the most important sound in ADV (I know this part might be hard, because I think these one you map already = important for you) or map the whole stream in EXH O.O!! since it go all the same rhythm. fixed

01:30:021 (90021|1) - either you let this note, but you'll have to map this 01:30:354 - , or delete and you don't have to add a note here 01:30:354 - . Since these 2 part have similar rhythm except the sound isn't. decided to delete

01:39:271 (99271|0,99271|1,99382|2,99382|3,99493|1,99493|0,99604|2,99604|3,99715|1,99715|0,99826|2,99826|3) - Since this part 01:39:937 - have to have more note then the drum previously for more impact, probably remove one note from each of those 1/3 drum, instead of the same. Just another exmaple since is the same as EXH. nope, I think make it one note is nonsense since you can hear that "burst", will not change this part until I find a better solution

A lots of stuff have to probably change because is the same as EXH, not the end of piano, calm part like piano that only have few note can be the same as EXH, since you can't overmap it more in EXH. But like fast part, with a lots of possibility on how to map it, you should really make it a lots more different then EXH, right now near the Kiai and the whole Kiai is nearly the same as the EXH.

[EXHAUST]

00:15:049 (15049|1) - wrong snap, the piano sound here isn<t the same rhythm as here 00:15:104 (15104|0,15160|1,15215|2,15271|3) - , you can hear this part go faster. The piano sound your trying to map is here 00:15:021 - yeah, same as advanced :3

00:31:882 (31882|2,31937|1) - Hmm you map these two piano sound but not these 2 00:32:326 - and 00:32:382 - , same piano sound fixed

00:32:993 - In EXH you stop here 00:32:993 - , but in ADV you stop mapping the piano here 00:33:104 - fixed EXH diff

00:33:437 (33437|3,33493|2,33549|1,33604|0,33660|3,33715|2,33771|1,33826|0) - this pattern really don't match for the piano itself. 1st. 00:33:437 (33437|3,33493|2,33549|1,33604|0) - and 00:33:660 (33660|3,33715|2,33771|1,33826|0) - isn't the same sound. 2nd you can hear the piano go higher pitch then lower pitch :3, so yes gj on stairs but probably not this kind of stairs (it should like go one side and then go to the other side) fixed

00:35:937 (35937|3) - could move to 2nd column, cuz here 00:35:271 (35271|3,35271|2,35604|1,35604|2) - to here 00:35:937 - it go lower pitch on the piano then here 00:36:271 (36271|2,36271|3) - is higher. okay, was thinking about that also earlier

00:44:771 (44771|2,44854|3,44937|2,45021|3,45104|2,45187|3,45271|2) - why only these are have kick3.wav keysound? well, kinda dunno how to put that hitsound there, but already keysound all notes from - 00:44:687 - to - 00:45:854 -

00:48:604 - I think you forgot to put finish hitsound here, since you did put it on the other difficulty. lel, okay fixed

01:10:521 - You're not mapping this sound? You map it here 01:10:104 (70104|1,70187|2,70271|3) - , 01:10:437 (70437|0) - , and after too~. arrgh, forget

01:15:271 - This part should have more note then 01:14:771 (74771|2,74771|3,74937|2,74937|1,75104|0,75104|1) - or can even have more note then this 01:14:604 (74604|1,74604|0,74604|3) - due to the cymbal sound to give more impact while playing. okay, put triplets there

01:16:604 - ^

01:38:771 (98771|1,98854|2,98937|3,99021|1,99104|2,99187|3) - Why are these the same column The sound are entirely different. move the previous one column to the left

01:54:128 (114128|1) - Oups I think you accidently moved this note here, since you put it right one ADV, the piano sound is here 01:54:177 - oh yes, I was going to put it on the red tick, fixed

You can call me back anytimes, I won't guarantee a BN mods, but you probably have to get a bit more modders, mostly the ADV, or EXH depending which one you choose to fix the most. Since both have nearly the same rhythm, which make ADV and NOV a huge gaps in playing. Stars rating can be ok, but seem like it doesn't prove if the spread in playing is xD.

If there anything you don't understand in my explanantion, you're free to pm me >w<!! hehehe~ And don't forget I might do some mistake as well XD.

Good luck, and keep it up!!!!!! You have potential :D!!
Great mods as expected Julie :D and also remap some part in ADV, and yeah before bubble, I want my map get checks by experienced modder as well (since I can't get a good mods from the non ones) maybe going to ask mod from another BN. Thanks a lot for mods, this actually help me a lot
Evening
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13:01 Raediaufar: zenx, can we do the irc right now? I think I got some free time for now
13:01 Zenx: o ok
13:01 Zenx: link it again ww
13:01 Zenx: i forgot which map
13:02 *Raediaufar is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/674177 Yooh - snow storm -euphoria-]
13:03 Zenx: hmm mod everything?
13:03 Raediaufar: hmm
13:03 Zenx: it's fine if you want me to mod everything lol
13:03 Zenx: i don't mind
13:03 Raediaufar: I think advanced and exhaust only
13:03 Zenx: o ok
13:03 Raediaufar: eh, sure?
13:03 Raediaufar: ok
13:04 Zenx: i'll just testplay the diffs and tell you what i think
13:06 Zenx: well, personally won't switch patterns during a jumptrill
13:06 Zenx: like 12 34 12 34 12 34 12 34 then switch to 14 23 14 23 14 23 in the middle
13:06 Raediaufar: eh ok
13:06 Zenx: and im not sure if some snaps are correct
13:07 Zenx: 00:16:604 (16604|0,16937|0,17271|0) - might want to follow the piano in this section
13:07 Zenx: it's like you've completely ignored it :<
13:07 Raediaufar: add jacks there?
13:08 Zenx: ye
13:08 Zenx: make it comfortable though
13:08 Raediaufar: ok, done
13:09 Zenx: http://puu.sh/ivG2Y/095154e273.jpg you can like switch jacks in between hands like this
13:10 Raediaufar: wait
13:10 Raediaufar: hmm ok i see
13:11 Zenx: 00:22:604 (22604|2,22715|2,22826|2) - idk, this feels kinda soft using 1 note
13:12 Zenx: maybe you want to jack on 12 12 12 123
13:12 Zenx: or 12 12 12 124
13:12 Raediaufar: 12 12 12 124 is better imo
13:12 Zenx: o ok
13:13 Zenx: 01:39:271 (99271|0,99271|1,99382|2,99382|3,99493|1,99493|0,99604|3,99604|2,99715|0,99715|1,99826|3,99826|2,99937|0,99937|3,99937|1) - this jumptrill on 1/3 is kinda awkward idk
13:13 Zenx: it feels uhhh
13:13 Zenx: underwhelming
13:14 Raediaufar: hmm
13:14 Zenx: maybe you want to 12 12 34 34 12 12 124
13:14 Zenx: 01:40:104 (100104|0) - then shift this to 3
13:15 Raediaufar: done
13:16 Zenx: 01:46:437 (106437|2,106479|1) - probably change to 23
13:16 Zenx: not much of a difference but
13:16 Zenx: it plays/reads better
13:16 Zenx: since it stairs one way
13:17 Raediaufar: I think too much stress on 2 and 3
13:17 Raediaufar: well at least it hard for me to tap that
13:17 Zenx: :\ then change to what you think is best then
13:18 Zenx: 124312431243 would be the easiest
13:19 Raediaufar: i think no change on that
13:19 Raediaufar: I prefer stair more
13:19 Zenx: eh ok
13:20 Raediaufar: because the next note is hold
13:20 Zenx: well, stairs are rather looked down upon for bursts
13:20 Zenx: 180bpm is kinda the threshold
13:20 Zenx: anything above would be too fast
13:20 Zenx: so i guess it's fine here lel
13:21 Zenx: 01:49:271 - might want to make the ending scroll velocity constant
13:21 Zenx: using svs and stuff
13:21 Raediaufar: well, will think about that
13:22 Raediaufar: but I'm not that good with SV timing
13:22 Zenx: uhh
13:22 Zenx: i'll just calculate for you
13:23 Zenx: 01:53:886 - 1.26x SV
13:23 Zenx: 01:54:808 - 1.46x sv
13:23 Zenx: 01:49:271 - just to have constant sv with this timing point
13:24 Raediaufar: good, it feels better
13:25 Zenx: the rest feels ok to play
13:25 Zenx: except for the switching jumptrill in which i dislike lol
13:25 Raediaufar: some testplayer can do that btw
13:25 Raediaufar: and got no problem with that
13:25 Raediaufar: but maybe i'll change it
13:25 Zenx: yea, but i have a problem with that
13:29 Zenx: for advanced you might want to have the SVs at the end be totally constant throughout the whole song
13:29 Raediaufar: still with same configuration as exhaust right?
13:29 Zenx: not really
13:29 Zenx: exhaust's last constant SV depended on 01:49:271 -
13:30 Zenx: 00:01:937 - i kinda want ADVANCED SV to be dependent on 00:01:937 -
13:30 Zenx: woops double copy pasta
13:30 Zenx: im predicting that advanced players would have problems with slowjam and stuff
13:30 Zenx: 01:54:808 (114808|1,114920|2,114976|3,115032|2,115088|1,115145|0) - especially this
13:31 Raediaufar: yeah, for me as well
13:31 Raediaufar: but yeah, I'm not that good at sv's ;_;
13:31 Zenx: 01:49:271 - 1.38x
13:31 Zenx: 01:53:886 - 180/103 = 1.75x
13:32 Zenx: 01:54:808 - 180/89 = 2.02x
13:33 Zenx: hmm, i personally think that all HP shouldn't go under 7 in any diff lol
13:33 Zenx: anything under is kinda mashable
13:33 Zenx: so novice should have 7 and advanced can have 7.5
13:33 Zenx: just a suggestion
13:34 Raediaufar: ok, applied
13:34 Raediaufar: i also don't have problem with that as well
13:34 Raediaufar: the od?
13:34 Zenx: you can leave the od as it is
13:34 Zenx: od is kinda subjective
13:35 Zenx: you can put high od if you want but players will suffer lol
13:35 Raediaufar: i will not doin that xD
13:35 Zenx: yea that's fine haha
13:37 Raediaufar: btw, who will post this mod? I or you?
13:37 Zenx: 00:07:104 - hmm for novice you can add a note here
13:37 Zenx: uhhh
13:37 Zenx: i can post it
13:37 Zenx: 00:07:104 - same for advanced actually
13:37 Zenx: just to indicate the release for the LN
13:38 Raediaufar: so add a note?
13:38 Zenx: yea
13:38 Zenx: just one
13:38 Raediaufar: in advanced?
13:38 Zenx: novice and advanced
13:38 Raediaufar: ok, done
13:39 Zenx: might want to copy the svs from advanced to novice
13:39 Zenx: just to get constant SV
13:39 Zenx: can't really say much about novice :\
13:40 Zenx: kinda out of my reach lol
13:40 Raediaufar: lel, it's ok
13:40 Raediaufar: I need mod mostly on exhaust and advanced
13:40 Raediaufar: because I got problem on that diffs
13:40 Zenx: o ok
Kruzon



M4M

Your map is modded with 0% playback to avoid confusion with your hit-sound
My 4K modding column format is as following: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

Advanced

Firstly, before modding, I've pretty much read through your pattern, and several thing I'd like to suggest subjectively are:

Uses of instrument

It would be nice if you avoid rigidness in your pattern by mapping the unique instrument instead, this can be done by manipulating your notes placement depending on the pitch of the unique instrument. I know you don't know what I'm talking about, so here's an example:

00:01:937 (1937|3) - 00:02:604 (2604|1) - 00:03:271 (3271|2) - are the sound of piano, which I considered unique sound. They greatly affect your pattern presentation because they bring meaning to the map by being concrete note that follow the rhythm. These notes should be allocated depending on pitch relevancy, to make it apparent. Essay aside, I'll go straight to the point:

00:02:604 (2604|1,2604|0) - shift them 1 time to the right
00:02:771 (2771|2) - move to 1
00:03:104 (3104|0) - move to 3
00:03:271 (3271|2,3271|3) - press Ctrl + H
00:03:437 (3437|1) - move to 3 (did you see what i tried to do here?)

Other notable areas are:

00:03:771 (3771|2) - move to 2
00:03:937 (3937|0,3937|1) - press Ctrl + H
00:04:104 (4104|2) - move to 2

Uses of gap to determine pitch relevancy:

00:04:104 (4104|2) - have widest length of 1 l 4, now try to fit it with the ongoing rhythm, listen to the piano and use its pitch, then changes these notes 00:07:937 (7937|0,7937|1) - 00:08:604 (8604|0,8604|1) - from widest to narrow gap, from right to left. Ie: 1 l 4, 1 l 3, and 1 l 2. Changing them would break your pattern though, you may have to re-pattern.

But these are not problem, they are merely my suggestion to make your pattern presentation more apparent, revealing and synchronize to its rhythm. Therefore just in case you want to continue along your own pattern, I respect your choice. Though, my modding will still be based on notes presentation-

00:20:854 (20854|3,20937|1,21021|0,21104|2,21187|3,21271|1,21354|0,21437|2,21521|3,21604|2,21687|1,21771|3,21854|2,21937|0,21937|1,22271|3,22271|2) - Actually, just press Ctrl + H and see, then starting at this time 00:22:604 (22604|3) - , suggestion for you: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3279380

00:56:271 (56271|0) - move to 3, feel weird being the odd one with irregular pattern while the others were dual notes around this time

01:25:271 (85271|0) - move to 3, pattern flow
01:25:437 (85437|2) - move to 1, same reason

That's all that I've found, this map is at the end point already, most of the notes are well-placed, I have no qualm about them. Nice map.

I'm going to stop here, so for my map, You may decide how you're going to mod it depend on whether my mod is helpful or not. I don't mind at all 8-)


Good luck with your map c:
Topic Starter
Raediaufar

Kruzon wrote:




M4M

Your map is modded with 0% playback to avoid confusion with your hit-sound
My 4K modding column format is as following: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

Advanced

Firstly, before modding, I've pretty much read through your pattern, and several thing I'd like to suggest subjectively are:

Uses of instrument

It would be nice if you avoid rigidness in your pattern by mapping the unique instrument instead, this can be done by manipulating your notes placement depending on the pitch of the unique instrument. I know you don't know what I'm talking about, so here's an example:

00:01:937 (1937|3) - 00:02:604 (2604|1) - 00:03:271 (3271|2) - are the sound of piano, which I considered unique sound. They greatly affect your pattern presentation because they bring meaning to the map by being concrete note that follow the rhythm. These notes should be allocated depending on pitch relevancy, to make it apparent. Essay aside, I'll go straight to the point:

00:02:604 (2604|1,2604|0) - shift them 1 time to the right
00:02:771 (2771|2) - move to 1
00:03:104 (3104|0) - move to 3
00:03:271 (3271|2,3271|3) - press Ctrl + H
00:03:437 (3437|1) - move to 3 (did you see what i tried to do here?)

Other notable areas are:

00:03:771 (3771|2) - move to 2
00:03:937 (3937|0,3937|1) - press Ctrl + H
00:04:104 (4104|2) - move to 2 eh ok, never think about that before, applied all above

Uses of gap to determine pitch relevancy:

00:04:104 (4104|2) - have widest length of 1 l 4, now try to fit it with the ongoing rhythm, listen to the piano and use its pitch, then changes these notes 00:07:937 (7937|0,7937|1) - 00:08:604 (8604|0,8604|1) - from widest to narrow gap, from right to left. Ie: 1 l 4, 1 l 3, and 1 l 2. Changing them would break your pattern though, you may have to re-pattern. well, have re-pattern and yeah it's still looks good :3

But these are not problem, they are merely my suggestion to make your pattern presentation more apparent, revealing and synchronize to its rhythm. Therefore just in case you want to continue along your own pattern, I respect your choice. Though, my modding will still be based on notes presentation-

00:20:854 (20854|3,20937|1,21021|0,21104|2,21187|3,21271|1,21354|0,21437|2,21521|3,21604|2,21687|1,21771|3,21854|2,21937|0,21937|1,22271|3,22271|2) - Actually, just press Ctrl + H and see, then starting at this time 00:22:604 (22604|3) - nope for this

, suggestion for you: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3279380 seems good, but I put the LN at 2 and sn at 1

00:56:271 (56271|0) - move to 3, feel weird being the odd one with irregular pattern while the others were dual notes around this time ok

01:25:271 (85271|0) - move to 3, pattern flow
01:25:437 (85437|2) - move to 1, same reason well, I think I have a better solution than this

That's all that I've found, this map is at the end point already, most of the notes are well-placed, I have no qualm about them. Nice map.

I'm going to stop here, so for my map, You may decide how you're going to mod it depend on whether my mod is helpful or not. I don't mind at all 8-)


Good luck with your map c:
well thanks for mod, that helps me a lot. And also remap some part on Advanced
SReisen
M4M

column : 1 2 3 4
open it
[NOVICE]

00:20:604 (20604|3,21271|2) - missing HS
00:25:937 (25937|1) - ^
00:28:937 - add , piano
00:29:437 (29437|3,29604|2) - suggest you remove this and add a note on here - 00:29:521 - more accurate to the song
00:29:771 - add , piano
00:32:160 (32160|0) - wrong snap - *1/4* - 00:32:187 -
00:34:215 (34215|0) - ^ - 00:34:187 -
01:39:271 (99271|3,99382|1,99493|2,99604|0,99715|3,99826|0,99937|1,99937|3) - try this - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3291627
01:43:937 (103937|2,104604|3) - HS

[ADVANCED]

00:11:604 (11604|2) - move to 2 , balance
00:25:937 (25937|1) - HS
00:28:771 - 00:28:937 - piano , add
00:29:854 - add , piano
00:32:215 (32215|1) - remove - and - 00:32:160 (32160|0) - *1/4* - 00:32:187 -
00:34:215 (34215|3) - move to - 00:34:187 -
00:36:854 (36854|3,37021|1,37187|3) - move to - 00:36:771 - and - 00:37:271 - add note
00:38:187 (38187|3,38354|0,38521|2) - do same like ^ - 00:38:604 - add
00:39:521 (39521|0,39687|3) - to ^
00:47:271 (47271|1) - move to 3 , flow
00:53:271 (53271|2) - move to 1
00:53:437 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3291676
01:38:437 (98437|2,98521|3,98604|2,98687|1,98771|0) - do this , ctrl+h , then , ctrl+j

[EXHAUST]

01:20:604 - add note , cymbal
01:26:771 (86771|2) - move to 1 , - 01:26:271 (86271|2,86437|2,86604|2,86771|2,86937|2) - issue
01:32:937 (92937|0) - move to 3
01:33:771 - add

good luck
Topic Starter
Raediaufar

ShikiNoHollow wrote:

M4M

column : 1 2 3 4
open it
[NOVICE]

00:20:604 (20604|3,21271|2) - missing HS
00:25:937 (25937|1) - ^ both fixed
00:28:937 - add , piano didn't notice that, add on all diffs
00:29:437 (29437|3,29604|2) - suggest you remove this and add a note on here - 00:29:521 - more accurate to the song ok
00:29:771 - add , piano don't decide to add on this diff
00:32:160 (32160|0) - wrong snap - *1/4* - 00:32:187 - no, it's right. Have discussed this with julie
00:34:215 (34215|0) - ^ - 00:34:187 - same as above, it's right
01:39:271 (99271|3,99382|1,99493|2,99604|0,99715|3,99826|0,99937|1,99937|3) - try this - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3291627 1/3 stair pattern might be hard to tap. Still keep mine

01:43:937 (103937|2,104604|3) - HS added

[ADVANCED]

00:11:604 (11604|2) - move to 2 , balan fixed
00:25:937 (25937|1) - HS nope
00:28:771 - 00:28:937 - piano , add add
00:29:854 - add , piano I didn't hear anything
00:32:215 (32215|1) - remove - and - 00:32:160 (32160|0) - *1/4* - 00:32:187 - nope, it's right
00:34:215 (34215|3) - move to - 00:34:187 - same as novice, the snap is right
00:36:854 (36854|3,37021|1,37187|3) - move to - 00:36:771 - and - 00:37:271 - add note
00:38:187 (38187|3,38354|0,38521|2) - do same like ^ - 00:38:604 - add
00:39:521 (39521|0,39687|3) - to ^ well, sorry but no
00:47:271 (47271|1) - move to 3 , flow okay
00:53:271 (53271|2) - move to 1 has find a better pattern for this
00:53:437 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3291676 okay
01:38:437 (98437|2,98521|3,98604|2,98687|1,98771|0) - do this , ctrl+h , then , ctrl+j wow, cool. Better than before 8-)

[EXHAUST]

01:20:604 - add note , cymbal this is hard, adding note will cause jack and if I re-pattern the pattern will not fit with the sound. Well, keep mine
01:26:771 (86771|2) - move to 1 , - 01:26:271 (86271|2,86437|2,86604|2,86771|2,86937|2) - issue fixed
01:32:937 (92937|0) - move to 3 will cause inbalance with the next note, move to 2 instead
01:33:771 - add didn't notice that, add

good luck
okay, will mod your map soon
Sandalphon
Sry for the super long delay
1-2-3-4
ADV
00:05:021 - delted, suggest better not follow this sound
00:07:187 - add one for drum
00:10:687 - what is this for
00:20:604 - add one on 4, for the strong beat
00:29:437 - add one for piano
00:31:271 - to 00:35:271 - it is real weird to use 1/3 when the piano is 1/6, i think using will be much better 00:34:215 (34215|3,34604|0,34937|1) -
00:36:604 - from here, unsnap
00:53:271 - add one for drum
00:53:604 - same ^
01:16:437 - add
01:33:854 - drum
gl >w<
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